RE: Beyblade Burst: Shining Legends/Vallery: A Beyblade Journey (Episodes in first post) - Golden Freddy - Oct. 19, 2020
(Oct. 19, 2020 11:52 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: (Oct. 19, 2020 11:47 PM)Golden Freddy Wrote: Can this be a character in the story
Ring: (Kobe) it is super op and can destroy everything in its path and it’s l/r
weight: goku (purple)
Chip: (Bryant) It has a bunch of weight and it’s l/r
Disk: 8 (purple)
Frame: star (yellow)
Driver: destroy’ (purple and the ring is yellow)
This bey is purple and yellow and the avatar on the center of the chip is Kobe himself. This bey cannot be defeated and is the most op bey ever created I don't take character requests sorry.
I also can't tell if you're joking or if you're being serious.
Ok
Why wouldn’t I be serious. It’s Kobe, he is a godly bey. No one can defeat Kobe Bryant
RE: Beyblade Burst: Shining Legends/Vallery: A Beyblade Journey (Episodes in first post) - DeltaZakuro - Oct. 20, 2020
3) Hyped Up! Legend Press Conference!
誇大宣伝! レジェンド記者会見!
Kodai senden! Rejendo kisha kaiken!
(Date Unknown)
Daiku and Heather get invited to a press conference hosted by the Legends who reveal insane news about another championship. While they're there, the two are given the opportunity to face Valt.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Shining Legends/Vallery: A Beyblade Journey (Episodes in first post) - SacredXcalibur - Oct. 20, 2020
(Oct. 20, 2020 2:47 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote:
3) Hyped Up! Legend Press Conference!
誇大宣伝! レジェンド記者会見!
Kodai senden! Rejendo kisha kaiken!
(Date Unknown)
Daiku and Heather get invited to a press conference hosted by the Legends who reveal insane news about another championship. While they're there, the two are given the opportunity to face Valt.
Are you gonna make episode 5a soon?
RE: Beyblade Burst: Shining Legends/Vallery: A Beyblade Journey (Episodes in first post) - DeltaZakuro - Oct. 20, 2020
(Oct. 20, 2020 3:55 AM)SacredXcalibur Wrote: (Oct. 20, 2020 2:47 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote:
3) Hyped Up! Legend Press Conference!
誇大宣伝! レジェンド記者会見!
Kodai senden! Rejendo kisha kaiken!
(Date Unknown)
Daiku and Heather get invited to a press conference hosted by the Legends who reveal insane news about another championship. While they're there, the two are given the opportunity to face Valt.
Are you gonna make episode 5a soon?
Soon, i cannot guarantee when though.
Be patient.
4) Fiery Storm! Gust Ragnaruk!
燃えるような嵐！ ガストラグナルク！
Moeru yōna arashi! Gasutoragunaruku!
(Date Unknown)
The Suns receive a new trainer, the one and only Rantaro Kiyama! Confidently revealing his beys abilities, The Head Honcho challenges the entire team at the same time.
Note: The Suns is the team Daiku joins, the team consists of 5 members.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Shining Legends/Vallery: A Beyblade Journey (Episodes in first post) - DeltaZakuro - Oct. 20, 2020
these 2 will likely debut on the same day
5) Burn It, Sun Break!
燃やして、サンブレイク！
Moyashite, sanbureiku!
(Date Unknown)
Desperately looking for a weakness in Ragnaruk, Daiku comes up with a new move to beat Ragnaruk!
6) The Challenge To Satan!
サタンへの挑戦！
Satan e no chōsen!
(Date Unknown)
the 7th ranked blader in the world visits The Suns, with a G Bey of his own: Havoc Satan!
7) Dysis Vs Satan!
ディシス対サタン!
Dishisu tai satan!
(Date Unknown)
Struggling to resonate with Dysis, Daiku trains almost past his limits to beat Sisco!
8) The Rainbow Girl, Zaida Kimuzan!
レインボーガール、ザイダキムザン！
Reinbōgāru, zaidakimuzan!
(Date Unknown)
on his way back from training, Daiku bumps into Zaida, the 11th blader in the world. in the heat of battle, Zaida asks Daiku "What does Beyblade mean to you?"
RE: Beyblade Burst: Shining Legends/Vallery: A Beyblade Journey (Episodes in first post) - SunBlader98 - Oct. 20, 2020
(Oct. 20, 2020 7:31 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: these 2 will likely debut on the same day
5) Burn It, Sun Break!
燃やして、サンブレイク！
Moyashite, sanbureiku!
(Date Unknown)
Desperately looking for a weakness in Ragnaruk, Daiku comes up with a new move to beat Ragnaruk!
6) The Challenge To Satan!
サタンへの挑戦！
Satan e no chōsen!
(Date Unknown)
the 7th ranked blader in the world visits The Suns, with a G Bey of his own: Havoc Satan!
7) Dysis Vs Satan!
ディシス対サタン!
Dishisu tai satan!
(Date Unknown)
Struggling to resonate with Dysis, Daiku trains almost past his limits to beat Sisco!
8) The Rainbow Girl, Zaida Kimuzan!
レインボーガール、ザイダキムザン！
Reinbōgāru, zaidakimuzan!
(Date Unknown)
on his way back from training, Daiku bumps into Zaida, the 11th blader in the world. in the heat of battle, Zaida asks Daiku "What does Beyblade mean to you?" I like it!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Shining Legends/G Warriors (Episodes in first post) - DeltaZakuro - Oct. 21, 2020
NOTE: Name changed to Dawn Zouwu because 1. i think it sounds cooler and 2. i couldnt get a proper translation for Mane Zouwu.
NOTE 2: Zouwu's romaji came out kinda iffy so just bare with it
9) Flaming Soul! Dawn Zouwu!
燃える魂！ドーン・ズウ！
Moeru tamashī! Dōn zū!
(Date Unknown)
meeting Zaida again after an embarrassing loss, Daiku continues to struggle with his resonance!
10) The Beast Vs The New Generation!
獣対新世代！
Kemono tai shin sedai!
(Date Unknown)
Daiku finally achieves his resonance as he starts his counterattack against Zouwu!
11) Defeat Zaida!
ザイダを倒せ！
Zaida o taose!
(Date Unknown)
The final round begins between Dysis and Zouwu! meanwhile Daiku's friend Delen rises through the ranks with a G Bey of his own!
i'll do the same for Episodes 12-16 next week
(Oct. 19, 2020 11:56 PM)Golden Freddy Wrote: (Oct. 19, 2020 11:52 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: I don't take character requests sorry.
I also can't tell if you're joking or if you're being serious.
Ok
Why wouldn’t I be serious. It’s Kobe, he is a godly bey. No one can defeat Kobe Bryant
thats exactly the thing. i'd rather not have a ridiculously op bey in this story especially if its a meme.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Shining Legends/G Warriors (Episodes in first post) - Golden Freddy - Oct. 21, 2020
(Oct. 21, 2020 1:15 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote:
NOTE: Name changed to Dawn Zouwu because 1. i think it sounds cooler and 2. i couldnt get a proper translation for Mane Zouwu.
NOTE 2: Zouwu's romaji came out kinda iffy so just bare with it
9) Flaming Soul! Dawn Zouwu!
燃える魂！ドーン・ズウ！
Moeru tamashī! Dōn zū!
(Date Unknown)
meeting Zaida again after an embarrassing loss, Daiku continues to struggle with his resonance!
10) The Beast Vs The New Generation!
獣対新世代！
Kemono tai shin sedai!
(Date Unknown)
Daiku finally achieves his resonance as he starts his counterattack against Zouwu!
11) Defeat Zaida!
ザイダを倒せ！
Zaida o taose!
(Date Unknown)
The final round begins between Dysis and Zouwu! meanwhile Daiku's friend Delen rises through the ranks with a G Bey of his own!
i'll do the same for Episodes 15-24 next week
(Oct. 19, 2020 11:56 PM)Golden Freddy Wrote: Ok
Why wouldn’t I be serious. It’s Kobe, he is a godly bey. No one can defeat Kobe Bryant
thats exactly the thing. i'd rather not have a ridiculously op bey in this story especially if its a meme.
Well it’s not a meme. And the character doesn’t have to be like a main he could just come out when everyone needs him. Like Kobe in irl
RE: Beyblade Burst: Shining Legends/G Warriors (Episodes in first post) - DeltaZakuro - Oct. 21, 2020
one more.
12) GT! Hyper Dragon!
ガチ！ ハイパードラゴン！
Gachi! Haipādoragon!
(Date Unknown)
Daiku has a rather strange encounter with Legend Blader Drum Koryu!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Shining Legends/G Warriors (Episodes in first post) - DeltaZakuro - Oct. 21, 2020
The Suns Team Members
Heather Carter - Peace Harmonia G. Hv (Captain)
Daiku Azuka - Sun Dysis G. Or (Star Blader)
Rantaro Kiyama - Gust Ragnaruk G. R (Trainer)
Ally - Super Hyperion Ev 1A
Lex - Curse Satan Hr Zn 1D
Jay - King Helios Mb 1B
Zaida Kimuzan - Dawn Zouwu G. Dm' (Temporary Member)
In the final arc of G Warriors there will be a new member of The Suns. Im deciding the name of the blader but the bey name is completely up to you.
User will most likely be a female.
Rules
~Bey must be creative (meaning no pre-existing bey evolutions)~
~must specify type and parts (preferably no abbreviations like Ev', please type the full name out)~
~You can put requests in this thread or you can PM to me with the title "G Warriors Bey Request"~
~Deadline is November 1st~
~Winner will be announced on November 8th 7:00PM CST~
NOTE: Beys might be adjusted slightly to fit the system
Gonna tag some people who might be interested in joining
CheetoBlader SunBlader98 6Jupiter5 The Blacknight GreenK9148
RE: Beyblade Burst: Shining Legends/G Warriors (Episodes in first post) - 6Jupiter5 - Oct. 22, 2020
Here’s a idea:
Order Apophis (snake of course and the name is the opposite of what apophis represents) 10’ proof quick’
Rotation: Left
Type: balance
Gimmicks: the layer has Dread like features and has a awakening mode much like tempest. It starts off as a regular circle with rubber in between the top of the layer. The first click till the red point (yes it’s Mugen lock) Slightly exposes a blade, it becomes an attack barrier in the click before it hits the red part and once in the red part it’s a circle again.
Weakness. It has 2 burst buttons like Genesis, and it is easy to offbalance at the second and third clicks (4 clicks in total) due to it being asymmetrical (like Doomscisor)
If you don’t want the gimmick and just want the name that’s totally cool
RE: Beyblade Burst: Shining Legends/G Warriors (Episodes in first post) - GreenK9148 - Oct. 22, 2020
bey: Huntress Arachne 8' turn octa (I might draw a picture for it)
type: balance
spin: L/R
Main colors: Black and red (like a black widow)
Gimmick: Has flexible strands of string (protruding from 8 points equidistance to each other, representing the silk of a spider) that swing around when spinning, it can entangle the enemy bey and may cause it to burst. Though sometimes it can stop itself spinning by getting the string caught in the opponents bey.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Shining Legends/G Warriors (Episodes in first post) - SunBlader98 - Oct. 22, 2020
Name ream Basilisk 7 Choke Slide:It has 7 Blades at first launch and after taking a hit from opponent it transforms into 14 Blades
Discription:It is a Right Spin Defense Type
Choke:it is the widest frame and destabilizez the opponent
Slide o its a Defense version of Sword and it acts like a Quest Driver!
(I will try to draw it soon)
RE: Beyblade Burst: Shining Legends/G Warriors (Episodes in first post) - DeltaZakuro - Oct. 22, 2020
(Oct. 22, 2020 12:19 AM)6Jupiter5 Wrote: Here’s a idea:
Order Apophis (snake of course and the name is the opposite of what apophis represents) 10’ proof quick’
Rotation: Left
Type: balance
Gimmicks: the layer has Dread like features and has a awakening mode much like tempest. It starts off as a regular circle with rubber in between the top of the layer. The first click till the red point (yes it’s Mugen lock) Slightly exposes a blade, it becomes an attack barrier in the click before it hits the red part and once in the red part it’s a circle again.
Weakness. It has 2 burst buttons like Genesis, and it is easy to offbalance at the second and third clicks (4 clicks in total) due to it being asymmetrical (like Doomscisor)
If you don’t want the gimmick and just want the name that’s totally cool
(Oct. 22, 2020 1:05 AM)GreenK9148 Wrote: bey: Huntress Arachne 8' turn octa (I might draw a picture for it)
type: balance
spin: L/R
Main colors: Black and red (like a black widow)
Gimmick: Has flexible strands of string (protruding from 8 points equidistance to each other, representing the silk of a spider) that swing around when spinning, it can entangle the enemy bey and may cause it to burst. Though sometimes it can stop itself spinning by getting the string caught in the opponents bey.
(Oct. 22, 2020 1:25 AM)SunBlader98 Wrote: Name: Dream Basilisk 7 Choke Slide:It has 7 Blades at first launch and after taking a hit from opponent it transforms into 14 Blades
Discription: It is a Right Spin Defense Type
Choke: it is the widest frame and destabilizez the opponent
Slide: So its a Defense version of Sword and it acts like a Quest Driver!
(I will try to draw it soon)
Those are really interesting.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Shining Legends/G Warriors (Episodes in first post) - The Blacknight - Oct. 22, 2020
Well, was planning to have a bad person's bey, but I guess Tartarus sounds kinda cool
well, im making this a gt bey, but plz tweak as much as u need(id actually like this to be gt, the last throwback bey we got was trident)
Balance type:
Blaze Tartarus 10 Bump Metal MobiusV Retsu
Blaze: Erase but right spin, also blades are a bit smaller and flatter, and the whole layer has bound gimmick(god valkyrie style). red and black, mainly red tho
Retsu: black recolor of retsu
Tartarus: a black chip of a golem. the last tooth is hard rubber, burst stopper
10: black recolor of Ten
Bump metal: bump but entirely made of metal
MobiusV (Mobius voltage): Mobius made entirely of metal. also, ya know those toy cars that when you push them, they go farther than they are supposed to? yeah, when MobiusV is moving, it actually speeds up. red in color.
Avatar: Massive Golem with rock wings like mfb Quezicotal(not tryna spell that right)
Name of owner:
Taylor SWIFT(jk, taylor jackson)
Gender: Female
Age: 13
Personality: All around nice person but when she battles she goes insane.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Shining Legends/G Warriors (Episodes in first post) - DeltaZakuro - Oct. 22, 2020
Episode 5A (Episode 9): Dragon Emperor! Ravage Longinus! Will be out in the coming weeks.
In the meantime you can rate what i have written so far.
Can be ranked by /5 or /10
Grammar:
Story:
Characters:
Dialogue:
Length:
Total:
RE: Beyblade Burst: Shining Legends/G Warriors (Episodes in first post) - DeltaZakuro - Oct. 25, 2020
Episode 1B: Molten Beast! Volcano Dragonis!
PE came and Zaida was changing clothes for the class, meanwhile a thought of the tournament runs through her mind
Zaida: *thinks* If Daichi comes, ill tell him about the tournament...
*Zaida finished dressing out and a boy the same age as Zaida walks in the gym*
Zaida: Hi Daichi!
Daichi: Hello!
*he sets his stuff down and runs over to her*
Daichi: I heard you went to the principals office, what did you do?
Zaida: Thats what I want to talk to you about, he mentioned a tournament.
Daichi: You mean the Legends Championship? He told me all about it.
Zaida: He didn't tell me about it, well not much anyway...
Daichi: The only thing I don't know is the prize, he was very quiet about that!
Principal: *on loudspeaker* Zaida Kimuzan and Daichi Cerumuna please come to my office!
*they look at each other for a second and head to the office*
Daichi: You wanted to see us?
Principal: Yes, please sit.
Zaida: Will you finally tell us about the Tournament?!
Principal: *sigh* fine.... The prize will be the Legendary Crown! with it, you'll be considered a new member of the Legendary Bladers!
Zaida: How many Legends are there?
Principal: Excluding Valt which is who you have to beat in order to take the crown, there are 20 legends.
Daichi: That's a lot!
Principal: The rest will be unveiled at the tournament, ive got something to show you.
*They head out to the gym and a stadium with ramps leading up to a wide upper deck sits in the center of the gym*
Zaida: What the hell kind of a stadium is this?!
Principal: This is the stadium they'll use at the tournament, Valt calls it the Speed-Ramp Stadium! You two wanna try it out?
Daichi: Lets do this Zaida!
Zaida: Sure!
3 2 1 GO SHOOT!!!!
*Multi Zouwu lands in the stadium and takes the center in Stamina Mode*
Daichi: Defending are we?! FUTILE!! GO DRAGONIS!!!
*Dragonis heads onto the Upper Deck and gains a massive boost of speed*
Principal: I forgot to mention there are 2 speed boost on both sides, if a bey touches it they will gain a massive boost of power!
*Dragonis leaps off the upper deck and falls toward Zouwu*
Daichi: GO!!! VOLCANIC DIVING SMASH!!!!
Zaida: ZOUWU!!!!!
*Dragonis knocks Zouwu into the air, which then it Burst*
Zaida: Zouwu.....
???: Great demonstration of the Speed-Ramp Stadium, Daichi.
Zaida: That voice!... Its....
*They turn around and they see Valt Aoi standing near the bleachers*
Zaida: Valt Aoi.....
[To Be Continued]
RE: Beyblade Burst: Shining Legends/G Warriors (Episodes in first post) - Valtryek Aoi - Oct. 26, 2020
Forgive my rating, it won't be that accurate to my true thoughts and feelings until I reread it since it's been a while. You may ask, why will I do it now? Just to see how my opinion (or if) my opinion will change after reading.
Grammar: 10/10
Story: 8.5/10
Dialogue: 9.5/10
Length: 10/10
Grammar on point is always. job Good.
Story seems pretty good so far, though these legends are starting to get clapped early, I'm pretty tolerant of it, especially when it's not Lean characters doing it. The wins seem to make sense for the most part, unless my head was stuck in the ground again.
Dialogue is on point for how the characters should act, and is pretty accurate to what I'd think they'd say if this was an anime. Nice job on the battle scenes, I'll take notes on that later.
Length is long. LONNNNG. I dunno why I have such high expectations on that, I'm changing it from a 9 to 10. Definitely longer than anything I could write, lol.
TOTAL: 38/40
Very nice read, always waiting for those new episodes, being a subscriber to the thread.
Job Good.
Edit: I think I'm fine with sticking with this rating tbh.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Shining Legends/G Warriors (Episodes in first post) - 6Jupiter5 - Oct. 26, 2020
Request for Achilles. Combo Paradox Achilles y convert- Dimension+. Paradox Achilles features 3 rings, 1st ring is paradox swords (has metal in the swords, plastic contact points, shaped like Infinite swords), 2nd ring is a stamina ring (makes the paradox base very round and has a smooth edge), and the last ring is the defense ring (basically bigger version of the defense ring on infinite). Paradox alone is a bigger version of Union speed. Y is like a single chassis but into this system. Convert- weighs less, but scrapes less. Dimension+ is a better version of dimension that has Pom plastic instead of rubber.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Shining Legends/G Warriors (Episodes in first post) - DeltaZakuro - Oct. 26, 2020
(Oct. 26, 2020 1:48 AM)6Jupiter5 Wrote: Request for Achilles. Combo Paradox Achilles y convert- Dimension+. Paradox Achilles features 3 rings, 1st ring is paradox swords (has metal in the swords, plastic contact points, shaped like Infinite swords), 2nd ring is a stamina ring (makes the paradox base very round and has a smooth edge), and the last ring is the defense ring (basically bigger version of the defense ring on infinite). Paradox alone is a bigger version of Union speed. Y is like a single chassis but into this system. Convert- weighs less, but scrapes less. Dimension+ is a better version of dimension that has Pom plastic instead of rubber. Achilles has already been planned for both seasons
Season 1: Gladius Achilles 11'Bump Xtend Metal+
Season 2: Surge Achilles G. Xm+
RE: Beyblade Burst: Shining Legends/G Warriors (Episodes in first post) - 6Jupiter5 - Oct. 26, 2020
(Oct. 26, 2020 1:58 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: (Oct. 26, 2020 1:48 AM)6Jupiter5 Wrote: Request for Achilles. Combo Paradox Achilles y convert- Dimension+. Paradox Achilles features 3 rings, 1st ring is paradox swords (has metal in the swords, plastic contact points, shaped like Infinite swords), 2nd ring is a stamina ring (makes the paradox base very round and has a smooth edge), and the last ring is the defense ring (basically bigger version of the defense ring on infinite). Paradox alone is a bigger version of Union speed. Y is like a single chassis but into this system. Convert- weighs less, but scrapes less. Dimension+ is a better version of dimension that has Pom plastic instead of rubber. Achilles has already been planned for both seasons
Season 1: Gladius Achilles 11'Bump Xtend Metal+
Season 2: Surge Achilles G. Xm+
X+ Metal seems kind of overkill. Also could you do the three rings in my idea for surge (I really liked that idea), do it to make the sad ketchup pikachu happy.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Shining Legends/G Warriors (Episodes in first post) - DeltaZakuro - Oct. 26, 2020
(Oct. 26, 2020 2:34 AM)6Jupiter5 Wrote: (Oct. 26, 2020 1:58 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Achilles has already been planned for both seasons
Season 1: Gladius Achilles 11'Bump Xtend Metal+
Season 2: Surge Achilles G. Xm+
X+ Metal seems kind of overkill. Also could you do the three rings in my idea for surge (I really liked that idea), do it to make the sad ketchup pikachu happy.
Its not bad considering the only metal on the driver is the Chip.
And sorry but 3 rings is too much to keep up with.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Shining Legends/G Warriors (Episodes in first post) - 6Jupiter5 - Oct. 26, 2020
(Oct. 26, 2020 2:39 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: (Oct. 26, 2020 2:34 AM)6Jupiter5 Wrote: X+ Metal seems kind of overkill. Also could you do the three rings in my idea for surge (I really liked that idea), do it to make the sad ketchup pikachu happy.
Its not bad considering the only metal on the driver is the Chip.
And sorry but 3 rings is too much to keep up with.
Pikachu will forever remain sad lol.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Shining Legends/G Warriors (Episodes in first post) - DeltaZakuro - Oct. 26, 2020
Decided to fuse Episode 2A and 2B
Episode 2: Valt Is Here! Valkyrie!/Zaida Vs Valt!
Principal: You're here early.
Valt: Plane was faster than I thought, so who all is parti-
*Zaida runs up and hugs him*
Valt: Oh... Hello!
Zaida: I finally get to meet you after all this time!!!
Daichi: Zaida quit embarrassing yourself!
Valt: No its ok, always great to meet a fan!
Principal: Well kids, have you decided to participate in the tournament?
Daichi: Ill go!
Zaida: Same!
Valt: Daichi. Zaida, do you two wanna battle me?
*Daichi nods yes and Zaida's eyes light up with excitement*
Valt: This is my Shining Bey, Revolution Valkyrie!!
Daichi: *thinks to self* Revolution Valkyrie is an Attack Type. Ive seen Brave Valkyrie in action and know what it can do but this bey seems to be on a whole nother level.
Zaida: *thinks to self* i dont want to make myself look weak in front of Valt.... I want to win!!!
*she changes Xtend+ into attack mode*
Valt: Lets Go!
3 2 1 GOO SHOOT!!!
*Dragonis, Zouwu and Valkyrie land in the Stadium*
Daichi: GOOO DRAGONIS!!!
*Dragonis, Zouwu and Valkyrie land in the Stadium*
Daichi: GOOO DRAGONIS!!!
*Dragonis pushes Valkyrie onto the Upper Deck*
Zaida: GET UP THERE ZOUWU!!!!
*Zouwu climbs to the Upper Deck and attacks Valkyrie from behind*
Valt: GO VALKYRIE, AWAKEN!!!
*a ring with 3 blades twists and clicks into alignment with the main wings*
Daichi/Zaida: WHAT THE?!
Valt: LETS END THIS! VYALKYRIE!!! *his aura flares up*
*Valkyries avatar comes out*
Valt: GO REVOLUTION SLASH!!!!
*Valkyrie uses its extended wings and bursts Dragonis and Zouwu at the same time*
Daichi: WHAT THE HELL WAS THAT?!
Zaida: Revolution Valkyrie..... Its so strong.....
Valt: You two aren't as strong as I thought you were, thats why im going to take you both around the world to train with th-
*Zaida runs out of the gym, almost in tears*
Daichi: HEY WAIT!! WHERE ARE YOU GOING?!
*Valt stares after Zaida a bit concerned*
Daichi: She cant just leave like that!
Valt: Its ok, ill go look for her...
*a few minutes later*
Valt: Zaida?
*Zaida was in a desk in her homeroom class, the teacher wasn't in there*
Zaida: Valt? How did you find me?
Valt: I asked around.
Zaida: Im sorry i ran out like that! I was embarrassed that I couldn't beat you and I made a fool of myself when I hugged you!!
*Zaida was almost in tears now*
Valt: Its ok, you were just happy to see me that's all!
Zaida: *blushes* thanks Valt!....
*she hugs him again*
Valt: Lets battle, just you and me!
Zaida: Id like to battle you!
Valt: Awesome, lets go!
*they both return to the gym*
Daichi: How will you fare against Valt alone Zaida?
Zaida: Ill attack him with all I got!!
Daichi: AGAIN?!
Zaida: Yep! Im going to gain enough speed and aim for an Over Finish!!
Principal: *thinks* you can't beat Valt, you have no comprehension of how strong the legends are!!
Valt: Are we ready?
Zaida: Yep lets do this!
3 2 1 GO SHOOT!!!
*Zouwu heads up to the upper deck and gains a massive boost of speed from the Speed Boosts*
Zaida: GO ZOUWU!!!
*Zouwu glides from the Upper Deck and clashes with Valkyrie*
Valt: AWAKEN!!!
*Valkyries wings begin to rotate and lock in the Awakened Form*
Zaida: Oh No!!!
Valt: Attack!
*Valkyrie unleashes its barrage on Zouwu*
Zaida: *thinks* Damn it... If this keeps up then Zouwu wont have enough stamina left...
???: Whats wrong Zaida?
*Zaida gets pulled into a golden Void and a beast with a fluffy mane and a golden colored body appears in front of her*
Zaida: Who are you?
Zouwu: I am Zouwu, you seem to be struggling against Valt.... Whats wrong?
Zaida: Valt is so much stronger than I anticipated, maybe it's too soon to challenge the Legendary Bladers.
Zouwu: Woah Woah Woah, wheres this coming from?! I believe in you, and you'll become a lot stronger... I know it!!! You said yourself that you wanted to go the Championship!
Zaida: I feel so nervous around Valt, i must've gotten distracted... I promise ill get stronger!!
*Zouwu disappears*
*Zouwu breaks free from Valkyries attack and begins to glow*
Daichi: LOOK ITS GLOWING!!
Zaida: ATTACK!!! MULTI CRUSHER!!!
*Zouwu clashes with Valkyrie*
*Zaida screams as Zouwus aura bursts out from behind her*
Valt: Gah! Where did this power come from!!!
Zaida: BURST!!!!
*Valkyrie bursts*
Valt: What the?!...
*Zouwu's glow fills the stadium as everyone stares in shock, including Zaida*
Daichi: Did Zouwu really burst Valkyrie?!....
[~TO BE CONTINUED~]
RE: Beyblade Burst: Shining Legends/G Warriors (Episodes in first post) - DeltaZakuro - Oct. 26, 2020
Episode 3: Ultimate Attack, Bound Sword!/Flames Of Light! Warrior Spriggan!
Zaida: A burst... finish...
Valt: That was very impressive! You seem so strong!
*Zaida blushes and overheats from Valts compliment*
Zaida: *nervously* he actually complimented me?....
Valt: Ready for the second battle?
Zaida: Yeah!
3 2 1 GO SHOOT!!!
*Zaida's insane launch makes her pull a muscle and her launcher breaks, but her bey shows extreme speed*
Valt: **thinks** she pulled off a strong shoot despite her launcher breaking?!....
*both beys land in the stadium and zoom on the Upper Deck*
Valt: Go Valkyrie!!
Zaida: *clutches her shoulder in pain* Zouwu.... Keep going....
*Zouwu and Valkyrie clash side by side, not giving an inch*
Valt: She isn't giving an inch... Maybe she is stronger than she appears....
*Zouwu begins to turn Valkyries wings toward the Awakened Form*
Zaida: NO!!
*Zaida screams out as the rubber band holding her hair in a ponytail snaps, releasing her hair in a huge wavy mess*
*Zouwus aura flares out as its avatar roars out in determination*
Valt: VALKYRIE!!
*Valkyries avatar bursts out as her horse neighs*
Zaida: GO MULTI BLAST!!!
Valt: FINISH THIS WITH BOUND SWORD!
*Valkyrie uses its wings to rebound Zouwu away*
Zaida: ZOUWU!!
*Zouwu hits the wall and bursts*
*Zaida lets go of her shoulder and faints*
~1 Hour Later~
*Zaida wakes up in the nurses office*
Zaida: Valt? Daichi?
Valt: How's your arm feeling?
Zaida:its feeling so much better... Its like nothing happened...
Valt: That's good to hear.
Daichi: *smiles*
Valt: Are you two ready to train for the championship?!
Daichi: We're leaving already?!
Valt: Yeah you ready?
Both: YEAH!
~at the Airport, Zaida and Daichi say goodbye to their friends and family and they board the plane~
Valt: Everyone strapped in?
Daichi/Zaida: Yep
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Valt: Hey Zaida! *he tosses her a new launcher*
Valt: *jokingly* try not to break it this time..
*Zaida smiles and giggles*
Daichi: Who's the first legend we're meeting?
Valt: A very good and close friend of mine...
-----Scene changes to a blader training alone in a building within a massive city-----
Valt: My long time friend and rival: Shu Kurenai....
~a long flight later~
*Valt, Daichi and Zaida walk through New York to the Raging Bulls*
Zaida: I didn't know New York was this big!
Valt: This is it! The Raging Bulls!
*they walk in and Shu was training at a stadium*
Shu: Valt?! You're here already?
Valt: We were already in the country so of course it wouldn't take long for us to get here.
Shu: These must be the 2 kids you told me about.
*Zaida and Daichi smile and wave hello*
Valt: They're participating in the Championship, im taking them around the world to train with the other Legends.
Shu: *his bey: Warrior Spriggan glows in his hand* i see... So you want to battle?...
Valt: They're kinda eager to battle with you.
Shu: Well alright! Lets do it!! Ill take you both on!!
*Zaida and Daichi were taken aback by Shu's sudden confidence, even Valt was surprised*
Zaida: Lets do this!!
3 2 1 GO SHOOT!!!!
Shu: SHINING SOUTHERN CROSS SHOT!!!!
*Spriggan lands in the stadium and receives a huge speed boost from Shu's powerful launch*
Zaida: **Thinks** its so fast!!
*Dragonis collides with Spriggan but it burst due to its intense speed*
Daichi: What the?!
Zaida: GO FOR IT!!! MULTI BLAST!!!
*Zaida screams out as the rubber band holding her hair in a ponytail snaps, releasing her hair in a huge wavy mess*
*Zouwu starts pushing back Spriggan*
Shu: *scar glows* Go Spriggan!
*Spriggans glow fills the stadium*
*through Shu's eye, Zaidas image transforms into a shadow. The shadow had the same skinny body type and the raging long hair and instead of blue eyes.... The shadow had purple eyes. The delicate beautiful hands were changed to demonic claws. This shadow girl seemed familiar... And that's what scared Shu!*
Shu: *frightened gasp* Y-You....
Zaida: Finish It!!!
Shu: Axe Break!!!!
*Zouwu bursts and its pieces fall at Zaidas feet*
Shu: It seems I win..
~a few hours pass and it was time to go to bed~
Zaida: Ugh.. We finally can go to sleep....
*Daichi flops on to the bed and instantly falls asleep*
Zaida: Welp he's gone... Didn't even bother to get changed...
*she pulls her sleepwear pajamas out of her suitcase and gets changed*
Zaida: *yawns* i didn't realize how exhausted I am...
*she walks over to her friends bed and puts the covers over him*
Zaida: Goodnight my friend...
*she lightly touches his cheek and walks back to her bed*
*as she fell asleep, an image of Valt and Shu entered her mind and it put her at ease, making her fall asleep faster*
~meanwhile in a far off place~
???: Zaida..... Kimuzan....
~TO BE CONTINUED~
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