(Oct. 31, 2021  4:45 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Since Athena is back, i've got a lot planned for her and her relationship with Mitsuki and their past which will be completely explained in the next episode or so. Also since an apparent new Valkyrie has been "Rumored" and its name apparently being Ultimate Valkyrie.. DB Adeona has been renamed from Ultimate Adeona to Unison Adeona.

(Nov. 01, 2021  10:06 PM)GenesisBlader Wrote: yo DZ, could you send Mitsuki a little message?

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bELL dId NoT mEaN tO bReAk Ur GiRlFrIeNd, AtHenA's BeYbLaDe

and besides that, (and i promise im not just throwing ratings everywhere, but cool chapter! the battle with rashad is pretty intense i might say? also how rashad kinda tutors mitsuki as he goes along in the story is fascinating and i also think its pretty funny how fast Athena defeats Rashad and i was a little surprised at mitsuki's win against Bell? anyway it didn't really feel forced and this episode flows good with the previous episodes! also im hyped for the episode in which athena will absolutely clap mitsuki, and a little bit more of a showcase of athena's new power! also wondering who the antagonist will be

(Nov. 01, 2021  1:41 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: New episode later today

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Episode 7
https://www.wattpad.com/1148761981-beyblade-burst-db-star-ignition-episode-7

(Nov. 02, 2021  3:36 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote:

(Nov. 01, 2021  1:41 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: New episode later today

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Episode 7
https://www.wattpad.com/1148761981-beyblade-burst-db-star-ignition-episode-7

Would you like a Serious and Borning Review or a Comedic Very entertaining Ha Ha Review?

(Nov. 02, 2021  4:31 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: So overall This Chapter was really good the Mistuki and Athena reactions were really good too I loved both of them Y'know, the soulmates. We also got to see Unison Adeona completely trash Rashad and make fun of him for having a Copy Cat Beyblade. Random Person: Get off the stage, Bautro Copycat!! Anyways it was kinda cool to see Mitsuki have like a Panic Session about how he is going to be able to beat Bell and Ilya isn't helping- (She never really does) When she adds the Belial is almost at its "Perfect Gear"

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I've just gotta rant a bit but why call it Perfect Gear? Seriously just cal it Ultimate Gear Belial or Perfect Belial but Perfect Gear? Seriously that's a dumb name.

Anyways I found it hilarious after when Practice battle Rashad's Like "Aight, this ain't working" Like bruh seriously?! After one match you decide that? Whatever. I feel like you're hinting towards Rashad's Hate towards Bell because whenever someone mentions Bell being strong or invincible Rashad completely shoots them down saying something like "Belial has still got some room to grow" Or some other stuff like that. Anyways now Athena's making her Beyblade (I just became a Percy Jackson Geek after reading some books and I love the name Athena :)) Anyways, I'm gonna skip towards the battle with Rashad. Rashad got completely trashed like I said earlier and Rashad seemed really angry when Athena called him a Copycat. Like... An extreme Supreme GREATEST Anger. HINT HINT. Anyways, Athena goes in for a Bolt Charge and sends Valkyrie flying up the QuadDriver stadium and burst it with Unison Slash. (I'm tired so sorry that I'm skipping some parts) Anyways, Mistuki finds Bell and challenges him to a battle, and it seems like he means business when he's challenging  Bell. Anyway, Bell has the 3 Gears so far. F, V, and S Gear but Bell kinda seemed out of character when he said I wanted to Break Adeona but you seem pretty confident. What would've been a bit more Bell would've been something like "*Laughs* The Demon King went all out on your friend, Athena. I, Bell Daikokuten will spare you no mercy either!" Bell probably wouldn't have brought it up because he'd probably be ashamed of it but your fanfic your rules. Misuki I know Athena's your friend but chill. Bell did it on Accident. Anywho Monoceros goes in Defense Mode and defends against Belial but Belial breaks through eventually but Misuki steals a move from Shu and switches to Attack Mode mid-battle. As Bell goes for a Dynamite Bomber Mizuki goes all out and uses Star Cannon bursting Belial. Bell, impressed by Mitsuki's win gives him the B Gear that attaches to his disk. Then Mitsuki meets back up with Athena but sees her older brother, Lane! I'm guessing Lane won't be evil in this season but seeing him back is cool and we end the Episode off seeing Wakiya talk about the Dynamite Battle Tour (I still don't know How I'm going to pull this off In my fanfiction, any suggestions would be great) And Mitsuki promising his Bey that he'll win no matter what! Overall this chapter is an 8/10 it's a good standard not super intense episode and leaves excitement for the next coming ones.

(Nov. 02, 2021  2:16 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote:

(Nov. 01, 2021  10:06 PM)GenesisBlader Wrote: yo DZ, could you send Mitsuki a little message?

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bELL dId NoT mEaN tO bReAk Ur GiRlFrIeNd, AtHenA's BeYbLaDe

and besides that, (and i promise im not just throwing ratings everywhere, but cool chapter! the battle with rashad is pretty intense i might say? also how rashad kinda tutors mitsuki as he goes along in the story is fascinating and i also think its pretty funny how fast Athena defeats Rashad and i was a little surprised at mitsuki's win against Bell? anyway it didn't really feel forced and this episode flows good with the previous episodes! also im hyped for the episode in which athena will absolutely clap mitsuki, and a little bit more of a showcase of athena's new power! also wondering who the antagonist will be

This story runs along the same path as DB with a few changes. Rashad is still the antagonist with Greatest Raphael which he makes later on down the line. Meantime, he acts as kind of a supporter for Mitsuki and a tutor.

(Nov. 16, 2021  3:22 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Dub Name For The Series (Will still use Japanese Naming): Beyblade Burst QuadDrive: Stars Ignited

(Nov. 16, 2021  4:24 AM)Beykid3.0 Wrote:

(Nov. 16, 2021  3:22 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Dub Name For The Series (Will still use Japanese Naming): Beyblade Burst QuadDrive: Stars Ignited

I'm not the type for horror fanfics but i was reading this a while back but never mentioned it, I like the idea and i'd like to use it but i want to give credit to you, as you're my favorite fanfic writer.

(Nov. 19, 2020  11:35 PM)EarthHelios Wrote:

(Nov. 19, 2020  11:35 PM)6Jupiter5 Wrote: dh ’fhaodadh tu leasachadh air do fhad (translate this to English idk why)

you could improve your length

(Nov. 16, 2021  4:37 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote:

(Nov. 16, 2021  4:24 AM)Beykid3.0 Wrote: I'm not the type for horror fanfics but i was reading this a while back but never mentioned it, I like the idea and i'd like to use it but i want to give credit to you, as you're my favorite fanfic writer.

Well this is no longer a horror fan fic so do i don't really care anyway.