RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - Ntruder19 - Jun. 30, 2019
Are you still taking requests?
Sora Akatsuki wears a scarf and a red leather jacket, his bey is Flash Sphinx hurricane hold’ sen, and his special moves are hold drift, where sphinx tilts onto the freespinning plate of hold’, and Sphinx hurricane, which is kind of like a cross between dead gravity and Leone’s tornado thing.
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - Dash Driver - Jun. 30, 2019
Could you add my character please?
Name: Tyler Warden
Appearance: Nicknamed the Chrome Warrior after his bey, Tyler wears a dark blue hoodie with a yellow beyblade logo on it(the thing on my profile pic) and long pants. He has short black hair.
Personality: He is quiet and polite, but sometimes makes snarky comments. He has a very short attention span.
Beyblade:
Type: Balance
Layer: Chrome Talos(the giant bronze automaton from Greek mythology) is basically a right-spin Hell Salamander. It has 8 blades in defense mode and 4 blades in attack mode. in the middle is an armored silver face with a Gladiator helmet. Each blade is covered with metal. The color scheme is similar to the Hell Salamander from the Air Knight random booster but it has blue highlights instead of red ones.
Forge Disc: Flare has a light blue plastic free-spinning part that looks like the Cross disc frame meant to parry attacks.
Driver: Absorb' is metallic silver and functions the same way as Absorb, but with a stronger spring lock so that it’s harder to burst.
Launcher: He uses a Carabiner Grip and a right-spin String Launcher that is configured so that the string is pulled sideways. Both the launcher and the launcher grip are opaque white. He launches by holding his launcher with his left hand and holding the string handle with his right. He holds the launcher behind him on his left side, jumps, does a 360 degree spin, thrusts his launcher forward, and launches his bey in midair.
Special Moves:
Blade Shift: Chrome Talos crashes into a wall and moves the blades on its layer, changing its mode.
Absorb Dive: During his launch, Tyler jumps higher than usual and launches. When his bey hits the stadium, the spring inside Absorb' compresses then decompresses, launching Talos up into the air. Then, Talos smashes down on his opponent.
Flare Defense: When Talos is unbalanced or attacked from below, it exposes its disc and the free-spinning part of Flare deflects attacks.
Absorb Counter: When Talos is attacked from above, it's driver's tip is pushed in and it moves aggressively to deliver a striking blow.
Chrome Shield: When Talos is in defense mode, all 8 of its blades begin to glow and it uses its low recoil design to stay in the center of the stadium.
Chrome Slash: When Talos is in attack mode, it uses the downforce generated from its blades to compress the spring in Absorb', causing it to speed in circles before crashing into the opponent.
Chrome Whip: In attack mode, one blade on Talos glows. That blade then slices through an opponent.
Ultra Chrome Barrage: In attack mode with the driver's spring compressed, Talos uses the slope of the stadium do do a 360 degree hyper attack, just like Valt's Rush Launch.
Actually could you make it so that he's not that good but he gets better and better until he's a great blader like how Kenta from MFB did?
If you want you can also change up some things.
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - Sir Saitama - Jul. 02, 2019
Chapter 21 - The Sibling Showdown! Part 1
Last time on Beyblade Burst Zero! Roan and Xhan enter into the semi-finals as Paris defeats Aaron!
“What an outstanding performance!” Hanami leapt out of his seat excitedly.
“And Xhan Bogard earns himself a spot in the semi-finals!”
He wore a red tunic with a blue sash attached to his left shoulder. Despite being royal, Xhan acted in a relaxed, casual manner.
“It’s all thanks to my Fullmetal Xcalibur!” he smiled, holding up his beyblade.
The layer consisted of a rough, jagged design with a metal sword in the middle. It used its usual color pallet, with bright reds, blues and golds.
Xcalibur’s disc, 1+, was seemingly a final upgrade to the 1 disc. It had a heavier weight and a thicker blade.
The driver, Steel, had a metal base but in a star-shape.
Aiga was delighted. Like Hanami described, it was quite a sight. Fullmetal Xcalibur blew through the opposing bey in less than ten seconds.
“That’s some sheer attacking force,” Paris noted. The bey drove off the stadium wall and glided into Xhan’s hand.
Later that afternoon, Paris and Aiga walked toward the school in an upbeat manner.
“That was amazing! Fullmetal Xcalibur was like, POW and then BAM!” Aiga said.
“Yeah, it was pretty cool.” Paris replied.
The two were quite surprised when they entered inside their usual training spot, the gymnasium.
“Let it rip!”
“-Rip!”
“Toko,” Aiga and Paris said in unison. Flash Trident raced around the worn-out stadium, before bursting itself on the wall.
“Oh. Hey guys,” Toko briefly glanced at them before diverting his attention back at the arena.
Paris recalled to when Hanami announced that Toko would be practicing his sister, Nika.
“Training?” Aiga asked, impatiently wandering around the room.
“Mhm.”
“Hey, listen. If you want to win, you’re going to have to beat us first,” Paris said challengingly.
Toko scanned his two opponents, observing their launching styles.
“Bring it on,” he said, under his breath.
“Let it rip!” They all cried in unison, as they fired their beys into the stadium.
“Immortal Slash!” An aura rose from Paris as he unleashed his power into a single attack.
“Achilles! Cho-Z Slash!” Aiga commanded.
Whilst Flash Trident took the middle, Achilles and Pegasus came from either side, beaming through the stamina type.
“Hold on Trident,” Toko said, assessing the situation.
“Burst him!” Paris and Aiga exclaimed.
“Uh oh,” Toko sighed before facing his demise.
Flash Trident exploded into three pieces.
“Alright. You beat me.”
“You’re getting much stronger-“ Aiga and Paris said in sync, before giving each other weird looks.
“Do you guys have a habit of saying things at the same time?” Toko raised an eyebrow as they all shared a much needed laugh.
“Here,” Paris handed a bottle of water to Toko.
He poured it over his hair and stood up, feeling relieved.
“Ah, much better. Up for a second battle?”
“You got it!”
“Let it rip!”
The second battle was a repeat of the first. Charles, on the sidelines, pressed a button on a timer.
“Five seconds better than last time,” he said.
“I don’t need your comment!” Toko snapped. “Again!”
Flash Trident burst, not to anyone’s surprise.
“Again!”
“One hundredth and fifty-fourth battle!” Charles put his hand in the middle.
“Let it rip!”
“You’ve got this,” an voice familiar to Toko said encouragingly.
“I don’t know if I can step up and beat Nika,” the blue-haired boy confessed.
“Learn your priorities. Confidence is key, kid. Now are we gonna do this?”
“We will, Trident!” Toko exclaimed.
A vibrant yellow aura erupted from him. Paris and Aiga were exhausted, and were fumbling with their launchers.
“Let it-“ Toko yelled.
“Rip,” The two said wearily.
Cho-Z Achilles and Immortal Pegasus rushed down from either side, charging at full speed.
“Dodge it, Trident!” Toko shouted with confidence as his bey did so. The stamina type elevated itself, giving it a boost in speed.
“Hit me, Aiga!” Paris said.
Aiga curled his fists and slammed it into Paris’ arm.
“Ow! I meant in beyblade!” Paris whimpered.
“Oh.. right. Sorry!”
Achilles lit up and a huge sword hovered over it.
“Cho-Z Sword!” Aiga exclaimed.
With a heavy hit to Pegasus, it lost a click but accelerated toward Trident.
“It’s all yours, Pegasus! Supernova Shoot!” Paris shouted with confidence.
Like a Pegasus, the attack type smashed through Flash Trident, slamming it into the wall.
“It’s not over! Flash Counter!” Toko unzipped his jacket and tossed it aside. Flash Trident rebounded off of the wall and struck Pegasus, knocking it back.
Trident raced toward the attack type, with Achilles chasing behind it.
“Right on your tail!” Aiga shouted.
The stamina type changed its trajectory, throwing Achilles off guard.
“All right, Flash Trident! It’s time to end this once and for all! Final Flash Sting!” Toko bellowed.
Trident slammed down onto Immortal Pegasus, gaining hold of one of its feathers.
“No! Pegasus!” Paris cried. But it was too late.
The attack type bey was thrown off balance, heading right for Cho-Z Achilles. The two beys clashed before simultaneously flinging themselves out of the stadium.
“Toko’s the winner,” Charles declared. Aiga and Paris both collapsed to the floor.
“Well, that was fun,” Toko smiled. He looked outside and frowned. “I’m gonna go home and call it a day.”
And just like that, the four friends parted ways for the day. Later that night, Paris had a dream.
It was more of a vision, to be precise. He appeared in a dark, gloomy castle where multiple cloaked figures talked amongst themselves, as if they were part of a council.
“Silence,” one of them said and they all obeyed the command. He walked toward a throne and sat down.
Another one grumbled. “This is my palace. I have made it fairly certain. Must I show you?”
The one on the throne, their leader, spoke again. “This is my territory now, foolish boy. When I’m done, justice will be done upon this world. Only the strong can survive.”
Paris woke up, startled.
“Phew! It was just one of those weird dreams,” he sighed, very relieved.
He got dressed and left the house as soon as possible.
“Today’s the big day,” Paris kept reminding himself. Toko would face his sister today.
That meant either of them would be against Paris, and whoever won would enter the semi-finals. Either way, it wouldn’t be an easy battle.
Paris had soon arrived at the WBBA building where the battles were held.
“Welcome to all you BeyFans! We have two spectacular battles today! First up, we have Toko against his sister, Nika!”
The crowd cheered.
“And next up we have Daniel against Taiki,” Hanami announced.
Paris noticed how Hanami didn’t seem very.. joyful when announcing that line.
It was understandable, as that match would be a certain loss for Taiki.
“In the red corner, we have Nika Aoi!”
“Against her today is Toko Aoi!”
The siblings entered from a door on either side of the building.
“Nika, just because you’re my sister doesn’t mean I’m going to hold back,” Toko warned.
“That’s good. I’d be disappointed if you did,” Nika replied.
“Well then, it’s settled,” Toko agreed as he looked down at Flash Trident.
“I’m gonna win this one for us.”
A/N
Hey everyone, thanks for reading the chapter and I hope you enjoyed it. I’d like to apologise for my absence as I’ve been extremely busy recently. In saying that, the Zero series is still up and running.
Thank you all for your support,
-Sir Saitama
(Jun. 30, 2019 9:06 PM)Dash Driver Wrote: Could you add my character please?
Name: Tyler Warden
Appearance: Nicknamed the Chrome Warrior after his bey, Tyler wears a dark blue hoodie with a yellow beyblade logo on it(the thing on my profile pic) and long pants. He has short black hair.
Personality: He is quiet and polite, but sometimes makes snarky comments. He has a very short attention span.
Beyblade:
Type: Balance
Layer: Chrome Talos(the giant bronze automaton from Greek mythology) is basically a right-spin Hell Salamander. It has 8 blades in defense mode and 4 blades in attack mode. in the middle is an armored silver face with a Gladiator helmet. Each blade is covered with metal. The color scheme is similar to the Hell Salamander from the Air Knight random booster but it has blue highlights instead of red ones.
Forge Disc: Flare has a light blue plastic free-spinning part that looks like the Cross disc frame meant to parry attacks.
Driver: Absorb' is metallic silver and functions the same way as Absorb, but with a stronger spring lock so that it’s harder to burst.
Launcher: He uses a Carabiner Grip and a right-spin String Launcher that is configured so that the string is pulled sideways. Both the launcher and the launcher grip are opaque white. He launches by holding his launcher with his left hand and holding the string handle with his right. He holds the launcher behind him on his left side, jumps, does a 360 degree spin, thrusts his launcher forward, and launches his bey in midair.
Special Moves:
Blade Shift: Chrome Talos crashes into a wall and moves the blades on its layer, changing its mode.
Absorb Dive: During his launch, Tyler jumps higher than usual and launches. When his bey hits the stadium, the spring inside Absorb' compresses then decompresses, launching Talos up into the air. Then, Talos smashes down on his opponent.
Flare Defense: When Talos is unbalanced or attacked from below, it exposes its disc and the free-spinning part of Flare deflects attacks.
Absorb Counter: When Talos is attacked from above, it's driver's tip is pushed in and it moves aggressively to deliver a striking blow.
Chrome Shield: When Talos is in defense mode, all 8 of its blades begin to glow and it uses its low recoil design to stay in the center of the stadium.
Chrome Slash: When Talos is in attack mode, it uses the downforce generated from its blades to compress the spring in Absorb', causing it to speed in circles before crashing into the opponent.
Chrome Whip: In attack mode, one blade on Talos glows. That blade then slices through an opponent.
Ultra Chrome Barrage: In attack mode with the driver's spring compressed, Talos uses the slope of the stadium do do a 360 degree hyper attack, just like Valt's Rush Launch.
Actually could you make it so that he's not that good but he gets better and better until he's a great blader like how Kenta from MFB did?
If you want you can also change up some things.
Thanks. A Kenta-esque character sounds great, so I’ll add him in when I can.
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - Fusion core - Jul. 02, 2019
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Chapter 21 - The Sibling Showdown! Part 1
Last time on Beyblade Burst Zero! Roan and Xhan enter into the semi-finals as Paris defeats Aaron!
“What an outstanding performance!” Hanami leapt out of his seat excitedly.
“And Xhan Bogard earns himself a spot in the semi-finals!”
He wore a red tunic with a blue sash attached to his left shoulder. Despite being royal, Xhan acted in a relaxed, casual manner.
“It’s all thanks to my Fullmetal Xcalibur!” he smiled, holding up his beyblade.
The layer consisted of a rough, jagged design with a metal sword in the middle. It used its usual color pallet, with bright reds, blues and golds.
Xcalibur’s disc, 1+, was seemingly a final upgrade to the 1 disc. It had a heavier weight and a thicker blade.
The driver, Steel, had a metal base but in a star-shape.
Aiga was delighted. Like Hanami described, it was quite a sight. Fullmetal Xcalibur blew through the opposing bey in less than ten seconds.
“That’s some sheer attacking force,” Paris noted. The bey drove off the stadium wall and glided into Xhan’s hand.
Later that afternoon, Paris and Aiga walked toward the school in an upbeat manner.
“That was amazing! Fullmetal Xcalibur was like, POW and then BAM!” Aiga said.
“Yeah, it was pretty cool.” Paris replied.
The two were quite surprised when they entered inside their usual training spot, the gymnasium.
“Let it rip!”
“-Rip!”
“Toko,” Aiga and Paris said in unison. Flash Trident raced around the worn-out stadium, before bursting itself on the wall.
“Oh. Hey guys,” Toko briefly glanced at them before diverting his attention back at the arena.
Paris recalled to when Hanami announced that Toko would be practicing his sister, Nika.
“Training?” Aiga asked, impatiently wandering around the room.
“Mhm.”
“Hey, listen. If you want to win, you’re going to have to beat us first,” Paris said challengingly.
Toko scanned his two opponents, observing their launching styles.
“Bring it on,” he said, under his breath.
“Let it rip!” They all cried in unison, as they fired their beys into the stadium.
“Immortal Slash!” An aura rose from Paris as he unleashed his power into a single attack.
“Achilles! Cho-Z Slash!” Aiga commanded.
Whilst Flash Trident took the middle, Achilles and Pegasus came from either side, beaming through the stamina type.
“Hold on Trident,” Toko said, assessing the situation.
“Burst him!” Paris and Aiga exclaimed.
“Uh oh,” Toko sighed before facing his demise.
Flash Trident exploded into three pieces.
“Alright. You beat me.”
“You’re getting much stronger-“ Aiga and Paris said in sync, before giving each other weird looks.
“Do you guys have a habit of saying things at the same time?” Toko raised an eyebrow as they all shared a much needed laugh.
“Here,” Paris handed a bottle of water to Toko.
He poured it over his hair and stood up, feeling relieved.
“Ah, much better. Up for a second battle?”
“You got it!”
“Let it rip!”
The second battle was a repeat of the first. Charles, on the sidelines, pressed a button on a timer.
“Five seconds better than last time,” he said.
“I don’t need your comment!” Toko snapped. “Again!”
Flash Trident burst, not to anyone’s surprise.
“Again!”
“One hundredth and fifty-fourth battle!” Charles put his hand in the middle.
“Let it rip!”
“You’ve got this,” an voice familiar to Toko said encouragingly.
“I don’t know if I can step up and beat Nika,” the blue-haired boy confessed.
“Learn your priorities. Confidence is key, kid. Now are we gonna do this?”
“We will, Trident!” Toko exclaimed.
A vibrant yellow aura erupted from him. Paris and Aiga were exhausted, and were fumbling with their launchers.
“Let it-“ Toko yelled.
“Rip,” The two said wearily.
Cho-Z Achilles and Immortal Pegasus rushed down from either side, charging at full speed.
“Dodge it, Trident!” Toko shouted with confidence as his bey did so. The stamina type elevated itself, giving it a boost in speed.
“Hit me, Aiga!” Paris said.
Aiga curled his fists and slammed it into Paris’ arm.
“Ow! I meant in beyblade!” Paris whimpered.
“Oh.. right. Sorry!”
Achilles lit up and a huge sword hovered over it.
“Cho-Z Sword!” Aiga exclaimed.
With a heavy hit to Pegasus, it lost a click but accelerated toward Trident.
“It’s all yours, Pegasus! Supernova Shoot!” Paris shouted with confidence.
Like a Pegasus, the attack type smashed through Flash Trident, slamming it into the wall.
“It’s not over! Flash Counter!” Toko unzipped his jacket and tossed it aside. Flash Trident rebounded off of the wall and struck Pegasus, knocking it back.
Trident raced toward the attack type, with Achilles chasing behind it.
“Right on your tail!” Aiga shouted.
The stamina type changed its trajectory, throwing Achilles off guard.
“All right, Flash Trident! It’s time to end this once and for all! Final Flash Sting!” Toko bellowed.
Trident slammed down onto Immortal Pegasus, gaining hold of one of its feathers.
“No! Pegasus!” Paris cried. But it was too late.
The attack type bey was thrown off balance, heading right for Cho-Z Achilles. The two beys clashed before simultaneously flinging themselves out of the stadium.
“Toko’s the winner,” Charles declared. Aiga and Paris both collapsed to the floor.
“Well, that was fun,” Toko smiled. He looked outside and frowned. “I’m gonna go home and call it a day.”
And just like that, the four friends parted ways for the day. Later that night, Paris had a dream.
It was more of a vision, to be precise. He appeared in a dark, gloomy castle where multiple cloaked figures talked amongst themselves, as if they were part of a council.
“Silence,” one of them said and they all obeyed the command. He walked toward a throne and sat down.
Another one grumbled. “This is my palace. I have made it fairly certain. Must I show you?”
The one on the throne, their leader, spoke again. “This is my territory now, foolish boy. When I’m done, justice will be done upon this world. Only the strong can survive.”
Paris woke up, startled.
“Phew! It was just one of those weird dreams,” he sighed, very relieved.
He got dressed and left the house as soon as possible.
“Today’s the big day,” Paris kept reminding himself. Toko would face his sister today.
That meant either of them would be against Paris, and whoever won would enter the semi-finals. Either way, it wouldn’t be an easy battle.
Paris had soon arrived at the WBBA building where the battles were held.
“Welcome to all you BeyFans! We have two spectacular battles today! First up, we have Toko against his sister, Nika!”
The crowd cheered.
“And next up we have Daniel against Taiki,” Hanami announced.
Paris noticed how Hanami didn’t seem very.. joyful when announcing that line.
It was understandable, as that match would be a certain loss for Taiki.
“In the red corner, we have Nika Aoi!”
“Against her today is Toko Aoi!”
The siblings entered from a door on either side of the building.
“Nika, just because you’re my sister doesn’t mean I’m going to hold back,” Toko warned.
“That’s good. I’d be disappointed if you did,” Nika replied.
“Well then, it’s settled,” Toko agreed as he looked down at Flash Trident.
“I’m gonna win this one for us.”
A/N
Hey everyone, thanks for reading the chapter and I hope you enjoyed it. I’d like to apologise for my absence as I’ve been extremely busy recently. In saying that, the Zero series is still up and running.
Thank you all for your support,
-Sir Saitama
After a long time i read such a good story . It is one of the best episodes if not the best . It had a lot of suspense . And most importantly it had some AWESOME dialogues .
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - SS2 Blader - Jul. 02, 2019
OH MY GOSH!!! What a great idea! (I should do something like that)
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - Dash Driver - Jul. 02, 2019
(Jul. 02, 2019 11:28 AM)UIUSir Saitama Wrote: Chapter 21 - The Sibling Showdown! Part 1
Last time on Beyblade Burst Zero! Roan and Xhan enter into the semi-finals as Paris defeats Aaron!
“What an outstanding performance!” Hanami leapt out of his seat excitedly.
“And Xhan Bogard earns himself a spot in the semi-finals!”
He wore a red tunic with a blue sash attached to his left shoulder. Despite being royal, Xhan acted in a relaxed, casual manner.
“It’s all thanks to my Fullmetal Xcalibur!” he smiled, holding up his beyblade.
The layer consisted of a rough, jagged design with a metal sword in the middle. It used its usual color pallet, with bright reds, blues and golds.
Xcalibur’s disc, 1+, was seemingly a final upgrade to the 1 disc. It had a heavier weight and a thicker blade.
The driver, Steel, had a metal base but in a star-shape.
Aiga was delighted. Like Hanami described, it was quite a sight. Fullmetal Xcalibur blew through the opposing bey in less than ten seconds.
“That’s some sheer attacking force,” Paris noted. The bey drove off the stadium wall and glided into Xhan’s hand.
Later that afternoon, Paris and Aiga walked toward the school in an upbeat manner.
“That was amazing! Fullmetal Xcalibur was like, POW and then BAM!” Aiga said.
“Yeah, it was pretty cool.” Paris replied.
The two were quite surprised when they entered inside their usual training spot, the gymnasium.
“Let it rip!”
“-Rip!”
“Toko,” Aiga and Paris said in unison. Flash Trident raced around the worn-out stadium, before bursting itself on the wall.
“Oh. Hey guys,” Toko briefly glanced at them before diverting his attention back at the arena.
Paris recalled to when Hanami announced that Toko would be practicing his sister, Nika.
“Training?” Aiga asked, impatiently wandering around the room.
“Mhm.”
“Hey, listen. If you want to win, you’re going to have to beat us first,” Paris said challengingly.
Toko scanned his two opponents, observing their launching styles.
“Bring it on,” he said, under his breath.
“Let it rip!” They all cried in unison, as they fired their beys into the stadium.
“Immortal Slash!” An aura rose from Paris as he unleashed his power into a single attack.
“Achilles! Cho-Z Slash!” Aiga commanded.
Whilst Flash Trident took the middle, Achilles and Pegasus came from either side, beaming through the stamina type.
“Hold on Trident,” Toko said, assessing the situation.
“Burst him!” Paris and Aiga exclaimed.
“Uh oh,” Toko sighed before facing his demise.
Flash Trident exploded into three pieces.
“Alright. You beat me.”
“You’re getting much stronger-“ Aiga and Paris said in sync, before giving each other weird looks.
“Do you guys have a habit of saying things at the same time?” Toko raised an eyebrow as they all shared a much needed laugh.
“Here,” Paris handed a bottle of water to Toko.
He poured it over his hair and stood up, feeling relieved.
“Ah, much better. Up for a second battle?”
“You got it!”
“Let it rip!”
The second battle was a repeat of the first. Charles, on the sidelines, pressed a button on a timer.
“Five seconds better than last time,” he said.
“I don’t need your comment!” Toko snapped. “Again!”
Flash Trident burst, not to anyone’s surprise.
“Again!”
“One hundredth and fifty-fourth battle!” Charles put his hand in the middle.
“Let it rip!”
“You’ve got this,” an voice familiar to Toko said encouragingly.
“I don’t know if I can step up and beat Nika,” the blue-haired boy confessed.
“Learn your priorities. Confidence is key, kid. Now are we gonna do this?”
“We will, Trident!” Toko exclaimed.
A vibrant yellow aura erupted from him. Paris and Aiga were exhausted, and were fumbling with their launchers.
“Let it-“ Toko yelled.
“Rip,” The two said wearily.
Cho-Z Achilles and Immortal Pegasus rushed down from either side, charging at full speed.
“Dodge it, Trident!” Toko shouted with confidence as his bey did so. The stamina type elevated itself, giving it a boost in speed.
“Hit me, Aiga!” Paris said.
Aiga curled his fists and slammed it into Paris’ arm.
“Ow! I meant in beyblade!” Paris whimpered.
“Oh.. right. Sorry!”
Achilles lit up and a huge sword hovered over it.
“Cho-Z Sword!” Aiga exclaimed.
With a heavy hit to Pegasus, it lost a click but accelerated toward Trident.
“It’s all yours, Pegasus! Supernova Shoot!” Paris shouted with confidence.
Like a Pegasus, the attack type smashed through Flash Trident, slamming it into the wall.
“It’s not over! Flash Counter!” Toko unzipped his jacket and tossed it aside. Flash Trident rebounded off of the wall and struck Pegasus, knocking it back.
Trident raced toward the attack type, with Achilles chasing behind it.
“Right on your tail!” Aiga shouted.
The stamina type changed its trajectory, throwing Achilles off guard.
“All right, Flash Trident! It’s time to end this once and for all! Final Flash Sting!” Toko bellowed.
Trident slammed down onto Immortal Pegasus, gaining hold of one of its feathers.
“No! Pegasus!” Paris cried. But it was too late.
The attack type bey was thrown off balance, heading right for Cho-Z Achilles. The two beys clashed before simultaneously flinging themselves out of the stadium.
“Toko’s the winner,” Charles declared. Aiga and Paris both collapsed to the floor.
“Well, that was fun,” Toko smiled. He looked outside and frowned. “I’m gonna go home and call it a day.”
And just like that, the four friends parted ways for the day. Later that night, Paris had a dream.
It was more of a vision, to be precise. He appeared in a dark, gloomy castle where multiple cloaked figures talked amongst themselves, as if they were part of a council.
“Silence,” one of them said and they all obeyed the command. He walked toward a throne and sat down.
Another one grumbled. “This is my palace. I have made it fairly certain. Must I show you?”
The one on the throne, their leader, spoke again. “This is my territory now, foolish boy. When I’m done, justice will be done upon this world. Only the strong can survive.”
Paris woke up, startled.
“Phew! It was just one of those weird dreams,” he sighed, very relieved.
He got dressed and left the house as soon as possible.
“Today’s the big day,” Paris kept reminding himself. Toko would face his sister today.
That meant either of them would be against Paris, and whoever won would enter the semi-finals. Either way, it wouldn’t be an easy battle.
Paris had soon arrived at the WBBA building where the battles were held.
“Welcome to all you BeyFans! We have two spectacular battles today! First up, we have Toko against his sister, Nika!”
The crowd cheered.
“And next up we have Daniel against Taiki,” Hanami announced.
Paris noticed how Hanami didn’t seem very.. joyful when announcing that line.
It was understandable, as that match would be a certain loss for Taiki.
“In the red corner, we have Nika Aoi!”
“Against her today is Toko Aoi!”
The siblings entered from a door on either side of the building.
“Nika, just because you’re my sister doesn’t mean I’m going to hold back,” Toko warned.
“That’s good. I’d be disappointed if you did,” Nika replied.
“Well then, it’s settled,” Toko agreed as he looked down at Flash Trident.
“I’m gonna win this one for us.”
A/N
Hey everyone, thanks for reading the chapter and I hope you enjoyed it. I’d like to apologise for my absence as I’ve been extremely busy recently. In saying that, the Zero series is still up and running.
Thank you all for your support,
-Sir Saitama
(Jun. 30, 2019 9:06 PM)Dash Driver Wrote: Could you add my character please?
Name: Tyler Warden
Appearance: Nicknamed the Chrome Warrior after his bey, Tyler wears a dark blue hoodie with a yellow beyblade logo on it(the thing on my profile pic) and long pants. He has short black hair.
Personality: He is quiet and polite, but sometimes makes snarky comments. He has a very short attention span.
Beyblade:
Type: Balance
Layer: Chrome Talos(the giant bronze automaton from Greek mythology) is basically a right-spin Hell Salamander. It has 8 blades in defense mode and 4 blades in attack mode. in the middle is an armored silver face with a Gladiator helmet. Each blade is covered with metal. The color scheme is similar to the Hell Salamander from the Air Knight random booster but it has blue highlights instead of red ones.
Forge Disc: Flare has a light blue plastic free-spinning part that looks like the Cross disc frame meant to parry attacks.
Driver: Absorb' is metallic silver and functions the same way as Absorb, but with a stronger spring lock so that it’s harder to burst.
Launcher: He uses a Carabiner Grip and a right-spin String Launcher that is configured so that the string is pulled sideways. Both the launcher and the launcher grip are opaque white. He launches by holding his launcher with his left hand and holding the string handle with his right. He holds the launcher behind him on his left side, jumps, does a 360 degree spin, thrusts his launcher forward, and launches his bey in midair.
Special Moves:
Blade Shift: Chrome Talos crashes into a wall and moves the blades on its layer, changing its mode.
Absorb Dive: During his launch, Tyler jumps higher than usual and launches. When his bey hits the stadium, the spring inside Absorb' compresses then decompresses, launching Talos up into the air. Then, Talos smashes down on his opponent.
Flare Defense: When Talos is unbalanced or attacked from below, it exposes its disc and the free-spinning part of Flare deflects attacks.
Absorb Counter: When Talos is attacked from above, it's driver's tip is pushed in and it moves aggressively to deliver a striking blow.
Chrome Shield: When Talos is in defense mode, all 8 of its blades begin to glow and it uses its low recoil design to stay in the center of the stadium.
Chrome Slash: When Talos is in attack mode, it uses the downforce generated from its blades to compress the spring in Absorb', causing it to speed in circles before crashing into the opponent.
Chrome Whip: In attack mode, one blade on Talos glows. That blade then slices through an opponent.
Ultra Chrome Barrage: In attack mode with the driver's spring compressed, Talos uses the slope of the stadium do do a 360 degree hyper attack, just like Valt's Rush Launch.
Actually could you make it so that he's not that good but he gets better and better until he's a great blader like how Kenta from MFB did?
If you want you can also change up some things.
Thanks. A Kenta-esque character sounds great, so I’ll add him in when I can. Thanks so much! I can’t wait for the next episode of Beyblade Burst Zero!
Oh my god... the suspense is killing me. I hope Toko wins but Nika winning would be fine too. Your stories have a way of making everybody excited for the next chapter.
(Jul. 02, 2019 11:45 AM)Fusion core Wrote: (Jul. 02, 2019 11:28 AM)Sir Saitama Wrote: Chapter 21 - The Sibling Showdown! Part 1
Last time on Beyblade Burst Zero! Roan and Xhan enter into the semi-finals as Paris defeats Aaron!
“What an outstanding performance!” Hanami leapt out of his seat excitedly.
“And Xhan Bogard earns himself a spot in the semi-finals!”
He wore a red tunic with a blue sash attached to his left shoulder. Despite being royal, Xhan acted in a relaxed, casual manner.
“It’s all thanks to my Fullmetal Xcalibur!” he smiled, holding up his beyblade.
The layer consisted of a rough, jagged design with a metal sword in the middle. It used its usual color pallet, with bright reds, blues and golds.
Xcalibur’s disc, 1+, was seemingly a final upgrade to the 1 disc. It had a heavier weight and a thicker blade.
The driver, Steel, had a metal base but in a star-shape.
Aiga was delighted. Like Hanami described, it was quite a sight. Fullmetal Xcalibur blew through the opposing bey in less than ten seconds.
“That’s some sheer attacking force,” Paris noted. The bey drove off the stadium wall and glided into Xhan’s hand.
Later that afternoon, Paris and Aiga walked toward the school in an upbeat manner.
“That was amazing! Fullmetal Xcalibur was like, POW and then BAM!” Aiga said.
“Yeah, it was pretty cool.” Paris replied.
The two were quite surprised when they entered inside their usual training spot, the gymnasium.
“Let it rip!”
“-Rip!”
“Toko,” Aiga and Paris said in unison. Flash Trident raced around the worn-out stadium, before bursting itself on the wall.
“Oh. Hey guys,” Toko briefly glanced at them before diverting his attention back at the arena.
Paris recalled to when Hanami announced that Toko would be practicing his sister, Nika.
“Training?” Aiga asked, impatiently wandering around the room.
“Mhm.”
“Hey, listen. If you want to win, you’re going to have to beat us first,” Paris said challengingly.
Toko scanned his two opponents, observing their launching styles.
“Bring it on,” he said, under his breath.
“Let it rip!” They all cried in unison, as they fired their beys into the stadium.
“Immortal Slash!” An aura rose from Paris as he unleashed his power into a single attack.
“Achilles! Cho-Z Slash!” Aiga commanded.
Whilst Flash Trident took the middle, Achilles and Pegasus came from either side, beaming through the stamina type.
“Hold on Trident,” Toko said, assessing the situation.
“Burst him!” Paris and Aiga exclaimed.
“Uh oh,” Toko sighed before facing his demise.
Flash Trident exploded into three pieces.
“Alright. You beat me.”
“You’re getting much stronger-“ Aiga and Paris said in sync, before giving each other weird looks.
“Do you guys have a habit of saying things at the same time?” Toko raised an eyebrow as they all shared a much needed laugh.
“Here,” Paris handed a bottle of water to Toko.
He poured it over his hair and stood up, feeling relieved.
“Ah, much better. Up for a second battle?”
“You got it!”
“Let it rip!”
The second battle was a repeat of the first. Charles, on the sidelines, pressed a button on a timer.
“Five seconds better than last time,” he said.
“I don’t need your comment!” Toko snapped. “Again!”
Flash Trident burst, not to anyone’s surprise.
“Again!”
“One hundredth and fifty-fourth battle!” Charles put his hand in the middle.
“Let it rip!”
“You’ve got this,” an voice familiar to Toko said encouragingly.
“I don’t know if I can step up and beat Nika,” the blue-haired boy confessed.
“Learn your priorities. Confidence is key, kid. Now are we gonna do this?”
“We will, Trident!” Toko exclaimed.
A vibrant yellow aura erupted from him. Paris and Aiga were exhausted, and were fumbling with their launchers.
“Let it-“ Toko yelled.
“Rip,” The two said wearily.
Cho-Z Achilles and Immortal Pegasus rushed down from either side, charging at full speed.
“Dodge it, Trident!” Toko shouted with confidence as his bey did so. The stamina type elevated itself, giving it a boost in speed.
“Hit me, Aiga!” Paris said.
Aiga curled his fists and slammed it into Paris’ arm.
“Ow! I meant in beyblade!” Paris whimpered.
“Oh.. right. Sorry!”
Achilles lit up and a huge sword hovered over it.
“Cho-Z Sword!” Aiga exclaimed.
With a heavy hit to Pegasus, it lost a click but accelerated toward Trident.
“It’s all yours, Pegasus! Supernova Shoot!” Paris shouted with confidence.
Like a Pegasus, the attack type smashed through Flash Trident, slamming it into the wall.
“It’s not over! Flash Counter!” Toko unzipped his jacket and tossed it aside. Flash Trident rebounded off of the wall and struck Pegasus, knocking it back.
Trident raced toward the attack type, with Achilles chasing behind it.
“Right on your tail!” Aiga shouted.
The stamina type changed its trajectory, throwing Achilles off guard.
“All right, Flash Trident! It’s time to end this once and for all! Final Flash Sting!” Toko bellowed.
Trident slammed down onto Immortal Pegasus, gaining hold of one of its feathers.
“No! Pegasus!” Paris cried. But it was too late.
The attack type bey was thrown off balance, heading right for Cho-Z Achilles. The two beys clashed before simultaneously flinging themselves out of the stadium.
“Toko’s the winner,” Charles declared. Aiga and Paris both collapsed to the floor.
“Well, that was fun,” Toko smiled. He looked outside and frowned. “I’m gonna go home and call it a day.”
And just like that, the four friends parted ways for the day. Later that night, Paris had a dream.
It was more of a vision, to be precise. He appeared in a dark, gloomy castle where multiple cloaked figures talked amongst themselves, as if they were part of a council.
“Silence,” one of them said and they all obeyed the command. He walked toward a throne and sat down.
Another one grumbled. “This is my palace. I have made it fairly certain. Must I show you?”
The one on the throne, their leader, spoke again. “This is my territory now, foolish boy. When I’m done, justice will be done upon this world. Only the strong can survive.”
Paris woke up, startled.
“Phew! It was just one of those weird dreams,” he sighed, very relieved.
He got dressed and left the house as soon as possible.
“Today’s the big day,” Paris kept reminding himself. Toko would face his sister today.
That meant either of them would be against Paris, and whoever won would enter the semi-finals. Either way, it wouldn’t be an easy battle.
Paris had soon arrived at the WBBA building where the battles were held.
“Welcome to all you BeyFans! We have two spectacular battles today! First up, we have Toko against his sister, Nika!”
The crowd cheered.
“And next up we have Daniel against Taiki,” Hanami announced.
Paris noticed how Hanami didn’t seem very.. joyful when announcing that line.
It was understandable, as that match would be a certain loss for Taiki.
“In the red corner, we have Nika Aoi!”
“Against her today is Toko Aoi!”
The siblings entered from a door on either side of the building.
“Nika, just because you’re my sister doesn’t mean I’m going to hold back,” Toko warned.
“That’s good. I’d be disappointed if you did,” Nika replied.
“Well then, it’s settled,” Toko agreed as he looked down at Flash Trident.
“I’m gonna win this one for us.”
A/N
Hey everyone, thanks for reading the chapter and I hope you enjoyed it. I’d like to apologise for my absence as I’ve been extremely busy recently. In saying that, the Zero series is still up and running.
Thank you all for your support,
-Sir Saitama
After a long time i read such a good story . It is one of the best episodes if not the best . It had a lot of suspense . And most importantly it had some AWESOME dialogues . I agree. This is Sir Saitama's best chapter yet.
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - Sir Saitama - Jul. 09, 2019
Chapter 22 - The Sibling Showdown! Part 2
Last time on Beyblade Burst Zero! Xhan makes his debut and introduces his new bey, Fullmetal Xcalibur. Meanwhile, Toko is moments away from his battle!
Not long after, Toko’s confidence soon dissapeared. It was as if a small part of him was still afraid. Yet he still refused to admit it.
“I’m not! I’ll defeat Nika- then Paris, then Roan!”
Trident sighed and transformed the building into an empty white abyss.
“W-where is this? Hello?”
Toko felt a lonely, desolate ambience in the place.
“Did you just kidnap me?” Toko looked very confused.
“No. This is all temporary.”
“Well, can you bring me back? I’m going to finish this battle,” Toko said with a determined face.
Trident’s aura dissapeared.
“Kid, you don’t know what’s happening at all. A few minutes ago you had the right mindset. Now, it’s- Now it’s broken.”
“Define broken, if you will,” Toko asked.
“You’re a mess right now. Don’t let your personal desires consume you. Unless you value your sanity,” Trident spoke.
“Fine,” Toko rolled his eyes. “I’m afraid. I admit it. But that doesn’t change the fact that I’m going to win.”
Trident became its usual glowing yellow again.
“That’s the spirit.”
Despite Nika’s first impression to many people - often appearing to be feisty and intimidating, she cared about her opponents. Especially her twin brother, Toko.
“Toko? Are you alright?” She walked over to his side of the stadium and tapped him on the shoulder.
“Y-yeah. I am,” the blue-haired boy smiled warmly. “Let’s get this show on the road.”
“Ladies and gentlemen!” Hanami announced excitedly. “The battle hasn’t even started and I’m on the edge of my seat! I’m thrilled to bits!”
“First battle! Ready, set!” The referee commenced the battle.
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!”
“Let it rip!”
Grand Nike and Flash Trident both rushed into the middle of the stadium as they clashed fiercely.
Nike quickly pulled away, leaving the stamina type dominant in the centre.
“Now Nike! Grand Rush!” Nika cried, as the balance type executed a flower-pattern attack on Trident.
Flash Trident suddenly flew into the air, about to exit the stadium.
“Keep it going Trident! We’re not done yet!” Toko exclaimed, as the stamina type descended into the stadium wall, saving itself.
With energy and momentum build up, Flash Trident was propelled to race around at incredible speeds.
“Go! Flash Counter!”
Trident’s avatar appeared, a glowing yellow spearman wielding a trident. It tossed its weapon, just as the bey slammed into Grand Nike.
The balance type soon became unstable as it landed on its side, skidding across the stadium uncontrollably.
“Now’s our chance,” Toko thought.
Flash Trident elevated its driver height, becoming almost double the height of its opponent.
Zooming into the stadium’s radius, it caught up with Grand Nike. Taking advantage of Nike’s unstable movement, the stamina type lowered its height, grabbing onto it.
“Final Flash Sting!” Toko commanded. Nika not only had to worry about her bey scraping on the floor, but Trident’s strong grip.
“Nika! Toko! Do your best!” A familiar electric-blue haired boy cheered from overhead.
“Nike,” Nika invoked. The call had drastically boosted its endurance and strength.
“Its power levels are through the roof!” Charles said in awe, observing Nike’s statistics on a tablet.
Grand Nike had already lost two clicks. Nika was unsure of how much longer it could hold its own.
“Risks are meant to be made,” she thought to herself.
Suddenly, Grand Nike gripped onto Trident, shifting itself off the stadium floor.
“Wow! Nike just recovered from scraping the arena’s surface!” Hanami reported.
“And that’s not all Nike did,” Nika’s eyes glowed a vibrant purple. “Ultra Northern Cross Shoot!”
The balance type dragged Trident along with it, tossing it aside on the outer rim of the stadium.
Toko’s eyes widened in shock. He only had a few seconds before Trident would lose; he had to think fast.
“Trident,” Toko called upon to his bey’s avatar. “I know I haven’t been too much of a good blader, and I know I’ve done nothing except destroy our bond - so I’m going to strengthen it.”
Trident roared in agreement. The blue-haired boy’s eyes lit up to a luminous gold, resonating with his bey.
“Now!” Toko boomed. His voice shook the entire building, as if there were an earthquake. “DIVING FLASH!”
Flash Trident increased its height to the maximum, spanning to be one of the widest and tallest beys.
Using its newfound ability, it dodged Nike’s impending attack, and climbed up the side of the stadium, flinging itself into the air.
Toko fully resonated with his bey, as Trident stood at his side, both with the same expressions - determined and fierce.
Next, Trident fell, but its height lowered, giving it a boost in speed. The stamina type finally descended into the stadium, piercing through Grand Nike.
“Burst it!” Toko cried.
And to everyone’s surprise... he pulled it off.
“Two points to Flash Trident for a Burst Finish! The score is now 2-0!”
Grand Nike flew into the air and burst, landing at Nika’s feet. Everybody was shocked, in complete silence, until Paris put his hands together and clapped.
Paris and Toko exchanged glances, as the blue-haired boy mouthed ‘Thank you.’
Hanami finally spoke, “I certainly did not see that coming! I don’t know what, but the Aoi family is full of talented bladers! Let’s give it up for Toko!”
“Toko! Toko!” The crowd chanted. Nika picked up Nike’s pieces and re-assembled her bey.
“You fought with honour. Let’s burst him properly this time.”
Regardless, Nika smiled.
“I knew you could do it. But there are multiple rounds for a reason.”
The siblings both laughed in unison, before inserting their beys into their launchers.
Toko felt a sharp pain digging into his shoulder. It was almost as if ‘Diving Flash’ drained his energy.
“No. I’ve made it this far. I’m not going to let a silly injury stop me,” Toko reminded himself.
“Ready, set!”
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!”
“Let it rip!”
“Agh-“ Toko howled. His injury caused him to mislaunch, tilting Trident on a steep angle on the outer rim of the stadium.
“No, no, no!” The light blue-haired boy panicked. “Get out of there, Trident!”
The stamina type bey followed the order - it drove straight down, however there was one problem.
“What a smart move! Grand Nike has taken the middle of the stadium, putting Flash Trident out of its zone!” Hanami observed the battle.
The stamina type orbited around Nike, striking it every few seconds, but the balance type wouldn’t move.
“You know, the good thing about balance types is that they can go anywhere,” Nika said.
Toko was panicking - he thought he had won, and he was out of moves... out of ideas.
“Final Flash Strike!”
The stamina type increased its height and made its way around the stadium, heading toward Nike.
“It’s all you, Trident!” Toko yelled.
Trident struck Nike once and lowered its height, slamming down onto the balance type.
“Yes!” He celebrated silently.
Now, the only obstacle left was winning. He could smell victory - it was so close, yet so far.
“Now Trident! Fling it out of the stadium!”
Flash Trident zoomed toward the outer rim, pushing Grand Nike toward the edge.
“Fight back Nike! Northern Cross Shoot!” Nika exclaimed.
The odds were on Nika’s side this time. Grand Nike managed to pull away, pushing Trident back. Nike swirled around the stadium, coming from the north side.
It tilted on its fusion driver, giving it a sharp increase in speed. The bey slashed through Trident, flinging it into the air.
Paris gulped. He hoped Toko could win.
“Now’s our chance! We’re not going to lose! Diving Flash!” Toko bellowed, his loud voice projecting throughout the entire building.
The stamina type dived down at incredible speeds. It was only a few seconds away from reaching Nike - from reaching victory.
“Let’s do this, Grand Nike! Fusion Whirlwind!” Nika commanded.
A strong, violent gust of wind wrapped around the balance type.
However, it was simply too late for Trident to pull back. The vortex of wind carried Trident into the stadium wall, bursting it upon impact.
“Two points to Grand Nike for a Burst Finish! The score is now 2-2!” The referee announced.
“Oh my goodness! Nika makes an extraordinary comeback and ties up the score! The suspense is real!” Hanami said excitedly.
Toko, discouraged, put the Dome driver into Trident’s disc, putting the bey together.
“Toko,” Trident said, “Do not be discouraged. Your loss is nothing but a mere setback. You’ve got this.”
“Ready, set!”
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!”
“Let it rip!”
Grand Nike immediately took the centre of the stadium.
“It looks like it’s going to be a repeat of the second battle!” Hanami spoke into his microphone.
Toko hoped that wasn’t true. This was a match point for both him and his sister - neither could afford to lose.
Flash Trident zoomed into the middle of the stadium, where Grand Nike spun smoothly, only to get hit and sent back to the outer rim of the stadium.
“Let’s give ‘em everything we’ve got! Power up, Trident! Flash Counter!” Toko boomed.
Trident returned to the middle of the stadium and raced around the ring, creating an inescapable vortex.
“It looks like Toko here is taking a page from Paris’ book and doing its own Immortal Stormbringer! This should be good!”
Nika was amazed by her brother’s fierce and strategic movement.
“We’re not giving up just yet! Go, Grand Rush!” She exclaimed.
The balance type pulled off a string of fierce attacks, attempting to break the yellow barrier that Trident set.
“Now Trident! Lower mode!” Toko commanded.
Flash Trident lowered its driver height, giving it a brief boost in speed.
“Close in!” He added.
The vortex grew smaller, as Trident loomed around the centre faster and faster, it became almost invisible to the human eye.
“Nike!” Nika observed that Grand Nike couldn’t last much longer. She was desperate to use whatever it took to win. “Ultra Northern Cross Shoot!”
The yellow barrier soon dissipated, as Trident was affected by the recoil. The stamina type flung into the stadium wall, losing a significant amount of endurance.
Grand Nike came rushing toward Flash Trident like a bullet. It was only a matter of seconds before the last point was handed to Nika.
Toko quickly recalled to how most strong bladers won - Valt with Cho-Z Valkyrie Slash and Paris with Immortal Slash.
He put all his remaining energy into one single attack. One that would either bring victory, or one that would bring defeat. Luck was all he had.
“...END THIS NOW! TRIDENT SLASH!” Toko glowed a vibrant yellow, resonating with Trident. A golden beam of light appeared on one of Flash Trident’s rubber patches.
“That won’t stop us!” Nika exclaimed confidently. Grand Nike fired, blasting through Flash Trident. The beam of light grew larger in size, expelling energy.
“You’ve got this Trident! I believe in you!” Toko thundered.
Wind and dust hurled out of the stadium, pushing both bladers back.
It was impossible to see what exactly happened, but when the dust cleared...
Flash Trident shot Grand Nike out of the stadium, bursting it. Toko fell to the floor, very exhausted.
“Two points to Flash Trident for a Burst Finish! The score is now 4-2!”
The referee announced, with a tint of excitement in his voice.
“What an amazing conclusion to this battle! Toko snags the final two points as he moves on to battle Paris for a spot in the semi-finals! Meanwhile, Taiki and Daniel will be doing the same!”
Paris and Toko both exchanged each other looks. He would now take Toko seriously as he recognised him not only as a friend, but as a strong blader.
“I’m proud of you, Toko.” Nika smiled. “You deserve it. I remember our battle years ago, and you were always the stronger one. Win this next one for me, okay?”
Toko nodded. “You can count on it.”
And just like that, the blue-haired boy was no longer afraid. He was a different person now.
Later that night, Paris tossed and turned in his bed, as thunder crackled overhead. He had a vision again.
He returned to the same location as yesterday - a dark, gloomy castle with cloaked figures.
“Boss, what is our plan?”
A silver eye glinted inside the leader’s cloak.
“If we are to create a bey- the strongest bey in the universe, stronger than Diablo Nemesis all those years ago, we will find Nemesis’ whereabouts first.”
“How will we do that?” Another asked.
“That man knows, don’t you? Gingka Hagane.” The leader laughed.
Paris looked around and noticed a man, presumably unconscious, floating in a chamber with wires attached to his head. His eyes widened in shock.
“That would be a crime, my lord,” one of them said.
The leader’s silver eye glinted again as a strong, violent purple wind sent the person who asked the question into the wall.
“The bigger crime would be to not finish what they started,” the cloaked leader responded.
Paris exited the dream. He was panicking with fear regarding what happened with his father. For now, it was safe to assume it was only a dream.
But Paris was unsure of how many more he was going to get.
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - Dash Driver - Jul. 09, 2019
(Jul. 09, 2019 8:08 AM)Sir Saitama Wrote: Chapter 22 - The Sibling Showdown! Part 2
Last time on Beyblade Burst Zero! Xhan makes his debut and introduces his new bey, Fullmetal Xcalibur. Meanwhile, Toko is moments away from his battle!
Not long after, Toko’s confidence soon dissapeared. It was as if a small part of him was still afraid. Yet he still refused to admit it.
“I’m not! I’ll defeat Nika- then Paris, then Roan!”
Trident sighed and transformed the building into an empty white abyss.
“W-where is this? Hello?”
Toko felt a lonely, desolate ambience in the place.
“Did you just kidnap me?” Toko looked very confused.
“No. This is all temporary.”
“Well, can you bring me back? I’m going to finish this battle,” Toko said with a determined face.
Trident’s aura dissapeared.
“Kid, you don’t know what’s happening at all. A few minutes ago you had the right mindset. Now, it’s- Now it’s broken.”
“Define broken, if you will,” Toko asked.
“You’re a mess right now. Don’t let your personal desires consume you. Unless you value your sanity,” Trident spoke.
“Fine,” Toko rolled his eyes. “I’m afraid. I admit it. But that doesn’t change the fact that I’m going to win.”
Trident became its usual glowing yellow again.
“That’s the spirit.”
Despite Nika’s first impression to many people - often appearing to be feisty and intimidating, she cared about her opponents. Especially her twin brother, Toko.
“Toko? Are you alright?” She walked over to his side of the stadium and tapped him on the shoulder.
“Y-yeah. I am,” the blue-haired boy smiled warmly. “Let’s get this show on the road.”
“Ladies and gentlemen!” Hanami announced excitedly. “The battle hasn’t even started and I’m on the edge of my seat! I’m thrilled to bits!”
“First battle! Ready, set!” The referee commenced the battle.
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!”
“Let it rip!”
Grand Nike and Flash Trident both rushed into the middle of the stadium as they clashed fiercely.
Nike quickly pulled away, leaving the stamina type dominant in the centre.
“Now Nike! Grand Rush!” Nika cried, as the balance type executed a flower-pattern attack on Trident.
Flash Trident suddenly flew into the air, about to exit the stadium.
“Keep it going Trident! We’re not done yet!” Toko exclaimed, as the stamina type descended into the stadium wall, saving itself.
With energy and momentum build up, Flash Trident was propelled to race around at incredible speeds.
“Go! Flash Counter!”
Trident’s avatar appeared, a glowing yellow spearman wielding a trident. It tossed its weapon, just as the bey slammed into Grand Nike.
The balance type soon became unstable as it landed on its side, skidding across the stadium uncontrollably.
“Now’s our chance,” Toko thought.
Flash Trident elevated its driver height, becoming almost double the height of its opponent.
Zooming into the stadium’s radius, it caught up with Grand Nike. Taking advantage of Nike’s unstable movement, the stamina type lowered its height, grabbing onto it.
“Final Flash Sting!” Toko commanded. Nika not only had to worry about her bey scraping on the floor, but Trident’s strong grip.
“Nika! Toko! Do your best!” A familiar electric-blue haired boy cheered from overhead.
“Nike,” Nika invoked. The call had drastically boosted its endurance and strength.
“Its power levels are through the roof!” Charles said in awe, observing Nike’s statistics on a tablet.
Grand Nike had already lost two clicks. Nika was unsure of how much longer it could hold its own.
“Risks are meant to be made,” she thought to herself.
Suddenly, Grand Nike gripped onto Trident, shifting itself off the stadium floor.
“Wow! Nike just recovered from scraping the arena’s surface!” Hanami reported.
“And that’s not all Nike did,” Nika’s eyes glowed a vibrant purple. “Ultra Northern Cross Shoot!”
The balance type dragged Trident along with it, tossing it aside on the outer rim of the stadium.
Toko’s eyes widened in shock. He only had a few seconds before Trident would lose; he had to think fast.
“Trident,” Toko called upon to his bey’s avatar. “I know I haven’t been too much of a good blader, and I know I’ve done nothing except destroy our bond - so I’m going to strengthen it.”
Trident roared in agreement. The blue-haired boy’s eyes lit up to a luminous gold, resonating with his bey.
“Now!” Toko boomed. His voice shook the entire building, as if there were an earthquake. “DIVING FLASH!”
Flash Trident increased its height to the maximum, spanning to be one of the widest and tallest beys.
Using its newfound ability, it dodged Nike’s impending attack, and climbed up the side of the stadium, flinging itself into the air.
Toko fully resonated with his bey, as Trident stood at his side, both with the same expressions - determined and fierce.
Next, Trident fell, but its height lowered, giving it a boost in speed. The stamina type finally descended into the stadium, piercing through Grand Nike.
“Burst it!” Toko cried.
And to everyone’s surprise... he pulled it off.
“Two points to Flash Trident for a Burst Finish! The score is now 2-0!”
Grand Nike flew into the air and burst, landing at Nika’s feet. Everybody was shocked, in complete silence, until Paris put his hands together and clapped.
Paris and Toko exchanged glances, as the blue-haired boy mouthed ‘Thank you.’
Hanami finally spoke, “I certainly did not see that coming! I don’t know what, but the Aoi family is full of talented bladers! Let’s give it up for Toko!”
“Toko! Toko!” The crowd chanted. Nika picked up Nike’s pieces and re-assembled her bey.
“You fought with honour. Let’s burst him properly this time.”
Regardless, Nika smiled.
“I knew you could do it. But there are multiple rounds for a reason.”
The siblings both laughed in unison, before inserting their beys into their launchers.
Toko felt a sharp pain digging into his shoulder. It was almost as if ‘Diving Flash’ drained his energy.
“No. I’ve made it this far. I’m not going to let a silly injury stop me,” Toko reminded himself.
“Ready, set!”
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!”
“Let it rip!”
“Agh-“ Toko howled. His injury caused him to mislaunch, tilting Trident on a steep angle on the outer rim of the stadium.
“No, no, no!” The light blue-haired boy panicked. “Get out of there, Trident!”
The stamina type bey followed the order - it drove straight down, however there was one problem.
“What a smart move! Grand Nike has taken the middle of the stadium, putting Flash Trident out of its zone!” Hanami observed the battle.
The stamina type orbited around Nike, striking it every few seconds, but the balance type wouldn’t move.
“You know, the good thing about balance types is that they can go anywhere,” Nika said.
Toko was panicking - he thought he had won, and he was out of moves... out of ideas.
“Final Flash Strike!”
The stamina type increased its height and made its way around the stadium, heading toward Nike.
“It’s all you, Trident!” Toko yelled.
Trident struck Nike once and lowered its height, slamming down onto the balance type.
“Yes!” He celebrated silently.
Now, the only obstacle left was winning. He could smell victory - it was so close, yet so far.
“Now Trident! Fling it out of the stadium!”
Flash Trident zoomed toward the outer rim, pushing Grand Nike toward the edge.
“Fight back Nike! Northern Cross Shoot!” Nika exclaimed.
The odds were on Nika’s side this time. Grand Nike managed to pull away, pushing Trident back. Nike swirled around the stadium, coming from the north side.
It tilted on its fusion driver, giving it a sharp increase in speed. The bey slashed through Trident, flinging it into the air.
Paris gulped. He hoped Toko could win.
“Now’s our chance! We’re not going to lose! Diving Flash!” Toko bellowed, his loud voice projecting throughout the entire building.
The stamina type dived down at incredible speeds. It was only a few seconds away from reaching Nike - from reaching victory.
“Let’s do this, Grand Nike! Fusion Whirlwind!” Nika commanded.
A strong, violent gust of wind wrapped around the balance type.
However, it was simply too late for Trident to pull back. The vortex of wind carried Trident into the stadium wall, bursting it upon impact.
“Two points to Grand Nike for a Burst Finish! The score is now 2-2!” The referee announced.
“Oh my goodness! Nika makes an extraordinary comeback and ties up the score! The suspense is real!” Hanami said excitedly.
Toko, discouraged, put the Dome driver into Trident’s disc, putting the bey together.
“Toko,” Trident said, “Do not be discouraged. Your loss is nothing but a mere setback. You’ve got this.”
“Ready, set!”
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!”
“Let it rip!”
Grand Nike immediately took the centre of the stadium.
“It looks like it’s going to be a repeat of the second battle!” Hanami spoke into his microphone.
Toko hoped that wasn’t true. This was a match point for both him and his sister - neither could afford to lose.
Flash Trident zoomed into the middle of the stadium, where Grand Nike spun smoothly, only to get hit and sent back to the outer rim of the stadium.
“Let’s give ‘em everything we’ve got! Power up, Trident! Flash Counter!” Toko boomed.
Trident returned to the middle of the stadium and raced around the ring, creating an inescapable vortex.
“It looks like Toko here is taking a page from Paris’ book and doing its own Immortal Stormbringer! This should be good!”
Nika was amazed by her brother’s fierce and strategic movement.
“We’re not giving up just yet! Go, Grand Rush!” She exclaimed.
The balance type pulled off a string of fierce attacks, attempting to break the yellow barrier that Trident set.
“Now Trident! Lower mode!” Toko commanded.
Flash Trident lowered its driver height, giving it a brief boost in speed.
“Close in!” He added.
The vortex grew smaller, as Trident loomed around the centre faster and faster, it became almost invisible to the human eye.
“Nike!” Nika observed that Grand Nike couldn’t last much longer. She was desperate to use whatever it took to win. “Ultra Northern Cross Shoot!”
The yellow barrier soon dissipated, as Trident was affected by the recoil. The stamina type flung into the stadium wall, losing a significant amount of endurance.
Grand Nike came rushing toward Flash Trident like a bullet. It was only a matter of seconds before the last point was handed to Nika.
Toko quickly recalled to how most strong bladers won - Valt with Cho-Z Valkyrie Slash and Paris with Immortal Slash.
He put all his remaining energy into one single attack. One that would either bring victory, or one that would bring defeat. Luck was all he had.
“...END THIS NOW! TRIDENT SLASH!” Toko glowed a vibrant yellow, resonating with Trident. A golden beam of light appeared on one of Flash Trident’s rubber patches.
“That won’t stop us!” Nika exclaimed confidently. Grand Nike fired, blasting through Flash Trident. The beam of light grew larger in size, expelling energy.
“You’ve got this Trident! I believe in you!” Toko thundered.
Wind and dust hurled out of the stadium, pushing both bladers back.
It was impossible to see what exactly happened, but when the dust cleared...
Flash Trident shot Grand Nike out of the stadium, bursting it. Toko fell to the floor, very exhausted.
“Two points to Flash Trident for a Burst Finish! The score is now 4-2!”
The referee announced, with a tint of excitement in his voice.
“What an amazing conclusion to this battle! Toko snags the final two points as he moves on to battle Paris for a spot in the semi-finals! Meanwhile, Taiki and Daniel will be doing the same!”
Paris and Toko both exchanged each other looks. He would now take Toko seriously as he recognised him not only as a friend, but as a strong blader.
“I’m proud of you, Toko.” Nika smiled. “You deserve it. I remember our battle years ago, and you were always the stronger one. Win this next one for me, okay?”
Toko nodded. “You can count on it.”
And just like that, the blue-haired boy was no longer afraid. He was a different person now.
Later that night, Paris tossed and turned in his bed, as thunder crackled overhead. He had a vision again.
He returned to the same location as yesterday - a dark, gloomy castle with cloaked figures.
“Boss, what is our plan?”
A silver eye glinted inside the leader’s cloak.
“If we are to create a bey- the strongest bey in the universe, stronger than Diablo Nemesis all those years ago, we will find Nemesis’ whereabouts first.”
“How will we do that?” Another asked.
“That man knows, don’t you? Gingka Hagane.” The leader laughed.
Paris looked around and noticed a man, presumably unconscious, floating in a chamber with wires attached to his head. His eyes widened in shock.
“That would be a crime, my lord,” one of them said.
The leader’s silver eye glinted again as a strong, violent purple wind sent the person who asked the question into the wall.
“The bigger crime would be to not finish what they started,” the cloaked leader responded.
Paris exited the dream. He was panicking with fear regarding what happened with his father. For now, it was safe to assume it was only a dream.
But Paris was unsure of how many more he was going to get.
That was a suspenseful chapter that I loved! But the ending was the best part!
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - Suoh sadboii - Jul. 09, 2019
You do so well on your stories! Thank you for sharing this with the community!
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - Fusion core - Jul. 10, 2019
(Jul. 09, 2019 8:08 AM)Sir Saitama Wrote: Chapter 22 - The Sibling Showdown! Part 2
Last time on Beyblade Burst Zero! Xhan makes his debut and introduces his new bey, Fullmetal Xcalibur. Meanwhile, Toko is moments away from his battle!
Not long after, Toko’s confidence soon dissapeared. It was as if a small part of him was still afraid. Yet he still refused to admit it.
“I’m not! I’ll defeat Nika- then Paris, then Roan!”
Trident sighed and transformed the building into an empty white abyss.
“W-where is this? Hello?”
Toko felt a lonely, desolate ambience in the place.
“Did you just kidnap me?” Toko looked very confused.
“No. This is all temporary.”
“Well, can you bring me back? I’m going to finish this battle,” Toko said with a determined face.
Trident’s aura dissapeared.
“Kid, you don’t know what’s happening at all. A few minutes ago you had the right mindset. Now, it’s- Now it’s broken.”
“Define broken, if you will,” Toko asked.
“You’re a mess right now. Don’t let your personal desires consume you. Unless you value your sanity,” Trident spoke.
“Fine,” Toko rolled his eyes. “I’m afraid. I admit it. But that doesn’t change the fact that I’m going to win.”
Trident became its usual glowing yellow again.
“That’s the spirit.”
Despite Nika’s first impression to many people - often appearing to be feisty and intimidating, she cared about her opponents. Especially her twin brother, Toko.
“Toko? Are you alright?” She walked over to his side of the stadium and tapped him on the shoulder.
“Y-yeah. I am,” the blue-haired boy smiled warmly. “Let’s get this show on the road.”
“Ladies and gentlemen!” Hanami announced excitedly. “The battle hasn’t even started and I’m on the edge of my seat! I’m thrilled to bits!”
“First battle! Ready, set!” The referee commenced the battle.
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!”
“Let it rip!”
Grand Nike and Flash Trident both rushed into the middle of the stadium as they clashed fiercely.
Nike quickly pulled away, leaving the stamina type dominant in the centre.
“Now Nike! Grand Rush!” Nika cried, as the balance type executed a flower-pattern attack on Trident.
Flash Trident suddenly flew into the air, about to exit the stadium.
“Keep it going Trident! We’re not done yet!” Toko exclaimed, as the stamina type descended into the stadium wall, saving itself.
With energy and momentum build up, Flash Trident was propelled to race around at incredible speeds.
“Go! Flash Counter!”
Trident’s avatar appeared, a glowing yellow spearman wielding a trident. It tossed its weapon, just as the bey slammed into Grand Nike.
The balance type soon became unstable as it landed on its side, skidding across the stadium uncontrollably.
“Now’s our chance,” Toko thought.
Flash Trident elevated its driver height, becoming almost double the height of its opponent.
Zooming into the stadium’s radius, it caught up with Grand Nike. Taking advantage of Nike’s unstable movement, the stamina type lowered its height, grabbing onto it.
“Final Flash Sting!” Toko commanded. Nika not only had to worry about her bey scraping on the floor, but Trident’s strong grip.
“Nika! Toko! Do your best!” A familiar electric-blue haired boy cheered from overhead.
“Nike,” Nika invoked. The call had drastically boosted its endurance and strength.
“Its power levels are through the roof!” Charles said in awe, observing Nike’s statistics on a tablet.
Grand Nike had already lost two clicks. Nika was unsure of how much longer it could hold its own.
“Risks are meant to be made,” she thought to herself.
Suddenly, Grand Nike gripped onto Trident, shifting itself off the stadium floor.
“Wow! Nike just recovered from scraping the arena’s surface!” Hanami reported.
“And that’s not all Nike did,” Nika’s eyes glowed a vibrant purple. “Ultra Northern Cross Shoot!”
The balance type dragged Trident along with it, tossing it aside on the outer rim of the stadium.
Toko’s eyes widened in shock. He only had a few seconds before Trident would lose; he had to think fast.
“Trident,” Toko called upon to his bey’s avatar. “I know I haven’t been too much of a good blader, and I know I’ve done nothing except destroy our bond - so I’m going to strengthen it.”
Trident roared in agreement. The blue-haired boy’s eyes lit up to a luminous gold, resonating with his bey.
“Now!” Toko boomed. His voice shook the entire building, as if there were an earthquake. “DIVING FLASH!”
Flash Trident increased its height to the maximum, spanning to be one of the widest and tallest beys.
Using its newfound ability, it dodged Nike’s impending attack, and climbed up the side of the stadium, flinging itself into the air.
Toko fully resonated with his bey, as Trident stood at his side, both with the same expressions - determined and fierce.
Next, Trident fell, but its height lowered, giving it a boost in speed. The stamina type finally descended into the stadium, piercing through Grand Nike.
“Burst it!” Toko cried.
And to everyone’s surprise... he pulled it off.
“Two points to Flash Trident for a Burst Finish! The score is now 2-0!”
Grand Nike flew into the air and burst, landing at Nika’s feet. Everybody was shocked, in complete silence, until Paris put his hands together and clapped.
Paris and Toko exchanged glances, as the blue-haired boy mouthed ‘Thank you.’
Hanami finally spoke, “I certainly did not see that coming! I don’t know what, but the Aoi family is full of talented bladers! Let’s give it up for Toko!”
“Toko! Toko!” The crowd chanted. Nika picked up Nike’s pieces and re-assembled her bey.
“You fought with honour. Let’s burst him properly this time.”
Regardless, Nika smiled.
“I knew you could do it. But there are multiple rounds for a reason.”
The siblings both laughed in unison, before inserting their beys into their launchers.
Toko felt a sharp pain digging into his shoulder. It was almost as if ‘Diving Flash’ drained his energy.
“No. I’ve made it this far. I’m not going to let a silly injury stop me,” Toko reminded himself.
“Ready, set!”
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!”
“Let it rip!”
“Agh-“ Toko howled. His injury caused him to mislaunch, tilting Trident on a steep angle on the outer rim of the stadium.
“No, no, no!” The light blue-haired boy panicked. “Get out of there, Trident!”
The stamina type bey followed the order - it drove straight down, however there was one problem.
“What a smart move! Grand Nike has taken the middle of the stadium, putting Flash Trident out of its zone!” Hanami observed the battle.
The stamina type orbited around Nike, striking it every few seconds, but the balance type wouldn’t move.
“You know, the good thing about balance types is that they can go anywhere,” Nika said.
Toko was panicking - he thought he had won, and he was out of moves... out of ideas.
“Final Flash Strike!”
The stamina type increased its height and made its way around the stadium, heading toward Nike.
“It’s all you, Trident!” Toko yelled.
Trident struck Nike once and lowered its height, slamming down onto the balance type.
“Yes!” He celebrated silently.
Now, the only obstacle left was winning. He could smell victory - it was so close, yet so far.
“Now Trident! Fling it out of the stadium!”
Flash Trident zoomed toward the outer rim, pushing Grand Nike toward the edge.
“Fight back Nike! Northern Cross Shoot!” Nika exclaimed.
The odds were on Nika’s side this time. Grand Nike managed to pull away, pushing Trident back. Nike swirled around the stadium, coming from the north side.
It tilted on its fusion driver, giving it a sharp increase in speed. The bey slashed through Trident, flinging it into the air.
Paris gulped. He hoped Toko could win.
“Now’s our chance! We’re not going to lose! Diving Flash!” Toko bellowed, his loud voice projecting throughout the entire building.
The stamina type dived down at incredible speeds. It was only a few seconds away from reaching Nike - from reaching victory.
“Let’s do this, Grand Nike! Fusion Whirlwind!” Nika commanded.
A strong, violent gust of wind wrapped around the balance type.
However, it was simply too late for Trident to pull back. The vortex of wind carried Trident into the stadium wall, bursting it upon impact.
“Two points to Grand Nike for a Burst Finish! The score is now 2-2!” The referee announced.
“Oh my goodness! Nika makes an extraordinary comeback and ties up the score! The suspense is real!” Hanami said excitedly.
Toko, discouraged, put the Dome driver into Trident’s disc, putting the bey together.
“Toko,” Trident said, “Do not be discouraged. Your loss is nothing but a mere setback. You’ve got this.”
“Ready, set!”
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!”
“Let it rip!”
Grand Nike immediately took the centre of the stadium.
“It looks like it’s going to be a repeat of the second battle!” Hanami spoke into his microphone.
Toko hoped that wasn’t true. This was a match point for both him and his sister - neither could afford to lose.
Flash Trident zoomed into the middle of the stadium, where Grand Nike spun smoothly, only to get hit and sent back to the outer rim of the stadium.
“Let’s give ‘em everything we’ve got! Power up, Trident! Flash Counter!” Toko boomed.
Trident returned to the middle of the stadium and raced around the ring, creating an inescapable vortex.
“It looks like Toko here is taking a page from Paris’ book and doing its own Immortal Stormbringer! This should be good!”
Nika was amazed by her brother’s fierce and strategic movement.
“We’re not giving up just yet! Go, Grand Rush!” She exclaimed.
The balance type pulled off a string of fierce attacks, attempting to break the yellow barrier that Trident set.
“Now Trident! Lower mode!” Toko commanded.
Flash Trident lowered its driver height, giving it a brief boost in speed.
“Close in!” He added.
The vortex grew smaller, as Trident loomed around the centre faster and faster, it became almost invisible to the human eye.
“Nike!” Nika observed that Grand Nike couldn’t last much longer. She was desperate to use whatever it took to win. “Ultra Northern Cross Shoot!”
The yellow barrier soon dissipated, as Trident was affected by the recoil. The stamina type flung into the stadium wall, losing a significant amount of endurance.
Grand Nike came rushing toward Flash Trident like a bullet. It was only a matter of seconds before the last point was handed to Nika.
Toko quickly recalled to how most strong bladers won - Valt with Cho-Z Valkyrie Slash and Paris with Immortal Slash.
He put all his remaining energy into one single attack. One that would either bring victory, or one that would bring defeat. Luck was all he had.
“...END THIS NOW! TRIDENT SLASH!” Toko glowed a vibrant yellow, resonating with Trident. A golden beam of light appeared on one of Flash Trident’s rubber patches.
“That won’t stop us!” Nika exclaimed confidently. Grand Nike fired, blasting through Flash Trident. The beam of light grew larger in size, expelling energy.
“You’ve got this Trident! I believe in you!” Toko thundered.
Wind and dust hurled out of the stadium, pushing both bladers back.
It was impossible to see what exactly happened, but when the dust cleared...
Flash Trident shot Grand Nike out of the stadium, bursting it. Toko fell to the floor, very exhausted.
“Two points to Flash Trident for a Burst Finish! The score is now 4-2!”
The referee announced, with a tint of excitement in his voice.
“What an amazing conclusion to this battle! Toko snags the final two points as he moves on to battle Paris for a spot in the semi-finals! Meanwhile, Taiki and Daniel will be doing the same!”
Paris and Toko both exchanged each other looks. He would now take Toko seriously as he recognised him not only as a friend, but as a strong blader.
“I’m proud of you, Toko.” Nika smiled. “You deserve it. I remember our battle years ago, and you were always the stronger one. Win this next one for me, okay?”
Toko nodded. “You can count on it.”
And just like that, the blue-haired boy was no longer afraid. He was a different person now.
Later that night, Paris tossed and turned in his bed, as thunder crackled overhead. He had a vision again.
He returned to the same location as yesterday - a dark, gloomy castle with cloaked figures.
“Boss, what is our plan?”
A silver eye glinted inside the leader’s cloak.
“If we are to create a bey- the strongest bey in the universe, stronger than Diablo Nemesis all those years ago, we will find Nemesis’ whereabouts first.”
“How will we do that?” Another asked.
“That man knows, don’t you? Gingka Hagane.” The leader laughed.
Paris looked around and noticed a man, presumably unconscious, floating in a chamber with wires attached to his head. His eyes widened in shock.
“That would be a crime, my lord,” one of them said.
The leader’s silver eye glinted again as a strong, violent purple wind sent the person who asked the question into the wall.
“The bigger crime would be to not finish what they started,” the cloaked leader responded.
Paris exited the dream. He was panicking with fear regarding what happened with his father. For now, it was safe to assume it was only a dream.
But Paris was unsure of how many more he was going to get.
"The bigger crime would be not to finish what they started" . Credit- @[Sir Saitama] . One of the best dialogues i have ever heard .
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - LeonidasKerbeus - Jul. 18, 2019
(Jun. 30, 2019 6:54 PM)Ntruder19 Wrote: Are you still taking requests?
Sora Akatsuki wears a scarf and a red leather jacket, his bey is Flash Sphinx hurricane hold’ sen, and his special moves are hold drift, where sphinx tilts onto the freespinning plate of hold’, and Sphinx hurricane, which is kind of like a cross between dead gravity and Leone’s tornado thing.
Im sorry, but that name is really unoriginal. No offence but thats not even a description of a character either. Still a nice effort
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - Ntruder19 - Aug. 09, 2019
(Jul. 18, 2019 3:55 AM)LeonidasKerbeus Wrote: (Jun. 30, 2019 6:54 PM)Ntruder19 Wrote: Are you still taking requests?
Sora Akatsuki wears a scarf and a red leather jacket, his bey is Flash Sphinx hurricane hold’ sen, and his special moves are hold drift, where sphinx tilts onto the freespinning plate of hold’, and Sphinx hurricane, which is kind of like a cross between dead gravity and Leone’s tornado thing.
Im sorry, but that name is really unoriginal. No offence but thats not even a description of a character either. Still a nice effort
I’m not even sure what you mean by that, 1st off I never asked you for an opinion, this isn’t even your fanfiction, the name is not unoriginal I created it myself and only found out about the character from mfb with the same name just recently. I did describe the character so I’m not sure what you mean by that either, pretty random unneeded criticism there dude.
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - Suoh sadboii - Aug. 10, 2019
(Aug. 09, 2019 11:33 PM)Ntruder19 Wrote: (Jul. 18, 2019 3:55 AM)LeonidasKerbeus Wrote: Im sorry, but that name is really unoriginal. No offence but thats not even a description of a character either. Still a nice effort
I’m not even sure what you mean by that, 1st off I never asked you for an opinion, this isn’t even your fanfiction, the name is not unoriginal I created it myself and only found out about the character from mfb with the same name just recently. I did describe the character so I’m not sure what you mean by that either, pretty random unneeded criticism there dude.
All I'm gonna say is chill out and that you really didn't describe your character enough. Though I can see where you are coming from, as you are correct that he does not own the fanfic. We are free to give our opinion though. Please calm down.
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - Sir Saitama - Aug. 16, 2019
Sorry for the long wait everyone! The next chapter will be up soon.
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - BurningSands - Aug. 16, 2019
(Aug. 16, 2019 10:06 PM)Sir Saitama Wrote: Sorry for the long wait everyone! The next chapter will be up soon.
Its alright. We all have a life, and we are capable of respecting that. We support you!
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - Dt20000 - Aug. 16, 2019
(Aug. 16, 2019 10:06 PM)Sir Saitama Wrote: Sorry for the long wait everyone! The next chapter will be up soon.
I feel like I can’t top XSabxManiacX’s response, but I’m excited
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - Dash Driver - Aug. 16, 2019
(Aug. 16, 2019 10:06 PM)Sir Saitama Wrote: Sorry for the long wait everyone! The next chapter will be up soon. Oooooh another chapter!
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - Sir Saitama - Aug. 17, 2019
Chapter 23 - Daemon’s Rage! Pegasus’ Shared Power!
Last time on Beyblade Burst Zero! Toko defeats Nika and advances to the next round, where he’ll have to face his friend and rival Paris! Meanwhile, Taiki will have to hold his own against Daniel!
Paris woke up with a blast, as his light brown eyes filled with relief. He took a quick glance at his bey, Immortal Pegasus, which lay dormantly on his bedside table.
His attention shifted over to the window beside his bed. Paris unveiled the curtains, revealing a vast licorice sky littered with stars.
“It’s still night,” he thought to himself. “That means I’ll be up against Toko in a few hours.”
Paris sunk into his blue-striped bed and decided to have somewhat of a rest. However, everytime his eyes shut, a question popped into his head.
Albeit he had very strange dreams, often terrifying ones, this was like no other. Paris was almost certain that his past two were linked.
“Who were those people?”
“Is it only a dream?”
“Who and what is Nemesis?”
“What are they doing?”
“What’s next?”
And even so, he struggled to find an acceptable answer for one. Paris disliked illogical responses, but with little knowledge, that was all he had.
“No. I’m not going to let a silly little fantasy of mine corrupt me. Pull yourself together, Paris,” the boy reminded himself firmly.
Paris stared at the window with a sudden interest, and back at Immortal Pegasus.
“It’s been a while since we’ve done this.”
He slipped on his father’s old jacket and grabbed Pegasus, before leaving his Beigoman apartment.
Paris thought he saw a bunch of shadows with multicolored auras at the door, but he shook his head and exited the building.
“Looks like Gingka’s fame and power isn’t translating well to being a good teacher,” a green shadow remarked to the one below it.
“The boy thinks he knows everything about Pegasus, when he clearly can’t handle the power. Even a single attack makes him exhausted,” another added.
“Though, I can see a lot of him in you, Gingka,” a shadow with a red aura turned to another.
Paris kept a blank face as Immortal Pegasus surged through the stadium. The attack type crashed into a wall before bursting.
He was unfazed and hardly surprised, however.
“Trident’s movements are quick and natural. The same goes with Revenge, Daemon, Valkyrie and basically anyone else. So I’m going to have to do the same.”
Paris inserted Pegasus into his launcher and fired the bey into the stadium. He pulled his launcher with a significantly stronger tug than usual.
“Alright. You got this Pegasus!” Paris exclaimed enthusiastically. Much to his confusion and frustration, the attack type whirled around the stadium multiple times before it crashed into the stadium and burst again.
“W-where did I go wrong?” Paris fell to his knees. He looked up at the early morning sky, which marked a new day - the day that he’d battle Toko.
Paris returned his undivided attention back to the stadium.
“One last try. This time... it’s going to be different.”
“Let it rip!”
Immortal Pegasus zoomed through the stadium at incredible speeds, hurling wind everywhere.
The boy zoned out into an empty white abyss, with a red button in front of him. Whenever he reached for it, it teleported behind him.
The group of shadows from earlier appeared. They said in unison,
“Paris Hagane. Tapping into your true potential is like pressing that button. If you can manage to do so..”
They left the sentence there. Paris knew why - it was for him to complete.
“LET’S DO THIS!” He yelled with passion.
The boy lunged forward, and used the other arm to reach behind him. It left a lot of strain on his muscles and it hurt like crazy.
Nonetheless, Paris was a lot of things. Someone who backed down wasn’t one of them.
“IMMORTAL SLASH!” Paris bellowed as he destroyed the button, the landscape shattered like broken glass.
Paris emitted a gold aura as a sharp blue lightning sparked out of him.
“Full power!”
Immortal Pegasus loomed around the stadium so fast it became invisible to the naked eye.
Paris was extremely exhausted from using his full power, and collapsed, passed out cold. Pegasus did the same, and stopped spinning before bursting.
A few hours later
“Oh my God Valkyrie! He’s dead!” Taiki shouted, as everyone gave him an irritated glare.
“Paris? You there?” Charles shook him.
He opened his light brown eyes.
“I-I think so,” he replied as everyone shared a laugh.
Aiga helped him up. “So, mind telling us what was going on?”
Paris rubbed his eyes. “I did some training.”
“Well I hope you can run. The battles are about to start!” Toko shouted before heading off.
“Lucky me,” Paris groaned before chasing after him.
The boys arrived at the WBBA building.
“Good luck out there!” Aiga said, as Charles, Ryota walked with him to the seats.
Toko seemed to be leaving, as he walked alone through the hallway.
“Toko? Where are you going?” Paris asked.
The light-blue haired boy turned around.
“Until the battle’s over, we’re rivals. Don’t you hold back, because I have been training for weeks!”
“What a weird kid,” Taiki muttered.
The two walked toward the waiting room, where they saw Daniel lifting weights.
“You’re up against him. Do you think you’re gonna be fine?” Paris looked worried.
“Yeah. Don’t worry, because Theseus and I are going to win.” Taiki smiled.
Hanami got out of his seat and double tapped the microphone.
“Hey all you bladers! Today’s going to be a special one, so grab your popcorn because you’re in for a ride!”
An overhead spotlight fixed on one of the metal doors which creaked open.
“Our first competitor is Taiki Igarashi, the king of storms!”
His aqua dreads were tied up in a ponytail. The crowd roared like a bunch of wild lions.
“And against him is the Dark Dragon! Some call him the new Lui, and he’s Daniel Aziel!”
Daniel was silent as ever.
“Listen here. You may think you’re the best and that you’re going to win, and that’s your major flaw,” Taiki boomed. “So don’t you dare underestimate me, because I’m stronger than before!”
“Pathetic. If you’re only in here to make motivational speeches, then leave. ‘Cuz when I’m done with you, you’re not going to have any left,” Daniel remarked.
The noise died off quickly.
“Wow! This battle hasn’t already started and the tensions are high!” Hanami said excitedly.
Taiki absolutely hated people like Daniel. He almost wanted to punch him, but he decided to let his bey do the fighting.
He flipped the Crown frame upside down, making the jagged points exposed.
Daniel put his launcher away and held Havoc Daemon in his hand.
“I’ll win this with a hand spin.”
“Ready, set!”
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!”
“Let it rip!”
Havoc Daemon was wobbling unstably. Meanwhile, Adamantine Theseus rushed down for an early attack.
“If I can attack him early, then he’ll at least be out of stamina,” Taiki strategized.
“Now’s our chance Theseus! Adamantine Blade!”
The prongs on the Ultimate Reboot driver retracted, giving the bey a massive increase in speed.
Theseus came rushing down with its spiky, jagged side. Daemon was only a few inches away.
“Dodge it,” Daniel commanded effortlessly.
Havoc Daemon moved just enough to get out of the way.
“N-no way!” Paris’ jaw dropped from the waiting room.
“Take this! Adamantine Barrage Fury!”
Theseus rushed through Daemon, giving it no chance of escaping. The dragon attack type was running out of stamina, but Daniel was the least concerned out of everyone.
“You’re really getting on my nerves,” the Dark Dragon responded. Havoc Daemon broke free from Theseus’ grasp.
“It’s nothing personal. You’re just not worthy,” Daniel added. “I’ll make it nice and quick! Demolish Break!”
Havoc Daemon lowered into its driver, building energy into speed.
“After him, Theseus!” Taiki ordered, but there was no use.
Daemon erupted through the stadium and rode up the stadium walls, flinging itself into the air.
“Lights out! Rebirth Dive!” Daniel thundered.
The attack type ripped through the air, leaving a violent gust of wind that pushed both bladers back.
“Look out, Theseus!” Taiki warned. Fortunately, it rolled back just in time.
Both Theseus and Daemon were running out of stamina.
“It’s a shame. So many bladers think they’re strong, but this it all that happens..”
Daniel clicked his fingers and Adamantine Theseus burst instantly.
“Two points to Havoc Daemon for a Burst Finish! The score is now 2-0!” The referee declared.
“What a dramatic finish! Daniel scores himself a burst finish with nothing but a hand spin!” Hanami reported.
Daniel pulled out his red and black string launcher from his pocket.
“Y-you’re using a launcher?” Taiki asked with surprise.
“Let’s be honest. Either way, I’d win,” Daniel replied.
“Ready, set!”
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!”
“Let it rip!”
Theseus kept its distance from Daemon and raced around the outer rim of the stadium.
“Now Daemon! Crush it!”
The dark bey rushed through Adamantine Theseus, each hit dealing severe damage.
“As long as Theseus holds a grip on the stadium floor, we’re not going to give up!” Taiki glowed a luminous aqua.
“That’s it Taiki! You’ve got this!” Paris cheered.
“So be it,” Daniel replied. “Rebound Uppercut!”
Havoc Daemon’s wing slid underneath Theseus, flinging it into the air to the point of no return.
“Uh oh,” Taiki said under his breath as Adamantine Theseus smashed into the ceiling, bursting upon impact.
“Two points to Havoc Daemon for a Burst Finish! Daniel Aziel wins with the score of 4-0!”
The crowd applauded with excitement.
“What an explosive finish! You know what this means folks, Daniel Aziel makes it into the semi-finals!”
His photo filled in a blank square alongside Roan and Xhan.
“The fourth participant will be decided in tomorrow’s battle! Until then, stay tuned!” Hanami announced.
Taiki fell to his knees as he wailed in defeat. Tears streamed out of his eyes, before he rubbed them aside.
On their way home, Toko was missing.
“Probably training again,” Charles guessed.
“You did great out there, Taiki. It takes guts to even stand near Daniel, and you held your own pretty well. So you should see this battle as a win, more than as a loss,” Paris said.
“Thanks,” Taiki smiled. “Does anyone have any beybread? I’m starving!”
“There’s the same old Taiki,” Ryota sighed.
Back at home, Paris noticed the shadows.
“It’s a ghost! I’m cursed, aren’t I?” He screamed.
“No,” they said. “Well yes, since most of us are dead, but we prefer the term Wielders of Pegasus.”
“What’s that supposed to mean?” Paris replied cluelessly.
“Each and everyone of us has used Pegasus in the past. It’s not necessarily a family heirloom, but a power,” one of them responded.
“Your Immortal Pegasus is a bey like no other. When you used your full power, you basically accessed our combined power,” another added.
“Sweet! Can I tell my friends?”
“No.”
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - Dash Driver - Aug. 17, 2019
(Aug. 17, 2019 1:18 AM)Sir Saitama Wrote: Chapter 23 - Daemon’s Rage! Pegasus’ Shared Power!
Last time on Beyblade Burst Zero! Toko defeats Nika and advances to the next round, where he’ll have to face his friend and rival Paris! Meanwhile, Taiki will have to hold his own against Daniel!
Paris woke up with a blast, as his light brown eyes filled with relief. He took a quick glance at his bey, Immortal Pegasus, which lay dormantly on his bedside table.
His attention shifted over to the window beside his bed. Paris unveiled the curtains, revealing a vast licorice sky littered with stars.
“It’s still night,” he thought to himself. “That means I’ll be up against Toko in a few hours.”
Paris sunk into his blue-striped bed and decided to have somewhat of a rest. However, everytime his eyes shut, a question popped into his head.
Albeit he had very strange dreams, often terrifying ones, this was like no other. Paris was almost certain that his past two were linked.
“Who were those people?”
“Is it only a dream?”
“Who and what is Nemesis?”
“What are they doing?”
“What’s next?”
And even so, he struggled to find an acceptable answer for one. Paris disliked illogical responses, but with little knowledge, that was all he had.
“No. I’m not going to let a silly little fantasy of mine corrupt me. Pull yourself together, Paris,” the boy reminded himself firmly.
Paris stared at the window with a sudden interest, and back at Immortal Pegasus.
“It’s been a while since we’ve done this.”
He slipped on his father’s old jacket and grabbed Pegasus, before leaving his Beigoman apartment.
Paris thought he saw a bunch of shadows with multicolored auras at the door, but he shook his head and exited the building.
“Looks like Gingka’s fame and power isn’t translating well to being a good teacher,” a green shadow remarked to the one below it.
“The boy thinks he knows everything about Pegasus, when he clearly can’t handle the power. Even a single attack makes him exhausted,” another added.
“Though, I can see a lot of him in you, Gingka,” a shadow with a red aura turned to another.
Paris kept a blank face as Immortal Pegasus surged through the stadium. The attack type crashed into a wall before bursting.
He was unfazed and hardly surprised, however.
“Trident’s movements are quick and natural. The same goes with Revenge, Daemon, Valkyrie and basically anyone else. So I’m going to have to do the same.”
Paris inserted Pegasus into his launcher and fired the bey into the stadium. He pulled his launcher with a significantly stronger tug than usual.
“Alright. You got this Pegasus!” Paris exclaimed enthusiastically. Much to his confusion and frustration, the attack type whirled around the stadium multiple times before it crashed into the stadium and burst again.
“W-where did I go wrong?” Paris fell to his knees. He looked up at the early morning sky, which marked a new day - the day that he’d battle Toko.
Paris returned his undivided attention back to the stadium.
“One last try. This time... it’s going to be different.”
“Let it rip!”
Immortal Pegasus zoomed through the stadium at incredible speeds, hurling wind everywhere.
The boy zoned out into an empty white abyss, with a red button in front of him. Whenever he reached for it, it teleported behind him.
The group of shadows from earlier appeared. They said in unison,
“Paris Hagane. Tapping into your true potential is like pressing that button. If you can manage to do so..”
They left the sentence there. Paris knew why - it was for him to complete.
“LET’S DO THIS!” He yelled with passion.
The boy lunged forward, and used the other arm to reach behind him. It left a lot of strain on his muscles and it hurt like crazy.
Nonetheless, Paris was a lot of things. Someone who backed down wasn’t one of them.
“IMMORTAL SLASH!” Paris bellowed as he destroyed the button, the landscape shattered like broken glass.
Paris emitted a gold aura as a sharp blue lightning sparked out of him.
“Full power!”
Immortal Pegasus loomed around the stadium so fast it became invisible to the naked eye.
Paris was extremely exhausted from using his full power, and collapsed, passed out cold. Pegasus did the same, and stopped spinning before bursting.
A few hours later
“Oh my God Valkyrie! He’s dead!” Taiki shouted, as everyone gave him an irritated glare.
“Paris? You there?” Charles shook him.
He opened his light brown eyes.
“I-I think so,” he replied as everyone shared a laugh.
Aiga helped him up. “So, mind telling us what was going on?”
Paris rubbed his eyes. “I did some training.”
“Well I hope you can run. The battles are about to start!” Toko shouted before heading off.
“Lucky me,” Paris groaned before chasing after him.
The boys arrived at the WBBA building.
“Good luck out there!” Aiga said, as Charles, Ryota walked with him to the seats.
Toko seemed to be leaving, as he walked alone through the hallway.
“Toko? Where are you going?” Paris asked.
The light-blue haired boy turned around.
“Until the battle’s over, we’re rivals. Don’t you hold back, because I have been training for weeks!”
“What a weird kid,” Taiki muttered.
The two walked toward the waiting room, where they saw Daniel lifting weights.
“You’re up against him. Do you think you’re gonna be fine?” Paris looked worried.
“Yeah. Don’t worry, because Theseus and I are going to win.” Taiki smiled.
Hanami got out of his seat and double tapped the microphone.
“Hey all you bladers! Today’s going to be a special one, so grab your popcorn because you’re in for a ride!”
An overhead spotlight fixed on one of the metal doors which creaked open.
“Our first competitor is Taiki Igarashi, the king of storms!”
His aqua dreads were tied up in a ponytail. The crowd roared like a bunch of wild lions.
“And against him is the Dark Dragon! Some call him the new Lui, and he’s Daniel Aziel!”
Daniel was silent as ever.
“Listen here. You may think you’re the best and that you’re going to win, and that’s your major flaw,” Taiki boomed. “So don’t you dare underestimate me, because I’m stronger than before!”
“Pathetic. If you’re only in here to make motivational speeches, then leave. ‘Cuz when I’m done with you, you’re not going to have any left,” Daniel remarked.
The noise died off quickly.
“Wow! This battle hasn’t already started and the tensions are high!” Hanami said excitedly.
Taiki absolutely hated people like Daniel. He almost wanted to punch him, but he decided to let his bey do the fighting.
He flipped the Crown frame upside down, making the jagged points exposed.
Daniel put his launcher away and held Havoc Daemon in his hand.
“I’ll win this with a hand spin.”
“Ready, set!”
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!”
“Let it rip!”
Havoc Daemon was wobbling unstably. Meanwhile, Adamantine Theseus rushed down for an early attack.
“If I can attack him early, then he’ll at least be out of stamina,” Taiki strategized.
“Now’s our chance Theseus! Adamantine Blade!”
The prongs on the Ultimate Reboot driver retracted, giving the bey a massive increase in speed.
Theseus came rushing down with its spiky, jagged side. Daemon was only a few inches away.
“Dodge it,” Daniel commanded effortlessly.
Havoc Daemon moved just enough to get out of the way.
“N-no way!” Paris’ jaw dropped from the waiting room.
“Take this! Adamantine Barrage Fury!”
Theseus rushed through Daemon, giving it no chance of escaping. The dragon attack type was running out of stamina, but Daniel was the least concerned out of everyone.
“You’re really getting on my nerves,” the Dark Dragon responded. Havoc Daemon broke free from Theseus’ grasp.
“It’s nothing personal. You’re just not worthy,” Daniel added. “I’ll make it nice and quick! Demolish Break!”
Havoc Daemon lowered into its driver, building energy into speed.
“After him, Theseus!” Taiki ordered, but there was no use.
Daemon erupted through the stadium and rode up the stadium walls, flinging itself into the air.
“Lights out! Rebirth Dive!” Daniel thundered.
The attack type ripped through the air, leaving a violent gust of wind that pushed both bladers back.
“Look out, Theseus!” Taiki warned. Fortunately, it rolled back just in time.
Both Theseus and Daemon were running out of stamina.
“It’s a shame. So many bladers think they’re strong, but this it all that happens..”
Daniel clicked his fingers and Adamantine Theseus burst instantly.
“Two points to Havoc Daemon for a Burst Finish! The score is now 2-0!” The referee declared.
“What a dramatic finish! Daniel scores himself a burst finish with nothing but a hand spin!” Hanami reported.
Daniel pulled out his red and black string launcher from his pocket.
“Y-you’re using a launcher?” Taiki asked with surprise.
“Let’s be honest. Either way, I’d win,” Daniel replied.
“Ready, set!”
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!”
“Let it rip!”
Theseus kept its distance from Daemon and raced around the outer rim of the stadium.
“Now Daemon! Crush it!”
The dark bey rushed through Adamantine Theseus, each hit dealing severe damage.
“As long as Theseus holds a grip on the stadium floor, we’re not going to give up!” Taiki glowed a luminous aqua.
“That’s it Taiki! You’ve got this!” Paris cheered.
“So be it,” Daniel replied. “Rebound Uppercut!”
Havoc Daemon’s wing slid underneath Theseus, flinging it into the air to the point of no return.
“Uh oh,” Taiki said under his breath as Adamantine Theseus smashed into the ceiling, bursting upon impact.
“Two points to Havoc Daemon for a Burst Finish! Daniel Aziel wins with the score of 4-0!”
The crowd applauded with excitement.
“What an explosive finish! You know what this means folks, Daniel Aziel makes it into the semi-finals!”
His photo filled in a blank square alongside Roan and Xhan.
“The fourth participant will be decided in tomorrow’s battle! Until then, stay tuned!” Hanami announced.
Taiki fell to his knees as he wailed in defeat. Tears streamed out of his eyes, before he rubbed them aside.
On their way home, Toko was missing.
“Probably training again,” Charles guessed.
“You did great out there, Taiki. It takes guts to even stand near Daniel, and you held your own pretty well. So you should see this battle as a win, more than as a loss,” Paris said.
“Thanks,” Taiki smiled. “Does anyone have any beybread? I’m starving!”
“There’s the same old Taiki,” Ryota sighed.
Back at home, Paris noticed the shadows.
“It’s a ghost! I’m cursed, aren’t I?” He screamed.
“No,” they said. “Well yes, since most of us are dead, but we prefer the term Wielders of Pegasus.”
“What’s that supposed to mean?” Paris replied cluelessly.
“Each and everyone of us has used Pegasus in the past. It’s not necessarily a family heirloom, but a power,” one of them responded.
“Your Immortal Pegasus is a bey like no other. When you used your full power, you basically accessed our combined power,” another added.
“Sweet! Can I tell my friends?”
“No.”
YESSSSSS ANOTHER CHAPTER!!!
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - Fusion core - Aug. 18, 2019
(Aug. 17, 2019 1:18 AM)Sir Saitama Wrote: Chapter 23 - Daemon’s Rage! Pegasus’ Shared Power!
Last time on Beyblade Burst Zero! Toko defeats Nika and advances to the next round, where he’ll have to face his friend and rival Paris! Meanwhile, Taiki will have to hold his own against Daniel!
Paris woke up with a blast, as his light brown eyes filled with relief. He took a quick glance at his bey, Immortal Pegasus, which lay dormantly on his bedside table.
His attention shifted over to the window beside his bed. Paris unveiled the curtains, revealing a vast licorice sky littered with stars.
“It’s still night,” he thought to himself. “That means I’ll be up against Toko in a few hours.”
Paris sunk into his blue-striped bed and decided to have somewhat of a rest. However, everytime his eyes shut, a question popped into his head.
Albeit he had very strange dreams, often terrifying ones, this was like no other. Paris was almost certain that his past two were linked.
“Who were those people?”
“Is it only a dream?”
“Who and what is Nemesis?”
“What are they doing?”
“What’s next?”
And even so, he struggled to find an acceptable answer for one. Paris disliked illogical responses, but with little knowledge, that was all he had.
“No. I’m not going to let a silly little fantasy of mine corrupt me. Pull yourself together, Paris,” the boy reminded himself firmly.
Paris stared at the window with a sudden interest, and back at Immortal Pegasus.
“It’s been a while since we’ve done this.”
He slipped on his father’s old jacket and grabbed Pegasus, before leaving his Beigoman apartment.
Paris thought he saw a bunch of shadows with multicolored auras at the door, but he shook his head and exited the building.
“Looks like Gingka’s fame and power isn’t translating well to being a good teacher,” a green shadow remarked to the one below it.
“The boy thinks he knows everything about Pegasus, when he clearly can’t handle the power. Even a single attack makes him exhausted,” another added.
“Though, I can see a lot of him in you, Gingka,” a shadow with a red aura turned to another.
Paris kept a blank face as Immortal Pegasus surged through the stadium. The attack type crashed into a wall before bursting.
He was unfazed and hardly surprised, however.
“Trident’s movements are quick and natural. The same goes with Revenge, Daemon, Valkyrie and basically anyone else. So I’m going to have to do the same.”
Paris inserted Pegasus into his launcher and fired the bey into the stadium. He pulled his launcher with a significantly stronger tug than usual.
“Alright. You got this Pegasus!” Paris exclaimed enthusiastically. Much to his confusion and frustration, the attack type whirled around the stadium multiple times before it crashed into the stadium and burst again.
“W-where did I go wrong?” Paris fell to his knees. He looked up at the early morning sky, which marked a new day - the day that he’d battle Toko.
Paris returned his undivided attention back to the stadium.
“One last try. This time... it’s going to be different.”
“Let it rip!”
Immortal Pegasus zoomed through the stadium at incredible speeds, hurling wind everywhere.
The boy zoned out into an empty white abyss, with a red button in front of him. Whenever he reached for it, it teleported behind him.
The group of shadows from earlier appeared. They said in unison,
“Paris Hagane. Tapping into your true potential is like pressing that button. If you can manage to do so..”
They left the sentence there. Paris knew why - it was for him to complete.
“LET’S DO THIS!” He yelled with passion.
The boy lunged forward, and used the other arm to reach behind him. It left a lot of strain on his muscles and it hurt like crazy.
Nonetheless, Paris was a lot of things. Someone who backed down wasn’t one of them.
“IMMORTAL SLASH!” Paris bellowed as he destroyed the button, the landscape shattered like broken glass.
Paris emitted a gold aura as a sharp blue lightning sparked out of him.
“Full power!”
Immortal Pegasus loomed around the stadium so fast it became invisible to the naked eye.
Paris was extremely exhausted from using his full power, and collapsed, passed out cold. Pegasus did the same, and stopped spinning before bursting.
A few hours later
“Oh my God Valkyrie! He’s dead!” Taiki shouted, as everyone gave him an irritated glare.
“Paris? You there?” Charles shook him.
He opened his light brown eyes.
“I-I think so,” he replied as everyone shared a laugh.
Aiga helped him up. “So, mind telling us what was going on?”
Paris rubbed his eyes. “I did some training.”
“Well I hope you can run. The battles are about to start!” Toko shouted before heading off.
“Lucky me,” Paris groaned before chasing after him.
The boys arrived at the WBBA building.
“Good luck out there!” Aiga said, as Charles, Ryota walked with him to the seats.
Toko seemed to be leaving, as he walked alone through the hallway.
“Toko? Where are you going?” Paris asked.
The light-blue haired boy turned around.
“Until the battle’s over, we’re rivals. Don’t you hold back, because I have been training for weeks!”
“What a weird kid,” Taiki muttered.
The two walked toward the waiting room, where they saw Daniel lifting weights.
“You’re up against him. Do you think you’re gonna be fine?” Paris looked worried.
“Yeah. Don’t worry, because Theseus and I are going to win.” Taiki smiled.
Hanami got out of his seat and double tapped the microphone.
“Hey all you bladers! Today’s going to be a special one, so grab your popcorn because you’re in for a ride!”
An overhead spotlight fixed on one of the metal doors which creaked open.
“Our first competitor is Taiki Igarashi, the king of storms!”
His aqua dreads were tied up in a ponytail. The crowd roared like a bunch of wild lions.
“And against him is the Dark Dragon! Some call him the new Lui, and he’s Daniel Aziel!”
Daniel was silent as ever.
“Listen here. You may think you’re the best and that you’re going to win, and that’s your major flaw,” Taiki boomed. “So don’t you dare underestimate me, because I’m stronger than before!”
“Pathetic. If you’re only in here to make motivational speeches, then leave. ‘Cuz when I’m done with you, you’re not going to have any left,” Daniel remarked.
The noise died off quickly.
“Wow! This battle hasn’t already started and the tensions are high!” Hanami said excitedly.
Taiki absolutely hated people like Daniel. He almost wanted to punch him, but he decided to let his bey do the fighting.
He flipped the Crown frame upside down, making the jagged points exposed.
Daniel put his launcher away and held Havoc Daemon in his hand.
“I’ll win this with a hand spin.”
“Ready, set!”
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!”
“Let it rip!”
Havoc Daemon was wobbling unstably. Meanwhile, Adamantine Theseus rushed down for an early attack.
“If I can attack him early, then he’ll at least be out of stamina,” Taiki strategized.
“Now’s our chance Theseus! Adamantine Blade!”
The prongs on the Ultimate Reboot driver retracted, giving the bey a massive increase in speed.
Theseus came rushing down with its spiky, jagged side. Daemon was only a few inches away.
“Dodge it,” Daniel commanded effortlessly.
Havoc Daemon moved just enough to get out of the way.
“N-no way!” Paris’ jaw dropped from the waiting room.
“Take this! Adamantine Barrage Fury!”
Theseus rushed through Daemon, giving it no chance of escaping. The dragon attack type was running out of stamina, but Daniel was the least concerned out of everyone.
“You’re really getting on my nerves,” the Dark Dragon responded. Havoc Daemon broke free from Theseus’ grasp.
“It’s nothing personal. You’re just not worthy,” Daniel added. “I’ll make it nice and quick! Demolish Break!”
Havoc Daemon lowered into its driver, building energy into speed.
“After him, Theseus!” Taiki ordered, but there was no use.
Daemon erupted through the stadium and rode up the stadium walls, flinging itself into the air.
“Lights out! Rebirth Dive!” Daniel thundered.
The attack type ripped through the air, leaving a violent gust of wind that pushed both bladers back.
“Look out, Theseus!” Taiki warned. Fortunately, it rolled back just in time.
Both Theseus and Daemon were running out of stamina.
“It’s a shame. So many bladers think they’re strong, but this it all that happens..”
Daniel clicked his fingers and Adamantine Theseus burst instantly.
“Two points to Havoc Daemon for a Burst Finish! The score is now 2-0!” The referee declared.
“What a dramatic finish! Daniel scores himself a burst finish with nothing but a hand spin!” Hanami reported.
Daniel pulled out his red and black string launcher from his pocket.
“Y-you’re using a launcher?” Taiki asked with surprise.
“Let’s be honest. Either way, I’d win,” Daniel replied.
“Ready, set!”
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!”
“Let it rip!”
Theseus kept its distance from Daemon and raced around the outer rim of the stadium.
“Now Daemon! Crush it!”
The dark bey rushed through Adamantine Theseus, each hit dealing severe damage.
“As long as Theseus holds a grip on the stadium floor, we’re not going to give up!” Taiki glowed a luminous aqua.
“That’s it Taiki! You’ve got this!” Paris cheered.
“So be it,” Daniel replied. “Rebound Uppercut!”
Havoc Daemon’s wing slid underneath Theseus, flinging it into the air to the point of no return.
“Uh oh,” Taiki said under his breath as Adamantine Theseus smashed into the ceiling, bursting upon impact.
“Two points to Havoc Daemon for a Burst Finish! Daniel Aziel wins with the score of 4-0!”
The crowd applauded with excitement.
“What an explosive finish! You know what this means folks, Daniel Aziel makes it into the semi-finals!”
His photo filled in a blank square alongside Roan and Xhan.
“The fourth participant will be decided in tomorrow’s battle! Until then, stay tuned!” Hanami announced.
Taiki fell to his knees as he wailed in defeat. Tears streamed out of his eyes, before he rubbed them aside.
On their way home, Toko was missing.
“Probably training again,” Charles guessed.
“You did great out there, Taiki. It takes guts to even stand near Daniel, and you held your own pretty well. So you should see this battle as a win, more than as a loss,” Paris said.
“Thanks,” Taiki smiled. “Does anyone have any beybread? I’m starving!”
“There’s the same old Taiki,” Ryota sighed.
Back at home, Paris noticed the shadows.
“It’s a ghost! I’m cursed, aren’t I?” He screamed.
“No,” they said. “Well yes, since most of us are dead, but we prefer the term Wielders of Pegasus.”
“What’s that supposed to mean?” Paris replied cluelessly.
“Each and everyone of us has used Pegasus in the past. It’s not necessarily a family heirloom, but a power,” one of them responded.
“Your Immortal Pegasus is a bey like no other. When you used your full power, you basically accessed our combined power,” another added.
“Sweet! Can I tell my friends?”
“No.”
That was quite a mysterious chapter . I liked how Taiki tried hard but Daniel won . The battle was really amazing .
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - CHAPTER 23 IS OUT - Dt20000 - Aug. 18, 2019
great way to catch peoples eye in the title, lol. Also, great chapter
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - Sir Saitama - Aug. 18, 2019
(Aug. 18, 2019 11:41 AM)Fusion core Wrote: (Aug. 17, 2019 1:18 AM)Sir Saitama Wrote: Chapter 23 - Daemon’s Rage! Pegasus’ Shared Power!
Last time on Beyblade Burst Zero! Toko defeats Nika and advances to the next round, where he’ll have to face his friend and rival Paris! Meanwhile, Taiki will have to hold his own against Daniel!
Paris woke up with a blast, as his light brown eyes filled with relief. He took a quick glance at his bey, Immortal Pegasus, which lay dormantly on his bedside table.
His attention shifted over to the window beside his bed. Paris unveiled the curtains, revealing a vast licorice sky littered with stars.
“It’s still night,” he thought to himself. “That means I’ll be up against Toko in a few hours.”
Paris sunk into his blue-striped bed and decided to have somewhat of a rest. However, everytime his eyes shut, a question popped into his head.
Albeit he had very strange dreams, often terrifying ones, this was like no other. Paris was almost certain that his past two were linked.
“Who were those people?”
“Is it only a dream?”
“Who and what is Nemesis?”
“What are they doing?”
“What’s next?”
And even so, he struggled to find an acceptable answer for one. Paris disliked illogical responses, but with little knowledge, that was all he had.
“No. I’m not going to let a silly little fantasy of mine corrupt me. Pull yourself together, Paris,” the boy reminded himself firmly.
Paris stared at the window with a sudden interest, and back at Immortal Pegasus.
“It’s been a while since we’ve done this.”
He slipped on his father’s old jacket and grabbed Pegasus, before leaving his Beigoman apartment.
Paris thought he saw a bunch of shadows with multicolored auras at the door, but he shook his head and exited the building.
“Looks like Gingka’s fame and power isn’t translating well to being a good teacher,” a green shadow remarked to the one below it.
“The boy thinks he knows everything about Pegasus, when he clearly can’t handle the power. Even a single attack makes him exhausted,” another added.
“Though, I can see a lot of him in you, Gingka,” a shadow with a red aura turned to another.
Paris kept a blank face as Immortal Pegasus surged through the stadium. The attack type crashed into a wall before bursting.
He was unfazed and hardly surprised, however.
“Trident’s movements are quick and natural. The same goes with Revenge, Daemon, Valkyrie and basically anyone else. So I’m going to have to do the same.”
Paris inserted Pegasus into his launcher and fired the bey into the stadium. He pulled his launcher with a significantly stronger tug than usual.
“Alright. You got this Pegasus!” Paris exclaimed enthusiastically. Much to his confusion and frustration, the attack type whirled around the stadium multiple times before it crashed into the stadium and burst again.
“W-where did I go wrong?” Paris fell to his knees. He looked up at the early morning sky, which marked a new day - the day that he’d battle Toko.
Paris returned his undivided attention back to the stadium.
“One last try. This time... it’s going to be different.”
“Let it rip!”
Immortal Pegasus zoomed through the stadium at incredible speeds, hurling wind everywhere.
The boy zoned out into an empty white abyss, with a red button in front of him. Whenever he reached for it, it teleported behind him.
The group of shadows from earlier appeared. They said in unison,
“Paris Hagane. Tapping into your true potential is like pressing that button. If you can manage to do so..”
They left the sentence there. Paris knew why - it was for him to complete.
“LET’S DO THIS!” He yelled with passion.
The boy lunged forward, and used the other arm to reach behind him. It left a lot of strain on his muscles and it hurt like crazy.
Nonetheless, Paris was a lot of things. Someone who backed down wasn’t one of them.
“IMMORTAL SLASH!” Paris bellowed as he destroyed the button, the landscape shattered like broken glass.
Paris emitted a gold aura as a sharp blue lightning sparked out of him.
“Full power!”
Immortal Pegasus loomed around the stadium so fast it became invisible to the naked eye.
Paris was extremely exhausted from using his full power, and collapsed, passed out cold. Pegasus did the same, and stopped spinning before bursting.
A few hours later
“Oh my God Valkyrie! He’s dead!” Taiki shouted, as everyone gave him an irritated glare.
“Paris? You there?” Charles shook him.
He opened his light brown eyes.
“I-I think so,” he replied as everyone shared a laugh.
Aiga helped him up. “So, mind telling us what was going on?”
Paris rubbed his eyes. “I did some training.”
“Well I hope you can run. The battles are about to start!” Toko shouted before heading off.
“Lucky me,” Paris groaned before chasing after him.
The boys arrived at the WBBA building.
“Good luck out there!” Aiga said, as Charles, Ryota walked with him to the seats.
Toko seemed to be leaving, as he walked alone through the hallway.
“Toko? Where are you going?” Paris asked.
The light-blue haired boy turned around.
“Until the battle’s over, we’re rivals. Don’t you hold back, because I have been training for weeks!”
“What a weird kid,” Taiki muttered.
The two walked toward the waiting room, where they saw Daniel lifting weights.
“You’re up against him. Do you think you’re gonna be fine?” Paris looked worried.
“Yeah. Don’t worry, because Theseus and I are going to win.” Taiki smiled.
Hanami got out of his seat and double tapped the microphone.
“Hey all you bladers! Today’s going to be a special one, so grab your popcorn because you’re in for a ride!”
An overhead spotlight fixed on one of the metal doors which creaked open.
“Our first competitor is Taiki Igarashi, the king of storms!”
His aqua dreads were tied up in a ponytail. The crowd roared like a bunch of wild lions.
“And against him is the Dark Dragon! Some call him the new Lui, and he’s Daniel Aziel!”
Daniel was silent as ever.
“Listen here. You may think you’re the best and that you’re going to win, and that’s your major flaw,” Taiki boomed. “So don’t you dare underestimate me, because I’m stronger than before!”
“Pathetic. If you’re only in here to make motivational speeches, then leave. ‘Cuz when I’m done with you, you’re not going to have any left,” Daniel remarked.
The noise died off quickly.
“Wow! This battle hasn’t already started and the tensions are high!” Hanami said excitedly.
Taiki absolutely hated people like Daniel. He almost wanted to punch him, but he decided to let his bey do the fighting.
He flipped the Crown frame upside down, making the jagged points exposed.
Daniel put his launcher away and held Havoc Daemon in his hand.
“I’ll win this with a hand spin.”
“Ready, set!”
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!”
“Let it rip!”
Havoc Daemon was wobbling unstably. Meanwhile, Adamantine Theseus rushed down for an early attack.
“If I can attack him early, then he’ll at least be out of stamina,” Taiki strategized.
“Now’s our chance Theseus! Adamantine Blade!”
The prongs on the Ultimate Reboot driver retracted, giving the bey a massive increase in speed.
Theseus came rushing down with its spiky, jagged side. Daemon was only a few inches away.
“Dodge it,” Daniel commanded effortlessly.
Havoc Daemon moved just enough to get out of the way.
“N-no way!” Paris’ jaw dropped from the waiting room.
“Take this! Adamantine Barrage Fury!”
Theseus rushed through Daemon, giving it no chance of escaping. The dragon attack type was running out of stamina, but Daniel was the least concerned out of everyone.
“You’re really getting on my nerves,” the Dark Dragon responded. Havoc Daemon broke free from Theseus’ grasp.
“It’s nothing personal. You’re just not worthy,” Daniel added. “I’ll make it nice and quick! Demolish Break!”
Havoc Daemon lowered into its driver, building energy into speed.
“After him, Theseus!” Taiki ordered, but there was no use.
Daemon erupted through the stadium and rode up the stadium walls, flinging itself into the air.
“Lights out! Rebirth Dive!” Daniel thundered.
The attack type ripped through the air, leaving a violent gust of wind that pushed both bladers back.
“Look out, Theseus!” Taiki warned. Fortunately, it rolled back just in time.
Both Theseus and Daemon were running out of stamina.
“It’s a shame. So many bladers think they’re strong, but this it all that happens..”
Daniel clicked his fingers and Adamantine Theseus burst instantly.
“Two points to Havoc Daemon for a Burst Finish! The score is now 2-0!” The referee declared.
“What a dramatic finish! Daniel scores himself a burst finish with nothing but a hand spin!” Hanami reported.
Daniel pulled out his red and black string launcher from his pocket.
“Y-you’re using a launcher?” Taiki asked with surprise.
“Let’s be honest. Either way, I’d win,” Daniel replied.
“Ready, set!”
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!”
“Let it rip!”
Theseus kept its distance from Daemon and raced around the outer rim of the stadium.
“Now Daemon! Crush it!”
The dark bey rushed through Adamantine Theseus, each hit dealing severe damage.
“As long as Theseus holds a grip on the stadium floor, we’re not going to give up!” Taiki glowed a luminous aqua.
“That’s it Taiki! You’ve got this!” Paris cheered.
“So be it,” Daniel replied. “Rebound Uppercut!”
Havoc Daemon’s wing slid underneath Theseus, flinging it into the air to the point of no return.
“Uh oh,” Taiki said under his breath as Adamantine Theseus smashed into the ceiling, bursting upon impact.
“Two points to Havoc Daemon for a Burst Finish! Daniel Aziel wins with the score of 4-0!”
The crowd applauded with excitement.
“What an explosive finish! You know what this means folks, Daniel Aziel makes it into the semi-finals!”
His photo filled in a blank square alongside Roan and Xhan.
“The fourth participant will be decided in tomorrow’s battle! Until then, stay tuned!” Hanami announced.
Taiki fell to his knees as he wailed in defeat. Tears streamed out of his eyes, before he rubbed them aside.
On their way home, Toko was missing.
“Probably training again,” Charles guessed.
“You did great out there, Taiki. It takes guts to even stand near Daniel, and you held your own pretty well. So you should see this battle as a win, more than as a loss,” Paris said.
“Thanks,” Taiki smiled. “Does anyone have any beybread? I’m starving!”
“There’s the same old Taiki,” Ryota sighed.
Back at home, Paris noticed the shadows.
“It’s a ghost! I’m cursed, aren’t I?” He screamed.
“No,” they said. “Well yes, since most of us are dead, but we prefer the term Wielders of Pegasus.”
“What’s that supposed to mean?” Paris replied cluelessly.
“Each and everyone of us has used Pegasus in the past. It’s not necessarily a family heirloom, but a power,” one of them responded.
“Your Immortal Pegasus is a bey like no other. When you used your full power, you basically accessed our combined power,” another added.
“Sweet! Can I tell my friends?”
“No.”
That was quite a mysterious chapter . I liked how Taiki tried hard but Daniel won . The battle was really amazing .
Thanks!
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - BurningSands - Aug. 18, 2019
(Aug. 17, 2019 1:18 AM)Sir Saitama Wrote: Chapter 23 - Daemon’s Rage! Pegasus’ Shared Power!
Last time on Beyblade Burst Zero! Toko defeats Nika and advances to the next round, where he’ll have to face his friend and rival Paris! Meanwhile, Taiki will have to hold his own against Daniel!
Paris woke up with a blast, as his light brown eyes filled with relief. He took a quick glance at his bey, Immortal Pegasus, which lay dormantly on his bedside table.
His attention shifted over to the window beside his bed. Paris unveiled the curtains, revealing a vast licorice sky littered with stars.
“It’s still night,” he thought to himself. “That means I’ll be up against Toko in a few hours.”
Paris sunk into his blue-striped bed and decided to have somewhat of a rest. However, everytime his eyes shut, a question popped into his head.
Albeit he had very strange dreams, often terrifying ones, this was like no other. Paris was almost certain that his past two were linked.
“Who were those people?”
“Is it only a dream?”
“Who and what is Nemesis?”
“What are they doing?”
“What’s next?”
And even so, he struggled to find an acceptable answer for one. Paris disliked illogical responses, but with little knowledge, that was all he had.
“No. I’m not going to let a silly little fantasy of mine corrupt me. Pull yourself together, Paris,” the boy reminded himself firmly.
Paris stared at the window with a sudden interest, and back at Immortal Pegasus.
“It’s been a while since we’ve done this.”
He slipped on his father’s old jacket and grabbed Pegasus, before leaving his Beigoman apartment.
Paris thought he saw a bunch of shadows with multicolored auras at the door, but he shook his head and exited the building.
“Looks like Gingka’s fame and power isn’t translating well to being a good teacher,” a green shadow remarked to the one below it.
“The boy thinks he knows everything about Pegasus, when he clearly can’t handle the power. Even a single attack makes him exhausted,” another added.
“Though, I can see a lot of him in you, Gingka,” a shadow with a red aura turned to another.
Paris kept a blank face as Immortal Pegasus surged through the stadium. The attack type crashed into a wall before bursting.
He was unfazed and hardly surprised, however.
“Trident’s movements are quick and natural. The same goes with Revenge, Daemon, Valkyrie and basically anyone else. So I’m going to have to do the same.”
Paris inserted Pegasus into his launcher and fired the bey into the stadium. He pulled his launcher with a significantly stronger tug than usual.
“Alright. You got this Pegasus!” Paris exclaimed enthusiastically. Much to his confusion and frustration, the attack type whirled around the stadium multiple times before it crashed into the stadium and burst again.
“W-where did I go wrong?” Paris fell to his knees. He looked up at the early morning sky, which marked a new day - the day that he’d battle Toko.
Paris returned his undivided attention back to the stadium.
“One last try. This time... it’s going to be different.”
“Let it rip!”
Immortal Pegasus zoomed through the stadium at incredible speeds, hurling wind everywhere.
The boy zoned out into an empty white abyss, with a red button in front of him. Whenever he reached for it, it teleported behind him.
The group of shadows from earlier appeared. They said in unison,
“Paris Hagane. Tapping into your true potential is like pressing that button. If you can manage to do so..”
They left the sentence there. Paris knew why - it was for him to complete.
“LET’S DO THIS!” He yelled with passion.
The boy lunged forward, and used the other arm to reach behind him. It left a lot of strain on his muscles and it hurt like crazy.
Nonetheless, Paris was a lot of things. Someone who backed down wasn’t one of them.
“IMMORTAL SLASH!” Paris bellowed as he destroyed the button, the landscape shattered like broken glass.
Paris emitted a gold aura as a sharp blue lightning sparked out of him.
“Full power!”
Immortal Pegasus loomed around the stadium so fast it became invisible to the naked eye.
Paris was extremely exhausted from using his full power, and collapsed, passed out cold. Pegasus did the same, and stopped spinning before bursting.
A few hours later
“Oh my God Valkyrie! He’s dead!” Taiki shouted, as everyone gave him an irritated glare.
“Paris? You there?” Charles shook him.
He opened his light brown eyes.
“I-I think so,” he replied as everyone shared a laugh.
Aiga helped him up. “So, mind telling us what was going on?”
Paris rubbed his eyes. “I did some training.”
“Well I hope you can run. The battles are about to start!” Toko shouted before heading off.
“Lucky me,” Paris groaned before chasing after him.
The boys arrived at the WBBA building.
“Good luck out there!” Aiga said, as Charles, Ryota walked with him to the seats.
Toko seemed to be leaving, as he walked alone through the hallway.
“Toko? Where are you going?” Paris asked.
The light-blue haired boy turned around.
“Until the battle’s over, we’re rivals. Don’t you hold back, because I have been training for weeks!”
“What a weird kid,” Taiki muttered.
The two walked toward the waiting room, where they saw Daniel lifting weights.
“You’re up against him. Do you think you’re gonna be fine?” Paris looked worried.
“Yeah. Don’t worry, because Theseus and I are going to win.” Taiki smiled.
Hanami got out of his seat and double tapped the microphone.
“Hey all you bladers! Today’s going to be a special one, so grab your popcorn because you’re in for a ride!”
An overhead spotlight fixed on one of the metal doors which creaked open.
“Our first competitor is Taiki Igarashi, the king of storms!”
His aqua dreads were tied up in a ponytail. The crowd roared like a bunch of wild lions.
“And against him is the Dark Dragon! Some call him the new Lui, and he’s Daniel Aziel!”
Daniel was silent as ever.
“Listen here. You may think you’re the best and that you’re going to win, and that’s your major flaw,” Taiki boomed. “So don’t you dare underestimate me, because I’m stronger than before!”
“Pathetic. If you’re only in here to make motivational speeches, then leave. ‘Cuz when I’m done with you, you’re not going to have any left,” Daniel remarked.
The noise died off quickly.
“Wow! This battle hasn’t already started and the tensions are high!” Hanami said excitedly.
Taiki absolutely hated people like Daniel. He almost wanted to punch him, but he decided to let his bey do the fighting.
He flipped the Crown frame upside down, making the jagged points exposed.
Daniel put his launcher away and held Havoc Daemon in his hand.
“I’ll win this with a hand spin.”
“Ready, set!”
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!”
“Let it rip!”
Havoc Daemon was wobbling unstably. Meanwhile, Adamantine Theseus rushed down for an early attack.
“If I can attack him early, then he’ll at least be out of stamina,” Taiki strategized.
“Now’s our chance Theseus! Adamantine Blade!”
The prongs on the Ultimate Reboot driver retracted, giving the bey a massive increase in speed.
Theseus came rushing down with its spiky, jagged side. Daemon was only a few inches away.
“Dodge it,” Daniel commanded effortlessly.
Havoc Daemon moved just enough to get out of the way.
“N-no way!” Paris’ jaw dropped from the waiting room.
“Take this! Adamantine Barrage Fury!”
Theseus rushed through Daemon, giving it no chance of escaping. The dragon attack type was running out of stamina, but Daniel was the least concerned out of everyone.
“You’re really getting on my nerves,” the Dark Dragon responded. Havoc Daemon broke free from Theseus’ grasp.
“It’s nothing personal. You’re just not worthy,” Daniel added. “I’ll make it nice and quick! Demolish Break!”
Havoc Daemon lowered into its driver, building energy into speed.
“After him, Theseus!” Taiki ordered, but there was no use.
Daemon erupted through the stadium and rode up the stadium walls, flinging itself into the air.
“Lights out! Rebirth Dive!” Daniel thundered.
The attack type ripped through the air, leaving a violent gust of wind that pushed both bladers back.
“Look out, Theseus!” Taiki warned. Fortunately, it rolled back just in time.
Both Theseus and Daemon were running out of stamina.
“It’s a shame. So many bladers think they’re strong, but this it all that happens..”
Daniel clicked his fingers and Adamantine Theseus burst instantly.
“Two points to Havoc Daemon for a Burst Finish! The score is now 2-0!” The referee declared.
“What a dramatic finish! Daniel scores himself a burst finish with nothing but a hand spin!” Hanami reported.
Daniel pulled out his red and black string launcher from his pocket.
“Y-you’re using a launcher?” Taiki asked with surprise.
“Let’s be honest. Either way, I’d win,” Daniel replied.
“Ready, set!”
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!”
“Let it rip!”
Theseus kept its distance from Daemon and raced around the outer rim of the stadium.
“Now Daemon! Crush it!”
The dark bey rushed through Adamantine Theseus, each hit dealing severe damage.
“As long as Theseus holds a grip on the stadium floor, we’re not going to give up!” Taiki glowed a luminous aqua.
“That’s it Taiki! You’ve got this!” Paris cheered.
“So be it,” Daniel replied. “Rebound Uppercut!”
Havoc Daemon’s wing slid underneath Theseus, flinging it into the air to the point of no return.
“Uh oh,” Taiki said under his breath as Adamantine Theseus smashed into the ceiling, bursting upon impact.
“Two points to Havoc Daemon for a Burst Finish! Daniel Aziel wins with the score of 4-0!”
The crowd applauded with excitement.
“What an explosive finish! You know what this means folks, Daniel Aziel makes it into the semi-finals!”
His photo filled in a blank square alongside Roan and Xhan.
“The fourth participant will be decided in tomorrow’s battle! Until then, stay tuned!” Hanami announced.
Taiki fell to his knees as he wailed in defeat. Tears streamed out of his eyes, before he rubbed them aside.
On their way home, Toko was missing.
“Probably training again,” Charles guessed.
“You did great out there, Taiki. It takes guts to even stand near Daniel, and you held your own pretty well. So you should see this battle as a win, more than as a loss,” Paris said.
“Thanks,” Taiki smiled. “Does anyone have any beybread? I’m starving!”
“There’s the same old Taiki,” Ryota sighed.
Back at home, Paris noticed the shadows.
“It’s a ghost! I’m cursed, aren’t I?” He screamed.
“No,” they said. “Well yes, since most of us are dead, but we prefer the term Wielders of Pegasus.”
“What’s that supposed to mean?” Paris replied cluelessly.
“Each and everyone of us has used Pegasus in the past. It’s not necessarily a family heirloom, but a power,” one of them responded.
“Your Immortal Pegasus is a bey like no other. When you used your full power, you basically accessed our combined power,” another added.
“Sweet! Can I tell my friends?”
“No.”
The last bit made me laugh, haha
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - CheetoBlader - Aug. 18, 2019
(Aug. 17, 2019 1:18 AM)Sir Saitama Wrote: Chapter 23 - Daemon’s Rage! Pegasus’ Shared Power!
Last time on Beyblade Burst Zero! Toko defeats Nika and advances to the next round, where he’ll have to face his friend and rival Paris! Meanwhile, Taiki will have to hold his own against Daniel!
Paris woke up with a blast, as his light brown eyes filled with relief. He took a quick glance at his bey, Immortal Pegasus, which lay dormantly on his bedside table.
His attention shifted over to the window beside his bed. Paris unveiled the curtains, revealing a vast licorice sky littered with stars.
“It’s still night,” he thought to himself. “That means I’ll be up against Toko in a few hours.”
Paris sunk into his blue-striped bed and decided to have somewhat of a rest. However, everytime his eyes shut, a question popped into his head.
Albeit he had very strange dreams, often terrifying ones, this was like no other. Paris was almost certain that his past two were linked.
“Who were those people?”
“Is it only a dream?”
“Who and what is Nemesis?”
“What are they doing?”
“What’s next?”
And even so, he struggled to find an acceptable answer for one. Paris disliked illogical responses, but with little knowledge, that was all he had.
“No. I’m not going to let a silly little fantasy of mine corrupt me. Pull yourself together, Paris,” the boy reminded himself firmly.
Paris stared at the window with a sudden interest, and back at Immortal Pegasus.
“It’s been a while since we’ve done this.”
He slipped on his father’s old jacket and grabbed Pegasus, before leaving his Beigoman apartment.
Paris thought he saw a bunch of shadows with multicolored auras at the door, but he shook his head and exited the building.
“Looks like Gingka’s fame and power isn’t translating well to being a good teacher,” a green shadow remarked to the one below it.
“The boy thinks he knows everything about Pegasus, when he clearly can’t handle the power. Even a single attack makes him exhausted,” another added.
“Though, I can see a lot of him in you, Gingka,” a shadow with a red aura turned to another.
Paris kept a blank face as Immortal Pegasus surged through the stadium. The attack type crashed into a wall before bursting.
He was unfazed and hardly surprised, however.
“Trident’s movements are quick and natural. The same goes with Revenge, Daemon, Valkyrie and basically anyone else. So I’m going to have to do the same.”
Paris inserted Pegasus into his launcher and fired the bey into the stadium. He pulled his launcher with a significantly stronger tug than usual.
“Alright. You got this Pegasus!” Paris exclaimed enthusiastically. Much to his confusion and frustration, the attack type whirled around the stadium multiple times before it crashed into the stadium and burst again.
“W-where did I go wrong?” Paris fell to his knees. He looked up at the early morning sky, which marked a new day - the day that he’d battle Toko.
Paris returned his undivided attention back to the stadium.
“One last try. This time... it’s going to be different.”
“Let it rip!”
Immortal Pegasus zoomed through the stadium at incredible speeds, hurling wind everywhere.
The boy zoned out into an empty white abyss, with a red button in front of him. Whenever he reached for it, it teleported behind him.
The group of shadows from earlier appeared. They said in unison,
“Paris Hagane. Tapping into your true potential is like pressing that button. If you can manage to do so..”
They left the sentence there. Paris knew why - it was for him to complete.
“LET’S DO THIS!” He yelled with passion.
The boy lunged forward, and used the other arm to reach behind him. It left a lot of strain on his muscles and it hurt like crazy.
Nonetheless, Paris was a lot of things. Someone who backed down wasn’t one of them.
“IMMORTAL SLASH!” Paris bellowed as he destroyed the button, the landscape shattered like broken glass.
Paris emitted a gold aura as a sharp blue lightning sparked out of him.
“Full power!”
Immortal Pegasus loomed around the stadium so fast it became invisible to the naked eye.
Paris was extremely exhausted from using his full power, and collapsed, passed out cold. Pegasus did the same, and stopped spinning before bursting.
A few hours later
“Oh my God Valkyrie! He’s dead!” Taiki shouted, as everyone gave him an irritated glare.
“Paris? You there?” Charles shook him.
He opened his light brown eyes.
“I-I think so,” he replied as everyone shared a laugh.
Aiga helped him up. “So, mind telling us what was going on?”
Paris rubbed his eyes. “I did some training.”
“Well I hope you can run. The battles are about to start!” Toko shouted before heading off.
“Lucky me,” Paris groaned before chasing after him.
The boys arrived at the WBBA building.
“Good luck out there!” Aiga said, as Charles, Ryota walked with him to the seats.
Toko seemed to be leaving, as he walked alone through the hallway.
“Toko? Where are you going?” Paris asked.
The light-blue haired boy turned around.
“Until the battle’s over, we’re rivals. Don’t you hold back, because I have been training for weeks!”
“What a weird kid,” Taiki muttered.
The two walked toward the waiting room, where they saw Daniel lifting weights.
“You’re up against him. Do you think you’re gonna be fine?” Paris looked worried.
“Yeah. Don’t worry, because Theseus and I are going to win.” Taiki smiled.
Hanami got out of his seat and double tapped the microphone.
“Hey all you bladers! Today’s going to be a special one, so grab your popcorn because you’re in for a ride!”
An overhead spotlight fixed on one of the metal doors which creaked open.
“Our first competitor is Taiki Igarashi, the king of storms!”
His aqua dreads were tied up in a ponytail. The crowd roared like a bunch of wild lions.
“And against him is the Dark Dragon! Some call him the new Lui, and he’s Daniel Aziel!”
Daniel was silent as ever.
“Listen here. You may think you’re the best and that you’re going to win, and that’s your major flaw,” Taiki boomed. “So don’t you dare underestimate me, because I’m stronger than before!”
“Pathetic. If you’re only in here to make motivational speeches, then leave. ‘Cuz when I’m done with you, you’re not going to have any left,” Daniel remarked.
The noise died off quickly.
“Wow! This battle hasn’t already started and the tensions are high!” Hanami said excitedly.
Taiki absolutely hated people like Daniel. He almost wanted to punch him, but he decided to let his bey do the fighting.
He flipped the Crown frame upside down, making the jagged points exposed.
Daniel put his launcher away and held Havoc Daemon in his hand.
“I’ll win this with a hand spin.”
“Ready, set!”
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!”
“Let it rip!”
Havoc Daemon was wobbling unstably. Meanwhile, Adamantine Theseus rushed down for an early attack.
“If I can attack him early, then he’ll at least be out of stamina,” Taiki strategized.
“Now’s our chance Theseus! Adamantine Blade!”
The prongs on the Ultimate Reboot driver retracted, giving the bey a massive increase in speed.
Theseus came rushing down with its spiky, jagged side. Daemon was only a few inches away.
“Dodge it,” Daniel commanded effortlessly.
Havoc Daemon moved just enough to get out of the way.
“N-no way!” Paris’ jaw dropped from the waiting room.
“Take this! Adamantine Barrage Fury!”
Theseus rushed through Daemon, giving it no chance of escaping. The dragon attack type was running out of stamina, but Daniel was the least concerned out of everyone.
“You’re really getting on my nerves,” the Dark Dragon responded. Havoc Daemon broke free from Theseus’ grasp.
“It’s nothing personal. You’re just not worthy,” Daniel added. “I’ll make it nice and quick! Demolish Break!”
Havoc Daemon lowered into its driver, building energy into speed.
“After him, Theseus!” Taiki ordered, but there was no use.
Daemon erupted through the stadium and rode up the stadium walls, flinging itself into the air.
“Lights out! Rebirth Dive!” Daniel thundered.
The attack type ripped through the air, leaving a violent gust of wind that pushed both bladers back.
“Look out, Theseus!” Taiki warned. Fortunately, it rolled back just in time.
Both Theseus and Daemon were running out of stamina.
“It’s a shame. So many bladers think they’re strong, but this it all that happens..”
Daniel clicked his fingers and Adamantine Theseus burst instantly.
“Two points to Havoc Daemon for a Burst Finish! The score is now 2-0!” The referee declared.
“What a dramatic finish! Daniel scores himself a burst finish with nothing but a hand spin!” Hanami reported.
Daniel pulled out his red and black string launcher from his pocket.
“Y-you’re using a launcher?” Taiki asked with surprise.
“Let’s be honest. Either way, I’d win,” Daniel replied.
“Ready, set!”
“Three!”
“Two!”
“One!”
“Let it rip!”
Theseus kept its distance from Daemon and raced around the outer rim of the stadium.
“Now Daemon! Crush it!”
The dark bey rushed through Adamantine Theseus, each hit dealing severe damage.
“As long as Theseus holds a grip on the stadium floor, we’re not going to give up!” Taiki glowed a luminous aqua.
“That’s it Taiki! You’ve got this!” Paris cheered.
“So be it,” Daniel replied. “Rebound Uppercut!”
Havoc Daemon’s wing slid underneath Theseus, flinging it into the air to the point of no return.
“Uh oh,” Taiki said under his breath as Adamantine Theseus smashed into the ceiling, bursting upon impact.
“Two points to Havoc Daemon for a Burst Finish! Daniel Aziel wins with the score of 4-0!”
The crowd applauded with excitement.
“What an explosive finish! You know what this means folks, Daniel Aziel makes it into the semi-finals!”
His photo filled in a blank square alongside Roan and Xhan.
“The fourth participant will be decided in tomorrow’s battle! Until then, stay tuned!” Hanami announced.
Taiki fell to his knees as he wailed in defeat. Tears streamed out of his eyes, before he rubbed them aside.
On their way home, Toko was missing.
“Probably training again,” Charles guessed.
“You did great out there, Taiki. It takes guts to even stand near Daniel, and you held your own pretty well. So you should see this battle as a win, more than as a loss,” Paris said.
“Thanks,” Taiki smiled. “Does anyone have any beybread? I’m starving!”
“There’s the same old Taiki,” Ryota sighed.
Back at home, Paris noticed the shadows.
“It’s a ghost! I’m cursed, aren’t I?” He screamed.
“No,” they said. “Well yes, since most of us are dead, but we prefer the term Wielders of Pegasus.”
“What’s that supposed to mean?” Paris replied cluelessly.
“Each and everyone of us has used Pegasus in the past. It’s not necessarily a family heirloom, but a power,” one of them responded.
“Your Immortal Pegasus is a bey like no other. When you used your full power, you basically accessed our combined power,” another added.
“Sweet! Can I tell my friends?”
“No.”
I leave for two days and this is what happens. Great chapter! That ending is hilarious ?!
RE: Beyblade Burst Zero - Sir Saitama - Sep. 13, 2019
Next chapter’s coming out soon!
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