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RE: The Blader's spirit - DARK RAINBOW - Mar. 01, 2012
I think it's pretty good except, us readers don't know alot about the main character, so when we first read it we're like: "what is going on?" Just keep trying and i'm sure you'll be a great author some day.
And i think the people who are saying it's trash should try to critis in a more gentle way.
RE: The Blader's spirit - nationsbeyblade - Mar. 01, 2012
yeah but xxron is noe my editor and michaels history is a mystery....FOR NOW!
RE: The Blader's spirit - Luck - Mar. 02, 2012
Yep, Unless i reveal it... lol, joke!
RE: The Blader's spirit - nationsbeyblade - Mar. 02, 2012
dont give spoilers
RE: The Blader's spirit - XXaron - Mar. 03, 2012
I'm SO sorry for not editing it... I just had so much school work, so that kept me from doing it...
I'm working on it now, just so yuo know. It should be up at least by sunday.
RE: The Blader's spirit - rockleone7778 - Mar. 03, 2012
Hey ur story was great i liked it and i can't wait to read more
RE: The Blader's spirit - nationsbeyblade - Mar. 03, 2012
thanks xxaron
also rock leone thank u
RE: The Blader's spirit - nationsbeyblade - Mar. 04, 2012
thnx to everyone 4 the ideas but i cant take any more requests
RE: The Blader's spirit - thehawks80 - Mar. 04, 2012
Hey dude the hawks is my username what a coincidence or it is something more than that ?????
RE: The Blader's spirit - nationsbeyblade - Mar. 04, 2012
dunnp the hawks was named after my hometown HAWKinge
RE: The Blader's spirit - Luck - Mar. 05, 2012
yeah. named after hawkinge, but naming a blading team hawkinge would suck . . .
RE: The Blader's spirit - nationsbeyblade - Mar. 05, 2012
yeah blad (i is gansta)
RE: The Blader's spirit - Luck - Mar. 05, 2012
yeah man , i is gonna pwn u in bladin' blad
RE: The Blader's spirit - nationsbeyblade - Mar. 05, 2012
thats bull
RE: The Blader's spirit - Luck - Mar. 05, 2012
o' really?
come on en'
RE: The Blader's spirit - nationsbeyblade - Mar. 06, 2012
bring it (wat were we talking about?)
RE: The Blader's spirit - XXaron - Mar. 06, 2012
Nations, you can go ahead and post the unedited chapter, I got a lot to do, including school.
WEhich means no comp time, which means no editing for me.
I can post the unedited version, if you want.
RE: The Blader's spirit - nationsbeyblade - Mar. 06, 2012
its ok i will post the unedited version good luck with school (i know how u feel)
RE: The Blader's spirit - nationsbeyblade - Mar. 07, 2012
the next chapter will be posted on friday
RE: The Blader's spirit - Luck - Mar. 08, 2012
It's good, but needs some editing, plus it's quite short...
RE: The Blader's spirit - nationsbeyblade - Mar. 08, 2012
yeah............i know
RE: The Blader's spirit - Luck - Mar. 08, 2012
If XXaron's busy i can always help out .
RE: The Blader's spirit - XXaron - Mar. 10, 2012
Sorry, I just got back form a field trip, I almost have the chapter done, only a little more editing.
My story is suffering due to all my projects (A comic on one forum, trying to get my Youtube channel set up, school, helping with this story).
But it makes me happy helping people out.
RE: The Blader's spirit - nationsbeyblade - Mar. 10, 2012
thanks man you is epic!
RE: The Blader's spirit - Flameos - Mar. 11, 2012
hey make me a charactor
name: flare a 13 year old boy, hair is fiery red, green eyes and has a comment about everything
bey: flame virgo sw145 ES, special moves: knockout blast, magnitude shock, and burn cyclone
everything about him is either funny or happy it takes a whole lot to p him off