(Dec. 09, 2017  2:23 AM)Eleanor Wrote: Those who cannot play instruments...Can only send their voices...then we will play the instruments by matching ur voices...

(Dec. 09, 2017  2:25 AM)Ayane_2355 Wrote:

(Dec. 09, 2017  2:23 AM)Eleanor Wrote: Those who cannot play instruments...Can only send their voices...then we will play the instruments by matching ur voices...

Well, first we'll need to set a tone for the song, so that whoever decides to sing it can sing it appropriately. But, anyone who can sing can do it really. So, your idea is best.

(Dec. 09, 2017  2:35 AM)Dragunix Wrote: Btw how would I upload a voice recording

(Dec. 09, 2017  1:14 AM)AwesomeKid20094 Wrote:

(Dec. 08, 2017  4:23 PM)MWF Wrote: I apologize for taking so long but I was sick. here is the first draft of chapter 8, the start of the tournament.

Vis and the rest of Double threat walk into the stadium building. Turns out they were up first. The team they were against first almost looked like a last second entry, Their strongest blader was a short kid with an interesting beyblade. Vis is sent up to take the first point. Their strongest blader meets him at the stadium. Vis and the blader exchange beyblades to inspect them, Vis taps it with his finger and then his posture hints curiosity. The two bladers return each others beys and get ready to launch. Vis does his test launch and they launch and the opposing beyblade bounces up and lands on Sonar the moment it gets to the center and knocks Sonar away while bouncing again. "M2.1.Q," says Vis, "Rolling counter." Sonar tilts onto the slope of its driver and when it gets hit by an attack it starts to roll then turns around and hits M2 back. This causes M2 to slam into the wall and loose a lot of spin and click twice. When M2 falls to the center it is met by the accel frame and bursts. The referee says, "iris Sonar wins by burst finish. The score is 2 to zero, one point for Double threat."

Next up was Zac and greeting him at the stadium was a tall girl with a pink J2.H.Be. Zac and the girl inspect each others beys and then get ready to battle. Zac sets lyric Areos to defence mode and tilts his launcher. They launch and the ring of spikes on Aeros' driver accelerates it into the other beyblade and due to the low friction the J2 gets knocked out. "lyric Areos wins by ring out finish, the score is one to zero." said the referee as they get ready to launch again. This time Zac holds his launcher flat and intercepts the J2 at the center and keeps knocking it away. The stamina of the J2 won. The referee says, "jail Jornanmad wins by survivor finish, the score is One to One." Zac switches to attack mode and tilts his launcher. They launch and after a wind up Aeros bursts the J2 with a strong attack. The referee says, "lyric Aeros wins by burst finish, the score is three to one. one point for Double threat."

Kioke chooses to go next but gets hit by a sneaky burst by the M2. Lily reassures Kioke that it wasn't his fault and goes up against a black and gold L2.7B.U. The two bladers launch and Themis who is tilted on the side of bearing to do the pendulum launch rocks up and down the stadium in a arc, intercepting the L2 and knocking it away into the wall bursting it. The referee says, "just Themis wins by burst finish, the score is Two to Zero. Final point for Double Threat. Double threat is the winner of this round.

After congratulating each other the team goes to watch the rest round one. Vis listens into the battles and is interested in the Match between Heavenly Triagram and Sunbat United. Something about the beyblade called Dragoon makes it quite interesting.


any feedback?

who is the kid ._.

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(Dec. 08, 2017  2:59 AM)Dragunix Wrote: Note: This will resemble Japanese opening themes more, with more prominent adjectives rather than nouns or verbs, so it may sound weird to a person who listens to dub openings more often. Reader Beware of the "triggering qualities" of this draft...

The roaring clash fills the air! (Hageshī shōtotsu ga kūki o mitasu!)

As two fierce souls fight through the air! (Ni-Ri no hageshī tamashī ga kūki no naka o tatakaimasu!)

Beyblade! S-Revolution! S-Revolution! Endless Evolution! (x2) (Beiburēdo! S-Kakumei! S-Kakumei! Mugen no Shinka! (x2))

As the feet of my friends accompany me, the darkness draws near (Watashi no yūjin-tachi no ashi ga watashi ni zuihan surunode, kurayami ga chikaku ni hika remasu)

Overwhelming silence, nothing to hear, but all to fear... (Attōtekina chinmoku, kikoeru koto wa arimasenga, kyōfu no subete...)

In the smog there is nothing to lose... (Sumoggu de ushinau mono wa nanimonai...)

But throught the light of unity, we break through! Break through! (Shikashi, danketsu no hikari o kayotte, watashitachiha kowaremasu! Bureikusurū!)

[Chorus]
Beyblade! Beyblade Burst! We stand united through the night and day! (Beiburēdo! Beiburēdobāsuto! Watashitachi wa yoru to tsuitachi o tōshite danketsu shite imasu!)

With our miracle, we claim victory! (Watashitachi no kiseki de, watashitachiha shōri o shuchō shimasu!)

Even through despair, our hope leads the way! (Zetsubō o tōshite sae, watashitachi no kibō wa michi o rīdo suru!)

Our strength braves the darkest of things!  (Watashitachi no tsuyomi wa, mottomo kurai mono ni yūkandesu!)

With our bonds and hope the gate of light draws near! (Watashitachi no kizuna to kibō ni yotte,-kō no mon ga chikaku ni hika remasu!)

Bey-bey-beyblade! Bey-Bey-Beyblade! Bey--Beyblade, S-Revolution! (x2) (Beibībeiburēdo! Bey - Bey - Beyblade! Bey - Beyblade, S - revu~oryūshon! (x2))

3, 2, 1...GO SHOOT! (3, 2, 1...Go Shuuto!)

Btw, most of this is Google Translate...plz don't freak out...idk any Japanese ok???

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rip...rip...play the airhorn for me...

noice.
I am trying not to freak out on the japenese, can't even pronounce it ._.

(Dec. 09, 2017  4:43 AM)Dragunix Wrote: It was meant to rhyme with the next line...

But if it doesn't work, please recommend another lyric... whatever needed to make it better...it sounds even jankier and abrupt in Japanese lol

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Stupid google translate...

(Dec. 09, 2017  5:23 AM)Eleanor Wrote:

(Dec. 09, 2017  4:43 AM)Dragunix Wrote: It was meant to rhyme with the next line...

But if it doesn't work, please recommend another lyric... whatever needed to make it better...it sounds even jankier and abrupt in Japanese lol

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Stupid google translate...

well...The tunes r almost ready...for me it seems rock + a little pleasant version of music...I will try to send it to ayane...First I will send the keyboard version then I will send the voice version...this way it will be a lot easier...

(Dec. 09, 2017  5:24 AM)Ayane_2355 Wrote:

(Dec. 09, 2017  5:23 AM)Eleanor Wrote: well...The tunes r almost ready...for me it seems rock + a little pleasant version of music...I will try to send it to ayane...First I will send the keyboard version then I will send the voice version...this way it will be a lot easier...

If you can figure out how to send it to me, please do! I will post it here anyway I can! And, I can't wait to hear it!

(Dec. 09, 2017  6:55 AM)Dragunix Wrote: But I need to know what changes you  made to the lyrics to change them to your refined version...

(Dec. 09, 2017  2:56 PM)Alexa C H Wrote: I have also made a tune? How should I get it to you guys?

(Dec. 09, 2017  3:37 PM)Eleanor Wrote:

(Dec. 09, 2017  2:56 PM)Alexa C H Wrote: I have also made a tune? How should I get it to you guys?

do U have anyother social network accounts???

(Dec. 09, 2017  2:23 AM)Eleanor Wrote: Those who cannot play instruments...Can only send their voices...then we will play the instruments by matching ur voices...

(Dec. 09, 2017  11:15 PM)AwesomeKid20094 Wrote:

(Dec. 09, 2017  3:37 PM)Eleanor Wrote: do U have anyother social network accounts???

I have gmail so does Dragunix.

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(Dec. 09, 2017  2:23 AM)Eleanor Wrote: Those who cannot play instruments...Can only send their voices...then we will play the instruments by matching ur voices...

And I can play the recorder, i just need to read notes, can someone make notes

(Dec. 10, 2017  6:07 AM)Alexa C H Wrote: I don't have any other social networking account of my own except this one and discord.