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RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) *Bey Contest* - EarthHelios - Nov. 04, 2020

(Nov. 04, 2020  3:53 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Lucifer Destruction Wh² Mb' Description

Ooh that is a nice upgrade for Lucifer


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) *Bey Contest* - DeltaZakuro - Nov. 04, 2020

(Nov. 04, 2020  3:54 PM)EarthHelios Wrote:
(Nov. 04, 2020  3:53 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Lucifer Destruction Wh² Mb' Description

Ooh that is a nice upgrade for Lucifer
thanks.

it will indeed be a strong one too! >:)


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) *Bey Contest* - EarthHelios - Nov. 04, 2020

(Nov. 04, 2020  4:04 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote:
(Nov. 04, 2020  3:54 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: Ooh that is a nice upgrade for Lucifer
thanks.

it will indeed be a strong one too! >Smile

Its kinda funny the fact that the Wheel Mobius combo was used for Uranus. But here you made a upgrade to it


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) *Bey Contest* - 6Jupiter5 - Nov. 04, 2020

(Nov. 04, 2020  3:53 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Lucifer Destruction Wh² Mb' Description

I disagree with the limit break. It should’ve been the barrier or something of the sort.


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) *Bey Contest* - DeltaZakuro - Nov. 04, 2020

(Nov. 04, 2020  4:05 PM)EarthHelios Wrote:
(Nov. 04, 2020  4:04 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: thanks.

it will indeed be a strong one too! >Smile

Its kinda funny the fact that the Wheel Mobius combo was used for Uranus. But here you made a upgrade to it

Callback, am i right?!

(Nov. 04, 2020  4:06 PM)6Jupiter5 Wrote:
(Nov. 04, 2020  3:53 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Lucifer Destruction Wh² Mb' Description

I disagree with the limit break. It should’ve been the barrier or something of the sort.

thats what the gimmick is supposed to be, just a little bit different.

with how far the blades stick out, Lucifer almost becomes a 100% perfect circle with a ton of weight to increase its defense so a barrier on top of all that would just be a little overkill


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) *Bey Contest* - EarthHelios - Nov. 04, 2020

(Nov. 04, 2020  4:10 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote:
(Nov. 04, 2020  4:05 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: Its kinda funny the fact that the Wheel Mobius combo was used for Uranus. But here you made a upgrade to it

Callback, am i right?!

(Nov. 04, 2020  4:06 PM)6Jupiter5 Wrote: I disagree with the limit break. It should’ve been the barrier or something of the sort.

thats what the gimmick is supposed to be, just a little bit different.

with how far the blades stick out, Lucifer almost becomes a 100% perfect circle with a ton of weight to increase its defense so a barrier on top of all that would just be a little overkill

I sense another Dread Bahamut here.


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) *Bey Contest* - 6Jupiter5 - Nov. 04, 2020

(Nov. 04, 2020  4:10 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote:
(Nov. 04, 2020  4:05 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: Its kinda funny the fact that the Wheel Mobius combo was used for Uranus. But here you made a upgrade to it

Callback, am i right?!

(Nov. 04, 2020  4:06 PM)6Jupiter5 Wrote: I disagree with the limit break. It should’ve been the barrier or something of the sort.

thats what the gimmick is supposed to be, just a little bit different.

with how far the blades stick out, Lucifer almost becomes a 100% perfect circle with a ton of weight to increase its defense so a barrier on top of all that would just be a little overkill

I don’t know, but Lucifer without the barrier isn’t Lucifer, it’s like taking Fafnir’s rubber or Achilles’s two blades away.


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) *Bey Contest* - DeltaZakuro - Nov. 04, 2020

(Nov. 04, 2020  4:11 PM)EarthHelios Wrote:
(Nov. 04, 2020  4:10 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Callback, am i right?!


thats what the gimmick is supposed to be, just a little bit different.

with how far the blades stick out, Lucifer almost becomes a 100% perfect circle with a ton of weight to increase its defense so a barrier on top of all that would just be a little overkill

I sense another Dread Bahamut here.

dont worry there wont be a Destruction Vertical XD

(Nov. 04, 2020  4:12 PM)6Jupiter5 Wrote:
(Nov. 04, 2020  4:10 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Callback, am i right?!


thats what the gimmick is supposed to be, just a little bit different.

with how far the blades stick out, Lucifer almost becomes a 100% perfect circle with a ton of weight to increase its defense so a barrier on top of all that would just be a little overkill

I don’t know, but Lucifer without the barrier isn’t Lucifer, it’s like taking Fafnir’s rubber or Achilles’s two blades away.

i can understand that, the wings pretty much IS the barrier in a sense.


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) *Bey Contest* - EarthHelios - Nov. 04, 2020

Lucifer in the anime: Im so strong
Lucifer irl: I am so weak
Hasbro: Your gonna be named Pain


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) *Bey Contest* - 6Jupiter5 - Nov. 04, 2020

(Nov. 04, 2020  4:16 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote:
(Nov. 04, 2020  4:11 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: I sense another Dread Bahamut here.

dont worry there wont be a Destruction Vertical XD

(Nov. 04, 2020  4:12 PM)6Jupiter5 Wrote: I don’t know, but Lucifer without the barrier isn’t Lucifer, it’s like taking Fafnir’s rubber or Achilles’s two blades away.

i can understand that, the wings pretty much IS the barrier in a sense.

Not really, Lucifer becomes a perfect circle, but this is not a barrier as the og barrier protrudes from the ring, extending the range and preventing contact to the ring. This is not the case as the barrier here doesn’t prevent contact to the ring, and instead becomes a part of the ring which isn’t the point of Lucifer’s barrier. In conclusion this gimmick shouldn’t be on Lucifer as the barrier is what made it special in the first place.


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) *Bey Contest* - DeltaZakuro - Nov. 04, 2020

(Nov. 04, 2020  4:23 PM)6Jupiter5 Wrote:
(Nov. 04, 2020  4:16 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: dont worry there wont be a Destruction Vertical XD


i can understand that, the wings pretty much IS the barrier in a sense.

Not really, Lucifer becomes a perfect circle, but this is not a barrier as the og barrier protrudes from the ring, extending the range and preventing contact to the ring. This is not the case as the barrier here doesn’t prevent contact to the ring, and instead becomes a part of the ring which isn’t the point of Lucifer’s barrier. In conclusion this gimmick shouldn’t be on Lucifer as the barrier is what made it special in the first place.

for that to work, i would have to either re-use 2D (was originally my intention before i decided on bringing in Limit Break) or make a new Chassis with 2D's gimmick.

im sorry but i just dont see how the same barrier gimmick for 2D could be implemented into the Ring.

unless you can give me a logical explanation on how a barrier that works like 2D can be implemented into Destruction, then LcD's current gimmick will stay the way it is now.


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) *Bey Contest* - The Blacknight - Nov. 04, 2020

(Nov. 04, 2020  4:12 PM)6Jupiter5 Wrote:
(Nov. 04, 2020  4:10 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Callback, am i right?!


thats what the gimmick is supposed to be, just a little bit different.

with how far the blades stick out, Lucifer almost becomes a 100% perfect circle with a ton of weight to increase its defense so a barrier on top of all that would just be a little overkill

I don’t know, but Lucifer without the barrier isn’t Lucifer, it’s like taking Fafnir’s rubber or Achilles’s two blades away.

*cough*hasbro*cough*


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) *Bey Contest* - EarthHelios - Nov. 04, 2020

(Nov. 04, 2020  5:40 PM)The Blacknight Wrote:
(Nov. 04, 2020  4:12 PM)6Jupiter5 Wrote: I don’t know, but Lucifer without the barrier isn’t Lucifer, it’s like taking Fafnir’s rubber or Achilles’s two blades away.

*cough*hasbro*cough*

Man Lucius is about to be a pain


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) *Bey Contest* - 6Jupiter5 - Nov. 04, 2020

(Nov. 04, 2020  5:37 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote:
(Nov. 04, 2020  4:23 PM)6Jupiter5 Wrote: Not really, Lucifer becomes a perfect circle, but this is not a barrier as the og barrier protrudes from the ring, extending the range and preventing contact to the ring. This is not the case as the barrier here doesn’t prevent contact to the ring, and instead becomes a part of the ring which isn’t the point of Lucifer’s barrier. In conclusion this gimmick shouldn’t be on Lucifer as the barrier is what made it special in the first place.

for that to work, i would have to either re-use 2D (was originally my intention before i decided on bringing in Limit Break) or make a new Chassis with 2D's gimmick.

im sorry but i just dont see how the same barrier gimmick for 2D could be implemented into the Ring.

unless you can give me a logical explanation on how a barrier that works like 2D can be implemented into Destruction, then LcD's current gimmick will stay the way it is now.

What you can do is have centrifugal force blades much like Variares. Instead of having the pink parts extend to align the ring, the centrifugal force will extend it past the ring alignment. It’s really a simple fix.


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) *Bey Contest* - The Blacknight - Nov. 04, 2020

(Nov. 04, 2020  5:37 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote:
(Nov. 04, 2020  4:23 PM)6Jupiter5 Wrote: Not really, Lucifer becomes a perfect circle, but this is not a barrier as the og barrier protrudes from the ring, extending the range and preventing contact to the ring. This is not the case as the barrier here doesn’t prevent contact to the ring, and instead becomes a part of the ring which isn’t the point of Lucifer’s barrier. In conclusion this gimmick shouldn’t be on Lucifer as the barrier is what made it special in the first place.

for that to work, i would have to either re-use 2D (was originally my intention before i decided on bringing in Limit Break) or make a new Chassis with 2D's gimmick.

im sorry but i just dont see how the same barrier gimmick for 2D could be implemented into the Ring.

unless you can give me a logical explanation on how a barrier that works like 2D can be implemented into Destruction, then LcD's current gimmick will stay the way it is now.

What if it had a limit break chassis that extended and became a perfect circle? Sort of like Dread/Arc Bahmut's gimmick but only in the chassis, but it extended like beat Kukulcan? the shape could be like ratchet before and the proof frame after, and it would extend enough that the barrier would not make a lot of contact before, but most of the contact after. just a thought


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) *Bey Contest* - 6Jupiter5 - Nov. 04, 2020

Checkmate DeltaZakuro


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) *Bey Contest* - DeltaZakuro - Nov. 04, 2020

Me: *makes ANY kind of custom bey*
people replying to this thread: Ackshually-




RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) *Bey Contest* - EarthHelios - Nov. 04, 2020

(Nov. 04, 2020  6:02 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Me: *makes ANY kind of custom bey*
people replying to this thread: Ackshually-


I found a name similar to this


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) *Bey Contest* - 6Jupiter5 - Nov. 04, 2020

(Nov. 04, 2020  6:02 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Me: *makes ANY kind of custom bey*
people replying to this thread: Ackshually-


Well actually



RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) *Bey Contest* - DeltaZakuro - Nov. 04, 2020

currently at school, when i get home i'll start finishing up on Chapter 5 and will hopefully (keyword: HOPEFULLY) have it out by friday or someday on the weekend.


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) *Bey Contest* - EarthHelios - Nov. 04, 2020

(Nov. 04, 2020  7:43 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: currently at school, when i get home i'll start finishing up on Chapter 5 and will hopefully (keyword: HOPEFULLY) have it out by friday or someday on the weekend.

People have to understand school is a important thing in life


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) *Bey Contest* - TwistedWerewolf - Nov. 04, 2020

(Nov. 04, 2020  5:40 PM)The Blacknight Wrote:
(Nov. 04, 2020  4:12 PM)6Jupiter5 Wrote: I don’t know, but Lucifer without the barrier isn’t Lucifer, it’s like taking Fafnir’s rubber or Achilles’s two blades away.

*cough*hasbro*cough*

I got rick rolled. *Sigh*

Curiosity took over :<


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) *Bey Contest* - The Blacknight - Nov. 04, 2020

(Nov. 04, 2020  7:54 PM)TwistedWerewolf Wrote:
(Nov. 04, 2020  5:40 PM)The Blacknight Wrote: *cough*hasbro*cough*

I got rick rolled. *Sigh*

you too lmao


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) *Bey Contest* - EarthHelios - Nov. 04, 2020

I wonder if Athena will be affected by lane's flare


RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) *Bey Contest* - DeltaZakuro - Nov. 04, 2020

(Nov. 04, 2020  7:56 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: I wonder if Athena will be affected by lane's flare

possibly.