RE: Beyblade Burst: Destiny! (Character Contest) - GenesisBlader - Aug. 11, 2021
(Aug. 11, 2021 1:37 PM)PinkRose Wrote: (Aug. 11, 2021 12:59 AM)GenesisBlader Wrote: hello guys so as we are getting in the 2nd arc new characters will be popping up like popcorn in a microwave.
So uh, when’s the deadline for entries? Sadly I don’t have the device I use for typing profiles this week, meaning I might take a while if I do participate.
oh, the deadline is OH SHOOT I HAVE SCHOOL NEXT MONDAY uh the deadline is next sunday
RE: Beyblade Burst: Destiny! (Character Contest) - LegendJustice - Aug. 11, 2021
(Aug. 11, 2021 4:11 PM)LJ-Blader Wrote: - Name: Kai Sho
- Age: 13
- Gender: Male
- Height: 6’1”
- Hair Color: Orange
- Eye Color: Gold with red
- Characteristics: Japanese-American that moved to America when he was little. Wears a red shirt with a fire work on it and his family logo in the front. His shorts are khaki cargo shorts, he always wear flip flops.
- Personality: Excited pretty much all the time, but can also be very sarcastic to the point where it might be considered rude. He loves blading and his fire in side will never fade. His family owns a fire work shop.
- Beyblade: Spark Kraken Wheel Bang Flash + Explosion
- Type: Attack
- Spin Direction: Right
- Parts
Spark: Looks like Red Cyclone with the blades far out and the sloped arenas have spikes like hollow.
Kraken: The Japanese wingless dragon
Wheel
Bang: Rise with Xtreme’s tip
Flash: A bind the increases attack power by putting weight on the blades
Explosion: An infinity excess that creates high explosive attacks.
- Moves
Spark Strike: Hits the opponent with its blade
Sparking Upper: Hits the opponent up in the air trying for an hover finish
Spark Claw: Hits the opponent with its spikes
Big Bang: Hits the opponent as hard as he can sending them into the wall
Flash Whip: Hits the opponent with a whip like motion
Explosion Force: Creates an Explosion that send the opponent flying
Explosive Finally: Hits the bey repeatedly with explosion force not letting it leave the center of the stadium.
why does Kai sound so familiar...... Oh well nice entry
GenesisBlader okay I went and edited my entry so you can check that out
RE: Beyblade Burst: Destiny! (Character Contest) - GenesisBlader - Aug. 11, 2021
Episode 8 has began to brawl...
Beyblade Burst: Destiny
Episode 8
Destiny Vs. Dynamite!
(Inside Bell's mansion)
Gaele: Agh... I guess we lost...
Hazel: Hey, at least we put up a fair fight!
Suji: Yeah! You were giving Bell a run for his money!
Valt: Mhm!
Gaele: Well... you guys are right! I'll challenge him again and totally win-
Valt: Whoa whoa, hold your horses! If you dive in for another match without any preparations, you'll just lose again!
Gaele: I guess your right... time for some training!
Suji: That's the spirit!
(Meanwhile, in Bell's workshop...)
Bell: UGH! I just can't get it off of my mind!
(His grandfather, Jingemon Daikokuten, would come over to confort him)
Jingemon: What's the matter, Bell? You seem a bit... unnerved.
Bell: Sorry gramps, it's just something about the battle I did earlier...
(Flashback!)
Gaele: NOW IT'S TIME!! GAELEM!!
(Then, he'd have another flashback)
Bell: We're winning this! BELIAL!!
(The flashback would end)
Bell: Tch!
(At Bell's training area)
Gaele: I don't even know if this'll help me win...
Hazel: Don't worry, it will!
Suji: ...right Valt?
Valt: Of course! Me and Valkyrie used to do this all the time!
Gaele: Huh? What's is it?
Valt: Well, me and Valkyrie talk to each other and bond on a whole other level!
Gaele: ...You've gotta be kidding me.
Suji: Yeah Valt, even that's a bit strange on your end.
Valt: *chuckles* No, it really works! You've gotta trust in Gaelem all the way!
Gaele: Trust in Gaelem...
(Gaelem would then shine brightly, then bring Gaele into the avatar realm)
Gaele: Gaelem... it's you again.
Gaelem: Yes. I brought you here to tell me: What's on your mind right now?
Gaele: Winning against Bell, that's what's on my mind.
Gaelem: Gaele, you shouldn't focus on winning all the time.
Gaele: Wait, what?
Gaelem: Focus on me. Burst all of your emotions into a blazing aura.
Gaele: You mean-
Gaelem: Yes. Trust in me all the way, and we can win the battle in the end.
Gaele: ...Thanks, Gaelem! I'll totally trust in you, and we'll burst everyone into overdrive together!
Gaelem: I will be trusting in you as well.
Gaele: Gaelem-
(Gaele would exit the avatar world)
Suji: Hello? Gaele? You there?
Hazel: What's happening to him?
Valt: I dunno-
Gaele: AGH! Oh, hey guys!
Valt, Suji, and Hazel: What happened?!?
Gaele: Well, it was totally awesome! Gaelem was there, we talked and it was so cool!
Hazel: Really?
Valt: Nice job Gaele! That was bonding!
Gaele: WOW! Amazing!
Suji: Alright then, let's get to training!
Gaele: Yeah!
Gaele, Suji, Hazel, and Valt: Three, two, one! Let it... RIP!!
(Meanwhile, at Bell's workshop)
Bell: I'm not... gonna lose!
(He'd say, doing push-ups)
(Timeskip to when everyone was done training)
Valt: Alright Gaele, your totally ready to take on Bell!
Suji: Mhm! Show 'em who's boss!
Hazel: Right!
Gaele: Thanks guys... I'll totally defeat Bell!
(The words "Defeat Bell!" would echo across the room, alarming Bell. Then, Bell would jump from a ledge and into the training/battling room)
Bell: Oh? I see your planning to defeat the Demon King, eh?
Gaele: Yeah! And I'll totally succeed with my incredible strategy!
Hazel: Wait, he doesn't have a strategy-
Valt: Hold on, he might have something up his sleeve...
Bell: Alright then, let's see who'll win! (He'd say, flicking his cape to his left)
(Gaele, Bell, and Hazel would go over to the stadium)
Hazel: I'll be ref! (She'd say, going over to the ref area)
Gaele (Mind): Due to how heavy Belial is, a good upper attack will knock it off balance and earn me the victory!
Bell (Mind): I'm not gonna let Gaele win this... let's go, Belial!
(Bell's battle aura would flare up like a fierce bonfire)
Gaele: Let's do this, Gaelem!
(Gaele's battle aura would flare up like an erupting volcano)
Hazel (Mind): Whoa... this is so... exciting!
(Gaele would switch to Wide Mode, while Bell would switch to Low Mode)
Hazel: First battle! Ready, and set!
Everyone: Three! Two! One!
Gaele and Bell: Let it... RIP!!!!
(Gaele would pull off a fierce Destiny Shoot, while Bell would pull off an explosive shoot)
Gaele: Gaelem, knock it outta there!
Bell: Take the hit, Belial!
(Belial would absorb the hit using the F Gear, redirecting Gaelem into the wall)
Gaele: *Gasps*
Bell: Heh!
Valt: I forgot... Belial's F Gear helps it absorb impacts...
Hazel: Awesome!
Gaele: Not this time! Gaelem, go for a Reclux Bound!!
(Gaelem would ricochet off the wall, then attack Belial, sending it towards the wall)
Bell: Not yet!
(Belial would lean on it's V Gear)
Bell: Now go for a Venture Flash!
(Belial would charge up using the rim of the stadium, then charged towards Gaelem)
Bell: LET'S WIN IT!
(Belial would finally attack Gaelem, sending it flying towards the wall, and then into the air)
Gaele: Tch... WE AREN'T LOSING!! GAELEM!!
(Gaelem's avatar would burst throughout it's beyblade, engulfed in a fiery golden aura)
Gaelem: RECLUX DRIVE!!
Bell: Not yet! BELIAL!
(Belial's avatar would burst throughout it's beyblade, engulfed in a magenta and red aura)
Bell: GO FOR A DYNAMITE COUNTER!
(Gaelem and Belial would clash ferociously... then, Gaelem would be sent back to the stadium floor!
Gaelem: It's time, Gaele!
Gaele: Yeah!
Bell: DYNAMITE BOMBER!!
Gaele and Gaelem: Let's go! RECLUX UPPER!!
(Gaelem and Belial would clash even more ferociously, creating gigantic gusts of wind that would be surging throughout the entire room)
Valt: Agh...
Suji: This battle's intense!!!
(Finally, both Gaelem and Belial would get sent flying out of the stadium, and then... both Gaelem and Belial would burst, with Gaelem bursting a second after)
Gaele and Bell: *Gasps* Who won?!
Hazel: ...I don't even know...
Valt: ...Gaelem burst a second after Belial burst.
Bell: *Gasps*
Hazel: W-With a score of 2-0, Gaele Reiasu wins!
Gaele: YEAH! Our training payed off!!
Suji: Nice job, bro!
Valt: Yeah, that was an awesome match you two!
Bell: Yo, Gaele! That was a fun match!
Gaele: I know, right? Maybe we can battle again some time!
Bell: Yep! And remember: I won't be losing next time!
Gaele: No, next time me and Gaelem will burst you like crazy!
Bell: We'll see!
(Gaele and Bell would laugh)
(Suddenly, Hazel would run out of the mansion)
Valt: Huh? What's up with Hazel?
Bell: Yeah, what happened?
Gaele: I don't know, maybe it was her bedtime?
(Everyone would start laughing)
(They would then walk out of the mansion)
Valt: Alright Bell, we're off!
Suji: Seeya Bell!
Gaele: Yeah! It was fun battling ya!
Bell: Same to you all, but don't get your hopes up, cause I'm coming back even stronger!
Gaele: Same goes to me!
(Meanwhile, in Beigoma)
Hazel: So that's how stronge Destiny beys are, huh?
(Bahamut would shine)
Hazel: I know what time it is!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Destiny! (Character Contest) - Dread hades12 - Aug. 11, 2021
Nice chapter! I loved Bell's appearance in this!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Destiny! (Character Contest) - GenesisBlader - Aug. 11, 2021
Episode 9 Preview!
Gaele: Huh? Where'd Hazel go?
Gaele: She's got herself a new bey?
Gaele: No matter! Me and Gaelem will burst it like crazy!
Gaele: Loyalty Hespera?
Next Episode on Beyblade Burst: Destiny!
Harmonized! Loyalty Hespera!
Gaele: Three! Two! One! Let it... RIP!
I'll totally be the best there is!
(Aug. 11, 2021 9:03 PM)Dread hades12 Wrote: Nice chapter! I loved Bell's appearance in this!
thanks dude!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Destiny! (Character Contest) - UnseenBurst - Aug. 11, 2021
(Aug. 11, 2021 9:00 PM)GenesisBlader Wrote: Episode 8 has began to brawl...
Beyblade Burst: Destiny
Episode 8
Destiny Vs. Dynamite!
(Inside Bell's mansion)
Gaele: Agh... I guess we lost...
Hazel: Hey, at least we put up a fair fight!
Suji: Yeah! You were giving Bell a run for his money!
Valt: Mhm!
Gaele: Well... you guys are right! I'll challenge him again and totally win-
Valt: Whoa whoa, hold your horses! If you dive in for another match without any preparations, you'll just lose again!
Gaele: I guess your right... time for some training!
Suji: That's the spirit!
(Meanwhile, in Bell's workshop...)
Bell: UGH! I just can't get it off of my mind!
(His grandfather, Jingemon Daikokuten, would come over to confort him)
Jingemon: What's the matter, Bell? You seem a bit... unnerved.
Bell: Sorry gramps, it's just something about the battle I did earlier...
(Flashback!)
Gaele: NOW IT'S TIME!! GAELEM!!
(Then, he'd have another flashback)
Bell: We're winning this! BELIAL!!
(The flashback would end)
Bell: Tch!
(At Bell's training area)
Gaele: I don't even know if this'll help me win...
Hazel: Don't worry, it will!
Suji: ...right Valt?
Valt: Of course! Me and Valkyrie used to do this all the time!
Gaele: Huh? What's is it?
Valt: Well, me and Valkyrie talk to each other and bond on a whole other level!
Gaele: ...You've gotta be kidding me.
Suji: Yeah Valt, even that's a bit strange on your end.
Valt: *chuckles* No, it really works! You've gotta trust in Gaelem all the way!
Gaele: Trust in Gaelem...
(Gaelem would then shine brightly, then bring Gaele into the avatar realm)
Gaele: Gaelem... it's you again.
Gaelem: Yes. I brought you here to tell me: What's on your mind right now?
Gaele: Winning against Bell, that's what's on my mind.
Gaelem: Gaele, you shouldn't focus on winning all the time.
Gaele: Wait, what?
Gaelem: Focus on me. Burst all of your emotions into a blazing aura.
Gaele: You mean-
Gaelem: Yes. Trust in me all the way, and we can win the battle in the end.
Gaele: ...Thanks, Gaelem! I'll totally trust in you, and we'll burst everyone into overdrive together!
Gaelem: I will be trusting in you as well.
Gaele: Gaelem-
(Gaele would exit the avatar world)
Suji: Hello? Gaele? You there?
Hazel: What's happening to him?
Valt: I dunno-
Gaele: AGH! Oh, hey guys!
Valt, Suji, and Hazel: What happened?!?
Gaele: Well, it was totally awesome! Gaelem was there, we talked and it was so cool!
Hazel: Really?
Valt: Nice job Gaele! That was bonding!
Gaele: WOW! Amazing!
Suji: Alright then, let's get to training!
Gaele: Yeah!
Gaele, Suji, Hazel, and Valt: Three, two, one! Let it... RIP!!
(Meanwhile, at Bell's workshop)
Bell: I'm not... gonna lose!
(He'd say, doing push-ups)
(Timeskip to when everyone was done training)
Valt: Alright Gaele, your totally ready to take on Bell!
Suji: Mhm! Show 'em who's boss!
Hazel: Right!
Gaele: Thanks guys... I'll totally defeat Bell!
(The words "Defeat Bell!" would echo across the room, alarming Bell. Then, Bell would jump from a ledge and into the training/battling room)
Bell: Oh? I see your planning to defeat the Demon King, eh?
Gaele: Yeah! And I'll totally succeed with my incredible strategy!
Hazel: Wait, he doesn't have a strategy-
Valt: Hold on, he might have something up his sleeve...
Bell: Alright then, let's see who'll win! (He'd say, flicking his cape to his left)
(Gaele, Bell, and Hazel would go over to the stadium)
Hazel: I'll be ref! (She'd say, going over to the ref area)
Gaele (Mind): Due to how heavy Belial is, a good upper attack will knock it off balance and earn me the victory!
Bell (Mind): I'm not gonna let Gaele win this... let's go, Belial!
(Bell's battle aura would flare up like a fierce bonfire)
Gaele: Let's do this, Gaelem!
(Gaele's battle aura would flare up like an erupting volcano)
Hazel (Mind): Whoa... this is so... exciting!
(Gaele would switch to Wide Mode, while Bell would switch to Low Mode)
Hazel: First battle! Ready, and set!
Everyone: Three! Two! One!
Gaele and Bell: Let it... RIP!!!!
(Gaele would pull off a fierce Destiny Shoot, while Bell would pull off an explosive shoot)
Gaele: Gaelem, knock it outta there!
Bell: Take the hit, Belial!
(Belial would absorb the hit using the F Gear, redirecting Gaelem into the wall)
Gaele: *Gasps*
Bell: Heh!
Valt: I forgot... Belial's F Gear helps it absorb impacts...
Hazel: Awesome!
Gaele: Not this time! Gaelem, go for a Reclux Bound!!
(Gaelem would ricochet off the wall, then attack Belial, sending it towards the wall)
Bell: Not yet!
(Belial would lean on it's V Gear)
Bell: Now go for a Venture Flash!
(Belial would charge up using the rim of the stadium, then charged towards Gaelem)
Bell: LET'S WIN IT!
(Belial would finally attack Gaelem, sending it flying towards the wall, and then into the air)
Gaele: Tch... WE AREN'T LOSING!! GAELEM!!
(Gaelem's avatar would burst throughout it's beyblade, engulfed in a fiery golden aura)
Gaelem: RECLUX DRIVE!!
Bell: Not yet! BELIAL!
(Belial's avatar would burst throughout it's beyblade, engulfed in a magenta and red aura)
Bell: GO FOR A DYNAMITE COUNTER!
(Gaelem and Belial would clash ferociously... then, Gaelem would be sent back to the stadium floor!
Gaelem: It's time, Gaele!
Gaele: Yeah!
Bell: DYNAMITE BOMBER!!
Gaele and Gaelem: Let's go! RECLUX UPPER!!
(Gaelem and Belial would clash even more ferociously, creating gigantic gusts of wind that would be surging throughout the entire room)
Valt: Agh...
Suji: This battle's intense!!!
(Finally, both Gaelem and Belial would get sent flying out of the stadium, and then... both Gaelem and Belial would burst, with Gaelem bursting a second after)
Gaele and Bell: *Gasps* Who won?!
Hazel: ...I don't even know...
Valt: ...Gaelem burst a second after Belial burst.
Bell: *Gasps*
Hazel: W-With a score of 2-0, Gaele Reiasu wins!
Gaele: YEAH! Our training payed off!!
Suji: Nice job, bro!
Valt: Yeah, that was an awesome match you two!
Bell: Yo, Gaele! That was a fun match!
Gaele: I know, right? Maybe we can battle again some time!
Bell: Yep! And remember: I won't be losing next time!
Gaele: No, next time me and Gaelem will burst you like crazy!
Bell: We'll see!
(Gaele and Bell would laugh)
(Suddenly, Hazel would run out of the mansion)
Valt: Huh? What's up with Hazel?
Bell: Yeah, what happened?
Gaele: I don't know, maybe it was her bedtime?
(Everyone would start laughing)
(They would then walk out of the mansion)
Valt: Alright Bell, we're off!
Suji: Seeya Bell!
Gaele: Yeah! It was fun battling ya!
Bell: Same to you all, but don't get your hopes up, cause I'm coming back even stronger!
Gaele: Same goes to me!
(Meanwhile, in Beigoma)
Hazel: So that's how stronge Destiny beys are, huh?
(Bahamut would shine)
Hazel: I know what time it is!
Galele: That's a little strange on your end Valt
(What Valt should've said): Says the person scared of Bats!
I honestly loved this chapter, it was really well written and a pretty smart move on your part! Though, it's more Bell to say "You may've won the battle, but I beat you at speed" or some excuse why he lost
RE: Beyblade Burst: Destiny! (Character Contest) - GenesisBlader - Aug. 11, 2021
(Aug. 11, 2021 9:07 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: (Aug. 11, 2021 9:00 PM)GenesisBlader Wrote: Episode 8 has began to brawl...
Beyblade Burst: Destiny
Episode 8
Destiny Vs. Dynamite!
(Inside Bell's mansion)
Gaele: Agh... I guess we lost...
Hazel: Hey, at least we put up a fair fight!
Suji: Yeah! You were giving Bell a run for his money!
Valt: Mhm!
Gaele: Well... you guys are right! I'll challenge him again and totally win-
Valt: Whoa whoa, hold your horses! If you dive in for another match without any preparations, you'll just lose again!
Gaele: I guess your right... time for some training!
Suji: That's the spirit!
(Meanwhile, in Bell's workshop...)
Bell: UGH! I just can't get it off of my mind!
(His grandfather, Jingemon Daikokuten, would come over to confort him)
Jingemon: What's the matter, Bell? You seem a bit... unnerved.
Bell: Sorry gramps, it's just something about the battle I did earlier...
(Flashback!)
Gaele: NOW IT'S TIME!! GAELEM!!
(Then, he'd have another flashback)
Bell: We're winning this! BELIAL!!
(The flashback would end)
Bell: Tch!
(At Bell's training area)
Gaele: I don't even know if this'll help me win...
Hazel: Don't worry, it will!
Suji: ...right Valt?
Valt: Of course! Me and Valkyrie used to do this all the time!
Gaele: Huh? What's is it?
Valt: Well, me and Valkyrie talk to each other and bond on a whole other level!
Gaele: ...You've gotta be kidding me.
Suji: Yeah Valt, even that's a bit strange on your end.
Valt: *chuckles* No, it really works! You've gotta trust in Gaelem all the way!
Gaele: Trust in Gaelem...
(Gaelem would then shine brightly, then bring Gaele into the avatar realm)
Gaele: Gaelem... it's you again.
Gaelem: Yes. I brought you here to tell me: What's on your mind right now?
Gaele: Winning against Bell, that's what's on my mind.
Gaelem: Gaele, you shouldn't focus on winning all the time.
Gaele: Wait, what?
Gaelem: Focus on me. Burst all of your emotions into a blazing aura.
Gaele: You mean-
Gaelem: Yes. Trust in me all the way, and we can win the battle in the end.
Gaele: ...Thanks, Gaelem! I'll totally trust in you, and we'll burst everyone into overdrive together!
Gaelem: I will be trusting in you as well.
Gaele: Gaelem-
(Gaele would exit the avatar world)
Suji: Hello? Gaele? You there?
Hazel: What's happening to him?
Valt: I dunno-
Gaele: AGH! Oh, hey guys!
Valt, Suji, and Hazel: What happened?!?
Gaele: Well, it was totally awesome! Gaelem was there, we talked and it was so cool!
Hazel: Really?
Valt: Nice job Gaele! That was bonding!
Gaele: WOW! Amazing!
Suji: Alright then, let's get to training!
Gaele: Yeah!
Gaele, Suji, Hazel, and Valt: Three, two, one! Let it... RIP!!
(Meanwhile, at Bell's workshop)
Bell: I'm not... gonna lose!
(He'd say, doing push-ups)
(Timeskip to when everyone was done training)
Valt: Alright Gaele, your totally ready to take on Bell!
Suji: Mhm! Show 'em who's boss!
Hazel: Right!
Gaele: Thanks guys... I'll totally defeat Bell!
(The words "Defeat Bell!" would echo across the room, alarming Bell. Then, Bell would jump from a ledge and into the training/battling room)
Bell: Oh? I see your planning to defeat the Demon King, eh?
Gaele: Yeah! And I'll totally succeed with my incredible strategy!
Hazel: Wait, he doesn't have a strategy-
Valt: Hold on, he might have something up his sleeve...
Bell: Alright then, let's see who'll win! (He'd say, flicking his cape to his left)
(Gaele, Bell, and Hazel would go over to the stadium)
Hazel: I'll be ref! (She'd say, going over to the ref area)
Gaele (Mind): Due to how heavy Belial is, a good upper attack will knock it off balance and earn me the victory!
Bell (Mind): I'm not gonna let Gaele win this... let's go, Belial!
(Bell's battle aura would flare up like a fierce bonfire)
Gaele: Let's do this, Gaelem!
(Gaele's battle aura would flare up like an erupting volcano)
Hazel (Mind): Whoa... this is so... exciting!
(Gaele would switch to Wide Mode, while Bell would switch to Low Mode)
Hazel: First battle! Ready, and set!
Everyone: Three! Two! One!
Gaele and Bell: Let it... RIP!!!!
(Gaele would pull off a fierce Destiny Shoot, while Bell would pull off an explosive shoot)
Gaele: Gaelem, knock it outta there!
Bell: Take the hit, Belial!
(Belial would absorb the hit using the F Gear, redirecting Gaelem into the wall)
Gaele: *Gasps*
Bell: Heh!
Valt: I forgot... Belial's F Gear helps it absorb impacts...
Hazel: Awesome!
Gaele: Not this time! Gaelem, go for a Reclux Bound!!
(Gaelem would ricochet off the wall, then attack Belial, sending it towards the wall)
Bell: Not yet!
(Belial would lean on it's V Gear)
Bell: Now go for a Venture Flash!
(Belial would charge up using the rim of the stadium, then charged towards Gaelem)
Bell: LET'S WIN IT!
(Belial would finally attack Gaelem, sending it flying towards the wall, and then into the air)
Gaele: Tch... WE AREN'T LOSING!! GAELEM!!
(Gaelem's avatar would burst throughout it's beyblade, engulfed in a fiery golden aura)
Gaelem: RECLUX DRIVE!!
Bell: Not yet! BELIAL!
(Belial's avatar would burst throughout it's beyblade, engulfed in a magenta and red aura)
Bell: GO FOR A DYNAMITE COUNTER!
(Gaelem and Belial would clash ferociously... then, Gaelem would be sent back to the stadium floor!
Gaelem: It's time, Gaele!
Gaele: Yeah!
Bell: DYNAMITE BOMBER!!
Gaele and Gaelem: Let's go! RECLUX UPPER!!
(Gaelem and Belial would clash even more ferociously, creating gigantic gusts of wind that would be surging throughout the entire room)
Valt: Agh...
Suji: This battle's intense!!!
(Finally, both Gaelem and Belial would get sent flying out of the stadium, and then... both Gaelem and Belial would burst, with Gaelem bursting a second after)
Gaele and Bell: *Gasps* Who won?!
Hazel: ...I don't even know...
Valt: ...Gaelem burst a second after Belial burst.
Bell: *Gasps*
Hazel: W-With a score of 2-0, Gaele Reiasu wins!
Gaele: YEAH! Our training payed off!!
Suji: Nice job, bro!
Valt: Yeah, that was an awesome match you two!
Bell: Yo, Gaele! That was a fun match!
Gaele: I know, right? Maybe we can battle again some time!
Bell: Yep! And remember: I won't be losing next time!
Gaele: No, next time me and Gaelem will burst you like crazy!
Bell: We'll see!
(Gaele and Bell would laugh)
(Suddenly, Hazel would run out of the mansion)
Valt: Huh? What's up with Hazel?
Bell: Yeah, what happened?
Gaele: I don't know, maybe it was her bedtime?
(Everyone would start laughing)
(They would then walk out of the mansion)
Valt: Alright Bell, we're off!
Suji: Seeya Bell!
Gaele: Yeah! It was fun battling ya!
Bell: Same to you all, but don't get your hopes up, cause I'm coming back even stronger!
Gaele: Same goes to me!
(Meanwhile, in Beigoma)
Hazel: So that's how stronge Destiny beys are, huh?
(Bahamut would shine)
Hazel: I know what time it is!
Galele: That's a little strange on your end Valt
(What Valt should've said): Says the person scared of Bats!
I honestly loved this chapter, it was really well written and a pretty smart move on your part! Though, it's more Bell to say "You may've won the battle, but I beat you at speed" or some excuse why he lost
lol thanks!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Destiny! (Character Contest) - LegendJustice - Aug. 11, 2021
(Aug. 11, 2021 9:00 PM)GenesisBlader Wrote: Episode 8 has began to brawl...
Beyblade Burst: Destiny
Episode 8
Destiny Vs. Dynamite!
(Inside Bell's mansion)
Gaele: Agh... I guess we lost...
Hazel: Hey, at least we put up a fair fight!
Suji: Yeah! You were giving Bell a run for his money!
Valt: Mhm!
Gaele: Well... you guys are right! I'll challenge him again and totally win-
Valt: Whoa whoa, hold your horses! If you dive in for another match without any preparations, you'll just lose again!
Gaele: I guess your right... time for some training!
Suji: That's the spirit!
(Meanwhile, in Bell's workshop...)
Bell: UGH! I just can't get it off of my mind!
(His grandfather, Jingemon Daikokuten, would come over to confort him)
Jingemon: What's the matter, Bell? You seem a bit... unnerved.
Bell: Sorry gramps, it's just something about the battle I did earlier...
(Flashback!)
Gaele: NOW IT'S TIME!! GAELEM!!
(Then, he'd have another flashback)
Bell: We're winning this! BELIAL!!
(The flashback would end)
Bell: Tch!
(At Bell's training area)
Gaele: I don't even know if this'll help me win...
Hazel: Don't worry, it will!
Suji: ...right Valt?
Valt: Of course! Me and Valkyrie used to do this all the time!
Gaele: Huh? What's is it?
Valt: Well, me and Valkyrie talk to each other and bond on a whole other level!
Gaele: ...You've gotta be kidding me.
Suji: Yeah Valt, even that's a bit strange on your end.
Valt: *chuckles* No, it really works! You've gotta trust in Gaelem all the way!
Gaele: Trust in Gaelem...
(Gaelem would then shine brightly, then bring Gaele into the avatar realm)
Gaele: Gaelem... it's you again.
Gaelem: Yes. I brought you here to tell me: What's on your mind right now?
Gaele: Winning against Bell, that's what's on my mind.
Gaelem: Gaele, you shouldn't focus on winning all the time.
Gaele: Wait, what?
Gaelem: Focus on me. Burst all of your emotions into a blazing aura.
Gaele: You mean-
Gaelem: Yes. Trust in me all the way, and we can win the battle in the end.
Gaele: ...Thanks, Gaelem! I'll totally trust in you, and we'll burst everyone into overdrive together!
Gaelem: I will be trusting in you as well.
Gaele: Gaelem-
(Gaele would exit the avatar world)
Suji: Hello? Gaele? You there?
Hazel: What's happening to him?
Valt: I dunno-
Gaele: AGH! Oh, hey guys!
Valt, Suji, and Hazel: What happened?!?
Gaele: Well, it was totally awesome! Gaelem was there, we talked and it was so cool!
Hazel: Really?
Valt: Nice job Gaele! That was bonding!
Gaele: WOW! Amazing!
Suji: Alright then, let's get to training!
Gaele: Yeah!
Gaele, Suji, Hazel, and Valt: Three, two, one! Let it... RIP!!
(Meanwhile, at Bell's workshop)
Bell: I'm not... gonna lose!
(He'd say, doing push-ups)
(Timeskip to when everyone was done training)
Valt: Alright Gaele, your totally ready to take on Bell!
Suji: Mhm! Show 'em who's boss!
Hazel: Right!
Gaele: Thanks guys... I'll totally defeat Bell!
(The words "Defeat Bell!" would echo across the room, alarming Bell. Then, Bell would jump from a ledge and into the training/battling room)
Bell: Oh? I see your planning to defeat the Demon King, eh?
Gaele: Yeah! And I'll totally succeed with my incredible strategy!
Hazel: Wait, he doesn't have a strategy-
Valt: Hold on, he might have something up his sleeve...
Bell: Alright then, let's see who'll win! (He'd say, flicking his cape to his left)
(Gaele, Bell, and Hazel would go over to the stadium)
Hazel: I'll be ref! (She'd say, going over to the ref area)
Gaele (Mind): Due to how heavy Belial is, a good upper attack will knock it off balance and earn me the victory!
Bell (Mind): I'm not gonna let Gaele win this... let's go, Belial!
(Bell's battle aura would flare up like a fierce bonfire)
Gaele: Let's do this, Gaelem!
(Gaele's battle aura would flare up like an erupting volcano)
Hazel (Mind): Whoa... this is so... exciting!
(Gaele would switch to Wide Mode, while Bell would switch to Low Mode)
Hazel: First battle! Ready, and set!
Everyone: Three! Two! One!
Gaele and Bell: Let it... RIP!!!!
(Gaele would pull off a fierce Destiny Shoot, while Bell would pull off an explosive shoot)
Gaele: Gaelem, knock it outta there!
Bell: Take the hit, Belial!
(Belial would absorb the hit using the F Gear, redirecting Gaelem into the wall)
Gaele: *Gasps*
Bell: Heh!
Valt: I forgot... Belial's F Gear helps it absorb impacts...
Hazel: Awesome!
Gaele: Not this time! Gaelem, go for a Reclux Bound!!
(Gaelem would ricochet off the wall, then attack Belial, sending it towards the wall)
Bell: Not yet!
(Belial would lean on it's V Gear)
Bell: Now go for a Venture Flash!
(Belial would charge up using the rim of the stadium, then charged towards Gaelem)
Bell: LET'S WIN IT!
(Belial would finally attack Gaelem, sending it flying towards the wall, and then into the air)
Gaele: Tch... WE AREN'T LOSING!! GAELEM!!
(Gaelem's avatar would burst throughout it's beyblade, engulfed in a fiery golden aura)
Gaelem: RECLUX DRIVE!!
Bell: Not yet! BELIAL!
(Belial's avatar would burst throughout it's beyblade, engulfed in a magenta and red aura)
Bell: GO FOR A DYNAMITE COUNTER!
(Gaelem and Belial would clash ferociously... then, Gaelem would be sent back to the stadium floor!
Gaelem: It's time, Gaele!
Gaele: Yeah!
Bell: DYNAMITE BOMBER!!
Gaele and Gaelem: Let's go! RECLUX UPPER!!
(Gaelem and Belial would clash even more ferociously, creating gigantic gusts of wind that would be surging throughout the entire room)
Valt: Agh...
Suji: This battle's intense!!!
(Finally, both Gaelem and Belial would get sent flying out of the stadium, and then... both Gaelem and Belial would burst, with Gaelem bursting a second after)
Gaele and Bell: *Gasps* Who won?!
Hazel: ...I don't even know...
Valt: ...Gaelem burst a second after Belial burst.
Bell: *Gasps*
Hazel: W-With a score of 2-0, Gaele Reiasu wins!
Gaele: YEAH! Our training payed off!!
Suji: Nice job, bro!
Valt: Yeah, that was an awesome match you two!
Bell: Yo, Gaele! That was a fun match!
Gaele: I know, right? Maybe we can battle again some time!
Bell: Yep! And remember: I won't be losing next time!
Gaele: No, next time me and Gaelem will burst you like crazy!
Bell: We'll see!
(Gaele and Bell would laugh)
(Suddenly, Hazel would run out of the mansion)
Valt: Huh? What's up with Hazel?
Bell: Yeah, what happened?
Gaele: I don't know, maybe it was her bedtime?
(Everyone would start laughing)
(They would then walk out of the mansion)
Valt: Alright Bell, we're off!
Suji: Seeya Bell!
Gaele: Yeah! It was fun battling ya!
Bell: Same to you all, but don't get your hopes up, cause I'm coming back even stronger!
Gaele: Same goes to me!
(Meanwhile, in Beigoma)
Hazel: So that's how stronge Destiny beys are, huh?
(Bahamut would shine)
Hazel: I know what time it is!
amazing Chapter! I honestly love Gaele's persona
RE: Beyblade Burst: Destiny! (Character Contest) - Dread hades12 - Aug. 11, 2021
Yeah and the ending really surprised me
RE: Beyblade Burst: Destiny! (Character Contest) - GenesisBlader - Aug. 11, 2021
(Aug. 11, 2021 9:10 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: (Aug. 11, 2021 9:00 PM)GenesisBlader Wrote: Episode 8 has began to brawl...
Beyblade Burst: Destiny
Episode 8
Destiny Vs. Dynamite!
(Inside Bell's mansion)
Gaele: Agh... I guess we lost...
Hazel: Hey, at least we put up a fair fight!
Suji: Yeah! You were giving Bell a run for his money!
Valt: Mhm!
Gaele: Well... you guys are right! I'll challenge him again and totally win-
Valt: Whoa whoa, hold your horses! If you dive in for another match without any preparations, you'll just lose again!
Gaele: I guess your right... time for some training!
Suji: That's the spirit!
(Meanwhile, in Bell's workshop...)
Bell: UGH! I just can't get it off of my mind!
(His grandfather, Jingemon Daikokuten, would come over to confort him)
Jingemon: What's the matter, Bell? You seem a bit... unnerved.
Bell: Sorry gramps, it's just something about the battle I did earlier...
(Flashback!)
Gaele: NOW IT'S TIME!! GAELEM!!
(Then, he'd have another flashback)
Bell: We're winning this! BELIAL!!
(The flashback would end)
Bell: Tch!
(At Bell's training area)
Gaele: I don't even know if this'll help me win...
Hazel: Don't worry, it will!
Suji: ...right Valt?
Valt: Of course! Me and Valkyrie used to do this all the time!
Gaele: Huh? What's is it?
Valt: Well, me and Valkyrie talk to each other and bond on a whole other level!
Gaele: ...You've gotta be kidding me.
Suji: Yeah Valt, even that's a bit strange on your end.
Valt: *chuckles* No, it really works! You've gotta trust in Gaelem all the way!
Gaele: Trust in Gaelem...
(Gaelem would then shine brightly, then bring Gaele into the avatar realm)
Gaele: Gaelem... it's you again.
Gaelem: Yes. I brought you here to tell me: What's on your mind right now?
Gaele: Winning against Bell, that's what's on my mind.
Gaelem: Gaele, you shouldn't focus on winning all the time.
Gaele: Wait, what?
Gaelem: Focus on me. Burst all of your emotions into a blazing aura.
Gaele: You mean-
Gaelem: Yes. Trust in me all the way, and we can win the battle in the end.
Gaele: ...Thanks, Gaelem! I'll totally trust in you, and we'll burst everyone into overdrive together!
Gaelem: I will be trusting in you as well.
Gaele: Gaelem-
(Gaele would exit the avatar world)
Suji: Hello? Gaele? You there?
Hazel: What's happening to him?
Valt: I dunno-
Gaele: AGH! Oh, hey guys!
Valt, Suji, and Hazel: What happened?!?
Gaele: Well, it was totally awesome! Gaelem was there, we talked and it was so cool!
Hazel: Really?
Valt: Nice job Gaele! That was bonding!
Gaele: WOW! Amazing!
Suji: Alright then, let's get to training!
Gaele: Yeah!
Gaele, Suji, Hazel, and Valt: Three, two, one! Let it... RIP!!
(Meanwhile, at Bell's workshop)
Bell: I'm not... gonna lose!
(He'd say, doing push-ups)
(Timeskip to when everyone was done training)
Valt: Alright Gaele, your totally ready to take on Bell!
Suji: Mhm! Show 'em who's boss!
Hazel: Right!
Gaele: Thanks guys... I'll totally defeat Bell!
(The words "Defeat Bell!" would echo across the room, alarming Bell. Then, Bell would jump from a ledge and into the training/battling room)
Bell: Oh? I see your planning to defeat the Demon King, eh?
Gaele: Yeah! And I'll totally succeed with my incredible strategy!
Hazel: Wait, he doesn't have a strategy-
Valt: Hold on, he might have something up his sleeve...
Bell: Alright then, let's see who'll win! (He'd say, flicking his cape to his left)
(Gaele, Bell, and Hazel would go over to the stadium)
Hazel: I'll be ref! (She'd say, going over to the ref area)
Gaele (Mind): Due to how heavy Belial is, a good upper attack will knock it off balance and earn me the victory!
Bell (Mind): I'm not gonna let Gaele win this... let's go, Belial!
(Bell's battle aura would flare up like a fierce bonfire)
Gaele: Let's do this, Gaelem!
(Gaele's battle aura would flare up like an erupting volcano)
Hazel (Mind): Whoa... this is so... exciting!
(Gaele would switch to Wide Mode, while Bell would switch to Low Mode)
Hazel: First battle! Ready, and set!
Everyone: Three! Two! One!
Gaele and Bell: Let it... RIP!!!!
(Gaele would pull off a fierce Destiny Shoot, while Bell would pull off an explosive shoot)
Gaele: Gaelem, knock it outta there!
Bell: Take the hit, Belial!
(Belial would absorb the hit using the F Gear, redirecting Gaelem into the wall)
Gaele: *Gasps*
Bell: Heh!
Valt: I forgot... Belial's F Gear helps it absorb impacts...
Hazel: Awesome!
Gaele: Not this time! Gaelem, go for a Reclux Bound!!
(Gaelem would ricochet off the wall, then attack Belial, sending it towards the wall)
Bell: Not yet!
(Belial would lean on it's V Gear)
Bell: Now go for a Venture Flash!
(Belial would charge up using the rim of the stadium, then charged towards Gaelem)
Bell: LET'S WIN IT!
(Belial would finally attack Gaelem, sending it flying towards the wall, and then into the air)
Gaele: Tch... WE AREN'T LOSING!! GAELEM!!
(Gaelem's avatar would burst throughout it's beyblade, engulfed in a fiery golden aura)
Gaelem: RECLUX DRIVE!!
Bell: Not yet! BELIAL!
(Belial's avatar would burst throughout it's beyblade, engulfed in a magenta and red aura)
Bell: GO FOR A DYNAMITE COUNTER!
(Gaelem and Belial would clash ferociously... then, Gaelem would be sent back to the stadium floor!
Gaelem: It's time, Gaele!
Gaele: Yeah!
Bell: DYNAMITE BOMBER!!
Gaele and Gaelem: Let's go! RECLUX UPPER!!
(Gaelem and Belial would clash even more ferociously, creating gigantic gusts of wind that would be surging throughout the entire room)
Valt: Agh...
Suji: This battle's intense!!!
(Finally, both Gaelem and Belial would get sent flying out of the stadium, and then... both Gaelem and Belial would burst, with Gaelem bursting a second after)
Gaele and Bell: *Gasps* Who won?!
Hazel: ...I don't even know...
Valt: ...Gaelem burst a second after Belial burst.
Bell: *Gasps*
Hazel: W-With a score of 2-0, Gaele Reiasu wins!
Gaele: YEAH! Our training payed off!!
Suji: Nice job, bro!
Valt: Yeah, that was an awesome match you two!
Bell: Yo, Gaele! That was a fun match!
Gaele: I know, right? Maybe we can battle again some time!
Bell: Yep! And remember: I won't be losing next time!
Gaele: No, next time me and Gaelem will burst you like crazy!
Bell: We'll see!
(Gaele and Bell would laugh)
(Suddenly, Hazel would run out of the mansion)
Valt: Huh? What's up with Hazel?
Bell: Yeah, what happened?
Gaele: I don't know, maybe it was her bedtime?
(Everyone would start laughing)
(They would then walk out of the mansion)
Valt: Alright Bell, we're off!
Suji: Seeya Bell!
Gaele: Yeah! It was fun battling ya!
Bell: Same to you all, but don't get your hopes up, cause I'm coming back even stronger!
Gaele: Same goes to me!
(Meanwhile, in Beigoma)
Hazel: So that's how stronge Destiny beys are, huh?
(Bahamut would shine)
Hazel: I know what time it is!
amazing Chapter! I honestly love Gaele's persona thanks alot! but if you love Gaele's persona ur gonna hate the main antagonist's persona
anyone gonna enter the character contest you can!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Destiny! (Character Contest) - PinkRose - Aug. 11, 2021
Welp, sucks to be me; I can’t write down anything without my memo and I don’t have that on me for the week. Guess I’ll just sit back and watch how things will turn out this time.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Destiny! (Character Contest) - GenesisBlader - Aug. 11, 2021
(Aug. 11, 2021 10:17 PM)PinkRose Wrote: Welp, sucks to be me; I can’t write down anything without my memo and I don’t have that on me for the week. Guess I’ll just sit back and watch how things will turn out this time. dang thats sad
would've been poggers for ya to make a character
RE: Beyblade Burst: Destiny! (Character Contest) - UnseenBurst - Aug. 11, 2021
(Aug. 11, 2021 10:17 PM)PinkRose Wrote: Welp, sucks to be me; I can’t write down anything without my memo and I don’t have that on me for the week. Guess I’ll just sit back and watch how things will turn out this time.
Maybe next time, I hope it makes you feel better when I say: If you entered there's a 99.9% chance you would've won!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Destiny! (Character Contest) - GenesisBlader - Aug. 11, 2021
yeah UB's right
dynamite belial evo (!)
Eb.-Pc Sn. Jr.+Dv
RE: Beyblade Burst: Destiny! (Character Contest) - Dread hades12 - Aug. 11, 2021
Did I already enter?
RE: Beyblade Burst: Destiny! (Character Contest) - LegendJustice - Aug. 11, 2021
(Aug. 11, 2021 10:23 PM)GenesisBlader Wrote: yeah UB's right
dynamite belial evo (!)
Eb.-Pc Sn. Jr.+Dv
Den Belial? Pecn Belial?
Dencern Belial?
RE: Beyblade Burst: Destiny! (Character Contest) - UnseenBurst - Aug. 11, 2021
(Aug. 11, 2021 10:23 PM)GenesisBlader Wrote: yeah UB's right
dynamite belial evo (!)
Eb.-Pc Sn. Jr.+Dv
Erebus Belial?
RE: Beyblade Burst: Destiny! (Character Contest) - LegendJustice - Aug. 11, 2021
(Aug. 11, 2021 10:23 PM)GenesisBlader Wrote: yeah UB's right
dynamite belial evo (!)
Eb.-Pc Sn. Jr.+Dv
Jevcn Belial?
RE: Beyblade Burst: Destiny! (Character Contest) - Dread hades12 - Aug. 11, 2021
Jinx Belial?
RE: Beyblade Burst: Destiny! (Character Contest) - LegendJustice - Aug. 11, 2021
(Aug. 11, 2021 10:23 PM)GenesisBlader Wrote: yeah UB's right
dynamite belial evo (!)
Eb.-Pc Sn. Jr.+Dv
Serv Belial?
RE: Beyblade Burst: Destiny! (Character Contest) - Dread hades12 - Aug. 11, 2021
Ebony Belial?
RE: Beyblade Burst: Destiny! (Character Contest) - LegendJustice - Aug. 11, 2021
Defendant Belial?
RE: Beyblade Burst: Destiny! (Character Contest) - GenesisBlader - Aug. 11, 2021
alright i will give you guys a little hint
volcano
RE: Beyblade Burst: Destiny! (Character Contest) - LegendJustice - Aug. 11, 2021
Erupt Belial!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Destiny! (Character Contest) - UnseenBurst - Aug. 11, 2021
(Aug. 11, 2021 10:30 PM)GenesisBlader Wrote: alright i will give you guys a little hint
volcano
Volcano Driver!
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