(Aug. 03, 2021  7:54 AM)Demon Belial Wrote: Ya know there's one thing I dislike about major fan-fics.

That the MC just acts like Valt.

1) Burst TechnoX - Uriel Bushida just acts like Valt, It feels like he's Valt himself.

2) Burst VS - Drake Kazeryu is exact copy of Valt.

3) Burst Storm Seven (Same case)

I don't dislike these fics, the story is great but the MCs just acts like Valt Aoi.

(Aug. 03, 2021  7:54 AM)Demon Belial Wrote: Ya know there's one thing I dislike about major fan-fics.

That the MC just acts like Valt.

1) Burst TechnoX - Uriel Bushida just acts like Valt, It feels like he's Valt himself.

2) Burst VS - Drake Kazeryu is exact copy of Valt.

3) Burst Storm Seven (Same case)

I don't dislike these fics, the story is great but the MCs just acts like Valt Aoi.

(Aug. 03, 2021  7:54 AM)Demon Belial Wrote: Ya know there's one thing I dislike about major fan-fics.

That the MC just acts like Valt.

1) Burst TechnoX - Uriel Bushida just acts like Valt, It feels like he's Valt himself.

2) Burst VS - Drake Kazeryu is exact copy of Valt.

3) Burst Storm Seven (Same case)

I don't dislike these fics, the story is great but the MCs just acts like Valt Aoi.

(Aug. 03, 2021  4:48 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Demon Belial that's BladekingX's fanfic Beyblade Burst Matrix not mine lol, I think you got mixed up

(Aug. 03, 2021  8:52 PM)Instarez Wrote: I really like my fan made system, so I think I'm biting the bullet and will be making a story. Here's what I have so far, please rate it.

Beyblade G Core
The Apex Corporation has developed what they call Beyblades. Spinning tops made from Plastic, metal, and other materials. It is a game played for sport, purely for fun. They took the world by storm, and Apex made a huge profit. However 1 year after Beyblades where launched, a group of people got them for the first time. This caused mysterious occurrences to happen. This group caught the publics eye and was named the G Generation. More and more people became apart of the G Generation, seemingly by luck, to the point where the majority of players were apart of it. Due to unknown reasons relating to the G Generation, Apex has called for a total recall, and they're using brutal force. What will happen to the Sport of Beyblade, and what is the mystery hidden within the tops?

Characters So Far
Rei Osiris
The protagonist. He doesn't remember his parents, and was taken in by his Grandpa. 
He doesn't have much going for him, but he's a hard worker.
Shinei Kakusei
The so called "Great Reaper". He hates Rei despite just meeting him for unknown reasons.
He has a heart deep down, but doesn't show it to anyone but his little sister.
"G" Freeman
The chairman of Apex Corp. He is in charge of the "Apex Raids" where armies go from town to town destroying Beyblades.
He rules with an iron fist, and wishes to have more control than his superior, who he can't even see.

Beyblades So Far
Radiant Artemis Burst Revolution
Gear Core Artemis: An emblem showing a golden knight
Gear Switch Radiant: An 8 bladed jagged ring, made of only metal.
Gear Drive Burst: A blue half sphere that unleashes 4 spikes when it gets directly hit.
Gear Tip Revolution: A red and sharp rubber tip.

Chapters (Tentative)
Arc 1: The G Generation
1. The Legend Begins
2. Artemis Trials
3. Because We Believe
4. First Rival
5. The Great Reaper
6. Swift Rider
7. The Underground Tournament
8. Making a Team
9. Lone Wolf
10. Round 1: God vs. Trickster

(Aug. 04, 2021  1:29 PM)Demon Belial Wrote: So I'm posting the best chapters I've readed from fics,

#1 Burst Dynachi: Chapter 46 the finale of dynachi and how Vlad saves Sebastian.

#2 Burst Bonds: Chapter 7 It was great too. (Za Warudo is a funny name though lol)

#3 Burst VS: Chapter 13 It was nice too,(That unbeatable line got me)

#4 Burst Matrix: Chapter 16, it was longer and the battle was awesome.

(Aug. 04, 2021  2:53 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: A fan-made concept of bey

Spoiler (Click to View)

Trickster Kelpie: The Shapeshifter Bey (Dual-Spin Balance Type)

Kelpie is a horse who can shapeshift into a human and drown them in a river.

So the Layer's height and positions of blades can be adjusted (So it can copy it's opponent's bey)

And it can do one more thing, can shapeshift into the opposing bey's Avatar. (It's own avatar will be a terryfying blue horse, I guess a one-eyed horse)

I have not decided the parts though. (And it will be a part of my fan-fic, so it's not gonna be a sparking or DB bey).

(Aug. 04, 2021  2:53 PM)BladeKingX Wrote:

(Aug. 04, 2021  2:53 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: A fan-made concept of bey

Spoiler (Click to View)

Trickster Kelpie: The Shapeshifter Bey (Dual-Spin Balance Type)

Kelpie is a horse who can shapeshift into a human and drown them in a river.

So the Layer's height and positions of blades can be adjusted (So it can copy it's opponent's bey)

And it can do one more thing, can shapeshift into the opposing bey's Avatar. (It's own avatar will be a terryfying blue horse, I guess a one-eyed horse)

I have not decided the parts though. (And it will be a part of my fan-fic, so it's not gonna be a sparking or DB bey).

wait so this is apart of another fanfic or VS?

(Aug. 04, 2021  1:29 PM)Demon Belial Wrote: So I'm posting the best chapters I've readed from fics,

#1 Burst Dynachi: Chapter 46 the finale of dynachi and how Vlad saves Sebastian.

#2 Burst Bonds: Chapter 7 It was great too. (Za Warudo is a funny name though lol)

#3 Burst VS: Chapter 13 It was nice too,(That unbeatable line got me)

#4 Burst Matrix: Chapter 16, it was longer and the battle was awesome.

(Aug. 06, 2021  5:04 AM)BeybladeManiac0 Wrote: I need some fanfic title names. I'm stuck.

(Aug. 06, 2021  5:11 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote:

(Aug. 06, 2021  5:04 AM)BeybladeManiac0 Wrote: I need some fanfic title names. I'm stuck.

Beyblade Burst Twilight, Beyblade Burst Phantom, Beyblade Burst Asriel! (Am I helping?)

(Aug. 06, 2021  5:04 AM)BeybladeManiac0 Wrote: I need some fanfic title names. I'm stuck.

(Aug. 08, 2021  8:41 PM)Instarez Wrote: I have an idea for a community project. Basically I would make a fan fiction. The working name is Beyblade Burst Unity (because all of the writers are uniting.) Afterwards There would be a giant character contest. Every single character will be a submitted character. You can only have 1, but maybe 2 if there's a low amount of characters, however 1 to start. Afterwards when you get accepted, I'll DM you. This is where it gets interesting: your entire character is written by you and you alone.

You can combine ideas if you want, but that's not the main goal. Their development, beys, powers, and backstories will be decided by you. It'll probably be a bit hard, so I'm thinking of getting a team of writers to help. Of course there's no guarantee everyone's characters would be going to a tournament at the same time, but I can only hope things somewhat merge together.

By the way, about being specific. You can say that a character does to a tournament during a specific time and what rankings they get. However for the name of the tournament: if multiple people are written to go to a tournament at the same time, I'm going to make them go to the same tournament. Meaning there's one name. So if everyone has different names, I'll just pick one I like. This same principle goes for everything: specific names aren't guaranteed. One more thing, some parts could be changed. Say 2 people have the same character set to get second place, obviously that won't work, so I would have to make some adjustments.

So, how do we think about this? I think it would be fun to do.