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RE: Shu’s Apocalypse (BEY DESIGN CONTEST) - EarthHelios - Dec. 19, 2020

The OP Spriggan is Ultimate Lord Destructor Spriggan Oval Quest lol


RE: Shu’s Apocalypse (BEY DESIGN CONTEST) - AlexTheBlader - Dec. 19, 2020

(Dec. 19, 2020  2:37 AM)Golden Freddy Wrote:
(Dec. 19, 2020  2:32 AM)AlexTheBlader Wrote: EarthHelios Golden Freddy Eclipse Force
Proluge:

Announcer: SPARKS ARE FLYING WHO WILL MAKE IT OUT OF THIS?!

Valt: VALKRYIEE!!

Shu: SPRIGGGANNNNNN!! ROOARRRR

Both beyblades are sent flying. The shockwave clears and it seems Valkryie has shattered into hundreds of peices. Valt drops to the ground in tears.
Shu smiles with a craziness in his eyes and walks away laughing.

Theodore Glass: Nice job, Red eye.. *Chuckles*
Theodore Glass: Why don’t I take Spriggan for some “repairs.”
Shu nods. Theodore Glass walks off with an evil smile on his face.
Theodore Glass: Spriggan is now mine.. he whispers

*2 Weeks Later*

Joshua: We’ve been looking everywhere Red Eye he’s gone...

*NEWS FLASH*

Announcer: THEODORE GLASS HAS MYSTERIOUSLY LEFT THE RAGING BULLS?! WE HAVE GOTTEN REPORTS OF HIM USING REQUIEM IN A FEW REPORTED BATTLES HE HAD BEEN SPOTTTED IN!

Shu turns off the remote and throws it into the TV shattering both the remote and TV.

Shu: I shall shatter everyone’s bey... including reqiuem. I will never be humiliated ever AGAIN!

-Shu walks out of the Raging Bulls-

*1 Week Later*

Shu: It’s done.. Spriggan Destruction..

Shu smirks.

Spriggan Bey Design Contest is up.

Rules:
Layer Description (Must be dual spin)
No Abbreviations, Ex. Xt’
Tell us the parts of the beyblade (it’s disk and driver and frame if you like.)
Low GT Parts and under allowed
Make it OP (if ur parts aren’t great the chance of it being picked drop)

What type of bey is it?
Balance.


RE: Shu’s Apocalypse (BEY DESIGN CONTEST) - Golden Freddy - Dec. 19, 2020

(Dec. 19, 2020  2:39 AM)AlexTheBlader Wrote:
(Dec. 19, 2020  2:37 AM)Golden Freddy Wrote: What type of bey is it?
Balance.

What system?


RE: Shu’s Apocalypse (BEY DESIGN CONTEST) - AlexTheBlader - Dec. 19, 2020

(Dec. 19, 2020  2:40 AM)Golden Freddy Wrote:
(Dec. 19, 2020  2:39 AM)AlexTheBlader Wrote: Balance.

What system?
Cho-z but low GT is allowed since it’s supposed to be OP so like the first few releases parts as long as it isn’t too OP


RE: Shu’s Apocalypse (BEY DESIGN CONTEST) - EarthHelios - Dec. 19, 2020

You wrote a typo lol


RE: Shu’s Apocalypse (BEY DESIGN CONTEST) - Golden Freddy - Dec. 19, 2020

(Dec. 19, 2020  2:41 AM)AlexTheBlader Wrote:
(Dec. 19, 2020  2:40 AM)Golden Freddy Wrote: What system?
Cho-a but low GT is allowed since it’s supposed to be OP so like the first few releases parts as long as it isn’t too OP

Alright so is it a cho z bey with like burst stoppers or a normal cho z bey


RE: Shu’s Apocalypse (BEY DESIGN CONTEST) - AlexTheBlader - Dec. 19, 2020

(Dec. 19, 2020  2:37 AM)EarthHelios Wrote: The OP Spriggan is Ultimate Lord Destructor Spriggan Oval Quest lol
Quest and oval are not good I needs to be op also its cho-z so no chips

(Dec. 19, 2020  2:41 AM)Golden Freddy Wrote:
(Dec. 19, 2020  2:41 AM)AlexTheBlader Wrote: Cho-a but low GT is allowed since it’s supposed to be OP so like the first few releases parts as long as it isn’t too OP

Alright so is it a cho z bey with like burst stoppers or a normal cho z bey
You decide that.


RE: Shu’s Apocalypse (BEY DESIGN CONTEST) - Golden Freddy - Dec. 19, 2020

(Dec. 19, 2020  2:42 AM)AlexTheBlader Wrote:
(Dec. 19, 2020  2:37 AM)EarthHelios Wrote: The OP Spriggan is Ultimate Lord Destructor Spriggan Oval Quest lol
Quest and oval are not good I needs to be op also its cho-z so no chips

(Dec. 19, 2020  2:41 AM)Golden Freddy Wrote: Alright so is it a cho z bey with like burst stoppers or a normal cho z bey
You decide that.
Alright


RE: Shu’s Apocalypse (BEY DESIGN CONTEST) - EarthHelios - Dec. 19, 2020

Quest is the best driver there is in burst.


RE: Shu’s Apocalypse (BEY DESIGN CONTEST) - AlexTheBlader - Dec. 19, 2020

(Dec. 19, 2020  2:44 AM)EarthHelios Wrote: Quest is the best driver there is in burst.
I’m not allowing it though and oval. I’m talking competitive also you need detail of the layer. No jokes.


RE: Shu’s Apocalypse (BEY DESIGN CONTEST) - Golden Freddy - Dec. 19, 2020

(Dec. 19, 2020  2:46 AM)AlexTheBlader Wrote:
(Dec. 19, 2020  2:44 AM)EarthHelios Wrote: Quest is the best driver there is in burst.
I’m not allowing it though and oval. I’m talking competitive also you need detail of the layer. No jokes.

I have some ideas for the beys parts tell me if this is good.

0,Glaive, and xtend +


RE: Shu’s Apocalypse (BEY DESIGN CONTEST) - AlexTheBlader - Dec. 19, 2020

(Dec. 19, 2020  3:38 AM)Golden Freddy Wrote:
(Dec. 19, 2020  2:46 AM)AlexTheBlader Wrote: I’m not allowing it though and oval. I’m talking competitive also you need detail of the layer. No jokes.

I have some ideas for the beys parts tell me if this is good.

0,Glaive, and xtend +
Ok that’s good. Can I get gimmicks of the layer?


RE: Shu’s Apocalypse (BEY DESIGN CONTEST) - Golden Freddy - Dec. 19, 2020

(Dec. 19, 2020  3:46 AM)AlexTheBlader Wrote:
(Dec. 19, 2020  3:38 AM)Golden Freddy Wrote: I have some ideas for the beys parts tell me if this is good.

0,Glaive, and xtend +
Ok that’s good. Can I get gimmicks of the layer?
It has a metal chip in the center, it’s dual spin, and it has burst stoppers that are like World Spriggans where if you hit them in the stoppers will activate and shu actually has a move with the gimmick.

Infinite lock: If spriggan gets hit hard enough on his burst stoppers shu can make them permanently staying there making spriggan 3x stronger and making it so spriggan can’t burst


RE: Shu’s Apocalypse (BEY DESIGN CONTEST) - AlexTheBlader - Dec. 19, 2020

(Dec. 19, 2020  3:49 AM)Golden Freddy Wrote:
(Dec. 19, 2020  3:46 AM)AlexTheBlader Wrote: Ok that’s good. Can I get gimmicks of the layer?
It has a metal chip in the center, it’s dual spin, and it has burst stoppers that are like World Spriggans where if you hit them in the stoppers will activate and shu actually has a move with the gimmick.

Infinite lock: If spriggan gets hit hard enough on his burst stoppers shu can make them permanently staying there making spriggan 3x stronger and making it so spriggan can’t burst
Interesting your in


RE: Shu’s Apocalypse (BEY DESIGN CONTEST) - Golden Freddy - Dec. 19, 2020

(Dec. 19, 2020  3:54 AM)AlexTheBlader Wrote:
(Dec. 19, 2020  3:49 AM)Golden Freddy Wrote: It has a metal chip in the center, it’s dual spin, and it has burst stoppers that are like World Spriggans where if you hit them in the stoppers will activate and shu actually has a move with the gimmick.

Infinite lock: If spriggan gets hit hard enough on his burst stoppers shu can make them permanently staying there making spriggan 3x stronger and making it so spriggan can’t burst
Interesting your in

Thanks I based it off World Spriggan


RE: Shu’s Apocalypse - SpeedySuomi - Dec. 19, 2020

(Dec. 18, 2020  10:23 PM)Golden Freddy Wrote:
(Dec. 18, 2020  10:20 PM)AlexTheBlader Wrote: I my not sure it’s mostly gonna be out of characters already from burst  if I add a new character I’ll do a contest.  What do you think the plot is from the title?

Plot speculations?

Shu’s either gonna die or he’s gonna bring beyblade to a end because of his rain of terror
reign of terror*

(Dec. 19, 2020  2:44 AM)EarthHelios Wrote: Quest is the best driver there is in burst.

Everyone forgets about Operate.


RE: Shu’s Apocalypse (BEY DESIGN CONTEST) - PinkRose - Dec. 19, 2020

*Sad Operate noises*


RE: Shu’s Apocalypse (BEY DESIGN CONTEST) - TwistedWerewolf - Dec. 19, 2020

(Dec. 19, 2020  2:37 AM)EarthHelios Wrote: The OP Spriggan is Ultimate Lord Destructor Spriggan Oval Quest lol

Me: EWWWW
Showing my brother: EWWW

Crimson Spriggan Hurricane Xtend+

Gimmicks: Burst stoppers, If the burst stoppers get pushed in then Spriggan hits the stadium wall and they'd come back out

Moves: Crimson Reset - At any given time Spriggan can change its type or spin.
Crimson Smash - Requiem Whip x10
Force Flash - if (For exp) Rush shoot was being used on it Spriggan would somehow switch around and have Spriggan be the one doing Rush shoot
Crimson Crash- Counter Break x10


RE: Shu’s Apocalypse (BEY DESIGN CONTEST) - AlexTheBlader - Dec. 19, 2020

(Dec. 19, 2020  3:03 PM)TwistedWerewolf Wrote:
(Dec. 19, 2020  2:37 AM)EarthHelios Wrote: The OP Spriggan is Ultimate Lord Destructor Spriggan Oval Quest lol

Me: EWWWW
Showing my brother: EWWW

Crimson Spriggan Hurricane Xtend+

Gimmicks: Burst stoppers, If the burst stoppers get pushed in then Spriggan hits the stadium wall and they'd come back out

Moves: Crimson Reset - At any given time Spriggan can change its type or spin.
Crimson Smash - Requiem Whip x10
Force Flash - if (For exp) Rush shoot was being used on it Spriggan would somehow switch around and have Spriggan be the one doing Rush shoot
Crimson Crash- Counter Break x10
Don’t need the moves but your in


RE: Shu’s Apocalypse (BEY DESIGN CONTEST) - AlexTheBlader - Dec. 22, 2020

Contest winner is Golden Freddy

Next Episode soon.


RE: Shu’s Apocalypse (BEY DESIGN CONTEST) - Golden Freddy - Dec. 22, 2020

(Dec. 22, 2020  8:18 PM)AlexTheBlader Wrote: Contest winner is Golden Freddy

Next Episode soon.
Gg fellow contestants

AlexTheBlader if you want a song for your fan fic (like mine) I found this one that I think goes good with the theme of this fan fic https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P4bKZT_Eg4A


RE: Shu’s Apocalypse (BEY DESIGN CONTEST) - AlexTheBlader - Dec. 23, 2020

Episode 1: Ranjiro The End
EarthHelios Golden Freddy

*2 Years Later*

Shu walks away from a stadium in a park. Behind him is a kid in tears.

Kid: this.. this.. is unfair... COME BACK!!

The kid continues to sob.

Shu: Your a waste of my time. Look your bey is already shattered.

The kid looks down at his broken bey and continue to sobs as Shu walks off.

He walks past a poster showing the upcoming luinor cup. He scowls at the picture of lui knowing his countless humiliations by him.

Shu: Perfect place to shatter some beys. And Lui’s.. Just a tasty treat for myself....

Shu has an evil smile as his body bursts in dark flare.

*2 Days Later*

Shu reaches the training center and sees lots of kids trying to get in the tournament. With the launch power testing. Shu reaches to the power tester and Spriggan takes over his body pulling so hard it shatters the entire machine.

Shu: I guess only weaklings are allowed..

Shu is allowed to enter and his first match is up against “Ranjiro Kiyame”

Shu: Hah, it’s that wanna be blader Rantaro Kiyame’s brother. I spriggan would love a tasty treat of a shattered bey..

ANNOUNCER: OUR FIRST MATCHUP IS THE
CHAMPION SHU KURENAI VS RANJIRO KIYAME!!!

Shu and Ranjiro: 3.. 2.. 1.. LET IT RIP!


Shu’s bey circles around Ranjiro in his attack mode.

Ranjiro: LETS DO THIS RAGNURUK!

Shu: End it.. 1% Of your Power.. Spriggan Destructrion.

Spriggan Destruction swoops in and in one small hit Ragnuruk breaks in half.

Shu picks up Spriggan and walks away smiling as Ranjiro drops to the ground.


RE: Shu’s Apocalypse (BEY DESIGN CONTEST) - 6Jupiter5 - Dec. 23, 2020

(Dec. 23, 2020  4:10 AM)AlexTheBlader Wrote: Episode 1: Ranjiro The End
EarthHelios Golden Freddy

*2 Years Later*

Shu walks away from a stadium in a park. Behind him is a kid in tears.

Kid: this.. this.. is unfair... COME BACK!!

The kid continues to sob.

Shu: Your a waste of my time. Look your bey is already shattered.

The kid looks down at his broken bey and continue to sobs as Shu walks off.

He walks past a poster showing the upcoming luinor cup. He scowls at the picture of lui knowing his countless humiliations by him.

Shu: Perfect place to shatter some beys. And Lui’s.. Just a tasty treat for myself....

Shu has an evil smile as his body bursts in dark flare.

*2 Days Later*

Shu reaches the training center and sees lots of kids trying to get in the tournament. With the launch power testing. Shu reaches to the power tester and Spriggan takes over his body pulling so hard it shatters the entire machine.

Shu: I guess only weaklings are allowed..

Shu is allowed to enter and his first match is up against “Ranjiro Kiyame”

Shu: Hah, it’s that wanna be blader Rantaro Kiyame’s brother. I spriggan would love a tasty treat of a shattered bey..

ANNOUNCER: OUR FIRST MATCHUP IS THE
CHAMPION SHU KURENAI VS RANJIRO KIYAME!!!

Shu and Ranjiro: 3.. 2.. 1.. LET IT RIP!


Shu’s bey circles around Ranjiro in his attack mode.

Ranjiro: LETS DO THIS RAGNURUK!

Shu: End it.. 1% Of your Power.. Spriggan Destructrion.

Spriggan Destruction swoops in and in one small hit Ragnuruk breaks in half.

Shu picks up Spriggan and walks away smiling as Ranjiro drops to the ground.

The real question Shu vs Amane (nevermind Shu loses by a lot)


RE: Shu’s Apocalypse - Golden Freddy - Dec. 23, 2020

(Dec. 23, 2020  4:10 AM)AlexTheBlader Wrote: Episode 1: Ranjiro The End
EarthHelios Golden Freddy

*2 Years Later*

Shu walks away from a stadium in a park. Behind him is a kid in tears.

Kid: this.. this.. is unfair... COME BACK!!

The kid continues to sob.

Shu: Your a waste of my time. Look your bey is already shattered.

The kid looks down at his broken bey and continue to sobs as Shu walks off.

He walks past a poster showing the upcoming luinor cup. He scowls at the picture of lui knowing his countless humiliations by him.

Shu: Perfect place to shatter some beys. And Lui’s.. Just a tasty treat for myself....

Shu has an evil smile as his body bursts in dark flare.

*2 Days Later*

Shu reaches the training center and sees lots of kids trying to get in the tournament. With the launch power testing. Shu reaches to the power tester and Spriggan takes over his body pulling so hard it shatters the entire machine.

Shu: I guess only weaklings are allowed..

Shu is allowed to enter and his first match is up against “Ranjiro Kiyame”

Shu: Hah, it’s that wanna be blader Rantaro Kiyame’s brother. I spriggan would love a tasty treat of a shattered bey..

ANNOUNCER: OUR FIRST MATCHUP IS THE
CHAMPION SHU KURENAI VS RANJIRO KIYAME!!!

Shu and Ranjiro: 3.. 2.. 1.. LET IT RIP!


Shu’s bey circles around Ranjiro in his attack mode.

Ranjiro: LETS DO THIS RAGNURUK!

Shu: End it.. 1% Of your Power.. Spriggan Destructrion.

Spriggan Destruction swoops in and in one small hit Ragnuruk breaks in half.

Shu picks up Spriggan and walks away smiling as Ranjiro drops to the ground.

I wonder what would happen if shu went against phi in this universe


RE: Shu’s Apocalypse - TwistedWerewolf - Dec. 23, 2020

(Dec. 23, 2020  1:25 PM)Golden Freddy Wrote:
(Dec. 23, 2020  4:10 AM)AlexTheBlader Wrote: Episode 1: Ranjiro The End
EarthHelios Golden Freddy

*2 Years Later*

Shu walks away from a stadium in a park. Behind him is a kid in tears.

Kid: this.. this.. is unfair... COME BACK!!

The kid continues to sob.

Shu: Your a waste of my time. Look your bey is already shattered.

The kid looks down at his broken bey and continue to sobs as Shu walks off.

He walks past a poster showing the upcoming luinor cup. He scowls at the picture of lui knowing his countless humiliations by him.

Shu: Perfect place to shatter some beys. And Lui’s.. Just a tasty treat for myself....

Shu has an evil smile as his body bursts in dark flare.

*2 Days Later*

Shu reaches the training center and sees lots of kids trying to get in the tournament. With the launch power testing. Shu reaches to the power tester and Spriggan takes over his body pulling so hard it shatters the entire machine.

Shu: I guess only weaklings are allowed..

Shu is allowed to enter and his first match is up against “Ranjiro Kiyame”

Shu: Hah, it’s that wanna be blader Rantaro Kiyame’s brother. I spriggan would love a tasty treat of a shattered bey..

ANNOUNCER: OUR FIRST MATCHUP IS THE
CHAMPION SHU KURENAI VS RANJIRO KIYAME!!!

Shu and Ranjiro: 3.. 2.. 1.. LET IT RIP!


Shu’s bey circles around Ranjiro in his attack mode.

Ranjiro: LETS DO THIS RAGNURUK!

Shu: End it.. 1% Of your Power.. Spriggan Destructrion.

Spriggan Destruction swoops in and in one small hit Ragnuruk breaks in half.

Shu picks up Spriggan and walks away smiling as Ranjiro drops to the ground.

I wonder what would happen if shu went against phi in this universe

Interesting battle.....