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RE: Beyblade Burst: Ugen’s Story - BuilderROB - Jan. 17, 2020

(Jan. 17, 2020  6:42 PM)Staron Wrote: This a good character idea?

Yeah! Giving a character to use Inferno Ifrit was a great idea!


RE: Beyblade Burst: Ugen’s Story - Staron - Jan. 17, 2020

And it fits that zyro used samurai ifrit

And my character is the son of him

Do you want to have some of the requested characters featured?

Well, the made up ones


RE: Beyblade Burst: Ugen’s Story - Koala Spriggan - Jan. 17, 2020

I don't know how to make my thread or delete a post.


RE: Beyblade Burst: Ugen’s Story - DeceasedCrab - Jan. 17, 2020

(Jan. 17, 2020  9:29 PM)Koala Spriggan Wrote: I don't know how to make my thread or delete a post.

I deleted your post. If you can't figure out how to make a new thread, take some time and discover how to do that before making a mess in someone else's thread, alright?


RE: Beyblade Burst: Ugen’s Story - DaGoldenPenguin - Jan. 18, 2020

Ifrit? Ifritor? I like this thread already.


RE: Beyblade Burst: Ugen’s Story - BuilderROB - Jan. 18, 2020

(Jan. 18, 2020  2:20 AM)DaGoldenPenguin Wrote: Ifrit? Ifritor? I like this thread already.

It's an idea from someone. It may be a while before I actually put the beyblade in, but maybe not. This thread is a story about dual layer beyblades though!


RE: Beyblade Burst: Ugen’s Story - lilphilyb - Jan. 18, 2020

(Jan. 18, 2020  2:21 AM)BuilderROB Wrote:
(Jan. 18, 2020  2:20 AM)DaGoldenPenguin Wrote: Ifrit? Ifritor? I like this thread already.

It's an idea from someone. It may be a while before I actually put the beyblade in, but maybe not. This thread is a story about dual layer beyblades though!

Have you ever Had the idea of adding God beys in the last 10 or 15 semodd chapters?


RE: Beyblade Burst: Ugen’s Story - DaGoldenPenguin - Jan. 18, 2020

I have a suggestion:
Blader: Asher( named after my aunts dog )
Beyblade: Asteroid zuetron
I don’t know if you will allow us giving their beys combos but if you do: 7, the frame Asteroid comes with, and Atomic-S
Nice story BTW


RE: Beyblade Burst: Ugen’s Story - lilphilyb - Jan. 18, 2020

(Jan. 18, 2020  2:40 AM)DaGoldenPenguin Wrote: I have a suggestion:
Blader: Asher( named after my aunts dog )
Beyblade: Asteroid zuetron
I don’t know if you will allow us giving their beys combos but if you do: 7, the frame Asteroid comes with, and Atomic-S
Nice story BTW

This takes place during the dual layer era of TT's Anime (the anime subbed or dubbed).


RE: Beyblade Burst: Ugen’s Story - BuilderROB - Jan. 18, 2020

(Jan. 18, 2020  2:34 AM)lilphilyb Wrote:
(Jan. 18, 2020  2:21 AM)BuilderROB Wrote: It's an idea from someone. It may be a while before I actually put the beyblade in, but maybe not. This thread is a story about dual layer beyblades though!

Have you ever Had the idea of adding God beys in the last 10 or 15 semodd chapters?

No, but I will likely be doing a continuation of this story in the God layer erea once I have finished all 51 chapters of this story.


RE: Beyblade Burst: Ugen’s Story - DaGoldenPenguin - Jan. 18, 2020

Oh k. I’ll probably just go make my ownSmile


RE: Beyblade Burst: Ugen’s Story - Staron - Jan. 18, 2020

I was making this ifrit when I didn't know of the original Inferno ifrit, I was thinking pure beyblade burst Samurai Ifrit


RE: Beyblade Burst: Ugen’s Story - BuilderROB - Jan. 24, 2020

Chapter 10: A New Face! Lost Longinus!




RE: Beyblade Burst: Ugen’s Story - Suoh sadboii - Jan. 25, 2020

Nice. Was it just me, or was this chapter a bit shorter than the others?


RE: Beyblade Burst: Ugen’s Story - BuilderROB - Jan. 25, 2020

(Jan. 25, 2020  3:28 PM)Suoh sadboii Wrote: Nice. Was it just me, or was this chapter a bit shorter than the others?

I think it is longer actually!


RE: Beyblade Burst: Ugen’s Story - Suoh sadboii - Jan. 25, 2020

(Jan. 25, 2020  3:32 PM)BuilderROB Wrote:
(Jan. 25, 2020  3:28 PM)Suoh sadboii Wrote: Nice. Was it just me, or was this chapter a bit shorter than the others?

I think it is longer actually!
Huh. Maybe I just read it faster this time then. Regardless, I'm glad that Lui has been introduced.


Maybe foreshadowing a left on left battle near the end?


RE: Beyblade Burst: Ugen’s Story - Staron - Jan. 25, 2020

Thanks for introducing bushi, but make him come back stronger then ever


RE: Beyblade Burst: Ugen’s Story - BuilderROB - Jan. 25, 2020

(Jan. 25, 2020  4:45 PM)Staron Wrote: Thanks for introducing bushi, but make him come back stronger then ever

Don’t worry, this isn’t the end of Bushi. He will be back.


RE: Beyblade Burst: Ugen’s Story - Staron - Jan. 25, 2020

And I got a new move for the Bey, burning rebound, a defensive move


RE: Beyblade Burst: Ugen’s Story - BuilderROB - Jan. 25, 2020

(Jan. 25, 2020  4:47 PM)Staron Wrote: And I got a new move for the Bey, burning rebound, a defensive move

Ok, I’ll consider putting it into the story next time Bushi appears!


RE: Beyblade Burst: Ugen’s Story - Staron - Jan. 25, 2020

And since burning slash is an attack move, and burning rebound is a defense move I made up, I got one more, burning vortex which increases his stamina

Since Inferno ifrit is a balance type


RE: Beyblade Burst: Ugen’s Story - BuilderROB - Jan. 25, 2020

(Jan. 25, 2020  4:48 PM)Staron Wrote: And since burning slash is an attack move, and burning rebound is a defense move I made up, I got one more, burning vortex which increases his stamina

Since Inferno ifrit is a balance type
Ok, that works!

(Jan. 25, 2020  3:38 PM)Suoh sadboii Wrote:
(Jan. 25, 2020  3:32 PM)BuilderROB Wrote: I think it is longer actually!
Huh. Maybe I just read it faster this time then. Regardless, I'm glad that Lui has been introduced.


Maybe foreshadowing a left on left battle near the end?

Possibly, however I am not gonna give away anything!


RE: Beyblade Burst: Ugen’s Story - Staron - Jan. 25, 2020

I got another idea, bushi will be the only blader who can perfectly connect to his bey, just like zyro to his bey


RE: Beyblade Burst: Ugen’s Story - FreeFafnir64 - Jan. 25, 2020

Wow, Lui is in the story? That’s awesome!


RE: Beyblade Burst: Ugen’s Story - Staron - Jan. 25, 2020

Do you think having bushi have the most resonance out of all of the bladers in this story a good idea?