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RE: Creating A Future [Beyblade Story] - LimiTTrickster - Aug. 19, 2013
I thought jake was going to be the main evil lead.
RE: Creating A Future [Beyblade Story] - SaintBlader - Aug. 19, 2013
No, because I had already centered it around Tairn. Don't worry, though! He'll get more spotlight time and he'll become a pretty important character
RE: Creating A Future [Beyblade Story] - ★WindStarElite★ - Aug. 19, 2013
Amazing it is truly the best story keep up the good work.
RE: Creating A Future [Beyblade Story] - LimiTTrickster - Aug. 19, 2013
As long as he is given importance I don't mind. Superfantaspectafabulous story so far
RE: Creating A Future [Beyblade Story] - ★WindStarElite★ - Aug. 19, 2013
In chapter 11 can I come back with a new bey MF dark night phoenix E230 CF From tournaments I win While I wa away
RE: Creating A Future [Beyblade Story] - SaintBlader - Aug. 19, 2013
Probably not in Chapter 11. Ace will be away for a while, but he will come back! And I'll think about the bey change. It would probably help move the story along.
RE: Creating A Future [Beyblade Story] - ★WindStarElite★ - Aug. 19, 2013
Ok he will come back in chapter 14 and ok please consider the bey change since there three main character each next chapter there bey should evoke like legend blader but zero g format
RE: Creating A Future [Beyblade Story][Over 1,000 Views!] - LimiTTrickster - Aug. 19, 2013
I think you've done a great job making sure that all the characters are given importance a 10/10 story
RE: Creating A Future [Beyblade Story][Over 1,000 Views!] - ★WindStarElite★ - Aug. 20, 2013
Yeah I agree
RE: Creating A Future [Beyblade Story][Over 1,000 Views!] - Dual - Aug. 20, 2013
The story is still great, there's just one thing missing. Character development. Besides protagonist or antagonist, the characters don't interact much outside of battles, and don't have to much, well, character. Work on that, and you'll have yourself a great story!
RE: Creating A Future [Beyblade Story][Over 1,000 Views!] - ★WindStarElite★ - Aug. 20, 2013
Yeah they only go to the coffee shop they should work on team work A beyblade camping trip so they can train and become more of team. What do say to that .
RE: Creating A Future [Beyblade Story] - LimiTTrickster - Aug. 20, 2013
(Aug. 19, 2013 8:40 PM)SaintBlader Wrote: Chapter Ten is up! This is the longest chapter so far, and the best in my opinion!
Also, I have decided to split the story into seperate parts to help with knowing where you are in the story.
Thank you all for reading and sharing your opinions!
I don't understand what do you mean by splitting the story into separate parts. Pm me or write on the thread but explain it to me please.
RE: Creating A Future [Beyblade Story][Over 1,000 Views!] - SaintBlader - Aug. 20, 2013
I mean that there will be Part One and Part Two (on the same thread)
RE: Creating A Future [Beyblade Story][Over 1,000 Views!] - LimiTTrickster - Aug. 20, 2013
Ah... Ok I understand also, can I be of any use for the next chapter. Pm me
RE: Creating A Future [Beyblade Story][Over 1,000 Views!] - ★WindStarElite★ - Aug. 20, 2013
Can I help to and do you like the camping trip team bonding trip idea
RE: Creating A Future [Beyblade Story][Over 1,000 Views!] - LimiTTrickster - Aug. 20, 2013
We actually planned on something else, hang on I'll pm. And yes, we are sort of using that.
RE: Creating A Future [Beyblade Story][Over 1,000 Views!] - LimiTTrickster - Aug. 21, 2013
So um when to expect chapter 11
RE: Creating A Future [Beyblade Story][Over 1,000 Views!] - SaintBlader - Aug. 22, 2013
Possibly as late as this weekend. Hopefully tomorrow, but school starts tomorrow and I had to make final preparations today. I will still be working on it, though!
RE: Creating A Future [Beyblade Story][Over 1,000 Views!] - SaintBlader - Aug. 30, 2013
Finally uploaded chapter eleven. With school and AP classes and sports and all that, it is taking me a lot longer to write and it makes it difficult to find a time I can upload. Hope you all enjoy!
RE: Creating A Future [Beyblade Story][Over 1,000 Views!] - ★WindStarElite★ - Aug. 30, 2013
Thanks its so awesome.
RE: Creating A Future [Beyblade Story][Over 1,000 Views!] - chrisbey maniac - Sep. 03, 2013
awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
RE: Creating A Future [Beyblade Story][Over 1,000 Views!] - LimiTTrickster - Sep. 03, 2013
Yeah, and altthough you could have out a little more detail in Beck's battle, along with some more charcter development, this could be the best beyblade story here!
RE: Creating A Future [Beyblade Story][Over 1,000 Views!] - SaintBlader - Nov. 24, 2013
Guys, I am so so so sorry that you have all had to wait for so long. This year has been pretty hectic as far as school goes, and I've also had sports nonstop. I finally uploaded Chapter 12, though, and I hope you will all read and enjoy it. I will begin work on Chapter 13 this week since I have a break school at the end of the week, but I may not be able to finish or upload it until Christmas break. Thank you all for sticking with me throughout all of this!
RE: Creating A Future [Beyblade Story][Over 1,000 Views!] - ★WindStarElite★ - Nov. 25, 2013
Amazing. Chapter Twelve I love the plot of Chapter Twelve. It was clearly amazing a true piece. Of art.And My character. Has returned can't wait to to see when he gets his new bey.And I cannot wait for chapter Thirteen
RE: Creating A Future [Beyblade Story][Over 1,000 Views!] - Oniokami - Nov. 25, 2013
I like it
its creative and i thought the dialogue was great! 
i cant wait to read the 13 chapter! X)