(Jan. 05, 2022  10:52 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: Idk, I kinda like the bad guy. Although he should probably be bleeding from that fall since it easily broke his mask, or at least have some disadvantage because of the pain.
also, Daredevil Blader is Back! LET'S GOOOOOO
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Time to theorize about 2nd best stamina bey imo, Orichalcum. Feel free to skip this lo

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Phantasm Orichalcum...
Orichalcum gimmick was all about OWD, the layer would extend when spinning fast and increase burst resistance. although becoming quite oval as a weakness.
The disc was Outer, very OWD focused afaik.
The driver was Octa, it directly synergies with the layer since the layer grabs its teeth-y design to increase burst resistance. The driver has a sharp tip surrounded by metal.
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I have some guesses on the layer alone:
1st: Phantasm could be just a direct adaptation of Orichalcum, no difference.
2nd: Instead of Oval, the layer just becomes wider in all directions with 4 gaps  between each segment that could be used as a weakness by some beys.
3rd: It just has OWD.
The core:
I'd assume it would have weak teeth if Phantasm has the aforementioned gimmick and because stamina type, but not completely sure.
Disc:
Only part where I'm confident on. For me it will be just circular disc with OWD, maybe good LAD idk. That's the base, because it can very well have fancy gimmick too.
Driver:
The part I have no clue on. You could very well do an Octa variant like metal Octa or just make another part. What I have sure on is that IF you add the OG gimmick, the driver will have a teeth-y design for the gimmick, like Octa. Either way I see a sharp tip, maybe metal, and maybe teeth-like design
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This part is how I think a combo like this above would perform:
If it happens as I tried to predict, the combo would have good same spin stamina and ok-to-bad opposite spin.
It would be easy to throw around but hard to burst at the beginning (unless oval shape, in this case it would be only somewhat harder to burst) and will be weakened by the slow loss of spin. Fortunately, the low friction with the stadium and great OWD makes this same spin bey hard to slow down by time alone, forcing contact. The combo is fairly easy to knock off balance due to the sharp tip.

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Let's see what happens

(Jan. 06, 2022  10:20 AM)reshiwum Wrote: Eep! An antagonistic character, finally. I'm curious of what that blind boy is up to though...

Also, that BennyVen scene in chapter 11,,,,UENGHHH im dying of wholesomeness 😩💖💕💞💖💕

(Jan. 06, 2022  4:22 PM)PikaBeyblade Wrote: There’s gonna be more what?

(Jan. 09, 2022  5:39 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Oh my lord Spriggan I'm so behind. I'm really sorry SpeedySuomi I've just been really busy and I've gotten really behind on your fanfiction but so far it is really good. The Main Anagnost seems interesting and poor dude's mask broke and I love how real this feels. When I read that this was in the Burst Universe I was kinda shocked because everything is so lifelike and what I really like about your fanfic and DeltaZakuro's is the fact that you describe everything so well that I can picture what is happening in my head instead of just having to just read a bunch of words just on the screen which is very boring sometimes. I'll definitely try keeping up with this Fanfic from now on and keep up with everything. Again, I'm loving this series and just keep up the Good Work!

(Jan. 09, 2022  11:09 AM)PinkRose Wrote: Is...is the last one Heikki?
Please don't answer, I'd like to stay in the hype bubble for now)

(Jan. 09, 2022  12:03 PM)SpeedySuomi Wrote:

(Jan. 09, 2022  11:09 AM)PinkRose Wrote: Is...is the last one Heikki?
Please don't answer, I'd like to stay in the hype bubble for now)

Okay then :trol:

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I'd also like to make an announcement as well; I'll be holding a character contest starting this week!

reshiwum, PinkRose, UnseenBurst, Lucha Burst, Hollowmind8, GenesisBlader, Kiryu Kazuma, LJ-Blader, PikaBeyblade

Thought you lot might be interested in this, and only 1 shall remain.

CRITERIA:
Antagonistic, but features a motive for doing so. Has to be a girl.

(Jan. 09, 2022  12:03 PM)SpeedySuomi Wrote:

(Jan. 09, 2022  11:09 AM)PinkRose Wrote: Is...is the last one Heikki?
Please don't answer, I'd like to stay in the hype bubble for now)

Okay then :trol:

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I'd also like to make an announcement as well; I'll be holding a character contest starting this week!

reshiwum PinkRose UnseenBurst Lucha Burst @"Hollowmind8" GenesisBlader Kiryu Kazuma LJ-Blader PikaBeyblade

Thought you lot might be interested in this, and only 1 shall remain.

CRITERIA:
Antagonistic, but features a motive for doing so. Has to be a girl.

(Jan. 09, 2022  11:59 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote:

(Jan. 09, 2022  12:03 PM)SpeedySuomi Wrote: Okay then :trol:

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I'd also like to make an announcement as well; I'll be holding a character contest starting this week!

reshiwum PinkRose UnseenBurst Lucha Burst @"Hollowmind8" GenesisBlader Kiryu Kazuma LJ-Blader PikaBeyblade

Thought you lot might be interested in this, and only 1 shall remain.

CRITERIA:
Antagonistic, but features a motive for doing so. Has to be a girl.

Okay so I'm planning on joining but I have a couple Questions. 1. When is the Due Date for this Contest so I can make time to add and Make an Entry and 2. Can you please explain the System we'll have to be using so that I can get a Good Idea of what I'm writing since I'm not super caught up in the Series so far.

(Jan. 10, 2022  1:08 AM)CelBeyBlade Wrote: Can u make more then 1 entry

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"The Blading World mistreated me so it's time I get my Revenge!!"

Name: Aerith Aranha

Gender: Female

Age: 16

Height: 5'5

Race: British/Mexican (Father is British Mother is Mexican)

Apperance:

Personality: She may seem like a Normal Rebellious Teenager but she is way worse than that. She is Rude, and is always ready to crush her opponent if they hold back or don't meet her expectations. She almost never follows the rules and always breaks them, she never listens to anyone but herself and her Bey. She has a grudge against anyone who looks up to or is friends with a Legendary Blader and won't hesitate to say anything that comes to her mind and she is basically Emotionless and she feels no Guilt or Kindness ever and she loves seeing people upset or in Despair after their Bey is broken and especially by her. She can make her eyes glow whenever she wants to intimidate anyone and her eyes always glows when she Resonates. To sum it all up, she's a Rebellious Teen but 10x Worse and she loves Destroying Beys and basically hates Blading Legends or people who try acting like them.

Backstory: She was a Pretty Weak Blader when she was Younger. She'd always lose almost every Battle and she'd get bullied a lot as a Child and the Teachers or Adults other than her Parents didn't really care about her and just let the Teasing continue. During the 1st Season of Beyblade Burst, she challenged lots of Bladers that would soon be Legends in the future such as Wakiya, Valt, Shu, and Lui. She obviously lost to all of them and Lui and Wakiya both made fun of her for being so weak and Valt just said it was a Fun Battle and he hopes they can battle again while Shu gave her advice but she took that as an Insult. Everything, Wakiya, Shu, Lui, and even what Valt said Aerith took as offensive and she was getting so tired of getting bullied. One time, her Younger Sister was getting badly bullied and when Aerith went to help her the Bullies said that they would stop if she won a Battle against them. Obviously, she lost and then she just ran away crying leaving her sister to continue getting bullied. When they got home, Aerith's Parents were very ticked off at her for just running away and leaving her sister like that, and than that's when Aerith felt like nobody cared for her if she was a weak Blader so she trained hard so she could become Stronger and even one day built her Bey, Vengeful Arachne. She never lost a Battle after she started training very hard but she still had a Grudge against Blading Legends since Lui was just there watching her and her sister continued to get bullied so she hates him the most out of all of the Blading Legends. She became a bully herself after she lost to the bullies and stood her ground so she'd never be pushed around again and became very Rebilous and Evil.

Companions: [font="Source Sans Pro", Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif]She has a Spider usually on her shoulder which she calls Terry and if anyone calls Terry ugly or something like that she'll lose it. When Aerith is battling, Terry goes on top of her hair and stays there till the battle is over and his eyes also glow red when he's either mad because Aerith's Mad or just when she Resonates.[/font]

[font="Source Sans Pro", Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif]Likes: [font="Source Sans Pro", Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif]she loves Spiders, specifically Tarantulas. I know this is pretty obvious but I just wanted to say. If she sees someone step on a Spider or start yelling at them she'll go in Utter Rage and chew them out. She feels like that Spiders are the only Animals that understand her and the only things that she can actually level with. [/font][/font]

Formula Blade: Vengeful, Vengeful has 8 Spikes coming out of its Layer, 3 on Both Sides which are Long and Sharp and 2 Smaller Ones in the Middle of the Bey. (Like Greatest Raphael's Spikes. That small). It has a Purple Electricity Design on all the Spikes and the Spikes can also sink into the Layer a bit so it can absorb Impacts and defend against Attacks better. The Color Scheme is Purple, Dark Red, and Black.

Core Frame: Z, Z is a Purple Core Frame that resembles small Tapastries on it. (Basically Small Pictures of Spiders). It makes the Bey not Very much Taller than it was before but it raises its height by about 2 and One-Fourth of an Inch Higher than the Bey already was before.

Formula Core: Arachne, Arachne is a Chip with an Arachne Motif on it, the First Spider ever because of its Pride and thinking it was better than Athena. It has Blood Red Eyes and a Blood Red Orb in the middle as it has sort of hands holding onto the Orb. (Kinda like Lucifer the End). And 8 Spikes coming outwards on the side of the Chip as they are all Purple. In the Motif, Arachne's Mouth is basically the Mouth of the Belial 1 Core.

Armor: 6. Self Explanatory.

Disk, Silk. Silk is a Disk that is basically like Tapered and Nexus+S combined because it has the part of Tapered that kinda goes down with a Web-like Design and on the top, it has a Shape-like Nexus+S with a Frame Attachment like S Gear that is a combination of Red and Purple.

Driver, High Universe R'. It's basically High Universe which we kinda saw in SpeedStorm but with a New Lock Gimmick. Like the Dash and Metal Lock Gimmick the R' Lock Gimmick increases the Driver's Spring Lock and has a Golden Spring within it. It has Very Hard Rubber acting as the cap with which the Bey's Teeth make contact. It doesn't cause Teeth Damage or Teeth Wear. It basically just works as a Dash Spring Driver.

Special Moves: [font="Source Sans Pro", Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif]Vengeful Venom Strike: When Arachne it knocked out of the Stadium and is at Full Power it speeds around the stadium and crashes into the opposing Bey sending Electricity throughout the Bey and it bursts soon after. This is usually Arachne's Finisher Move and or Special Special Move.

Vengeful Acid: All 8 of Arachne's Spikes glow bright Green on the Vengeful Blade as it continues to block incoming attacks and also does damage to the opposing Bey for each time it gets hit. Arachne uses this as its Main Defensive Move and uses it usually around the beginning of the Match.

Acidic Counter: When it gets hit out of the center it tilts on the High Universe Driver's Free Spinning ring and accelerates to go in for a Counterattack, Usually uses this Move around in the middle of the Battle when it gets knocked away or something.[/font]

The Top Part of the Avatar is basically a Mysterious Women with 6 Blood Red Eyes and she has an A Cressent engraved on her armor and her armor is also Black and Red with Web Designs. (Basically the Iron Spider Suit from Infinity War except for Black and Red). And she has long hair that goes everywhere that are basically Webs but they are 6 Inches Long. On the bottom part of the Avatar, it basically looks like a Regular Spider with a Red Widow Mark on the Avatar

(Jan. 10, 2022  3:05 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Took me 30 Mins to create but I love this Character so much. If it doesn't get added I'll probably use it in one of my Fanfics. SpeedySuomi

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"The Blading World mistreated me so it's time I get my Revenge!!"

Name: Aerith Aranha

Gender: Female

Age: 16

Height: 5'5

Race: British/Mexican (Father is British Mother is Mexican)

Apperance:

Personality: She may seem like a Normal Rebellious Teenager but she is way worse than that. She is Rude, and is always ready to crush her opponent if they hold back or don't meet her expectations. She almost never follows the rules and always breaks them, she never listens to anyone but herself and her Bey. She has a grudge against anyone who looks up to or is friends with a Legendary Blader and won't hesitate to say anything that comes to her mind and she is basically Emotionless and she feels no Guilt or Kindness ever and she loves seeing people upset or in Despair after their Bey is broken and especially by her. She can make her eyes glow whenever she wants to intimidate anyone and her eyes always glows when she Resonates. To sum it all up, she's a Rebellious Teen but 10x Worse and she loves Destroying Beys and basically hates Blading Legends or people who try acting like them.

Backstory: She was a Pretty Weak Blader when she was Younger. She'd always lose almost every Battle and she'd get bullied a lot as a Child and the Teachers or Adults other than her Parents didn't really care about her and just let the Teasing continue. During the 1st Season of Beyblade Burst, she challenged lots of Bladers that would soon be Legends in the future such as Wakiya, Valt, Shu, and Lui. She obviously lost to all of them and Lui and Wakiya both made fun of her for being so weak and Valt just said it was a Fun Battle and he hopes they can battle again while Shu gave her advice but she took that as an Insult. Everything, Wakiya, Shu, Lui, and even what Valt said Aerith took as offensive and she was getting so tired of getting bullied. One time, her Younger Sister was getting badly bullied and when Aerith went to help her the Bullies said that they would stop if she won a Battle against them. Obviously, she lost and then she just ran away crying leaving her sister to continue getting bullied. When they got home, Aerith's Parents were very ticked off at her for just running away and leaving her sister like that, and than that's when Aerith felt like nobody cared for her if she was a weak Blader so she trained hard so she could become Stronger and even one day built her Bey, Vengeful Arachne. She never lost a Battle after she started training very hard but she still had a Grudge against Blading Legends since Lui was just there watching her and her sister continued to get bullied so she hates him the most out of all of the Blading Legends. She became a bully herself after she lost to the bullies and stood her ground so she'd never be pushed around again and became very Rebilous and Evil.

Formula Blade: Vengeful, Vengeful has 8 Spikes coming out of its Layer, 3 on Both Sides which are Long and Sharp and 2 Smaller Ones in the Middle of the Bey. (Like Greatest Raphael's Spikes. That small). It has a Purple Electricity Design on all the Spikes and the Spikes can also sink into the Layer a bit so it can absorb Impacts and defend against Attacks better. The Color Scheme is Purple, Dark Red, and Black.

Core Frame: Z, Z is a Purple Core Frame that resembles small Tapastries on it. (Basically Small Pictures of Spiders). It makes the Bey not Very much Taller than it was before but it raises its height by about 2 and One-Fourth of an Inch Higher than the Bey already was before.

Formula Core: Arachne, Arachne is a Chip with an Arachne Motif on it, the First Spider ever because of its Pride and thinking it was better than Athena. It has Blood Red Eyes and a Blood Red Orb in the middle as it has sort of hands holding onto the Orb. (Kinda like Lucifer the End). And 8 Spikes coming outwards on the side of the Chip as they are all Purple. In the Motif, Arachne's Mouth is basically the Mouth of the Belial 1 Core.

Armor: 6. Self Explanatory.

Energy Layer: ??? I don't really get this. Don't I already have a Blade? Please answer so I can actually add this.

Disk, Silk. Silk is a Disk that is basically like Tapered and Nexus+S combined because it has the part of Tapered that kinda goes down with a Web-like Design and on the top, it has a Shape-like Nexus+S with a Frame Attachment like S Gear that is a combination of Red and Purple.

Driver, High Universe R'. It's basically High Universe which we kinda saw in SpeedStorm but with a New Lock Gimmick. Like the Dash and Metal Lock Gimmick the R' Lock Gimmick increases the Driver's Spring Lock and has a Golden Spring within it. It has Very Hard Rubber acting as the cap with which the Bey's Teeth make contact. It doesn't cause Teeth Damage or Teeth Wear. It basically just works as a Dash Spring Driver.

(Jan. 10, 2022  3:16 AM)SpeedySuomi Wrote:

(Jan. 10, 2022  3:05 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Took me 30 Mins to create but I love this Character so much. If it doesn't get added I'll probably use it in one of my Fanfics. SpeedySuomi

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"The Blading World mistreated me so it's time I get my Revenge!!"

Name: Aerith Aranha

Gender: Female

Age: 16

Height: 5'5

Race: British/Mexican (Father is British Mother is Mexican)

Apperance:

Personality: She may seem like a Normal Rebellious Teenager but she is way worse than that. She is Rude, and is always ready to crush her opponent if they hold back or don't meet her expectations. She almost never follows the rules and always breaks them, she never listens to anyone but herself and her Bey. She has a grudge against anyone who looks up to or is friends with a Legendary Blader and won't hesitate to say anything that comes to her mind and she is basically Emotionless and she feels no Guilt or Kindness ever and she loves seeing people upset or in Despair after their Bey is broken and especially by her. She can make her eyes glow whenever she wants to intimidate anyone and her eyes always glows when she Resonates. To sum it all up, she's a Rebellious Teen but 10x Worse and she loves Destroying Beys and basically hates Blading Legends or people who try acting like them.

Backstory: She was a Pretty Weak Blader when she was Younger. She'd always lose almost every Battle and she'd get bullied a lot as a Child and the Teachers or Adults other than her Parents didn't really care about her and just let the Teasing continue. During the 1st Season of Beyblade Burst, she challenged lots of Bladers that would soon be Legends in the future such as Wakiya, Valt, Shu, and Lui. She obviously lost to all of them and Lui and Wakiya both made fun of her for being so weak and Valt just said it was a Fun Battle and he hopes they can battle again while Shu gave her advice but she took that as an Insult. Everything, Wakiya, Shu, Lui, and even what Valt said Aerith took as offensive and she was getting so tired of getting bullied. One time, her Younger Sister was getting badly bullied and when Aerith went to help her the Bullies said that they would stop if she won a Battle against them. Obviously, she lost and then she just ran away crying leaving her sister to continue getting bullied. When they got home, Aerith's Parents were very ticked off at her for just running away and leaving her sister like that, and than that's when Aerith felt like nobody cared for her if she was a weak Blader so she trained hard so she could become Stronger and even one day built her Bey, Vengeful Arachne. She never lost a Battle after she started training very hard but she still had a Grudge against Blading Legends since Lui was just there watching her and her sister continued to get bullied so she hates him the most out of all of the Blading Legends. She became a bully herself after she lost to the bullies and stood her ground so she'd never be pushed around again and became very Rebilous and Evil.

Formula Blade: Vengeful, Vengeful has 8 Spikes coming out of its Layer, 3 on Both Sides which are Long and Sharp and 2 Smaller Ones in the Middle of the Bey. (Like Greatest Raphael's Spikes. That small). It has a Purple Electricity Design on all the Spikes and the Spikes can also sink into the Layer a bit so it can absorb Impacts and defend against Attacks better. The Color Scheme is Purple, Dark Red, and Black.

Core Frame: Z, Z is a Purple Core Frame that resembles small Tapastries on it. (Basically Small Pictures of Spiders). It makes the Bey not Very much Taller than it was before but it raises its height by about 2 and One-Fourth of an Inch Higher than the Bey already was before.

Formula Core: Arachne, Arachne is a Chip with an Arachne Motif on it, the First Spider ever because of its Pride and thinking it was better than Athena. It has Blood Red Eyes and a Blood Red Orb in the middle as it has sort of hands holding onto the Orb. (Kinda like Lucifer the End). And 8 Spikes coming outwards on the side of the Chip as they are all Purple. In the Motif, Arachne's Mouth is basically the Mouth of the Belial 1 Core.

Armor: 6. Self Explanatory.

Energy Layer: ??? I don't really get this. Don't I already have a Blade? Please answer so I can actually add this.

Disk, Silk. Silk is a Disk that is basically like Tapered and Nexus+S combined because it has the part of Tapered that kinda goes down with a Web-like Design and on the top, it has a Shape-like Nexus+S with a Frame Attachment like S Gear that is a combination of Red and Purple.

Driver, High Universe R'. It's basically High Universe which we kinda saw in SpeedStorm but with a New Lock Gimmick. Like the Dash and Metal Lock Gimmick the R' Lock Gimmick increases the Driver's Spring Lock and has a Golden Spring within it. It has Very Hard Rubber acting as the cap with which the Bey's Teeth make contact. It doesn't cause Teeth Damage or Teeth Wear. It basically just works as a Dash Spring Driver.

Ah, if you're confused about the Energy Layer part, it's either that you use the Formula Blade which is separated into four parts or you use an Energy Layer which combines them all at the cost of customization and HM/LM.

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In a nutshell, you can substitute it for the Formula Blade/Core/Armor/Frame combination like with Greatest Raphael, so if you use an Energy Layer you can't use the separate Layer combination.

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Sidenote: This whole thing is in the parameters of Japan by the way, it's a high-school setting. It might dragon to be international though.

(Jan. 11, 2022  6:32 AM)SpeedySuomi Wrote: Yeah uh... bad news people, change of plans. I'm gonna have to cancel the contest, even after one day of its release. I know its sounds selfish but, I feel like I might struggle a little with how I deal with the characters and maybe face some long-term complications with the characters. That, and I might see some similar OCs to what I've planned for later chapters. So uh, sorry people.

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