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RE: Beyblade Burst: Sisu - PikaBeyblade - Jan. 06, 2022

His personality kinda is like Reiji From Mfb

Oh I started a new page


RE: Beyblade Burst: Sisu - SpeedySuomi - Jan. 06, 2022

(Jan. 05, 2022  10:52 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: Idk, I kinda like the bad guy. Although he should probably be bleeding from that fall since it easily broke his mask, or at least have some disadvantage because of the pain.
also, Daredevil Blader is Back! LET'S GOOOOOO
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Time to theorize about 2nd best stamina bey imo, Orichalcum. Feel free to skip this lo
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Let's see what happens

Interesting take, but it's gonna be a Defense-type since I based it off of Shadow Orichalcum more than Orichalcum. This is also the reason why it's Mist Blue instead of gold or silver.


RE: Beyblade Burst: Sisu - reshiwum - Jan. 06, 2022

Eep! An antagonistic character, finally. I'm curious of what that blind boy is up to though...

Also, that BennyVen scene in chapter 11,,,,UENGHHH im dying of wholesomeness 😩💖💕💞💖💕


RE: Beyblade Burst: Sisu - SpeedySuomi - Jan. 06, 2022

(Jan. 06, 2022  10:20 AM)reshiwum Wrote: Eep! An antagonistic character, finally. I'm curious of what that blind boy is up to though...

Also, that BennyVen scene in chapter 11,,,,UENGHHH im dying of wholesomeness 😩💖💕💞💖💕

There's gonna be more.




RE: Beyblade Burst: Sisu - PikaBeyblade - Jan. 06, 2022

There’s gonna be more what?


RE: Beyblade Burst: Sisu - Hollowmind13 - Jan. 06, 2022

(Jan. 06, 2022  4:22 PM)PikaBeyblade Wrote: There’s gonna be more what?

He is referring to "the wholesomeness", stating that there will be more


RE: Beyblade Burst: Sisu - PikaBeyblade - Jan. 06, 2022

Oh “wholesomeness” I see what ya mean there

Don’t see stuff like this that often in a Beyblade fanfic


RE: Beyblade Burst: Sisu - UnseenBurst - Jan. 09, 2022

Oh my lord Spriggan I'm so behind. I'm really sorry SpeedySuomi I've just been really busy and I've gotten really behind on your fanfiction but so far it is really good. The Main Anagnost seems interesting and poor dude's mask broke and I love how real this feels. When I read that this was in the Burst Universe I was kinda shocked because everything is so lifelike and what I really like about your fanfic and DeltaZakuro's is the fact that you describe everything so well that I can picture what is happening in my head instead of just having to just read a bunch of words just on the screen which is very boring sometimes. I'll definitely try keeping up with this Fanfic from now on and keep up with everything. Again, I'm loving this series and just keep up the Good Work!


RE: Beyblade Burst: Sisu - SpeedySuomi - Jan. 09, 2022

(Jan. 09, 2022  5:39 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Oh my lord Spriggan I'm so behind. I'm really sorry SpeedySuomi I've just been really busy and I've gotten really behind on your fanfiction but so far it is really good. The Main Anagnost seems interesting and poor dude's mask broke and I love how real this feels. When I read that this was in the Burst Universe I was kinda shocked because everything is so lifelike and what I really like about your fanfic and DeltaZakuro's is the fact that you describe everything so well that I can picture what is happening in my head instead of just having to just read a bunch of words just on the screen which is very boring sometimes. I'll definitely try keeping up with this Fanfic from now on and keep up with everything. Again, I'm loving this series and just keep up the Good Work!

That's not the main antagonist lol, but it's fine if you haven't read it!

BEYBLADE INFO & TEASERS




RE: Beyblade Burst: Sisu - PinkRose - Jan. 09, 2022

Is...is the last one Heikki?
Please don't answer, I'd like to stay in the hype bubble for now)


RE: Beyblade Burst: Sisu - SpeedySuomi - Jan. 09, 2022

(Jan. 09, 2022  11:09 AM)PinkRose Wrote: Is...is the last one Heikki?
Please don't answer, I'd like to stay in the hype bubble for now)

Okay then :trol:

I'd also like to make an announcement as well; I'll be holding a character contest starting this week!

reshiwum PinkRose UnseenBurst Lucha Burst @"Hollowmind8" GenesisBlader Kiryu Kazuma LJ-Blader PikaBeyblade

Thought you lot might be interested in this, and only 1 shall remain.

CRITERIA:
Antagonistic, but features a motive for doing so. Has to be a girl.


RE: Beyblade Burst: Sisu - PinkRose - Jan. 09, 2022

(Jan. 09, 2022  12:03 PM)SpeedySuomi Wrote:
(Jan. 09, 2022  11:09 AM)PinkRose Wrote: Is...is the last one Heikki?
Please don't answer, I'd like to stay in the hype bubble for now)

Okay then :trol:

I'd also like to make an announcement as well; I'll be holding a character contest starting this week!

reshiwum, PinkRose, UnseenBurst, Lucha Burst, Hollowmind8, GenesisBlader, Kiryu Kazuma, LJ-Blader, PikaBeyblade

Thought you lot might be interested in this, and only 1 shall remain.

CRITERIA:
Antagonistic, but features a motive for doing so. Has to be a girl.

Man, this sounds like a lot of fun, but I'll sadly have to pass. Things are getting a little too busy for me to create an actually good character concept...I do wish everyone else good luck if they try, though.


RE: Beyblade Burst: Sisu - Hollowmind13 - Jan. 09, 2022

for one moment I thought you wrote "Motif" instead of "Motive" lo.
I'll try to do something.


RE: Beyblade Burst: Sisu - UnseenBurst - Jan. 09, 2022

(Jan. 09, 2022  12:03 PM)SpeedySuomi Wrote:
(Jan. 09, 2022  11:09 AM)PinkRose Wrote: Is...is the last one Heikki?
Please don't answer, I'd like to stay in the hype bubble for now)

Okay then :trol:

I'd also like to make an announcement as well; I'll be holding a character contest starting this week!

reshiwum PinkRose UnseenBurst Lucha Burst @"Hollowmind8" GenesisBlader Kiryu Kazuma LJ-Blader PikaBeyblade

Thought you lot might be interested in this, and only 1 shall remain.

CRITERIA:
Antagonistic, but features a motive for doing so. Has to be a girl.

Okay so I'm planning on joining but I have a couple Questions. 1. When is the Due Date for this Contest so I can make time to add and Make an Entry and 2. Can you please explain the System we'll have to be using so that I can get a Good Idea of what I'm writing since I'm not super caught up in the Series so far.


RE: Beyblade Burst: Sisu - CelBeyBlade - Jan. 10, 2022

Can u make more then 1 entry


RE: Beyblade Burst: Sisu - SpeedySuomi - Jan. 10, 2022

(Jan. 09, 2022  11:59 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote:
(Jan. 09, 2022  12:03 PM)SpeedySuomi Wrote: Okay then :trol:

I'd also like to make an announcement as well; I'll be holding a character contest starting this week!

reshiwum PinkRose UnseenBurst Lucha Burst @"Hollowmind8" GenesisBlader Kiryu Kazuma LJ-Blader PikaBeyblade

Thought you lot might be interested in this, and only 1 shall remain.

CRITERIA:
Antagonistic, but features a motive for doing so. Has to be a girl.

Okay so I'm planning on joining but I have a couple Questions. 1. When is the Due Date for this Contest so I can make time to add and Make an Entry and 2. Can you please explain the System we'll have to be using so that I can get a Good Idea of what I'm writing since I'm not super caught up in the Series so far.

It's basic really:

Also, before entering read this:

RULES
-Has to be a female character at the age of 16-17.
-Antagonistic, but has a motive and is never truly evil. Or you could do it the old way and make her evil.
-Beyblade names have to line up with the name of their owners. (i.e; Venni - Vainamoinen, Beniko - Brunhilde)
-Beyblade letters (that the Beys names start with) shouldn't be taken.
-Apply the spoiler tags to your entries in order to reduce clutter.
For those who don't know, it's like this without the spaces:
[ spoiler] [ /spoiler]

LIST OF UNTAKEN LETTERS

A - Amarok | Avalanche
B - Brunhilde | N/A
C - N/A | Caprice
D - Ds | D
E - Ev | E
F - Fr | F
G - Gl | Gladius
H - Hd | N/A
I - Ifrit | N/A
J - N/A | N/A
K - Kalliope | N/A
L - N/A | N/A
M - N/A | Molten
N - Nemesis | N/A
O - Orichalcum | Oblivion
P - N/A | Phantasm
Q - N/A | N/A
R - N/A | R
S - Sc | Skyline
T - Tennin | T
U - N/A | N/A
V - Vainamoinen | N/A
W - N/A | Wraith
X - N/A | N/A
Y - N/A | N/A
Z - N/A | N/A

And by the way, it starts now (this Monday) and ends after 2 or 3 weeks.

(Jan. 10, 2022  1:08 AM)CelBeyBlade Wrote: Can u make more then 1 entry

Yeah, maximum up to two entries. But only one character makes it in the final cut.


RE: Beyblade Burst: Sisu (Character Contest) - UnseenBurst - Jan. 10, 2022

Took me 30 Mins to create but I love this Character so much. If it doesn't get added I'll probably use it in one of my Fanfics. SpeedySuomi




RE: Beyblade Burst: Sisu (Character Contest) - SpeedySuomi - Jan. 10, 2022

(Jan. 10, 2022  3:05 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Took me 30 Mins to create but I love this Character so much. If it doesn't get added I'll probably use it in one of my Fanfics. SpeedySuomi


Ah, if you're confused about the Energy Layer part, it's either that you use the Formula Blade which is separated into four parts or you use an Energy Layer which combines them all at the cost of customization and HM/LM.

In a nutshell, you can substitute it for the Formula Blade/Core/Armor/Frame combination like with Greatest Raphael, so if you use an Energy Layer you can't use the separate Layer combination.

Sidenote: This whole thing is in the parameters of Japan by the way, it's a high-school setting. It might drag on to be international though.


RE: Beyblade Burst: Sisu (Character Contest) - UnseenBurst - Jan. 10, 2022

(Jan. 10, 2022  3:16 AM)SpeedySuomi Wrote:
(Jan. 10, 2022  3:05 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Took me 30 Mins to create but I love this Character so much. If it doesn't get added I'll probably use it in one of my Fanfics. SpeedySuomi


Ah, if you're confused about the Energy Layer part, it's either that you use the Formula Blade which is separated into four parts or you use an Energy Layer which combines them all at the cost of customization and HM/LM.

In a nutshell, you can substitute it for the Formula Blade/Core/Armor/Frame combination like with Greatest Raphael, so if you use an Energy Layer you can't use the separate Layer combination.

Sidenote: This whole thing is in the parameters of Japan by the way, it's a high-school setting. It might dragon to be international though.

Forgot to mention that she loves Spiders, specifically Tarantulas. I know this is pretty obvious but I just wanted to say. If she sees someone step on a Spider or start yelling at them she'll go in Utter Rage and chew them out. She feels like that Spiders are the only Animals that understand her and the only things that she can actually level with. She has a Spider usually on her shoulder which she calls Terry and if anyone calls Terry ugly or something like that she'll lose it. When Aerith is battling, Terry goes on top of her hair and stays there till the battle is over and his eyes also glow red when he's either mad because Aerith's Mad or just when she Resonates.

If you need to make Small Changes feel free just please let me know so I can actually see how it'll impact her Character.


RE: Beyblade Burst: Sisu - Hollowmind13 - Jan. 11, 2022

Do not calculate which hours I posted it using my timezone, just pretend it is 8pm or something.
Any problems or hard-to-understand parts would be very much appreciated if shared (if any (likely there will be, but who knows))
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Character
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Bey:
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Special moves (on a different spoiler because why not?)
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Also yes, edgy on purpose. Not necessarily trying to win


RE: Beyblade Burst: Sisu (Character Contest) - UnseenBurst - Jan. 11, 2022

I feel like I'm forgetting everything. Sorry, SpeedySuomi for the ping again but here's the Move List.



RE: Beyblade Burst: Sisu (Character Contest) - We do not care - Jan. 11, 2022

Here's my oc



RE: Beyblade Burst: Sisu (Character Contest) - UnseenBurst - Jan. 11, 2022

I edited my Character Contest Entry so that everything I added is in there plus with some other Original Stuff I added in there to make sure you can clearly understand her Character and what the Basic Gist of her Bey was. Sorry for bugging you there, SpeedyS. Anyways, I wish the best of luck to all of you, and may the best entrance win.


RE: Beyblade Burst: Sisu - SpeedySuomi - Jan. 11, 2022

Yeah uh... bad news people, change of plans. I'm gonna have to cancel the contest, even after one day of its release. I know its sounds selfish but, I feel like I might struggle a little with how I deal with the characters and maybe face some long-term complications with the characters. That, and I might see some similar OCs to what I've planned for later chapters. So uh, sorry people.




RE: Beyblade Burst: Sisu - Hollowmind13 - Jan. 11, 2022

(Jan. 11, 2022  6:32 AM)SpeedySuomi Wrote: Yeah uh... bad news people, change of plans. I'm gonna have to cancel the contest, even after one day of its release. I know its sounds selfish but, I feel like I might struggle a little with how I deal with the characters and maybe face some long-term complications with the characters. That, and I might see some similar OCs to what I've planned for later chapters. So uh, sorry people.

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Jormungandr? 
btw, I don't really care for contests kinda, I mean, I like them but it is still the same fic so I'm not bothered if it is canceled or not (besides I do understand having 3 edgy characters is overkill, I didn't notice theirs were the same level as mine, that way I would've changed it). And on the plus side, you will able to write with more ease than you would with the characters from the contest. So I don't see that as a lose on the long run.
TL;DR: Understandable, have a great day