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RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - UnseenBurst - Sep. 18, 2021
(Sep. 18, 2021 5:46 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: S2 Chapter 8
https://www.wattpad.com/1130114641-story-of-lanes-sister-athena-~beyblade-burst
I posted a chapter right after you on my fanfic, a coincidence? I think not.
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. Anyways, the battle with Daina and Athena was super cool. I loved how Daina knew something was up with Athena and he could somewhat relate. Awesome reference to the first season! R.I.P Wyvern, 2017-2021. One Question, was Wakiya using Jet or Tornado Wyvern? I couldn't really tell. Anyways, I'm excited for the next episode! (Also, I really wanna see a battle with Valt and Lane but I'm assuming that'll come in a later chapter) Daina Vs Lean, that battle will be awesome! amazing episode as usually DeltaZakuro 8/10! RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - DeltaZakuro - Sep. 18, 2021
(Sep. 18, 2021 6:01 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote:(Sep. 18, 2021 5:46 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: S2 Chapter 8
https://www.wattpad.com/1130114641-story-of-lanes-sister-athena-~beyblade-burst
I posted a chapter right after you on my fanfic, a coincidence? I think not.
Spoiler (Click to View)
He was using a Sparking Wyvern i custom created earlier in Season 1 called Pulse Wyvern.Om.3D and that was way before Jet was revealed. Jet will come in a later chapter.
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - DeltaZakuro - Sep. 20, 2021
Athenas Dark/Evil Theme
https://youtu.be/LyORCTvLo7I
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - ColdFlames13 - Sep. 20, 2021
(DZ can you ping me as well when a new chapter comes out)
Also, Why did you choose Emperor for Lane's bey (I'm asking because Emperor is taken by Forneus)
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - DeltaZakuro - Sep. 20, 2021
(Sep. 20, 2021 2:28 PM)ColdFlames13 Wrote: (DZ can you ping me as well when a new chapter comes out)
Also, Why did you choose Emperor for Lane's bey (I'm asking because Emperor is taken by Forneus)
I choose new Beyblade names based on how cool they sound, not whether the name has been taken or not. and i thought Emperor Lucifer was a cool name so i used it.
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - ColdFlames13 - Sep. 20, 2021
(Sep. 20, 2021 4:09 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote:(Sep. 20, 2021 2:28 PM)ColdFlames13 Wrote: (DZ can you ping me as well when a new chapter comes out)
Also, Why did you choose Emperor for Lane's bey (I'm asking because Emperor is taken by Forneus)
I choose new Beyblade names based on how cool they sound, not whether the name has been taken or not. and i thought Emperor Lucifer was a cool name so i used it.
Your right. It does sound cool.
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - DeltaZakuro - Sep. 21, 2021
Wattpad did not save my new chapter so i have to go back and redo it again, Thankfully i Copied some of it before it didnt save. the problem is that the new chapter is gonna be pretty long so i'll have to go back and redo pretty much the ENTIRE ending.
I'm so *insert no-no word here* mad rn..
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - GenesisBlader - Sep. 21, 2021
(Sep. 21, 2021 12:34 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Wattpad did not save my new chapter so i have to go back and redo it again, Thankfully i Copied some of it before it didnt save. the problem is that the new chapter is gonna be pretty long so i'll have to go back and redo pretty much the ENTIRE ending.
I'm so *insert no-no word here* mad rn..
welcome to my world...
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - DeltaZakuro - Sep. 21, 2021
Well finally got the new Chapter fixed. I apologize if its rushed but Wattpad not saving my work has really taken a toll on my emotional state.
Anyway here is Episode 9
https://www.wattpad.com/1132359652-story-of-lanes-sister-athena-~beyblade-burst/page/2
UnseenBurst and ColdFlames13
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - DeltaZakuro - Sep. 21, 2021
S2 Chapter 10 out either today or tomorrow. Not sure yet.
Season 2 Opening: "Dancing In The Flames"
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RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - DeltaZakuro - Sep. 22, 2021
New Upgraded Parts for Adeona in the future
8A Chassis - An Attack Single Chassis that has a very sharp and jagged shape, its shape resembling that of the S-Gear in attack mode in terms of its shape. It is incredibly heavy, weighing in about 22.25 grams. it has no gimmick, its just incredibly heavy
Barrage' Driver (Ba') - An fused driver with a dash spring in it so it has extra burst resistance. The driver is very similar in shape to that of Hybrid and Ignition' but not as wide. The gimmick is that in battle when it starts to slow down, the metal sharp tip in the driver retracts and makes the bey spin even even faster on a hole flat tip. The driver also has excellent Attack and LAD which makes it incredibly versatile in Athenas setup.
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - DeltaZakuro - Sep. 23, 2021
New Chapter soon
S2 Chapter 10
https://www.wattpad.com/1132579449-story-of-lanes-sister-athena-~beyblade-burst
UnseenBurst ColdFlames13
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - DeltaZakuro - Sep. 25, 2021
New Chapter out soon. It's also the final episode before the Snake Pit arc
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - UnseenBurst - Sep. 25, 2021
Just curious, are you going to make a post about hidden facts about Athena. I would like to know her secrets I'm curious about what Athena's hiding. It feels like she's trying to hide something. Athena Sussy Baka Anyways, will you do some facts on Athena?
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - DeltaZakuro - Sep. 25, 2021
(Sep. 25, 2021 6:52 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Just curious, are you going to make a post about hidden facts about Athena. I would like to know her secrets I'm curious about what Athena's hiding. It feels like she's trying to hide something. Athena Sussy Baka Anyways, will you do some facts on Athena?
I will at some point. But it probably won't be until after Season 2 ends or somewhere around that point.
S2 Chapter 11
https://www.wattpad.com/1133796572-story-of-lanes-sister-athena-~beyblade-burst
UnseenBurst ColdFlames13 GenesisBlader
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - UnseenBurst - Sep. 26, 2021
(Sep. 25, 2021 6:53 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote:(Sep. 25, 2021 6:52 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Just curious, are you going to make a post about hidden facts about Athena. I would like to know her secrets I'm curious about what Athena's hiding. It feels like she's trying to hide something. Athena Sussy Baka Anyways, will you do some facts on Athena?
I will at some point. But it probably won't be until after Season 2 ends or somewhere around that point.
S2 Chapter 11
https://www.wattpad.com/1133796572-story-of-lanes-sister-athena-~beyblade-burst
UnseenBurst ColdFlames13 GenesisBlader
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RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - GenesisBlader - Sep. 26, 2021
dang this episode was long! but, athena, im sorry to announce that you are not a member of the sussy clan.... HYUGA HIKARU NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOo
nice chapter, i like how athena ran the gauntlet and defeated not one, not two, but three legends!
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - UnseenBurst - Sep. 26, 2021
(Sep. 26, 2021 4:50 PM)GenesisBlader Wrote: dang this episode was long! but, athena, im sorry to announce that you are not a member of the sussy clan.... HYUGA HIKARU NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOo
nice chapter, i like how athena ran the gauntlet and defeated not one, not two, but three legends!
Technically Hikaru and Hyuga aren't legendary Bladers, which honestly seems dumb since they became the Tag Team World Champions but on the Beyblade Wiki, it actually says Hyuga and Hikaru are at the top of A-Rank. But this is DeltaZakuro's Fanfiction, if he wants them to be legends he can do that. I'm just talking about the Sparking Anime Rankings
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - GenesisBlader - Sep. 26, 2021
(Sep. 26, 2021 4:54 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote:(Sep. 26, 2021 4:50 PM)GenesisBlader Wrote: dang this episode was long! but, athena, im sorry to announce that you are not a member of the sussy clan.... HYUGA HIKARU NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOo
nice chapter, i like how athena ran the gauntlet and defeated not one, not two, but three legends!
Technically Hikaru and Hyuga aren't legendary Bladers, which honestly seems dumb since they became the Tag Team World Champions but on the Beyblade Wiki, it actually says Hyuga and Hikaru are at the top of A-Rank. But this is DeltaZakuro's Fanfiction, if he wants them to be legends he can do that. I'm just talking about the Sparking Anime Rankings
what
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - DeltaZakuro - Sep. 26, 2021
Would also like to point out the S-Tier rankings as of this current time in the story (as mentioned in the first Episode, S-Tier was expanded a some so there are more Legend Spots in S-Tier)
#1 - Valt
#2 - Shu
#3 - Aiga
#4 - Free
#5 - Lui
#6 - Drum
#7 - Phi
#8 - Gwyn
#9 - Delta
#10 - Xhaka
#11 - Sisco
#12 - Zac
#13 - Wakiya
#14 - Daina
#15 - Rantaro
#16 - Lane
#17 - Athena
#18 - Boa
#19 - Kurtz (Actually doesnt appear in the story and doesnt use a Sparking Bey currently)
#20 - Hearts (Same case with Kurtz but is only mentioned by Phi)
Hikaru is A-Tier #21 and Hyuga is A-Tier #22
S2 Chapter 12
https://www.wattpad.com/1134418356-story-of-lanes-sister-athena-~beyblade-burst
UnseenBurst ColdFlames13 GenesisBlader
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - DeltaZakuro - Sep. 27, 2021
Upcoming Chapters
Chapter 13: The Horrors Within!
Chapter 14: Descent Into Darkness! Battle In The Labyrinth!!
Chapter 15: Rising Flames! Emperor Lucifer!
Chapter 16: Black Fire! The Darkness Within!!
Chapter 17: Explosive Power, Adeona Awakens!!
Chapter 18: Nightmare! Mastering Adeona!
Chapter 19: How Legends Are Made!
Chapter 20: Revolving Sun! Thunder Zeus!!
Chapter 12 is above.
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - DeltaZakuro - Sep. 28, 2021
S2 Chapter 13
https://www.wattpad.com/1135014982-story-of-lanes-sister-athena-~beyblade-burst
UnseenBurst ColdFlames13 GenesisBlader
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - ColdFlames13 - Sep. 28, 2021
(Sep. 28, 2021 5:32 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: S2 Chapter 13
https://www.wattpad.com/1135014982-story-of-lanes-sister-athena-~beyblade-burst
UnseenBurst ColdFlames13 GenesisBlader
I wasnt expecting you to break Glide. Sucks for Rantaro. Keep it up DZ.
(I can call you DZ right? Its just abbreviated Delta Zakuro)
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - DeltaZakuro - Sep. 29, 2021
S2 Chapter 14
https://www.wattpad.com/1135425097-story-of-lanes-sister-athena-~beyblade-burst
UnseenBurst ColdFlames13 GenesisBlader
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - GenesisBlader - Sep. 29, 2021
(Sep. 29, 2021 2:02 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: S2 Chapter 14
https://www.wattpad.com/1135425097-story-of-lanes-sister-athena-~beyblade-burst
UnseenBurst ColdFlames13 GenesisBlader
OHHHHHHHHHHH MAH GAWD, athena has a whole HORN sticking out of her head!?!?!?!?!? that's crazy!
this chapter was pretty pog nuggets, but i almost threw up in my own mouth after reading how athena grew a "oddly shaped horn" in her head