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RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - DeltaZakuro - Sep. 07, 2021
Season 2 Chapter 1
https://www.wattpad.com/1126126614-story-of-lanes-sister-athena-~beyblade-burst
UnseenBurst BurningSands
Ah of course, new page for a new season too.
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - UnseenBurst - Sep. 07, 2021
(Sep. 07, 2021 9:55 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Season 2 Chapter 1
https://www.wattpad.com/1126126614-story-of-lanes-sister-athena-~beyblade-burst
UnseenBurst BurningSands
Ah of course, new page for a new season too.
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RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - DeltaZakuro - Sep. 08, 2021
Emperor Lucifer.Drift'.2D
Emperor Ring (E) - A rounder and bulkier Variant ring with Metal and small bits of Rubber
Lucifer III (Lc3) a chip with a Lucifer Motif, a fallen angel. Has about the same amount of metal as Lucifer II and has a rubber resistor.
2D Chassis (Black with Purple rubber)
Drift' Driver
User: Lane Valhalla
Special Moves: Emperor Wall, Emperor Disaster, Emperor Press
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - Kiryu Kazuma - Sep. 08, 2021
Oh, you edited the first page. Now Season 2 has 52 episodes? Nice. Also I really like the Season 1 finale, Good job!
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - DeltaZakuro - Sep. 09, 2021
Season 2 Chapter 2
https://www.wattpad.com/1126886212-story-of-lanes-sister-athena-~beyblade-burst
UnseenBurst
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - DeltaZakuro - Sep. 10, 2021
Season 2 Chapter 3
https://www.wattpad.com/1127758883-story-of-lanes-sister-athena-~beyblade-burst
UnseenBurst and BurningSands
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - GenesisBlader - Sep. 10, 2021
bruh athena you sussy baka you better win against boa or i might call the plot armor police lol
jk nice episode and athena starting off fresh with a win from s/disco!
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - DeltaZakuro - Sep. 11, 2021
(Sep. 10, 2021 11:51 PM)GenesisBlader Wrote: bruh athena you sussy baka you better win against boa or i might call the plot armor police lol
jk nice episode and athena starting off fresh with a win from s/disco!
You're a little bit late, we're already on Chapter 3 (Chapter 4 being written right now) and Athena didn't battle Sisco in the recent episode.
and that reminds me, if anyone complains about plot armor then you had better provide reasoning behind your statement otherwise i'll just laugh. But in seriousness, if you're gonna complain about plot armor then please provide some reasoning behind your statement, its one thing to blindly call out plot armor in the actual canon anime but its another to call it out on a fanfic.
Would also like to point out the S-Tier rankings as of this current time in the story (as mentioned in the first Episode, S-Tier was expanded a some so there are more Legend Spots in S-Tier)
#1 - Valt
#2 - Shu
#3 - Aiga
#4 - Free
#5 - Lui
#6 - Drum
#7 - Phi
#8 - Gwyn
#9 - Delta
#10 - Xhaka
#11 - Sisco
#12 - Zac
#13 - Wakiya
#14 - Daina
#15 - Rantaro
#16 - Lane
#17 - Athena
#18 - Boa
#19 - Kurtz (Actually doesnt appear in the story and doesnt use a Sparking Bey currently)
#20 - Hearts (Same case with Kurtz but is only mentioned by Phi)
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - GenesisBlader - Sep. 11, 2021
(Sep. 11, 2021 12:40 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote:look i had school and i cant really sneak in my computer(Sep. 10, 2021 11:51 PM)GenesisBlader Wrote: bruh athena you sussy baka you better win against boa or i might call the plot armor police lol
jk nice episode and athena starting off fresh with a win from s/disco!
You're a little bit late, we're already on Chapter 3 (Chapter 4 being written right now) and Athena didn't battle Sisco in the recent episode.
and that reminds me, if anyone complains about plot armor then you had better provide reasoning behind your statement otherwise i'll just laugh. But in seriousness, if you're gonna complain about plot armor then please provide some reasoning behind your statement, its one thing to blindly call out plot armor in the actual canon anime but its another to call it out on a fanfic.
Would also like to point out the S-Tier rankings as of this current time in the story (as mentioned in the first Episode, S-Tier was expanded a some so there are more Legend Spots in S-Tier)
#1 - Valt
#2 - Shu
#3 - Aiga
#4 - Free
#5 - Lui
#6 - Drum
#7 - Phi
#8 - Gwyn
#9 - Delta
#10 - Xhaka
#11 - Sisco
#12 - Zac
#13 - Wakiya
#14 - Daina
#15 - Rantaro
#16 - Lane
#17 - Athena
#18 - Boa
#19 - Kurtz (Actually doesnt appear in the story and doesnt use a Sparking Bey currently)
#20 - Hearts (Same case with Kurtz but is only mentioned by Phi)
oh and i was talking about episode 1
dang i didnt know you treated a joke that serious, huh. anyways yeah it was a joke going along with the fact that i thought episode 1 was pretty good so uhh... i demand an apology? (lol jk, but seriously that was kinda overkill for a joke)
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - Cindercast - Sep. 11, 2021
(Sep. 11, 2021 12:43 AM)GenesisBlader Wrote:(Sep. 11, 2021 12:40 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: You're a little bit late, we're already on Chapter 3 (Chapter 4 being written right now) and Athena didn't battle Sisco in the recent episode.look i had school and i cant really sneak in my computer
and that reminds me, if anyone complains about plot armor then you had better provide reasoning behind your statement otherwise i'll just laugh. But in seriousness, if you're gonna complain about plot armor then please provide some reasoning behind your statement, its one thing to blindly call out plot armor in the actual canon anime but its another to call it out on a fanfic.
Would also like to point out the S-Tier rankings as of this current time in the story (as mentioned in the first Episode, S-Tier was expanded a some so there are more Legend Spots in S-Tier)
#1 - Valt
#2 - Shu
#3 - Aiga
#4 - Free
#5 - Lui
#6 - Drum
#7 - Phi
#8 - Gwyn
#9 - Delta
#10 - Xhaka
#11 - Sisco
#12 - Zac
#13 - Wakiya
#14 - Daina
#15 - Rantaro
#16 - Lane
#17 - Athena
#18 - Boa
#19 - Kurtz (Actually doesnt appear in the story and doesnt use a Sparking Bey currently)
#20 - Hearts (Same case with Kurtz but is only mentioned by Phi)
oh and i was talking about episode 1
dang i didnt know you treated a joke that serious, huh. anyways yeah it was a joke going along with the fact that i thought episode 1 was pretty good so uhh... i demand an apology? (lol jk, but seriously that was kinda overkill for a joke)
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - GenesisBlader - Sep. 11, 2021
(Sep. 11, 2021 2:04 AM)Cindercast Wrote:(Sep. 11, 2021 12:43 AM)GenesisBlader Wrote: look i had school and i cant really sneak in my computer
oh and i was talking about episode 1
dang i didnt know you treated a joke that serious, huh. anyways yeah it was a joke going along with the fact that i thought episode 1 was pretty good so uhh... i demand an apology? (lol jk, but seriously that was kinda overkill for a joke)
:|
:/
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - DeltaZakuro - Sep. 11, 2021
Season 2 Chapter 4
https://www.wattpad.com/1127950796-story-of-lanes-sister-athena-~beyblade-burst
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - UnseenBurst - Sep. 11, 2021
(Sep. 11, 2021 7:34 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Season 2 Chapter 4
https://www.wattpad.com/1127950796-story-of-lanes-sister-athena-~beyblade-burst
No ping today looks like
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RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - DeltaZakuro - Sep. 11, 2021
Chapter 5: The Tyranical Bird Of Fire! Eternal Phoenix!!
Chapter 6: The Princess Of Light: Athena Valhalla!!
Chapter 7: Explosive Flames! Athena's CounterAttack!!
Chapter 8: Challenging The Reaper: Daina Kurogami!!
Chapter 9: The Reapers Onslaught! Hollow Deathscyther!!
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - Hollowmind13 - Sep. 11, 2021
(Sep. 11, 2021 9:06 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Chapter 5: The Tyranical Bird Of Fire! Eternal Phoenix!!
Chapter 6: The Princess Of Light: Athena Valhalla!!
Chapter 7: Explosive Flames! Athena's CounterAttack!!
Chapter 8: Challenging The Reaper: Daina Kurogami!!
Chapter 9: The Reapers Onslaught! Hollow Deathscyther!!
Good to see I'm going to appear.
Anyways, nice job. (Even tho I rarely read a chapter.)
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - GenesisBlader - Sep. 11, 2021
(Sep. 11, 2021 9:06 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Chapter 5: The Tyranical Bird Of Fire! Eternal Phoenix!!
Chapter 6: The Princess Of Light: Athena Valhalla!!
Chapter 7: Explosive Flames! Athena's CounterAttack!!
Chapter 8: Challenging The Reaper: Daina Kurogami!!
Chapter 9: The Reapers Onslaught! Hollow Deathscyther!!
interesting! seems as if athena will make a counterattack!
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - DeltaZakuro - Sep. 12, 2021
Manga Format Storyline Chapters 1-21
Chapter 1: Lane leaves the Raging Bulls, Athena creates Guide Adeona and faces off with Lane in his abandoned factory and loses. Later on she meets the Legends and goes up against the Asahi Brothers and loses but just barely.
Chapter 2: Athena meets the Bombers coach, Rantaro Kiyama and faces off with him! She loses the first battle but wins the second battle with a new special move called Guiding Upper.
Chapter 3: The Legend League is announced, Later Athena has a battle royale with Valt, Free and Shu and she just barely wins.
Chapter 4: Athena has a one on one with Free and loses, meanwhile Lane faces off with Valt and wins, encouraging Valt to become even stronger.
Chapter 5: Athena meets Aiga for the first time and wins against him by a burst finish in the first round, but Athena does not accept her victory and would rather have Aiga take the 2 points for victory.
Chapter 6: Athena meets the GT Group (Drum, Delta and Gwyn), meanwhile Lane faces off with Lui and loses.
Chapter 7: Athena has another round with Lane in an undisclosed location and she loses BADLY, which discourages her and makes her think she had gotten weaker.
Chapter 8-15: The Legend League matches are underway as a spot being the next legend was on the line.
Chapter 16: Athena and Lane face off in the finals and Adeona is destroyed, she makes her bey at the end of the chapter.
Chapter 17: Athena faces off with Shu to test her new bey: Adeona Heaven and she wins
Chapter 18: Athena meets a new Blader called Chiki Sakurai, she loses the first battle but barely wins the second one.
Chapter 19: Athena trains for her final battle with Lane
Chapter 20-21: Athena faces off with Lane, Lucifers barrier awakens and Athena wins the 5th battle with a burst finish. Athena fails to bring Lane to his senses and Lane disappears with Ashtem at the end of the chapter.
- Elaina is not present in the manga, doesnt mean she isnt canon to the story of the manga
- Flare Lucifer and Lucifer The End are not used. Lane uses Variant Lucifer throughout the manga
- Angelic Adeona and Adeona Royal were not used. Athena only went Right Spin with Guide Adeona and Adeona Heaven.
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - UnseenBurst - Sep. 12, 2021
Delta maybe you should actually try making a manga, knowing you everyone would want to read it, you're really good a drawing so I'd be perfect for you!
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - DeltaZakuro - Sep. 12, 2021
(Sep. 12, 2021 3:01 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Delta maybe you should actually try making a manga, knowing you everyone would want to read it, you're really good a drawing so I'd be perfect for you!
The thought sounds interesting, but i don't read manga that often so my interest and motivation for it isn't really there but the thought sounds nice. if anything, i feel like the story (or any of my Fanfics for that matter) should be thought of as an Anime considering that is the logic it goes by rather than the manga.
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RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - DeltaZakuro - Sep. 12, 2021
Eternal Phoenix.Friction.4D
Eternal Armor - An armor piece that goes on the Eternal Ring, it is shaped just like the Revive Armor but a bit more jagged and has more metal on it
Phoenix Chip (Ph) - A right spin sparking chip that has a Phoenix motif, an immortal bird of flames that can live forever. The Phoenix motif on the chip is similar to that of the one on Revive Phoenix. The Chip also features a red and gold neutral chip core
Eternal Ring (E) - its basically the same shape as the Revive/Dead Phoenix core but slightly more bigger to accommodate the internal workings for the armor gimmick.
4D Chassis - A double chassis that looks like 1B in shape but has little bits of rubber to absorb impacts
Friction Driver (Fr)
User: Phi
Special Moves: Eternal Armor Press, Phoenix Break, Phoenix Upper, Eternal Stinger
Season 2 Chapter 5
https://www.wattpad.com/1128590783-story-of-lanes-sister-athena-~beyblade-burst
UnseenBurst and BurningSands
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - DeltaZakuro - Sep. 14, 2021
Outfit and Physical changes on Athena in Season 2
- the ribbons on her dress are gold instead of simply just purple
- Athena wears stud earrings instead of the large hooped ones (Tho she does keep these on her in case she does want to wear them)
- Athena wore dress shorts under her dress, this time she wears comfortable black tights that are stretchable and also incredibly comfy
- Athena wears new slippers that have improved support inside them so she can stand for hours on end.
- Since her awakening in Season 1 Episode 49, Athena has a diamond shaped marking on her forehead however her long hair covers it up. She also has another marking in the palm of her hand however its purpose is a bit more sinister than Athena could possibly imagine.
- Due to Athena growing up over the time skip (which was about a month), a lot of Athenas physical features had changed and grown.
- Athena was about Drums height in Season 1, now in Season 2 she is close to about Lanes height.
Season 2 Chapter 6
https://www.wattpad.com/1129000596-story-of-lanes-sister-athena-~beyblade-burst
UnseenBurst
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - DeltaZakuro - Sep. 15, 2021
Season 2 Chapter 7
https://www.wattpad.com/1129869825-story-of-lanes-sister-athena-~beyblade-burst
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - DeltaZakuro - Sep. 16, 2021
Chapter 10: Mysterious Power! Nexus Mark!! (Lore)
Chapter 11: Ferocity! Explosive Legend Battle!! (Filler)
Chapter 12: The Evil Dungeon! The Snake Pit! (Lore)
Chapter 13: The Horrors Within! (Lore)
Chapter 14: Dark Plot! Project: Shadow! (Lore)
Chapter 15: Rising Flame! Emperor Lucifer! (Lore)
Chapter 16: Black Fire! Lane Valhalla!! (Lore)
Chapter 17: Explosive Power, Adeona Awakens!! (Lore)
Chapter 18: Nightmare! Mastering Adeona! (Lore)
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - DeltaZakuro - Sep. 17, 2021
New Chapter out soon, been brainstorming ideas for the new chapter. I can assure you it'll be exciting as i'm gonna bring in some new Lore!
and i forgot to mention but the Guardian ring for Adeona has 4 golden wings that locks into 4 different modes
Mode 1: Normal - All 4 wings are hidden and are incredibly tough to get out in a casual battle
Mode 2: Awakened - the 4 wings are pulled outward by an opposing bey, the wings are somewhat spring loaded but it isnt powerful until the next mode
Mode 3: Bound - The wings are fully exposed and are fully spring loaded, allowing for incredible bound attacks
Mode 4: Ultimate Awakened - The final mode for Adeona, the wings are locked in place and are placed where Adeona can give some powerful upper and smash attacks depending on its spin direction chosen
RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - DeltaZakuro - Sep. 18, 2021
S2 Chapter 8
https://www.wattpad.com/1130114641-story-of-lanes-sister-athena-~beyblade-burst