[Fan Fiction] Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (BBB OC Story) (Completed Until Further Notice)

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RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - PinkRose - Jul. 18, 2021

(Jul. 18, 2021 3:32 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote:
(Jul. 18, 2021 3:30 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Yeah, Shu isn't exactly hard to write for.
For me it is I'm trying to make him cool but nice but not as nice as Valt but you get what I'm saying

He's not that hard (and yet I see so many peeps writing him so OOC it hurts); you just gotta try and put yourself in his place, be as neutral as you can (so no bias for a certain character, especially not your protag) and think 'How would Shu act here?'. This goes for every character too, but it gets kinda hard with the more complex personalities (take Rashad as an example; that guy is currently damn near impossible to write accurately). It's simple, really.

RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - DeltaZakuro - Jul. 21, 2021

So someone off site reached out to me and asked if this story will have more seasons and to you I say: Yes. The story will not end on Season 2 (which marks the end of Athenas main story). I do currently have plans on doing a Season 3 (in which I may use a different writing style) and it will use the DB System.

And depending on how well received Season 3, I may do a Season 4 but that will only depend on how well S4 does.

RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - UnseenBurst - Jul. 21, 2021

(Jul. 21, 2021 10:19 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: So someone off site reached out to me and asked if this story will have more seasons and to you I say: Yes. The story will not end on Season 2 (which marks the end of Athenas main story). I do currently have plans on doing a Season 3 (in which I may use a different writing style) and it will use the DB System.

And depending on how well received Season 3, I may do a Season 4 but that will only depend on how well S4 does.

The DB System? Ooo I might read this

RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - GenesisBlader - Jul. 21, 2021

(Jul. 21, 2021 10:19 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: So someone off site reached out to me and asked if this story will have more seasons and to you I say: Yes. The story will not end on Season 2 (which marks the end of Athenas main story). I do currently have plans on doing a Season 3 (in which I may use a different writing style) and it will use the DB System.

And depending on how well received Season 3, I may do a Season 4 but that will only depend on how well S4 does.

lol it would be cool either way Athena come back

#W1: She returns as the protagonist
#W2: She returns as a legend that the protagonist is also determined to defeat (which is what I would prefer)

(Jul. 21, 2021 10:34 PM)BladeKingX Wrote:
(Jul. 21, 2021 10:19 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: So someone off site reached out to me and asked if this story will have more seasons and to you I say: Yes. The story will not end on Season 2 (which marks the end of Athenas main story). I do currently have plans on doing a Season 3 (in which I may use a different writing style) and it will use the DB System.

And depending on how well received Season 3, I may do a Season 4 but that will only depend on how well S4 does.

lol it would be cool either way Athena come back

#W1: She returns as the protagonist
#W2: She returns as a legend that the protagonist is also determined to defeat (which is what I would prefer)

like take aiga from beyblade burst gatinko for example, tho he didnt replace valt he was still champion and the main character (drum) was determined to defeat him and he was posed as a strong figure people wanted to defeat

you don't have to go this way

RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - DeltaZakuro - Jul. 22, 2021

Well Athenas story once season 2 is over is finished, the book of her story will close and a new journey starts again with 2 new protagonists (I'm gonna try and do it better than Sparking). All Anime Canon beys like Savior, Dynamite, Roar, etc will appear.

So far I'm gonna just reveal 3 of the new beys (5 in total)

Shining Ausrine.Lv.Dv-3
Purge Ares.Nx.Rl-3
Ultimate Adeona.Gg.Vt-10

RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - GenesisBlader - Jul. 22, 2021

(Jul. 22, 2021 1:31 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Well Athenas story once season 2 is over is finished, the book of her story will close and a new journey starts again with 2 new protagonists (I'm gonna try and do it better than Sparking). All Anime Canon beys like Savior, Dynamite, Roar, etc will appear.

So far I'm gonna just reveal 3 of the new beys (5 in total)

Shining Ausrine.Lv.Dv-3
Purge Ares.Nx.Rl-3
Ultimate Adeona.Gg.Vt-10

nice!

RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - LegendJustice - Jul. 22, 2021

Yes a Season 3!

RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - DeltaZakuro - Jul. 26, 2021

Gonna make a Opening Theme very soon so keep your eyes peeled. Song is gonna be called "Rewind", Lyrics will be out soon.

RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - LegendJustice - Jul. 26, 2021

Very cool I wanted to make one to but I don't know where to start lol

RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - GenesisBlader - Jul. 26, 2021

(Jul. 26, 2021 3:49 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: Very cool I wanted to make one to but I don't know where to start lol

wait you just gave me an idea for an intro!!

RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - DeltaZakuro - Jul. 26, 2021

Story Of Lanes Sister Opening: "Rewind"

Spoiler (Click to View)

RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - UnseenBurst - Jul. 26, 2021

(Jul. 26, 2021 5:41 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Story Of Lanes Sister Opening: "Rewind"

Spoiler (Click to View)
Another crazy journey
Another chance to go and change the past
But I know how the story will go
Cause all these legends I carry with me
All these lifetimes that only I see
I'm taken to this place plagued with evil and darkness
Where I've been and where I'll be

Burning bright, oh, oh
Raging Flare, oh, oh, oh
Clashin sounds, oh, ay, oh
Gonna hit rewind and find that
All these memories, discoveries, these fantasies
They stay with me (oh, oh, oh)
Gonna change the one I love (oh, ay, oh)
The past is in the past, there's no time for regrets
Gonna hit rewind
Don't forget this pain and suffering
So I can learn from the tragedy and change the course of this history
[Song repeats once here]

Gonna hit rewind (hit rewind)
[song ends]

I'm gonna be singing this all the time

RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - BeybladeManiac0 - Jul. 26, 2021

(Jul. 26, 2021 5:41 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Story Of Lanes Sister Opening: "Rewind"

Spoiler (Click to View)
Another crazy journey
Another chance to go and change the past
But I know how the story will go
Cause all these legends I carry with me
All these lifetimes that only I see
I'm taken to this place plagued with evil and darkness
Where I've been and where I'll be

Burning bright, oh, oh
Raging Flare, oh, oh, oh
Clashin sounds, oh, ay, oh
Gonna hit rewind and find that
All these memories, discoveries, these fantasies
They stay with me (oh, oh, oh)
Gonna change the one I love (oh, ay, oh)
The past is in the past, there's no time for regrets
Gonna hit rewind
Don't forget this pain and suffering
So I can learn from the tragedy and change the course of this history
[Song repeats once here]

Gonna hit rewind (hit rewind)
[song ends]

Everytime I read the lyric "rewind", I think of this - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VJ6QhxgqBUQ

RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - PinkRose - Jul. 26, 2021

Great, now I know for sure I'll be spending the next week fruitlessly trying to rhyme this.

RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - Hollowmind13 - Jul. 26, 2021

(Jul. 26, 2021 10:11 AM)PinkRose Wrote: Great, now I know for sure I'll be spending the next week fruitlessly trying to rhyme this.

And I will be spending some time trying to figure out the best way to sing it.

RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - GenesisBlader - Jul. 26, 2021

(Jul. 26, 2021 5:41 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Story Of Lanes Sister Opening: "Rewind"

Spoiler (Click to View)
Another crazy journey
Another chance to go and change the past
But I know how the story will go
Cause all these legends I carry with me
All these lifetimes that only I see
I'm taken to this place plagued with evil and darkness
Where I've been and where I'll be

Burning bright, oh, oh
Raging Flare, oh, oh, oh
Clashin sounds, oh, ay, oh
Gonna hit rewind and find that
All these memories, discoveries, these fantasies
They stay with me (oh, oh, oh)
Gonna change the one I love (oh, ay, oh)
The past is in the past, there's no time for regrets
Gonna hit rewind
Don't forget this pain and suffering
So I can learn from the tragedy and change the course of this history
[Song repeats once here]

Gonna hit rewind (hit rewind)
[song ends]

why is this so good lol, i cant even sing this rhythmically lolol

RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - DeltaZakuro - Aug. 01, 2021

(originally was gonna be posted when I got back but I didn't feel like doing that so enjoy)

Chapter 42
https://www.wattpad.com/1105676636-story-of-lanes-sister-athena-~beyblade-burst

RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - UnseenBurst - Aug. 01, 2021

(Aug. 01, 2021 2:06 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: (originally was gonna be posted when I got back but I didn't feel like doing that so enjoy)

Chapter 42
https://www.wattpad.com/1105676636-story-of-lanes-sister-athena-~beyblade-burst

When I read it in about 30 mins can I rate it?

RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - GenesisBlader - Aug. 01, 2021

great chapter!!

RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - DeltaZakuro - Aug. 01, 2021

(Aug. 01, 2021 2:10 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote:
(Aug. 01, 2021 2:06 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: (originally was gonna be posted when I got back but I didn't feel like doing that so enjoy)

Chapter 42
https://www.wattpad.com/1105676636-story-of-lanes-sister-athena-~beyblade-burst

When I read it in about 30 mins can I rate it?

Sure, why not?

RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - BeybladeManiac0 - Aug. 02, 2021

(Aug. 01, 2021 2:06 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: (originally was gonna be posted when I got back but I didn't feel like doing that so enjoy)

Chapter 42
https://www.wattpad.com/1105676636-story-of-lanes-sister-athena-~beyblade-burst

Could you post it here? My school has blocked Wattpad.

RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - DeltaZakuro - Aug. 03, 2021

The final chapters of Season 1

Chapter 43: Battle On A Stormy Demonic Island! Lane VS Lui!!
Chapter 44: True Friendships! Tag-Battles!!
Chapter 45: Athena Vs Chiki!
Chapter 46: Activate! Limit Break: Heaven!
Chapter 47: The Rampage Continues! Lane Runs Wild!!
Chapter 48: A Promised Battle! Athena VS Hikaru And Hyuga!!
Chapter 49: Overcome Your Fears! The White Princess Shines!!
Chapter 50: Shining Flares! Final Battle!
Chapter 51: Grand Finale! Adeona Vs Lucifer!

RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - DeltaZakuro - Aug. 06, 2021

Special Move Analysis: Heaven Symphony and The End Harbinger

Heaven Symphony: Adeona uses the slope of the stadium to unleash a full powered attack using its spring loaded Limit Break wings

The End Harbiner: once Limit Broken, Lucifer uses its contact points and attack power to unleash a devastating attack, resulting in a burst or potentially a break

RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - UnseenBurst - Aug. 06, 2021

(Aug. 06, 2021 2:22 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Special Move Analysis: Heaven Symphony and The End Harbinger

Heaven Symphony: Adeona uses the slope of the stadium to unleash a full powered attack using its spring loaded Limit Break wings

The End Harbiner: once Limit Broken, Lucifer uses its contact points and attack power to unleash a devastating attack, resulting in a burst or potentially a break

Wild guess, Lane's gonna break some Beys with this move (Please don't hurt Rantaro, he's to weak and defenseless to defend himself)

RE: Story Of Lane's Sister: Athena (SuperKing OC Story) - DeltaZakuro - Aug. 06, 2021

Chapter 43
https://www.wattpad.com/1109180307-story-of-lanes-sister-athena-~beyblade-burst