RE: Beyblade Burst: Ugen’s Story - bekfastblader - Jan. 03, 2020
(Jan. 03, 2020 8:10 PM)BuilderROB Wrote: (Jan. 03, 2020 8:02 PM)bekfastblader Wrote: I know, It just sounded better I guess
Ok, well come up with a different first part of your beyblade’s name and make sure it starts with a C.
Sure! its Celestial Cerastes
RE: Beyblade Burst: Ugen’s Story - BuilderROB - Jan. 03, 2020
(Jan. 03, 2020 8:14 PM)bekfastblader Wrote: (Jan. 03, 2020 8:10 PM)BuilderROB Wrote: Ok, well come up with a different first part of your beyblade’s name and make sure it starts with a C.
Sure! its Celestial Cerastes
That works! Thank you!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Ugen’s Story - bekfastblader - Jan. 03, 2020
(Jan. 03, 2020 8:30 PM)BuilderROB Wrote: (Jan. 03, 2020 8:14 PM)bekfastblader Wrote: Sure! its Celestial Cerastes
That works! Thank you!
Your welcome
RE: Beyblade Burst: Ugen’s Story - FreeFafnir64 - Jan. 04, 2020
Yeah!!! Talk about a comeback! Why is Ugen getting overconfident? Is he going to lose?
I see that’s kind of been answered. Sorry.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Ugen’s Story - BuilderROB - Jan. 04, 2020
(Jan. 04, 2020 12:19 AM)FreeFafnir64 Wrote: Yeah!!! Talk about a comeback! Why is Ugen getting overconfident? Is he going to lose?
I see that’s kind of been answered. Sorry.
It’s ok, you can speculate. I haven’t revealed anything about the next chapter other than that it will be resolved.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Ugen’s Story - BuilderROB - Jan. 09, 2020
Chapter 8: Going Solo! A New Move!
Chapter 8: Going Solo! A New Move!
Monday morning, it was clear at this point something was up. At school, people who used to come for Ugen and ask questions about the match that happened just a couple days ago now ignored him. He was a bit confused what was going on.
After school, he went to train with his team, as usual.
“Hey, Ugen, I need to talk to you about something,” Gabe said, “Saoki, Hoeinn, can you step outside, please?” Gabe asked. Saoki and Hoeinn nodded in agreement and left the room. Gabe got a serious look on his face.
“Ugen, I am disappointed,” Gabe told Ugen.
“Why is that?” Ugen asked. It was becoming clear to him what was going on.
“Your sportsmanship Saturday was horrible. Your smack talk went beyond smack talk. Insulting someone is not what this team represents. You’re getting overconfident because of the wins you’ve been getting the past few weeks in the tournament, and for that, I am going to suspend you from training sessions for a week,” Gabe explained.
Ugen started to explain, “But training together is much easie-“
“It doesn’t matter, Ugen. Getting stronger alone can be effective. I did it for a long time before forming this team. Now leave, please,” Gabe told Ugen.
Ugen tried to explain again, “But it’s better if I-“
“Go, Ugen, and don’t come to train with us until next Monday,” Gabe commanded. Ugen left the room, and Saoki and Hoeinn returned to the room.
Ugen went home, somewhat ticked off at what had happened just 15 minutes ago.
“Home already? What’s up Ugen?” Ugen’s Mom asked him.
“I was suspended from coming to training sessions until next Monday,” he explained to his mom.
“You probably got what was coming for you, so I can’t do anything about it,” Ugen’s Mom explained, “You’re welcome to train in your stadium outside.”
“I guess that works,” Ugen said, and went outside to train.
“Go Shoot!” Ugen launched. Ursa wobbled, hit the stadium wall, and burst. Ugen was out of it today after what happened at school. He had to get back in sync with Ursa.
“Go Shoot!” Ugen continued practicing and a couple hours in started to notice his feelings weren’t getting in the way anymore, and Ursa started to pick up speed. Ugen had pulled off Dual Strike.
“How about we try a new move, Ursa? I think I’ve got one in mind. It’ll be a while before we get the hang of it though, if it is even possible,” Ugen explained to Ursa, realizing how strange it was to be speaking to a beyblade. Ugen angled his launch for his new move, and launched.
“Go Shoot!” Ursa went to the center to try and circle it, but wobbled and scraped the stadium floor and burst.
As expected. It will take a while before I can master the move, Ugen thought. Ugen continued to practice the move, but it still was not working after an hour of practice. Then a blader yelled from across the fence on the sidewalk.
“Hey! You’re Ugen, right?” The blader asked.
“Yes! What do you want?” Ugen asked.
The blader opened the gate of the fence and walked into the backyard.
“I’m Alex, and Ares would like to battle you. After all, I am your opponent in the Semifinals,” Alex proposed to Ugen.
“I’m training right now, so probably not,” Ugen replied.
“Come on, we can learn something from each other if we do a battle,” Alex pleaded.
“Ok, fine, one battle and that’s it,” Ugen said. Alex nodded in agreement and struggled to hide his excitement.
“First, let me show you my bey: Angered Ares!” Ares had a double sword going through the middle of it and through the left and right side of the bey. The top part had the avatar of Ares and it’s helmet went through the outer part of Ares, creating a contact point. The bottom part had his hand held down and had a spear shape protruding out of the bottom part. It looked tough for sure, but Ugen knew Ursa could take it, as usual.
“Are you ready to battle, then?” Ugen asked.
“Of course! Let’s do it now!” Alex replied. The two got their beys ready on their launchers.
I can’t use my new move yet, so I’ll have to use one of my existing moves, Ugen thought, putting Ursa on the launcher.
“Three!...Two!...One!...Go Shoot!” They launched their beys, Ugen pulling off a normal launch for one of his moves.
“Go in, Ursa! Rush Impact!” Ugen yelled. Ursa rushed towards Ares and made impact, sending Ares into the air, taking two clicks. Ares did a flip and landed back into the stadium. Ursa rushed towards Ares again. Ursa banged into the wall once and took two clicks
“Now finish it! Dual Strike!” Ursa came into contact with Ares, sending Ares into a wall.
“Now, Ares! Sword Reverse!” Ares hit the wall on the spear tip and gave itself clicks back, as well as having the sword blades extend out. Ares came rushing at Ursa.
“It’s not over yet! Ursa! Go for Rush Impact again!” Ursa rushes towards Ares. They collide, and Ursa burst within a second upon impact.
“B-but how!?” Ugen said in a daze of confusion and shock.
“I won! I knew I could ace it!” Alex was excited, and knew he would ace Saturday’s Semifinals match,”Thanks for the match, Ugen! See you Saturday!” Alex opened the gate and left, closing the gate behind him. Ugen was still standing there in shock. A few seconds later, Ugen yelled in defeat and fell on his knees. He did that for about 10 seconds, then picked up Ursa, and tried to practice.
“Go Shoot!” Ursa wobbled and stopped spinning within a few seconds. Ugen knew he had to put his feelings aside when it came to the battle, and yet, he was still failing with his launch.
“Ugen! Time for dinner!” Ugen’s Mom had opened the back door and told Ugen.
“Ok, Mom! I am coming!” Ugen got Ursa and his launcher, and went inside the house.
To be continued in Chapter 9: The Semifinals! Claw Barrage!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Ugen’s Story - #Fafnir - Jan. 09, 2020
(Jan. 09, 2020 10:30 PM)BuilderROB Wrote: Chapter 8: Going Solo! A New Move!
Chapter 8: Going Solo! A New Move!
Monday morning, it was clear at this point something was up. At school, people who used to come for Ugen and ask questions about the match that happened just a couple days ago now ignored him. He was a bit confused what was going on.
After school, he went to train with his team, as usual.
“Hey, Ugen, I need to talk to you about something,” Gabe said, “Saoki, Hoeinn, can you step outside, please?” Gabe asked. Saoki and Hoeinn nodded in agreement and left the room. Gabe got a serious look on his face.
“Ugen, I am disappointed,” Gabe told Ugen.
“Why is that?” Ugen asked. It was becoming clear to him what was going on.
“Your sportsmanship Saturday was horrible. Your smack talk went beyond smack talk. Insulting someone is not what this team represents. You’re getting overconfident because of the wins you’ve been getting the past few weeks in the tournament, and for that, I am going to suspend you from training sessions for a week,” Gabe explained.
Ugen started to explain, “But training together is much easie-“
“It doesn’t matter, Ugen. Getting stronger alone can be effective. I did it for a long time before forming this team. Now leave, please,” Gabe told Ugen.
Ugen tried to explain again, “But it’s better if I-“
“Go, Ugen, and don’t come to train with us until next Monday,” Gabe commanded. Ugen left the room, and Saoki and Hoeinn returned to the room.
Ugen went home, somewhat ticked off at what had happened just 15 minutes ago.
“Home already? What’s up Ugen?” Ugen’s Mom asked him.
“I was suspended from coming to training sessions until next Monday,” he explained to his mom.
“You probably got what you deserved, so I can’t do anything about it,” Ugen’s Mom explained, “You’re welcome to train in your stadium outside.”
“I guess that works,” Ugen said, and went outside to train.
“Go Shoot!” Ugen launched. Ursa wobbled, hit the stadium wall, and burst. Ugen was out of it today after what happened at school. He had to get back in sync with Ursa.
“Go Shoot!” Ugen continued practicing and a couple hours in started to notice his feelings weren’t getting in the way anymore, and Ursa started to pick up speed. Ugen had pulled off Dual Strike.
“How about we try a new move, Ursa? I think I’ve got one in mind. It’ll be a while before we get the hang of it though, if it is even possible,” Ugen explained to Ursa, realizing how strange it was to be speaking to a beyblade. Ugen angled his launch for his new move, and launched.
“Go Shoot!” Ursa went to the center to try and circle it, but wobbled and scraped the stadium floor and burst.
As expected. It will take a while before I can master the move, Ugen thought. Ugen continued to practice the move, but it still was not working after an hour of practice. Then a blader yelled from across the fence on the sidewalk.
“Hey! You’re Ugen, right?” The blader asked.
“Yes! What do you want?” Ugen asked.
The blader opened the gate of the fence and walked into the backyard.
“I’m Alex, and Ares would like to battle you. After all, I am your opponent in the Semifinals,” Alex proposed to Ugen.
“I’m training right now, so probably not,” Ugen replied.
“Come on, we can learn something from each other if we do a battle,” Alex pleaded.
“Ok, fine, one battle and that’s it,” Ugen said. Alex nodded in agreement and struggled to hide his excitement.
“First, let me show you my bey: Angered Ares!” Ares had a double sword going through the middle of it and through the left and right side of the bey. The top part had the avatar of Ares and it’s helmet went through the outer part of Ares, creating a contact point. The bottom part had his hand held down and had a spear shape protruding out of the bottom part. It looked tough for sure, but Ugen knew Ursa could take it, as usual.
“Are you ready to battle, then?” Ugen asked.
“Of course! Let’s do it now!” Alex replied. The two got their beys ready on their launchers.
I can’t use my new move yet, so I’ll have to use one of my existing moves, Ugen thought, putting Ursa on the launcher.
“Three!...Two!...One...Go Shoot!” They launched their beys, Ugen pulling off a normal launch for one of his moves.
“Go in, Ursa! Rush Impact!” Ugen yelled. Ursa rushed towards Ares and made impact, sending Ares into the air, taking two clicks. Ares did a flip and landed back into the stadium. Ursa rushed towards Ares again. Ursa banged into the wall once and took two clicks
“Now finish it! Dual Strike!” Ursa came into contact with Ares, sending Ares into a wall.
“Now, Ares! Sword Reverse!” Ares hit the wall on the spear tip and gave itself clicks back, as well as having the sword blades extend out. Ares came rushing at Ursa.
“It’s not over yet! Ursa! Go for Rush Impact again!” Ursa rushes towards Ares. They collide, and Ursa burst within a second upon impact.
“B-but how!?” Ugen said in a daze of confusion and shock.
“I won! I knew I could ace it!” Alex was excited, and knew he would ace Saturday’s Semifinals match,”Thanks for the match, Ugen! See you Saturday!” Alex opened the gate and left, closing the gate behind him. Ugen was still standing there in shock. A few seconds later, Ugen yelled in defeat and fell on his knees. He did that for about 10 seconds, then picked up Ursa, and tried to practice.
“Go Shoot!” Ursa wobbled and stopped spinning within a few seconds. Ugen knew he had to put his feelings aside when it came to the battle, and yet, he was still failing with his launch.
“Ugen! Time for dinner!” Ugen’s Mom had opened the back door and told Ugen.
“Ok, Mom! I am coming!” Ugen got Ursa and his launcher, and went inside the house.
To be continued in Chapter 9: The Semifinals! Claw Barrage!
Great chapter! Do you take character requests?
RE: Beyblade Burst: Ugen’s Story - Suoh sadboii - Jan. 09, 2020
Good chapter!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Ugen’s Story - BuilderROB - Jan. 09, 2020
(Jan. 09, 2020 10:45 PM)#Fafnir Wrote: (Jan. 09, 2020 10:30 PM)BuilderROB Wrote: Chapter 8: Going Solo! A New Move!
Chapter 8: Going Solo! A New Move!
Monday morning, it was clear at this point something was up. At school, people who used to come for Ugen and ask questions about the match that happened just a couple days ago now ignored him. He was a bit confused what was going on.
After school, he went to train with his team, as usual.
“Hey, Ugen, I need to talk to you about something,” Gabe said, “Saoki, Hoeinn, can you step outside, please?” Gabe asked. Saoki and Hoeinn nodded in agreement and left the room. Gabe got a serious look on his face.
“Ugen, I am disappointed,” Gabe told Ugen.
“Why is that?” Ugen asked. It was becoming clear to him what was going on.
“Your sportsmanship Saturday was horrible. Your smack talk went beyond smack talk. Insulting someone is not what this team represents. You’re getting overconfident because of the wins you’ve been getting the past few weeks in the tournament, and for that, I am going to suspend you from training sessions for a week,” Gabe explained.
Ugen started to explain, “But training together is much easie-“
“It doesn’t matter, Ugen. Getting stronger alone can be effective. I did it for a long time before forming this team. Now leave, please,” Gabe told Ugen.
Ugen tried to explain again, “But it’s better if I-“
“Go, Ugen, and don’t come to train with us until next Monday,” Gabe commanded. Ugen left the room, and Saoki and Hoeinn returned to the room.
Ugen went home, somewhat ticked off at what had happened just 15 minutes ago.
“Home already? What’s up Ugen?” Ugen’s Mom asked him.
“I was suspended from coming to training sessions until next Monday,” he explained to his mom.
“You probably got what you deserved, so I can’t do anything about it,” Ugen’s Mom explained, “You’re welcome to train in your stadium outside.”
“I guess that works,” Ugen said, and went outside to train.
“Go Shoot!” Ugen launched. Ursa wobbled, hit the stadium wall, and burst. Ugen was out of it today after what happened at school. He had to get back in sync with Ursa.
“Go Shoot!” Ugen continued practicing and a couple hours in started to notice his feelings weren’t getting in the way anymore, and Ursa started to pick up speed. Ugen had pulled off Dual Strike.
“How about we try a new move, Ursa? I think I’ve got one in mind. It’ll be a while before we get the hang of it though, if it is even possible,” Ugen explained to Ursa, realizing how strange it was to be speaking to a beyblade. Ugen angled his launch for his new move, and launched.
“Go Shoot!” Ursa went to the center to try and circle it, but wobbled and scraped the stadium floor and burst.
As expected. It will take a while before I can master the move, Ugen thought. Ugen continued to practice the move, but it still was not working after an hour of practice. Then a blader yelled from across the fence on the sidewalk.
“Hey! You’re Ugen, right?” The blader asked.
“Yes! What do you want?” Ugen asked.
The blader opened the gate of the fence and walked into the backyard.
“I’m Alex, and Ares would like to battle you. After all, I am your opponent in the Semifinals,” Alex proposed to Ugen.
“I’m training right now, so probably not,” Ugen replied.
“Come on, we can learn something from each other if we do a battle,” Alex pleaded.
“Ok, fine, one battle and that’s it,” Ugen said. Alex nodded in agreement and struggled to hide his excitement.
“First, let me show you my bey: Angered Ares!” Ares had a double sword going through the middle of it and through the left and right side of the bey. The top part had the avatar of Ares and it’s helmet went through the outer part of Ares, creating a contact point. The bottom part had his hand held down and had a spear shape protruding out of the bottom part. It looked tough for sure, but Ugen knew Ursa could take it, as usual.
“Are you ready to battle, then?” Ugen asked.
“Of course! Let’s do it now!” Alex replied. The two got their beys ready on their launchers.
I can’t use my new move yet, so I’ll have to use one of my existing moves, Ugen thought, putting Ursa on the launcher.
“Three!...Two!...One...Go Shoot!” They launched their beys, Ugen pulling off a normal launch for one of his moves.
“Go in, Ursa! Rush Impact!” Ugen yelled. Ursa rushed towards Ares and made impact, sending Ares into the air, taking two clicks. Ares did a flip and landed back into the stadium. Ursa rushed towards Ares again. Ursa banged into the wall once and took two clicks
“Now finish it! Dual Strike!” Ursa came into contact with Ares, sending Ares into a wall.
“Now, Ares! Sword Reverse!” Ares hit the wall on the spear tip and gave itself clicks back, as well as having the sword blades extend out. Ares came rushing at Ursa.
“It’s not over yet! Ursa! Go for Rush Impact again!” Ursa rushes towards Ares. They collide, and Ursa burst within a second upon impact.
“B-but how!?” Ugen said in a daze of confusion and shock.
“I won! I knew I could ace it!” Alex was excited, and knew he would ace Saturday’s Semifinals match,”Thanks for the match, Ugen! See you Saturday!” Alex opened the gate and left, closing the gate behind him. Ugen was still standing there in shock. A few seconds later, Ugen yelled in defeat and fell on his knees. He did that for about 10 seconds, then picked up Ursa, and tried to practice.
“Go Shoot!” Ursa wobbled and stopped spinning within a few seconds. Ugen knew he had to put his feelings aside when it came to the battle, and yet, he was still failing with his launch.
“Ugen! Time for dinner!” Ugen’s Mom had opened the back door and told Ugen.
“Ok, Mom! I am coming!” Ugen got Ursa and his launcher, and went inside the house.
To be continued in Chapter 9: The Semifinals! Claw Barrage!
Great chapter! Do you take character requests?
I do! Depending on your character it’ll be entered in a different place in the story. Tell me your character idea if you have one!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Ugen’s Story - FreeFafnir64 - Jan. 10, 2020
Yeah! Well, now I see how that was resolved. Thanks for adding my character request in. It was awesome reading it in your story. You made it sound so much better.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Ugen’s Story - BuilderROB - Jan. 10, 2020
(Jan. 10, 2020 2:51 AM)FreeFafnir64 Wrote: Yeah! Well, now I see how that was resolved. Thanks for adding my character request in. It was awesome reading it in your story. You made it sound so much better.
Usually I take people’s character and beyblade ideas and add to them, especially if they’re not super specific. Also, thanks!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Ugen’s Story - FreeFafnir64 - Jan. 10, 2020
So, can we post more than one character request?
RE: Beyblade Burst: Ugen’s Story - BuilderROB - Jan. 10, 2020
(Jan. 10, 2020 2:59 AM)FreeFafnir64 Wrote: So, can we post more than one character request?
Maybe, however later on I want to include characters that are actually in the series. For now one or two is good.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Ugen’s Story - FreeFafnir64 - Jan. 10, 2020
Okay, thanks!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Ugen’s Story - BuilderROB - Jan. 10, 2020
(Jan. 10, 2020 3:09 AM)FreeFafnir64 Wrote: Okay, thanks!
No problem! Let me know if you do have another character idea!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Ugen’s Story - BuilderROB - Jan. 17, 2020
Chapter 9: The Semifinals! Claw Barrage!
Chapter 9: The Semifinals! Claw Barrage!
Ugen had never been so messed up in blading until now. After his loss to Alex, he wasn’t able to launch his bey properly.
I have to get ahold of myself before Saturday, he thought to himself, before it’s too late for me.
It was Wednesday after school. Ugen continued to practice launching, but he was still failing as Ursa continued to wobble and spin out or burst.
“Why can’t I just get it down? Maybe I need to remember the fundamentals?” Ugen was questioning himself.
“Go Shoot!” Ugen launched, keeping his emotions aside and remembering the fundamentals of blading. He continued to fail, and eventually gave up for the day. He ate dinner, and went to bed.
The next day after school, he noticed when he went to the backyard to train that someone was in the backyard. When he got outside, he realized Saoki was at the stadium, and looked like he was waiting for someone, who was probably him.
“Saoki? What about training?” Ugen asked.
“I wanted to help with training. Gabe will probably be upset when he finds out, but I know you need the training for Saturday. I also heard from your mom you’ve been having trouble with training,” Saoki replied.
“Well, see, my opponent I’m facing Saturday decided to come battle me in my backyard, and I lost the battle. Ever since then, I’ve been unable to launch correctly and I can’t get any better at this rate,” Ugen said.
“Well that’s why I’m here,” Saoki said to Ugen, “To help get you back in shape in time for the tournament.”
“Then let’s do it!” Ugen exclaimed in excitement, getting his launcher ready.
He’s already got that look back in his eyes, Saoki observed when he looked at Ugen at that moment.
“Three!...Two!...One!...Go Shoot!” Saoki pulled off a new launch and Ugen pulled off one of his usual launches. Shuriken bounced towards the center, striking Ursa when it came in to strike. Ursa took two clicks after it happened twice.
“Ursa! Dual Strike!” Ursa went straight towards Shuriken, but Shuriken bounced back and hit back harder. This happened a few times over, Shuriken repeatedly pushing Ursa back.
“Shuriken! Bite Rebound!” Ursa hit Shuriken, causing Shuriken to bounce towards the groove of the stadium, but this time, came back with more power and speed than before. Shuriken Burst Ursa upon impact with it.
“I...lost again?” Ugen questioned. He couldn’t believe it happened again.
“I learned a new move while you were gone. I figured out since my performance tip was made of rubber, that I could absorb impacts and come back and hit hard. You have your spirit in the game back now, Ugen. Don’t take it away now. Let’s practice some more!” Saoki said, trying to convince Ugen.
“I guess we can,” Ugen replied.
“Then let’s go again! I’m sure you can win next time!” Saoki encouraged Ugen. They got their launchers ready.
“Three!...Two!...One!...Go Shoot!”
It was Saturday, and Ugen was getting a few more launches in before the tournament.
“Go Shoot!” Ursa rushed around the stadium, and eventually, did a failed circle around the center of the stadium.
I’ve almost perfected the move, Ugen thought, knowing he was close to being able to use the move in battles. He practiced a few more times. Ursa went straight for the center of the stadium and did fast circles around it. He had finally perfected the move. Or made it usable in matches, at least. Ugen knew it was time to go and left for the tournament
It was almost time for Ugen to go up against Alex. He hoped his training for the week would pay off. Even right behind the door that lead to the stadium, he could be the cheers of the crowd.
“Alrighty, boys and girls! It’s time for the first match of the Semifinals! To the left is a blader that climbed a mountain to obtain his bey! Some say the bey holds the spirit of a legendary warrior! It’s Alex Koruchi!” The crowd exploded with cheers as Alex came onstage.
“Honestly, at first, I was afraid to battle you since I had no idea how to counter you, but now that I have beaten you in a battle, I have the perfect strategy to counter your moves,” Alex told Ugen. Ugen stayed silent, deep in thought.
I’m going for my new move this round, Ugen thought, thinking it was the best thing to do against Alex.
“Ready? Set!” The referee called.
“Three!...Two!...One!...Go Shoot!” Ugen used his new move launch, which consisted of Ugen tilting the launcher upward. Ursa rushed around the stadium, waiting for Ares to make the first move.
“You’re making this too easy! Go for it Ares!” Ares struck Ursa with a swoop, sending Ursa flying into the stadium wall. Ursa took two clicks.
“Ursa! Dual Strike!” Ursa went for Ares and hit it into a wall.
“You’re so predictable! Ares! Sword Reverse!” Ares hit its spear tip into the wall, giving it back clicks, and making the swords protrude out more than they were. Then Ares went straight for the center where Ursa was.
“Now, Ursa! Claw Barrage!” Just before Ares hit Ursa, Ursa avoided the attack and kept Ares in the center of the stadium as it used its claws to try to burst Ares. But each time Ursa hit the spear tip, Ares gained clicks back. Eventually, Ares used one of its swords while it was protruding out to make Ursa go flying. Ursa caught onto the top of the stadium and went speeding around the top part of the stadium. Then it came back down and hit the stadium floor with no stamina left.
“A survivor finish! One point goes to Alex!” The crowd went wild with cheers. Ugen was shocked. His new move had failed against Ares.
“Is that the best you’ve got? I’ve already taken this match!” Alex told Ugen. Ugen was deep in thought again. He realized eventually how to counter Ares’ Sword Reverse.
I’ve got this in the bag, Ugen thought.
To be continued in Chapter 10: A New Face! Lost Longinus!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Ugen’s Story - Staron - Jan. 17, 2020
Character Idea:
Bushi Kurogane
Bey: Inferno Ifrit
RE: Beyblade Burst: Ugen’s Story - BuilderROB - Jan. 17, 2020
(Jan. 17, 2020 6:20 PM)Staron Wrote: Character Idea:
Bushi Kurogane
Bey: Ninja Ifrit
You’ll need to change Ninja to something else, as this story takes place during the Dual Layer Era of beys.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Ugen’s Story - Staron - Jan. 17, 2020
I'll change it, but the ninja idea will be for the God era of beys
RE: Beyblade Burst: Ugen’s Story - DeceasedCrab - Jan. 17, 2020
(Jan. 17, 2020 6:19 PM)BuilderROB Wrote: (Jan. 17, 2020 6:17 PM)Koala Spriggan Wrote: I will upload Aiga's new story, with a LOT of new beys and 51 episodes, the story takes place the year before GT, Its called Beyblade Burst Legacy.
Amazing Story!
This is my story thread, not yours. Please make your own thread for this next time. DeceasedCrab, please remove this post.
Doing that. Koala Spriggan make your own story thread in the Your Creations subforum. Don't pollute someone else's with unwanted chapters or advertising, alright?
RE: Beyblade Burst: Ugen’s Story - Staron - Jan. 17, 2020
How's Flare Ifrit?
RE: Beyblade Burst: Ugen’s Story - BuilderROB - Jan. 17, 2020
(Jan. 17, 2020 6:23 PM)Staron Wrote: How's Flare Ifrit?
Make it start with the letter I, like the bey’s name is.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Ugen’s Story - Staron - Jan. 17, 2020
Ok, Inferno Ifrit is the name
Bushi will be the son of Zyro Kurogene (the main character from shogun steel)
RE: Beyblade Burst: Ugen’s Story - BuilderROB - Jan. 17, 2020
(Jan. 17, 2020 6:27 PM)Staron Wrote: Ok, Inferno Ifrit is the name
Bushi will be the son of Zyro Kurogene (the main character from shogun steel) Ok then!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Ugen’s Story - Staron - Jan. 17, 2020
This a good character idea?
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