(Feb. 12, 2019  5:03 AM)Avery Purple999 Wrote: Anyway my part in the story should start when I walk near ur stadium and I challenge u to a battle using my Acid Anubis with the Yard tip.

(Feb. 15, 2019  5:54 AM)XSabxManiacX Wrote: Pardon my confusion. Not sure if I comprehended this correctly, since I came home after finishing a stressful project

Did you spell Hearts' namd wrong by accident? Or is this an OC named Hartz?

(Feb. 18, 2019  12:51 AM)Red phi Wrote: CheetoBlader that’s a good chapter.

(Feb. 18, 2019  1:09 AM)XSabxManiacX Wrote: Cant wait for Reaper! Good as always

(Feb. 18, 2019  2:58 AM)Dt20000 Wrote:

(Feb. 18, 2019  2:45 AM)Avery Purple999 Wrote:

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Dude if I made my own stories I wouldn't be able to be an antagonist though and he's also considering permanently adding my stories to his. -Avery

Just make a new protagonist!

(Feb. 18, 2019  3:00 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote:

(Feb. 18, 2019  2:58 AM)Dt20000 Wrote: Just make a new protagonist!

Story Critic time!

(Feb. 18, 2019  3:02 AM)Dt20000 Wrote:

(Feb. 18, 2019  3:00 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: Story Critic time!

You’re sure?

(Feb. 18, 2019  10:12 PM)Red phi Wrote: When’s the next chapter coming out

(Feb. 21, 2019  12:07 AM)Red phi Wrote: When is it coming out it has been 2 days?

(Feb. 21, 2019  12:29 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote:

(Feb. 21, 2019  12:07 AM)Red phi Wrote: When is it coming out it has been 2 days?

Sorry I didn’t have. It will come out today

(Feb. 21, 2019  12:07 AM)Red phi Wrote: When is it coming out it has been 2 days?

(Feb. 21, 2019  3:38 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: Chapter 10: Dino Destruction! Nightmare Rex! 

Spoiler (Click to View)

“Me and Nightmare Rex are undefeated!” Reaper said. 3!...2!...1!...Let It Rip! Crusher was in Attack Mode and Rex was in Attack Mode too (Rex has Xt+). “Crusher! Attack!” Crusher hit Rex making Rex’s frame Spike scrape. “Go Rex! Spike Slash!” Rex sped up (because Spike was rubber) and hit Crusher out of the stadium. “How!?” “One down one to go!” “Revenge Smash!” Revenge smashed Rex making Spike slam the stadium and fly high into the air, almost too high. Rex started hitting the poles losing a click each time. “Revenge! Finish him!” Revenge bounced up to where Rex was bursting Rex. “2 points to Smash Revenge! Roan and Colin are the winners!” “You got Lucky.” “Now you can battle me!”



... To Be Continued

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(Feb. 21, 2019  2:52 AM)XSabxManiacX Wrote: Cheeto has already responded, but this might be worth saying: Please wait. Even awesome writers have lives. They arent robots generating words from nowhere

Thank you! That was needed very much!

(Feb. 21, 2019  11:40 PM)Red phi Wrote:

(Feb. 21, 2019  3:38 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote: Chapter 10: Dino Destruction! Nightmare Rex! 

Spoiler (Click to View)

“Me and Nightmare Rex are undefeated!” Reaper said. 3!...2!...1!...Let It Rip! Crusher was in Attack Mode and Rex was in Attack Mode too (Rex has Xt+). “Crusher! Attack!” Crusher hit Rex making Rex’s frame Spike scrape. “Go Rex! Spike Slash!” Rex sped up (because Spike was rubber) and hit Crusher out of the stadium. “How!?” “One down one to go!” “Revenge Smash!” Revenge smashed Rex making Spike slam the stadium and fly high into the air, almost too high. Rex started hitting the poles losing a click each time. “Revenge! Finish him!” Revenge bounced up to where Rex was bursting Rex. “2 points to Smash Revenge! Roan and Colin are the winners!” “You got Lucky.” “Now you can battle me!”



... To Be Continued

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Thank you! That was needed very much!

Nightmare Rex had burst stoppers so it should’nt have bursted

(Feb. 22, 2019  12:39 AM)Red phi Wrote: You said one