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RE: Creating A Future [Beyblade Story] - SaintBlader - Aug. 12, 2013
(Aug. 12, 2013 5:14 PM)jacolal Wrote: Remember to add things about the surprise entree( make him appear for one round, doing a super quick finish).Actually, I don't think that they'll be in the tournament. I'll pm you to explain
RE: Creating A Future [Beyblade Story] - LimiTTrickster - Aug. 12, 2013
(Aug. 12, 2013 9:46 PM)SaintBlader Wrote:(Aug. 12, 2013 5:14 PM)jacolal Wrote: Remember to add things about the surprise entree( make him appear for one round, doing a super quick finish).Actually, I don't think that they'll be in the tournament. I'll pm you to explain
Okay, could you tell me what is going to happen, I'm getting really excited!!!
Edit: Okay, I understand, I dont mind what happens and I'd like to know what is happening in the tounament so I can think of some ideas. PM me okay?
RE: Creating A Future [Beyblade Story] - SaintBlader - Aug. 13, 2013
Chapter Seven is up! Hope you all enjoy! Credit for the character Ace goes to XKai_DranzerX. Credit for Jake goes to jacolal
RE: Creating A Future [Beyblade Story] - ★WindStarElite★ - Aug. 13, 2013
Awesome and thanks
RE: Creating A Future [Beyblade Story] - LimiTTrickster - Aug. 13, 2013
Thanks, and that was a really interesting chapter. I love it! Can't wait to see ken's battle. :-) :-D
RE: Creating A Future [Beyblade Story] - SaintBlader - Aug. 14, 2013
Chapter Eight is up! Personally, I really enjoyed writing this chapter. I hope you all enjoy reading it!
Special thanks to jacolal for helping me with the battle between Ken and Jake!
RE: Creating A Future [Beyblade Story] - ★WindStarElite★ - Aug. 14, 2013
I hope my phoenix is ok XD he is aces life.
RE: Creating A Future [Beyblade Story] - SaintBlader - Aug. 14, 2013
Yep! It's alright! It just lost a battle
RE: Creating A Future [Beyblade Story] - Dual - Aug. 14, 2013
Eh, it's pretty good, but the fact that they suddenly just decide to be a team is a bit strange.
RE: Creating A Future [Beyblade Story] - SaintBlader - Aug. 14, 2013
In my opinion, they were already a "team" (minus Ace), but not officially. They just needed a name
RE: Creating A Future [Beyblade Story] - Dual - Aug. 14, 2013
Yah, that's what I meant. They hardly know Ace and just completely trust and accept him the second they meet him. Besides that, the stories good as always.
RE: Creating A Future [Beyblade Story] - SaintBlader - Aug. 14, 2013
Oh, okay. I understand what you mean.
And thank you!
RE: Creating A Future [Beyblade Story] - 6 God - Aug. 14, 2013
It was alright, pretty good, details are good then other times it's bland. Keep it up though.
RE: Creating A Future [Beyblade Story] - LimiTTrickster - Aug. 14, 2013
(Aug. 14, 2013 1:43 AM)SaintBlader Wrote: In my opinion, they were already a "team" (minus Ace), but not officially. They just needed a name
He's right. I mean considering the fact that they trained together and battled together it was kind of obvious. But it was lol that they just randomly accepted ace...
Great story so far.
RE: Creating A Future [Beyblade Story] - SaintBlader - Aug. 15, 2013
I'm terribly sorry, everyone. I will not be able to upload Chapter Nine tonight. I left my laptop at my grandmother's house. I will be able to upload tomorrow, though!
RE: Creating A Future [Beyblade Story] - LimiTTrickster - Aug. 17, 2013
When are you goin to upload the ninth chapter sorry for being impatient but it is a really good story.
RE: Creating A Future [Beyblade Story] - SaintBlader - Aug. 17, 2013
My laptop keeps on acting up and I've been busy witj cross-country, but I'll try to upload today if I get a chance
RE: Creating A Future [Beyblade Story] - LimiTTrickster - Aug. 17, 2013
Okay, thanks, I am really excited to see chapter nine!
RE: Creating A Future [Beyblade Story] - ★WindStarElite★ - Aug. 17, 2013
yes don't add to that team i prefer to be a rouge blader that needs no time to tie him down hell just will be there for support or if you guys need help.
RE: Creating A Future [Beyblade Story] - LimiTTrickster - Aug. 17, 2013
That is sounding a little bit too revolved around you ace and it is really the writer's choice what happens.
RE: Creating A Future [Beyblade Story] - SaintBlader - Aug. 18, 2013
Chapter Nine is up!!!! Yay!!! Sorry about the long wait, everyone!! School will be starting next week for me, so I may not be able to post as often, but I will try! Hope you all enjoy!
Thanks to jacolal for Dan's flashback. He gave me the idea!
RE: Creating A Future [Beyblade Story] - LimiTTrickster - Aug. 18, 2013
It's great consistency in chapter length and amazing use of vocabulary. A10/10 story so far.
RE: Creating A Future [Beyblade Story] - SaintBlader - Aug. 18, 2013
Thank you! It means a lot!
RE: Creating A Future [Beyblade Story] - LimiTTrickster - Aug. 19, 2013
I think this is, in my opinion, the best story in the wbo website right now, even if it doesn't have the most views.
RE: Creating A Future [Beyblade Story] - SaintBlader - Aug. 19, 2013
Chapter Ten is up! This is the longest chapter so far, and the best in my opinion!
Also, I have decided to split the story into seperate parts to help with knowing where you are in the story.
Thank you all for reading and sharing your opinions!