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RE: The last King- A bey blade story ( Accepting character requests. ) - ★WindStarElite★ - Aug. 07, 2013
Ok great
RE: The Last King- A beyblade story ( Accepting character requests. ) - FeedFear - Aug. 07, 2013
i prefer gravity and earth
these please me and xuan wu (the monster my bey is based of of ) is a tortoise not a sea turtle so i enjoy it
RE: The Last King- A beyblade story ( Accepting character requests. ) - RagerBlade - Aug. 07, 2013
When will the next chapter be up?
RE: The Last King- A beyblade story ( Accepting character requests. ) - Themeeny7 - Aug. 07, 2013
(Aug. 07, 2013 10:17 PM)RagerBlade Wrote: When will the next chapter be up?
I'm not sure. I was writing it now, but I felt like nobody was reading it so I took a break. I can keep going however.
RE: The Last King- A beyblade story ( Accepting character requests. ) - FeedFear - Aug. 07, 2013
(Aug. 07, 2013 10:30 PM)Themeeny7 Wrote:(Aug. 07, 2013 10:17 PM)RagerBlade Wrote: When will the next chapter be up?
I'm not sure. I was writing it now, but I felt like nobody was reading it so I took a break. I can keep going however.
please don't rush, we can wait for a good story
RE: The Last King- A beyblade story (Accepting character requests.) - RagerBlade - Aug. 07, 2013
Rushing will just decrease the stories quality. Make it as good as possible and take as much time as you need! Your writing multiple chapters a day. Most things like this are weekly! Yours is daily!
RE: The Last King- A beyblade story (Accepting character requests.) - Themeeny7 - Aug. 07, 2013
(Aug. 07, 2013 10:37 PM)RagerBlade Wrote: Rushing will just decrease the stories quality. Make it as good as possible and take as much time as you need! Your writing multiple chapters a day. Most things like this are weekly! Yours is daily!
Yeah it's just that well, I started yesterday for one. And I'm not really rushing, it's just like when i write I can't just stop here and there, it's hard not to write as much as possible :l Besides I'm planning on nearly 100 chapters for this rofl so 5 chapters at a time seems okay :l. Anytime I write stories other than beyblade I just think about what I should put, then i write it.
(Aug. 07, 2013 10:35 PM)Ifrit Wrote:(Aug. 07, 2013 10:30 PM)Themeeny7 Wrote:(Aug. 07, 2013 10:17 PM)RagerBlade Wrote: When will the next chapter be up?
I'm not sure. I was writing it now, but I felt like nobody was reading it so I took a break. I can keep going however.
please don't rush, we can wait for a good story
Ok ty. I don't consider it rushing, just writing because I was asked to, but alright.
Though sense you guys are concerned about me rushing, I will take a few days to work on editing it to the top potential.
RE: The Last King- A beyblade story (Accepting character requests.) - Ocean - Aug. 08, 2013
a few spelling errors.
RE: The Last King- A beyblade story (Accepting character requests.) - Themeeny7 - Aug. 08, 2013
(Aug. 08, 2013 12:00 AM)AZL Wrote: a few spelling errors.
Yeah Ik I'm not the best speller. I am working on it >:I
RE: The Last King- A beyblade story (Accepting character requests.) - Ocean - Aug. 08, 2013
Just to be specific Leone is spelled Leone.
RE: The Last King- A beyblade story (Accepting character requests.) - ★WindStarElite★ - Aug. 08, 2013
Awesome let see what ace will do next hmm
RE: The Last King- A beyblade story (Accepting character requests.) - Themeeny7 - Aug. 08, 2013
(Aug. 08, 2013 12:08 AM)AZL Wrote: Just to be specific Leone is spelled Leone.
Oh my glob it is? I never knew that o_o
(Aug. 08, 2013 12:19 AM)XKai_DranzerX Wrote: Awesome let see what ace will do next hmm
Probobally be against me in the round for Leader
RE: The Last King- A beyblade story (Accepting character requests.) - ★WindStarElite★ - Aug. 08, 2013
(Aug. 08, 2013 12:56 AM)Themeeny7 Wrote:(Aug. 08, 2013 12:08 AM)AZL Wrote: Just to be specific Leone is spelled Leone.
Oh my glob it is? I never knew that o_o
(Aug. 08, 2013 12:19 AM)XKai_DranzerX Wrote: Awesome let see what ace will do next hmm
Probobally be against me in the round for Leader
lol your gonna win probably
RE: The Last King- A beyblade story (Accepting character requests.) - Themeeny7 - Aug. 08, 2013
(Aug. 08, 2013 1:30 AM)XKai_DranzerX Wrote:(Aug. 08, 2013 12:56 AM)Themeeny7 Wrote:(Aug. 08, 2013 12:08 AM)AZL Wrote: Just to be specific Leone is spelled Leone.
Oh my glob it is? I never knew that o_o
(Aug. 08, 2013 12:19 AM)XKai_DranzerX Wrote: Awesome let see what ace will do next hmm
Probobally be against me in the round for Leader
lol your gonna win probably
<_< ( Is not a man for spoliers. )
RE: The Last King- A beyblade story (Accepting character requests.) - ★WindStarElite★ - Aug. 08, 2013
(Aug. 08, 2013 1:46 AM)Themeeny7 Wrote:(Aug. 08, 2013 1:30 AM)XKai_DranzerX Wrote:(Aug. 08, 2013 12:56 AM)Themeeny7 Wrote: Oh my glob it is? I never knew that o_o
Probobally be against me in the round for Leader
lol your gonna win probably
<_< ( Is not a man for spoliers. )
I said probably remember its still night time ace will not give up and can you let him repair his bey.
RE: The Last King- A beyblade story (Accepting character requests.) - Themeeny7 - Aug. 08, 2013
(Aug. 08, 2013 1:49 AM)XKai_DranzerX Wrote:(Aug. 08, 2013 1:46 AM)Themeeny7 Wrote:(Aug. 08, 2013 1:30 AM)XKai_DranzerX Wrote: lol your gonna win probably
<_< ( Is not a man for spoliers. )
I said probably remember its still night time ace will not give up and can you let him repair his bey.
His bey isn't really damaged. :l
RE: The Last King- A beyblade story (Accepting character requests.) - ★WindStarElite★ - Aug. 08, 2013
(Aug. 08, 2013 5:05 AM)Themeeny7 Wrote:(Aug. 08, 2013 1:49 AM)XKai_DranzerX Wrote:(Aug. 08, 2013 1:46 AM)Themeeny7 Wrote: <_< ( Is not a man for spoliers. )
I said probably remember its still night time ace will not give up and can you let him repair his bey.
His bey isn't really damaged. :l
true it is just chipped
RE: The Last King- A beyblade story (Accepting character requests.) - Themeeny7 - Aug. 11, 2013
Attention all readers: I feel that have relaxed my brain enough and I also have had huge inspiration from a irl battle. Tomorrow I will get working on chapter 5 and probobally finish it. Also due to a frequent request for characters to be in love with one another, I will attempt to add a relationship or two
(what is with you people and love? XD)
RE: The Last King- A beyblade story (Accepting character requests.) - ★WindStarElite★ - Aug. 11, 2013
Thanks I've been dieng to read your amazing story I miss the Ever day entry bro your amazing and yes Romance is awesome.
RE: The Last King- A beyblade story (Accepting character requests.) - Ryukiba - Aug. 11, 2013
Ohh I just love love!
especially in stories/movies! But I've never seen love in a beyblade story!?
I'm interested in this!
RE: The Last King- A beyblade story (Accepting character requests.) - ★WindStarElite★ - Aug. 11, 2013
Yes
RE: The Last King- A beyblade story (Accepting character requests.) - LimiTTrickster - Aug. 11, 2013
Hey I'm just giving a character I made for a beyblade story but never actually used it so here it is -
Name: Jake Stear
Beyblade Name: Torch Kronos
Type: Balance
Element: Fire
Appearance: Half phoenix - Half Titan
Special moves: Phoenix Flaming shield, Devil's Horns, Inferno of trickery
Clear Wheel: Dark Red with black
Character Bio: 13 yrs old. He is a strong beyblader (so far undefeated) and has a backstory, if you accept, I will pm it to you.
Pheonix Flaming Shield - The bey's speed increases as the performance tip chance to become sharp and the bey makes a shield of fire from the friction produced.
Devil's Horns - The fusion wheel/ metal frame combines with the pc frame as the performance tip turns into rubber flat. The bey gives a full on smash attack with low recoil effect.
Inferno of trickery: Creates an inferno, which the bey climbs, the inferno sucks the opponent's bey in, forcing it to climb the inferno; but the torch kronos isn't there! it is at the bottom... it turns the inferno upside down, blasting the opponent's bey face first into the the base of the stadium, effectively resulting in a stadium out.
RE: The Last King- A beyblade story (Accepting character requests.) - Themeeny7 - Aug. 11, 2013
(Aug. 11, 2013 5:39 AM)XKai_DranzerX Wrote: Thanks I've been dieng to read your amazing story I miss the Ever day entry bro your amazing and yes Romance is awesome.
I am so sorry for my loss of the daily entry. A couple of readers didn't like the fact that I made so many chapters in days, and I try to do what the readers want mostly, but the pace I was doing it at was the right pace for me. It is too painful to have to wait to keep writing :I I will get to writing the story right now. You may see frequent updates as I write.
(Aug. 11, 2013 6:03 PM)jacolal Wrote: Hey I'm just giving a character I made for a beyblade story but never actually used it so here it is -I cannot accept this because I do not know the names of the track and tip your bey has. As soon as you tell me that I can consider adding it to the story
Name: Jake Stear
Beyblade Name: Torch Kronos
Type: Balance
Element: Fire
Appearance: Half phoenix - Half Titan
Special moves: Phoenix Flaming shield, Devil's Horns, Inferno of trickery
Clear Wheel: Dark Red with black
Character Bio: 13 yrs old. He is a strong beyblader (so far undefeated) and has a backstory, if you accept, I will pm it to you.
Pheonix Flaming Shield - The bey's speed increases as the performance tip chance to become sharp and the bey makes a shield of fire from the friction produced.
Devil's Horns - The fusion wheel/ metal frame combines with the pc frame as the performance tip turns into rubber flat. The bey gives a full on smash attack with low recoil effect.
Inferno of trickery: Creates an inferno, which the bey climbs, the inferno sucks the opponent's bey in, forcing it to climb the inferno; but the torch kronos isn't there! it is at the bottom... it turns the inferno upside down, blasting the opponent's bey face first into the the base of the stadium, effectively resulting in a stadium out.
(Aug. 11, 2013 5:47 AM)ryukiba Wrote: Ohh I just love love!
Yeah
I don't want Christian to be in love with someone until later chapters, because the main character can't be in love so fast :l
RE: The Last King- A beyblade story (Accepting character requests.) - ★WindStarElite★ - Aug. 11, 2013
Ok great
RE: The Last King- A beyblade story (Accepting character requests.) - Themeeny7 - Aug. 11, 2013
I can reply to your comments while I write the story, so feel free to ask anything.