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RE: [Beyblade Story] The Sacred Dragons(Now Accepting Character Requests!) - кαмυι カムイ - Sep. 19, 2013
Really great story. I don't see any grammatical errors right now.
RE: [Beyblade Story] The Sacred Dragons(Now Accepting Character Requests!) - 6 God - Nov. 26, 2013
I've been busy with school, but here's chapter 10!
RE: [Beyblade Story] The Sacred Dragons(Now Accepting Character Requests!) - ★WindStarElite★ - Nov. 26, 2013
I like It can't. Wait to see what happens in chapter. 11 the only thing that made me sad. Was the length.
RE: [Beyblade Story] The Sacred Dragons(Now Accepting Character Requests!) - 6 God - Nov. 26, 2013
Would you have wanted it to be longer or shorter? lol
Yeah I'm so excited to write it, it's gonna be awesome!
RE: [Beyblade Story] The Sacred Dragons(Now Accepting Character Requests!) - ★WindStarElite★ - Nov. 26, 2013
Longer. Please. More time to enjoy your writing
RE: [Beyblade Story] The Sacred Dragons(Now Accepting Character Requests!) - Phantom 2 - Nov. 26, 2013
BEYBLADE IS A GAME OF TOPS THAT ARE MADE OF MEDAL AND PLASTICK.
RE: [Beyblade Story] The Sacred Dragons(Now Accepting Character Requests!) - 6 God - Nov. 26, 2013
I really don't like people trolling my thread. Next time read the story before critizing it.
RE: [Beyblade Story] The Sacred Dragons(Now Accepting Character Requests!) - кαмυι カムイ - Nov. 26, 2013
(Nov. 26, 2013 10:11 PM)Phantom 2 Wrote: BEYBLADE IS A GAME OF TOPS THAT ARE MADE OF MEDAL AND PLASTICK.First of all, it is off topic. Second of all, you spelled metal and plastic wrong. Seriously, read before you type.
RE: [Beyblade Story] The Sacred Dragons(Now Accepting Character Requests!) - DRAGON KING - Nov. 26, 2013
I'm only on chapter 2, but so far it's really good! I like how it has MFB blades and zero g
RE: [Beyblade Story] The Sacred Dragons(Now Accepting Character Requests!) - Ryukiba - Nov. 26, 2013
Wow last time I read this I was on chapter 5! But I was able to catch up
I'm really liking it so far! Also you spelled my character's name wrong, it's Kurai
RE: [Beyblade Story] The Sacred Dragons(Now Accepting Character Requests!) - 6 God - Nov. 26, 2013
Oh I'm sorry I'll fix it now! I'm working on 11 right now!
RE: [Beyblade Story] The Sacred Dragons(Now Accepting Character Requests!) - DRAGON KING - Nov. 26, 2013
DK
Age: 12
Beyblade: slayer dracone F145DD (forbidden 145 death driller (it can drill into the ground and give the opposing bey an upper attack))
Special move: dragon slicer, his beys turns gold and it creates a spinning vortex that destroys everything inside it
Bio: extremely cocky and good looking
He never backs down even if he knows he will lose, he has brown hair (like light out of death note)
EDIT: if u can't find a way to use him in this story, u don't have to
RE: [Beyblade Story] The Sacred Dragons(Now Accepting Character Requests!) - Mitsu - Nov. 27, 2013
To Be Honest I Just Started Reading Chapter One
But It's Amazing! 10/10 All The Way! Great Job Kyler! I Hope To See A Lot More From You!
RE: [Beyblade Story] The Sacred Dragons(Now Accepting Character Requests!) - 6 God - Nov. 27, 2013
Gee, thanks Midnight!
Chapter 11 is in the OP!
RE: [Beyblade Story] The Sacred Dragons(Now Accepting Character Requests!) - Bladerguy2 - Nov. 27, 2013
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I dont have the time right now to read the rest of the chapters but I got to chapter 4 and its really good
RE: [Beyblade Story] The Sacred Dragons(Now Accepting Character Requests!) - DRAGON KING - Nov. 27, 2013
I like how chapter 11 ended, cuz the main character doesn't always win
RE: [Beyblade Story] The Sacred Dragons(Now Accepting Character Requests!) - 6 God - Nov. 27, 2013
Yeah, it actually make sense, because he's just a beginner, but has made it this far, because he's realized his true gift for blading. Kind of like Cardfight Vanguard's Aichi.
RE: [Beyblade Story] The Sacred Dragons(Now Accepting Character Requests!) - ★WindStarElite★ - Nov. 27, 2013
Awesome friend. Really. Enjoyed. It congrats. To Ryukiba character for winning
RE: [Beyblade Story] The Sacred Dragons(Now Accepting Character Requests!) - Ryukiba - Nov. 28, 2013
Chapter 11 is cool! Yay my character won!
can't wait to read chapter 12
RE: [Beyblade Story] The Sacred Dragons(Now Accepting Character Requests!) - 6 God - Nov. 28, 2013
Chapter 12 is in the OP!
RE: [Beyblade Story] The Sacred Dragons(Now Accepting Character Requests!) - DRAGON KING - Nov. 28, 2013
It was sooooo short, I need to read more
RE: [Beyblade Story] The Sacred Dragons(Now Accepting Character Requests!) - 6 God - Nov. 28, 2013
Lol, shouldn't you read the rest of the story? I'll start working on 13 shortly.
RE: [Beyblade Story] The Sacred Dragons(Now Accepting Character Requests!) - DRAGON KING - Nov. 28, 2013
Already read the whole thing
hehe
RE: [Beyblade Story] The Sacred Dragons(Now Accepting Character Requests!) - RagerBlade - Nov. 28, 2013
The chapters are too short! I want more action in each one! Which means I love it! I accidentally voted for the wrong one (It's Kinda Good)! If I could change my vote I would. I love this story! Keep it going!
RE: [Beyblade Story] The Sacred Dragons(Now Accepting Character Requests!) - Airus - Nov. 28, 2013
Character Request:
Name: Jake Horuda
Bey: Bandit Ifrit UC230BT (Ultimate Claw 230 Bearing Tip)
Special Move: Sends opposing bey flying and then drills it to the center of the stadium then sends a barrage of attacks.