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RE: a bey story - sum 472 - Nov. 26, 2011
Me too, I probably lost a few brain cells reading and posting. When is the new chapter up Nano?
RE: a bey story - TimelessOne - Nov. 26, 2011
(Nov. 25, 2011 11:40 PM)BladingKiller Wrote: This is the worst story I ever read. You have a lot of spelling errors and capitalization errors.
(Nov. 25, 2011 11:53 PM)Ryu13 Wrote: I cannot read much of this story. You must fix the grammatical errors, so we can actually read it. Otherwise, we won't be able to review it, or even enjoy it, assuming it was good.
(Nov. 26, 2011 12:41 AM)All Gen Blader Wrote: Am I this only one who understands this story
It was hard but I could undersand it XD
Why bottle cap attack
(Nov. 26, 2011 1:09 AM)rydeatwon Wrote: Too many spelling mistakes and grammar issues,and barely anybody can read it.Otherwise,it's not bad.
Character request,
Name:Michael
Beyblade: Ray Pegasus
Special move:Ray Blast
Personality:Light,Sun,Galaxy,Stars,Mythology
You so realise that this is a joke thread? It's telling everyone to stop posting dumb stories, and that some stories look like this to us.
RE: a bey story - AllGenBlader - Nov. 26, 2011
haw dus tis store hav so mane post than mahn, I gus its fune becas of this riting
ok yor store desevers mor post on her than mah store becas this riting and bad gramr and al that becas of the humor it givs it XD
RE: a bey story - Nano - Nov. 26, 2011
nuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu paaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaarrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrt
I need a horribru animation for the logo too...
RE: a bey story - Ga' - Nov. 26, 2011
I actually had to go back and edit my post with mispelled words, it was so difficult. XD Some people are a bit late in catching on. Read my second post in the first page if you must.
MAIN CHRTER NEED LOSE! DAKU WOFL CAUSE THIS. Mah korterh wiyul maek sotri 1000000000000x beotr! YOUS oAr LsSssS!!!!!11!!11!1 DAKU WOFL NAO, IN STORI!
RE: a bey story - Temporal - Nov. 26, 2011
(Nov. 26, 2011 2:39 AM)NoodooSoup Wrote: i no i am late but u don have to bee so menn
It hurts to write like this though
That it does. My fingers are about to fall off.
RE: a bey story - sum 472 - Nov. 26, 2011
aww... Ginga Kai Guy lost.
I'm sure he'd win [ROAD ROLLER U DO NONT LIVE]
But that's what you expect with all character requests losing in the story, with no regards to weather the character was good or evil.
RE: a bey story - Nano - Nov. 26, 2011
OKI
NUUUUUUUUU PAAAAARRRRRRTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT
wit shokin twizt
RE: a bey story - Cygnus - Nov. 26, 2011
dis storie is AWESOME! rite more1 i luv dis.
Do you have permission from Kai-V?
RE: a bey story - Dan - Nov. 26, 2011
Guys, we've already done this before..
Wait.. Rai what the hell why did you make another one of these? just sticky the old thread. lol
RE: a bey story - Nano - Nov. 26, 2011
(Nov. 26, 2011 5:16 PM)Dan Wrote: Wait.. Rai what the hell why did you make another one of these? just sticky the old thread. lol
I'm not Chody...
We've done this 100 times, actually. I just wanted to be apart of the Beyblade story writers because I think I got what it takes :]
RE: a bey story - Raigeko13 - Nov. 27, 2011
chrtr reqst plcxzzzzzzz
nam; ryan geico
descripshun; v ari big tall muscular geko!!!!!!!!1!1one
bey: litning greko g:l (geko lik)
plz put mine in da stowy nano! plzzzzz!!!! its gr8!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
RE: a bey story - Hero - Nov. 27, 2011
Character request!
Name: Hero
Description: he is only guy to beat kei ever so he is real number one. his hair is silver and gold and he wears goggles on his forehead, a red cape and a custom tailor-made louis vuiton suit. he is a street orphan. he is 5"13 tall and his right eye is red and his left eye is blue. carries around a 500 pound sword like cloud strife from final fantasy and his hair is styled like that, but it is gold and silver. he is also dating this super hot pink haired anime character.
bey: like MF-H Omega Dragoon BDCH85R3F
Omega Dragoon came from the Sun and fell to the Earth. Hero found it when he was on the street and he jumped into a volcano and found it. It never lost a match and spins both directions.
BDCH85 is like Boost Disk Change Height. It is like BD145 but it can change height. It has three heights; 85, 120, and 145. It is also made out of metal.
R3F is like R2F but 100x faster and more grip.
special attack: Super Star Slash Stab Smash Bash Steve Nash Shaq Hurricane Tornado Lava attack !!!!
RE: a bey story - Nano - Nov. 27, 2011
otay ad nu [art
dis une gewd 2
hop u liek ^___________________________________________________________^
RE: a bey story - Whatzzer - Nov. 27, 2011
Chawacter rekiest police!
Name
uper Ultimate John Cena Gingia RayugA evil dark nebula blabla douji omega supa infinity great hagane(I liek theeez name vewwy much)Bey
uper Ultimate Galaxy Biggang Storm Lighting Rey Kysterio John Cena L-Drago Meteroshot gingka gibga infinity pegasusususus infinity no facebot,spin track,nd performance tip.Just Fuse whelll and metal whell this bey is awesome liek UPO(UFO) (You could use acronyms)SpceiLa mevo
uper Bigbang starfruit infinity darknessssss watermelon shot 619 STF dishesher paltr tresh beenAtitud
oopa stupeeed and soopa stupeeed and evul.nobody can defeat his soopa tekniq.(This stoopid spelling error is intended)
RE: a bey story - AllGenBlader - Nov. 27, 2011
thes ar geting old naw
RE: a bey story - JCx06 - Nov. 28, 2011
LOLING TILL THE END
Rekwest krktr
naim: LOLING MASTR
bey: ROFLCOPTER001LOL
deskriptyon: naim sayz it all
RE: a bey story - TimelessOne - Nov. 28, 2011
(Nov. 27, 2011 11:00 PM)All Gen Blader Wrote: thes ar geting old naw
Oui! Y U spoil da partay?!
RE: a bey story - ƛnubis - Nov. 29, 2011
Bru dis is off the chayn. I wanntaa mayke a kakrarot i meeeen karacter request
Name: TOBUSHIESHCLICKFACE
AGe: 5,[email protected]
Bey: Killur Anuuubis T1235 rdqjoffthehuukF (basically a flat that i painted puple)
personallity: Lieks turtles.
Special moove: Space vacum star blast o bryant doom scythe monster truck ralley free forums dot com.... His bey goes all like disco then explodes and uhh......THure awre spwarkles
RE: a bey story - Ga' - Nov. 29, 2011
Spoiler (Click to View)
SOTP EM ChrRtr qwests! wat dus crther meen btw? NAO So MEnEE CrtTEs! NaNO Wat sAy YU!
RE: a bey story - ShadowL-Drago - Nov. 29, 2011
(Nov. 29, 2011 2:05 AM)GaHooleone Wrote:i foundz cho khemikal tingy Ga'! NaNODOOD! HERO! Hw u TIpE sO WaYu!Spoiler (Click to View)
SOTP EM ChrRtr qwests! wat dus crther meen btw? NAO So MEnEE CrtTEs! NaNO Wat sAy YU!
lulz
RE: a bey story - Nano - Nov. 29, 2011
(Nov. 29, 2011 2:05 AM)GaHooleone Wrote:Spoiler (Click to View)
PPL KEPE CHALUNG HIM 2 MACHUS
HE CNT HALP EET
RE: a bey story - Spdshadow - Nov. 29, 2011
(Nov. 25, 2011 11:40 PM)BladingKiller Wrote: This is the worst story I ever read. You have a lot of spelling errors and capitalization errors.
I think the errors were on purpose,... Haha... Nano is like that
RE: a bey story - Tmoney6911 - Dec. 04, 2011
cool story bro
RE: a bey story - Nano - Dec. 06, 2011
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