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RE: Ra's story 1: Ancient Beys - Odin - Dec. 19, 2010
Thanks, Ra. Here's what I have for the first part of my part of our co-op:
Meanwhile, in the frigid wastelands of Scandanavia, one boy was praying in a shrine. Ari bowed his head in the abandoned shrine.
"Oh please, lords of Aesir, help me cope once more. After my aunts and uncles were taken by your Valkyries, you helped me cope, and now, please help me and my Grand Raven 100F cope with the loss of my parents. Please, if my family is in the realm of Hela, please let them be at peace." A gust of wind blew the doors of the shrine open. Two ravens coasted into the dusty shrine. They cawed, trying to tell him something. They perched, one at each shoulder, and a flash of pain coursed through Ari. He dropped his bey, and touched his head to the floor. The raven on his right shoulder picked the Bey up in its beak. Ari saw a great feast, and his right eye throbbed. Suddenly, the peircing pain that had coursed through him vanished, and the two ravens were hovering under a statue of Odin. Ari walked forward, but fell through a trap door. Four braces caught his arms, and two more caught his legs. One circled around his head. A booming voice spoke softly, but with much force: "As payment for your family to be safely transported to Valhalla by my Valkyries, you must pay two things: your beyblade, and your eye. I will also give you a partner, and another Beyblade."
"What are you talking about?!?" Ari cried. "Who are you?"
"Silence!" the voice cried. The first raven, who had the beyblade in his mouth, dropped it onto an altar. Then, both ravens came to Ari's face. One held Ari's eye open, while the other moved closer. It placed its beak and began to pull. Ari screamed, but in vain. The raven pulled harder and harder. The eye came out, and the raven placed it on the altar, as well. A light shined, although Ari was in too much pain to see it. The chains released him, and he grasped where his eye had been. The birds placed an eyepatch over it, and he stopped hurting. He walked over to the altar. The voice said: "Your eye has the power of my eye, and your eye can see twice as well as a man with two eyes. Your name is now Odin, just like mine, and your Beyblade's." The boy cautiously picked up his beyblade: Metal Face Norse Odin GB145RSD (Rubber Semi-Defense). He left, and began looking for his promised partner.
Well, waddaya think? Is it good enough to put here? I'll think up more soon.
RE: Ra's story 1: Ancient Beys - Amaterasu - Dec. 19, 2010
yes lovin the norse mythology maybe the gang can go to norway after one episode
and how bout i make one part and u make the other kapich?
RE: Ra's story 1: Ancient Beys(feat.Odin of Aesir) - Cjbrat212 - Dec. 19, 2010
Hey can i be in the story ??? like when your in norway id have mercury anubis 85xf
Description:digital launcher goldish color with no text on it and my uniform is jeans with a white shirt and a dark dark blue jacket and brown/blonde hair?
RE: Ra's story 1: Ancient Beys - Odin - Dec. 19, 2010
(Dec. 19, 2010 7:47 PM)Ra Wrote: how bout i make one part and u make the other kapich?I'm down with that. We will be able to adapt the story more that way.
RE: Ra's story 1: Ancient Beys(feat.Odin of Aesir) - Amaterasu - Dec. 20, 2010
Odin of aesir yeah if u cant make the story on your turn tell me and ill do it
@CjBrat thats egyptian choose another
RE: Ra's story 1: Ancient Beys(feat.Odin of Aesir) - Cjbrat212 - Dec. 20, 2010
(Dec. 20, 2010 12:44 AM)Ra Wrote: Odin of aesir yeah if u cant make the story on your turn tell me and ill do ithmm i wonder ..
@CjBrat thats egyptian choose another
maybe i could use my own design i think about maybe.
storm aegir t125wb ???
RE: Ra's story 1: Ancient Beys(feat.Odin of Aesir) - Amaterasu - Dec. 20, 2010
(Dec. 20, 2010 1:42 AM)Cjbrat212 Wrote:do u know wat i mean by not doing blade requests.(Dec. 20, 2010 12:44 AM)Ra Wrote: Odin of aesir yeah if u cant make the story on your turn tell me and ill do ithmm i wonder ..
@CjBrat thats egyptian choose another
maybe i could use my own design i think about maybe.
storm aegir t125wb ???
anyway your character will have evil loki CH100that goes up to 125 and 145 PD
RE: Ra's story 1: Ancient Beys(feat.Odin of Aesir) - Night - Dec. 20, 2010
Nice, Odin. I like it.
RE: Ra's story 1: Ancient Beys(feat.Odin of Aesir) - Cjbrat212 - Dec. 20, 2010
(Dec. 20, 2010 1:46 AM)Ra Wrote:ok! im fine with that lol i dont mean to sound mad if i do im sorry!(Dec. 20, 2010 1:42 AM)Cjbrat212 Wrote:do u know wat i mean by not doing blade requests.(Dec. 20, 2010 12:44 AM)Ra Wrote: Odin of aesir yeah if u cant make the story on your turn tell me and ill do ithmm i wonder ..
@CjBrat thats egyptian choose another
maybe i could use my own design i think about maybe.
storm aegir t125wb ???
anyway your character will have evil loki CH100that goes up to 125 and 145 PD
Wait am i good or bad?? i want to be good!!!!! and i want to help you in normany until you leave
RE: Ra's story 1: Ancient Beys(feat.Odin of Aesir) - LDRAGO KING - Dec. 20, 2010
Hey can i be in it my name would be Zeus and my Bey would be MF Bakushin Susanow 100RF my uniform would be jeans sneakers and a shirt with Susanow's face on it brown hair i would be a good guy and join sids team please add me.
RE: Ra's story 1: Ancient Beys(feat.Odin of Aesir) - Cu - Dec. 20, 2010
(Dec. 20, 2010 1:48 AM)Cjbrat212 Wrote:loki in norse mythology is kinda evil so u wood be schtzapharinic.(Dec. 20, 2010 1:46 AM)Ra Wrote:ok! im fine with that lol i dont mean to sound mad if i do im sorry!(Dec. 20, 2010 1:42 AM)Cjbrat212 Wrote:do u know wat i mean by not doing blade requests.(Dec. 20, 2010 12:44 AM)Ra Wrote: Odin of aesir yeah if u cant make the story on your turn tell me and ill do ithmm i wonder ..
@CjBrat thats egyptian choose another
maybe i could use my own design i think about maybe.
storm aegir t125wb ???
anyway your character will have evil loki CH100that goes up to 125 and 145 PD
Wait am i good or bad?? i want to be good!!!!! and i want to help you in normany until you leave
ND l drago sure but tell me what mythologicalcharacter does susannoo represent
RE: Ra's story 1: Ancient Beys(feat.Odin of Aesir) - Amaterasu - Dec. 20, 2010
oh sorry i was at my friends house but im on my phone now,srry for confusion.
RE: Ra's story 1: Ancient Beys(feat.Odin of Aesir) - LDRAGO KING - Dec. 20, 2010
Susanow is the Bey equivelent of the Japanese Deity of Storms so i can be in it Ra.
RE: Ra's story 1: Ancient Beys(feat.Odin of Aesir) - Amaterasu - Dec. 20, 2010
then wouldnt it make more sense for ur character to have japanese name like Miyamoto?
RE: Ra's story 1: Ancient Beys(feat.Odin of Aesir) - Odin - Dec. 20, 2010
@Ra, same to you. If you ever can't write, or get writer's block, let me know. I'll help you out.
RE: Ra's story 1: Ancient Beys(feat.Odin of Aesir) - LDRAGO KING - Dec. 20, 2010
Oh i see then call me Arashi Arashi means storm in japanese.
RE: Ra's story 1: Ancient Beys(feat.Odin of Aesir) - Amaterasu - Dec. 20, 2010
okay you'll be in and odin thank u
RE: Ra's story 1: Ancient Beys(feat.Odin of Aesir) - LDRAGO KING - Dec. 20, 2010
so when you going to make the next chapter.
RE: Ra's story 1: Ancient Beys(feat.Odin of Aesir) - Odin - Dec. 20, 2010
Not to be rude, but Ra and I are people, too. We need to eat, sleep and go to the bathroom, as well as do things like work. We can't just snap our fingers and have a perfect chapter. We'll get around to it, especially because Winter Break is here.
RE: Ra's story 1: Ancient Beys(feat.Odin of Aesir) - Chinmoku - Dec. 20, 2010
Is there any way I might be able to help with this story? Please let me know.
RE: Ra's story 1: Ancient Beys(feat.Odin of Aesir) - LDRAGO KING - Dec. 20, 2010
allright sorry to bother you.
RE: Ra's story 1: Ancient Beys(feat.Odin of Aesir) - Odin - Dec. 20, 2010
@LDragoKing, I'm sorry for snapping at you. @Ra, here's another chapter of Odin's part of the story.
As Odin became more and more accustomed to his new bey, he began to see more abilities to use. His many battles attracted the attention of the ABA, who sent another Scandanavian to recruit him. The other boy, who used the beyblade Hammer Thor P155RF, came to Odin's apartment.
"I challenge you to a battle, where if you lose, you come with me!" Kol stated bluntly.
"Fine." Odin said. The boys walked to a nearby stadium, and began the countdown.
"3! 2! 1! Let it Rip!" Odin and Thor collided in mid-air, causing a small shockwave.
"Go, Thor! Pulverizer 155 track special ability! Free swing punch!" The hammers attached to Thor's track began to spin to the left, as the notorious LDrago did, and as it did, it gained twice the speed it normally had. Odin, in its path, quickly gave up some balance to run away, and the hammers created a hole in the stadium.
"Oh, carp." Odin muttered. "Time to break out one of my more powerful moves. Go, Odin! Special move Sky God's Blizzard!" As he yelled, Norse Odin called ice. It froze Hammer Thor, while the actual Bey continued to spin inside the ice. "Now, Odin! Valkyrie's wrath!" Odin rammed Thor, shattering the ice, and causing Thor to crash out of the stadium.
"Uugh," Kol groaned. The two boys had formed a friendship in their battle.
"Sorry to interrupt, but you're going to have to battle ME, now. And, my Evil Loki CH100T will surely stop you in your tracks! I'll Trick you out of victory! HEHEHEHEHEHEEE!"
RE: Ra's story 1: Ancient Beys(feat.Odin of Aesir) - Amaterasu - Dec. 20, 2010
That's awesome I'm doin the nextpart tommorow
RE: Ra's story 1: Ancient Beys(feat.Odin of Aesir) - Cjbrat212 - Dec. 20, 2010
Hey i forgot my name is Collin and i still want to be on the good team thing.... until you leave normany And Loki isn't that evil...he was just a little bit of a trickster towards the others..... I still want to be good !!!
Oh and maybe after i leave after a while i show show up in another country with a different bey?
Edit: Random idea what if i do help you out but near the end of the normany trip i go against you (but lose) Then (like yuu) in another countrey im with you ??
RE: Ra's story 1: Ancient Beys(feat.Odin of Aesir) - .:J:. - Dec. 20, 2010
I could help carry the story on if you need extra help? sorry if you already have enough help but i just wanted to offer it! anyway i like the story so far!