[Fan Fiction] {Slow Updates} The Eternal Ones: Scion of the Legends - Printable Version

Fan Fiction {Slow Updates} The Eternal Ones: Scion of the Legends - Printable Version

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RE: Parallel Burst Universe: The Scion of the Legends - valtaoi_007 - Apr. 02, 2021

I know this is off topic but
how do you pronounce scion?

RE: Parallel Burst Universe: The Scion of the Legends - SSJBDoku - Apr. 02, 2021

bro R.I.P Zac moment of silence please

RE: Parallel Burst Universe: The Scion of the Legends - valtaoi_007 - Apr. 02, 2021

(Apr. 02, 2021 4:15 AM)SSJBDoku Wrote: bro R.I.P Zac moment of silence please

Zac sucks tbh but ok I guess

oh wait
I broke the silence
sorry

RE: Parallel Burst Universe: The Scion of the Legends - SSJBDoku - Apr. 02, 2021

JK i hate Zac and personally think he's 2 up himself

All G i agree dude if u can't see from the last message

if anything it would be R.I.P Lui and Shu real moment of silence please

RE: Parallel Burst Universe: The Scion of the Legends - valtaoi_007 - Apr. 02, 2021

(Apr. 02, 2021 4:16 AM)SSJBDoku Wrote: JK i hate Zac and personally think he's 2 up himself

All G i agree dude if u can't see from the last message

I wanted sisco/silas to be in place of Zac just like the original idea (silas was supposed to be on of the 4 spin emperors but then they decided to put him on the second season(
Silas is ok, which is better than bad

RE: Parallel Burst Universe: The Scion of the Legends - i'm batman - Apr. 02, 2021

(Apr. 02, 2021 2:32 AM)valtaoi_007 Wrote: I know this is off topic but
how do you pronounce scion?

Something like sai-on.

RE: Parallel Burst Universe: The Scion of the Legends - valtaoi_007 - Apr. 02, 2021

(Apr. 02, 2021 4:19 AM)i\m batman Wrote:
(Apr. 02, 2021 2:32 AM)valtaoi_007 Wrote: I know this is off topic but
how do you pronounce scion?

Something like sai-on.

I knew I was pronoucing it wrong
I was saying like SI-on

RE: Parallel Burst Universe: The Scion of the Legends - i'm batman - Apr. 02, 2021

(Apr. 02, 2021 4:21 AM)valtaoi_007 Wrote:
(Apr. 02, 2021 4:19 AM)i\m batman Wrote: Something like sai-on.

I knew I was pronoucing it wrong
I was saying like SI-on

I looked it up lol, before that I was worse than you, SKEE-on lmao.

RE: Parallel Burst Universe: The Scion of the Legends - PinkRose - Apr. 02, 2021

(Apr. 01, 2021 6:23 PM)Ryuga\s Son Wrote: After the Legend Festival. As in the title, it's a parallel burst universe, so some things are different. Personalities are also a bit different, but I re read the chapter and found out my mistakes, which were the ones that you stated, I truly appreciate the feedback you gave me. This prologue is very important to the overall plot of my fan fic. Would you like to collab?

Sorry, will have to pass. I'm already kinda busy with other fics I'm working on, but I guess you could dm me for proofreading if you need help with that.

RE: Parallel Burst Universe: The Scion of the Legends - Ryuga's Son - Apr. 02, 2021

(Apr. 02, 2021 4:16 AM)SSJBDoku Wrote: JK i hate Zac and personally think he's 2 up himself

All G i agree dude if u can't see from the last message

if anything it would be R.I.P Lui and Shu real moment of silence please

They're still alive, and are main characters in my fan fic

(Apr. 02, 2021 2:32 AM)valtaoi_007 Wrote: I know this is off topic but
how do you pronounce scion?

https://www.google.com/search?q=how+to+rponoucnce+scion&rlz=1CAJIKU_enUS947&oq=how+to+rponoucnce+scion&aqs=chrome..69i57j0i13l2j0i22i30l4j0i390l2.9146j0j7&sourceid=chrome&ie=UTF-8&safe=active&ssui=on

I'm deciding to re name some of the chapters:
1. Battle for the First Precipice! Theseus vrs Ryujin!
2. Obliterator Vishnu and Shiva the Destroyer: Apex Experts Appear!
3. The Steller Star Flux Quesr
4. Quest Part One: The Dungeon of Despair
5. Two Big, Brutal Battles!
6. Conquers the Dungeon of Despair!

RE: Parallel Burst Universe: The Scion of the Legends - 6Jupiter5 - Apr. 02, 2021

Will there be a character contest?

RE: Parallel Burst Universe: The Scion of the Legends - SSJBDoku - Apr. 03, 2021

(Apr. 02, 2021 2:18 PM)Ryuga\s Son Wrote:
(Apr. 02, 2021 4:16 AM)SSJBDoku Wrote: JK i hate Zac and personally think he's 2 up himself

All G i agree dude if u can't see from the last message

if anything it would be R.I.P Lui and Shu real moment of silence please

They're still alive, and are main characters in my fan fic

bro thats so good those are two of my fav characters

RE: Parallel Burst Universe: The Scion of the Legends - Ryuga's Son - Apr. 03, 2021

(Apr. 02, 2021 10:26 PM)6Jupiter5 Wrote: Will there be a character contest?

already happened.

RE: Parallel Burst Universe: The Scion of the Legends - Ryuga's Son - Apr. 03, 2021

Next Week is Spring break, so prob no chapters next week. Also, after 5 or six chapters, I'll introduce a new beyblade system and this is the final re-name of the first couple chapters:
1. Battle for the First Precipice! Theseus vrs Ryujin!
2. Eclipse Vishnu and Shiva the Destroyer: Apex Experts Appear!
3. The Stealler Star Flux Quest
4. Quest Part One: The Dungeon of Despair
5. Two Big, Brutal Battles!
6. Fame spreads throughout The Beyblade World!

RE: Parallel Burst Universe: The Scion of the Legends - WorldKai - Apr. 04, 2021

(Apr. 03, 2021 1:50 AM)Ryuga's Son Wrote:
(Apr. 02, 2021 10:26 PM)6Jupiter5 Wrote: Will there be a character contest?

already happened.

Will our characters still be used though?

RE: Parallel Burst Universe: The Scion of the Legends - Ryuga's Son - Apr. 04, 2021

(Apr. 04, 2021 3:22 AM)WorldKai Wrote:
(Apr. 03, 2021 1:50 AM)Ryuga's Son Wrote: already happened.

Will our characters still be used though?

yes, i only posted the prolouge, and the contest winners' characters will def be in the fan fic.

RE: Parallel Burst Universe: The Scion of the Legends - Ryuga's Son - Apr. 06, 2021

New System:
Mythical Warfare
First Appearance: Episode/Chapter Two
Example of a MW bey (MW stands for Mythical Warfare)
This bey will NOT be included in the story, just a example of how MF beys work.

Spoiler (Click to View)

Bey Name: Barbaric Kulukan LDW84'79+cultz
Parts:

Spoiler (Click to View)

Mythical Missile Bolt: Barbaric
Features: A mythical Missile Bolt has a drawing of the bey's avatar embed, resonating the bey's power. Usually all Bolts have a drawing of a Mythical character. A mythical Missile bolt signifies the power of the bey and the beauty of it. It holds all other parts together, so a Bolt breaking is one of the nightmares of a proffesional blader. When the bey is under extreme pressure, and the Blader's resonance indicates the bey that the battle was not going well and the fight might be lost, the bey shoots a bolt, which retracts and with the Bolt extracted, the Blader uses it's full power, using a ultimate move. It is a last resort, because there is a signifiant chance the Mythical Missile Bolt might break.

Mythical Mana Ring: LDW84'

This part holds almost all of the bey's power. It's power is thoroughly used during finisher moves. The Mana Ring has three subdivisons. One is the Finisher, which is part of the Mana ring which holds friction, and is used during attacks that are meant to be used to finish a battle. The second part is Defender's Scheme, which is a rubber part, which helps during times when the bey is under attack. It is severely important for a battle and needs to be used. The last part is Balance Scale. It is a spiked part, which balances the bey and stops the bey from using excessive power. It is very important for a bey's proper function.

Fused Warfare: 79
This part is below the Mana Ring, it is used for accelerating power and speed. It helps a lot during attacks, and it fuses with the Mana Ring and the Driver, combining power for a desperate attack. It is seen as a Warfare part which is heavily used during tag team battles and team battles. Nevertheless, this is used always, a functional part.

Combat Driver: +cultz

This is a driver like the one in the Superking Beyblade System, although, this driver in MF system has a minimum of 2 modes for every bey, some beys have more. The modes for Kulukan is ultzak and combatcultz, used for speed, which can create windstorms and spat away opponent beys.

Special Moves: Barbaric Slaughter, and Devouring Darkness
Ultimate Move: Missile Decimation

I summon PinkRose, DeltaZakuro, i'm batman, and SSJBDoku AND 6Jupiter5 AND Free... Hoya to give their ratings and suggestions with thoughts.

RE: Parallel Burst Universe: The Scion of the Legends - SSJBDoku - Apr. 06, 2021

never fear i am here.
I give it 10 for 10 bro would really love to see this put into play

RE: Parallel Burst Universe: The Scion of the Legends - Ryuga's Son - Apr. 06, 2021

(Apr. 06, 2021 8:55 PM)SSJBDoku Wrote: never fear i am here.
I give it 10 for 10 bro would really love to see this put into play

can you tell me why you give it a 10/10

RE: Parallel Burst Universe: The Scion of the Legends - SSJBDoku - Apr. 06, 2021

(Apr. 06, 2021 8:59 PM)Ryuga\s Son Wrote:
(Apr. 06, 2021 8:55 PM)SSJBDoku Wrote: never fear i am here.
I give it 10 for 10 bro would really love to see this put into play

can you tell me why you give it a 10/10

1. its a new way of blading which makes it good for me and 2. it seems like it would be so much fun to blade with that kind of be

RE: Parallel Burst Universe: The Scion of the Legends - i'm batman - Apr. 07, 2021

A few questions:
1. Which part is Kukulkan?
2. The ultimate move. Is it going to be same for different beys? Because Missile Decimation comes from "missile" of Mythical Missile Bolt which is the name of a category of bey parts. Ultimate moves, imo should be unique to each bey. Correct me if I'm mistaken tho.
3. The driver name and modes. What do they even mean?
I'll rate the system 7/10 for now, might raise it later. Reason being I need answers to these questions and for some reason Fused Warfare as a part type just doesn't sit well with me.

RE: Parallel Burst Universe: The Scion of the Legends - Ryuga's Son - Apr. 07, 2021

(Apr. 07, 2021 3:11 AM)i'm batman Wrote: A few questions:
1. Which part is Kukulkan?
2. The ultimate move. Is it going to be same for different beys? Because Missile Decimation comes from "missile" of Mythical Missile Bolt which is the name of a category of bey parts. Ultimate moves, imo should be unique to each bey. Correct me if I'm mistaken tho.
3. The driver name and modes. What do they even mean?
I'll rate the system 7/10 for now, might raise it later. Reason being I need answers to these questions and for some reason Fused Warfare as a part type just doesn't sit well with me.

1. So, Kukulkan is the embed drawing on the Mythical Missile Bolt. It is the signature of the bey's Kukulkan's avatar
2. The missile bolt explodes from the Mythical Missile Bolt, uses all of it's energy which is given by the Mana Ring, and forms the Ultimate Move. Same for every MF bey, but the Ultimate Move's name and power will be different. So will the strategy.
3. They don't mean anything. They're modes, As I said, it's a example, not an actual bey. Maybe I'll make another MF bey and share you the stuff. ultraz and combatcultz are modes. Ultraz makes the bey zoom zoom, creating tornadoes. Combatcultz makes the bey collect it's power and devastate the opponent bey

RE: Parallel Burst Universe: The Scion of the Legends - i'm batman - Apr. 07, 2021

(Apr. 07, 2021 4:17 PM)Ryuga\s Son Wrote:
(Apr. 07, 2021 3:11 AM)i\m batman Wrote: A few questions:
1. Which part is Kukulkan?
2. The ultimate move. Is it going to be same for different beys? Because Missile Decimation comes from "missile" of Mythical Missile Bolt which is the name of a category of bey parts. Ultimate moves, imo should be unique to each bey. Correct me if I'm mistaken tho.
3. The driver name and modes. What do they even mean?
I'll rate the system 7/10 for now, might raise it later. Reason being I need answers to these questions and for some reason Fused Warfare as a part type just doesn't sit well with me.

1. So, Kukulkan is the embed drawing on the Mythical Missile Bolt. It is the signature of the bey's Kukulkan's avatar
2. The missile bolt explodes from the Mythical Missile Bolt, uses all of it's energy which is given by the Mana Ring, and forms the Ultimate Move. Same for every MF bey, but the Ultimate Move's name and power will be different. So will the strategy.
3. They don't mean anything. They're modes, As I said, it's a example, not an actual bey. Maybe I'll make another MF bey and share you the stuff. ultraz and combatcultz are modes. Ultraz makes the bey zoom zoom, creating tornadoes. Combatcultz makes the bey collect it's power and devastate the opponent bey

Ok, I think I understand better now. This seems to be an interesting system.

RE: Parallel Burst Universe: The Scion of the Legends - Ryuga's Son - Apr. 07, 2021

(Apr. 07, 2021 4:30 PM)i'm batman Wrote:
(Apr. 07, 2021 4:17 PM)Ryuga\s Son Wrote: 1. So, Kukulkan is the embed drawing on the Mythical Missile Bolt. It is the signature of the bey's Kukulkan's avatar
2. The missile bolt explodes from the Mythical Missile Bolt, uses all of it's energy which is given by the Mana Ring, and forms the Ultimate Move. Same for every MF bey, but the Ultimate Move's name and power will be different. So will the strategy.
3. They don't mean anything. They're modes, As I said, it's a example, not an actual bey. Maybe I'll make another MF bey and share you the stuff. ultraz and combatcultz are modes. Ultraz makes the bey zoom zoom, creating tornadoes. Combatcultz makes the bey collect it's power and devastate the opponent bey

Ok, I think I understand better now. This seems to be an interesting system.

Everything about every bey will have varying modes and moves. What is your rating, out of ten? Any suggestions?

RE: Parallel Burst Universe: The Scion of the Legends - WorldKai - Apr. 07, 2021

It’s not like I’m a Zac fan or anything, pshh