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RE: Beyblade Burst Aura (Allowing Character And Beyblade Requests) - TakaraTheLord - Nov. 19, 2020

(Nov. 19, 2020  4:55 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: This still alive?

I have no Idea

RE: Beyblade Burst Aura (Allowing Character And Beyblade Requests) - BladerUmar - Nov. 19, 2020

[Image: avatar_206681.png?dateline=1605801367]yeah? i guess? just cuz of you
THE DRAGON OF LIGHT

LIKE IF YOU WANT A SPOILER WHAT IT IS

RE: Beyblade Burst Aura (Allowing Character And Beyblade Requests) - EarthHelios - Nov. 19, 2020

(Nov. 19, 2020  4:56 PM)BladerUmarWBO Wrote: [Image: avatar_206681.png?dateline=1605801367]yeah? i guess? just cuz of you
THE DRAGON OF LIGHT

LIKE IF YOU WANT A SPOILER WHAT IT IS

that looks cool

RE: Beyblade Burst Aura (Allowing Character And Beyblade Requests) - BladerUmar - Nov. 19, 2020

the dragon of light

no one owns it and legends say it was fighting the dragon of dark for 50,000 years
it can become and bey and battle and destroy whoever tresspasses its cave

and the dragon of dark will break the tresspasser sbey and soul and he the tresspasser will fall into eternal darkness who ever tresspasses its cave

etc i dont want to spoil everything
EarthHelios
TakaraTheLord

RE: Beyblade Burst Aura (Allowing Character And Beyblade Requests) - EarthHelios - Nov. 19, 2020

(Nov. 19, 2020  5:01 PM)BladerUmarWBO Wrote: the dragon of light

no one owns it and legends say it was fighting the dragon of dark for 50,000 years
it can become and bey and battle and destroy whoever tresspasses its cave

and the dragon of dark will break the tresspasser sbey and soul and he the tresspasser will fall into eternal darkness who ever tresspasses its cave

etc i dont want to spoil everything
EarthHelios
TakaraTheLord

noice

RE: Beyblade Burst Aura (Allowing Character And Beyblade Requests) - TakaraTheLord - Nov. 19, 2020

(Nov. 19, 2020  5:01 PM)BladerUmarWBO Wrote: the dragon of light

no one owns it and legends say it was fighting the dragon of dark for 50,000 years
it can become and bey and battle and destroy whoever tresspasses its cave

and the dragon of dark will break the tresspasser sbey and soul and he the tresspasser will fall into eternal darkness who ever tresspasses its cave

etc i dont want to spoil everything
EarthHelios
TakaraTheLord

Can I say that your writing is so terrible that I can barely understand anything?

RE: Beyblade Burst Aura (Allowing Character And Beyblade Requests) - EarthHelios - Nov. 19, 2020

(Nov. 19, 2020  5:08 PM)TakaraTheLord Wrote:
(Nov. 19, 2020  5:01 PM)BladerUmarWBO Wrote: the dragon of light

no one owns it and legends say it was fighting the dragon of dark for 50,000 years
it can become and bey and battle and destroy whoever tresspasses its cave

and the dragon of dark will break the tresspasser sbey and soul and he the tresspasser will fall into eternal darkness who ever tresspasses its cave

etc i dont want to spoil everything
EarthHelios
TakaraTheLord

Can I say that your writing is so terrible that I can barely understand anything?

oof harsh

RE: Beyblade Burst Aura (Allowing Character And Beyblade Requests) - BladerUmar - Nov. 19, 2020

(Nov. 19, 2020  5:08 PM)TakaraTheLord Wrote:
(Nov. 19, 2020  5:01 PM)BladerUmarWBO Wrote: the dragon of light

no one owns it and legends say it was fighting the dragon of dark for 50,000 years
it can become and bey and battle and destroy whoever tresspasses its cave

and the dragon of dark will break the tresspasser sbey and soul and he the tresspasser will fall into eternal darkness who ever tresspasses its cave

etc i dont want to spoil everything
EarthHelios
TakaraTheLord

Can I say that your writing is so terrible that I can barely understand anything?
yup you can but the writing doesnt matter more than the stories and curently my stories are more interesting 
even EarthHelios thinks that

RE: Beyblade Burst Aura (Allowing Character And Beyblade Requests) - EarthHelios - Nov. 19, 2020

When I do my fanfic I dont write it because the emotions dont run deep in my heart. So instead its like a predict thingy

RE: Beyblade Burst Aura (Allowing Character And Beyblade Requests) - SacredXcalibur - Nov. 19, 2020

No offense but you can't keep claiming you have one of the best fanfics out there. Nobody does that. Its pretty plot poor and characterization poor. Interesting Characters matter even more then an Interesting plot.

RE: Beyblade Burst Aura (Allowing Character And Beyblade Requests) - BladerUmar - Nov. 19, 2020

(Nov. 19, 2020  6:28 PM)SacredXcalibur Wrote: No offense but you can't keep claiming you have one of the best fanfics out there. Nobody does that. Its pretty plot poor and characterization poor. Interesting Characters matter even more then an Interesting  plot.

i have intresting character 6 custom characters

RE: Beyblade Burst Aura (Allowing Character And Beyblade Requests) - SacredXcalibur - Nov. 19, 2020

(Nov. 19, 2020  6:30 PM)BladerUmarWBO Wrote:
(Nov. 19, 2020  6:28 PM)SacredXcalibur Wrote: No offense but you can't keep claiming you have one of the best fanfics out there. Nobody does that. Its pretty plot poor and characterization poor. Interesting Characters matter even more then an Interesting  plot.

i have intresting character 6 custom characters

Being an O.C. doesn't equal being interesting. Compared to other protagonists they don't stand out. Every protagonist in every beyblade story has been I LOVE BEYBLADE DADADADADA. Gingka and Aiga are different as they are both Literally beyblade saitama. The point is your protagonists need to be different. Don't make'em beytalk 24/7.
In my opinion thats where most fanfics fail. So please try having character development.

RE: Beyblade Burst Aura - BladerUmar - Nov. 20, 2020

Episode 5: Dragonis VS Dragon!

Kei: Dante get up!
Dante: What... Zzz....
Kei: Its time for breakfast
Dante: Can I Eat Later..
Kei: Fine I'll Go!
Dante: Wait!!
Kei: You're up finally!
Kei and Dante go to the cafeteria 
Kei: I'm eating uh churros!
Dante: I'm eating everything
Fubuki: Time for team rankings!
Both: Right when we start eating
Fubuki: The Beigoma Academy Solo Rankings (bp usally means bey points but here bp means beigoma points)
1. Fubuki Sumiye 5908 BP
2. Suoh Genji 5907 BP
3. Toko Aoi 5700 BP
4. Kei Asaki 23 BP
5. Dante Asaki 21
Kei: My ranking is so low!
Dante: Mine too!
Fubuki: Then do battles
Dante: Kei lets do 1 battle and then i'm going to sleep
Kei: Yes!
Both: 3 2 1 Go Shoot!
Kei: Dragonis! Zone Shoot!
Dante: Counter!!
Both beys clash
Kei: AHHHHHHH!
Dante: Dragon! 
Dragon is knocked into the craters!
Dante: Speed up! Dragon! AHHHHHH!
[Image: Aura-Dragon-Avatar.png]
Kei: What?!
Dante: Go in for the attack!
Kei: Dragonis! Now! Aura zone shield! 
[Image: Aura-Dragonis-Avatar.png]
Both beys clash!
Dragonis bursts but a second after dragon bursts!
Fubuki: Dante wins!
Dante: Yes!
Fubuki: Now Dante has 120 BP!
Kei: No!!!!1
Fubuki: You can get more Bp later Kei!
Kei: I can! Dante let's go
Fubuki: What?!
Kei: Seriously! You're sleeping!
Dante: Zzz....
Kei picks Dante up and drops him when they get to their rooms
Kei: You know you're so heavy!
Dante: Zzz...
Kei smiles
Kei: I guess i'll sleep too
End Of Episode 5