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RE: Beyblade Burst Legends - Golden Freddy - Oct. 14, 2020 (Oct. 13, 2020 3:45 PM)Eclipse Force Wrote: Shun Kurenai needs to be nerfed I mean my character can make a duplicate of himself. And also isn’t limited by the human body cause this man a projection by the beyblade itself. So if the beyblade wants the blader to do something. The blader will do it. RE: Beyblade Burst Legends - kai edits - Oct. 14, 2020 I dont know why but shun kurenai is pretty balance since she has a time limit. Well maiden possession increase maiden's power it takes a major damage to shun's body RE: Beyblade Burst Legends - Eclipse Force - Oct. 14, 2020 (Oct. 14, 2020 1:23 AM)Golden Freddy Wrote:(Oct. 13, 2020 3:45 PM)Eclipse Force Wrote: Shun Kurenai needs to be nerfed Also needs to be nerfed. RE: Beyblade Burst Legends - Golden Freddy - Oct. 14, 2020 (Oct. 14, 2020 1:25 AM)Eclipse Force Wrote:(Oct. 14, 2020 1:23 AM)Golden Freddy Wrote: I mean my character can make a duplicate of himself. And also isn’t limited by the human body cause this man a projection by the beyblade itself. So if the beyblade wants the blader to do something. The blader will do it. How does it need to be nerfed. The blader really isn’t there. Cassidy is a projection (Oct. 14, 2020 1:25 AM)kai edits Wrote: I dont know why but shun kurenai is pretty balance since she has a time limit. Well maiden possession increase maiden's power it takes a major damage to shun's body Yeah she is. Idk why he said my bey is op RE: Beyblade Burst Legends - kai edits - Oct. 14, 2020 Maiden should be nerfed since it has a mind of its own instead of the blader have control over it. RE: Beyblade Burst Legends - Golden Freddy - Oct. 14, 2020 (Oct. 14, 2020 1:27 AM)kai edits Wrote: Maiden should be nerfed since it has a mind of its own instead of the blader have control over it. I mean other bladers beys have a mind of their own. Valkyrie and spriggan do and it’s shown in god. RE: Beyblade Burst Legends - 6Jupiter5 - Oct. 14, 2020 (Oct. 14, 2020 1:29 AM)Golden Freddy Wrote:(Oct. 14, 2020 1:27 AM)kai edits Wrote: Maiden should be nerfed since it has a mind of its own instead of the blader have control over it. Not really Valkyrie, but Spriggan most definitely RE: Beyblade Burst Legends - kai edits - Oct. 14, 2020 (Oct. 14, 2020 1:29 AM)Golden Freddy Wrote:(Oct. 14, 2020 1:27 AM)kai edits Wrote: Maiden should be nerfed since it has a mind of its own instead of the blader have control over it. I mean like it's self aware RE: Beyblade Burst Legends - Golden Freddy - Oct. 14, 2020 (Oct. 14, 2020 1:30 AM)kai edits Wrote:(Oct. 14, 2020 1:29 AM)Golden Freddy Wrote: I mean other bladers beys have a mind of their own. Valkyrie and spriggan do and it’s shown in god. Yeah spriggan requiem was in god. It even changed its form to Shu RE: Beyblade Burst Legends - SacredXcalibur - Oct. 14, 2020 ANNOUNCEMENT there are 3 rounds of the contest. 2 winners were just picked and I will Announce them shortly. Round 2 starts tomorrow The round 1 winners are: kai edits and Leone81506 edit: it doesn't let me mention kai edits episode 1a is out! The link is in the first post. BuilderROB rate my fanfic so far RE: Beyblade Burst Legends - Golden Freddy - Oct. 14, 2020 (Oct. 14, 2020 4:46 PM)SacredXcalibur Wrote: ANNOUNCEMENT Rip gg RE: Beyblade Burst Legends - SacredXcalibur - Oct. 15, 2020 I was reading one of snoc's old fanfics and there was a link that took me back here lol Episode 1b is out everyone! check the first post for the Link! BuilderROB can you rate my fanfic so far? and base length on length of the episodes. RE: Beyblade Burst Legends - BuilderROB - Oct. 15, 2020 (Oct. 15, 2020 6:08 PM)SacredXcalibur Wrote: BuilderROB can you rate my fanfic so far? and base length on length of the episodes. Ok then, as you requested: Grammar: 4/5 Story: 4/5 Characters: 4/5 Dialogue: 5/5 Length: 4/5 Total Score: 21/25 So while this story is good, it has some issues. First off, the grammar has some issues. For the most part it’s fine, but I notice a lot of minor grammatical issues that bump the grammar down a point for me. The story is good so far, and I hope it gets better from here. The characters are pretty good, and the dialogue is great (not counting grammar here). The length is decent, although they could be a bit longer. RE: Beyblade Burst Legends - SacredXcalibur - Oct. 15, 2020 (Oct. 15, 2020 7:53 PM)BuilderROB Wrote:(Oct. 15, 2020 6:08 PM)SacredXcalibur Wrote: BuilderROB can you rate my fanfic so far? and base length on length of the episodes. Thanks for the feedback! RE: Beyblade Burst Legends - SacredXcalibur - Oct. 17, 2020 Episode 2a is out! RE: Beyblade Burst Legends - Golden Freddy - Oct. 17, 2020 (Oct. 17, 2020 4:30 AM)SacredXcalibur Wrote: Episode 2a is out! Bet say less lol RE: Beyblade Burst Legends - SacredXcalibur - Oct. 17, 2020 (Oct. 17, 2020 1:06 PM)Golden Freddy Wrote:(Oct. 17, 2020 4:30 AM)SacredXcalibur Wrote: Episode 2a is out! what? RE: Beyblade Burst Legends - Golden Freddy - Oct. 17, 2020 (Oct. 17, 2020 6:01 PM)SacredXcalibur Wrote:(Oct. 17, 2020 1:06 PM)Golden Freddy Wrote: Bet say less lol You don’t understand what that means? Do you RE: Beyblade Burst Legends - SacredXcalibur - Oct. 26, 2020 Sorry I haven't been creating episodes lately I was just really busy and the now that i'm free I can start writing episodes again. Episode 2b is out! RE: Beyblade Burst Legends - Golden Freddy - Oct. 26, 2020 (Oct. 26, 2020 2:17 AM)SacredXcalibur Wrote: Sorry I haven't been creating episodes lately I was just really busy and the now that i'm free I can start writing episodes again. You don’t have to apologize RE: Beyblade Burst Legends - SacredXcalibur - Oct. 26, 2020 some character bios Name: Eijirou Takahashi Gender: Male Sexuality: Straight Height: 5ft 8 Age: 14 Eye color: Green Hair color: Dark Green with a red streak Hair length: 2 inches on the top and 2 inches on the side and 4 inches long Hairstyle: Neatly combed back. Personality: Energetic, enthusiastic, not calm. Favorite color: Green Name: Tsukiya Aizawa Gender: Male Sexuality: Straight Height: 5ft 10 Age: 14 Eye color: Hazel Hair color: Black Hair length: 4 inches on the top and sides and 7 inches long. Hairstyle: Shaggy messy hair with a few strands on his forehead. Personality: Calm, Supportive, Overconfident. Favorite color: Black Name: Aiko Suzuki Gender: Female Sexuality: Straight Height: 5ft 6 Age: 16 Eye color: Blue Hair color: ginger Hair length: 6 inches on the top and 9 inches long and 4 inches on the sides Hairstyle: Neatly tied back into a ponytail. Personality: Has a temper, Kind, Strong Leader. Favorite color: Purple Episodes 3a and 3b are out! RE: Beyblade Burst Legends - Golden Freddy - Oct. 26, 2020 I’m excited to see who wins the contest RE: Beyblade Burst Legends - SacredXcalibur - Oct. 27, 2020 (Oct. 26, 2020 10:03 PM)Golden Freddy Wrote: I’m excited to see who wins the contest What? didn't I already announce the winners? If you're talking about round 2 you won because you were the only other submission RE: Beyblade Burst Legends - LEOBBG - Oct. 27, 2020 here dude RE: Beyblade Burst Legends - SacredXcalibur - Oct. 27, 2020 (Oct. 27, 2020 1:01 AM)LEOBBG Wrote: here dude I like It! its Great! |