RE: Beyblade Burst: Ugen’s Story - FreeFafnir64 - Dec. 15, 2019
Interesting. I wonder what'll happen next... Still great though!
Interesting! I wonder what'll happen next... Still great though!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Ugen’s Story - Orbit - Dec. 15, 2019
Interesting...
RE: Beyblade Burst: Ugen’s Story - BuilderROB - Dec. 15, 2019
(Dec. 15, 2019 9:08 PM)FreeFafnir64 Wrote: Interesting. I wonder what'll happen next... Still great though!
Interesting! I wonder what'll happen next... Still great though!
I’ve been working on the next chapter! I’ll have it put in a couple days!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Ugen’s Story - AshPhoenix - Dec. 15, 2019
(Dec. 02, 2019 3:47 AM)BuilderROB Wrote: Beyblade Burst: Ugen’s Story
Context: This story takes place around the same time as the first season of Beyblade Burst. This also means that this takes place during the dual layer era. Ugen is a 11 year old male who, at the time of the first chapter, had been blading for six months. His personality is a smart one, although not to the point where you would consider him nerdy. He usually Is very confident no matter who he faces in a battle. He usually likes to try and pull off new launch angles as well as moves and pushes the limits. His bey is Urgent Ursa, a left spin attack type. Follow Ugen and his beyblade, Urgent Ursa, for their 51 chapter story.
The Story (Chapters 1-51)
Chapter 1: The Beginning! Urgent Ursa!
The Beginning! Urgent Ursa!
“Three!...Two!...One!...Go shoot!” Everyone in the room says in unison. The two beys are launched.
“You can do this Ursa!” Ugen cries out to Ursa. Ursa rushes towards its opponent to strike.
“Gaia! Burst it!” Gabe cries to Gaia. Gaia bursts Ursa in an effortless hit. Ugen is shocked. He practiced for almost two hours the previous day to get stronger.
“It’ll take more than raw power to defeat me.” Gabe instructs Ugen.
“What do you mean?” Ugen questions Gabe.
“It seems you don’t seem to know about the fundamentals of Blading.”
“What? I’ve never heard of that.”
“They’re the basics of Beyblading. It includes things such as launch technique, power, and most importantly, the bond you share with your bey. That bond is the most powerful thing when it comes to Beyblading. Without a strong bond, you’ll never become stronger.
Ugen was impressed by what he heard.
“There’s going to be a local tournament held this weekend.” Gabe told Ugen, “I think you should join. With some practice, you could do quite well.” After that, Gabe left. Ugen leaves for home as well.
Once he got home, Ugen practiced in the stadium in his backyard.
“So, we need to work on our bond. Maybe it’s time to try a new technique...” With that, Ugen practiced a new technique until dinner.
“I haven’t seen you practice for that long before.” His mom brought up during dinner.
“I’d like to sign up for the local tournament tomorrow, so I’ve been practicing a new technique. I think I’ve got it down. Can I practice it a little more after dinner?” Ugen asked his Mom.
“Sure, just make sure to get to bed soon after. You want to be at full power for your tournament tomorrow!”
After dinner, Ugen practiced for about an hour. He noticed that Ursa was speeding all over the place.
“Ursa, you’re out of control. At this rate, we’re going to be eliminated within the first round. What are you trying to do?
Looking at Ursa, the words formed in his head, as if Ursa was talking to him telepathically. Ugen knew what he had to do.
“Three!...Two!...One!...Go Shoot!” Ursa was still moving all over the place, but this time with purpose. Ursa hit the walls and eventually gained a massive increase in power. After that, he knew his new move was ready. He went to bed, confident he was going to be able to pull of his new technique.
The next morning, he was driven to the local tournament. He registered for it and waited to battle. He noticed some people from his school registered for the tournament, including Gabe. Soon after, he saw who he was going up against: Saoki Nioko. He had yet to see what his bey looked like though.
When it came time, he stood behind a door that would open automatically when it came time for his debut.
“Ok, boys and girls! Time for the next match in the local tournament! To the left is the descendant of a samurai and a well known Blader in the local area: Saoki Nioko!!” The reporter says as the crowd cheers when Saoki comes onstage.
“To the left is this blader’s first recorded match in a tournament! Whether he has what it takes to beat Saoki or not will be decided: Ugen Senoku!!” Ugen is also greeted with crowd cheers when he walks onstage.
“So it looks like your journey ends here!” Saoki tells Ugen right before he shows him his bey.
“Meet the bey that will end your journey: Shuriken!” Ugen inspects Shuriken. From the looks of it, it looks like a defense type. It looked like an eight bladed shuriken, hence its name. It looked strong, for sure, but that didn’t discourage Ugen.
“Meet my bey: Ursa! Your win streak is going down!”
“Weak smack talk, kid,” Saoki tells Ugen, “You’re going down with a score of 2-0.” Ugen starts shaking, affected by the smack talk.
“I’ll win, you’ll see!”
“You do that.”
“Ready? Set!” The referee says.
“Three!...Two!...One!...Go Shoot!” Ugen launches with his new technique.
“Looks like Ursa is all over the place!” The reporter observes. Ugen knew at that moment he failed the launch. Shuriken heads straight to the center. Ursa goes in to strike, but Shuriken is unfazed by every hit, which sends Ursa near the edge of the stadium each time.
“Now Shuriken! Shuriken Throw!” When Ursa striked, Shuriken pushed Ursa to the edge of the stadium, throwing Ursa into the air.
“It’s already over,” Saoki states. Ursa flys out of the stadium and hits the ground.
“A ring out finish! One point goes to Saoki.,” the referee calls.
“What? It wasn’t a burst finish?” Saoki asks.
“Looks like I still have a chance,” Ugen states.
To be continued in chapter 2: Holding on! Dual Strike!
Chapter 2: Holding On! Dual Strike!
Chapter 2: Holding On! Dual Strike!
“You got lucky that last time,” Saoki told Ugen, “Next round you’re going down, even if it isn’t a burst finish.”
I’ve got to stay focused this time,
Ugen thought,
It’s time to pull of my new launch right this time.
“Ready? Set!” The referee called.
“Three!...Two!...One!...Go Shoot!” Ugen had jerked his launcher to the left and launched.
“Ursa is coming out of the gate with great speeds! Looks like we’re in for an exciting round, folks!” the reporter stated. Ugen has pulled off his launch this time, better than even at practice at home.
“If you think better speed will beat me, you’ve got another thing coming!” Saoki said. Ursa began striking Shuriken, but like last time, it was unfazed by the hits, sending Ursa near the edge of the stadium.
“It’s a repeat of last round! Looks like this could have the same outcome as last time!” The reporter stated. As he said that, Ursa was thrown near the edge of the stadium, but this time took one click.
“Now, Shuriken! Shuriken Throw! When Ursa hit Shuriken, Shuriken pushed Ursa towards the edge of the stadium and threw it. Instead of being thrown out of the stadium, it hit the stadium wall, causing it to take another click.
“What!? It didn’t KO!?” Saoki was surprised.
“Go, Ursa! Dual Strike!” Ursa rushed towards Shuriken.
“Ursa has become incredibly fast and-wait, it’s balanced!?” Even the reporter was shocked by what he was seeing. An attack type was actually balanced.
“It’s not over yet! Hang in there, Shuriken!” Shuriken stayed in the middle, holding its ground. Ursa hit Shuriken once with its spear tip, then hit it with the other spear tip on the other side, causing Shuriken to burst instantly.
“Sh-Shuriken!”
“A burst finish, two points go to Ugen. Ugen is the winner!” The referee calls.
“Incredible, folks! What we just witnessed here today is insane! The Blader with no name before coming to this tournament has given himself a name now!” The reporter said.
“We did it, Ursa!” Ugen said. He was excited he was able to pull off his new move.
“Not bad, kid,” Saoki told Ugen, “That Dual Strike of yours is one powerful move. Say, I go to your school, don’t I? Wanna battle again sometime?”
“Sure!” Ugen replied. With that, he left the stage, with one win over his belt.
That Monday, people were all over Ugen.
“You’re so cool, Ugen!”
“That Dual Strike move you pulled off was amazing!”
“How did you get so good in such little time?”
After school, Ugen hid until people left. Then he went to train in the stadium he had battled Gabe in a few days earlier.
“Saw your match Saturday,” Gabe said as he entered the room, “You’ve gotten stronger in just a few days.”
“Those fundamentals are coming in handy,” Ugen said.
“I’m creating a Beyblade team, called Rideout, but for it to be an official team, I need five members. We’ve got two members, including me. Would you like to join?” Ugen thought about this for a few moments.
“Sure, why not?” Ugen replied. Ugen wanted to get stronger and thought the best way was to train with a team.
“So, when do we start training?” Ugen asked.
“Right now, if you’d like. We have our own room other than this one to train in though.” Gabe replied. With that, they went into the other room, which was upstairs in the school.
As they were training, Ugen asked, “Where’s the third member?”
“He...doesn’t like to train with the team.” Gabe explained, “He likes to train alone.” They continued to train, but every round ended with a burst for Gabe.
“Why haven’t I at least stopped being burst?” Ugen asked.
“You’ve gotten stronger, for sure, but you’ve still got a long way to go to beat me. You’ll have to grow stronger over time. That Dual Strike of yours is strong, but you could make in stronger if you could activate the move earlier in the battle,” with that, Ugen got an idea.
“Three!...Two!...One!...Go Shoot!” Ugen pulled off his launch again, but this time with more force when he jerked his hand. Ursa was speeding all over the stadium, faster than before. It hit the stadium twice, taking two click when it hit the stadium.
“Ursa! Dual Strike!” Ursa rushed towards Gaia at a incredible speed.
“Gaia! Swing Launch!” Ursa hit Gaia, resulting in Ursa being KO’ed.
“I still lost.” Ugen stated.
“But you did a lot better than before. Ursa didn’t burst.”
“I guess you have a point,” Ugen agreed.
“Alright, I’ll catch you tomorrow,” Gabe said, then left. Ugen left soon after.
The next Saturday, Ugen was driven to the local tournament for round 2. He had done some training before then to perfect his improved Dual Strike. He knew he was ready for whoever his next opponent was, and he knew he was going to crush his next opponent.
To be continued in Chapter 3: Insane Endurance! Hurricane Hercules!
Chapter 3: Incredible Endurance! Hurricane Hercules!
Chapter 3: Incredible Endurance! Hurricane Hercules!
It was almost time to head out onstage. Ugen has no idea who was facing when he walked out of that hallway. All he knew was that he was going to win.
“Ok, boys and girls! It’s time for the second round of the tournament to begin! Our debut match is going to be an exciting one! To the left is a Blader who in his free time does archery! It’s shown in his skill around this area! Give it up for Hoeinn Oh!” Hanami calls as Hoeinn comes onstage and the crowd cheers, louder than when Saoki had come on stage the week before, Ugen observes. He also observes how big Hoeinn is for his age. He looked a good foot taller than he was. He wasn’t skinny, either. He was muscular as well, kind of like someone who is serious into archery.
“To the right is a Blader that has only one recorded match! He managed to beat Saoki so his skill isn’t of an ameteur’s! Give it up for Ugen Senoku!” Ugen walks onstage. This time the crowd cheers louder than last match, he observed.
“I saw your match last week. Don’t even think about getting overconfident just because you won against a skilled Blader. You’re in for a loss to Hurricane Hercules!” Hoinn showed off Hurricane Hercules. Ugen looks at it and observes that it looks like a lion in the center. The outer part of the layer on the top and bottom have what looked like bows. It also seemed to be the place where its weight was concentrated on in Hercules. He had doubt that this bey must have serious stamina.
“Your bey will be finished with dual strike!” Ugen announces.
“Like your move will do anything against Hercules. Your move isn’t even close to powerful enough to faze Hercules.”
“We’ll see about that,” Ugen says.
“Ready? Set!” The referee calls.
“Three!...Two!...One!...Go Shoot!” Ugen pulls off his launch with more power. Ursa bangs against the walls several times. Hercules heads straight for the center at a fast speed.
“Looks like a failed launch to me,” Hoeinn observes. Ursa clicks twice.
“Ursa! Dual Strike!” Ugen yells. Ursa Rushes towards Hercules at a fast speed.
“Hercules! Hurricane Launch!” Hoeinn yells. Hercules creates a powerful tornado all around it, causing Ursa to be blown to the edge each time it tries to hit Hercules. Within five attempts, Ursa ran out of stamina.
“A spin finish! One point goes to Hoeinn!” The referee calls. The crowd cheers loudly. Ugen was surprised by how powerful the tornado Hercules created was. How was he going to get through such a powerful move? Ugen kept thinking for the few moments he had.
“Your move was pathetic. You’ll never be able to beat me!” Hoeinn yells. Ugen ignored him and kept thinking. He realized soon after what to do.
“Ready? Set!”
“Three!...Two!...One!...Go Shoot!” Ugen pulls off his launch again, but at a steeper angle. Hercules went straight to the center. Ursa right off the bat hit into the walls twice, causing Ursa to click twice.
“Ursa! Dual Strike!” Ursa rushes towards Hercules.
“Hercules! Hurricane Lau-“ Ursa smashes into the lower part of Hercules, sending Hercules flying and hitting the ground.
“A Knockout! One point goes to Ugen!” The crowd goes wild, amazed at how quick he beat Hoeinn.
“H-How’d you do that!?” Hoeinn was astounded and confused that he was beaten by someone that he had just beat the previous round.
“Guess you’ll have to observe that next time when I destroy you,” Ugen said.
“You can’t pull off that move again to beat me now! Just watch!” Hoeinn was confident he knew what to do next match. Ugen knew he was going to have to try something new this time around if Hercules did something different, so he had to be ready for whatever came at him.
“Ready? Set!”
“Three!...Two!...One!...Go Shoot!” Ugen pulled off the same launch from last round. Ursa smashes into the walls twice. Hercules has head straight for the center.
“Ursa! Dual Strike!” Ursa head straight for Hercules and is about to hit it when Hercules tilts and rushes toward the outer part of the stadium.
“You can’t get a good hit on us if we power up our move! Hercules! Mobile Hurricane Launch!” Hercules creates its powerful tornado around it while moving around the stadium, then heads straight for the center.
“It’s over for you,” Hoeinn calls.
“It’s not over till’ it’s over!” With that, Ursa hits the stadium and flys across. “Ursa! Flying Dual Strike!” Ursa dives into the center of the tornado, and smashes into Hercules from the top, bursting Hercules upon its double impact.
“A burst finish! Two points go to Ugen! Ugen wins the match with a score of 1-3!” The referee calls. The crowd goes insane, in awe at what they just saw. Hoeinn was dazed. He actually lost. Hoeinn snapped out of it quick, though.
“You’re pretty good, kid. I haven’t seen talent like that for a while.” Hoeinn complimented Ugen.
“Don’t you go to the same school as me? Wanna battle sometime?”
“Sure! I’d like that. Just make sure you know you’re going down next time!” Hoeinn said. With that, they both walked offstage.
That Monday, Ugen actually wasn’t stormed as much as last week, meaning many people seemed to expect this kind of talent from him.
After school he went to his beyblade team to train.
“You’ve really improved, even from last week. You’ve gotten really good at observing your opponents weaknesses.” Gabe said to Ugen.
“I still don’t think it’s enough to beat you yet,” Ugen claimed.
“Let’s see!” With that, they started training.
During training, they heard a knock at the door. Gabe went to get it. Behind the door was Saoki.
“I’d like to join your beyblade team.” Saoki told Gabe.
“I’ve seen you before. You battled Ugen a couple weeks ago. Why do you want to join?” Gabe asked Saoki.
“After seeing Ugen’s match a few days ago, I saw what kind of bladers this team trains. I want to get stronger with the rest of you.”
“Ok, then. Welcome to the team!” Gabe said.
“Saoki! I wanna battle you first!” Ugen said.
“Ok, then, it’s on!” Saoki announced.
“Ready? Set!”
“Three!...Two!...One!...Go Shoot!”
To be continued in chapter 4: Insane Power! Wailing Whirlwind!
Chapter 4: Insane Power! Wailing Whirlwind!
Chapter 4: Insane Power! Wailing Whirlwind!
“Three!...Two!...One!...Go Shoot!” Shuriken went straight to the center. Gaia slammed into it and burst it.
“Not again!” Saoki had been trying to beat Gabe since Monday. He still hadn’t done it by Friday.
“So, Ugen, you know who you’re going up against tomorrow?” Gabe asked.
“I’m not sure,” Ugen replied.
“I do,” Saoki said, “I saw the matchups a couple days ago. You’re going up against Whintoki.”
“I’ve seen his bey. But he doesn’t go to this school.” Gabe said.
“What about his bey?” Ugen asked.
“His bey is Wailing Whirlwind: A balance type like mine,” Gabe explained, “It has two modes: Attack and defense. The trick is to figure out what mode it’s using.”
“Then I need to practice getting good at countering both types,” Ugen decided. “I’ll battle Saoki first.”
“Let’s go, then.” Saoki said.
“Ready? Set!” Gabe said.
“Three!...Two!...One!...Go Shoot!” Ugen pulled off his steep angle launch. Ursa smashes into the walls twice, the second one sending it flying. Shuriken guarded the middle.
“Ursa! Flying Dual Strike!” Ugen yelled. Ursa smashed into Shuriken with one spear, then the other, bursting Shuriken.
“One hit!?” Saoki was surprised how fast he was defeated.
“Looks like the practice this week payed off,” Ugen said, “You next, Gabe.”
“Let’s go!” Gabe said.
“Ready? Set!” Saoki said.
“Three!...Two!...One!...Go Shoot!” Ugen pulled off a new launch. Ursa went straight for Gaia, which had took the center. Ursa made impact, then Gaia went towards the outer part of the stadium and went in circles around the stadium.
“Now, Ursa! Rush Impact!” Ursa rushed towards Gaia and smashed into it, sending Gaia flying.
“Gaia! Swinging Smash!” Gaia did a swinging fall and smashed into Ursa, bursting Ursa upon impact.
“Not a bad move, but you’ll need to prepare for whatever comes at you. Whirlwind won’t perform like Gaia, so it’s important to do that.” Gabe suggested to Ugen.
“Alright, then, I need to keep battling!” Ugen decided.
“Let’s go then!” Gabe said.
Come Saturday, Ugen had practiced for many hours since Wednesday, at home and at school. It was time for the third round of the local tournament.
“Welcome, beyfans, to the third round of the local tournament! Let’s go ahead and get started with our first match! To the left is a blader that is well known around here and may be one of the best bladers in the area! His talent in music shows in his skill in blading! Give it up for Whintoki Sayoke! Whintoki walked onstage and the crowd went wild with applause.
“Its a shame you have to battle me to advance, because you’re not going anywhere! Your time ends here! Whirlwind and I won’t hold back, so give it everything you got!” Whintoki showed off Whirlwind. As Ugen thought, it looked like a balance type. It seems to have two bulky blades which could work for defense or attack. It also had two large protrusions on the top and bottom that seemed to be targeted towards defense. The bit beast in the center looked like a tornado with eyes.
“I know your tricks, and I’m not falling for them!” Ugen yelled.
“You already have.” Whintoki said. Ugen made sure not to get worked up by smack talk, and so he would not mess up his launch.
“Ready? Set!” The referee said.
“Three!...Two!...One!...Go Shoot!” Ugen pulled off his launch to counter defense, and Whintoki rotates his arm in a large circle, then when his arm came back down, pulled on the string of the launcher hard. Whirlwind went straight to the center. Ursa hit the wall twice.
“Ursa! Dual Strike!” Ugen yelled. Ursa did his dual strike move against Whirlwind, but it had no effect. Ursa continued to use dual strike, but it had no effect.
“Your pathetic attacks won’t have any effect on Whirlwind!” Whintoki told Ugen.
“Now, Ursa! Flying Dual Strike!” Ursa hit a wall, and flew down onto Whirlwind.
“Whirlwind! Wailing Flip!” Ursa smashes into Whirlwind, pulling off Flying Dual Strike. After the second strike, Whirlwind hit the ground and pulled off a flip right above Ursa, then went to the center where Ursa was, making impact with Ursa. Ursa went flying and hit the ground.
“A KO! One point goes to Whintoki!” The referee called. The crowd cheered. Ugen picked up Ursa, and Ursa burst in his hands.
“Looks like you got lucky. If I had gotten another hit on Ursa it would have burst.” Whintoki observed.
I’ve got to make sure I can pull off my next move without nearly bursting, Ugen thought.
To be continued in Chapter 5: Aggressive Attacks! Rush Impact! Dude nice! All that bugged me (blame my ocd not me) is when you introduce both bladers in the beginning you said "on the left" twice other than that flawless
RE: Beyblade Burst: Ugen’s Story - BuilderROB - Dec. 15, 2019
(Dec. 15, 2019 9:58 PM)AshPhoenix Wrote: (Dec. 02, 2019 3:47 AM)BuilderROB Wrote: Beyblade Burst: Ugen’s Story
Context: This story takes place around the same time as the first season of Beyblade Burst. This also means that this takes place during the dual layer era. Ugen is a 11 year old male who, at the time of the first chapter, had been blading for six months. His personality is a smart one, although not to the point where you would consider him nerdy. He usually Is very confident no matter who he faces in a battle. He usually likes to try and pull off new launch angles as well as moves and pushes the limits. His bey is Urgent Ursa, a left spin attack type. Follow Ugen and his beyblade, Urgent Ursa, for their 51 chapter story.
The Story (Chapters 1-51)
Chapter 1: The Beginning! Urgent Ursa!
The Beginning! Urgent Ursa!
“Three!...Two!...One!...Go shoot!” Everyone in the room says in unison. The two beys are launched.
“You can do this Ursa!” Ugen cries out to Ursa. Ursa rushes towards its opponent to strike.
“Gaia! Burst it!” Gabe cries to Gaia. Gaia bursts Ursa in an effortless hit. Ugen is shocked. He practiced for almost two hours the previous day to get stronger.
“It’ll take more than raw power to defeat me.” Gabe instructs Ugen.
“What do you mean?” Ugen questions Gabe.
“It seems you don’t seem to know about the fundamentals of Blading.”
“What? I’ve never heard of that.”
“They’re the basics of Beyblading. It includes things such as launch technique, power, and most importantly, the bond you share with your bey. That bond is the most powerful thing when it comes to Beyblading. Without a strong bond, you’ll never become stronger.
Ugen was impressed by what he heard.
“There’s going to be a local tournament held this weekend.” Gabe told Ugen, “I think you should join. With some practice, you could do quite well.” After that, Gabe left. Ugen leaves for home as well.
Once he got home, Ugen practiced in the stadium in his backyard.
“So, we need to work on our bond. Maybe it’s time to try a new technique...” With that, Ugen practiced a new technique until dinner.
“I haven’t seen you practice for that long before.” His mom brought up during dinner.
“I’d like to sign up for the local tournament tomorrow, so I’ve been practicing a new technique. I think I’ve got it down. Can I practice it a little more after dinner?” Ugen asked his Mom.
“Sure, just make sure to get to bed soon after. You want to be at full power for your tournament tomorrow!”
After dinner, Ugen practiced for about an hour. He noticed that Ursa was speeding all over the place.
“Ursa, you’re out of control. At this rate, we’re going to be eliminated within the first round. What are you trying to do?
Looking at Ursa, the words formed in his head, as if Ursa was talking to him telepathically. Ugen knew what he had to do.
“Three!...Two!...One!...Go Shoot!” Ursa was still moving all over the place, but this time with purpose. Ursa hit the walls and eventually gained a massive increase in power. After that, he knew his new move was ready. He went to bed, confident he was going to be able to pull of his new technique.
The next morning, he was driven to the local tournament. He registered for it and waited to battle. He noticed some people from his school registered for the tournament, including Gabe. Soon after, he saw who he was going up against: Saoki Nioko. He had yet to see what his bey looked like though.
When it came time, he stood behind a door that would open automatically when it came time for his debut.
“Ok, boys and girls! Time for the next match in the local tournament! To the left is the descendant of a samurai and a well known Blader in the local area: Saoki Nioko!!” The reporter says as the crowd cheers when Saoki comes onstage.
“To the left is this blader’s first recorded match in a tournament! Whether he has what it takes to beat Saoki or not will be decided: Ugen Senoku!!” Ugen is also greeted with crowd cheers when he walks onstage.
“So it looks like your journey ends here!” Saoki tells Ugen right before he shows him his bey.
“Meet the bey that will end your journey: Shuriken!” Ugen inspects Shuriken. From the looks of it, it looks like a defense type. It looked like an eight bladed shuriken, hence its name. It looked strong, for sure, but that didn’t discourage Ugen.
“Meet my bey: Ursa! Your win streak is going down!”
“Weak smack talk, kid,” Saoki tells Ugen, “You’re going down with a score of 2-0.” Ugen starts shaking, affected by the smack talk.
“I’ll win, you’ll see!”
“You do that.”
“Ready? Set!” The referee says.
“Three!...Two!...One!...Go Shoot!” Ugen launches with his new technique.
“Looks like Ursa is all over the place!” The reporter observes. Ugen knew at that moment he failed the launch. Shuriken heads straight to the center. Ursa goes in to strike, but Shuriken is unfazed by every hit, which sends Ursa near the edge of the stadium each time.
“Now Shuriken! Shuriken Throw!” When Ursa striked, Shuriken pushed Ursa to the edge of the stadium, throwing Ursa into the air.
“It’s already over,” Saoki states. Ursa flys out of the stadium and hits the ground.
“A ring out finish! One point goes to Saoki.,” the referee calls.
“What? It wasn’t a burst finish?” Saoki asks.
“Looks like I still have a chance,” Ugen states.
To be continued in chapter 2: Holding on! Dual Strike!
Chapter 2: Holding On! Dual Strike!
Chapter 2: Holding On! Dual Strike!
“You got lucky that last time,” Saoki told Ugen, “Next round you’re going down, even if it isn’t a burst finish.”
I’ve got to stay focused this time,
Ugen thought,
It’s time to pull of my new launch right this time.
“Ready? Set!” The referee called.
“Three!...Two!...One!...Go Shoot!” Ugen had jerked his launcher to the left and launched.
“Ursa is coming out of the gate with great speeds! Looks like we’re in for an exciting round, folks!” the reporter stated. Ugen has pulled off his launch this time, better than even at practice at home.
“If you think better speed will beat me, you’ve got another thing coming!” Saoki said. Ursa began striking Shuriken, but like last time, it was unfazed by the hits, sending Ursa near the edge of the stadium.
“It’s a repeat of last round! Looks like this could have the same outcome as last time!” The reporter stated. As he said that, Ursa was thrown near the edge of the stadium, but this time took one click.
“Now, Shuriken! Shuriken Throw! When Ursa hit Shuriken, Shuriken pushed Ursa towards the edge of the stadium and threw it. Instead of being thrown out of the stadium, it hit the stadium wall, causing it to take another click.
“What!? It didn’t KO!?” Saoki was surprised.
“Go, Ursa! Dual Strike!” Ursa rushed towards Shuriken.
“Ursa has become incredibly fast and-wait, it’s balanced!?” Even the reporter was shocked by what he was seeing. An attack type was actually balanced.
“It’s not over yet! Hang in there, Shuriken!” Shuriken stayed in the middle, holding its ground. Ursa hit Shuriken once with its spear tip, then hit it with the other spear tip on the other side, causing Shuriken to burst instantly.
“Sh-Shuriken!”
“A burst finish, two points go to Ugen. Ugen is the winner!” The referee calls.
“Incredible, folks! What we just witnessed here today is insane! The Blader with no name before coming to this tournament has given himself a name now!” The reporter said.
“We did it, Ursa!” Ugen said. He was excited he was able to pull off his new move.
“Not bad, kid,” Saoki told Ugen, “That Dual Strike of yours is one powerful move. Say, I go to your school, don’t I? Wanna battle again sometime?”
“Sure!” Ugen replied. With that, he left the stage, with one win over his belt.
That Monday, people were all over Ugen.
“You’re so cool, Ugen!”
“That Dual Strike move you pulled off was amazing!”
“How did you get so good in such little time?”
After school, Ugen hid until people left. Then he went to train in the stadium he had battled Gabe in a few days earlier.
“Saw your match Saturday,” Gabe said as he entered the room, “You’ve gotten stronger in just a few days.”
“Those fundamentals are coming in handy,” Ugen said.
“I’m creating a Beyblade team, called Rideout, but for it to be an official team, I need five members. We’ve got two members, including me. Would you like to join?” Ugen thought about this for a few moments.
“Sure, why not?” Ugen replied. Ugen wanted to get stronger and thought the best way was to train with a team.
“So, when do we start training?” Ugen asked.
“Right now, if you’d like. We have our own room other than this one to train in though.” Gabe replied. With that, they went into the other room, which was upstairs in the school.
As they were training, Ugen asked, “Where’s the third member?”
“He...doesn’t like to train with the team.” Gabe explained, “He likes to train alone.” They continued to train, but every round ended with a burst for Gabe.
“Why haven’t I at least stopped being burst?” Ugen asked.
“You’ve gotten stronger, for sure, but you’ve still got a long way to go to beat me. You’ll have to grow stronger over time. That Dual Strike of yours is strong, but you could make in stronger if you could activate the move earlier in the battle,” with that, Ugen got an idea.
“Three!...Two!...One!...Go Shoot!” Ugen pulled off his launch again, but this time with more force when he jerked his hand. Ursa was speeding all over the stadium, faster than before. It hit the stadium twice, taking two click when it hit the stadium.
“Ursa! Dual Strike!” Ursa rushed towards Gaia at a incredible speed.
“Gaia! Swing Launch!” Ursa hit Gaia, resulting in Ursa being KO’ed.
“I still lost.” Ugen stated.
“But you did a lot better than before. Ursa didn’t burst.”
“I guess you have a point,” Ugen agreed.
“Alright, I’ll catch you tomorrow,” Gabe said, then left. Ugen left soon after.
The next Saturday, Ugen was driven to the local tournament for round 2. He had done some training before then to perfect his improved Dual Strike. He knew he was ready for whoever his next opponent was, and he knew he was going to crush his next opponent.
To be continued in Chapter 3: Insane Endurance! Hurricane Hercules!
Chapter 3: Incredible Endurance! Hurricane Hercules!
Chapter 3: Incredible Endurance! Hurricane Hercules!
It was almost time to head out onstage. Ugen has no idea who was facing when he walked out of that hallway. All he knew was that he was going to win.
“Ok, boys and girls! It’s time for the second round of the tournament to begin! Our debut match is going to be an exciting one! To the left is a Blader who in his free time does archery! It’s shown in his skill around this area! Give it up for Hoeinn Oh!” Hanami calls as Hoeinn comes onstage and the crowd cheers, louder than when Saoki had come on stage the week before, Ugen observes. He also observes how big Hoeinn is for his age. He looked a good foot taller than he was. He wasn’t skinny, either. He was muscular as well, kind of like someone who is serious into archery.
“To the right is a Blader that has only one recorded match! He managed to beat Saoki so his skill isn’t of an ameteur’s! Give it up for Ugen Senoku!” Ugen walks onstage. This time the crowd cheers louder than last match, he observed.
“I saw your match last week. Don’t even think about getting overconfident just because you won against a skilled Blader. You’re in for a loss to Hurricane Hercules!” Hoinn showed off Hurricane Hercules. Ugen looks at it and observes that it looks like a lion in the center. The outer part of the layer on the top and bottom have what looked like bows. It also seemed to be the place where its weight was concentrated on in Hercules. He had doubt that this bey must have serious stamina.
“Your bey will be finished with dual strike!” Ugen announces.
“Like your move will do anything against Hercules. Your move isn’t even close to powerful enough to faze Hercules.”
“We’ll see about that,” Ugen says.
“Ready? Set!” The referee calls.
“Three!...Two!...One!...Go Shoot!” Ugen pulls off his launch with more power. Ursa bangs against the walls several times. Hercules heads straight for the center at a fast speed.
“Looks like a failed launch to me,” Hoeinn observes. Ursa clicks twice.
“Ursa! Dual Strike!” Ugen yells. Ursa Rushes towards Hercules at a fast speed.
“Hercules! Hurricane Launch!” Hoeinn yells. Hercules creates a powerful tornado all around it, causing Ursa to be blown to the edge each time it tries to hit Hercules. Within five attempts, Ursa ran out of stamina.
“A spin finish! One point goes to Hoeinn!” The referee calls. The crowd cheers loudly. Ugen was surprised by how powerful the tornado Hercules created was. How was he going to get through such a powerful move? Ugen kept thinking for the few moments he had.
“Your move was pathetic. You’ll never be able to beat me!” Hoeinn yells. Ugen ignored him and kept thinking. He realized soon after what to do.
“Ready? Set!”
“Three!...Two!...One!...Go Shoot!” Ugen pulls off his launch again, but at a steeper angle. Hercules went straight to the center. Ursa right off the bat hit into the walls twice, causing Ursa to click twice.
“Ursa! Dual Strike!” Ursa rushes towards Hercules.
“Hercules! Hurricane Lau-“ Ursa smashes into the lower part of Hercules, sending Hercules flying and hitting the ground.
“A Knockout! One point goes to Ugen!” The crowd goes wild, amazed at how quick he beat Hoeinn.
“H-How’d you do that!?” Hoeinn was astounded and confused that he was beaten by someone that he had just beat the previous round.
“Guess you’ll have to observe that next time when I destroy you,” Ugen said.
“You can’t pull off that move again to beat me now! Just watch!” Hoeinn was confident he knew what to do next match. Ugen knew he was going to have to try something new this time around if Hercules did something different, so he had to be ready for whatever came at him.
“Ready? Set!”
“Three!...Two!...One!...Go Shoot!” Ugen pulled off the same launch from last round. Ursa smashes into the walls twice. Hercules has head straight for the center.
“Ursa! Dual Strike!” Ursa head straight for Hercules and is about to hit it when Hercules tilts and rushes toward the outer part of the stadium.
“You can’t get a good hit on us if we power up our move! Hercules! Mobile Hurricane Launch!” Hercules creates its powerful tornado around it while moving around the stadium, then heads straight for the center.
“It’s over for you,” Hoeinn calls.
“It’s not over till’ it’s over!” With that, Ursa hits the stadium and flys across. “Ursa! Flying Dual Strike!” Ursa dives into the center of the tornado, and smashes into Hercules from the top, bursting Hercules upon its double impact.
“A burst finish! Two points go to Ugen! Ugen wins the match with a score of 1-3!” The referee calls. The crowd goes insane, in awe at what they just saw. Hoeinn was dazed. He actually lost. Hoeinn snapped out of it quick, though.
“You’re pretty good, kid. I haven’t seen talent like that for a while.” Hoeinn complimented Ugen.
“Don’t you go to the same school as me? Wanna battle sometime?”
“Sure! I’d like that. Just make sure you know you’re going down next time!” Hoeinn said. With that, they both walked offstage.
That Monday, Ugen actually wasn’t stormed as much as last week, meaning many people seemed to expect this kind of talent from him.
After school he went to his beyblade team to train.
“You’ve really improved, even from last week. You’ve gotten really good at observing your opponents weaknesses.” Gabe said to Ugen.
“I still don’t think it’s enough to beat you yet,” Ugen claimed.
“Let’s see!” With that, they started training.
During training, they heard a knock at the door. Gabe went to get it. Behind the door was Saoki.
“I’d like to join your beyblade team.” Saoki told Gabe.
“I’ve seen you before. You battled Ugen a couple weeks ago. Why do you want to join?” Gabe asked Saoki.
“After seeing Ugen’s match a few days ago, I saw what kind of bladers this team trains. I want to get stronger with the rest of you.”
“Ok, then. Welcome to the team!” Gabe said.
“Saoki! I wanna battle you first!” Ugen said.
“Ok, then, it’s on!” Saoki announced.
“Ready? Set!”
“Three!...Two!...One!...Go Shoot!”
To be continued in chapter 4: Insane Power! Wailing Whirlwind!
Chapter 4: Insane Power! Wailing Whirlwind!
Chapter 4: Insane Power! Wailing Whirlwind!
“Three!...Two!...One!...Go Shoot!” Shuriken went straight to the center. Gaia slammed into it and burst it.
“Not again!” Saoki had been trying to beat Gabe since Monday. He still hadn’t done it by Friday.
“So, Ugen, you know who you’re going up against tomorrow?” Gabe asked.
“I’m not sure,” Ugen replied.
“I do,” Saoki said, “I saw the matchups a couple days ago. You’re going up against Whintoki.”
“I’ve seen his bey. But he doesn’t go to this school.” Gabe said.
“What about his bey?” Ugen asked.
“His bey is Wailing Whirlwind: A balance type like mine,” Gabe explained, “It has two modes: Attack and defense. The trick is to figure out what mode it’s using.”
“Then I need to practice getting good at countering both types,” Ugen decided. “I’ll battle Saoki first.”
“Let’s go, then.” Saoki said.
“Ready? Set!” Gabe said.
“Three!...Two!...One!...Go Shoot!” Ugen pulled off his steep angle launch. Ursa smashes into the walls twice, the second one sending it flying. Shuriken guarded the middle.
“Ursa! Flying Dual Strike!” Ugen yelled. Ursa smashed into Shuriken with one spear, then the other, bursting Shuriken.
“One hit!?” Saoki was surprised how fast he was defeated.
“Looks like the practice this week payed off,” Ugen said, “You next, Gabe.”
“Let’s go!” Gabe said.
“Ready? Set!” Saoki said.
“Three!...Two!...One!...Go Shoot!” Ugen pulled off a new launch. Ursa went straight for Gaia, which had took the center. Ursa made impact, then Gaia went towards the outer part of the stadium and went in circles around the stadium.
“Now, Ursa! Rush Impact!” Ursa rushed towards Gaia and smashed into it, sending Gaia flying.
“Gaia! Swinging Smash!” Gaia did a swinging fall and smashed into Ursa, bursting Ursa upon impact.
“Not a bad move, but you’ll need to prepare for whatever comes at you. Whirlwind won’t perform like Gaia, so it’s important to do that.” Gabe suggested to Ugen.
“Alright, then, I need to keep battling!” Ugen decided.
“Let’s go then!” Gabe said.
Come Saturday, Ugen had practiced for many hours since Wednesday, at home and at school. It was time for the third round of the local tournament.
“Welcome, beyfans, to the third round of the local tournament! Let’s go ahead and get started with our first match! To the left is a blader that is well known around here and may be one of the best bladers in the area! His talent in music shows in his skill in blading! Give it up for Whintoki Sayoke! Whintoki walked onstage and the crowd went wild with applause.
“Its a shame you have to battle me to advance, because you’re not going anywhere! Your time ends here! Whirlwind and I won’t hold back, so give it everything you got!” Whintoki showed off Whirlwind. As Ugen thought, it looked like a balance type. It seems to have two bulky blades which could work for defense or attack. It also had two large protrusions on the top and bottom that seemed to be targeted towards defense. The bit beast in the center looked like a tornado with eyes.
“I know your tricks, and I’m not falling for them!” Ugen yelled.
“You already have.” Whintoki said. Ugen made sure not to get worked up by smack talk, and so he would not mess up his launch.
“Ready? Set!” The referee said.
“Three!...Two!...One!...Go Shoot!” Ugen pulled off his launch to counter defense, and Whintoki rotates his arm in a large circle, then when his arm came back down, pulled on the string of the launcher hard. Whirlwind went straight to the center. Ursa hit the wall twice.
“Ursa! Dual Strike!” Ugen yelled. Ursa did his dual strike move against Whirlwind, but it had no effect. Ursa continued to use dual strike, but it had no effect.
“Your pathetic attacks won’t have any effect on Whirlwind!” Whintoki told Ugen.
“Now, Ursa! Flying Dual Strike!” Ursa hit a wall, and flew down onto Whirlwind.
“Whirlwind! Wailing Flip!” Ursa smashes into Whirlwind, pulling off Flying Dual Strike. After the second strike, Whirlwind hit the ground and pulled off a flip right above Ursa, then went to the center where Ursa was, making impact with Ursa. Ursa went flying and hit the ground.
“A KO! One point goes to Whintoki!” The referee called. The crowd cheered. Ugen picked up Ursa, and Ursa burst in his hands.
“Looks like you got lucky. If I had gotten another hit on Ursa it would have burst.” Whintoki observed.
I’ve got to make sure I can pull off my next move without nearly bursting, Ugen thought.
To be continued in Chapter 5: Aggressive Attacks! Rush Impact! Dude nice! All that bugged me (blame my ocd not me) is when you introduce both bladers in the beginning you said "on the left" twice other than that flawless Oops! Looks like a typo on my part! I’ll fix it now and thanks!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Ugen’s Story - AshPhoenix - Dec. 16, 2019
(Dec. 15, 2019 10:34 PM)BuilderROB Wrote: (Dec. 15, 2019 9:58 PM)AshPhoenix Wrote: Dude nice! All that bugged me (blame my ocd not me) is when you introduce both bladers in the beginning you said "on the left" twice other than that flawless Oops! Looks like a typo on my part! I’ll fix it now and thanks!
Thats alright the story is great
RE: Beyblade Burst: Ugen’s Story - BuilderROB - Dec. 17, 2019
Chapter 5: Aggressive Attacks! Rush Impact!
Chapter 5: Aggressive Attacks! Rush Impact!
Whintoki is going to go with attack most likely to catch me off guard, Ugen thought. I’m going with my new move.
“Good luck winning the next battle. It won’t matter anyway though, because you’re clearly not going to win,” Whintoki said. He was confident he would win this next battle.
“Ready? Set!” The referee said.
“Three!...Two!...One!...Go Shoot!” Ugen did his launch to counter attack, and Whintoki did a counterclockwise launch from last time. Whirlwind jumped around the stadium aggressively.
“What kind of attack type jumps around!?” Ugen asks.
“Only Whirlwind,” Whintoki replies. Ugen goes in for an attack, but when it goes in to attack, Whirlwind jumps above Ursa.
“If you can’t get a hit on me, you can’t defeat me,” It looked like Whintoki had it in the bag. Ursa kept trying to attack Whirlwind but every time it tried, Whirlwind would always jump over Ursa.
“Now, Ursa! Rush Impact!” Ursa spun towards Whirlwind at a fast pace, smashing into Whirlwind, sending Whirlwind flying. Ursa went to the more central part of the stadium.
“It’s not over yet! Whirlwind! Gliding Impact!” Whirlwind hadn’t been KO’ed. It came flying down and hit the stadium wall, sending it gliding to Ursa and smashing into it.
“It’s over for Ursa,” Whintoki said.
“That’s what you’re think,” Ugen said. With that, Ursa hit the ground and hit Whirlwind, sending Whirlwind to a wall and bursting it at the same time as Ursa burst, or so it seemed. The crowd was amazed at what they just saw.
“Incredible! I can’t even tell who won that one! The referee will have to decide this one!” Hanami said. The referee took a few seconds to decide who burst first. His hand raised to the right.
“Whirlwind burst first! Two points go to Ugen. Ugen wins the match with a score of 1-2!” With that, the crowd went wild with cheers.
“Incredible! Ugen managed to beat one of the best bladers in the local area! Ugen is becoming a force to be reckoned with! With that, Ugen advances to the fourth round!” Hanami and everyone else was shocked at what they saw today. With that, it was time for Ugen to watch Gabe’s match, which he wished he had done earlier.
“Gabe! You’re gonna ace this match!” Ugen and Saoki were cheering for Gabe. For Ugen, watching one of his teammate’s battles was half as fun as battling.
“Alrighty, boys and girls, it’s time for the second match in the third round of the tournament! To the left is a blader that has blading skills that could rival most bladers in Japan! He ranks as one of the top bladers of Japan! Give it up for Gabe Burnai!” Gabe came out right after Hanami said that. The crowd cheered, Ugen and Saoki being the loudest.
“To the left is a blader who has won two matches in this tournament! He has yet to lose a match in this tournament with! Give it up for Akiro Masuki!” The crowd cheered, but not nearly as loud as for Gabe.
“As one of the top ranked bladers, I’ve been watching your matches. Get ready because I have the ultimate strategy that’ll put you at mercy!” Akiro was confident in his skill. Gabe remained silent, concentrated on how he was going to counter Akiro’s defense type bey.
“Ready? Set!” The referee said.
“Three!...Two!...One!...Go Shoot!” Gabe pulled of one of his usual launches. Gaia went straight for the defense type bey in the middle.
“Gaia! Swing Launch!” The defense type bey burst upon being smashed into by Gaia.
“A burst finish! Two points go to Gabe. Gabe wins the match!” The crowd cheered loud for Gabe.
“Looks like Gabe is moving in the The fourth round! Stay tuned bladers for the third match of the third round!” Hanami said. After that, Ugen and Saoki left, having no other business there.
That Monday, Ugen was swarmed again. He expected this as it seemed like no one expected him to beat Whintoki. After school he went to practice. When he went into the room he saw a familiar face.
“Did we get a new member?” Ugen asked Gabe.
“Yep. Say hello to Hoeinn, the opponent you beat in the second round,” Gabe replied.
“I wanted to join after seeing you match against Whintoki. You’re more skilled than I originally thought. Seeing the bladers this team trains led me to join.” Hoeinn told Ugen.
“I need some help practicing for the fourth round. I would like to do a battle Royale. Me against the three of you.” Gabe proposed to the team. The team nodded in agreement to the battle Royale.
“Let’s go!” The team said in unison.
To be continued in Chapter 6: A Battle Royale! Triple Teamwork!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Ugen’s Story - FreeFafnir64 - Dec. 21, 2019
This is awesome. That was a close one for Ugen though.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Ugen’s Story - BuilderROB - Dec. 21, 2019
(Dec. 21, 2019 3:58 PM)FreeFafnir64 Wrote: This is awesome. That was a close one for Ugen though. Thanks! You can post a character idea if you want! Just make sure the beyblade they own is a dual layer! I’ll be posting chapter 6 in a few days!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Ugen’s Story - Suoh sadboii - Dec. 21, 2019
(Dec. 21, 2019 4:26 PM)BuilderROB Wrote: (Dec. 21, 2019 3:58 PM)FreeFafnir64 Wrote: This is awesome. That was a close one for Ugen though. Thanks! You can post a character idea if you want! Just make sure the beyblade they own is a dual layer! I’ll be posting chapter 6 in a few days!
Can't wait!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Ugen’s Story - FreeFafnir64 - Dec. 23, 2019
Oh yeah, just give me a few days to think up a character
RE: Beyblade Burst: Ugen’s Story - BuilderROB - Dec. 24, 2019
Chapter 6: Battle Royale! Triple Attack!
Chapter 6: Battle Royale! Triple Attack!
“You guys ready?” Gabe asked the team, which was about to do a battle Royale. The team nodded.
“What are the rules for this battle Royale?” Saoki asked Gabe.
“The battle will be all four of us against each other. I’m planning to take all three of you out myself.” Gabe explained.
“Not if I beat all three of you!” Ugen confidently said.
“Ok, let’s just get this battle started,” Gabe replied to Ugen.
“Ready? Set!” Gabe said.
“Three!...Two!...One!...Go Shoot!” Gabe pulled off a new launch. The four beys entered the stadium, Shuriken and Hercules immediately heading towards the center, fighting for the center.
“Send Hercules flying!” Saoki yelled.
“Hercules! Blow Shuriken away!” Hoeinn yelled. Ursa hit the stadium twice, trying to pull of dual strike.
“Now, Ursa! Dual Strike!” Ursa rushed towards Gaia, smashing into Gaia. Gaia rode up the slope of the stadium, gaining speed and power.
“Now, Gaia! Swing Counter!” Gabe yelled. Gaia rushed towards Shuriken and smashed into it, bursting Shuriken upon impact.
“No way!” Saoki was in awe. Gaia continued on its rampage and hit Ursa again.
“Again! Swing Counter!” Gaia rode up the slope of the stadium and back down again like last time, rushing towards Hercules.
“Now, Hercules! Hurricane Launch!” Hercules crested a tornado surrounding it. Gaia hit the tornado head on and went right through. It hit Hercules, bursting Hercules upon impact.
“Impossible! Someone went through my tornado!” Hoeinn had never seen a beyblade go through Hercules’ tornado. Gaia had lost a lot of stamina going through the tornado, so Ugen saw an opportunity.
“Ursa! Duel Strike!” Ursa went right towards Gaia, smashing into it.
“Gaia! Swing counter!” Gaia rode up the slope, came back down and smashed into Ursa, bursting Ursa upon impact.
“Not again!” Ugen had still lost to Gabe with two other people going up against him.
“This was the perfect time to perfect my new move: Swing Counter. It still isn’t perfected yet and was risky to use, so I’m gonna have to keep practicing with it.” Gabe said.
“I wanna battle just you, Gabe. I wanna get stronger,” Hoeinn proposed.
“Let’s do it then,” Gabe replied
“Ready? Set!” Saoki called.
“Three!...Two!...One!...Go Shoot!”
Friday came fast. Ugen and Gabe kept practicing for their matches which would be the next day, knowing their matches would make or break them getting into the semifinals.
“Ursa! Rush Impact!” Ursa rushed to Gaia and smashed into it, causing it to rise up the slope of the stadium.
“Gaia! Swing Counter!” Gaia came back down with more power and speed. Ursa avoided the assault.
“Not this time! Now, Ursa! Dual Strike!” Ursa went straight into impact with Gaia, bursting Ursa.
“What!?” Ugen was shocked.
“The impact angle was too much for Ursa. The move is good but you’ll need to perfect it so it doesn’t work against you. Going in for the right angle is key for each opponent with that move.” Gabe suggested.
“Thanks. I will keep that in mind,” Ugen replied. They continued to practice, and Ugen was able to go for the right angle, but he never won a round against Gabe during practice.
The next day, Ugen was ready for whoever came at him. All he knew was that his opponent was named Theo Rusuki and that he owned an attack type beyblade. He was prepared for whatever Theo there at him. It was almost time and was waiting behind the doors that led to the stadium.
To be continued in Chapter 7: Flying Attacks! Thrashing Thunderbird!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Ugen’s Story - FreeFafnir64 - Dec. 26, 2019
I have an idea. A kid named Alex has a beyblade called Angered Ares. Ares is an attack type, and it has a mechanism that when it’s hit, the burst resets and swords come out. If you want to, add to it please. Sorry if it’s too complicated.
And great chapter.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Ugen’s Story - BuilderROB - Dec. 26, 2019
(Dec. 26, 2019 3:48 AM)FreeFafnir64 Wrote: I have an idea. A kid named Alex has a beyblade called Angered Ares. Ares is an attack type, and it has a mechanism that when it’s hit, the burst resets and swords come out. If you want to, add to it please. Sorry if it’s too complicated.
And great chapter.
Thanks! I’ll likely add your character into the storyline!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Ugen’s Story - BuilderROB - Jan. 03, 2020
Chapter 7: Flying Attacks! Thrashing Thunderbird!
Chapter 7: Flying Attacks! Thrashing Thunderbird!
It was time. Ugen knew if he lost this match that he would lose his chance of getting into the semifinals. He had to win this.
“Alright, boys and girls! It’s time for the fourth round of the tournament! Let’s get started with the first match of today! To the left is a blader that spends his time with birds! He does his training in the forest, and it’s built up his strength for sure! Give it up for Theo Rusuki!” Theo came onstage, and looked like someone who would spend a lot of time outside. The crowd cheered for Theo.
“To the right is a blader who went from unknown to a strong blader in the area! Will he continue his win streak? Give it up for Ugen Senoku!” Ugen came onstage, and the crowd cheered loudly.
“You’ve got yourself quite the audience, don’t ya? Who needs a crowd cheering for them when I have plenty of friends back home?” Theo was confident most people were distrustful, and he, for the most part, relied on his friends, which for the most part, were birds.
“You mean those animals? A human crowd is much more reliable than some stupid birds,” Ugen insulted.
“You take that back!” Theo insisted.
“Why should I take back something that is true?” Ugen asked.
“You’ll regret saying that!” Theo had to crush this opponent. Someone like him didn’t deserve to move on, “Thunderbird will crush you!” Ugen got a good look at Thunderbird. The center and bottom part of the bey had a bird head, and the sides had wing protrusions. The top part had lightning bolt protrusions, thee of them to be exact. Indeed Thunderbird looked strong, but Ugen knew Ursa could take it.
“Ready? Set!” The referee said.
“Three!...Two!...One!...Go Shoot!” Ugen pulled off a new version of his dual strike launch. Ursa sprinted forwards Thunderbird, busting into it. Ursa took one click. Ursa came back for another hit. Ursa took another click.
“Now Ursa! Dual Strike!” Ugen yelled. Ursa smashed into Thunderbird. Thunderbird went flying into the air.
“Now, Thunderbird! Lightning Thrash!” Theo yelled. Thunderbird smashed into Ursa repeatedly, destabilizing Ursa. Ursa wobbled horribly. Thunderbird came down again, sending Ursa flying. Ursa burst at the ground. It was unknown whether or not Ursa burst first or hit the ground first.
“Incredible! The referee will have to review the footage to see if Theo gets one point or two!” Hanami informed. The referee went over the footage in slow motion. Ursa slowly fell in the footage. Ursa hit the ground and then burst.
“Ursa hit the ground before bursting! Theo gets one point for a KO!” The referee called. The crowd went wild.
“Ugen almost lost that one! Will he be able to make a comeback like he has in previous matches? Let’s find out!” Ugen knew he could have lost that match.
“So you’re all talk, I see. Guess I will be taking this match then,” Theo said. Ugen remained silent.
It’s time to make a comeback, Ugen thought. Ugen adjusted his launch so it was different from last round’s.
“Ready? Set!”
“Three!...Two!...One!...Go Shoot!” Ugen pulled off an adjusted version of his last launch. Ugen rushed towards Thunderbird like last round. It smash into Thunderbird once and then again.
“Ursa! Dual Strike!” Ursa smashed into Thunderbird, sending Thunderbird into the air.
“This is a repeat of the last round, folks! Will the outcome be the same?” Hanami asked. Thunderbird came crashing down
“Thunderbird! Lightning Thrash!” Thunderbird came crashing down, but Ursa avoided the attack, causing Thunderbird to crash into the stadium floor.
“Thunderbird!” Theo yelled. Thunderbird lost tons of momentum from the impact and was wobbling horribly.
“Now, Ursa! Dual Strike!” Ursa smashed into Thunderbird, sending Thunderbird into the stadium wall and bursting it upon impact.
“A burst finish! Two points go to Ugen. Ugen wins the match!” The referee called. The crowd went wild with cheers.
“Amazing! Ursa took the match, as it has been doing for the last now four matches! Ugen moves on to the semifinals!” Hanami yelled.
“You really think the same move would work on me again? Pathetic.”
Theo was teeming with anger, and stomped offstage. Ugen went offstage as well.
It was time for Gabe’s fourth match, and everyone was cheering, Ugen and Saoki cheering the loudest. Hoeinn remained silent.
“Welcome, bladers, to the second match of the fourth round of this tournament! Let’s get this started! To the left is a blader that has won three matches in this tournament! He has yet to lose! Give it up for Riyo Desoku!” Hanami explained. Riyo came onstage, gathering some cheers.
“To the left is a blader who has started training with his new team: Rideout! He leads the team well and has helped him to get stronger! Give it up for Gabe Brunai!” Hanami yelled. Gabe came onstage. The crowd went wild with cheers.
“Good luck winning, because you have no idea what is coming for you!” Riyo said. Gabe remained silent.
“Ready? Set!”
“Three!...Two!...One!...Go Shoot!” Gabe launched like he was doing Swing Launch. Gaia went straight in for the attack type beyblade.
“Gaia! Swing Launch!” Gaia went in and burst the attack type beyblade with one hit.
“A burst finish! Two points go to Gabe. Gabe Brunai wins the match!” The referee called.
“Outstanding! Gabe got a burst finish in five seconds! Gabe moves on to the semifinals!” Hanami said. The crowd went more wild than in most matches. The team left along with Gabe.
To be continued in Chapter 8: Going Solo! A New Move!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Ugen’s Story - Dacatman - Jan. 03, 2020
Character: Aintion (An-tion) Kalumia (Kaloom-ia)
Bey: Afflicted Anafalfion
Avatar: A fusion between a Knight and a Mage
Layer: Five Attack Points, Mini Victory Valkyrie Like Wings
Disc: A Five Bladed Wing Disc
Driver: A Skinny Yielding That Is Also Flat
RE: Beyblade Burst: Ugen’s Story - BuilderROB - Jan. 03, 2020
(Jan. 03, 2020 2:37 AM)Dacatman Wrote: Character: Aintion (An-tion) Kalumia (Kaloom-ia)
Bey: Afflicted Anafalfion
Avatar: A fusion between a Knight and a Mage
Layer: Five Attack Points, Mini Victory Valkyrie Like Wings
Disc: A Five Bladed Wing Disc
Driver: A Skinny Yielding That Is Also Flat
Ok, I will add your character to the storyline!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Ugen’s Story - bekfastblader - Jan. 03, 2020
Percy Charleston
Personality: He is a calm blade that has the personality of Cuza (joking outside and serious in the ring)
Bey: Phase Cerastes
Layer : an attack type bey that has 5 attack points, each are a Cerastes head (a poisonous snake) that is left spin
Disc: a disc similiar to Sting but a few grams lighter and the plastic is locked in place
Tip: Variable'
Moves: Variable Break: The bey accelarates on the Tornado Ridge and slams into the opponent
Cerastes Whip: Cerastes uses it heads and deal devastating damage
Phase Dive: Cerastes, when flung into the air, it flies back down and slashes the opposing bey
Phase Launch: basically rush Launch
Poison Strike: Hits the opposing bey multiple times and instantly bursts it.
Avatar: A cerastes mixed with a hydra
Appearance: Percy wears a faded grey t-shirt with nike pants and faded blue shoes. He has sea-green eyes and black hair
RE: Beyblade Burst: Ugen’s Story - Suoh sadboii - Jan. 03, 2020
(Jan. 03, 2020 2:04 AM)BuilderROB Wrote: Chapter 7: Flying Attacks! Thrashing Thunderbird!
Chapter 7: Flying Attacks! Thrashing Thunderbird!
It was time. Ugen knew if he lost this match that he would lose his chance of getting into the semifinals. He had to win this.
“Alright, boys and girls! It’s time for the fourth round of the tournament! Let’s get started with the first match of today! To the left is a blader that spends his time with birds! He does his training in the forest, and it’s built up his strength for sure! Give it up for Theo Rusuki!” Theo came onstage, and looked like someone who would spend a lot of time outside. The crowd cheered for Theo.
“To the right is a blader who went from unknown to a strong blader in the area! Will he continue his win streak? Give it up for Ugen Senoku!” Ugen came onstage, and the crowd cheered loudly.
“You’ve got yourself quite the audience, don’t ya? Who needs a crowd cheering for them when I have plenty of friends back home?” Theo was confident most people were distrustful, and he, for the most part, relied on his friends, which for the most part, were birds.
“You mean those animals? A human crowd is much more reliable than some stupid birds,” Ugen insulted.
“You take that back!” Theo insisted.
“Why should I take back something that is true?” Ugen asked.
“You’ll regret saying that!” Theo had to crush this opponent. Someone like him didn’t deserve to move on, “Thunderbird will crush you!” Ugen got a good lock at Thunderbird. The center and bottom part of the bey had a bird head, and the sides had wing protrusions. The top part had lightning bolt protrusions, thee of them to be exact. Indeed Thunderbird looked strong, but Ugen knew Ursa could take it.
“Ready? Set!” The referee said.
“Three!...Two!...One!...Go Shoot!” Ugen pulled off a new version of his dual strike launch. Ursa sprinted forwards Thunderbird, busting into it. Ursa took one click. Ursa came back for another hit. Ursa took another click.
“Now Ursa! Dual Strike!” Ugen yelled. Ursa smashed into Thunderbird. Thunderbird went flying into the air.
“Now, Thunderbird! Lightning Thrash!” Theo yelled. Thunderbird smashed into Ursa repeatedly, destabilizing Ursa. Ursa wobbled horribly. Thunderbird came down again, sending Ursa flying. Ursa burst at the ground. It was unknown whether or not Ursa burst first or hit the ground first.
“Incredible! The referee will have to review the footage to see if Theo gets one point or two!” Hanami informed. The referee went over the footage in slow motion. Ursa slowly fell in the footage. Ursa hit the ground and then burst.
“Ursa hit the ground before bursting! Theo gets one point for a KO!” The referee called. The crowd went wild.
“Ugen almost lost that one! Will he be able to make a comeback like he has in previous matches? Let’s find out!” Ugen knew he could have lost that match.
“So you’re all talk, I see. Guess I will be taking this match then,” Theo said. Ugen remained silent.
It’s time to make a comeback, Ugen thought. Ugen adjusted his launch so it was different from last round’s.
“Ready? Set!”
“Three!...Two!...One!...Go Shoot!” Ugen pulled off an adjusted version of his last launch. Ugen rushed towards Thunderbird like last round. It smash into Thunderbird once and then again.
“Ursa! Dual Strike!” Ursa smashed into Thunderbird, sending Thunderbird into the air.
“This is a repeat of the last round, folks! Will the outcome be the same?” Hanami asked. Thunderbird came crashing down
“Thunderbird! Lightning Thrash!” Thunderbird came crashing down, but Ursa avoided the attack, causing Thunderbird to crash into the stadium floor.
“Thunderbird!” Theo yelled. Thunderbird lost tons of momentum from the impact and was wobbling horribly.
“Now, Ursa! Dual Strike!” Ursa smashed into Thunderbird, sending Thunderbird into the stadium wall and bursting it upon impact.
“A burst finish! Two points go to Ugen. Ugen wins the match!” The referee called. The crowd went wild with cheers.
“Amazing! Ursa took the match, as it has been doing for the last now four matches! Ugen moves on to the semifinals!” Hanami yelled.
“You really think the same move would work on me again? Pathetic.”
Theo was teeming with anger, and stomped offstage. Ugen went offstage as well.
It was time for Gabe’s fourth match, and everyone was cheering, Ugen and Saoki cheering the loudest. Hoeinn remained silent.
“Welcome, bladers, to the second match of the fourth round of this tournament! Let’s get this started! To the left is a blader that has won three matches in this tournament! He has yet to lose! Give it up for Riyo Desoku!” Hanami explained. Riyo came onstage, gathering some cheers.
“To the left is a blader who has started training with his new team: Rideout! He leads the team well and has helped him to get stronger! Give it up for Gabe Brunai!” Hanami yelled. Gabe came onstage. The crowd went wild with cheers.
“Good luck winning, because you have no idea what is coming for you!” Riyo said. Gabe remained silent.
“Ready? Set!”
“Three!...Two!...One!...Go Shoot!” Gabe launched like he was doing Swing Launch. Gaia went straight in for the attack type beyblade.
“Gaia! Swing Launch!” Gaia went in and burst the attack type beyblade with one hit.
“A burst finish! Two points go to Gabe. Gabe Brunai wins the match!” The referee called.
“Outstanding! Gabe got a burst finish in five seconds! Gabe moves on to the semifinals!” Hanami said. The crowd went more wild than in most matches. The team left along with Gabe.
To be continued in Chapter 8: Going Solo! A New Move!
It seems like Ugen is getting a little hostile... Is that intentional?
RE: Beyblade Burst: Ugen’s Story - BuilderROB - Jan. 03, 2020
(Jan. 03, 2020 6:50 AM)Suoh sadboii Wrote: (Jan. 03, 2020 2:04 AM)BuilderROB Wrote: Chapter 7: Flying Attacks! Thrashing Thunderbird!
Chapter 7: Flying Attacks! Thrashing Thunderbird!
It was time. Ugen knew if he lost this match that he would lose his chance of getting into the semifinals. He had to win this.
“Alright, boys and girls! It’s time for the fourth round of the tournament! Let’s get started with the first match of today! To the left is a blader that spends his time with birds! He does his training in the forest, and it’s built up his strength for sure! Give it up for Theo Rusuki!” Theo came onstage, and looked like someone who would spend a lot of time outside. The crowd cheered for Theo.
“To the right is a blader who went from unknown to a strong blader in the area! Will he continue his win streak? Give it up for Ugen Senoku!” Ugen came onstage, and the crowd cheered loudly.
“You’ve got yourself quite the audience, don’t ya? Who needs a crowd cheering for them when I have plenty of friends back home?” Theo was confident most people were distrustful, and he, for the most part, relied on his friends, which for the most part, were birds.
“You mean those animals? A human crowd is much more reliable than some stupid birds,” Ugen insulted.
“You take that back!” Theo insisted.
“Why should I take back something that is true?” Ugen asked.
“You’ll regret saying that!” Theo had to crush this opponent. Someone like him didn’t deserve to move on, “Thunderbird will crush you!” Ugen got a good lock at Thunderbird. The center and bottom part of the bey had a bird head, and the sides had wing protrusions. The top part had lightning bolt protrusions, thee of them to be exact. Indeed Thunderbird looked strong, but Ugen knew Ursa could take it.
“Ready? Set!” The referee said.
“Three!...Two!...One!...Go Shoot!” Ugen pulled off a new version of his dual strike launch. Ursa sprinted forwards Thunderbird, busting into it. Ursa took one click. Ursa came back for another hit. Ursa took another click.
“Now Ursa! Dual Strike!” Ugen yelled. Ursa smashed into Thunderbird. Thunderbird went flying into the air.
“Now, Thunderbird! Lightning Thrash!” Theo yelled. Thunderbird smashed into Ursa repeatedly, destabilizing Ursa. Ursa wobbled horribly. Thunderbird came down again, sending Ursa flying. Ursa burst at the ground. It was unknown whether or not Ursa burst first or hit the ground first.
“Incredible! The referee will have to review the footage to see if Theo gets one point or two!” Hanami informed. The referee went over the footage in slow motion. Ursa slowly fell in the footage. Ursa hit the ground and then burst.
“Ursa hit the ground before bursting! Theo gets one point for a KO!” The referee called. The crowd went wild.
“Ugen almost lost that one! Will he be able to make a comeback like he has in previous matches? Let’s find out!” Ugen knew he could have lost that match.
“So you’re all talk, I see. Guess I will be taking this match then,” Theo said. Ugen remained silent.
It’s time to make a comeback, Ugen thought. Ugen adjusted his launch so it was different from last round’s.
“Ready? Set!”
“Three!...Two!...One!...Go Shoot!” Ugen pulled off an adjusted version of his last launch. Ugen rushed towards Thunderbird like last round. It smash into Thunderbird once and then again.
“Ursa! Dual Strike!” Ursa smashed into Thunderbird, sending Thunderbird into the air.
“This is a repeat of the last round, folks! Will the outcome be the same?” Hanami asked. Thunderbird came crashing down
“Thunderbird! Lightning Thrash!” Thunderbird came crashing down, but Ursa avoided the attack, causing Thunderbird to crash into the stadium floor.
“Thunderbird!” Theo yelled. Thunderbird lost tons of momentum from the impact and was wobbling horribly.
“Now, Ursa! Dual Strike!” Ursa smashed into Thunderbird, sending Thunderbird into the stadium wall and bursting it upon impact.
“A burst finish! Two points go to Ugen. Ugen wins the match!” The referee called. The crowd went wild with cheers.
“Amazing! Ursa took the match, as it has been doing for the last now four matches! Ugen moves on to the semifinals!” Hanami yelled.
“You really think the same move would work on me again? Pathetic.”
Theo was teeming with anger, and stomped offstage. Ugen went offstage as well.
It was time for Gabe’s fourth match, and everyone was cheering, Ugen and Saoki cheering the loudest. Hoeinn remained silent.
“Welcome, bladers, to the second match of the fourth round of this tournament! Let’s get this started! To the left is a blader that has won three matches in this tournament! He has yet to lose! Give it up for Riyo Desoku!” Hanami explained. Riyo came onstage, gathering some cheers.
“To the left is a blader who has started training with his new team: Rideout! He leads the team well and has helped him to get stronger! Give it up for Gabe Brunai!” Hanami yelled. Gabe came onstage. The crowd went wild with cheers.
“Good luck winning, because you have no idea what is coming for you!” Riyo said. Gabe remained silent.
“Ready? Set!”
“Three!...Two!...One!...Go Shoot!” Gabe launched like he was doing Swing Launch. Gaia went straight in for the attack type beyblade.
“Gaia! Swing Launch!” Gaia went in and burst the attack type beyblade with one hit.
“A burst finish! Two points go to Gabe. Gabe Brunai wins the match!” The referee called.
“Outstanding! Gabe got a burst finish in five seconds! Gabe moves on to the semifinals!” Hanami said. The crowd went more wild than in most matches. The team left along with Gabe.
To be continued in Chapter 8: Going Solo! A New Move!
It seems like Ugen is getting a little hostile... Is that intentional?
Yes, I am doing it for a reason. It will be resolved in the next chapter.
(Jan. 03, 2020 5:57 AM)bekfastblader Wrote: Percy Charleston
Personality: He is a calm blade that has the personality of Cuza (joking outside and serious in the ring)
Bey: Phase Cerastes
Layer : an attack type bey that has 5 attack points, each are a Cerastes head (a poisonous snake) that is left spin
Disc: a disc similiar to Sting but a few grams lighter and the plastic is locked in place
Tip: Variable'
Moves: Variable Break: The bey accelarates on the Tornado Ridge and slams into the opponent
Cerastes Whip: Cerastes uses it heads and deal devastating damage
Phase Dive: Cerastes, when flung into the air, it flies back down and slashes the opposing bey
Phase Launch: basically rush Launch
Poison Strike: Hits the opposing bey multiple times and instantly bursts it.
Avatar: A cerastes mixed with a hydra
Appearance: Percy wears a faded grey t-shirt with nike pants and faded blue shoes. He has sea-green eyes and black hair
Interesting character! Is Cerastes a dual layer or a God layer? (Or even a Cho-Z layer).
RE: Beyblade Burst: Ugen’s Story - Suoh sadboii - Jan. 03, 2020
(Jan. 03, 2020 1:44 PM)BuilderROB Wrote: (Jan. 03, 2020 6:50 AM)Suoh sadboii Wrote: It seems like Ugen is getting a little hostile... Is that intentional?
Yes, I am doing it for a reason. It will be resolved in the next chapter.
(Jan. 03, 2020 5:57 AM)bekfastblader Wrote: Percy Charleston
Personality: He is a calm blade that has the personality of Cuza (joking outside and serious in the ring)
Bey: Phase Cerastes
Layer : an attack type bey that has 5 attack points, each are a Cerastes head (a poisonous snake) that is left spin
Disc: a disc similiar to Sting but a few grams lighter and the plastic is locked in place
Tip: Variable'
Moves: Variable Break: The bey accelarates on the Tornado Ridge and slams into the opponent
Cerastes Whip: Cerastes uses it heads and deal devastating damage
Phase Dive: Cerastes, when flung into the air, it flies back down and slashes the opposing bey
Phase Launch: basically rush Launch
Poison Strike: Hits the opposing bey multiple times and instantly bursts it.
Avatar: A cerastes mixed with a hydra
Appearance: Percy wears a faded grey t-shirt with nike pants and faded blue shoes. He has sea-green eyes and black hair
Interesting character! Is Cerastes a dual layer or a God layer? (Or even a Cho-Z layer).
Is Ugen getting cocky or something? Actually nevermind.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Ugen’s Story - bekfastblader - Jan. 03, 2020
(Jan. 03, 2020 1:44 PM)BuilderROB Wrote: (Jan. 03, 2020 6:50 AM)Suoh sadboii Wrote: It seems like Ugen is getting a little hostile... Is that intentional?
Yes, I am doing it for a reason. It will be resolved in the next chapter.
(Jan. 03, 2020 5:57 AM)bekfastblader Wrote: Percy Charleston
Personality: He is a calm blade that has the personality of Cuza (joking outside and serious in the ring)
Bey: Phase Cerastes
Layer : an attack type bey that has 5 attack points, each are a Cerastes head (a poisonous snake) that is left spin
Disc: a disc similiar to Sting but a few grams lighter and the plastic is locked in place
Tip: Variable'
Moves: Variable Break: The bey accelarates on the Tornado Ridge and slams into the opponent
Cerastes Whip: Cerastes uses it heads and deal devastating damage
Phase Dive: Cerastes, when flung into the air, it flies back down and slashes the opposing bey
Phase Launch: basically rush Launch
Poison Strike: Hits the opposing bey multiple times and instantly bursts it.
Avatar: A cerastes mixed with a hydra
Appearance: Percy wears a faded grey t-shirt with nike pants and faded blue shoes. He has sea-green eyes and black hair
Interesting character! Is Cerastes a dual layer or a God layer? (Or even a Cho-Z layer). dual layer
Is it too complicated?
RE: Beyblade Burst: Ugen’s Story - BuilderROB - Jan. 03, 2020
(Jan. 03, 2020 7:42 PM)bekfastblader Wrote: (Jan. 03, 2020 1:44 PM)BuilderROB Wrote: Yes, I am doing it for a reason. It will be resolved in the next chapter.
Interesting character! Is Cerastes a dual layer or a God layer? (Or even a Cho-Z layer). dual layer
Is it too complicated?
No, but the first part of your bey’s name doesn’t start with the same letter that the second part of the name does.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Ugen’s Story - bekfastblader - Jan. 03, 2020
(Jan. 03, 2020 8:02 PM)BuilderROB Wrote: (Jan. 03, 2020 7:42 PM)bekfastblader Wrote: dual layer
Is it too complicated?
No, but the first part of your bey’s name doesn’t start with the same letter that the second part of the name does.
I know, It just sounded better I guess
RE: Beyblade Burst: Ugen’s Story - BuilderROB - Jan. 03, 2020
(Jan. 03, 2020 8:02 PM)bekfastblader Wrote: (Jan. 03, 2020 8:02 PM)BuilderROB Wrote: No, but the first part of your bey’s name doesn’t start with the same letter that the second part of the name does.
I know, It just sounded better I guess
Ok, well come up with a different first part of your beyblade’s name and make sure it starts with a C.
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