(Aug. 02, 2019  12:54 AM)Dash Driver Wrote:

(Aug. 02, 2019  12:52 AM)X-Wing Wrote: Like Phi no last name, antagonist

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Like Phi no last name, antagonist

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Is it good

Yeah. I’ll add him in.

(Aug. 02, 2019  1:41 AM)Dash Driver Wrote: Hey everybody I’ll be going on vacation next week and I’ll be gone for a while. My friend will write the stories and I’ll post them when I get back. My friend’s username is X-Wing.

(Aug. 02, 2019  1:46 AM)X-Wing Wrote:

(Aug. 02, 2019  1:41 AM)Dash Driver Wrote: Hey everybody I’ll be going on vacation next week and I’ll be gone for a while. My friend will write the stories and I’ll post them when I get back. My friend’s username is X-Wing.

Hi guys!

(Aug. 01, 2019  1:52 AM)Dash Driver Wrote: My new Beyblade Burst story! I will take character requests as long as they are descriptive. Character requests must have the character’s name, character’s appearance, character’s personality, beyblade name, beyblade gimmicks/special moves, and beyblade parts. You can add extra details.

Chapter One: Born from the Flames! Everlasting Phoenix!

Spoiler (Click to View)

       “Let it RIP!” Valt Aoi and Shu Kurenai were having a blast during the finals of the World Championships. The score was 2-2 and the tension was unbearable. Valt launched his bey, Wing Valkyrie as Shu launched his Imperial Spriggan. 11 year old Peter Endor was watching their battle on TV. He clutched in his hand his bey, Everlasting Phoenix. As he watched the intense battle on TV, he got more and more excited. Suddenly, Spriggan bursted Valkyrie with a strong attack!
      “Oh! Spriggan smashes through Valkyrie for a BURST FINISH! Let’s hear it for our new World Champion, Shu Kurenai!”
      “YES!” Peter heard his sister fangirling over Shu as he smiled at the camera.
      “Shut up, Mary!” Peter had admired Shu since he placed 2nd in the International Blader’s Cup. He wanted to be like Shu, a calm Blader with strong skills.
      “Let’s be just like Shu, okay Phoenix?” Peter decided he would practice with Phoenix for a bit at the park with his friend, Roan Jamieson.
      At the park, there was a stadium with a brown-haired boy wearing a blue jacket.
      “Hi Roan!” Roan was a nice friend. He loved battling with Peter, but usually won easily. Roan was known for being one of the best bladers in Peter’s town.
      “Let’s battle! 3, 2, 1, let it rip!”
      “Phoenix! Take the center!”
      “Revenge! Attack Phoenix with all you’ve got!” Roan’s Destructor Revenge was an attack type. It could take out opponents with a single strike. It was about to do so against Phoenix.
      “Revenge! Destructor Spiral!” Revenge circled around Phoenix while slowly closing in, its trail making a spiral as it gained speed. Revenge finally hit Phoenix, knocking Phoenix away from the center as Phoenix began to falter.
      “Aaaaah! Phoenix! Hang on!” Peter’s determination caused Phoenix to glow as it suddenly gained a burst of speed as it’s tip retracted. It rushed straight through Revenge, bursting it.
      “Woah! What was that? How did you do that? What do you call that move?”
      Peter thought for a bit before saying, “I think I’ll call it Inferno Reborn Counter.”
      “That’s a cool name! It has a nice ring to it.”
      The two friends continued battling until the sky got dark, then said their farewells as they departed to go home.



NEXT CHAPTER: Reigning King! Aurum Midas!

(Aug. 01, 2019  4:54 AM)HakaishinLDrago Wrote: use my character Kanniu! He uses his dual-spin Dimensional Leviathan Sting Godspeed' that can spin steal and has a metal gimmick (metal around the layer like L-Drago), burst stopper like the judgment base, and a rubber gimmick for the driver (Godspeed' is like evolution mixed with ultimate reboot)

(Aug. 02, 2019  2:40 AM)boigamer25 Wrote:

(Aug. 01, 2019  1:52 AM)Dash Driver Wrote: My new Beyblade Burst story! I will take character requests as long as they are descriptive. Character requests must have the character’s name, character’s appearance, character’s personality, beyblade name, beyblade gimmicks/special moves, and beyblade parts. You can add extra details.

Chapter One: Born from the Flames! Everlasting Phoenix!

Spoiler (Click to View)

       “Let it RIP!” Valt Aoi and Shu Kurenai were having a blast during the finals of the World Championships. The score was 2-2 and the tension was unbearable. Valt launched his bey, Wing Valkyrie as Shu launched his Imperial Spriggan. 11 year old Peter Endor was watching their battle on TV. He clutched in his hand his bey, Everlasting Phoenix. As he watched the intense battle on TV, he got more and more excited. Suddenly, Spriggan bursted Valkyrie with a strong attack!
      “Oh! Spriggan smashes through Valkyrie for a BURST FINISH! Let’s hear it for our new World Champion, Shu Kurenai!”
      “YES!” Peter heard his sister fangirling over Shu as he smiled at the camera.
      “Shut up, Mary!” Peter had admired Shu since he placed 2nd in the International Blader’s Cup. He wanted to be like Shu, a calm Blader with strong skills.
      “Let’s be just like Shu, okay Phoenix?” Peter decided he would practice with Phoenix for a bit at the park with his friend, Roan Jamieson.
      At the park, there was a stadium with a brown-haired boy wearing a blue jacket.
      “Hi Roan!” Roan was a nice friend. He loved battling with Peter, but usually won easily. Roan was known for being one of the best bladers in Peter’s town.
      “Let’s battle! 3, 2, 1, let it rip!”
      “Phoenix! Take the center!”
      “Revenge! Attack Phoenix with all you’ve got!” Roan’s Destructor Revenge was an attack type. It could take out opponents with a single strike. It was about to do so against Phoenix.
      “Revenge! Destructor Spiral!” Revenge circled around Phoenix while slowly closing in, its trail making a spiral as it gained speed. Revenge finally hit Phoenix, knocking Phoenix away from the center as Phoenix began to falter.
      “Aaaaah! Phoenix! Hang on!” Peter’s determination caused Phoenix to glow as it suddenly gained a burst of speed as it’s tip retracted. It rushed straight through Revenge, bursting it.
      “Woah! What was that? How did you do that? What do you call that move?”
      Peter thought for a bit before saying, “I think I’ll call it Inferno Reborn Counter.”
      “That’s a cool name! It has a nice ring to it.”
      The two friends continued battling until the sky got dark, then said their farewells as they departed to go home.



NEXT CHAPTER: Reigning King! Aurum Midas!

Great job with chapter 1! Can't wait for the next

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(Aug. 01, 2019  4:54 AM)HakaishinLDrago Wrote: use my character Kanniu! He uses his dual-spin Dimensional Leviathan Sting Godspeed' that can spin steal and has a metal gimmick (metal around the layer like L-Drago), burst stopper like the judgment base, and a rubber gimmick for the driver (Godspeed' is like evolution mixed with ultimate reboot)

Hey, soooooooo. How are we gonna work out this two Leviathan bey thing? Becuase my character Yuuta already owns a Leviathan bey?

(Aug. 02, 2019  2:48 AM)HakaishinLDrago Wrote:

(Aug. 02, 2019  2:40 AM)boigamer25 Wrote: Great job with chapter 1! Can't wait for the next

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Hey, soooooooo. How are we gonna work out this two Leviathan bey thing? Becuase my character Yuuta already owns a Leviathan bey?

changed the name of mine to Dimensional Kopano so no worries

(Aug. 02, 2019  2:57 AM)boigamer25 Wrote:

(Aug. 02, 2019  2:48 AM)HakaishinLDrago Wrote: changed the name of mine to Dimensional Kopano so no worries

Ok sorry about that XD. Thanks, What is "Kopano" btw lol

(Aug. 02, 2019  3:11 AM)HakaishinLDrago Wrote:

(Aug. 02, 2019  2:57 AM)boigamer25 Wrote: Ok sorry about that XD. Thanks, What is "Kopano" btw lol

it means united so it would be different creatures combined for the avatar really

(Aug. 02, 2019  3:11 AM)HakaishinLDrago Wrote:

(Aug. 02, 2019  2:57 AM)boigamer25 Wrote: Ok sorry about that XD. Thanks, What is "Kopano" btw lol

it means united so it would be different creatures combined for the avatar really

(Aug. 02, 2019  3:15 AM)CheetoBlader Wrote:

(Aug. 02, 2019  3:11 AM)HakaishinLDrago Wrote: it means united so it would be different creatures combined for the avatar really

*imagines every BEYBLADE spirit mixed together*

(Aug. 13, 2019  6:44 PM)N12N12 Wrote: *instantly subscribes*

(Aug. 19, 2019  3:40 PM)N12N12 Wrote: I was thinking about how crazy aries has all of those custom beyblades, I know a lot of people asked for their beyblades to be in the storyline, but I was wondering if you could include his. You should probably PM him because in all of the chats he is in he never really talks...

(Aug. 28, 2019  9:30 PM)bekfastblader Wrote: I have one Dash Driver

Rai Ghasp

Owns Revolution Ghost 00'Spine Control: Revolution Ghost is a balance type with different armours like Phoenix and 2 burst stopper. Control is a Xtend+ mixed with Dimension with 6 modes: Attack, Barrage, Defence, Hold, Spin, and Last

Wears black Nike React Shoes, has a white hoodie, and has a calm attitude. Doesn't listen to trash-talk

Moves: Revolution Whip: Uses it Attack armour and slashes it with it blades
             Control Break: Uses it's Tip in the lowest mode to scrape the outside and gain a speed boost
             Ghost Defence: Uses defence armour and block all incoming attacks from the opponent
             Ghost Spin: Aimlessly spin slowly and spin steals off the opponent. Can use any mode on the driver for this
             Barrage Launch: Uses Barrage mode on driver and unleashes some powerful attacks
             Hold: Uses Hold Mode and doesn't let anything take the centre

Hope my character gets in!
Also  these are the armours for phoenix: Speed, Barrage, Spin, Hold and Flash

(Aug. 28, 2019  9:58 PM)Dash Driver Wrote:

(Aug. 28, 2019  9:30 PM)bekfastblader Wrote: I have one Dash Driver

Rai Ghasp

Owns Revolution Ghost 00'Spine Control: Revolution Ghost is a balance type with different armours like Phoenix and 2 burst stopper. Control is a Xtend+ mixed with Dimension with 6 modes: Attack, Barrage, Defence, Hold, Spin, and Last

Wears black Nike React Shoes, has a white hoodie, and has a calm attitude. Doesn't listen to trash-talk

Moves: Revolution Whip: Uses it Attack armour and slashes it with it blades
             Control Break: Uses it's Tip in the lowest mode to scrape the outside and gain a speed boost
             Ghost Defence: Uses defence armour and block all incoming attacks from the opponent
             Ghost Spin: Aimlessly spin slowly and spin steals off the opponent. Can use any mode on the driver for this
             Barrage Launch: Uses Barrage mode on driver and unleashes some powerful attacks
             Hold: Uses Hold Mode and doesn't let anything take the centre

Hope my character gets in!
Also  these are the armours for phoenix: Speed, Barrage, Spin, Hold and Flash

Yeah I’ll add him but isn’t it okay if I don’t do the armors? If you want to keep them, I will but it makes everything a lot more complex.

(Aug. 29, 2019  9:01 AM)bekfastblader Wrote:

(Aug. 28, 2019  9:58 PM)Dash Driver Wrote: Yeah I’ll add him but isn’t it okay if I don’t do the armors? If you want to keep them, I will but it makes everything a lot more complex.

Ok then choose 2 armours because i still want it to be a balance type. Preferably Barrage and Hold