![]() |
[Beyblade Story] Never Forget The Past [RATED PG] - Printable Version +- World Beyblade Organization (https://worldbeyblade.org) +-- Forum: Off-Topic Forums (https://worldbeyblade.org/Forum-Off-Topic-Forums) +--- Forum: Your Creations (https://worldbeyblade.org/Forum-Your-Creations) +--- Thread: [Beyblade Story] Never Forget The Past [RATED PG] (/Thread-Beyblade-Story-Never-Forget-The-Past-RATED-PG) |
RE: [Beyblade Story] Never Forget The Past [I'm Retiring] - SilverChronos - Oct. 17, 2012 If Kira/Bri didn't end tragically, there wouldn't be as much drama or emotion. I love the story so far! RE: [Beyblade Story] Never Forget The Past [I'm Retiring] - DefStamina88 - Oct. 19, 2012 Here's Chapter 6!! RATED PG Spoiler (Click to View) RE: [Beyblade Story] Never Forget The Past [RATED PG] - SilverChronos - Oct. 19, 2012 Wow. What's up with Kira? Does he have a mental problem or something? I love the new chapter, BTW. RE: [Beyblade Story] Never Forget The Past [RATED PG] - DefStamina88 - Oct. 20, 2012 Here's Chapter 7!! Spoiler (Click to View) RE: [Beyblade Story] Never Forget The Past [RATED PG] - Kujikato - Oct. 20, 2012 You spelled inhumane inbumane... A bit short and choppy tbh. RE: [Beyblade Story] Never Forget The Past [RATED PG] - Duck - Oct. 20, 2012 Wow! I'm speechless! Chapter 6 and 7 were the best yet! Ohh, poor Devin. ![]() RE: [Beyblade Story] Never Forget The Past [RATED PG] - SilverChronos - Oct. 21, 2012 Hey, nice job def! This is really going along well. RE: [Beyblade Story] Never Forget The Past [RATED PG] - DefStamina88 - Oct. 23, 2012 Chapter 8 is here!!! Spoiler (Click to View) RE: [Beyblade Story] Never Forget The Past [RATED PG] - SilverChronos - Oct. 23, 2012 Wow. Chapter 8 is quite entertaining. You obviously did a very nice job, it's just a little short... RE: [Beyblade Story] Never Forget The Past [RATED PG] - UltimateOrion - Oct. 23, 2012 nice story RE: [Beyblade Story] Never Forget The Past [RATED PG] - wtater888 - Oct. 23, 2012 Wow. Can you post a link to your other storys please. RE: [Beyblade Story] Never Forget The Past [RATED PG] - SilverChronos - Oct. 24, 2012 @wtater: just search that. @def: I really find the content overall becoming somewhat lower compared to your other awesome stories. I love it, but content is lacking here a little bit. RE: [Beyblade Story] Never Forget The Past [RATED PG] - Duck - Oct. 25, 2012 Hmm, I have to agree with ukdl123. This story is still great and all, but it's missing the glorious sparkle and shine of the other three. ![]() Are you okay, Drosselmeyer? ![]() RE: [Beyblade Story] Never Forget The Past [RATED PG] - Syco - Oct. 25, 2012 The story is good but i have to agree with duck. The story seems Kira-centered RE: [Beyblade Story] Never Forget The Past [RATED PG] - DefStamina88 - Oct. 25, 2012 To answer Duck's question, no, I am not. I had been diagnosed with ADD and partial dyslexia yesterday, so it's affected my thinking pretty bad. It's also put me in a pretty depressed mood... Just saying guys, it might be a while before the next chapter hits this thread. Sorry guys. ![]() RE: [Beyblade Story] Never Forget The Past [RATED PG] - Duck - Oct. 25, 2012 You and ChinaBladeâ„¢? Aww, I hope you both don't let it bring you down. No matter what, you both are the awesomest writers ever! ![]() It's okay! I'll be waiting, quack! ![]() RE: [Beyblade Story] Never Forget The Past [RATED PG] - Syco - Oct. 25, 2012 WHAT!! THATS ROUGH MAN!!! Everything happens for a reason, so maybe this was meant for something good. And as Richard Bach said, " What the caterpillar calls the end, the master calls it a butterfly." Im not saying that this is the end, u just shouldnt be depressed bout it. Ryan higa has ADHD, he is one of the most famous utubers. Take it positively and use it as a strength, thats what great people do. To keep the bad thing in mind and mourn is not going to get u anywhere. So keep ur head high and call urself special. RE: [Beyblade Story] Never Forget The Past [RATED PG] - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - Oct. 25, 2012 (Oct. 25, 2012 11:45 AM)DefStamina88 Wrote: I had been diagnosed with ADD and partial dyslexia yesterday, so it's affected my thinking pretty bad. ... You too, huh? I have to deal with dyslexia and depression. But, don't let that stop you. I didn't. My reading teacher, the person who inspires me to write, said a lot of famous people had dyslexia and/or ADD. So, don't let that stop you. I hope you feel happier soon. I'll be waiting for that next chapter. ![]() ~China RE: [Beyblade Story] Never Forget The Past [RATED PG] - SilverChronos - Oct. 26, 2012 It's okay, def. I have narcolepsy. It's a sleeping disorder that makes me fall asleep due to excessive emotion, specifically anger. pm me for details. Just go with it. I hope you feel better about it, and I can't wait until (I just fell asleep, man do i hate that!) that next chapter! RE: [Beyblade Story] Never Forget The Past [RATED PG] - Duck - Oct. 26, 2012 (Oct. 26, 2012 3:05 AM)ukdl123 Wrote: It's okay, def. I have narcolepsy. It's a sleeping disorder that makes me fall asleep due to excessive emotion, specifically anger. pm me for details. Just go with it. I hope you feel better about it, and I can't wait until (I just fell asleep, man do i hate that!) that next chapter! I read about narcolepsy in a book, "The Mysterious Benedict Society". Are you serious? Hmm... RE: [Beyblade Story] Never Forget The Past [RATED PG] - King of Misfits - Oct. 26, 2012 I guess I have a lot of chapters to read now with my absence! I hope dyslexia doesn't get your way of being an excellent author! RE: [Beyblade Story] Never Forget The Past [RATED PG] - SilverChronos - Oct. 26, 2012 @ duck: that's my favorite book, because it brings awareness to a disorder that is actually the most common sleeping disorder, and it is also really fun to read! RE: [Beyblade Story] Never Forget The Past [RATED PG] - Dual - Oct. 26, 2012 Duck I love that series! The second book wasn't that great but still pretty good. Anyway back on topic- Def, you are a great writer no matter what. Nothing will change that. I hope you keep writing but would understand if you didn't. RE: [Beyblade Story] Never Forget The Past [RATED PG] - DefStamina88 - Oct. 29, 2012 Okay, so I've started on Chapter 9, but thing have gone from bad to worse... So, even though it turns out I don't have dyslexia, alongside my ADD, I now have been diagnosed with Autism. Great. Just carping great... ![]() RE: [Beyblade Story] Never Forget The Past [RATED PG] - Syco - Oct. 29, 2012 I thought autism comes only in the first 3 years of life? Anyways that should not put u down, we all love ur stories very much, what will happen if u leave the last story of urs in the middle!! |