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RE: [Beyblade Story] Never Forget The Past [I'm Retiring] - SilverChronos - Oct. 17, 2012

If Kira/Bri didn't end tragically, there wouldn't be as much drama or emotion. I love the story so far!


RE: [Beyblade Story] Never Forget The Past [I'm Retiring] - DefStamina88 - Oct. 19, 2012

Here's Chapter 6!!

RATED PG




RE: [Beyblade Story] Never Forget The Past [RATED PG] - SilverChronos - Oct. 19, 2012

Wow. What's up with Kira? Does he have a mental problem or something? I love the new chapter, BTW.


RE: [Beyblade Story] Never Forget The Past [RATED PG] - DefStamina88 - Oct. 20, 2012

Here's Chapter 7!!




RE: [Beyblade Story] Never Forget The Past [RATED PG] - Kujikato - Oct. 20, 2012

You spelled inhumane inbumane... A bit short and choppy tbh.


RE: [Beyblade Story] Never Forget The Past [RATED PG] - Duck - Oct. 20, 2012

Wow! I'm speechless! Chapter 6 and 7 were the best yet! Ohh, poor Devin. Crying


RE: [Beyblade Story] Never Forget The Past [RATED PG] - SilverChronos - Oct. 21, 2012

Hey, nice job def! This is really going along well.


RE: [Beyblade Story] Never Forget The Past [RATED PG] - DefStamina88 - Oct. 23, 2012

Chapter 8 is here!!!




RE: [Beyblade Story] Never Forget The Past [RATED PG] - SilverChronos - Oct. 23, 2012

Wow. Chapter 8 is quite entertaining. You obviously did a very nice job, it's just a little short...


RE: [Beyblade Story] Never Forget The Past [RATED PG] - UltimateOrion - Oct. 23, 2012

nice story


RE: [Beyblade Story] Never Forget The Past [RATED PG] - wtater888 - Oct. 23, 2012

Wow. Can you post a link to your other storys please.


RE: [Beyblade Story] Never Forget The Past [RATED PG] - SilverChronos - Oct. 24, 2012

@wtater: just search that. @def: I really find the content overall becoming somewhat lower compared to your other awesome stories. I love it, but content is lacking here a little bit.


RE: [Beyblade Story] Never Forget The Past [RATED PG] - Duck - Oct. 25, 2012

Hmm, I have to agree with ukdl123. This story is still great and all, but it's missing the glorious sparkle and shine of the other three. Wink

Are you okay, Drosselmeyer? DJ - Sad.


RE: [Beyblade Story] Never Forget The Past [RATED PG] - Syco - Oct. 25, 2012

The story is good but i have to agree with duck. The story seems Kira-centered


RE: [Beyblade Story] Never Forget The Past [RATED PG] - DefStamina88 - Oct. 25, 2012

To answer Duck's question, no, I am not. I had been diagnosed with ADD and partial dyslexia yesterday, so it's affected my thinking pretty bad. It's also put me in a pretty depressed mood...

Just saying guys, it might be a while before the next chapter hits this thread. Sorry guys. Crying


RE: [Beyblade Story] Never Forget The Past [RATED PG] - Duck - Oct. 25, 2012

You and ChinaBladeâ„¢? Aww, I hope you both don't let it bring you down. No matter what, you both are the awesomest writers ever! Wink

It's okay! I'll be waiting, quack! Grin


RE: [Beyblade Story] Never Forget The Past [RATED PG] - Syco - Oct. 25, 2012

WHAT!! THATS ROUGH MAN!!! Everything happens for a reason, so maybe this was meant for something good. And as Richard Bach said, " What the caterpillar calls the end, the master calls it a butterfly." Im not saying that this is the end, u just shouldnt be depressed bout it. Ryan higa has ADHD, he is one of the most famous utubers. Take it positively and use it as a strength, thats what great people do. To keep the bad thing in mind and mourn is not going to get u anywhere. So keep ur head high and call urself special.


RE: [Beyblade Story] Never Forget The Past [RATED PG] - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - Oct. 25, 2012

(Oct. 25, 2012  11:45 AM)DefStamina88 Wrote: I had been diagnosed with ADD and partial dyslexia yesterday, so it's affected my thinking pretty bad.

... You too, huh? I have to deal with dyslexia and depression. But, don't let that stop you. I didn't. My reading teacher, the person who inspires me to write, said a lot of famous people had dyslexia and/or ADD. So, don't let that stop you.
I hope you feel happier soon. I'll be waiting for that next chapter. Smile
~China



RE: [Beyblade Story] Never Forget The Past [RATED PG] - SilverChronos - Oct. 26, 2012

It's okay, def. I have narcolepsy. It's a sleeping disorder that makes me fall asleep due to excessive emotion, specifically anger. pm me for details. Just go with it. I hope you feel better about it, and I can't wait until (I just fell asleep, man do i hate that!) that next chapter!


RE: [Beyblade Story] Never Forget The Past [RATED PG] - Duck - Oct. 26, 2012

(Oct. 26, 2012  3:05 AM)ukdl123 Wrote: It's okay, def. I have narcolepsy. It's a sleeping disorder that makes me fall asleep due to excessive emotion, specifically anger. pm me for details. Just go with it. I hope you feel better about it, and I can't wait until (I just fell asleep, man do i hate that!) that next chapter!

I read about narcolepsy in a book, "The Mysterious Benedict Society". Are you serious? Hmm...


RE: [Beyblade Story] Never Forget The Past [RATED PG] - King of Misfits - Oct. 26, 2012

I guess I have a lot of chapters to read now with my absence!
I hope dyslexia doesn't get your way of being an excellent author!



RE: [Beyblade Story] Never Forget The Past [RATED PG] - SilverChronos - Oct. 26, 2012

@ duck: that's my favorite book, because it brings awareness to a disorder that is actually the most common sleeping disorder, and it is also really fun to read!


RE: [Beyblade Story] Never Forget The Past [RATED PG] - Dual - Oct. 26, 2012

Duck I love that series! The second book wasn't that great but still pretty good. Anyway back on topic- Def, you are a great writer no matter what. Nothing will change that. I hope you keep writing but would understand if you didn't.


RE: [Beyblade Story] Never Forget The Past [RATED PG] - DefStamina88 - Oct. 29, 2012

Okay, so I've started on Chapter 9, but thing have gone from bad to worse...

So, even though it turns out I don't have dyslexia, alongside my ADD, I now have been diagnosed with Autism.

Great. Just carping great... Crying


RE: [Beyblade Story] Never Forget The Past [RATED PG] - Syco - Oct. 29, 2012

I thought autism comes only in the first 3 years of life? Anyways that should not put u down, we all love ur stories very much, what will happen if u leave the last story of urs in the middle!!