World Beyblade Organization by Fighting Spirits Inc.
The Bey Islands(chapter 6 is up) - Printable Version

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RE: Story - wtater888 - Aug. 31, 2012

Finally figured out spoilers. :-)


RE: Story - sarabscientist - Aug. 31, 2012

Read my guide, right? Cool
Maybe you should name the story Smile


RE: Story - Infobleeder321 - Aug. 31, 2012

Fun story for everyone! Anyway wtater888 you should try to lengthen your stories.


RE: Story - Hassan Davis - Aug. 31, 2012

Name: Hassan D. (Sunny)
Bey: Meteo all-star(fottball player)
Age: 12
Additional Info(Not Required but happily accepted): Ryouga is his father and he loves to play football and crush beys and bey spirit.


RE: Story - Katniss - Sep. 01, 2012

Name: Shirou Nayzaman
Bey: Burn Rex 145WD
Age: 10
Additional Info: Hes an Orphan and is very short tempered. He whears a scarf and does not take it of ever. He likes soccer and brings his ball with him everywhere.

Ps I really like this story.



RE: Story - wtater888 - Sep. 02, 2012

Thanks. Please make your bey real(it can be customized but has to be legal and the parts real.(ah hem hassen davis)
chapter 3 is up.


RE: The Bey Islands(chapter 3 is up) - Katniss - Sep. 02, 2012

It is real, its my custom bey.
EDIT: Are you talking to me, sorry?


RE: The Bey Islands(chapter 3 is up) - wtater888 - Sep. 03, 2012

Only intends for people who will later post and hassan Davis.


RE: Story - Dual - Sep. 03, 2012

(Aug. 29, 2012  11:51 PM)Insomniac Wrote: I have a very bad sense of humor, forgive me.
I found it funny too XD The story could still use some work but its not bad.




RE: The Bey Islands(chapter 3 is up) - wtater888 - Sep. 03, 2012

Can someone explain please?


RE: The Bey Islands(chapter 3 is up) - Dual - Sep. 03, 2012

Hm? If you are reffering to the "i thought it was funny" thing, that was the whole random.com thing. Sorry for going off-topic.


RE: The Bey Islands(chapter 3 is up) - sarabscientist - Sep. 03, 2012

(Sep. 03, 2012  3:45 AM)wtater888 Wrote: Can someone explain please?

Okay, since you probably won't stop asking. I'll explain. Its like saying "I'm going to will put a banana in my banana milkshake" because its its obvious, what else would you use a randomizer for?

Its just funny, that's all. Nice work on your new chapters, and the name is cool too.


RE: The Bey Islands(chapter 3 is up) - wtater888 - Sep. 03, 2012

Yeah thanks. I just know there are probly other not so random sites.


RE: The Bey Islands(chapter 3 is up) - wtater888 - Sep. 03, 2012

Now lets get on topic anyway. We need 1 more character request.


RE: The Bey Islands(chapter 3 is up) - TakasuMouce - Sep. 03, 2012

The chapters are a bit too short. I think you should combine them, or at least write longer chapters in the future.

See my story in my signature as an example.


RE: The Bey Islands(chapter 3 is up) - wtater888 - Sep. 03, 2012

ok do you have a charachters request


RE: The Bey Islands(chapter 3 is up) - akio314 - Sep. 03, 2012

I'm impressed, that was done on a phone? I also like the concept.


RE: The Bey Islands(chapter 3 is up) - wtater888 - Sep. 03, 2012

No the starting template was. I now use my computers nut sometimes expand using my phone at night.


RE: The Bey Islands(chapter 3 is up) - Katniss - Sep. 04, 2012

I think you should keep them like they are because it makes me want to read it more.
Should I make another charecter?


RE: The Bey Islands(chapter 3 is up) - wtater888 - Sep. 05, 2012

Well they are going against each other. If that's ok I will gladly take yours or anyone else's characters. Also I will post this and then edit the tread. BEY PARTS MUST BE REAL. THE BEY CAN BE CUSTOM BUT MAKE THE PARTS REAL!!! Sorry for all caps.


RE: The Bey Islands(chapter 3 is up) - wtater888 - Sep. 06, 2012

Who would like to face Shirou Nayzaman?


RE: The Bey Islands(chapter 3 is up) - Katniss - Sep. 06, 2012

Yeh sure.
Name: Garry Forestfire
Age:9
Bey: Evil Libra SA165EWD
Aditional info: Blue hair,Blue eyes and Loves blue.


RE: The Bey Islands(chapter 3 is up) - dragonFang101 - Sep. 07, 2012

nice story , i have a character request
name - king
bey - spiral striker w105 mf
extra - has white hair, likes to be alone and is very destructive
plz can my character be a bad guy


RE: The Bey Islands(chapter 3 is up) - Katniss - Sep. 09, 2012

When is chapter 4 comming?
(No rush intended)


RE: The Bey Islands(chapter 3 is up) - BattleLion - Sep. 09, 2012

Nice Story... Keep it up..