RE: [Bey-Story] The Path to Victory! [Accepting Requests] - King of Misfits - Jul. 31, 2012
Here it is!
Chapter 9!
Chapter 9
Emerge! Dark Knight's Attack!
I was very nervous. I would be facing the leader of the French Team. I clutched Reviser in my hand.
"We can do this!" I thought to myself.
"The final match is.... Joey Ryutan vs Freud Emprunte!"
I finally really got to get a look a Freud. He had blonde, wavy hair, light blue eyes, and wore a robe with a noble amount of jewels and badges.
"You will be stunned by Dark Knight's power!" yelled Freud.
This was it, my first opportunity to show the world my worth.
I felt my heart rate rise and my energy become visible.
"3,2,1 GO SHOOOOT!" we yelled.
"DARK KNIGHT!" shouted Freud.
Dark Knight smacked in Reviser, knocking him back.
"Recover!" I commanded.
Reviser got up and hit Dark Knight's crystal wheel, cracking it.
"Hah! That won't stop me!" yelled Freud as Dark Knight hit Reviser.
A dark aura was slowly absorbing Freud. He let out a menacing laugh.
"Spin! Increase your velocity!" screamed Freud.
Dark Knight Spanish faster and faster until a vortex emerged. Reviser was slowly being dragged in.
"Reviser!" I cried.
"THERE IS NO USE! SPECIAL MOVE! DARK IMPALE!" roared Freud, the dark aura consuming him even more.
A giant Dark Knight erupted out of Dark Knight. He swayed his sword in a circular motion, creating a black hole.
A green aura surrounded me.
"NEVER GIVE UP HOPE! SPECIAL MOVE! RAGING LEVITHAN FURY!" I yelled.
Reviser stood his ground until a giant Levithan warrior erupted out of Reviser. He plunged his axes rapidly into the vortex as it subsided. The axes finally made the blow, and it was over.
"Yes!" I exclaimed.
Dark Knight was lodged into the ground next to Freud.
"Congratulations! You will advance to face the Greek team!" yelled DJ.
I put my fist in the air, in victory.
I knew the Greek team could be a major threat...
RE: [Bey-Story] The Path to Victory! [Accepting Requests] - UkzZ-Element - Jul. 31, 2012
Amazing story bro hope all the other ones are as epic as this one :-)
RE: [Bey-Story] The Path to Victory! [Accepting Requests] - Hitsugiya - Jul. 31, 2012
Great chapter, how come there wasn't one yesterday?
RE: [Bey-Story] The Path to Victory! [Accepting Requests] - King of Misfits - Jul. 31, 2012
(Jul. 31, 2012 5:00 PM)Hitsugiya Wrote: Great chapter, how come there wasn't one yesterday?
I was on a plane for half the day XD
RE: [Bey-Story] The Path to Victory! [Accepting Requests] - King of Misfits - Jul. 31, 2012
Chapter 10!
Chapter 10
The Greek Team
I got on the flight just in time. We were on our way to Greece. I wondered how the Greek team would be.
"We have arrived in Greece, have a nice trip." said the loudspeaker.
Mike was awakened by the voice.
"Wha? Oh!" he muttered getting up.
Ruki was already out of his seat, walking out of the plane. I hurried out so I could catch up. We were greeted by the Greek team.
"We are The Divine Destroyers, I am the team captain, Keenan Arcadia." he said.
Keenan had long black hair that went down to his waist that covered half his face showing to green eyes, a black and white hoodie, black converse shoes, and a ring on his index finger that had "KA" carved into it.
"I use Sphere Orion 125SR" he added.
"Hi! I am Xena Demo, I use Jade Rex R145CS." she said.
Xena had blonde hair, green eyes, and a white dress.
A girl hopped next to her.
"I am Angell Demo, I use Death Gil 100WD." she exclaimed.
Angell had brown hair, blue eyes, and a black dress.
I figured these battles in Greece would be tough ones...
RE: [Bey-Story] The Path to Victory! [Accepting Requests] - UkzZ-Element - Aug. 01, 2012
EPOC!!! Bro. Hope new chapters arrive with more epicness and awesomeness love the whole greek themed team bro! :-)
RE: [Bey-Story] The Path to Victory! [Accepting Requests] - King of Misfits - Aug. 01, 2012
What time is it?
Chapter 11 Time!!!!!
The whole team was excited to face the Greek team.
"I wonder who I will face?" wondered Mike.
"Today we will have a special match, requested by Mr.Arcadia, we will have a team battle royale!" shouted the Greek DJ.
"Wha?" Mike, Ruki, and I gasped at once.
Keenan smiled and Xena and Angell jumped in excitement.
"This is our specialty, watch out Vanquishers." said Keenan.
I knew this could be very risky.
"3,2,1 GOOO SHOOT!" we yelled.
The Greek team seemed to form a line.
"Go Now!" the Greek team shouted.
The line of beys cornered Reviser, Golem, and Gryph.
"Break out!" I shouted.
Reviser smacked Rex and Gil out of the way.
"Get them now! SPECIAL MOVE! RAGE QUAKE!" yelled Mike.
The whole stadium shook, Orion, Gil, and Rex were sent into the air.
"Duo Move! Diamond Break!" shouted Xena and Angell.
Rex and Gil came down in a diamond-infested veil, knocking out Golem.
"Damnit!" cried Mike. I looked over to see Orion grinding Ruki's Gryph against the wall. I looked at Ruki, he had a dark veil surrounding him.
"Ruki are you okay?" I questioned.
His red eyes looked over.
"LEAVE ME ALONE!" He shouted on reply.
Keenan had a sign of fear in his eyes.
"SPECIAL MOVE! TIME SPHERE!" yelled Keenan.
Orion turned to left spin, speeding up time. Ruki's dark veil grew bigger.
"SPECIAL MOVE! HELL DEATH WING!" Ruki screamed.
The whole stadium exploded. Orion and Reviser had been struck out, and all the other beys too, except for Gryph. Ruki laid motionless on the floor...
RE: [Bey-Story] The Path to Victory! [Accepting Requests] - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - Aug. 01, 2012
Ruki! Nuuuuuu! Get your butt up, dammit!
RE: [Bey-Story] The Path to Victory! [Accepting Requests] - King of Misfits - Aug. 02, 2012
He will get up, maybe
I need requests fir the Irish team! Please
RE: [Bey-Story] The Path to Victory! [Accepting Requests] - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - Aug. 02, 2012
*Gasp* Irish team! Oh boy I love Irish people 'cause I'm Irish!
Name: Carlin O'Carroll
Gender: Male
Age: 12
Appearance: He has light orange, spiky hair, with a fly away curl, green eyes, and freckles around his nose. He has on an orange striped, long sleeve shirt shirt with a coller, a green sweat shirt with a 4 leaf clover on it, orange jeans, and green converses.
Personality: He's a very happy, loveable, little prankster. Nothing can bring him down. He enjoys battling and making friends. He is the number on blader in Ireland and wants to become number one in the United Kingdom. (He's the leader of the team.)
Likes: Rock music, Pop music, Pranking his friends, A good battle, Ice cream (Eating in general)
Dislikes: "Meanies", Getting sick, When people hurt his bey, Spicy food, Getting in trouble
Beyblade: Flash Sagittario CH120R2F
Special Moves: Flaming Jumper (Bey jumps into air and sets on fire. It then comes down and jumps around on the top of the opposing bey.), Flame Surge Assult (Bey sets on fire and then spins around stadium at high speeds, causing a fire torando. It can attack the opposing bey and/or drain it's spin.)
I hope that's good
RE: [Bey-Story] The Path to Victory! [Accepting Requests] - King of Misfits - Aug. 02, 2012
(Aug. 02, 2012 3:49 PM)ChinaBladeâ„¢ Wrote: *Gasp* Irish team! Oh boy I love Irish people 'cause I'm Irish!
Name: Carlin O'Carroll
Gender: Male
Age: 12
Appearance: He has light orange, spiky hair, with a fly away curl, green eyes, and freckles around his nose. He has on an orange striped, long sleeve shirt shirt with a coller, a green sweat shirt with a 4 leaf clover on it, orange jeans, and green converses.
Personality: He's a very happy, loveable, little prankster. Nothing can bring him down. He enjoys battling and making friends. He is the number on blader in Ireland and wants to become number one in the United Kingdom. (He's the leader of the team.)
Likes: Rock music, Pop music, Pranking his friends, A good battle, Ice cream (Eating in general)
Dislikes: "Meanies", Getting sick, When people hurt his bey, Spicy food, Getting in trouble
Beyblade: Flash Sagittario CH120R2F
Special Moves: Flaming Jumper (Bey jumps into air and sets on fire. It then comes down and jumps around on the top of the opposing bey.), Flame Surge Assult (Bey sets on fire and then spins around stadium at high speeds, causing a fire torando. It can attack the opposing bey and/or drain it's spin.)
I hope that's good Thanks! I think Joey has found his match
RE: [Bey-Story] The Path to Victory! [Accepting Requests] - UkzZ-Element - Aug. 03, 2012
Epic real epic like the way Rukie and Keenan have a crazy battle at the end awesome bro keep it up!
RE: [Bey-Story] The Path to Victory! [Accepting Requests] - King of Misfits - Aug. 03, 2012
This Chapter is told in Ruki's point of viewÂ
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Chapter 12Â
Ireland's TeamÂ
I woke up on a plane. Lots of thoughts flowed through my head. Who had won the match? Where was I going? And what had happened during that match? Then I remembered. I was overwhelmed by darkness, and it transformer my spirit and soul into pure darkness. I looked over to see Mike staring at me.Â
"Joey! Ruki's awake!" yelled Mike.Â
Joey ran over with a smile on his face.Â
"Ruki! You won the match! We're going to Ireland! But, what happened to you?" questioned Joey.Â
"I don't know." I replied.Â
"We have arrived in Ireland, enjoy you're stay." said a loudspeaker.Â
We were greeted by a group of people.
 "Hello! We are the Serpents! I am the team captain, Carlin O'Carroll, I use Flash Saggitario CH120R2F!" Carlin said.Â
A boy hopped beside him.Â
"Hey! I'm Keir Walsh! I use Archer Killerken DF145WD!" he said.Â
Then, a girl skipped over.Â
"Ello' I'm Maebh Gallagher! I use Duo Striker 230CS."Â
"Hello! We are the Vanquishers! I use Reviser Saramanda 90RDF!"Â
Then Joey's mouth opened wide. 90 was barely holding on, many cracks and dents. RDF was demolished.Â
"Well, time to go to the Bey-Shop and get some new parts!" said Mike.Â
"I did this, my dark form really beat up Reviser." I thought to myself.Â
"Hey bros! I'm Mike! I use Beserker Golem DF145CF!" said Mike to the Irish team.Â
"I am Ruki Takanori. I use Gryph Gargole E230CS." I said.Â
Joey ran to the nearest Bey-Shop. After awhile he came back.Â
"Say hello to Saramanda Reviser BD145CS! My new bey!" He yelled.Â
I knew his new bey would aid him even more on his journey...Â
RE: [Bey-Story] The Path to Victory! [Accepting Requests] - King of Misfits - Aug. 04, 2012
Chapter 13
Mike's Potential
It was time for the first match between The Vanquishers and The Serpents.
"Ello' Today we have..... Mike Arutan vs Keir Walsh!" shouted the DJ.
Mike gritted his teeth. I knew he did not want to lose.
"I will win! My losses are behind me!" Mike shouted.
"Be warned, my Archer Killerken has great power." replied Keir.
Then the legendary countdown began.
"3,2,1 GOOOOO SHOOT!" they yelled.
Killerken dashed to the very edge of the stadium.
"What strategy is that?" Mike questioned.
Golem started to dash towards Killerken. Then, Killerken started to circle the stadium on the edge. It created a vacuum that started to suck in Golem.
"That, is my strategy." said Keir, grinning from ear to ear.
Golem reached the edge of the stadium, and Killerken circled and smashed into Golem, smacking it into the air.
"I've had ENOUGH!" yelled Mike as a purple aura surrounded him.
Golem came down, landing right on his tip from 10,000 feet in the air, and was un-damaged. It left a crack in the middle of the stadium.
"SPECIAL MOVE! MOLTEN TREMOR!" yelled Mike.
More crack started to form in the stadium and lava spurted out if them. The lava caught Killerken and sent it flying next to Keir.
"Yes!" yelled Mike.
I knew this wouldn't be the last Victory Mike would have...
RE: [Bey-Story] The Path to Victory! [Accepting Requests] - King of Misfits - Aug. 05, 2012
Dayum, two chapters in a row, no reply...
Might as well make it three! XD
Ruki was more than ready for this.
"I WILL WIN!" I heard him shout.
"The Next match will be.... Ruki Takenori versus Maebh Gallagher!" DJ shouted.
Maebh had a smirk on her face.
"3,2,1 GOOO SHOOT!" they yelled.
Striker went to the center, and disappeared. Ruki froze in awe.
"What kind of illusion is this?" Ruki questioned.
Gryph was being smacked around by an invisible force. Ruki tried dodging the various attacks, but he failed.
"Try harder!" Ruki shouted.
Maebh just stood there quietly.
Ruki slowly got madder and madder, until he broke.
"STOP!" Ruki bellowed at last.
The familiar dark aura rose, and it was bigger than before.
"Hm." grunted Maebh.
Striker appeared again, then quickly multiplied itself!
"All this trickery will drive Ruki deeper into the darkness!" I thought.
Then Ruki's temper was pushed to the edge.
"SPECIAL MOVE! HELL DEATH WING!" shouted Ruki.
"I guess it's time for me to do something! Darkness never prevails! Special Move! Heavenly Mirage!" shouted Maebh.
A large dark explosion filled the arena, then, 100s of beams of light came down, overwhelming the darkness.
Gryph had been knocked out. Ruki fell to his knees as the darkness left him.
I knew we had to stop the darkness from fully consuming him, or it will be too late...
RE: [Bey-Story] The Path to Victory! [Accepting Requests] - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - Aug. 05, 2012
Nuuuu Ruki
RE: [Bey-Story] The Path to Victory! [Accepting Requests] - Anchor - Aug. 07, 2012
I got a request
Name: Hokorashi Urusai
Gender: Male
Looks: Personality: He is extremely cocky and arrogant. He thinks he can beat anyone and is the biggest show-off ever. He almost never wears a shirt because he is a show-off. He loves the color Orange and hates Stamina beyblades. He is all about quick attack non-stop when he blades. He talks very loud and is kind of dumb. He also does Tennis, Basketball, Baseball, Soccer, Football, Track, Boxing, and Fencing. His motto is "True confidence leaves no room for jealousy, when you know you’re great, you have no need to hate." His dream is to be the best, at blading, and everything else he does.
Bey: Ifraid Phoenic GB145RF
Type: Attack
Special Move: Execution Drive. Ifraid Phoenic's beast comes out with a big red sword and soars towards the other bey and slashs it with great power. The sword looks something like this but red; http://www.google.com/imgres?q=big+sword&hl=en&safe=off&sa=G&biw=1143&bih=555&tbm=isch&tbnid=MD8FKHaJfL8-IM:&imgrefurl=http://www.norstar1.webs.com/animeswords.htm&docid=Hef7yCVNcKuyyM&imgurl=http://webzoom.freewebs.com/norstar1/1Ew1145xl2.jpg&w=698&h=602&ei=zsggUKfaPIr96gG9x4G4Ag&zoom=1 He also has another special move called 'Infinite Nova'. In this move, Ifraid Phoenic soars high up and turns into big red ball of light that then explodes and lots of lazers come hurling down at the enemy bey at high velocity like little meteors.
I hope he gets in! And, Ifraid Phoenic's beast should look like a Red Samurai-Warrior guy with phoenix like elements like flaming wings and fire swords. His regular sword is a Katana though, he uses the bigger sword, for the special move. You can pick what team he is is in.
RE: [Bey-Story] The Path to Victory! [Accepting Requests] - King of Misfits - Aug. 07, 2012
Chapter 15
Ireland's Last Clash
It was time for the final match between Carlin and I. My body was trembling.
"Stop It! You are over-reacting!" I thought to myself.
If I lost, all the Vanquisher's hard work would have no meaning. My phone started to ring.
"Hello?"
"Yes! It is me, Keenan. You are in great danger! Next, you will face the German team! Right now, Angell is battling a bey, Dragoon Ifraid W145SWD!"
"Shadow..." I muttered.
"Take great percaution while battling this team! No! Angell!!!!!-"
"Hello? What happened!"
The line had been disconnected. I decided to focus on the present, not the future. I finally got to get a look at Carlin. He had light orange, spiky hair, with a fly away curl, green eyes, and freckles around his nose. He had on an orange striped, long sleeve shirt shirt with a coller, a green sweat shirt with a 4 leaf clover on it, orange jeans, and green converses.
"Are you ready for our battle?" questioned Carlin.
"Yes, most definetly." I replied.
"Good! The best of luck to the both of us!" Carlin exclaimed.
"3,2,1 GOOOOO-"
Time stopped in my world, and I realized what I was fighting for.
Entering Flashback
Me and Lucy were walking through the park, it was a pleasant day.
"Hey Joe! Wanna battle?" questioned Lucy, holding up a bey which I can't remember.
"Sure!" I replied, holding up Death Bull TH170CS, my old bey.
Before we could head to a stadium, two men in black and white suits, grabbed Lucy by the arm.
"She belongs to us, back in Germany." they said.
"No! Mom sent me here, to get away from you, The Dark Nova Association." Lucy whined.
While they were talking I threw a punch at one of the men's faces. He pushed into the ground, fracturing my spinal cord.
"No! Joey!" Lucy cried.
The man decided he had had enough. He grabbed one of my legs, and threw me into the dirt, blacking me out.
* * *
I woke up in a hospital bed, looked around, and didn't find Lucy.
"They got her, I will go to Germany and save you Lucy!" I yelled.
Exiting Flashback
"SHOOOT!" we yelled.
I was back, and ready.
"Go Saramanda!" I yelled.
Saggitario was shot into the wall, and rebounded, hitting me back.
"Saggitario! Cut into em'!" Shouted Carlin.
Then, Saggitario started a long series of short side-attacks, disabling Saramanda.
"Jump!" I yelled.
Saramanda jumped, landing on Saggitario. Saggitario quickly sped away.
"Hah! Now it's our turn to jump!" exclaimed Carlin.
Saggitario started landing various jumping strike from the air.
"Now! SPECIAL MOVE! FLAMING JUMPER!" Carlin yelled.
Saggitario set on fire, and jumped on Saramanda, sending him deep into the ground.
"It's all over!" exclaimed Carlin.
"No, it's not, it never is." I replied.
The hole in the ground started glowing green.
"SPECIAL MOVE! TRUE WARRIOR LEVITHAN DESTRUCTION!" I screamed.
The whole stadium was filled with a giant, armored, Levithan warrior. It smacked it's sword onto Saggitario, then gabbed Saggitario until it was in the cave where the stadium use to be. Saggitario was destroyed, and the Levithan warrior had won. I would fight, battle, and do anything to get Lucy back...
This is my favorite chapter so far...
RE: [Bey-Story] The Path to Victory! [Accepting Requests] - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - Aug. 07, 2012
That was awesome! But... Carlin's bey was destoryed?!
Anyways, my cousin's name is Lucy...
I can't read this story the same way anymore. XDDDD
RE: [Bey-Story] The Path to Victory! [Accepting Requests] - Guitar Blader - Aug. 07, 2012
Name: Kazuya
Appearance: age 26 but looks 16 short japanese with bright orange hair plays a gold gibson lespaul always wares aloha tee and black cargo pants
Personality: always keeps his cool "no can speek good english yet" a little crazy
Bey: METAL STONE FACE Dregooon Dragooon BD145 MB
Type: balence
Special move: no real name ideas (oponent instantly stops and falls apart) lol
RE: [Bey-Story] The Path to Victory! [Accepting Requests] - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - Aug. 07, 2012
(Aug. 07, 2012 5:20 PM)Guitar Blader Wrote: Name: Charly(male)
Appearance: Charly Shene
Bey: METAL STONE FACE Dregooon Dragooon BD145 MB
Type: balence
Special move: winning (oponent instantly stops and falls apart) lol
... Do I sense a troll here?
RE: [Bey-Story] The Path to Victory! [Accepting Requests] - Guitar Blader - Aug. 07, 2012
h no i want him to see the epic bey combo but im a huge fan of this kind of thing, but searously use the bey not the toolbag lol
RE: [Bey-Story] The Path to Victory! [Accepting Requests] - King of Misfits - Aug. 07, 2012
Guitar Blader
Hehe, change it to something better.
RE: [Bey-Story] The Path to Victory! [Accepting Requests] - Guitar Blader - Aug. 07, 2012
what the combo? its the new heaviest! or my name?
im as fan who likes your work so far (slow reader) but have bad habit of trolling when i get real board. im so sorry ill deleat it
RE: [Bey-Story] The Path to Victory! [Accepting Requests] - King of Misfits - Aug. 07, 2012
Just change the name b
And give me a description,
Use the format shown in the OP and I will gladly use your character
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