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RE: Beyblade metal universe - Tri - Jun. 03, 2012
Hey, I have some things to say about your story....
-Your Chapters are very short
-I honestly think it could be better.
I know you will improve as time comes, but this story, honestly I don't like. Here is another tip, Put each chapter in a spoiler, so it is easy to find. Don't get mad over this post, it is just some criticism.
RE: Beyblade metal universe - Thunder Dome - Jun. 03, 2012
Gravity Brave
Fangs.of.Death
BattleBlader357
This is the order of who's character will appear first
TriSix
The next chapter will be long
RE: Beyblade metal universe - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - Jun. 03, 2012
(Jun. 02, 2012 11:51 PM)Gravity Brave Wrote: Name: Karan Brar
Age:12
Strength: 7
Bey: Meteo L-Drago LW105LF
Special Moves: Dragon Soaring Rage, Ultimate Roaring Dragon Blast
Appearance: Short Black Hair, a natural tan, a red and orange hat with a picture of a yellow L-Drago on it, Red sports jacket with a black shirt underneath, black skinny jeans, and some red Jordans
You requested the exact same character from me. And I already put him in the story. That's not fair and uncool.
(Jun. 03, 2012 8:07 PM)Thunder Dome Wrote: Gravity Brave
Fangs.of.Death
BattleBlader357
This is the order of who's character will appear first
TriSix
The next chapter will be long
Karan can't be in the story. He's already in mine and is a main character. This isn't fair.
RE: Beyblade metal universe - Thunder Dome - Jun. 03, 2012
He is. I had no idea. Sorry I will have to take him out of the story.
RE: Beyblade metal universe - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - Jun. 03, 2012
(Jun. 03, 2012 8:13 PM)Thunder Dome Wrote: He is. I had no idea. Sorry I will have to take him out of the story.
Thank you.
RE: Beyblade metal universe - Thunder Dome - Jun. 03, 2012
People vote if you want to choose the team because next time a put up a chapter (which will be later today) I will need the team name okay
RE: Beyblade metal universe - Driger Kai - Jun. 03, 2012
(Jun. 03, 2012 8:11 PM)Ozone Wrote:Its annoying when people use the same character in different stories.(Jun. 02, 2012 11:51 PM)Gravity Brave Wrote: Name: Karan Brar
Age:12
Strength: 7
Bey: Meteo L-Drago LW105LF
Special Moves: Dragon Soaring Rage, Ultimate Roaring Dragon Blast
Appearance: Short Black Hair, a natural tan, a red and orange hat with a picture of a yellow L-Drago on it, Red sports jacket with a black shirt underneath, black skinny jeans, and some red Jordans
You requested the exact same character from me. And I already put him in the story. That's not fair and uncool.
(Jun. 03, 2012 8:07 PM)Thunder Dome Wrote: Gravity Brave
Fangs.of.Death
BattleBlader357
This is the order of who's character will appear first
TriSix
The next chapter will be long
Karan can't be in the story. He's already in mine and is a main character. This isn't fair.
RE: Beyblade metal universe - Thunder Dome - Jun. 03, 2012
The team will be called Fire-X
RE: Beyblade metal universe - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - Jun. 03, 2012
Quote:Its annoying when people use the same character in different stories.
I know right
RE: Beyblade metal universe - Thunder Dome - Jun. 03, 2012
(Jun. 03, 2012 8:24 PM)Ozone Wrote:That is what I call lazyQuote:Its annoying when people use the same character in different stories.
I know right
Edit: Lets get back on topic
This will return June 11
RE: Beyblade metal universe - pyrus10000 - Jun. 10, 2012
(Jun. 03, 2012 1:56 AM)Thunder Dome Wrote: This is not a RPG
Pyrus10000 your character will come back later
Just noticed this. Thank you for including my character in your story. I really enjoy your story so far
RE: Beyblade metal universe - Thunder Dome - Jun. 11, 2012
Sorry guys read the OP
RE: Beyblade metal universe - sum 472 - Jun. 11, 2012
Character requests are bad, it turns your story from your idea to ''Kay gotta fit this character in'', and most of the requests don't list full details like the characters personality.
RE: [Closed]Beyblade metal universe - stormpegasus12 - Jul. 14, 2012
I want to submit a character:
Name: Manny
Last name: Mata
Bey: Rock Pegasus
Moves: Rock slide, Earthquake, Rock defense wall, and Hammer wing.
Looks: Black hair up to eyes, Dark brown eyes, Black t-shirt, Black fingerless gloves, Blue pants, and Black shoes.
Sorry if i submitted my character late. Hope I'm not that late to submit a character.
RE: [Closed]Beyblade metal universe - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - Jul. 14, 2012
stormpegasus12 Wrote:I want to submit a character:
Name: Manny
Last name: Mata
Bey: Rock Pegasus
Moves: Rock slide, Earthquake, Rock defense wall, and Hammer wing.
Looks: Black hair up to eyes, Dark brown eyes, Black t-shirt, Black fingerless gloves, Blue pants, and Black shoes.
Read the first line in the OP. Plus the title says closed. He's obviously not taking requests.