The Alpha of Beyblade ( Character Requests Needed)

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RE: The Alpha of Beyblade ( Character Requests Needed) - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - May. 21, 2012

Character Request:

Name: Kiba Fubuki (Female)
Description: Long, jet-black hair (resembles the pokemon Zoroark's mane), glasses (like Doji's), black leather jacket, white t -shirt, jean shorts, knee-high black boots, sky blue eys, and a long scar under her left eye.
She is also very muscular and enjoys karate and martial arts. She is offten found listening to Dubstep, older rock bands, such as AC/DC, pop music, and rap. She is also a skilled artist.
Personality: Dark, mysterious, friendly when she needs to be, loyal, heroic, mercyless in battle
Bey: Phantom Wolf S130MB
Special Moves: Darkness Destruction Blast, Wolf Fang Destruction, Shadow Nightmare Assult

Ironicly, I imagined her related to Doji. I don't know how this happened. XD

RE: The Alpha of Beyblade ( Character Requests Needed) - Duck - May. 21, 2012

(May. 21, 2012 8:09 AM)Ozone Wrote: Character Request:

Name: Kiba Fubuki (Female)
Description: Long, jet-black hair (resembles the pokemon Zoroark's mane), glasses (like Doji's), black leather jacket, white t -shirt, jean shorts, knee-high black boots, sky blue eys, and a long scar under her left eye.
She is also very muscular and enjoys karate and martial arts. She is offten found listening to Dubstep, older rock bands, such as AC/DC, pop music, and rap. She is also a skilled artist.
Personality: Dark, mysterious, friendly when she needs to be, loyal, heroic, mercyless in battle
Bey: Phantom Wolf S130MB
Special Moves: Darkness Destruction Blast, Wolf Fang Destruction, Shadow Nightmare Assult

Ironicly, I imagined her related to Doji. I don't know how this happened. XD

Completely for curiosity's sake, how did you come up with the name Kiba? Tongue_out_wink

RE: The Alpha of Beyblade ( Character Requests Needed) - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - May. 21, 2012

(May. 21, 2012 8:26 AM)Fakirs Duck Wrote:
(May. 21, 2012 8:09 AM)Ozone Wrote: Character Request:

Name: Kiba Fubuki (Female)
Description: Long, jet-black hair (resembles the pokemon Zoroark's mane), glasses (like Doji's), black leather jacket, white t -shirt, jean shorts, knee-high black boots, sky blue eys, and a long scar under her left eye.
She is also very muscular and enjoys karate and martial arts. She is offten found listening to Dubstep, older rock bands, such as AC/DC, pop music, and rap. She is also a skilled artist.
Personality: Dark, mysterious, friendly when she needs to be, loyal, heroic, mercyless in battle
Bey: Phantom Wolf S130MB
Special Moves: Darkness Destruction Blast, Wolf Fang Destruction, Shadow Nightmare Assult

Ironicly, I imagined her related to Doji. I don't know how this happened. XD

Completely for curiosity's sake, how did you come up with the name Kiba?

Well, I was messing around with my old Naruto game and i was playing as the character 'Kiba Inuzuka' or something like that, and i thought: "Well that would be an awesome name for a role play person!" and BAM. There's Kiba. XD

RE: The Alpha of Beyblade ( Character Requests Needed) - Duck - May. 21, 2012

(May. 21, 2012  8:30 AM)Ozone Wrote:
(May. 21, 2012  8:26 AM)Fakirs Duck Wrote:
(May. 21, 2012  8:09 AM)Ozone Wrote: Character Request:

Name: Kiba Fubuki (Female)
Description: Long, jet-black hair (resembles the pokemon Zoroark's mane), glasses (like Doji's), black leather jacket, white t -shirt, jean shorts, knee-high black boots, sky blue eys, and a long scar under her left eye.
She is also very muscular and enjoys karate and martial arts. She is offten found listening to Dubstep, older rock bands, such as AC/DC, pop music, and rap. She is also a skilled artist.
Personality: Dark, mysterious, friendly when she needs to be, loyal, heroic, mercyless in battle
Bey: Phantom Wolf S130MB
Special Moves: Darkness Destruction Blast, Wolf Fang Destruction, Shadow Nightmare Assult

Ironicly, I imagined her related to Doji. I don't know how this happened. XD

Completely for curiosity's sake, how did you come up with the name Kiba?

Well, I was messing around with my old Naruto game and i was playing as the character 'Kiba Inuzuka' or something like that, and i thought: "Well that would be an awesome name for a role play person!" and BAM. There's Kiba. XD

Oh, I see... I had something totally different (and stupid) in mind! XD

RE: The Alpha of Beyblade ( Character Requests Needed) - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - May. 21, 2012

(May. 21, 2012  8:36 AM)Fakirs Duck Wrote:
(May. 21, 2012  8:30 AM)Ozone Wrote:
(May. 21, 2012  8:26 AM)Fakirs Duck Wrote: Completely for curiosity's sake, how did you come up with the name Kiba?

Well, I was messing around with my old Naruto game and i was playing as the character 'Kiba Inuzuka' or something like that, and i thought: "Well that would be an awesome name for a role play person!" and BAM. There's Kiba. XD

Oh, I see... I had something totally different (and stupid) in mind! XD

Lol, and what was that, may I ask? XD

RE: The Alpha of Beyblade ( Character Requests Needed) - Dark Hole - May. 21, 2012

Name: Ace Powder AKA- Brad Concoa
Character Desc. Burado Won the World championships three years ago but went missing, Brad has come back under the name Ace Powder, He uses three different beys so no one knows what beyblades coming. He also has his own Beylauncher which can launch all THREE beys at ONCE.
Character Personality: Tough but Silent and Deadly
Beyblade( Real or Made up): Hell Horuseus 90 MB, Hell Horuseus 90 MF, Hell Horuseus 90 MS
Beyblade Spec. Move HH 90 MB- Bloody Screech, HH 90 MF- Satins Call, HH 90 MS- Metal Claw, All of them- Legend Inferno Blast

Looks- Long Gold hair, Black T-Shirt and Red Jacket, Blue & Red hat, Long Dark Blue jeans with knees cut

Bad Girl
Name- Fiona Lust
Character Looks- Long Red hair, Big Blue Eyes, Skinny White body, Medium boobs, White and Gold Clothing
Description- Fiona is a new girl to the city who beyblades and befriends the main character, She then gets her bey broken in battle and wants revenge, so she tries to destroy all of the beys in her way to defeating Brad Concoa

Beyblade- Basalt Capricorn 145 D, (new bey when evil) Diablo Bull BD145 MB
Special move- (old bey) Hammer Hoof, (new bey) Black Hole

RE: The Alpha of Beyblade ( Character Requests Needed) - King of Misfits - May. 21, 2012

(May. 20, 2012 9:18 PM)Yukio Wrote: Put the chapters in the OP.
It makes it easier for someone to find the chapters.

I don't know how?

Also, can I use both of Fakir's Duck's and Ozone's in the same chapter?

RE: The Alpha of Beyblade ( Character Requests Needed) - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - May. 21, 2012

Quote:I don't know how?
Also, can I use both of Fakir's Duck's and Ozone's in the same chapter?

You mean put Kiba as a bad guy? That's fine with me, although I imagined Kiba as a good guy. Tongue_out

RE: The Alpha of Beyblade ( Character Requests Needed) - King of Misfits - May. 21, 2012

(May. 21, 2012 7:12 PM)Ozone Wrote:
Quote:I don't know how?
Also, can I use both of Fakir's Duck's and Ozone's in the same chapter?

You mean put Kiba as a bad guy? That's fine with me, although I imagined Kiba as a good guy.

Oh um okay! She can be a good guy!

RE: The Alpha of Beyblade ( Character Requests Needed) - Duck - May. 21, 2012

Sure thing! Aragonite is a bad guy; do whatever you want with him! Oh, and my stupid thought was that you were one of my favorite writers online, Ozone... XD

RE: The Alpha of Beyblade ( Character Requests Needed) - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - May. 21, 2012

(May. 21, 2012 10:04 PM)Fakirs Duck Wrote: Sure thing! Aragonite is a bad guy; do whatever you want with him! Oh, and my stupid thought was that you were one of my favorite writers online, Ozone... XD

Oh XD

RE: The Alpha of Beyblade ( Character Requests Needed) - TakasuMouce - May. 21, 2012

To put chapters in the OP, go to edit the OP, then copy and paste the chapters. Put them is spoilers, also labling them with what chapter number it is/was.
This is the code (without spaces)
[spoiler = the chapter title/ number ]
Chapter.
[/spoiler ]

It will look like this:

the chapter title/ number (Click to View)

RE: The Alpha of Beyblade ( Character Requests Needed) - King of Misfits - May. 21, 2012

OH MY GOSH! Im sorry Ozone! I mistook your request! I thought it was someone elses. Kiba is a good guy Smile

RE: The Alpha of Beyblade ( Character Requests Needed) - Gravity Brave - May. 22, 2012

EVIL CHARACTER REQUEST-

Name- Yaruto Hirohama

Bey- Hell Nemesis 230 MB

Special Move- Black Vortex of Destruction

Description- Black long cloak, spiky orange hair with yellow highlights, and a scar down his cheek.

Personality- evil ,cruel,likes destroying beys, laughs evilly a lot.

RE: The Alpha of Beyblade ( Character Requests Needed) - King of Misfits - May. 22, 2012

CHAPTER 8!

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Chapter 8
A New Threat
A giant amount of happiness stayed with me for a couple hours after the tournament. Many people congradulated me on winning. I thought that Assassin Nocturnal should be fixed up after such a battle. I went to the Screw Beyshop. The shopkeeper's was Moki ( female). ' Hey! What can I do for you?" she said. '" Can you just fix up my bey." I said. "Sure Thing!" she replied. I stood in the lobby, waiting. I saw pictures of Ginkga and Masamune, battling. After 20 minutes, my bey was done. I went to the Beypark to battle. " Why Hello! Are you the town champion?" said a quiet voice. "Yeah I am!" I replied. " Let's Battle, NOW! I am Aragonite Stilticus, the leader of The Wolf Den organization." I accepted, questioning myself if he is insane, really evil, or a crazy homeless man. He wore a trench coat with purple spikes and purple boots, long black hair, purple isidescent eyes, and pale skin. Before I could put my bey on the launcher, a boy in a blue sweater, blue baggy jeans, and blue eyes, jumped in front of me. " He will destroy your bey, and I will not let that happen! I Can-Dai will defeat you Aragonite!" Can-Dai yelled. I backed anyway, knowing that somehow, this was a personal matter. " 3,2,1 GO SHOOT!" Can-Dai's bey was Aqua Diablo CS160TF. Aragonite's bey was Midnight Wolf 145WD. " GO DIABLO!" yelled Can-Dai. Diablo crashed into Midnight Wolf with amazing force, knocking him to the stadium wall. Diablo attacked vigorously, pushing Wolf deeper into the wall. "Now that I have you cornered, SPECIAL MOVE! Nerco Waterfall!" He yelled. Aqua Diablo was enfluged in a dark water orb and smashed on top of Wolf with massive force. "Well, enough's enough, GO WOLF!" exclaimed Aragonite. Wolf broke free and smashed Diablo upside the metal wheel. Wolf brought Diablo into the center of the stadium, I knew a great defeat was about to unfold. " GO! DESTROYING DARKNESS BREATH!'" screamed Aragonite. Wolf was absorbed in a dark veil and let out a giant ray of darkness that lodged Diablo in the stadium. Then, Wolf soared down and smashed Diablo to pieces. Can-Dai ran way , trying to prevent any further trauma. " You are a cruel blader, Aragonite!" I said as I ran away. He laughed manically, while Midnight Wolf spun around the stadium. This was a rival that I was sure to defeat.

RE: The Alpha of Beyblade ( Character Requests Needed) - Duck - May. 22, 2012

Wow, great Chapter 8!!! I love the way you used Aragonite! It's iridescent, not isidecent though...

RE: The Alpha of Beyblade ( Character Requests Needed) - King of Misfits - May. 22, 2012

I'll change it sorry, Anyway, thanks I hope to use Aragonite as one of the main bad guys! I loved his Desc. I'm probaly gonna use him in further chapters

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RE: The Alpha of Beyblade ( Character Requests Needed) - King of Misfits - May. 22, 2012

CHapTeR 9 BRO!

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Chapter 9
The Fight of the Wolves
After my battle with Aragonite and Aqua Diablo's destruction, I felt a powerful hatred towards evil. I went to the Beypark to work off my anger. I tried launching my bey at rocks, they all broke, that worked off some of my steam. " Hey Kid let's battle!" said a commanding voice. I turned around to see a very muscular girl who was listening to AC/DC. She had long jet black hair, glasses, a black leather jacket, a white t-shirt, jean shorts, knee high black boots, and a long scar under her left eye. " Who are you?" I questioned. " I'm Kiba Fubuki, martial artist, Blader, and skilled artist!" she replied. We got ready to battle, I had a feeling this would be a good battle. "3,2,1 GO SHOOT!" Her bey was Phantom Wolf S130MB. " GO!" I yelled. Nocturnal crashed into Wolf. " Ha!" yelled Kiba as Wolf jumped away. " I'm bored, let's finish this! Special Move! Wolf Fang Destruction!" Kiba shouted. Phantom Wolf was just about to start her special move, when a bey crashed into her, it was Midnight Wolf! " Hello Kiddies!" Yelled Aragonite. I quickly took back Assassin Nocturnal as both wolves clashed. I felt the tension as the two bladers fought." NO MERCY PHANTOM WOLF!" yelled Kiba. Phantom Wolf flung Midnight wolf into the air and smacked back down into the stadium. It was like watching to wolves battling for control over the clan. " That's a bad choice Kiba." remarked Aragonite solemnly. People began to crowd around the battle, but every time someone landed a hard hit, the crowd stuttered. " GO MIDNIGHT WOLF! PUT YOUR FOE IN THE AIR!" screamed Aragonite. Midnight Wolf flung Phantom Wolf in the air, both beys were still ready to attack. "SPECIAL MOVE!" they both shouted in sync. "Starscape Death!" screamed Aragonite. "Darkness Destruction Blast!" yelled Kiba. Kiba's bey let out a ray of pure darkness, that layered Midnight Wolf. Midnight Wolf erupted into a ball of dark energy and rained dark meteors upon Phantom. Then, Midnight Wolf crushed Phantom Wolf into the stadium, and finally it was over. Phantom Wolf was lodged a couple of inches into the stadium. " I will train and defeat you Aragonite!" growled Kiba as she picked up her bey. " Hey we should really battle sometime." exclaimed Aragonite. He let out a maniacal laugh and walked away. I would face Aragonite soon, in fact, very soon...

RE: The Alpha of Beyblade ( Character Requests Needed) - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - May. 22, 2012

Dude! That was friggin beast! (Litterally!) Grin

RE: The Alpha of Beyblade ( Character Requests Needed) - Duck - May. 22, 2012

SOOOOO AMAZING!!! This story is wonderful! You really do write fast, don't you? *wolf whistles* Sweeeeet!!!

RE: The Alpha of Beyblade ( Character Requests Needed) - Gravity Brave - May. 22, 2012

This story is really coming out great. Keep up the good job! Rimshot

RE: The Alpha of Beyblade ( Character Requests Needed) - King of Misfits - May. 22, 2012

Thanks guys, but remember, you made the characters.

(May. 22, 2012 12:07 AM)Gravity Brave Wrote: EVIL CHARACTER REQUEST-

Name- Yaruto Hirohama

Bey- Hell Nemesis 230 MB

Special Move- Black Vortex of Destruction

Description- Black long cloak, spiky orange hair with yellow highlights, and a scar down his cheek.

Personality- evil ,cruel,likes destroying beys, laughs evilly a lot.

Where did you get this idea?

RE: The Alpha of Beyblade ( Character Requests Needed) - King of Misfits - May. 22, 2012

HeRe Is ChApTeR 10 (will be in op soon)

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Chapter 10
Recruiting Evil
"Well hello, why to you want to be in our evil organization." sneered Aragonite.e Aragonite and a new recruit to the evil organization. "I am Yaruto Hirohama, I am destined to be Kiba Fubuki. I WILL HAVE REVENGE!" he yelled. "What could she have done?" said Aragonite in mocking voice. "She destroyed my old bey, Blitz Gasher 230XF." Aragonite considered it. "Okay Yaruto, you can join. Go defeat Kiba now." he said solemnly. Yaruto walked away with an evil grin on his face.
â€¢. â€¢. â€¢
I walked with Kiba after her battle with Aragonite. "So what do you wanna-" I was cut off by a loud noise behind us. There was rubble and dust everywhere. A man in a long black cloak walked out of the dust. He had spiky orange hair with yellow highlights and he had a scar down his cheek. "Hello Kiba. It's me Yaruto Hirohama, I WILL DEFEAT YOU!" he screamed. Soon they were at opposite sides of the stadium. Yaruto was cruel and evil. He had a very strong hatred towards Kiba. "3,2,1 GO SHOOT!" they yelled. Yaruto's bey was Hell Nemesis 230MB. "GO NEMESIS!" yelled Yaruto. Hell Nemesis bashed into Phantom Wolf, sending it flying in the air. " Okay Wolf let's use our mirage technique!" said Kiba. Phantom Wolf went around the stadium, circling the whole thing at high speeds. " Ha!" shouted Yaruto, laughing. Nemesis went up to the edge, and aimed for Wolf. He dashed but he missed! Then, Wolf came around and grabbed Nemesis along for the ride by his metal wheel. Wolf dragged Nemesis along the stadium wall." Aaargh! Special move! Black Vortex of Destruction!" Nemesis floated up in the air and a black vortex and sucked everything in. Wolf got sucked in! But then, the vortex somewhat blew up and Nemesis and Wolf came flying out. "Now special move! Shadow Nightmare Assault!" Wolf unleahed a series of darkness-charged blows and then bashed Nemesis into the stadium, making a hole. Wolf blasted a dark ray I'm the hole and it was over."Oh yeah!" shouted Kiba. But I had a feeling that this wouldn't be the last evil Blader Aragonite would recruit...

RE: The Alpha of Beyblade ( Character Requests Needed) - Gravity Brave - May. 22, 2012

I was watching Metal Masters and I saw Jack battling with Ryuga wearing a black cloak. I was also reading Percy Jackson (The Last Olympian) when I wanted a character that had a scar like Luke.

Thks for using Yaruto, it was cool how you used him as a recruit!

RE: The Alpha of Beyblade ( Character Requests Needed) - ChinaBladeâ„¢ - May. 22, 2012

Character Request (Bad Guy)

Name: Jet Fubuki (Kiba's twin brother)
Appearance: Spiky, jet-black hair with a blue streak hanging down (Like Masamune's), long blue and black jacket, jet-black skinny jeans, and a black t-shirt.
Personaltiy: Cold, cruel, evil, thinks he's number 1.
Bey: Duo Leone TH170W2D
Special Moves: Lion Fang Smasher, Turbo Wind Destroyer (Creates tornado)