World Beyblade Organization by Fighting Spirits Inc.
Everything spins into Chaos. - Printable Version

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RE: Everything spins into Chaos. - XXaron - Apr. 16, 2012

Guess what everyone?
CHAPTER 6 IS FINALLY OUT!
Here it is, in all it's 2 pages of MS-Word glory.



RE: Everything spins into Chaos. - PhantomKid - Apr. 16, 2012

When you said: I could everyone in the room. That is supposed to be a see there?


RE: Everything spins into Chaos. - XXaron - Apr. 17, 2012

It was a simple misstype, but not see. more like sense or feel.
I didn't even notice that, thank you for pointing that out to me.


RE: Everything spins into Chaos. - PhantomKid - Apr. 17, 2012

Welcome.


RE: Everything spins into Chaos. - ????NeMeSiS???? - Apr. 20, 2012

great story. i like the way u create new funky beys in it. i read the entire thing but the ending is waaayayyy to abrupt. can you make chapter 7and 8 or something??Chocked_2Joyful_2 cuz it would be a fun ending with mitch battleing it out wit chaos and having a glorious victory or something.

on the whole its an awesome story but u could add a couple of chapters to make a good ending.Eee
Joyful_2Stupid


RE: Everything spins into Chaos. - XXaron - Apr. 20, 2012

Trust me, I am NOT done.
And in fact, chapter 8 WILL be the end of ESiC.
And it will have a sequal in it's own topic. And of course Mitch battles Chaos...
But whose to say he wins?


RE: Everything spins into Chaos. - akio314 - Apr. 21, 2012

Pretty sweet, could you read my story and help me with it? And again, nice story.


RE: Everything spins into Chaos. - Goku911 - Jun. 28, 2012

I'm sorry for what I said looking back it's not that bad.