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RE: {Beystory}Nameless Story: Post suggestions! - Clefairy - Oct. 25, 2011

(Oct. 25, 2011  2:08 AM)Izuma Inzori Wrote: crystalmw2noob's explanation is actually incorrect, he made a run-on sentence with comma errors, my weakness is in using commas so ask the others (Sparta, Temporal, etc.)

Yeah Ik




RE: {Beystory}Nameless Story: Post suggestions! - Sparta - Oct. 25, 2011

(Oct. 25, 2011  2:08 AM)Izuma Inzori Wrote: (Sparta, Temporal, etc.)
Izuma Inzori tagged you in a post
Press "OK" to reply.

Sorry, enough facebook.

Chapter 4 preview-EDITED.
Fixed it up a bit. Some spelling and grammar errors.

I'm tired, and definitely not my best work. It should suffice though (Too choppy for my standard...yuk...)


RE: {Beystory}Nameless Story: Post suggestions! - Clefairy - Oct. 25, 2011

(Oct. 25, 2011  2:49 AM)Sparta Wrote:
(Oct. 25, 2011  2:08 AM)Izuma Inzori Wrote: (Sparta, Temporal, etc.)
Izuma Inzori tagged you in a post
Press "OK" to reply.

Sorry, enough facebook.

Chapter 4 preview-EDITED.
Fixed it up a bit. Some spelling and grammar errors.

I'm tired, and definitely not my best work. It should suffice though (Too choppy for my standard...yuk...)

Thanks. I'm desperate of learning more vocabulary words now.




RE: {Beystory}Outraging Darkness - Clefairy - Oct. 27, 2011

A new story title: Outraging Darkness.


RE: {Beystory}Outraging Darkness - Kujikato - Oct. 27, 2011

Sounds really catchy, keep it up Grin just fix what we mentioned earlier


RE: {Beystory}Outraging Darkness - Clefairy - Oct. 27, 2011

(Oct. 27, 2011  1:48 AM)Izuma Inzori Wrote: Sounds really catchy, keep it up Grin just fix what we mentioned earlier

I was about to do Devouring Darkness and got stuck with Outraging Darkness. Forgot about that.




RE: {Beystory}Outraging Darkness - Clefairy - Oct. 27, 2011

Chapter 4 is out!!!




RE: {Beystory}Outraging Darkness - Kujikato - Oct. 27, 2011

iffy, but good, mainly dialogue but still good, try to give more description next time


RE: {Beystory}Outraging Darkness - Clefairy - Oct. 30, 2011

BUMPP!! Working on Chapter 5 for all those who are reading this


RE: {Beystory}Outraging Darkness - Ga' - Oct. 30, 2011

Wait, what happened to Chapter 5?


RE: {Beystory}Outraging Darkness - Clefairy - Oct. 30, 2011

(Oct. 30, 2011  1:38 AM)GaHooleone Wrote: Wait, what happened to Chapter 5?

OOPS..sorry i mean Chapter5 i'll edit it





RE: {Beystory}Outraging Darkness - Clefairy - Nov. 06, 2011

Chapter 5 Part 1 is out today!


Chapter 5 Part 1



RE: {Beystory}Outraging Darkness - KainYuuki - Nov. 06, 2011

you need to improve on punctuation and grammar, like when you said:“Come on guys” , let’s go before we are going to be late for class, it should have been:“Come on guys, let’s go, we are going to be late for class." spelling seems fine so far though.


RE: {Beystory}Outraging Darkness - Clefairy - Nov. 06, 2011

Okay thanks


RE: {Beystory}Outraging Darkness [Fake Language HERE!] - blader9222 - Nov. 20, 2011

when is chapter 5 part 2 coming


RE: {Beystory}Outraging Darkness [Fake Language HERE!] - Clefairy - Nov. 20, 2011

I hope soon.. I'll probably post it tomorrow or Monday.


RE: {Beystory}Outraging Darkness [Fake Language HERE!] - DeltaFate - Nov. 22, 2011

When is part two coming. I have read your story a few times. There may be some grammar problems but overall its good.


RE: {Beystory}Outraging Darkness [Fake Language HERE!] - Clefairy - Nov. 22, 2011

I'm at skit practice. But I'll make sure to finish Part 2 today.


RE: {Beystory}Outraging Darkness [Fake Language HERE!] - Clefairy - Nov. 22, 2011

I got a delay at skit practice. I was there for about 4 hours. But I managed to finish Part 2 Today.

Chapter 5 Part 2
Enjoy!


RE: {Beystory}Outraging Darkness (Part 2 just came out!) - Clefairy - Feb. 19, 2012

You guys wanted part 2 and I gave you part 2 but no comments on it?


RE: {Beystory}Outraging Darkness (Part 2 just came out!) - DARK WOLF WBBA - Feb. 22, 2012

I love Your story, SO MUCH SUSPENCE! Anyway, part 2 is amazing and I really like it. Keep writing, and I will want for part three! Eee


RE: {Beystory}Outraging Darkness (Part 2 just came out!) - Clefairy - Feb. 24, 2012

Thank you!