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RE: The Beyblade Jackals (Taking Character Requests) - T. L-Drago 9207 - Aug. 05, 2011
cool, man!
RE: The Beyblade Jackals (Taking Character Requests) - Byerg - Aug. 05, 2011
Thanks man
i hope you're ready for Zane to be in C3!!
RE: The Beyblade Jackals (Taking Character Requests) - Bruiser33 - Aug. 05, 2011
I like it
RE: The Beyblade Jackals (Taking Character Requests) - Temporal - Aug. 05, 2011
...Can I rant on this now?
Why is it that people's chapters are ONE FREAKING PARAGRAPH? Really, it's insulting to the rest of us writers. Lengthen it, dude! Even then, it's a block of text filled with characters I don't care about. Plus, character requests. After Chapter 3, stop them. Use the ones suggested and make them recurring characters that pop up every once in a while. Like many members here, the commas...where the hell are they? Your character does not seem to be a Mary-Sue yet, I applaud that, but please avoid the "falling from the sky" thing from now on, okay?
Mini-rant is over. The story is decent at best.
RE: The Beyblade Jackals (Taking Character Requests) - Anchor - Apr. 03, 2012
Name: Alastor
Beyblade: Flash Horuseus(green clear wheel) GB145R2F. Attack Type
Special Move: Flash Freeze Finish. Horuseus instantly stops moving(still spinning),a green light shines,and Horuseus explodes,doing a little damage to itself though(not destroying it or anything)
Personality: Shy,a boy of few words,but he is passionate for beyblade and will never give up even if his life is on the line.
Clothing: Black Skinny Jeans with a belt hanging, showing his beyblade case and his launcher case. He wears Green,black,and grey high-top shoes, a plain yellow t-shirt with a grey jacket over it(open). He also has brown eyes and longish really dark brown hair(almost black),his skin tone is a tannish-brown.
I love the story so far! Apollo seems like a cool bey.
RE: The Beyblade Jackals (Taking Character Requests) - NPB - Apr. 15, 2012
Name: Jake Toshiko
Beyblade: Galaxy Susanoow 105 F
Special Move: Galaxy's Light: Light come's down from the sky to stadium and Galaxy Susanoow goes trough of it and gets good power and crashes to enemy. THIS IS NOT INSTANT WIN!
Personality: Happy guy, but hates losing...
Clothing: White jacket, brown eyes, blue jeans, white spiky hair and black shoes.
RE: The Beyblade Jackals (Taking Character Requests) - Duck - Apr. 15, 2012
This story is REALLY cool! I LOVE Blaze Apollo! You should read my bey story, Bound by the Bey: Sekenorou's Chains! I am also open for character requests! This is my charachter request:
Name: Silaka Tamio (female)
Bey: Poison Libra, Spin Track WA130, Performance Tip ES
Special Move: Poison Wave
Appearance: Spiky yet short red hair, emerald green eyes, freckles, pale skin
Clothes: Knee-length jeans, blue t-shirt, pink heart-shaped locket
Personality: Very cheerful yet very shy, is deathly afraid of spiders and of losing
RE: The Beyblade Jackals (Taking Character Requests) - bladestriker99 - Apr. 20, 2012
Name max
Bey ldrago destroy fs
Special moves mirage destruction and meteo destruction
Look brown hair blue eyes black tee jeans and black sneakers
Pesonality fierce competitive and a lone wolf but will take help if needed and knows his limits