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RE: The World Spins like a Bey [Bey Story] - RowDog - Jun. 06, 2011
You love those characters don't you? The teams are supposed to be composed of three bladers but you can choose one of them to be a lone blader if you want. I'll use all the characters though but I am unsure if I will get to all the beyblade second forms. And do you know that ninjas and samurais come from Japan?
RE: The World Spins like a Bey [Bey Story] - Kujikato - Jun. 06, 2011
Yes, I know that Ninjas and Samurais come from Japan, i am literate!!!!
so yeah, and also, just leave out Rez, I really dont need him, as Izuma doubles as an attacker and a defender, and also, these are only single form beyblades....
RE: The World Spins like a Bey [Bey Story] - Ninja Crab - Jun. 06, 2011
how about killer pizza p145 rf ( p stands for pepperoni LOL jks )
RE: The World Spins like a Bey [Bey Story] - SpiffyStu - Jun. 07, 2011
Could you add my dream bey.
Avalanche Mammoth R145RB (RB=rubber ball)
Defence bey.
Also one of your Italian bladers should be insane and chuck frequent spazzes. (It needs some humour
). The crazy one should definitely be an attack blader and his bey should be Jaw Puma WA130R2F or something like that?
RE: The World Spins like a Bey [Bey Story] - RowDog - Jun. 07, 2011
I also need mammoths blader and his/her details. That bey can go in the Arctic team.
RE: The World Spins like a Bey [Bey Story] - Septentrione - Jun. 07, 2011
Hey great story, great detail and extensive storyline...
Anyway, can I give a character?
From: Philippines
Name and Gender: Kyle Saavedra,Male
Bey
courge Castor DF145EWDFace Motif: Castor,a scarred face with 3 swords in the background. Castor is the other half of the Gemini twins. The other being Pollux
Clear Wheel: Castor, Has a rugged square-like perimeter. Colored Black with white decals.There are 4 blades along the border of the Castor Clear Wheel.
Metal Wheel: Scourge, Has two semi-circular sides with 3 bumps on each side and it has 2 Larger Bumps like in the Mercury Metal
Bey Type: Stamina
Special Moves: Scourge's Conviction,Ancient Storm
Scourge's Conviction: Castor will be covered in a sharp aura and then hits the other bey with blinding speed. Castor goes uncontrollable after the attack
Ancient Storm: Castor makes a storm that will slash the other bey multiple times
Personality: Hardworking, Humble, Passionate about his goals,dependable,even though he's Filipino,he speaks great English
Physical Desc.: Has Black hair,Dark Brown eyes, Tanned complexion but not very brown,wears a Blue T-Shirt and white Camo pants. Wears sandals.
Yep that's about it
RE: The World Spins like a Bey [Bey Story] - Sparx000 - Jun. 07, 2011
Name
teve TellerAge:18
Country:CA, America
Male
Bey
and Tortoise SAS145 TSBey type
efenseSpecial move
and tornado, Age attackPersonality:Loyal and friendly, cool
Physical desc:Blonde, wears no shirt, shorts, abbs, Sandles, usualy has a surf board.
RE: The World Spins like a Bey [Bey Story] - HorogiumX - Jun. 08, 2011
Country: Kenya
Name and Gender: Tumaini Wangai, Male
Age: 15
Bey: Blaze Tiger 110R2F
Bey Type: Attack
Special Move: Solar Bite: The sun appears under the opposing beyblade and blasts a large ray up, burning the other beyblade. Then, the Tiger beast comes out, leaps at the opposing beyblade and bites it, causing an explosion that knocks out the opposing bey and destroys the stadium.
Bio: Was 6 years old when his father, an amazing blader, died right in front of him from an evil beyblade power. He was on the ground, dying, when he gave Tumaini Blaze Tiger and the Bracelet of the Sun. The Bracelet of the Sun is a braclet that is carved with the sun and mysterious writing that glow orange when he does his special move. He never takes it off. His father then said "Take these. Protect our people. You are our last hope...". He then closed his eyes and died. From then on, Tumaini vowed to never lose with Blaze Tiger and to always protect his people from evil.
Personality: Protecting, serious, will do anything to protect Tiger, mysterious
Physical Description: Long black hair, very very tanned skin, war paint on face, white tank top, white shorts and dirty sandals.
RE: The World Spins like a Bey [Bey Story] - RowDog - Jun. 08, 2011
Remember if you make a new part could you describe it a little and especially mention if you have made a new spin track or tip what it stands for. Special move description could also help.
A lot of similiar looking characters, long hair and tan.
Currently more focused on Italiano bladers as that is the first destination.
RE: The World Spins like a Bey [Bey Story] - SyTric XZ - Jun. 08, 2011
Awesome well written friend
RE: The World Spins like a Bey [Bey Story] - RowDog - Jun. 10, 2011
Really need some italian bladers now guys or I might just start somewhere else. Anyone want to start somewhere different?
RE: The World Spins like a Bey [Bey Story] - Kujikato - Jun. 10, 2011
Just start anywhere, the story is controlled by THE AUTHOR, not the readers AKA the Writer controls the readers
RE: The World Spins like a Bey [Bey Story] - Naitrax - Jun. 10, 2011
Country: Italy
Name: Giuseppe Lombardi
Age: 14
Beyblade: Wooden Gondola R230(Row 230) C(Curve)
Beyblade Type: Balance
Personality: Hardworking, Quiet, Mischievous
Description: Black hair, tan skin, wears baggy clothes, old shoes
RE: The World Spins like a Bey [Bey Story] - Synth - Jun. 10, 2011
Name: Hero Dentron
Country: US
Bey: Death Excalibur TH170PD
Bey description:
Spoiler (Click to View)
Looks: he has red hair, wears a sleeveless shirt with a red jacket around it. he wears red jogging shoes.
Status: he is a good guy...
special moves: flame Excalibur(flame erupts from the ground, while excalibur charges in)
hope this helps!
RE: The World Spins like a Bey [Bey Story] - RowDog - Jun. 10, 2011
@ Draco, you are probably right.
@ Naitrax, a Boat? Sounds like a weird beyblade.
@ DX, really corny first name which I have never heard anyone called 'Hero'. Walking doen the street "oh, hi Hero!". Doesn't work. Also the idea for the bey is good, but the location is bad. It would have to be in a European country as Excalibur never got to the United States, but perhaps England would best suit the beyblade.
I know you guys are all trying hard and I do not mean to put anyone down but this is just what I think.
RE: The World Spins like a Bey [Bey Story] - Naitrax - Jun. 10, 2011
(Jun. 10, 2011 10:38 AM)RowDog Wrote: @ Draco, you are probably right.A gondola is a Italian Boat, sometimes used in Venice
@ Naitrax, a Boat? Sounds like a weird beyblade.
@ DX, really corny first name which I have never heard anyone called 'Hero'. Walking doen the street "oh, hi Hero!". Doesn't work. Also the idea for the bey is good, but the location is bad. It would have to be in a European country as Excalibur never got to the United States, but perhaps England would best suit the beyblade.
I know you guys are all trying hard and I do not mean to put anyone down but this is just what I think.
RE: The World Spins like a Bey [Bey Story] - Galaxxy - Jun. 10, 2011
Nice story! you have excellent writing skills keep it up
RE: The World Spins like a Bey [Bey Story] - RowDog - Jun. 10, 2011
(Jun. 10, 2011 10:43 AM)Naitrax Wrote: A gondola is a Italian Boat, sometimes used in VeniceI know that (because I did a little research on it just then) but still, it doesn't sound to intimidating. It is like a love boat. It could at least be a giant ship with rows of cannons. See what I am getting at?
RE: The World Spins like a Bey [Bey Story] - S.D.C - Jun. 10, 2011
Your, story has really taken off, great job! And a great story!
RE: The World Spins like a Bey [Bey Story] - Synth - Jun. 10, 2011
(Jun. 10, 2011 10:43 AM)Naitrax Wrote:(Jun. 10, 2011 10:38 AM)RowDog Wrote: @ Draco, you are probably right.A gondola is a Italian Boat, sometimes used in Venice
@ Naitrax, a Boat? Sounds like a weird beyblade.
@ DX, really corny first name which I have never heard anyone called 'Hero'. Walking doen the street "oh, hi Hero!". Doesn't work. Also the idea for the bey is good, but the location is bad. It would have to be in a European country as Excalibur never got to the United States, but perhaps England would best suit the beyblade.
I know you guys are all trying hard and I do not mean to put anyone down but this is just what I think.
you may change it however you want... but he is 100% corny....
RE: The World Spins like a Bey [Bey Story] - Naitrax - Jun. 10, 2011
(Jun. 10, 2011 12:15 PM)DX Wrote:(Jun. 10, 2011 10:43 AM)Naitrax Wrote:(Jun. 10, 2011 10:38 AM)RowDog Wrote: @ Draco, you are probably right.A gondola is a Italian Boat, sometimes used in Venice
@ Naitrax, a Boat? Sounds like a weird beyblade.
@ DX, really corny first name which I have never heard anyone called 'Hero'. Walking doen the street "oh, hi Hero!". Doesn't work. Also the idea for the bey is good, but the location is bad. It would have to be in a European country as Excalibur never got to the United States, but perhaps England would best suit the beyblade.
I know you guys are all trying hard and I do not mean to put anyone down but this is just what I think.
you may change it however you want... but he is 100% corny....
I know this is offtopic but who do you mean by 100% corny. me or Hero (your character)
RE: The World Spins like a Bey [Bey Story] - Ninja Crab - Jun. 15, 2011
how about (this is not a joke) Leaning Pisa 105 R2F
His person can be the crazy attack blader
RE: The World Spins like a Bey [Bey Story] - legend - Jun. 16, 2011
Great story i have a character request
Name-Nicholas
Gender-Male
Country-Greece
Bey-Whirlpool Poseidon T105 r2f
Facebolt-The facebolt depicts a trident surrounded by a whirlpool
Energy Ring-The energy ring looks like three tridents shaped into a triangle
Fusion Wheel-The fusion wheel is shaped like a whirlpool surrounded by waves
Spin Track-The track has three small tridents sticking out of it
Type-Attack
Special Moves Golden Trident and Whirlpool Destruction
Golden Trident-the tridents on its spin track grow and it smashes into the opponents bey(the tridents stay big until the battle ends)
Whirlpool Destruction-it creates a Whirlpool that pulls in the opponents bey then it attacks it with its tridents
Age-12
desription-blonde hair green shirt blue and black jacket blue jeans and black shoes he is a very strong blader who has been defeated he found whirlpool poseidon T105 r2f lying on the beach one day and pleged to become the number 1 bey blader in greece one day.
RE: The World Spins like a Bey [Bey Story] - BillyBlast - Jun. 16, 2011
THIS IS A AWESOME STORY its awesome i added backround music while reading if anyone cares like the original beyblade adding Music This is truly awesome if anyone cares heres the Music http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SPBrmgDpi2I
RE: The World Spins like a Bey [Bey Story] - Ninja Crab - Jun. 17, 2011
Ok i'll do the crazy attack guy
Name: Luigi
Country: Italy
Bey: Leaning Pisa LT200 SD LT200 is Leaning tower it is like 230 but with rings around it
Type: Stamina
Special move: Falling Crusher, the Leaning tower shows up and falls on to the opponets bey
Age: 16
Description: Hair is messed up green eyes Pointy nose goofy grin very pale wears hippie colours has lip peircing
Personality: Talks very fast easily scared makes hilarious jokes use his special move alot no chit chat just blade