RE: Beyblade Burst: GX! - Hollowmind13 - Sep. 24, 2021
(Sep. 21, 2021 1:31 PM)ColdFlames13 Wrote: With the character contest right around the corner, here are the rules!
1. Please Explain in depth (I see a lot of these in character contests: Bey: Raze Claw. Moves: Claw attack. Razor Slice. Raze Launch.) If you do that we will either ignore it or point it out for a change.
2. No reusing beys (For example: Luna Shirosagi the daughter of Lui) You cant do that because we most likely already have it. (Lui and etc.)
3. Nothing too OP. Everything must have a Strength and a Weakness.
And 4. Go Wild. Have fun.
Without further ado, The character contest:
Format:
Character:
Name:
Age (around 15 and 16):
Gender:
Height(Optional):
Personality:
Appearance:
Bey:
Layer:
Core Plate:
Core Gear:
Disk:
Chassis Frame:
Driver:
Bey Moves:
Anything else for the writers to know about your character:
LOL, nobody saw that. Lemme tag some people that normally enter contests.
GenesisBlader UnseenBurst LJ-Blader CelBeyBlade LegendJustice
Afaik those will prob enter, Justice will be more offline from now on but just to make sure.
I must say the timing wasn't that great.
RE: Beyblade Burst: GX! - Lucha Burst - Sep. 24, 2021
I'd enter if i understood the system better
RE: Beyblade Burst: GX! - ColdFlames13 - Sep. 24, 2021
(Sep. 24, 2021 7:34 PM)Lucha Burst Wrote: I'd enter if i understood the system better
It's explained on the last page
RE: Beyblade Burst: GX! - LJ-Blader - Sep. 24, 2021
I will when I get home.
RE: Beyblade Burst: GX! - CelBeyBlade - Sep. 24, 2021
Sure I=ll try give me 2 days
RE: Beyblade Burst: GX! - GenesisBlader - Sep. 24, 2021
(Sep. 24, 2021 7:13 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: (Sep. 21, 2021 1:31 PM)ColdFlames13 Wrote: With the character contest right around the corner, here are the rules!
1. Please Explain in depth (I see a lot of these in character contests: Bey: Raze Claw. Moves: Claw attack. Razor Slice. Raze Launch.) If you do that we will either ignore it or point it out for a change.
2. No reusing beys (For example: Luna Shirosagi the daughter of Lui) You cant do that because we most likely already have it. (Lui and etc.)
3. Nothing too OP. Everything must have a Strength and a Weakness.
And 4. Go Wild. Have fun.
Without further ado, The character contest:
Format:
Character:
Name:
Age:
Gender:
Height(Optional):
Personality:
Appearance:
Bey:
Layer:
Core Plate:
Core Gear:
Disk:
Chassis Frame:
Driver:
Bey Moves:
Anything else for the writers to know about your character:
LOL, nobody saw that. Lemme tag some people that normally enter contests.
GenesisBlader UnseenBurst LJ-Blader CelBeyBlade LegendJustice
Afaik those will prob enter, Justice will be more offline from now on but just to make sure.
I must say the timing wasn't that great. ayo man wassup
im gonna enter too lol because well e
RE: Beyblade Burst: GX! - LJ-Blader - Sep. 25, 2021
Name: Jane West
Age: 15
Gender: Female
Height(Optional): 5’4”
Personality: Funny and Kind, but a bit sarcastic. She is often misunderstood for being mean or uncaring when she is just trying to have fun. When she is nervous she flips her pony tail.
Appearance: She has bright white hair in a ponytail with a purple shirt and black shorts. She wears sandals.
Bey: Silent Jupiter
Layer: Silent, Looks like Jade but not Metal the balls are still weighted and can be locked on the inside (Stamina/Defense Mode) or on the out side (Attack Mode)
Core Plate: Jupiter, Head of Jupiter but purple
Core Gear: Heavy
Disk: Null, Over for GX system
Chassis Frame: B-2, 2B Chassis Frame doesn’t include mode change, black
Driver: Station, a rubber ball tip, black base pink tip
Bey Moves:
Silent Launch: A powerful launch that sends Jupiter straight to the center.
Silent Thunder: In attack mode it slams the other bey with its blade
Silent Spin: A defense/stamina move that increases center of gravity
Roaring Thunder: Silent Thunder but stronger
Lightning Counter: Moves out of the way of an incoming attack
Twisting Lightning: Creates a whirlwind of Lightning that bring the other bey to the center, then Jupiter hits it into the air
Storm Call: Creates a shield of Lightning around Jupiter
Man did I loved making this character.
RE: Beyblade Burst: GX! - Hollowmind13 - Sep. 25, 2021
(Sep. 25, 2021 1:10 PM)LJ-Blader Wrote: Name: Jane West
Age: 12
Gender: Female
Height(Optional): 5’4”
Personality: Funny and Kind, but a bit sarcastic. She is often misunderstood for being mean or uncaring when she is just trying to have fun. When she is nervous she flips her pony tail.
Appearance: She has bright white hair in a ponytail with a purple shirt and black shorts. She wears sandals.
Bey: Silent Jupiter
Layer: Silent, Looks like Jade but not Metal the balls are still weighted and can be locked on the inside (Stamina/Defense Mode) or on the out side (Attack Mode)
Core Plate: Jupiter, Head of Jupiter but purple
Core Gear: Heavy
Disk: Null, Over for GX system
Chassis Frame: 2-B, 2B Chassis Frame doesn’t include mode change, black
Driver: Station, a rubber ball tip, black base pink tip
Bey Moves:
Silent Launch: A powerful launch that sends Jupiter straight to the center.
Silent Thunder: In attack mode it slams the other bey with its blade
Silent Spin: A defense/stamina move that increases center of gravity
Roaring Thunder: Silent Thunder but stronger
Lightning Counter: Moves out of the way of an incoming attack
Twisting Lightning: Creates a whirlwind of Lightning that bring the other bey to the center, then Jupiter hits it into the air
Storm Call: Creates a shield of Lightning around Jupiter
Man did I loved making this character. What a coincidence, we already made Null an Over evo (which is a 0 evo). You got it right.
It is a balance type right?
(I should prob say that the age range is around 15 and 16)
RE: Beyblade Burst: GX! - LJ-Blader - Sep. 25, 2021
Yeah, it is a balance type.
RE: Beyblade Burst: GX! - UnseenBurst - Sep. 25, 2021
(Sep. 25, 2021 3:11 PM)LJ-Blader Wrote: Yeah, it is a balance type.
I'll post an entry later. It's 7 AM and I'm feeling extra lazier then I already am.
RE: Beyblade Burst: GX! - ColdFlames13 - Sep. 25, 2021
(Sep. 25, 2021 1:10 PM)LJ-Blader Wrote: Name: Jane West
Age: 15
Gender: Female
Height(Optional): 5’4”
Personality: Funny and Kind, but a bit sarcastic. She is often misunderstood for being mean or uncaring when she is just trying to have fun. When she is nervous she flips her ponytail.
Appearance: She has bright white hair in a ponytail with a purple shirt and black shorts. She wears sandals.
Bey: Silent Jupiter
Layer: Silent, Looks like Jade but not Metal the balls are still weighted and can be locked on the inside (Stamina/Defense Mode) or on the outside (Attack Mode)
Core Plate: Jupiter, Head of Jupiter but purple
Core Gear: Heavy
Disk: Null, Over for GX system
Chassis Frame: 2-B, 2B Chassis Frame doesn’t include mode change, black
Driver: Station, a rubber ball tip, black base pink tip
Bey Moves:
Silent Launch: A powerful launch that sends Jupiter straight to the center.
Silent Thunder: In attack mode, it slams the other bey with its blade
Silent Spin: A defense/stamina move that increases center of gravity
Roaring Thunder: Silent Thunder but stronger
Lightning Counter: Moves out of the way of an incoming attack
Twisting Lightning: Creates a whirlwind of Lightning that bring the other bey to the center, then Jupiter hits it into the air
Storm Call: Creates a shield of Lightning around Jupiter
Man did I loved making this character.
Btw, A chassis frame has the letter first, then the number.
Examples: B-2 A-1 D-3 S-5
RE: Beyblade Burst: GX! - CelBeyBlade - Sep. 26, 2021
also i maybe no enter because i need to work on fanfics
RE: Beyblade Burst: GX! - ColdFlames13 - Sep. 26, 2021
(Sep. 26, 2021 1:31 AM)CelBeyBlade Wrote: also i maybe no enter because i need to work on fanfics
Ok
RE: Beyblade Burst: GX! - Lucha Burst - Sep. 26, 2021
My amazing entry
(modified the form a little bit)
Name: Parker Pane
Age: 14
Gender: Male
Height(Optional): 5'6"
Personality: serious and determined he is takes beyblade very seriously and pushes weak people out of his life because there "liabilities" to him and his bey.(no he's not meant to be an antagonist)
Appearance: he has white hair that fades into purple(Magenta when resonating) He wear's a Red shirt with a purple bird on it, black pants with red markings, he wears boots with a spiral design.
Bey: Striking Phoenix
GX Blade - Striking - a red blade with a round shape it has 2 blades that stretch the entire distance of the blade, The blade has several indentations four on each side of the middle of the blade, in the middle of the blade is a sharp gap with 2 metal "stingers" for weight. when attached in mode one the striking Armour comes of easily when in mode two the striking armour is alot harder to knock off. under the armour is 8 blades that overlap each other for a defensive design, 4 are red and 4 are black.
GX Core Plate - Phoenix - the phoenix core plate features a red bird head and body with wings coming out the back surrounded by gold flames. the Core plate has 3 average teeth and one large, good tooth at the end.
GX Core Gear - Weight core
GX Plate - Dynasty - the dynasty disc Features a completly circular design like over.
GX Chassis Frame - D-1 - The defense 1 chassis frame features a 8 small blades that free spin.
GX Driver - Deity - the deity driver features two modes, a sharp tip mode and a free spinning ball mode, the free spinning ball mode is meant to provide better defense and the sharp tip mode is meant to provide better stamina. the diety driver has average burst resistance and mediocre LAD.
Bey Moves:
Striking Impact - Phoenix jumps into the air using gravity to further increase the speed and power of its fall to crash into the opponent's Bey with amazing force.
Striking Crush - After being impacted, Striking Phoenix's Striking Armor gets knocked out and ricochets around the edge of the Beystadium until it hits the opposing Beyblade at the same time with Striking Phoenix striking the opponent's Beyblade at the opposite side, dealing massive damage from both ends.
Striking Slam - after the striking Armour is knocked off phoenix will hit it with it's layer sending it back up into the air where it will then come crashing down onto the opponent's layer, as this happens phoenix attacks from the other side.
RE: Beyblade Burst: GX! - UnseenBurst - Sep. 26, 2021
When does the contest end?
RE: Beyblade Burst: GX! - Hollowmind13 - Sep. 26, 2021
(Sep. 26, 2021 6:41 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: When does the contest end?
We're going to say three days before it ends. But I'd say next saturday if we feel like it.
RE: Beyblade Burst: GX! - UnseenBurst - Sep. 26, 2021
Alright, I'll make an entry this coming Friday
RE: Beyblade Burst: GX! - ColdFlames13 - Sep. 26, 2021
(Sep. 26, 2021 6:17 PM)Lucha Burst Wrote: My amazing entry
(modified the form a little bit)
Name: Parker Pane
Age: 14
Gender: Male
Height(Optional): 5'6"
Personality: serious and determined he is takes beyblade very seriously and pushes weak people out of his life because there "liabilities" to him and his bey.(no he's not meant to be an antagonist)
Appearance: he has white hair that fades into purple(Magenta when resonating) He wear's a Red shirt with a purple bird on it, black pants with red markings, he wears boots with a spiral design.
Bey: Striking Phoenix
GX Blade - Striking - a red blade with a round shape it has 2 blades that stretch the entire distance of the blade, The blade has several indentations four on each side of the middle of the blade, in the middle of the blade is a sharp gap with 2 metal "stingers" for weight. when attached in mode one the striking Armour comes of easily when in mode two the striking armour is alot harder to knock off. under the armour is 8 blades that overlap each other for a defensive design, 4 are red and 4 are black.
GX Core Plate - Phoenix - the phoenix core plate features a red bird head and body with wings coming out the back surrounded by gold flames. the Core plate has 3 average teeth and one large, good tooth at the end.
GX Core Gear - Weight core
GX Plate - Dynasty - the dynasty disc Features a completly circular design like over.
GX Chassis Frame - D-1 - The defense 1 chassis frame features a 8 small blades that free spin.
GX Driver - Deity - the deity driver features two modes, a sharp tip mode and a free spinning ball mode, the free spinning ball mode is meant to provide better defense and the sharp tip mode is meant to provide better stamina. the diety driver has average burst resistance and mediocre LAD.
Bey Moves:
Striking Impact - Phoenix jumps into the air using gravity to further increase the speed and power of its fall to crash into the opponent's Bey with amazing force.
Striking Crush - After being impacted, Striking Phoenix's Striking Armor gets knocked out and ricochets around the edge of the Beystadium until it hits the opposing Beyblade at the same time with Striking Phoenix striking the opponent's Beyblade at the opposite side, dealing massive damage from both ends.
Striking Slam - after the striking Armour is knocked off phoenix will hit it with it's layer sending it back up into the air where it will then come crashing down onto the opponent's layer, as this happens phoenix attacks from the other side.
You might not be able to use Pheonix. But we will see.
RE: Beyblade Burst: GX! - Lucha Burst - Sep. 26, 2021
(Sep. 26, 2021 11:32 PM)ColdFlames13 Wrote: (Sep. 26, 2021 6:17 PM)Lucha Burst Wrote: My amazing entry
(modified the form a little bit)
Name: Parker Pane
Age: 14
Gender: Male
Height(Optional): 5'6"
Personality: serious and determined he is takes beyblade very seriously and pushes weak people out of his life because there "liabilities" to him and his bey.(no he's not meant to be an antagonist)
Appearance: he has white hair that fades into purple(Magenta when resonating) He wear's a Red shirt with a purple bird on it, black pants with red markings, he wears boots with a spiral design.
Bey: Striking Phoenix
GX Blade - Striking - a red blade with a round shape it has 2 blades that stretch the entire distance of the blade, The blade has several indentations four on each side of the middle of the blade, in the middle of the blade is a sharp gap with 2 metal "stingers" for weight. when attached in mode one the striking Armour comes of easily when in mode two the striking armour is alot harder to knock off. under the armour is 8 blades that overlap each other for a defensive design, 4 are red and 4 are black.
GX Core Plate - Phoenix - the phoenix core plate features a red bird head and body with wings coming out the back surrounded by gold flames. the Core plate has 3 average teeth and one large, good tooth at the end.
GX Core Gear - Weight core
GX Plate - Dynasty - the dynasty disc Features a completly circular design like over.
GX Chassis Frame - D-1 - The defense 1 chassis frame features a 8 small blades that free spin.
GX Driver - Deity - the deity driver features two modes, a sharp tip mode and a free spinning ball mode, the free spinning ball mode is meant to provide better defense and the sharp tip mode is meant to provide better stamina. the diety driver has average burst resistance and mediocre LAD.
Bey Moves:
Striking Impact - Phoenix jumps into the air using gravity to further increase the speed and power of its fall to crash into the opponent's Bey with amazing force.
Striking Crush - After being impacted, Striking Phoenix's Striking Armor gets knocked out and ricochets around the edge of the Beystadium until it hits the opposing Beyblade at the same time with Striking Phoenix striking the opponent's Beyblade at the opposite side, dealing massive damage from both ends.
Striking Slam - after the striking Armour is knocked off phoenix will hit it with it's layer sending it back up into the air where it will then come crashing down onto the opponent's layer, as this happens phoenix attacks from the other side.
You might not be able to use Pheonix. But we will see.
I can change my entry if need be
RE: Beyblade Burst: GX! - Hollowmind13 - Sep. 27, 2021
(Sep. 26, 2021 11:36 PM)Lucha Burst Wrote: (Sep. 26, 2021 11:32 PM)ColdFlames13 Wrote: You might not be able to use Pheonix. But we will see.
I can change my entry if needed You can do a backup entry in case Phoenix is unavailable and save it somewhere.
RE: Beyblade Burst: GX! - ColdFlames13 - Oct. 12, 2021
Sorry we've been Dead Not posting for a while.. But we have a WINNER!
The Winner is... BA dUm ba DUUUNNN
Lucha Burst
We couldn't decide so. Yep.
P.S.: We might do some minor changes if needed, but we'll keep the essence.
RE: Beyblade Burst: GX! - Lucha Burst - Oct. 12, 2021
(Oct. 12, 2021 9:22 PM)ColdFlames13 Wrote: Sorry we've been Dead Not posting for a while.. But we have a WINNER!
The Winner is... BA dUm ba DUUUNNN
Lucha Burst
We couldn't decide so. Yep.
P.S.: We might do some minor changes if needed, but we'll keep the essence.
Yay i actually won.. Ish congrats to LJ I'm sure he Deserves it as well and don't worry make any changes necessary
RE: Beyblade Burst: GX! - LJ-Blader - Oct. 13, 2021
Yeah! Good job all!
RE: Beyblade Burst: GX! - ColdFlames13 - Dec. 21, 2021
Never fear! Cold is here! Now that Hollow is done with school and my schedule is way more open, GX is back in business! Anyway, here's a treat.
Ex.Lc.Sh.D-2
Extiction Lucius Shift D-2
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Extinction: a Right spin, defense type GX Blade. It features an overall shape similar to Variant, with 12 blades. But smoother and with some POM contact points.
It does not feature a gimmick.
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Lucius: A right spin GX Core Plate. It features a rubber stopper similar to Lucius II.
It is design-wise a fusion between Lucius 1 and 2.
Teeth position: they're all small, except the last, which is medium.
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Metal Core Gear: One of five GX Core Gears. It features a lot of raw weight compared to the other gears
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Shift: A driver fused to a GX Disc. It features the tip of Drift, but the nob is not free spin, akin to Eternal. The free-spinning plate is made out of POM and as large as the Drift one. It features a spring similar to Atomic.
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D-2: A dual-spin oriented GX Frame. It features 6 small rubber blades that go out when spinning fast, forming a barrier akin to 2D. Unlike 2D, it also features a free spin gimmick.
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RE: Beyblade Burst: GX! - Hollowmind13 - Dec. 21, 2021
Btw, There is going to be another Character Contest! Well, kinda...
We are totally not stealing the idea of a 24/7 character contest from Kiryu Kazuma.
For those that don't know, lemme explain:
There will be a "contest" where you can submit your own characters, BUT you will be competing against... *Drumrolls* Yourself! Basically you can submit any character, but the character must be good enough to make it in. So you need to create good characters. Also, by standard, one person can only submit up to 2 characters, so if you get 2 characters in the fic you won't get more, unless your third character is S++ tier and fits with what we are planning for the fic. Here are some rules!
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Rules
* Only 2 successful entries per person unless we say so or if the character is S++ tier and fits perfectly with what we are planning
* Kiryu can only do 1 character, he already has 1 on the fic.
* You can create evos for Legend's beys, but the character CANNOT be related by them, and we can legally call them [certain bey] simps (this last bit is more of a joke)
* Following up last rule, we will take preference on new/cool motifs rather than legend's motifs, and we might stop accepting legend's motifs if we have too many.
* Don't make poorly written entries or descriptions, we want to know how thecharacter looks like, their personality, how their bey works and it's stats. Dont make things like:
Bey: Raze Claw
{combo also poorly explained}
Moves: Shuriken Strike
Those things will prob be rejected right off the bat.
* The age must be between 15-18
* No overpowered/unrealistically beys, we don't really appreciate those things. Here's a tip: Try thinking about how it would work irl, if it doesn't, don't do it. You can always sprinkle some anime magic, but don't over do it.
* Although you can only get 2 characters in, we will give you feedback if the bey is too unrealistic, the character has some writing flaws, etc. To make you have a chance of getting in. .
People that might be interested: SpeedySuomi CelBeyBlade LJ-Blader UnseenBurst GenesisBlader (not sure is genesus will be interested) LegendJustice (You made a discord account again, noice) Kiryu, which got pinned above, OdinaryBlader and beansworth
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Format right here, and sorry for the lack of updates lol. Last tip: The more unique, better
Name: (Name and surname)
Age: (15-18) {18 might get less screentime}
Gender: (Male, female, and the others too.)
AKA: (Also known as (nickname))
Appearance: (hair, eyes, clothes, special things, etc.)
Personality: (It is important)
Special traits: (if any, like a sunburn, scar, iconic item, desability, etc... It doesn't raise your odds btw, just if you want to make a special character)
Backstory: (optional)
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Bey: (I.e. Astral Spriggan Tapered Just -3. If the guy has a random combo before making a bey, just say its type and we'll do the random generation part)
GX Blade: (Like a DB Blade)
GX Core: (Like a DB Core, please include the teeth position, else we will guess it)
GX Core Gear: (Like an armor, there are five types that you can choose from: Unbalanced, Dense, IWD, OWD, Heavy. You can also do a fused one, but only on last resort. The names are self explanatory)
GX Disc: (Like a Db disc, kinda. If it is similar to one of our discs, we will replace it)
GX Disc Frame: (A plastic thingg that fits on the disc when the bey is set on high mode. It can have gimmicks like Double Chassis have. Have in mind they can't fit on low mode. If we have one that is similar to yours, we will just replace it)
Driver: (The only past that did not changed lol. Again, if it is similar to one of our drivers, we will replace it)
Special moves: (Optional, but that means we will choose the moves. Nothing unrealistic plz) .
Full descriptions are very much appreciated
Edit 1: Before anyone complains that the thread isn't mine, Me AND Cold are working on it, and each update here made by one of us has been discussed before being published
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