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RE: Beyblade Burst: Final Moment (Character Contest) - Hollowmind13 - Sep. 11, 2021
(Aug. 25, 2021 3:01 PM)Dragon Blader Z Wrote: also danny will be e______ his bey.
Chapter 2 Part 1
System Battle!!! DynaSpark vs Flare
Kenny: Yay!!! I won!!!
Renzo: You're just lucky, but next time I'm going to win, and I will make sure that I do by training myself with power and launching 1,000 times!!!
Kenny: That will be too much to handle, and instead of launching 1,000 times, do it 500 times.
Renzo: Ok.
(Kenny goes back home)
Kenny: That battle was amazing!!!
(A few hours later)
(Somebody comes in)
Kenny: Hello?
Danny: It's me, Danny
Kenny: Phew, I thought you were a ghost for a second there.
Danny: Are you scared of ghosts?
Kenny: Yes, and don't make fun of me for it!!!
Danny: Alright, but I came here for something else.
Kenny: For what?
Danny: A beybattle of course, and battle my Flame Kitsune!!!
Kenny: You created a new bey hmm.
Danny: No I created it before you!!!
Kenny: Meet Chaos Storm!!!
(Danny in his thoughts)
Danny: Ok, the bey has three blades that will have harder impact when they are awakened.
(Danny goes back to real life)
Kenny: Let's battle now!!!
Danny: Alright.
Kenny: It's first to 2 points, alright.
Danny: Ok.
Kenny and Danny: 3, 2, 1, LET IT RIP!!!
Danny: Flame Defense!!!
Kenny: Chaos Launch!!!
(Kitsune is deflecting Storm's barrage of attacks)
(later in the battle)
Danny: KITSUNE!!!
(Kitsune is shiny and glowing like fire, Kitsune activates Shiny Fire-Flux)
Kenny: STORM!!!
(Storm's avatar happens, and Storm is glowing purple and blue, Storm activates Flare-Flux)
Danny: Shining Upper!!!
Kenny: Flare of the Cosmos!!!
(Kitsune and Storm are hitting each other and they keep hitting in different directions)
Danny and Kenny: AHHHHHHH!!!
(Storm bursts)
Kenny: Ahh man!!!
Danny: You did good though.
Kenny: I did!!!
Danny: Yes you did!!!
Kenny: Good job on winning.
Danny: Thanks Kenny!!!
Kenny: Your welcome.
Preview:
Kenny: What!!! Dante Koryu is here!!!
Danny: I'll stay here then for a few days.
Kenny: Yay Danny!!!
Next time on Beyblade Burst: Final Moment
Chapter 2 Part 2
The Dragon Tamer!!! Dante Koryu
Kenny and Danny: 3, 2, 1, LET IT RIP!!!
For this character contest I'll be accepting 10 people and when the contest is over there is going to be top 4
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If you want you can send chapters to someone selected (and that same person agreeing on it) and check your chapter, maybe make some edits here and there, Improving the chapter. I'd not reccomend me as I write in a different style.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Final Moments - GenesisBlader - Sep. 11, 2021
(Sep. 11, 2021 2:37 PM)Dragon Blader Z Wrote:(Aug. 08, 2021 10:34 PM)GenesisBlader Wrote: wow this kinda looks like episode 1 for beyblade burst destiny but hey thats just me
Just a warning I did not copy you I made this up myself 100%
oh no, i think your mistaken i thought it looked similar to episode 1 for beyblade burst destiny i didn't think you copied me however, but im sorry for assuming and now i know that it's 100% original, probably a coincidence!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Final Moment [Character Contest] - (Blank) - Sep. 20, 2021
I like the names of the beys so far, but why aren't the first letters of the beys same as the first name of the owners? It's fine though, I'm just used to it being like that and I find those stuff cool. First beyblade fanfic I'm reading and so far so good!
Character Creation: Sai - name meaning "Paint" and is the flower god, he is a guy that has feminine features. He likes to paint and has his own garden that he ACTUALLY cares for (looking at you Suoh). Sai is very gentle and doesn't speak much, but when he launches it's so swift that you can't see it. He calls it "Swift Launch".
His bey: Katana Shinobi - Very similar to Xcalibur, but it has 2 smaller but sharper blades. It's design is more Cho-Z. It can also later evolve into Shinobi Shuriken that I said in another thread you posted for fanfics asking to create beys.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Final Moment [Character Contest] - Dragon Blader Z - Sep. 26, 2021
ok this is pretty good
RE: Beyblade Burst: Final Moment (Character Contest) - Lucha Burst - Sep. 26, 2021
(Aug. 25, 2021 3:01 PM)Dragon Blader Z Wrote: also danny will be e______ his bey.for the character contest, DB sytem right?
Chapter 2 Part 1
System Battle!!! DynaSpark vs Flare
Kenny: Yay!!! I won!!!
Renzo: You're just lucky, but next time I'm going to win, and I will make sure that I do by training myself with power and launching 1,000 times!!!
Kenny: That will be too much to handle, and instead of launching 1,000 times, do it 500 times.
Renzo: Ok.
(Kenny goes back home)
Kenny: That battle was amazing!!!
(A few hours later)
(Somebody comes in)
Kenny: Hello?
Danny: It's me, Danny
Kenny: Phew, I thought you were a ghost for a second there.
Danny: Are you scared of ghosts?
Kenny: Yes, and don't make fun of me for it!!!
Danny: Alright, but I came here for something else.
Kenny: For what?
Danny: A beybattle of course, and battle my Flame Kitsune!!!
Kenny: You created a new bey hmm.
Danny: No I created it before you!!!
Kenny: Meet Chaos Storm!!!
(Danny in his thoughts)
Danny: Ok, the bey has three blades that will have harder impact when they are awakened.
(Danny goes back to real life)
Kenny: Let's battle now!!!
Danny: Alright.
Kenny: It's first to 2 points, alright.
Danny: Ok.
Kenny and Danny: 3, 2, 1, LET IT RIP!!!
Danny: Flame Defense!!!
Kenny: Chaos Launch!!!
(Kitsune is deflecting Storm's barrage of attacks)
(later in the battle)
Danny: KITSUNE!!!
(Kitsune is shiny and glowing like fire, Kitsune activates Shiny Fire-Flux)
Kenny: STORM!!!
(Storm's avatar happens, and Storm is glowing purple and blue, Storm activates Flare-Flux)
Danny: Shining Upper!!!
Kenny: Flare of the Cosmos!!!
(Kitsune and Storm are hitting each other and they keep hitting in different directions)
Danny and Kenny: AHHHHHHH!!!
(Storm bursts)
Kenny: Ahh man!!!
Danny: You did good though.
Kenny: I did!!!
Danny: Yes you did!!!
Kenny: Good job on winning.
Danny: Thanks Kenny!!!
Kenny: Your welcome.
Preview:
Kenny: What!!! Dante Koryu is here!!!
Danny: I'll stay here then for a few days.
Kenny: Yay Danny!!!
Next time on Beyblade Burst: Final Moment
Chapter 2 Part 2
The Dragon Tamer!!! Dante Koryu
Kenny and Danny: 3, 2, 1, LET IT RIP!!!
For this character contest I'll be accepting 10 people and when the contest is over there is going to be top 4
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RE: Beyblade Burst: Final Moment [Character Contest] - Dragon Blader Z - Sep. 26, 2021
Flare, but you can make it any system
RE: Beyblade Burst: Final Moment [Character Contest] - Lucha Burst - Sep. 26, 2021
(Sep. 26, 2021 5:52 PM)Dragon Blader Z Wrote: Flare, but you can make it any system
Okay
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