[Fan Fiction] Beyblade burst.. End of an Era

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RE: Beyblade burst.. End of an Era - LegendJustice - Aug. 11, 2021

I feel like you didn't explain the Battle well try this:

*Valkryie leans on its driver and speeds up*

Or this:

(Valkryie collides with Tigre)

And for the announcer you can do "Hanami" it you want

RE: Beyblade burst.. End of an Era - GenesisBlader - Aug. 11, 2021

(Aug. 08, 2021 6:17 PM)TheGolden Blade Wrote: Guys after the tournament ends what do you guys want to see?

A- Tadi on the path to become the strongest alone

B- Tadi joins a club to get stronger

B definitely because plot armor

RE: Beyblade burst.. End of an Era - UnseenBurst - Aug. 11, 2021

(Aug. 11, 2021 12:22 AM)TheGolden Blade Wrote: Chapter 4: Valkryie! Get them!

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Announcer: Okay boys and girls! That was an amazing second round!

Valt: It sure was!

Announcer: The score is 1-1! Who will be the winner of this epic battle?

Tadi: I will.

Announcer: We will now begin the third battle!

Ref: Ready! Set!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Valt and Tadi: Go shoot!

Tadi: Go Tigre! Burst them!

Valt: Valkryie! Rush shoot!

Tadi: Tigre shoot!

Announcer: This is a battle between two attack types! What will be the outcome?

Tadi: I’ve worked too hard to lose. LET’S GO TIGRE!

Tadi resonates with Tigre*

Valt: AHHHHH VALKRYIE!!!

Tadi: BREAK THEM TIGRE!

Valt: Don’t go down this path Tadi!

Tadi: I feel power, but I want more.. MORE!

Valt: Valkryie will show you how to blade!

Valt: FLASH SHOOT!

Tadi: That move won’t work on us again!

Tadi: Go Tigre! Bite Impact!

Announcer: They both collide! What will happen?

Valt and Tadi: AAAAAAAAAA!

Announcer: Tigre gets sent into the air! Will this be a ring out finish!

Tadi: Rise Tigre! Show them what you’ve got!

Announcer: And.. Tigre hangs on!

Tadi: NOW GET THEM!

Tadi: GO TIGRE!

Valt: VALKRYIE!

Tadi: FINAL BITE!

Valt: Do it now!

Announcer: What!? Valkryie is picking up speed!

Valkryie dodges Tigre*

Announcer: Amazing! Valkryie has dodged Tigre!

Tadi: What?

Announcer: Tigre hits the wall and is now unbalanced!

Valt: AHHHH VALKRYIE!

Valt: Heroic Flash Slash!

Valkryie collides with Tigre!

Tadi: Survive Tigre!

Tigre gets sent to the air and burst*

Ref: Heroic Valkryie, with a burst finish. The final score is 3-1! And Valt Aoi is the winner!

Crowd cheers*

Announcer: WOOOO! The wonder boy has done it with style!

Tadi: But how?

Tadi runs*

Valt: Wait Tadi!

Valt: It’s too late, he’s gone.

1 hour later…

Tadi: How did I lose? I fought with all my strength.

Tadi: We have to resonate more Tigre.

Chad: Hey, I saw your battle.

Tadi: Hm.

Chad: You put up a good fight.

Tadi: I guess.

Chad: Hey, you up for a battle?

Tadi: Sure.

Both: Ready! Set! 3! 2! 1! Go shoot!

Tadi: Go Tigre!

Chad: Burst them Corneus!

Tadi: Tigre Shoot!

Chad: Corneus Shoot!

Both beys ring out*

Tadi: Oh.

Chad: Again!

Both: Let it rip!

Tadi: Go Tigre!

Chad: Go Corneus!

Both beys collide and ring out finish*

Tadi: Again?

Both: Let it rip!

Tadi and Chad battle for 100 times and all of them end up in a simultaneous ring out finish*

Chad: I’m exhausted.

Tadi: Same.

Chad: I think we should battle tomorrow.

Tadi: Alright, when tomorrow?

Chad: After the tournament..

Tadi: Deal, meet me here after the tournament.

Chad: Well then, I’m going home, bye.

Tadi: Bye.

Tadi: Tigre..

Tadi’s heartbeat increases*

Tadi: We will become the greatest ever, and complete our goal.

Tadi: What we plan on doing to blading.. is far worse then what they imagine.

PREVIEW:

Tadi: Ok, it’s the Quarter Finals of the Tournament!

Tadi: I got a pretty tough, opponent, but I’ll beat him.

Tadi: Me and Tigre will resonate more and become the greatest ever.

Valt: Tadi, do this battke the right way.

Tadi: It looks like Valt is watching me battle!

Next on Beyblade burst… End of an Era:

Quarter Finals! An insane battle!

3!
2!
1!
Go shoot!

Oh yeah, I forgot to tell you guys, Tadi is going to have a pet.

Yeah, like LegendJustice said "You could've explained it a bit better" try working on Grammer too!

RE: Beyblade burst.. End of an Era - TheGolden Blade - Aug. 11, 2021

Hey, so I will just explain a bit about this fanfic:

This fanfic is called Beyblade Burst.. End of an Era. And the main character is called Tadi. I wouldn’t really call him a hero because he wants to destroy blading as we all know it. And if he does so. The world of blading will change completely. This fanfic will be appropriate for all ages, and I can assure you, you will enjoy reading it! Now about Tadi: His bey is called Bite Tigre, he wants to become the greatest ever. Now a bit about his personality:

He is a boy
He is mysterious and lonely.
He has a bey called Bite Tigre.
He is 13 years of age.
He lives in a city called Brookville, Japan.
He was born in Japan.

Now about the plot:

The current tournament is being hosted at a stadium called Brooblade Stadium.

The announcer for this series is NOT Hanami.

Conclusion:

Hopefully this got you to understand a bit more of the fanfic!

RE: Beyblade burst.. End of an Era - LegendJustice - Sep. 06, 2021

Will this Fic continue?