RE: Beyblade Burst: Destiny! - UnseenBurst - Aug. 04, 2021
(Aug. 04, 2021 4:18 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: Episode 2 has taken a sharp turn to the left!
Super Bond! Dominating the Beyblade World!
(Meanwhile, at the park, Gaele was training with his Destiny bey, Reclux Gaelem, in search for a bond like Valt's...)
Gaele: Let's go, Gaelem! Attack 'em with all you got!
Waltz: Not yet! Keep on going!
(Gaelem would completely knock Waltz' bey out of the stadium)
Gaele: Heh! Another win for me! (He'd jump up and down)
Waltz: Hey! I was really close!
Gaele: Yeah right... who else wants to battle?
Narrarator: Gaele was always ready for a fight. He also hates to admit defeat, but that's what makes him a fierce opponent.
(Suddenly, a strange duo would come walking up to the Bey Park where Gaele was, scrolling through some battles on their Bey Pad)
??? (1): Did you see that battle? It was totally awesome!
??? (2): I guess... but the battle between Bell and Valt was much more epic!!
Gaele: Bell and Valt-
(Gaele would have a flashback)
Valt: Go for a Savior Slash!
Bell: Dynamite BOMBER!!
(They'd clash ferociously)
(The flashback would end)
Gaele: HEY!! (He'd say, running over to the duo)
??? (1): Uh, can we help you?
Gaele: You've seen Valt before, right?
??? (2): Yeah, who hasn't?
Gaele: Well, we should have a battle!
??? (2): YOU DID THAT JUST TO BRIBE US INTO BATTLING-
??? (1): Sure thing! Me and Roar Longinus are winning this thing! (He'd say, holding up his Left Spin Defense Type Bey)
??? (2): I'm not even surprised... (She'd say, putting her hand over her face in annoyance)
Gaele: No way, me and Reclux Gaelem are totally going full force and winning this thing! (He'd say, holding out his Destiny Bey)
??? (1) and ??? (2): Hold on, is that a new system?
Gaele: Uh huh, and we'll be winning with it as well! (He'd say, grinning happily)
??? (1) (Mind): Interesting...
(They'd line up at the stadium)
??? (2): I'll ref. (She'd say, going to the ref area) Inspect your op-
Gaele: Hey I forgot to ask, what are you guys' names? My name's Gaele Reiasu!
Suji: I'm Suji Kaneki, and over here is my friend Hazel Okoya-
Hazel: INSPECT YOUR OPPONENT'S BEYS!!
Gaele: Alright alright, jeez...
Suji: Sorry, she can be a hothead sometimes...
Hazel: Excuse me?!
Suji: *gulp* Nothing...
(They'd hand each other their beys)
Suji (Mind): Reclux Gaelem. An attack type with two modes: High Smash mode and Low Upper mode. It looks like it has 8 powerful blades that can be used for heavy assaults, and it's driver looks like it can counter attacks pretty easily with it's spiral coil shape close to the bottom. This new system seems awesome, but I'll have to defeat it!
Gaele (Mind): Hmmm... this Bey seems like a heavy defense type. Suji might be planning to defend all the way... so I'll have to attack all the way!
Hazel: First battle... ready, and set.
Gaele and Suji: Three! Two! One! Let it... RIP!!
(Suji would pull off a Dynamite Shoot, while Gaele would pull off... a Destiny Shoot?!)
Suji: Huh?! I've never seen a launch like that...
Gaele: Heh!
Suji: No matter how flashy you're launch is, we're still winning! Longinus, take the center!!
Gaele: Not a chance, attack 'em head on!!
(Gaelem would ferociously attack Longinus, ripping up the stadium with a powerful barrage of attacks. Longinus would become destabilized relatively quick)
Gaele: How ya like that?
Suji: Tch!
Hazel: (gasps)
(Mind) He's using the spiral coil ring on his bey to attack Longinus infinitely! He's not as bad as he acts!
Suji: C'mon, we can take 'em!
Gaele: Ya think?
(Gaelem would hit Longinus all the way to the stadium wall, destabilizing it even more)
Suji (Mind): I can't do anything at all...
Gaele: Now let's finish him off! Gaelem, go for a Reclux Drive!!!
(Gaelem would lean on it's Quantum driver's coil, then it would dash straight towards Longinus, bursting it almost on impact)
Suji: *gasps*
Hazel: W-With a Burst Finish, Gaele Reiasu is the winner!
Gaele: Hey, that was a totally epic bat-
Hazel: Hold up, I'm up next!
Gaele: Suit yourself!
Gaele and Hazel: Three! Two! One! Let it... RIP!!
Gaele: C'mon, up and at 'em Gaelem!!
Hazel: Knock 'em outta the park, Vanish Bahamut!!
Suji (Mind): Gaele's super powerful... along with his system! I have to make a Destiny bey of my own to rival his power!
(1 hour later, everyone would be tired out from battling, laying down on the grass)
Gaele (Panting): So... anyone else wanna have another go at Gaelem?
Hazel (Panting): Why not...? Me and Bahamut are gonna send you packing!
Suji (Mind): Don't worry Longinus, I'll totally evolve you and make you even stronger than before!
Episode 3 Preview!
Gaele: Huh? Gaele wants to make a Destiny bey of his own? Awesome!
Gaele: Finally, time to battle!!
Gaele: Awesome!! It has a ring around it's whole Blade? Wicked!!
Gaele: It'll be tough taking it down...
Next Episode on Beyblade Burst: Destiny!
Lord of the Rings! Wisdom Saturn!
Okay so say if a character is gasping or laughing this is how you really capture it Percy: *Gasps* Lui: *Laughs* Using this * is what describes what they're doing but other than that awesome chapter!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Destiny! - GenesisBlader - Aug. 04, 2021
(Aug. 04, 2021 4:59 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: (Aug. 04, 2021 4:18 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: Episode 2 has taken a sharp turn to the left!
Super Bond! Dominating the Beyblade World!
(Meanwhile, at the park, Gaele was training with his Destiny bey, Reclux Gaelem, in search for a bond like Valt's...)
Gaele: Let's go, Gaelem! Attack 'em with all you got!
Waltz: Not yet! Keep on going!
(Gaelem would completely knock Waltz' bey out of the stadium)
Gaele: Heh! Another win for me! (He'd jump up and down)
Waltz: Hey! I was really close!
Gaele: Yeah right... who else wants to battle?
Narrarator: Gaele was always ready for a fight. He also hates to admit defeat, but that's what makes him a fierce opponent.
(Suddenly, a strange duo would come walking up to the Bey Park where Gaele was, scrolling through some battles on their Bey Pad)
??? (1): Did you see that battle? It was totally awesome!
??? (2): I guess... but the battle between Bell and Valt was much more epic!!
Gaele: Bell and Valt-
(Gaele would have a flashback)
Valt: Go for a Savior Slash!
Bell: Dynamite BOMBER!!
(They'd clash ferociously)
(The flashback would end)
Gaele: HEY!! (He'd say, running over to the duo)
??? (1): Uh, can we help you?
Gaele: You've seen Valt before, right?
??? (2): Yeah, who hasn't?
Gaele: Well, we should have a battle!
??? (2): YOU DID THAT JUST TO BRIBE US INTO BATTLING-
??? (1): Sure thing! Me and Roar Longinus are winning this thing! (He'd say, holding up his Left Spin Defense Type Bey)
??? (2): I'm not even surprised... (She'd say, putting her hand over her face in annoyance)
Gaele: No way, me and Reclux Gaelem are totally going full force and winning this thing! (He'd say, holding out his Destiny Bey)
??? (1) and ??? (2): Hold on, is that a new system?
Gaele: Uh huh, and we'll be winning with it as well! (He'd say, grinning happily)
??? (1) (Mind): Interesting...
(They'd line up at the stadium)
??? (2): I'll ref. (She'd say, going to the ref area) Inspect your op-
Gaele: Hey I forgot to ask, what are you guys' names? My name's Gaele Reiasu!
Suji: I'm Suji Kaneki, and over here is my friend Hazel Okoya-
Hazel: INSPECT YOUR OPPONENT'S BEYS!!
Gaele: Alright alright, jeez...
Suji: Sorry, she can be a hothead sometimes...
Hazel: Excuse me?!
Suji: *gulp* Nothing...
(They'd hand each other their beys)
Suji (Mind): Reclux Gaelem. An attack type with two modes: High Smash mode and Low Upper mode. It looks like it has 8 powerful blades that can be used for heavy assaults, and it's driver looks like it can counter attacks pretty easily with it's spiral coil shape close to the bottom. This new system seems awesome, but I'll have to defeat it!
Gaele (Mind): Hmmm... this Bey seems like a heavy defense type. Suji might be planning to defend all the way... so I'll have to attack all the way!
Hazel: First battle... ready, and set.
Gaele and Suji: Three! Two! One! Let it... RIP!!
(Suji would pull off a Dynamite Shoot, while Gaele would pull off... a Destiny Shoot?!)
Suji: Huh?! I've never seen a launch like that...
Gaele: Heh!
Suji: No matter how flashy you're launch is, we're still winning! Longinus, take the center!!
Gaele: Not a chance, attack 'em head on!!
(Gaelem would ferociously attack Longinus, ripping up the stadium with a powerful barrage of attacks. Longinus would become destabilized relatively quick)
Gaele: How ya like that?
Suji: Tch!
Hazel: (gasps)
(Mind) He's using the spiral coil ring on his bey to attack Longinus infinitely! He's not as bad as he acts!
Suji: C'mon, we can take 'em!
Gaele: Ya think?
(Gaelem would hit Longinus all the way to the stadium wall, destabilizing it even more)
Suji (Mind): I can't do anything at all...
Gaele: Now let's finish him off! Gaelem, go for a Reclux Drive!!!
(Gaelem would lean on it's Quantum driver's coil, then it would dash straight towards Longinus, bursting it almost on impact)
Suji: *gasps*
Hazel: W-With a Burst Finish, Gaele Reiasu is the winner!
Gaele: Hey, that was a totally epic bat-
Hazel: Hold up, I'm up next!
Gaele: Suit yourself!
Gaele and Hazel: Three! Two! One! Let it... RIP!!
Gaele: C'mon, up and at 'em Gaelem!!
Hazel: Knock 'em outta the park, Vanish Bahamut!!
Suji (Mind): Gaele's super powerful... along with his system! I have to make a Destiny bey of my own to rival his power!
(1 hour later, everyone would be tired out from battling, laying down on the grass)
Gaele (Panting): So... anyone else wanna have another go at Gaelem?
Hazel (Panting): Why not...? Me and Bahamut are gonna send you packing!
Suji (Mind): Don't worry Longinus, I'll totally evolve you and make you even stronger than before!
Episode 3 Preview!
Gaele: Huh? Gaele wants to make a Destiny bey of his own? Awesome!
Gaele: Finally, time to battle!!
Gaele: Awesome!! It has a ring around it's whole Blade? Wicked!!
Gaele: It'll be tough taking it down...
Next Episode on Beyblade Burst: Destiny!
Lord of the Rings! Wisdom Saturn!
Okay so say if a character is gasping or laughing this is how you really capture it Percy: *Gasps* Lui: *Laughs* Using this * is what describes what they're doing but other than that awesome chapter! yes!
thanks for feedback!
(Aug. 04, 2021 4:53 PM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: Great Episode!
thanks for the feedback!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Destiny! - LegendJustice - Aug. 04, 2021
I love how when it's the main character everyone always explains there bey in detail but when it's some one else....... It's a whole difference
RE: Beyblade Burst: Destiny! - Demon Belial - Aug. 04, 2021
cool work!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Destiny! - GenesisBlader - Aug. 04, 2021
(Aug. 04, 2021 5:18 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: I love how when it's the main character everyone always explains there bey in detail but when it's some one else....... It's a whole difference
well I did it simply because I needed to explain a bit how Reclux Gaelem looks
RE: Beyblade Burst: Destiny! - LegendJustice - Aug. 04, 2021
Also nice chqpterm
RE: Beyblade Burst: Destiny! - GenesisBlader - Aug. 04, 2021
(Aug. 04, 2021 5:24 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Also nice chqpterm
thanks jit
hazel will be getting her own bey soon enough.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Destiny! - Hollowmind13 - Aug. 04, 2021
"Gaele: Huh? Gaele wants to make a Destiny bey of his own? Awesome!"
You mean Suji right?
RE: Beyblade Burst: Destiny! - GenesisBlader - Aug. 04, 2021
(Aug. 04, 2021 5:51 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: "Gaele: Huh? Gaele wants to make a Destiny bey of his own? Awesome!"
You mean Suji right?
wait what
i'll change that lol
RE: Beyblade Burst: Destiny! - GenesisBlader - Aug. 05, 2021
Episode 3 has emerged from planet Saturn!
Lord of the Rings! Wisdom Saturn!
(Suji would have a flashback)
Suji's Dad: Alright Suji, make sure to take good care of your new bey!
Suji: Got it Dad!
Suji's Dad: And don't forget to do your family proud!!
Suji: Don't worry, I'll make sure to do you guys proud, and to defeat every blader there is! (He'd say, heading out the door)
Suji's Mom: (She'd shed a tear) He's growing so fast...
(The flashback would end)
(Gaele, Suji, and Hazel would be at the park)
Suji: And I promised to them that I would defeat every blader there is...
Gaele: Oh... well, don't worry, I know you can do it! (He'd grin, then holded his fist out at Suji)
Suji: ...Thanks dude, I know I can too!
(They'd both fist bump)
Hazel: Why didn't you tell me this before?!
Suji: I guess I just felt insecure back then...
Hazel: Right. So, what is it about defeating every blader there is?
Suji: If I'm gonna reach that goal... I gotta make myself a Destiny Bey!!
Gaele, and Hazel: *Gasps*
Suji: So, Gaele, could you help me with that?
Gaele: ...Of course!! Let's go over to my house!
Suji and Hazel: Right!
(They'd head over to Gaele's house)
Mom: Oh, hey Gaele! Did you bring some friends over?
Gaele: Uh... yeah! Did you see Dad anywhere?
Mom: Oh yeah, he's in the garage.
Gaele: Oh, thanks Mom!
Mom: No problem sweetie!
(They'd head over to the garage)
Dad: Alright... and... done!
Suji: So this is where you made the Destiny system...
Gaele: Yep!
Dad: Oh, hey champ! You need anything?
Gaele: Hey dad. So, I was wondering... could you make my friend a Destiny bey of his own?
Dad: Of course!
Suji: Awesome!
(Suji and Gaele would come over to the 3D printing area, where his Dad was)
Dad: Alright, what type of bey do you want it to be?
Suji: Hmm... how about a defense type with a free-spinning ring that can deflect attacks?
Gaele: WHOA! Awesome!
Hazel: Pretty cool!
Dad: Alright then, let's get to work!
Gaele and Suji: Yeah!
Suji (Mind): Don't worry Roar Longinus, we'll evolve and totally achieve our goal!
(Roar Longinus would shine)
Dad: Now let's gather some metal and plastic!
Gaele and Suji: On it!
(Timeskip to when they where done getting the metal and plastic)
(Suji, Gaele, and Dad would get masks and started to work on the details and features of the bey)
Suji: Alright... almost done...
(Timeskip to when they were done)
Suji: IT'S DONE!!
Gaele: What's it's name?
Suji: Hmm... How about Wisdom Saturn!!
Hazel: That was out of nowhere.
Gaele: Hey, I think it's pretty cool!
Hazel: Despite Suji having no wisdom at all, I could say otherwise.
Gaele: Why I outta-
Suji: Well, I may not have wisdom, but Saturn has plenty, right pal?
(Saturn would glimmer)
Hazel: Whatever.
Dad: You do need to test it out...
Suji: Oh yeah, I do!
Gaele: Ooh, I wanna tes-
Hazel: I'll test it out.
Suji: I mean, I haven't battled Hazel in a long time... so sure!
Dad: Alright then!
(They'd line up at the stadium)
Gaele: I'll ref! (He'd get into the ref area) Inspect your opponent's beys!
(They'd hand each other their beyblades)
Hazel (Mind): Wisdom Saturn. A defense type with a circular, free-spinning ring that surrounds the whole blade, increasing it's defense. It also has a performance tip with a rubber ring on the bottom of the tip, engulfing the bottom part of the tip that has a circular spike. Let's see how this does!
Suji (Mind): This'll be so exciting battling with my new bey, and with my friend!
Gaele: First battle! Ready, and set!
Everyone: Three! Two! One!
Suji and Hazel: Let it... RIP!!!
(Hazel would pull off a Dynamite Shoot)
Suji (Mind): I couldn't pull off a Destiny Shoot?!
(Saturn would head for the center)
Suji: No matter! Saturn, set up defense!
Hazel: Not today! Bahamut, attack!
(Bahamut would fiercely attack, but to no avail as Saturn would just nullify it with it's ring, redirecting Bahamut straight into the wall)
Hazel: *Gasps*
Suji: You're gonna need more than that to knock Saturn off it's A-Game!
Gaele: Whoa! Saturn's ring barrier is super sturdy!
Suji: Now, let's go for Wisdom Barricade!
(Saturn would stand completely still in the middle of the stadium, generating a green and purple energy barrier)
Hazel: Break through, Bahamut!!
(Bahamut would attack Saturn, but instead of getting sent flying, it leaned on it's ring)
Suji: You've fallen straight into my trap! SATURN!!
(Saturn's avatar would blaze ferociously out of it's bey, becoming engulfed in purple flames)
Suji: WISDOM COUNTER!!
(Saturn would counterattack by using the stadium floor to lean on it's ring, then it would attack Bahamut, sending it flying into the stadium wall. It would then burst)
Hazel: *Gasps*
Suji: Yeah! Aced it!
Gaele: Burst finish! With a score of 2-0, Suji wins!
Suji: I'll totally achieve the goal with Saturn!!
Gaele: Hey Hazel, have you considered making a Destiny bey-
Hazel: Are you saying that I'm weak?!
Gaele: No, but-
Hazel: Also, me and my bey work together just fine!
Gaele: Suit yourself...
Suji: Alright then, Gaele, your my next opponent! It's time I exact my revenge!
Gaele: Not a chance, even with your super barrier, me and Gaelem are totally winning it!
Suji: Wait- I got an idea!
Hazel: It better actually be great this time-
Suji: How about we record this battle? The two first Destiny beys going head to head, people can't miss out on this!
Gaele: Hmm.. Yeah!
Hazel: Good thing a brought my BeyPad- (She'd say, scrolling over to the recording app. She'd then press record) Alright, you two ready?
Gaele and Suji: Yeah!
Hazel: Ok.. ready, and set!
(Gaele would switch Gaelem to High Smash mode)
Gaele and Suji: 3! 2! 1! Let it... RIP!!
(The two beys would land in the stadium)
Suji: Now, Saturn! Take the center!
Gaele: Not a chance, after it Gaelem!
(Gaelem would soar in for an attack, but would instead be devastatingly thrown into the wall by Saturn's ring barrier)
Suji: Heh!
Gaele: Grrr... Gaelem, go for a Destiny Shoot!
(Gaelem would repeatedly swagger Saturn with devastating blows, yet Saturn wouldn't even move an inch from the middle)
Gaele: Alright, now we're getting serious!! GAELEM, GO FOR A RECLUX DRIVE!!
(Gaelem would pick up speed, then it would charge straight towards Saturn)
Suji: Heh.
(Saturn would lean on it's ring)
Suji: Now Saturn, WISDOM COUNTER!!
(Saturn would then counterattack, flinging Gaelem out of the stadium)
Gaele: *Gasps*
Suji: Yeah! That's how we do it!
Hazel: Ring out finish! One point goes to Suji Kaneki!
Gaele: Just you watch, Suji! Me and Gaelem will totally make a comeback!
Suji: We'll see!
Episode 4 Preview!
Gaele: If we're winning against Suji, we gotta switch gears!
Gaele: Huh? Dad gave our bey's Wide and Enclosed mode? Awesome!
Gaele: This'll make our performance ten times more fun!!
Next Episode on Beyblade Burst: Destiny!
Transform! Switching Gears!
3, 2, 1!
Let it... RIP!!
I'll totally be the best there is!!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Destiny! - Kiryu Kazuma - Aug. 05, 2021
(Aug. 05, 2021 5:04 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: Episode 3 has emerged from planet Saturn!
Lord of the Rings! Wisdom Saturn!
(Suji would have a flashback)
Suji's Dad: Alright Suji, make sure to take good care of your new bey!
Suji: Got it Dad!
Suji's Dad: And don't forget to do your family proud!!
Suji: Don't worry, I'll make sure to do you guys proud, and to defeat every blader there is! (He'd say, heading out the door)
Suji's Mom: (She'd shed a tear) He's growing so fast...
(The flashback would end)
(Gaele, Suji, and Hazel would be at the park)
Suji: And I promised to them that I would defeat every blader there is...
Gaele: Oh... well, don't worry, I know you can do it! (He'd grin, then holded his fist out at Suji)
Suji: ...Thanks dude, I know I can too!
(They'd both fist bump)
Hazel: Why didn't you tell me this before?!
Suji: I guess I just felt insecure back then...
Hazel: Right. So, what is it about defeating every blader there is?
Suji: If I'm gonna reach that goal... I gotta make myself a Destiny Bey!!
Gaele, and Hazel: *Gasps*
Suji: So, Gaele, could you help me with that?
Gaele: ...Of course!! Let's go over to my house!
Suji and Hazel: Right!
(They'd head over to Gaele's house)
Mom: Oh, hey Gaele! Did you bring some friends over?
Gaele: Uh... yeah! Did you see Dad anywhere?
Mom: Oh yeah, he's in the garage.
Gaele: Oh, thanks Mom!
Mom: No problem sweetie!
(They'd head over to the garage)
Dad: Alright... and... done!
Suji: So this is where you made the Destiny system...
Gaele: Yep!
Dad: Oh, hey champ! You need anything?
Gaele: Hey dad. So, I was wondering... could you make my friend a Destiny bey of his own?
Dad: Of course!
Suji: Awesome!
(Suji and Gaele would come over to the 3D printing area, where his Dad was)
Dad: Alright, what type of bey do you want it to be?
Suji: Hmm... how about a defense type with a free-spinning ring that can deflect attacks?
Gaele: WHOA! Awesome!
Hazel: Pretty cool!
Dad: Alright then, let's get to work!
Gaele and Suji: Yeah!
Suji (Mind): Don't worry Roar Longinus, we'll evolve and totally achieve our goal!
(Roar Longinus would shine)
Dad: Now let's gather some metal and plastic!
Gaele and Suji: On it!
(Timeskip to when they where done getting the metal and plastic)
(Suji, Gaele, and Dad would get masks and started to work on the details and features of the bey)
Suji: Alright... almost done...
(Timeskip to when they were done)
Suji: IT'S DONE!!
Gaele: What's it's name?
Suji: Hmm... How about Wisdom Saturn!!
Hazel: That was out of nowhere.
Gaele: Hey, I think it's pretty cool!
Hazel: Despite Suji having no wisdom at all, I could say otherwise.
Gaele: Why I outta-
Suji: Well, I may not have wisdom, but Saturn has plenty, right pal?
(Saturn would glimmer)
Hazel: Whatever.
Dad: You do need to test it out...
Suji: Oh yeah, I do!
Gaele: Ooh, I wanna tes-
Hazel: I'll test it out.
Suji: I mean, I haven't battled Hazel in a long time... so sure!
Dad: Alright then!
(They'd line up at the stadium)
Gaele: I'll ref! (He'd get into the ref area) Inspect your opponent's beys!
(They'd hand each other their beyblades)
Hazel (Mind): Wisdom Saturn. A defense type with a circular, free-spinning ring that surrounds the whole blade, increasing it's defense. It also has a performance tip with a rubber ring on the bottom of the tip, engulfing the bottom part of the tip that has a circular spike. Let's see how this does!
Suji (Mind): This'll be so exciting battling with my new bey, and with my friend!
Gaele: First battle! Ready, and set!
Everyone: Three! Two! One!
Suji and Hazel: Let it... RIP!!!
(Hazel would pull off a Dynamite Shoot)
Suji (Mind): I couldn't pull off a Destiny Shoot?!
(Saturn would head for the center)
Suji: No matter! Saturn, set up defense!
Hazel: Not today! Bahamut, attack!
(Bahamut would fiercely attack, but to no avail as Saturn would just nullify it with it's ring, redirecting Bahamut straight into the wall)
Hazel: *Gasps*
Suji: You're gonna need more than that to knock Saturn off it's A-Game!
Gaele: Whoa! Saturn's ring barrier is super sturdy!
Suji: Now, let's go for Wisdom Barricade!
(Saturn would stand completely still in the middle of the stadium, generating a green and purple energy barrier)
Hazel: Break through, Bahamut!!
(Bahamut would attack Saturn, but instead of getting sent flying, it leaned on it's ring)
Suji: You've fallen straight into my trap! SATURN!!
(Saturn's avatar would blaze ferociously out of it's bey, becoming engulfed in purple flames)
Suji: WISDOM COUNTER!!
(Saturn would counterattack by using the stadium floor to lean on it's ring, then it would attack Bahamut, sending it flying into the stadium wall. It would then burst)
Hazel: *Gasps*
Suji: Yeah! Aced it!
Gaele: Burst finish! With a score of 2-0, Suji wins!
Suji: I'll totally achieve the goal with Saturn!!
Gaele: Hey Hazel, have you considered making a Destiny bey-
Hazel: Are you saying that I'm weak?!
Gaele: No, but-
Hazel: Also, me and my bey work together just fine!
Gaele: Suit yourself...
Suji: Alright then, Gaele, your my next opponent! It's time I exact my revenge!
Gaele: Not a chance, even with your super barrier, me and Gaelem are totally winning it!
Suji: Wait- I got an idea!
Hazel: It better actually be great this time-
Suji: How about we record this battle? The two first Destiny beys going head to head, people can't miss out on this!
Gaele: Hmm.. Yeah!
Hazel: Good thing a brought my BeyPad- (She'd say, scrolling over to the recording app. She'd then press record) Alright, you two ready?
Gaele and Suji: Yeah!
Hazel: Ok.. ready, and set!
(Gaele would switch Gaelem to High Smash mode)
Gaele and Suji: 3! 2! 1! Let it... RIP!!
(The two beys would land in the stadium)
Suji: Now, Saturn! Take the center!
Gaele: Not a chance, after it Gaelem!
(Gaelem would soar in for an attack, but would instead be devastatingly thrown into the wall by Saturn's ring barrier)
Suji: Heh!
Gaele: Grrr... Gaelem, go for a Destiny Shoot!
(Gaelem would repeatedly swagger Saturn with devastating blows, yet Saturn wouldn't even move an inch from the middle)
Gaele: Alright, now we're getting serious!! GAELEM, GO FOR A RECLUX DRIVE!!
(Gaelem would pick up speed, then it would charge straight towards Saturn)
Suji: Heh.
(Saturn would lean on it's ring)
Suji: Now Saturn, WISDOM COUNTER!!
(Saturn would then counterattack, flinging Gaelem out of the stadium)
Gaele: *Gasps*
Suji: Yeah! That's how we do it!
Hazel: Ring out finish! One point goes to Suji Kaneki!
Gaele: Just you watch, Suji! Me and Gaelem will totally make a comeback!
Suji: We'll see!
Episode 4 Preview!
Gaele: If we're winning against Suji, we gotta switch gears!
Gaele: Huh? Dad gave our bey's Wide and Enclosed mode? Awesome!
Gaele: This'll make our performance ten times more fun!!
Next Episode on Beyblade Burst: Destiny!
Transform! Switching Gears!
3, 2, 1!
Let it... RIP!!
I'll totally be the best there is!!
Saturn is the roman version of Cronus. Oh and Nice Episode!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Destiny! - LegendJustice - Aug. 05, 2021
Great episode! But I feel like Hazel is a bit off......
RE: Beyblade Burst: Destiny! - GenesisBlader - Aug. 05, 2021
(Aug. 05, 2021 5:29 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Great episode! But I feel like Hazel is a bit off......
huh? what do you mean? do you think i wrote her wrong? because if you do then I can change her personality
don't worry, i'll explain Hazel's backstory soon in the chapter
also developed a little character arc for Suji in this chapter
RE: Beyblade Burst: Destiny! - LegendJustice - Aug. 05, 2021
NO! It's not that it's just it's feels like she's being rude to the main character Gaele
RE: Beyblade Burst: Destiny! - GenesisBlader - Aug. 05, 2021
(Aug. 05, 2021 5:34 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: NO! It's not that it's just it's feels like she's being rude to the main character Gaele
well it coincides with the fact that he randomly came up to the two (Hazel and Suji) then he kinda stole her friend
don't worry I'll tell her backstory later
you will be absolutely shocked
Name: Gaele Reiasu
Gender: Male
Age: 11
Height: 4'9
H/C: Gold, White (Full Power)
E/C: Blue
Role: Main Protagonist
Hand Profession: Right
Characteristics:
Gaele has gold hair, blue eyes, light skin, and a white bandage on his left cheek.
His Destiny attire consists of a light blue short sleeved, hooded jacket with yellow outlines, on top of a yellow shirt with a blue "G" on it. He has dark blue shorts, and yellow top shoes with blue outlines and a blue base. Finally, he has a golden fingerless glove on his left hand.
Personality: Gaele is a confident boy with an out-going demeanor. He's good at socializing, especially shown in Episode 2 where he befriends Suji Kaneki and Hazel Okoya. He can also be competitive at times, most clearly shown during battles. He does not like to lose, as he finds it a way of admitting defeat.
Beyblade: Reclux Gaelem-Prism Wayward Quantum+Burst
Type: Attack
Spin Direction: Right
Parts:
(Will be explained later)
Special Moves/Shoots:
Shoots:
Destiny Shoot: A Destiny Shoot gives the beyblade an intense surge in power and speed. It can only be achieved by bonding with your bey.
Moves:
Reclux Drive: After riding the stadium slope, Gaelem rushes back down, engulfed in a golden aura, dealing massive damage to the opposing bey.
Destiny Shoot: Gaelem releases an intense barrage of attacks using it's Quantum Driver, dealing great damage to the opponent's bey.
RE: Beyblade Burst: Destiny! - GenesisBlader - Aug. 06, 2021
Episode 4 has joined the battle!
Transform! Switching Gears!
Suji: Alright! I'm in the lead, there's no turning back now!
Gaele: Just you watch, I'll make a comeback! (He'd say, clicking in his beyblade)
Gaele (Mind): If I can give Saturn a good upper attack, we should be good to go!
Hazel: Second round! Ready, and set!
Gaele and Suji: Three, two, one! Let it... RIP!!
(The two beys would spiral around the stadium)
Suji: Let's go! Take the center!!
Gaele: Not a chance, hit 'em with Destiny Shoot!! (He'd say, thrusting his arm forwards multiple times)
(Saturn would deflect all of the attacks, but wouldn't be able to take the center)
Suji: Redirect the attack with Wisdom Barricade!
(Saturn would deflect Gaelem's attack, redirecting it into the wall)
Gaele: Heh! You fell right into my trap! GAELEM!!
(Gaelem's avatar would burst from it's beyblade, becoming illuminated by a gold and blue aura)
Gaele: Time for our RECLUX DRIVE!!
(Gaelem would bound off the wall, then surged towards Saturn)
Suji: We're not losing now! SATURN!!
(Saturn's avatar would burst out of it's beyblade, becoming engulfed by a purple and green aura)
Suji: WISDOM COUNTER!!
(As Gaelem and Saturn would clash, Saturn's ring barrier would retract back inside the layer, then they would both be sent flying out of the stadium, then Saturn would hit the ground a split second after Gaelem would)
Gaele: *Gasps*
Suji: *Gasps*
Hazel: ...With a Ring Out finish, Suji Kaneki wins!
Gaele: Aw man!!
Suji: Well, that was a fun battle!
Gaele: ...Yeah... Let's battle again sometime!
(They'd shake hands)
Hazel: Ugh.
Gaele: Well guys- race you to the Bey Park!! Last one there's a rotten egg!
Suji: Oh, I'm not a rotten egg! (He'd say, sprinting out of the house and towards the Bey Park)
Hazel: How did I end up with friends like these- (She'd say, running off)
(Meanwhile, at the Bey Park, Gaele and Suji were arguing over who won the "race", while Hazel was trying not to lose her sanity)
Suji: No! I totally won!
Gaele: Nuh uh! I won!!
Gaele and Suji: Grrrr-
Hazel: CAN YOU TWO CHILL OUT?!?!
Gaele and Suji: *gulp* Can do.
(They'd both lay down on a bench, then Gaele would take apart his bey and look at it)
Gaele: Don't worry Gaelem, together we'll both become stronger!
(No Response)
Gaele: Aw man, it's not working- wait, what's this?
(Gaele would turn around the Layer of the beyblade, showing the bottom of it. There would be a piece... apparently has an armor piece connected to the chip?!
Suji: Whoa! What is that?!
Gaele: I dunno... Ooh, I know! I'll call it the Core Bind!!
Suji: Nice!!
Gaele: Wow... and you can also retract it to change it's modes... I'll call this Wide Mode... (He'd switch the Core Bind upwards) and this mode Enclosed Mode! (He'd switch the Core Bind downwards)
Hazel: Huh... interesting. Maybe we could do a battle to test these new modes out!
Gaele and Suji: Yeah!!
(They'd line up at the stadium)
Gaele: Alright, I won't be holding back! (He'd say as his battle aura would start blazing up)
Suji: Neither will we! (He'd say as his battle aura would start blazing up)
Hazel: I'm not gonna lose again...
(Gaele would put Gaelem in Enclosed Mode, while Suji would put Saturn in Wide Mode)
Gaele: Let's do this!
Gaele, Suji, and Hazel: Three, two, one!! Let it... RIP!!
(Gaelem would spiral around the stadium, Saturn would take the center, and Bahamut would spiral around Saturn, similar to a planet)
Gaele: Alright Gaelem, go in for an attack! (He'd say, thrusting his hand forward)
Hazel: Not a chance, dodge it!
(Gaelem, instead of hitting Bahamut, would hit Saturn)
Suji: Let's go for a Wisdom Barricade!
(Saturn's barrier would redirect Gaelem into the stadium wall, but instead of hitting the wall, it would lean on it's Quantum driver)
Gaele: Heh! Let's go for a Destiny Shoot!! (He'd say, thrusting his arm forward)
(Gaelem would bombard Bahamut with a ferocious barrage of attacks, eventually knocking it clean out of the stadium)
Hazel: *Gasps*
Suji: So now it's just you and me, huh? SATURN!!!
(Saturn's avatar would burst from it's beyblade, engulfed in a purple and green aura)
Suji: LET'S GO! WISDOM COUNTER!!
(As Gaelem would hit Saturn, it would be completely redirected into the wall)
Gaele (Mind): If I hit Saturn hard enough, it's barrier should retract, like last round... this'll give it a drop in defense, which'll help me win!
Gaele: Not yet! GAELEM!!
(Gaelem's avatar would burst out of it's beyblade, becoming engulfed in a cyan aura)
Gaele: GO FOR A RECLUX DRIVE!
(Gaelem would hit Saturn, retracting it's ring barrier and sending it flying up into the air)
Suji: What?!
Gaele (Mind): Now that it's in the air, it'll be easier to catch it off guard with a wicked attack!
Gaele: Finish it off with Reclux Drive, one more time!!
(As Saturn was falling, Gaelem would slash at it, bursting it and sending it's parts straight out of the stadium)
Suji: *Gasps*
Gaele: Yeah! We figured you out!
Hazel (Mind): That was amazing...
Suji: Well, it's safe to say that these new modes help our beys a lot!
Gaele: Yeah... so, you guys wanna keep battling?
Suji, and Hazel: Yeah!
Gaele: Then let's go!
Everyone: Three, two, one! Let it... rip!
(Meanwhile, after watching Gaele and Suji's match, Valt was determined to battle this new blader {In Spain})
Valt: Interesting... a new generation of beys! I totally have to battle this guy!
(He'd run off into the distance)
Episode 5 Preview!
Gaele: NO WAY!! THE Valt Aoi came to challenge me? Best day ever!
Gaele: No way I'm backing down from this fight!
Gaele: The same jumping gimmick from his fight with Bell!
Gaele: Wait- you can talk?!
Gaele: Alright!! Let's use this to totally defeat Valt!!
Next Episode on Beyblade Burst: Destiny!
Roaring Tension! Valt's Challenge!
3, 2, 1!
Let it... RIP!!
I'll totally be the best there is!!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Destiny! - Demon Belial - Aug. 06, 2021
RE: Beyblade Burst: Destiny! - GenesisBlader - Aug. 06, 2021
(Aug. 06, 2021 6:06 PM)Demon Belial Wrote:
Sorry lol
(Aug. 06, 2021 6:06 PM)Demon Belial Wrote:
do you think the episode is good or at least decent?
RE: Beyblade Burst: Destiny! - Demon Belial - Aug. 06, 2021
(Aug. 06, 2021 6:07 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: (Aug. 06, 2021 6:06 PM)Demon Belial Wrote:
Sorry lol
(Aug. 06, 2021 6:06 PM)Demon Belial Wrote:
do you think the episode is good or at least decent?
fir what lol
RE: Beyblade Burst: Destiny! - Kiryu Kazuma - Aug. 06, 2021
(Aug. 06, 2021 6:07 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: (Aug. 06, 2021 6:06 PM)Demon Belial Wrote:
Sorry lol
(Aug. 06, 2021 6:06 PM)Demon Belial Wrote:
do you think the episode is good or at least decent?
It was great!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Destiny! - LegendJustice - Aug. 06, 2021
Great chapter blade!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Destiny! - GenesisBlader - Aug. 06, 2021
ok lol im kinda bored so ima post next three episodes
Episode 6: Hero of Divinity! ??????? Valkyrie!
Episode 7: Venture to The Demon's Castle!
Episode 8: Destiny Vs. Dynamite!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Destiny! - UnseenBurst - Aug. 06, 2021
(Aug. 06, 2021 7:36 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: ok lol im kinda bored so ima post next three episodes
Episode 6: Hero of Divinity! ??????? Valkyrie!
Episode 7: Venture to The Demon's Castle!
Episode 8: Destiny Vs. Dynamite!
My Boi Bell is coming back!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Destiny! - LegendJustice - Aug. 06, 2021
(Aug. 06, 2021 7:36 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: ok lol im kinda bored so ima post next three episodes
Episode 6: Hero of Divinity! ??????? Valkyrie!
Episode 7: Venture to The Demon's Castle!
Episode 8: Destiny Vs. Dynamite!
BELL!
RE: Beyblade Burst: Destiny! - GenesisBlader - Aug. 06, 2021
(Aug. 06, 2021 7:37 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: (Aug. 06, 2021 7:36 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: ok lol im kinda bored so ima post next three episodes
Episode 6: Hero of Divinity! ??????? Valkyrie!
Episode 7: Venture to The Demon's Castle!
Episode 8: Destiny Vs. Dynamite!
My Boi Bell is coming back! bell was too much of a chad to be left in the dust lol
Wisdom Saturn-Surround Helix Bastion+Wall
upcoming beys, pending beys:
Reclux Gaelem
Wisdom Saturn
Angelic Valkyrie
Loyalty Hespera
?????? Fafnir
Eruption Belial
sorry guys, episode 5 might have to be postponed (due to the fact that i'm going on vaca tomorrow)
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