RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - LegendJustice - Jul. 14, 2021
(Jul. 14, 2021 6:50 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: (Jul. 14, 2021 6:47 PM)PinkRose Wrote: At this point I just want someone (preferably Shu) to walk up to Sebastian, flip him off, and then tell him that his naming sense is somehow worse than Red Eye and that he needs to get over his phase.
He legally changed his name to Crimson Eye LOL
Wait seriously?
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - UnseenBurst - Jul. 14, 2021
(Jul. 14, 2021 6:59 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: (Jul. 14, 2021 6:50 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: He legally changed his name to Crimson Eye LOL
Wait seriously?
I'm not kidding, he legally walked up to the Social Office or whatever and changed his name to Crimson Eye
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - LegendJustice - Jul. 14, 2021
(Jul. 14, 2021 7:00 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: (Jul. 14, 2021 6:59 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Wait seriously?
I'm not kidding, he legally walked up to the Social Office or whatever and changed his name to Crimson Eye So in the hospital there like Mr. Eye?
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - UnseenBurst - Jul. 14, 2021
(Jul. 14, 2021 7:01 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: (Jul. 14, 2021 7:00 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: I'm not kidding, he legally walked up to the Social Office or whatever and changed his name to Crimson Eye So in the hospital there like Mr. Eye?
I guess
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - LegendJustice - Jul. 14, 2021
(Jul. 14, 2021 7:01 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: (Jul. 14, 2021 7:01 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: So in the hospital there like Mr. Eye?
I guess
First name: Crimson
Last name! Eye
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - Demon Belial - Jul. 14, 2021
When will next chapter release?
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - UnseenBurst - Jul. 14, 2021
(Jul. 14, 2021 7:23 PM)Demon Belial Wrote: When will next chapter release?
Later today, I'm working on it right now.
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - Demon Belial - Jul. 14, 2021
(Jul. 14, 2021 7:25 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: (Jul. 14, 2021 7:23 PM)Demon Belial Wrote: When will next chapter release?
Later today, I'm working on it right now.
Nice it's 9pm here lol
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi! - UnseenBurst - Jul. 14, 2021
(Jul. 14, 2021 7:25 PM)Demon Belial Wrote: (Jul. 14, 2021 7:25 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Later today, I'm working on it right now.
Nice it's 9pm here lol
Lol it's still morning here so it'll be done soon
Chapter 35 is out! PinkRose I have answered your request! @BladekingX and LegendJustice are not gonna be happy
Beyblade Burst Dynachi
Chapter 35
Ultimate Impact!! Scythe Break!!!
Hanami: What is up everyone! Today we’ll be having the final round of the Tag Team Battles!!
Me: This’ll be our last time to battle together.
Colton: I’m happy I won’t be with that wannabe star.
Jay: I HEARD THAT!!
Ryuji: How did he hear that?
Hanami: And let’s add a twist! If you have two wins you and your teammate will get one individual point!
Brooke: That’ll give up a huge advantage because you need at least 4 points to make the Semi-Finals.
Hanami: Our final Tag Team matches will be Colton and Jay Vs, Daniel and Drake!
Colton: Great, they're strong and all I have is a wannabe Hollywood star.
Jay: Hmp!
Ryuji: Seriously, how does he do it?
Hanmi: The next match will be Faza and Lloyd Vs Crimson Eye and Scar!!
Lloyd: My old friend, Sebastian!
Faza: I’ll let you sort out your differences.
Hanami: Our final Tag Team match will be Brooke and Vlad Vs Agnus and Bushi!!
Brooke: We’re up against the team with the best teamwork.
Me: We’ll knock ‘em out of the park!
Shu (Thoughts): Sebastian, this Crimson Eye phase needs to end.
~In Crimson Eye’s Dorm~
Crimson Eye: Let it rip!!
(Crimson Eye pulls off a strong launch, Spryzen starts speeding around the stadium)
Crimson Eye: I’m getting stronger.
(Shu barges into Crimson Eye’s dorm)
Shu: Sebastian, this has to end!
Crimson Eye: I told you I am not Sebastian.
Shu: Yes you are, you’ve let Spryzen corrupt you! You need to snap out of it.
Crimson Eye: Wrong, we are Spryzen!
(Crimson Eye’s Resonance Aura flares up)
Shu: This has to end!
(Shu takes Spryzen)
Crimson Eye: LET GO OF ME!!
(Crimson Eye pushes Shu out of the way and grabs Spryzen, Shu jabs his arm into the wall)
Shu: *Grunts*
Crimson Eye: You’re not my father!!
Shu: *Gasps*
(Crimson EYe walks away, Me and Valt run in)
Me/Valt: Shu!!
Shu: Hey guys.
~In The Doctor's Office~
Doctor: I’m afraid you’ve dislocated your arm and fractured it.
Al (Except Doctor): You’re kidding!!
Doctor: Yup, he banged into something hard.
(The Doctor wraps Shu’s arm in a cast)
Brooke: Are you ok?
Ryuji: Yeah, it looks like you banged up your arm.
Shu: Don’t worry, I’m fine.
Valt: Man, Sebastian’s really gone off the deep end.
Shu: I fear that there’s no way of getting him back.
Me: I’m not gonna believe that!!
All: *Gasps*
Me: Sebastian’s just going through a phase!
(My Resonance Aura flares up)
Me/Valtryek: I’ll do whatever it takes to bring him back!!
(Shu puts his hand on my shoulder)
Shu: I’ll be here to support you all the way.
Ryuji/Brooke/Adam/Colton: We’re here for you too!!
Me; Thanks, guys!
(Valt puts his hand on my shoulder)
Valt: Vlad, make me proud!
Me: I promise I will Valt!!
~In Drake’s Dorm~
Daniel: Royal Recoil!!
(Dragon slams into Doomsizer with its bound blade, Dragon sends Doomsizer flying, Drake catches Doomsizer)
Drake: I’ve got to admit, you’re stronger than I give you credit for.
Daniel: Thanks, but do you think it's enough to beat Colton and Jay?
Drake: We’ve got something they don’t have.
Daniel: What’s that?!
Drake: Teamwork.
~In The Main Arena~
Hanami: Hello all you beyfans!! Today we’re starting the first match of the 3rd Round with a bang! We’ve got Drake Kurogami and Daniel Koryu Vs Jay Burns and Colton Ackerman! Remember whoever loses this gets eliminated from the tournament!!
Me: Wait eliminated?
Brooke: Neither of them has any wins and you need at least 1 point to advance from the Tag Team battles.
Me: Why didn’t anyone tell me?
Brooke: Did you read the pamphlet in your dorm?
Me: I needed a napkin.
Brooke: *Sighs*
Colton: I’m so winning this!!
Jay: I’m on your team you know!!
Colton: You don’t act like a teammate!
Jay: Oh, I’m the bad teammate?!
Referee: Enough! First battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Colton/Jay/Drake/Daniel: Let it rip!!
Daniel: Go Dragon Launch!!
Drake: Attack, Doomsizer!!
(Jinnus takes the center, Doomsizer and Dragon start hitting Jinnus with a barrage of powerful strikes)
Jay: Grr!!
Hanami: Dragon and Doomsizer are hitting Jinnus in perfect synch!!
Colton: Go, Cognite!!
Drake: No way!
(Cognite tries hitting Dragon, Doomsizer hits Cognite hard)
Colton: *Gasps*
Hanami: Doomsizer’s got Dragon’s back!
Daniel: Thanks.
Drake: No problem!
Jay: Jinx Wall!!
(A part of Jinnus’ layer comes up, Dragon and Doomsizer’s attacks start missing)
Drake: Daniel! It’s time!!
Daniel: Go Dragon!!
(Dragon and Doomsizer starts clashing hard)
Hanami: Dragon and Doomsizer are going at it!!
Colton: This should be easy!
(Cognite hits the wall and skyrockets in the sky, Dragon starts clicking)
Drake: Doomsizer now!
(Doomsizer starts forcing Dragon up, Dragon’s bound blades stick out, Dragon skyrockets in the air)
Hanami: Dragon is sent sky high!
Daniel: Dragon!!
(Daniel’s Resonance Aura flares up Dragon flares out of the bey, Dragon starts glowing Rainbow)
Daniel/Drake: Scythe Break!!
Colton: Hyper Spinning Moon Dive!!
(Cognite and Dragon start clashing, Cognite bursts)
Colton: *Gasps*
Hanami: Dragon just burst Cognite with a crazy combo move!
(Dragon starts crashing down towards Jinnus)
Jay: Oh no!
Daniel: Royal Break!!
(Dragon slams down on Jinnus with its blade, Jinnus bursts)
Colton/Jay: *Gasps*
Referee: Royal Dragon and Scythe Doomsizer win!!
Hanami: With a crazy combo move Dragon has burst Jinnus and Cognite!! Meaning Colton and Jay are eliminated!!
Daniel: I rose!!
(Daniel jumps in the air)
Drake: Nice job.
(Colton runs away crying)
Adam: Colton.
~In Colton’s Dorm~
Colton: I lost!
(Colton starts crying in his pillow and kicking his legs around frantically, Adam walks in)
Adam: Are you ok?
Colton: No! I lost my only chance to make my dad proud!
Adam: Your dad is proud that you made it here, you’ve already made him proud!
Colton: How do you know!
???: Because I know it too.
(Cuza walks in the room)
Cuza: You did awesome! I am proud you made it this far, you’ll have another shot at the world stage next time!
Colton: Thanks dad, and thanks to you too Adam!
(Adam smiles)
Adam: What are friends for!
~In The Main Arena~
Hanami: Hello again everyone!! We’re starting the 2nd match! Scar and Crimson Eye Vs Faza and Lloyd!
(Scar Crimson Eye Lloyd and Faza arrive on the elevators)
Scar: Faza, I’ve been waiting to take you down!
Faza: You’ll have to wait a bit longer!
Lloyd: Crimson Eye, I’ve been training a lot to bring you down!!
Crimson Eye: Too bad that training will go to waste.
Hanami: Our bladers are getting heated up! So let’s get started!!
Referee: First battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Crimson Eye/Lloyd/Scar/Faza: Let it rip!!
Me: Who’s gonna win?!
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi! - Hollowmind13 - Jul. 15, 2021
(Jul. 14, 2021 7:26 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: (Jul. 14, 2021 7:25 PM)Demon Belial Wrote: Nice it's 9pm here lol
Lol it's still morning here so it'll be done soon
Chapter 35 is out! PinkRose I have answered your request! @BladekingX and LegendJustice are not gonna be happy
Beyblade Burst Dynachi
Chapter 35
Ultimate Impact!! Scythe Break!!!
Hanami: What is up everyone! Today we’ll be having the final round of the Tag Team Battles!!
Me: This’ll be our last time to battle together.
Colton: I’m happy I won’t be with that wannabe star.
Jay: I HEARD THAT!!
Ryuji: How did he hear that?
Hanami: And let’s add a twist! If you have two wins you and your teammate will get one individual point!
Brooke: That’ll give up a huge advantage because you need at least 4 points to make the Semi-Finals.
Hanami: Our final Tag Team matches will be Colton and Jay Vs, Daniel and Drake!
Colton: Great, they're strong and all I have is a wannabe Hollywood star.
Jay: Hmp!
Ryuji: Seriously, how does he do it?
Hanmi: The next match will be Faza and Lloyd Vs Crimson Eye and Scar!!
Lloyd: My old friend, Sebastian!
Faza: I’ll let you sort out your differences.
Hanami: Our final Tag Team match will be Brooke and Vlad Vs Agnus and Bushi!!
Brooke: We’re up against the team with the best teamwork.
Me: We’ll knock ‘em out of the park!
Shu (Thoughts): Sebastian, this Crimson Eye phase needs to end.
~In Crimson Eye’s Dorm~
Crimson Eye: Let it rip!!
(Crimson Eye pulls off a strong launch, Spryzen starts speeding around the stadium)
Crimson Eye: I’m getting stronger.
(Shu barges into Crimson Eye’s dorm)
Shu: Sebastian, this has to end!
Crimson Eye: I told you I am not Sebastian.
Shu: Yes you are, you’ve let Spryzen corrupt you! You need to snap out of it.
Crimson Eye: Wrong, we are Spryzen!
(Crimson Eye’s Resonance Aura flares up)
Shu: This has to end!
(Shu takes Spryzen)
Crimson Eye: LET GO OF ME!!
(Crimson Eye pushes Shu out of the way and grabs Spryzen, Shu jabs his arm into the wall)
Shu: *Grunts*
Crimson Eye: You’re not my father!!
Shu: *Gasps*
(Crimson EYe walks away, Me and Valt run in)
Me/Valt: Shu!!
Shu: Hey guys.
~In The Doctor's Office~
Doctor: I’m afraid you’ve dislocated your arm and fractured it.
Al (Except Doctor): You’re kidding!!
Doctor: Yup, he banged into something hard.
(The Doctor wraps Shu’s arm in a cast)
Brooke: Are you ok?
Ryuji: Yeah, it looks like you banged up your arm.
Shu: Don’t worry, I’m fine.
Valt: Man, Sebastian’s really gone off the deep end.
Shu: I fear that there’s no way of getting him back.
Me: I’m not gonna believe that!!
All: *Gasps*
Me: Sebastian’s just going through a phase!
(My Resonance Aura flares up)
Me/Valtryek: I’ll do whatever it takes to bring him back!!
(Shu puts his hand on my shoulder)
Shu: I’ll be here to support you all the way.
Ryuji/Brooke/Adam/Colton: We’re here for you too!!
Me; Thanks, guys!
(Valt puts his hand on my shoulder)
Valt: Vlad, make me proud!
Me: I promise I will Valt!!
~In Drake’s Dorm~
Daniel: Royal Recoil!!
(Dragon slams into Doomsizer with its bound blade, Dragon sends Doomsizer flying, Drake catches Doomsizer)
Drake: I’ve got to admit, you’re stronger than I give you credit for.
Daniel: Thanks, but do you think it's enough to beat Colton and Jay?
Drake: We’ve got something they don’t have.
Daniel: What’s that?!
Drake: Teamwork.
~In The Main Arena~
Hanami: Hello all you beyfans!! Today we’re starting the first match of the 3rd Round with a bang! We’ve got Drake Kurogami and Daniel Koryu Vs Jay Burns and Colton Ackerman! Remember whoever loses this gets eliminated from the tournament!!
Me: Wait eliminated?
Brooke: Neither of them has any wins and you need at least 1 point to advance from the Tag Team battles.
Me: Why didn’t anyone tell me?
Brooke: Did you read the pamphlet in your dorm?
Me: I needed a napkin.
Brooke: *Sighs*
Colton: I’m so winning this!!
Jay: I’m on your team you know!!
Colton: You don’t act like a teammate!
Jay: Oh, I’m the bad teammate?!
Referee: Enough! First battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Colton/Jay/Drake/Daniel: Let it rip!!
Daniel: Go Dragon Launch!!
Drake: Attack, Doomsizer!!
(Jinnus takes the center, Doomsizer and Dragon start hitting Jinnus with a barrage of powerful strikes)
Jay: Grr!!
Hanami: Dragon and Doomsizer are hitting Jinnus in perfect synch!!
Colton: Go, Cognite!!
Drake: No way!
(Cognite tries hitting Dragon, Doomsizer hits Cognite hard)
Colton: *Gasps*
Hanami: Doomsizer’s got Dragon’s back!
Daniel: Thanks.
Drake: No problem!
Jay: Jinx Wall!!
(A part of Jinnus’ layer comes up, Dragon and Doomsizer’s attacks start missing)
Drake: Daniel! It’s time!!
Daniel: Go Dragon!!
(Dragon and Doomsizer starts clashing hard)
Hanami: Dragon and Doomsizer are going at it!!
Colton: This should be easy!
(Cognite hits the wall and skyrockets in the sky, Dragon starts clicking)
Drake: Doomsizer now!
(Doomsizer starts forcing Dragon up, Dragon’s bound blades stick out, Dragon skyrockets in the air)
Hanami: Dragon is sent sky high!
Daniel: Dragon!!
(Daniel’s Resonance Aura flares up Dragon flares out of the bey, Dragon starts glowing Rainbow)
Daniel/Drake: Scythe Break!!
Colton: Hyper Spinning Moon Dive!!
(Cognite and Dragon start clashing, Cognite bursts)
Colton: *Gasps*
Hanami: Dragon just burst Cognite with a crazy combo move!
(Dragon starts crashing down towards Jinnus)
Jay: Oh no!
Daniel: Royal Break!!
(Dragon slams down on Jinnus with its blade, Jinnus bursts)
Colton/Jay: *Gasps*
Referee: Royal Dragon and Scythe Doomsizer win!!
Hanami: With a crazy combo move Dragon has burst Jinnus and Cognite!! Meaning Colton and Jay are eliminated!!
Daniel: I rose!!
(Daniel jumps in the air)
Drake: Nice job.
(Colton runs away crying)
Adam: Colton.
~In Colton’s Dorm~
Colton: I lost!
(Colton starts crying in his pillow and kicking his legs around frantically, Adam walks in)
Adam: Are you ok?
Colton: No! I lost my only chance to make my dad proud!
Adam: Your dad is proud that you made it here, you’ve already made him proud!
Colton: How do you know!
???: Because I know it too.
(Cuza walks in the room)
Cuza: You did awesome! I am proud you made it this far, you’ll have another shot at the world stage next time!
Colton: Thanks dad, and thanks to you too Adam!
(Adam smiles)
Adam: What are friends for!
~In The Main Arena~
Hanami: Hello again everyone!! We’re starting the 2nd match! Scar and Crimson Eye Vs Faza and Lloyd!
(Scar Crimson Eye Lloyd and Faza arrive on the elevators)
Scar: Faza, I’ve been waiting to take you down!
Faza: You’ll have to wait a bit longer!
Lloyd: Crimson Eye, I’ve been training a lot to bring you down!!
Crimson Eye: Too bad that training will go to waste.
Hanami: Our bladers are getting heated up! So let’s get started!!
Referee: First battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Crimson Eye/Lloyd/Scar/Faza: Let it rip!!
Me: Who’s gonna win?! I'm reading it at 12:30 AM, what a good sleeping schedule.
Anyway, nice chapter overall. I've spotted a Crimson "EYe" somewhere in the middle.
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi! - GenesisBlader - Jul. 15, 2021
(Jul. 14, 2021 7:26 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: (Jul. 14, 2021 7:25 PM)Demon Belial Wrote: Nice it's 9pm here lol
Lol it's still morning here so it'll be done soon
Chapter 35 is out! PinkRose I have answered your request! @BladekingX and LegendJustice are not gonna be happy
Beyblade Burst Dynachi
Chapter 35
Ultimate Impact!! Scythe Break!!!
Hanami: What is up everyone! Today we’ll be having the final round of the Tag Team Battles!!
Me: This’ll be our last time to battle together.
Colton: I’m happy I won’t be with that wannabe star.
Jay: I HEARD THAT!!
Ryuji: How did he hear that?
Hanami: And let’s add a twist! If you have two wins you and your teammate will get one individual point!
Brooke: That’ll give up a huge advantage because you need at least 4 points to make the Semi-Finals.
Hanami: Our final Tag Team matches will be Colton and Jay Vs, Daniel and Drake!
Colton: Great, they're strong and all I have is a wannabe Hollywood star.
Jay: Hmp!
Ryuji: Seriously, how does he do it?
Hanmi: The next match will be Faza and Lloyd Vs Crimson Eye and Scar!!
Lloyd: My old friend, Sebastian!
Faza: I’ll let you sort out your differences.
Hanami: Our final Tag Team match will be Brooke and Vlad Vs Agnus and Bushi!!
Brooke: We’re up against the team with the best teamwork.
Me: We’ll knock ‘em out of the park!
Shu (Thoughts): Sebastian, this Crimson Eye phase needs to end.
~In Crimson Eye’s Dorm~
Crimson Eye: Let it rip!!
(Crimson Eye pulls off a strong launch, Spryzen starts speeding around the stadium)
Crimson Eye: I’m getting stronger.
(Shu barges into Crimson Eye’s dorm)
Shu: Sebastian, this has to end!
Crimson Eye: I told you I am not Sebastian.
Shu: Yes you are, you’ve let Spryzen corrupt you! You need to snap out of it.
Crimson Eye: Wrong, we are Spryzen!
(Crimson Eye’s Resonance Aura flares up)
Shu: This has to end!
(Shu takes Spryzen)
Crimson Eye: LET GO OF ME!!
(Crimson Eye pushes Shu out of the way and grabs Spryzen, Shu jabs his arm into the wall)
Shu: *Grunts*
Crimson Eye: You’re not my father!!
Shu: *Gasps*
(Crimson EYe walks away, Me and Valt run in)
Me/Valt: Shu!!
Shu: Hey guys.
~In The Doctor's Office~
Doctor: I’m afraid you’ve dislocated your arm and fractured it.
Al (Except Doctor): You’re kidding!!
Doctor: Yup, he banged into something hard.
(The Doctor wraps Shu’s arm in a cast)
Brooke: Are you ok?
Ryuji: Yeah, it looks like you banged up your arm.
Shu: Don’t worry, I’m fine.
Valt: Man, Sebastian’s really gone off the deep end.
Shu: I fear that there’s no way of getting him back.
Me: I’m not gonna believe that!!
All: *Gasps*
Me: Sebastian’s just going through a phase!
(My Resonance Aura flares up)
Me/Valtryek: I’ll do whatever it takes to bring him back!!
(Shu puts his hand on my shoulder)
Shu: I’ll be here to support you all the way.
Ryuji/Brooke/Adam/Colton: We’re here for you too!!
Me; Thanks, guys!
(Valt puts his hand on my shoulder)
Valt: Vlad, make me proud!
Me: I promise I will Valt!!
~In Drake’s Dorm~
Daniel: Royal Recoil!!
(Dragon slams into Doomsizer with its bound blade, Dragon sends Doomsizer flying, Drake catches Doomsizer)
Drake: I’ve got to admit, you’re stronger than I give you credit for.
Daniel: Thanks, but do you think it's enough to beat Colton and Jay?
Drake: We’ve got something they don’t have.
Daniel: What’s that?!
Drake: Teamwork.
~In The Main Arena~
Hanami: Hello all you beyfans!! Today we’re starting the first match of the 3rd Round with a bang! We’ve got Drake Kurogami and Daniel Koryu Vs Jay Burns and Colton Ackerman! Remember whoever loses this gets eliminated from the tournament!!
Me: Wait eliminated?
Brooke: Neither of them has any wins and you need at least 1 point to advance from the Tag Team battles.
Me: Why didn’t anyone tell me?
Brooke: Did you read the pamphlet in your dorm?
Me: I needed a napkin.
Brooke: *Sighs*
Colton: I’m so winning this!!
Jay: I’m on your team you know!!
Colton: You don’t act like a teammate!
Jay: Oh, I’m the bad teammate?!
Referee: Enough! First battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Colton/Jay/Drake/Daniel: Let it rip!!
Daniel: Go Dragon Launch!!
Drake: Attack, Doomsizer!!
(Jinnus takes the center, Doomsizer and Dragon start hitting Jinnus with a barrage of powerful strikes)
Jay: Grr!!
Hanami: Dragon and Doomsizer are hitting Jinnus in perfect synch!!
Colton: Go, Cognite!!
Drake: No way!
(Cognite tries hitting Dragon, Doomsizer hits Cognite hard)
Colton: *Gasps*
Hanami: Doomsizer’s got Dragon’s back!
Daniel: Thanks.
Drake: No problem!
Jay: Jinx Wall!!
(A part of Jinnus’ layer comes up, Dragon and Doomsizer’s attacks start missing)
Drake: Daniel! It’s time!!
Daniel: Go Dragon!!
(Dragon and Doomsizer starts clashing hard)
Hanami: Dragon and Doomsizer are going at it!!
Colton: This should be easy!
(Cognite hits the wall and skyrockets in the sky, Dragon starts clicking)
Drake: Doomsizer now!
(Doomsizer starts forcing Dragon up, Dragon’s bound blades stick out, Dragon skyrockets in the air)
Hanami: Dragon is sent sky high!
Daniel: Dragon!!
(Daniel’s Resonance Aura flares up Dragon flares out of the bey, Dragon starts glowing Rainbow)
Daniel/Drake: Scythe Break!!
Colton: Hyper Spinning Moon Dive!!
(Cognite and Dragon start clashing, Cognite bursts)
Colton: *Gasps*
Hanami: Dragon just burst Cognite with a crazy combo move!
(Dragon starts crashing down towards Jinnus)
Jay: Oh no!
Daniel: Royal Break!!
(Dragon slams down on Jinnus with its blade, Jinnus bursts)
Colton/Jay: *Gasps*
Referee: Royal Dragon and Scythe Doomsizer win!!
Hanami: With a crazy combo move Dragon has burst Jinnus and Cognite!! Meaning Colton and Jay are eliminated!!
Daniel: I rose!!
(Daniel jumps in the air)
Drake: Nice job.
(Colton runs away crying)
Adam: Colton.
~In Colton’s Dorm~
Colton: I lost!
(Colton starts crying in his pillow and kicking his legs around frantically, Adam walks in)
Adam: Are you ok?
Colton: No! I lost my only chance to make my dad proud!
Adam: Your dad is proud that you made it here, you’ve already made him proud!
Colton: How do you know!
???: Because I know it too.
(Cuza walks in the room)
Cuza: You did awesome! I am proud you made it this far, you’ll have another shot at the world stage next time!
Colton: Thanks dad, and thanks to you too Adam!
(Adam smiles)
Adam: What are friends for!
~In The Main Arena~
Hanami: Hello again everyone!! We’re starting the 2nd match! Scar and Crimson Eye Vs Faza and Lloyd!
(Scar Crimson Eye Lloyd and Faza arrive on the elevators)
Scar: Faza, I’ve been waiting to take you down!
Faza: You’ll have to wait a bit longer!
Lloyd: Crimson Eye, I’ve been training a lot to bring you down!!
Crimson Eye: Too bad that training will go to waste.
Hanami: Our bladers are getting heated up! So let’s get started!!
Referee: First battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Crimson Eye/Lloyd/Scar/Faza: Let it rip!!
Me: Who’s gonna win?!
i might do something illegal to Jay once this arc ends
edit: jay is trash
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi! - UnseenBurst - Jul. 15, 2021
Chapter 36 is out!!
Beyblade Burst Dynachi
Chapter 36
Tag Team Finals!!
Scar: Take the center, Satomb!!
Faza: The center belongs to us!
(Satomb and Fafnir start clashing)
Crimson Eye: Upper Launch!!
Lloyd: Counter that!!
(Luinor and Spryzen hit each other with a barrage of strong attacks)
Hanami: We start with a strong clash!!
(Energy surges out of the stadium)
Crimson Eye: Spryzen!!
(Crimson Eye’s Resonance Aura flares up, Spryzen blazes out of the bey)
Lloyd: Luinor!!
(Lloyd’s Resonance Aura flares up, Luinor blazes out of the bey)
Crimson Eye: Counter Break!!
Lloyd: Destruct Spiral!!
(Luinor and Spryzen speed into each other, Luinor and Spryzen get sent flying up)
Hanami: Fafnir and Spryzen have been sent flying in the air!
Lloyd: *Gasps*
(Fafnir pushes Satomb away, Fafnir takes the center)
Faza: Void Spin!!
Scar: Whirl Drift!!
(Satomb starts drifting around the stadium then slams into Fafnir, Fafnir absorbs the hit)
Hanami: Fafnir and Satomb are going all out!
Faza: Is that all you’ve got?
Scar: Not yet! Satomb!!
(Scar’s Resonance Aura flares up Satomb blazes out of the bey)
Scar: Vicious Twister!!
(Satomb and Fafnir start viciously clashing)
Hanami: It’s a clash for the ages!
Faza: *Gasps* Fafnir!!
(Faza’s Resonance Aura flares up, Fafnir blazes out of the bey)
Scar: Keep pushing!!
(Satomb starts pushing Fafnir down, Fafnir lands on its spring-loaded ring on its driver)
Faza: Drain Counter!!
Hanami: Fafnir uses all of its energy to counterattack!
(Fafnir springs back up and sends Satomb flying out of the stadium)
Scar: *Gasps*
(Fafnir stops spinning)
Hanami: Fafnir knocks out Satomb but has no more stamina!
Faza: *Pants*
Lloyd: Knock them out, Luinor!!
Crimson Eye: Storming Counter Break!!
(Spryzen catches onto the rim and speeds into Luinor, Luinor bounces off the wall, Luinor speeds up)
Hanami: Lloyd and Crimson Eye are going at it!
Lloyd: Destructing Scream!!
(Luinor slams into Spryzen)
Crimson Eye: Storming Dynachi Breaker!!
(2 sharp blades pop out of Spryzen, Luinor gets knocked out of the stadium)
Referee: Spryzen Stormbringer and Vicious Satomb win!
Lloyd: Grr!! *Roars*
Hanami: Spryzen knocks out Luinor with its Dynachi Breaker attack!!
Crimson Eye: I’m growing exponentially!!
(Crimson Eye’s Resonance Aura blazes up)
Shu: *Gasps*
Valt: Shu? What’s wrong?
Shu: Spryzen’s corruption isn’t finished! He wants to control Sebastian!!
All: *Gasps*
Me: We can’t let that happen!
Brooke: And we won’t! If we want to stop him we’ve got to win our next battle!
Me: Let’s get training!
(Me and Brooke runoff)
~In My Dorm~
Me/Brooke: Let it rip!!
Brooke; Go Belarix!!
(Belarix attacks Valtryek rapidly, Valtryek starts wobbling)
Me: Go, Heroic Reboot!!
(Valtryek starts picking up speed, Valtryek slams into Belarix, Belarix gets sent flying out of the stadium)
Brooke: Nice move.
Me: Thanks!
(I pick up Valtryek)
Brooke: We’ll have to pull out all the stops if we want to win this, that'll give us a huge advantage!
Me: Agnus and Bushi are some of the strongest bladers in this tournament so beating them won’t be easy!
Brooke: We’ve got to pull off all the stops!
Me: And we will! I’ve got your back no matter what!!
~In The Main Arena~
Hanami: Hello bladers!! We’ll be diving into the last Tag Team Battle!!
(The crowd goes wild)
Adam/Colton: Go, Brooke and Vlad! You’ve got this!!
Valt: They’re not out yet.
Hanami: And here come our bladers!!
(Brooke Bushi Agnus and I arrive on the elevators)
Me: We’re going to win this!
Brooke: Couldn’t have said it better myself!
Agnus: Me and Bushi are gonna win this thing!
Bushi: Get ready to lose!
Hanami: They’re serious about winning this battle so let’s dive in already!!
(Agnus and Bushi put their beys in Attack Mode)
Referee: First battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Brooke/Agnus/Bushi: Let it rip!!
Hanami: After four amazing launches all of the beys start accelerating!
Brooke: Venture Launch!!
Agnus: Echo Launch!!
(Achilles and Belarix hit each other with a powerful barrage of attacks)
Hanami: The energy explodes from the stadium and releases out to the Arena!!
Bushi: Go Ifrit!!
Me: Rush Launch!!
(Valtryek hits Ifrit with a barrage of attacks)
Hanami: Valtryek pulverizes Ifrit with a barrage of attacks!
Bushi: Shogun Counter!!
(Ifrit leans on its driver and speeds into Valtryek, Valtryek gets sent flying)
Hanami: Ifrit has counterattacked!
Me: Thundering Winged Launch!!
(Valtryek ricochets off the wall and hits Ifrit hard)
Hanami: Now Valtryek unleashes a counterstrike!
Me: Yes!
Bushi: Grr!!
Agnus: Echo Breaker!!
(Achilles slams its blade down on Belarix, Belarix gets sent flying)
Hanami: Belarix has been sent flying!!
Brooke: Belarix!!
(Brooke’s Resonance Aura flares up Belarix flares out of the bey)
Brooke: Grenade Bomb!!
(Belarix slams down on Achilles, Achilles gets sent super high)
Hanami: Achilles has been sent flying now!!
Agnus: Achilles!!
(Agnus’ Resonance Aura flares up Achilles blazes out of the bey)
Agnus: Echo Dive!!
(Achilles starts diving down on Belarix)
Brooke: *Gasps*
Me: VALTRYEK!!
(My Resonance Aura flares up Valtryek blazes out of the bey)
Me: Thundering Recoil!!
(Valtryek and Achilles smash into each other, Valtryek and Achilles burst)
Me/Agnus/Brooke/Bushi: *Gasps*
Hanami: Valtryek risks itself for Belarix!
(Brooke looks at me in shock)
Me: I said I’d be there in a pinch didn’t I?!
(I smile)
Brooke: Go Belarix!!
Bushi: End this Ifrit! Shogun Slash!!
Brooke: Grenade Bomb!!
(Belarix and Ifrit slam into each other, the whole stadium blows up)
Hanami: Electrifying!!
(Belarix and Ifrit start wobbling)
Hanami: After that strong clash Belarix and Ifrit are left exhausted!
Brooke: Belarix!! Hang in there!!
(Belarix starts glowing brightly, Ifrit stops spinning then Belarix)
Bushi: NO!!
Brooke: Yes!
Referee: Grenade Belarix and Thunder Valtryek win!!
Hanami: Belarix hangs in there and out spins Ifrit!!
Bushi: Grr!!
Agnus: Don’t worry, you’ll get another shot at them!
(Bushi and Agnus walk away)
Me: I’ll keep the winning streak up!
(I hold Valtryek up in the air)
(Jul. 15, 2021 12:38 AM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: (Jul. 14, 2021 7:26 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Lol it's still morning here so it'll be done soon
Chapter 35 is out! PinkRose I have answered your request! @BladekingX and LegendJustice are not gonna be happy
Beyblade Burst Dynachi
Chapter 35
Ultimate Impact!! Scythe Break!!!
Hanami: What is up everyone! Today we’ll be having the final round of the Tag Team Battles!!
Me: This’ll be our last time to battle together.
Colton: I’m happy I won’t be with that wannabe star.
Jay: I HEARD THAT!!
Ryuji: How did he hear that?
Hanami: And let’s add a twist! If you have two wins you and your teammate will get one individual point!
Brooke: That’ll give up a huge advantage because you need at least 4 points to make the Semi-Finals.
Hanami: Our final Tag Team matches will be Colton and Jay Vs, Daniel and Drake!
Colton: Great, they're strong and all I have is a wannabe Hollywood star.
Jay: Hmp!
Ryuji: Seriously, how does he do it?
Hanmi: The next match will be Faza and Lloyd Vs Crimson Eye and Scar!!
Lloyd: My old friend, Sebastian!
Faza: I’ll let you sort out your differences.
Hanami: Our final Tag Team match will be Brooke and Vlad Vs Agnus and Bushi!!
Brooke: We’re up against the team with the best teamwork.
Me: We’ll knock ‘em out of the park!
Shu (Thoughts): Sebastian, this Crimson Eye phase needs to end.
~In Crimson Eye’s Dorm~
Crimson Eye: Let it rip!!
(Crimson Eye pulls off a strong launch, Spryzen starts speeding around the stadium)
Crimson Eye: I’m getting stronger.
(Shu barges into Crimson Eye’s dorm)
Shu: Sebastian, this has to end!
Crimson Eye: I told you I am not Sebastian.
Shu: Yes you are, you’ve let Spryzen corrupt you! You need to snap out of it.
Crimson Eye: Wrong, we are Spryzen!
(Crimson Eye’s Resonance Aura flares up)
Shu: This has to end!
(Shu takes Spryzen)
Crimson Eye: LET GO OF ME!!
(Crimson Eye pushes Shu out of the way and grabs Spryzen, Shu jabs his arm into the wall)
Shu: *Grunts*
Crimson Eye: You’re not my father!!
Shu: *Gasps*
(Crimson EYe walks away, Me and Valt run in)
Me/Valt: Shu!!
Shu: Hey guys.
~In The Doctor's Office~
Doctor: I’m afraid you’ve dislocated your arm and fractured it.
Al (Except Doctor): You’re kidding!!
Doctor: Yup, he banged into something hard.
(The Doctor wraps Shu’s arm in a cast)
Brooke: Are you ok?
Ryuji: Yeah, it looks like you banged up your arm.
Shu: Don’t worry, I’m fine.
Valt: Man, Sebastian’s really gone off the deep end.
Shu: I fear that there’s no way of getting him back.
Me: I’m not gonna believe that!!
All: *Gasps*
Me: Sebastian’s just going through a phase!
(My Resonance Aura flares up)
Me/Valtryek: I’ll do whatever it takes to bring him back!!
(Shu puts his hand on my shoulder)
Shu: I’ll be here to support you all the way.
Ryuji/Brooke/Adam/Colton: We’re here for you too!!
Me; Thanks, guys!
(Valt puts his hand on my shoulder)
Valt: Vlad, make me proud!
Me: I promise I will Valt!!
~In Drake’s Dorm~
Daniel: Royal Recoil!!
(Dragon slams into Doomsizer with its bound blade, Dragon sends Doomsizer flying, Drake catches Doomsizer)
Drake: I’ve got to admit, you’re stronger than I give you credit for.
Daniel: Thanks, but do you think it's enough to beat Colton and Jay?
Drake: We’ve got something they don’t have.
Daniel: What’s that?!
Drake: Teamwork.
~In The Main Arena~
Hanami: Hello all you beyfans!! Today we’re starting the first match of the 3rd Round with a bang! We’ve got Drake Kurogami and Daniel Koryu Vs Jay Burns and Colton Ackerman! Remember whoever loses this gets eliminated from the tournament!!
Me: Wait eliminated?
Brooke: Neither of them has any wins and you need at least 1 point to advance from the Tag Team battles.
Me: Why didn’t anyone tell me?
Brooke: Did you read the pamphlet in your dorm?
Me: I needed a napkin.
Brooke: *Sighs*
Colton: I’m so winning this!!
Jay: I’m on your team you know!!
Colton: You don’t act like a teammate!
Jay: Oh, I’m the bad teammate?!
Referee: Enough! First battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Colton/Jay/Drake/Daniel: Let it rip!!
Daniel: Go Dragon Launch!!
Drake: Attack, Doomsizer!!
(Jinnus takes the center, Doomsizer and Dragon start hitting Jinnus with a barrage of powerful strikes)
Jay: Grr!!
Hanami: Dragon and Doomsizer are hitting Jinnus in perfect synch!!
Colton: Go, Cognite!!
Drake: No way!
(Cognite tries hitting Dragon, Doomsizer hits Cognite hard)
Colton: *Gasps*
Hanami: Doomsizer’s got Dragon’s back!
Daniel: Thanks.
Drake: No problem!
Jay: Jinx Wall!!
(A part of Jinnus’ layer comes up, Dragon and Doomsizer’s attacks start missing)
Drake: Daniel! It’s time!!
Daniel: Go Dragon!!
(Dragon and Doomsizer starts clashing hard)
Hanami: Dragon and Doomsizer are going at it!!
Colton: This should be easy!
(Cognite hits the wall and skyrockets in the sky, Dragon starts clicking)
Drake: Doomsizer now!
(Doomsizer starts forcing Dragon up, Dragon’s bound blades stick out, Dragon skyrockets in the air)
Hanami: Dragon is sent sky high!
Daniel: Dragon!!
(Daniel’s Resonance Aura flares up Dragon flares out of the bey, Dragon starts glowing Rainbow)
Daniel/Drake: Scythe Break!!
Colton: Hyper Spinning Moon Dive!!
(Cognite and Dragon start clashing, Cognite bursts)
Colton: *Gasps*
Hanami: Dragon just burst Cognite with a crazy combo move!
(Dragon starts crashing down towards Jinnus)
Jay: Oh no!
Daniel: Royal Break!!
(Dragon slams down on Jinnus with its blade, Jinnus bursts)
Colton/Jay: *Gasps*
Referee: Royal Dragon and Scythe Doomsizer win!!
Hanami: With a crazy combo move Dragon has burst Jinnus and Cognite!! Meaning Colton and Jay are eliminated!!
Daniel: I rose!!
(Daniel jumps in the air)
Drake: Nice job.
(Colton runs away crying)
Adam: Colton.
~In Colton’s Dorm~
Colton: I lost!
(Colton starts crying in his pillow and kicking his legs around frantically, Adam walks in)
Adam: Are you ok?
Colton: No! I lost my only chance to make my dad proud!
Adam: Your dad is proud that you made it here, you’ve already made him proud!
Colton: How do you know!
???: Because I know it too.
(Cuza walks in the room)
Cuza: You did awesome! I am proud you made it this far, you’ll have another shot at the world stage next time!
Colton: Thanks dad, and thanks to you too Adam!
(Adam smiles)
Adam: What are friends for!
~In The Main Arena~
Hanami: Hello again everyone!! We’re starting the 2nd match! Scar and Crimson Eye Vs Faza and Lloyd!
(Scar Crimson Eye Lloyd and Faza arrive on the elevators)
Scar: Faza, I’ve been waiting to take you down!
Faza: You’ll have to wait a bit longer!
Lloyd: Crimson Eye, I’ve been training a lot to bring you down!!
Crimson Eye: Too bad that training will go to waste.
Hanami: Our bladers are getting heated up! So let’s get started!!
Referee: First battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Crimson Eye/Lloyd/Scar/Faza: Let it rip!!
Me: Who’s gonna win?! I'm reading it at 12:30 AM, what a good sleeping schedule.
Anyway, nice chapter overall. I've spotted a Crimson "EYe" somewhere in the middle.
Thx! Also sorry to wake you up lol (If u were sleeping)
(Jul. 15, 2021 12:46 AM)BladeKingX Wrote: (Jul. 14, 2021 7:26 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Lol it's still morning here so it'll be done soon
Chapter 35 is out! PinkRose I have answered your request! @BladekingX and LegendJustice are not gonna be happy
Beyblade Burst Dynachi
Chapter 35
Ultimate Impact!! Scythe Break!!!
Hanami: What is up everyone! Today we’ll be having the final round of the Tag Team Battles!!
Me: This’ll be our last time to battle together.
Colton: I’m happy I won’t be with that wannabe star.
Jay: I HEARD THAT!!
Ryuji: How did he hear that?
Hanami: And let’s add a twist! If you have two wins you and your teammate will get one individual point!
Brooke: That’ll give up a huge advantage because you need at least 4 points to make the Semi-Finals.
Hanami: Our final Tag Team matches will be Colton and Jay Vs, Daniel and Drake!
Colton: Great, they're strong and all I have is a wannabe Hollywood star.
Jay: Hmp!
Ryuji: Seriously, how does he do it?
Hanmi: The next match will be Faza and Lloyd Vs Crimson Eye and Scar!!
Lloyd: My old friend, Sebastian!
Faza: I’ll let you sort out your differences.
Hanami: Our final Tag Team match will be Brooke and Vlad Vs Agnus and Bushi!!
Brooke: We’re up against the team with the best teamwork.
Me: We’ll knock ‘em out of the park!
Shu (Thoughts): Sebastian, this Crimson Eye phase needs to end.
~In Crimson Eye’s Dorm~
Crimson Eye: Let it rip!!
(Crimson Eye pulls off a strong launch, Spryzen starts speeding around the stadium)
Crimson Eye: I’m getting stronger.
(Shu barges into Crimson Eye’s dorm)
Shu: Sebastian, this has to end!
Crimson Eye: I told you I am not Sebastian.
Shu: Yes you are, you’ve let Spryzen corrupt you! You need to snap out of it.
Crimson Eye: Wrong, we are Spryzen!
(Crimson Eye’s Resonance Aura flares up)
Shu: This has to end!
(Shu takes Spryzen)
Crimson Eye: LET GO OF ME!!
(Crimson Eye pushes Shu out of the way and grabs Spryzen, Shu jabs his arm into the wall)
Shu: *Grunts*
Crimson Eye: You’re not my father!!
Shu: *Gasps*
(Crimson EYe walks away, Me and Valt run in)
Me/Valt: Shu!!
Shu: Hey guys.
~In The Doctor's Office~
Doctor: I’m afraid you’ve dislocated your arm and fractured it.
Al (Except Doctor): You’re kidding!!
Doctor: Yup, he banged into something hard.
(The Doctor wraps Shu’s arm in a cast)
Brooke: Are you ok?
Ryuji: Yeah, it looks like you banged up your arm.
Shu: Don’t worry, I’m fine.
Valt: Man, Sebastian’s really gone off the deep end.
Shu: I fear that there’s no way of getting him back.
Me: I’m not gonna believe that!!
All: *Gasps*
Me: Sebastian’s just going through a phase!
(My Resonance Aura flares up)
Me/Valtryek: I’ll do whatever it takes to bring him back!!
(Shu puts his hand on my shoulder)
Shu: I’ll be here to support you all the way.
Ryuji/Brooke/Adam/Colton: We’re here for you too!!
Me; Thanks, guys!
(Valt puts his hand on my shoulder)
Valt: Vlad, make me proud!
Me: I promise I will Valt!!
~In Drake’s Dorm~
Daniel: Royal Recoil!!
(Dragon slams into Doomsizer with its bound blade, Dragon sends Doomsizer flying, Drake catches Doomsizer)
Drake: I’ve got to admit, you’re stronger than I give you credit for.
Daniel: Thanks, but do you think it's enough to beat Colton and Jay?
Drake: We’ve got something they don’t have.
Daniel: What’s that?!
Drake: Teamwork.
~In The Main Arena~
Hanami: Hello all you beyfans!! Today we’re starting the first match of the 3rd Round with a bang! We’ve got Drake Kurogami and Daniel Koryu Vs Jay Burns and Colton Ackerman! Remember whoever loses this gets eliminated from the tournament!!
Me: Wait eliminated?
Brooke: Neither of them has any wins and you need at least 1 point to advance from the Tag Team battles.
Me: Why didn’t anyone tell me?
Brooke: Did you read the pamphlet in your dorm?
Me: I needed a napkin.
Brooke: *Sighs*
Colton: I’m so winning this!!
Jay: I’m on your team you know!!
Colton: You don’t act like a teammate!
Jay: Oh, I’m the bad teammate?!
Referee: Enough! First battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Colton/Jay/Drake/Daniel: Let it rip!!
Daniel: Go Dragon Launch!!
Drake: Attack, Doomsizer!!
(Jinnus takes the center, Doomsizer and Dragon start hitting Jinnus with a barrage of powerful strikes)
Jay: Grr!!
Hanami: Dragon and Doomsizer are hitting Jinnus in perfect synch!!
Colton: Go, Cognite!!
Drake: No way!
(Cognite tries hitting Dragon, Doomsizer hits Cognite hard)
Colton: *Gasps*
Hanami: Doomsizer’s got Dragon’s back!
Daniel: Thanks.
Drake: No problem!
Jay: Jinx Wall!!
(A part of Jinnus’ layer comes up, Dragon and Doomsizer’s attacks start missing)
Drake: Daniel! It’s time!!
Daniel: Go Dragon!!
(Dragon and Doomsizer starts clashing hard)
Hanami: Dragon and Doomsizer are going at it!!
Colton: This should be easy!
(Cognite hits the wall and skyrockets in the sky, Dragon starts clicking)
Drake: Doomsizer now!
(Doomsizer starts forcing Dragon up, Dragon’s bound blades stick out, Dragon skyrockets in the air)
Hanami: Dragon is sent sky high!
Daniel: Dragon!!
(Daniel’s Resonance Aura flares up Dragon flares out of the bey, Dragon starts glowing Rainbow)
Daniel/Drake: Scythe Break!!
Colton: Hyper Spinning Moon Dive!!
(Cognite and Dragon start clashing, Cognite bursts)
Colton: *Gasps*
Hanami: Dragon just burst Cognite with a crazy combo move!
(Dragon starts crashing down towards Jinnus)
Jay: Oh no!
Daniel: Royal Break!!
(Dragon slams down on Jinnus with its blade, Jinnus bursts)
Colton/Jay: *Gasps*
Referee: Royal Dragon and Scythe Doomsizer win!!
Hanami: With a crazy combo move Dragon has burst Jinnus and Cognite!! Meaning Colton and Jay are eliminated!!
Daniel: I rose!!
(Daniel jumps in the air)
Drake: Nice job.
(Colton runs away crying)
Adam: Colton.
~In Colton’s Dorm~
Colton: I lost!
(Colton starts crying in his pillow and kicking his legs around frantically, Adam walks in)
Adam: Are you ok?
Colton: No! I lost my only chance to make my dad proud!
Adam: Your dad is proud that you made it here, you’ve already made him proud!
Colton: How do you know!
???: Because I know it too.
(Cuza walks in the room)
Cuza: You did awesome! I am proud you made it this far, you’ll have another shot at the world stage next time!
Colton: Thanks dad, and thanks to you too Adam!
(Adam smiles)
Adam: What are friends for!
~In The Main Arena~
Hanami: Hello again everyone!! We’re starting the 2nd match! Scar and Crimson Eye Vs Faza and Lloyd!
(Scar Crimson Eye Lloyd and Faza arrive on the elevators)
Scar: Faza, I’ve been waiting to take you down!
Faza: You’ll have to wait a bit longer!
Lloyd: Crimson Eye, I’ve been training a lot to bring you down!!
Crimson Eye: Too bad that training will go to waste.
Hanami: Our bladers are getting heated up! So let’s get started!!
Referee: First battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Crimson Eye/Lloyd/Scar/Faza: Let it rip!!
Me: Who’s gonna win?!
i might do something illegal to Jay once this arc ends
edit: jay is trash
LegendJustice is not going to be happy
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi! - Kiryu Kazuma - Jul. 15, 2021
Both were nice chapters. Nice job
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi! - UnseenBurst - Jul. 15, 2021
(Jul. 15, 2021 4:59 AM)Kiryu Kazuma Wrote: Both were nice chapters. Nice job
Thanks! I like your new username!
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi! - LegendJustice - Jul. 15, 2021
(Jul. 15, 2021 12:46 AM)BladeKingX Wrote: (Jul. 14, 2021 7:26 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Lol it's still morning here so it'll be done soon
Chapter 35 is out! PinkRose I have answered your request! @BladekingX and LegendJustice are not gonna be happy
Beyblade Burst Dynachi
Chapter 35
Ultimate Impact!! Scythe Break!!!
Hanami: What is up everyone! Today we’ll be having the final round of the Tag Team Battles!!
Me: This’ll be our last time to battle together.
Colton: I’m happy I won’t be with that wannabe star.
Jay: I HEARD THAT!!
Ryuji: How did he hear that?
Hanami: And let’s add a twist! If you have two wins you and your teammate will get one individual point!
Brooke: That’ll give up a huge advantage because you need at least 4 points to make the Semi-Finals.
Hanami: Our final Tag Team matches will be Colton and Jay Vs, Daniel and Drake!
Colton: Great, they're strong and all I have is a wannabe Hollywood star.
Jay: Hmp!
Ryuji: Seriously, how does he do it?
Hanmi: The next match will be Faza and Lloyd Vs Crimson Eye and Scar!!
Lloyd: My old friend, Sebastian!
Faza: I’ll let you sort out your differences.
Hanami: Our final Tag Team match will be Brooke and Vlad Vs Agnus and Bushi!!
Brooke: We’re up against the team with the best teamwork.
Me: We’ll knock ‘em out of the park!
Shu (Thoughts): Sebastian, this Crimson Eye phase needs to end.
~In Crimson Eye’s Dorm~
Crimson Eye: Let it rip!!
(Crimson Eye pulls off a strong launch, Spryzen starts speeding around the stadium)
Crimson Eye: I’m getting stronger.
(Shu barges into Crimson Eye’s dorm)
Shu: Sebastian, this has to end!
Crimson Eye: I told you I am not Sebastian.
Shu: Yes you are, you’ve let Spryzen corrupt you! You need to snap out of it.
Crimson Eye: Wrong, we are Spryzen!
(Crimson Eye’s Resonance Aura flares up)
Shu: This has to end!
(Shu takes Spryzen)
Crimson Eye: LET GO OF ME!!
(Crimson Eye pushes Shu out of the way and grabs Spryzen, Shu jabs his arm into the wall)
Shu: *Grunts*
Crimson Eye: You’re not my father!!
Shu: *Gasps*
(Crimson EYe walks away, Me and Valt run in)
Me/Valt: Shu!!
Shu: Hey guys.
~In The Doctor's Office~
Doctor: I’m afraid you’ve dislocated your arm and fractured it.
Al (Except Doctor): You’re kidding!!
Doctor: Yup, he banged into something hard.
(The Doctor wraps Shu’s arm in a cast)
Brooke: Are you ok?
Ryuji: Yeah, it looks like you banged up your arm.
Shu: Don’t worry, I’m fine.
Valt: Man, Sebastian’s really gone off the deep end.
Shu: I fear that there’s no way of getting him back.
Me: I’m not gonna believe that!!
All: *Gasps*
Me: Sebastian’s just going through a phase!
(My Resonance Aura flares up)
Me/Valtryek: I’ll do whatever it takes to bring him back!!
(Shu puts his hand on my shoulder)
Shu: I’ll be here to support you all the way.
Ryuji/Brooke/Adam/Colton: We’re here for you too!!
Me; Thanks, guys!
(Valt puts his hand on my shoulder)
Valt: Vlad, make me proud!
Me: I promise I will Valt!!
~In Drake’s Dorm~
Daniel: Royal Recoil!!
(Dragon slams into Doomsizer with its bound blade, Dragon sends Doomsizer flying, Drake catches Doomsizer)
Drake: I’ve got to admit, you’re stronger than I give you credit for.
Daniel: Thanks, but do you think it's enough to beat Colton and Jay?
Drake: We’ve got something they don’t have.
Daniel: What’s that?!
Drake: Teamwork.
~In The Main Arena~
Hanami: Hello all you beyfans!! Today we’re starting the first match of the 3rd Round with a bang! We’ve got Drake Kurogami and Daniel Koryu Vs Jay Burns and Colton Ackerman! Remember whoever loses this gets eliminated from the tournament!!
Me: Wait eliminated?
Brooke: Neither of them has any wins and you need at least 1 point to advance from the Tag Team battles.
Me: Why didn’t anyone tell me?
Brooke: Did you read the pamphlet in your dorm?
Me: I needed a napkin.
Brooke: *Sighs*
Colton: I’m so winning this!!
Jay: I’m on your team you know!!
Colton: You don’t act like a teammate!
Jay: Oh, I’m the bad teammate?!
Referee: Enough! First battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Colton/Jay/Drake/Daniel: Let it rip!!
Daniel: Go Dragon Launch!!
Drake: Attack, Doomsizer!!
(Jinnus takes the center, Doomsizer and Dragon start hitting Jinnus with a barrage of powerful strikes)
Jay: Grr!!
Hanami: Dragon and Doomsizer are hitting Jinnus in perfect synch!!
Colton: Go, Cognite!!
Drake: No way!
(Cognite tries hitting Dragon, Doomsizer hits Cognite hard)
Colton: *Gasps*
Hanami: Doomsizer’s got Dragon’s back!
Daniel: Thanks.
Drake: No problem!
Jay: Jinx Wall!!
(A part of Jinnus’ layer comes up, Dragon and Doomsizer’s attacks start missing)
Drake: Daniel! It’s time!!
Daniel: Go Dragon!!
(Dragon and Doomsizer starts clashing hard)
Hanami: Dragon and Doomsizer are going at it!!
Colton: This should be easy!
(Cognite hits the wall and skyrockets in the sky, Dragon starts clicking)
Drake: Doomsizer now!
(Doomsizer starts forcing Dragon up, Dragon’s bound blades stick out, Dragon skyrockets in the air)
Hanami: Dragon is sent sky high!
Daniel: Dragon!!
(Daniel’s Resonance Aura flares up Dragon flares out of the bey, Dragon starts glowing Rainbow)
Daniel/Drake: Scythe Break!!
Colton: Hyper Spinning Moon Dive!!
(Cognite and Dragon start clashing, Cognite bursts)
Colton: *Gasps*
Hanami: Dragon just burst Cognite with a crazy combo move!
(Dragon starts crashing down towards Jinnus)
Jay: Oh no!
Daniel: Royal Break!!
(Dragon slams down on Jinnus with its blade, Jinnus bursts)
Colton/Jay: *Gasps*
Referee: Royal Dragon and Scythe Doomsizer win!!
Hanami: With a crazy combo move Dragon has burst Jinnus and Cognite!! Meaning Colton and Jay are eliminated!!
Daniel: I rose!!
(Daniel jumps in the air)
Drake: Nice job.
(Colton runs away crying)
Adam: Colton.
~In Colton’s Dorm~
Colton: I lost!
(Colton starts crying in his pillow and kicking his legs around frantically, Adam walks in)
Adam: Are you ok?
Colton: No! I lost my only chance to make my dad proud!
Adam: Your dad is proud that you made it here, you’ve already made him proud!
Colton: How do you know!
???: Because I know it too.
(Cuza walks in the room)
Cuza: You did awesome! I am proud you made it this far, you’ll have another shot at the world stage next time!
Colton: Thanks dad, and thanks to you too Adam!
(Adam smiles)
Adam: What are friends for!
~In The Main Arena~
Hanami: Hello again everyone!! We’re starting the 2nd match! Scar and Crimson Eye Vs Faza and Lloyd!
(Scar Crimson Eye Lloyd and Faza arrive on the elevators)
Scar: Faza, I’ve been waiting to take you down!
Faza: You’ll have to wait a bit longer!
Lloyd: Crimson Eye, I’ve been training a lot to bring you down!!
Crimson Eye: Too bad that training will go to waste.
Hanami: Our bladers are getting heated up! So let’s get started!!
Referee: First battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Crimson Eye/Lloyd/Scar/Faza: Let it rip!!
Me: Who’s gonna win?!
i might do something illegal to Jay once this arc ends
edit: jay is trash
... what now?
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi! - Demon Belial - Jul. 15, 2021
Great Chapters!
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi! - Staron - Jul. 15, 2021
Damn, Bushi's out, wanted to see him go on to the actual tournament if theres a non tag team one, but I don't know at this point
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi! - Kiryu Kazuma - Jul. 15, 2021
(Jul. 15, 2021 1:46 PM)Staron Wrote: Damn, Bushi's out, wanted to see him go on to the actual tournament if theres a non tag team one, but I don't know at this point Bushi’s not out he won one time so he advanced
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi! - Demon Belial - Jul. 15, 2021
I'm glad Scar is still in this tournament.
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi! - PinkRose - Jul. 15, 2021
Huh, guess the protag's partner status has finally paid off and got Team V&B a win.
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi! - UnseenBurst - Jul. 15, 2021
4th Round Brooke Vs Crimson Eye/Scar Vs Faza/Vlad Vs Drake/Daniel Vs Bushi/Lloyd Vs Agnus
(Jul. 15, 2021 2:36 PM)PinkRose Wrote: Huh, guess the protag's partner status has finally paid off and got Team V&B a win.
#Thunderrecoiloutofnowhere
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi! - Kiryu Kazuma - Jul. 15, 2021
(Jul. 15, 2021 4:20 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: 4th Round Brooke Vs Crimson Eye/Scar Vs Faza/Vlad Vs Drake/Daniel Vs Bushi/Lloyd Vs Agnus
(Jul. 15, 2021 2:36 PM)PinkRose Wrote: Huh, guess the protag's partner status has finally paid off and got Team V&B a win.
#Thunderrecoiloutofnowhere Nice can't wait!
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi! - Demon Belial - Jul. 15, 2021
(Jul. 15, 2021 4:20 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: 4th Round Brooke Vs Crimson Eye/Scar Vs Faza/Vlad Vs Drake/Daniel Vs Bushi/Lloyd Vs Agnus
(Jul. 15, 2021 2:36 PM)PinkRose Wrote: Huh, guess the protag's partner status has finally paid off and got Team V&B a win.
#Thunderrecoiloutofnowhere
Oh  Against Fafnir
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi! - PinkRose - Jul. 15, 2021
Yeah, bye Brooke. Good thing you made it so far.
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi! - UnseenBurst - Jul. 15, 2021
(Jul. 15, 2021 5:08 PM)PinkRose Wrote: Yeah, bye Brooke. Good thing you made it so far.
It's swiss plus there will be 2 more rounds and whoever has the most points wins so she still has a chance to turn it around if she loses (Plus an extra round for people that are tied)
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