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RE: Beyblade Fanfics Club/Discussions/Random Thoughts - SacredXcalibur - Oct. 15, 2020
(Oct. 15, 2020 6:38 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote: Oooo, Sacred, could you rate my story? The first chapter is in one of the two newest pages of it :3Beyblade Burst Spirit
Grammar:5/5 I didn't notice any errors and the formatting was great too!
Plot: 4/5: Great plot but it could use a little bit of improvement.
Characters: 5/5 they're all likable!
Dialogue: 4/5 its not bad but maybe you should working on making it sound a little more natural.
Length: 5/5 all the chapters are long which is really good!
Total: 23/25
Overall great fanfic!
RE: Beyblade Fanfics Club/Discussions/Random Thoughts - CheetoBlader - Oct. 15, 2020
(Oct. 15, 2020 7:35 PM)SacredXcalibur Wrote:I understand with the plot, as it’s chapter one, and just a general introduction. I can assure you that I have a plan for it though.(Oct. 15, 2020 6:38 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote: Oooo, Sacred, could you rate my story? The first chapter is in one of the two newest pages of it :3Beyblade Burst Spirit
Grammar:5/5 I didn't notice any errors and the formatting was great too!
Plot: 4/5: Great plot but it could use a little bit of improvement.
Characters: 5/5 they're all likable!
Dialogue: 4/5 its not bad but maybe you should working on making it sound a little more natural.
Length: 5/5 all the chapters are long which is really good!
Total: 23/25
Overall great fanfic!
RE: Beyblade Fanfics Club/Discussions/Random Thoughts - SacredXcalibur - Oct. 15, 2020
(Oct. 15, 2020 7:41 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote:(Oct. 15, 2020 7:35 PM)SacredXcalibur Wrote: Beyblade Burst SpiritI understand with the plot, as it’s chapter one, and just a general introduction. I can assure you that I have a plan for it though.
Grammar:5/5 I didn't notice any errors and the formatting was great too!
Plot: 4/5: Great plot but it could use a little bit of improvement.
Characters: 5/5 they're all likable!
Dialogue: 4/5 its not bad but maybe you should working on making it sound a little more natural.
Length: 5/5 all the chapters are long which is really good!
Total: 23/25
Overall great fanfic!
can you rate the latest episode of my fanfic?
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1qXZN4B6V4xtjm_b-QviIjPB3eJl49NScNwve_1BfalM/edit?usp=sharing
RE: Beyblade Fanfics Club/Discussions/Random Thoughts - kai edits - Oct. 15, 2020
Shun was so close to beating Dimitri. Gwynn messed up shun big time
RE: Beyblade Fanfics Club/Discussions/Random Thoughts - SacredXcalibur - Oct. 16, 2020
(Oct. 15, 2020 9:04 PM)kai edits Wrote: Shun was so close to beating Dimitri. Gwynn messed up shun big time
oof
RE: Beyblade Fanfics Club/Discussions/Random Thoughts - kai edits - Oct. 16, 2020
Can someone rate the two new chapters of beyblade burst apocalypse
RE: Beyblade Fanfics Club/Discussions/Random Thoughts - Eclipse Force - Oct. 16, 2020
(Oct. 16, 2020 4:42 PM)kai edits Wrote: Can someone rate the two new chapters of beyblade burst apocalypse
Chapter 12 preview suggests Shun is cheating on Dimitri with Free yet no previous romantic relationships have ever been established and Im confused, can you explain?
RE: Beyblade Fanfics Club/Discussions/Random Thoughts - kai edits - Oct. 16, 2020
(Oct. 16, 2020 4:45 PM)Eclipse Force Wrote:(Oct. 16, 2020 4:42 PM)kai edits Wrote: Can someone rate the two new chapters of beyblade burst apocalypse
Chapter 12 preview suggests Shun is cheating on Dimitri with Free yet no previous romantic relationships have ever been established and Im confused, can you explain?
It's in chapter 12 of apocalypse . it's in a flashback
RE: Beyblade Fanfics Club/Discussions/Random Thoughts - Eclipse Force - Oct. 16, 2020
(Oct. 16, 2020 4:50 PM)kai edits Wrote:(Oct. 16, 2020 4:45 PM)Eclipse Force Wrote: Chapter 12 preview suggests Shun is cheating on Dimitri with Free yet no previous romantic relationships have ever been established and Im confused, can you explain?
It's in chapter 12 of apocalypse . it's in a flashback
So they were previously in a love triangle?
RE: Beyblade Fanfics Club/Discussions/Random Thoughts - kai edits - Oct. 16, 2020
(Oct. 16, 2020 5:32 PM)Eclipse Force Wrote:(Oct. 16, 2020 4:50 PM)kai edits Wrote: It's in chapter 12 of apocalypse . it's in a flashback
So they were previously in a love triangle?
Yes pretty much
RE: Beyblade Fanfics Club/Discussions/Random Thoughts - Eclipse Force - Oct. 16, 2020
(Oct. 16, 2020 6:03 PM)kai edits Wrote:(Oct. 16, 2020 5:32 PM)Eclipse Force Wrote: So they were previously in a love triangle?
Yes pretty much
How old is everyone in the triangle now, and how old are they in the flashback
RE: Beyblade Fanfics Club/Discussions/Random Thoughts - kai edits - Oct. 16, 2020
(Oct. 16, 2020 6:07 PM)Eclipse Force Wrote:(Oct. 16, 2020 6:03 PM)kai edits Wrote: Yes pretty much
How old is everyone in the triangle now, and how old are they in the flashback
Flashback
Shun(17)
Free(18)
Now
Shun(21)
Free(22)
RE: Beyblade Fanfics Club/Discussions/Random Thoughts - Eclipse Force - Oct. 16, 2020
(Oct. 16, 2020 6:17 PM)kai edits Wrote:Dimitri age?(Oct. 16, 2020 6:07 PM)Eclipse Force Wrote: How old is everyone in the triangle now, and how old are they in the flashback
Flashback
Shun(17)
Free(18)
Now
Shun(21)
Free(22)
RE: Beyblade Fanfics Club/Discussions/Random Thoughts - kai edits - Oct. 16, 2020
(Oct. 16, 2020 6:21 PM)Eclipse Force Wrote:(Oct. 16, 2020 6:17 PM)kai edits Wrote: FlashbackDimitri age?
Shun(17)
Free(18)
Now
Shun(21)
Free(22)
Flashback back 16
Current 20
I posted a teaser for the next episode
RE: Beyblade Fanfics Club/Discussions/Random Thoughts - SacredXcalibur - Oct. 17, 2020
Can someone rate the newest episode of Beyblade Burst Legends?
RE: Beyblade Fanfics Club/Discussions/Random Thoughts - kai edits - Oct. 17, 2020
Can someone rate the new chapters of beyblade burst apocalypse
RE: Beyblade Fanfics Club/Discussions/Random Thoughts - kai edits - Oct. 17, 2020
Can some rate my fanfic beyblade burst apocalypse?
RE: Beyblade Fanfics Club/Discussions/Random Thoughts - Ryuga......Win - Oct. 18, 2020
Beyblade Burst Combo Prologue
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Rankings
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2.Loki Brone Bey:BLu Ev' 2A
3. Helmer Welk WHy Ul' 1A
4.Drene Moken MDb Wl Mb
5.Aizen Propel JA.Bl.X'.Gk
RE: Beyblade Fanfics Club/Discussions/Random Thoughts - kai edits - Oct. 18, 2020
What do you guys think of the new chapter of beyblade burst apocalypse?
RE: Beyblade Fanfics Club/Discussions/Random Thoughts - kai edits - Oct. 20, 2020
Can we get a moment of silence for shun kurenai.
RE: Beyblade Fanfics Club/Discussions/Random Thoughts - Golden Freddy - Oct. 20, 2020
(Oct. 20, 2020 12:04 AM)kai edits Wrote: Can we get a moment of silence for shun kurenai.
No, can we get a moment of silence for Kobe Bryant
RE: Beyblade Fanfics Club/Discussions/Random Thoughts - SunBlader98 - Oct. 20, 2020
(Oct. 20, 2020 12:04 AM)kai edits Wrote: Can we get a moment of silence for shun kurenai.
Okay but wait Shun Shun Shun or Pun!
RE: Beyblade Fanfics Club/Discussions/Random Thoughts - kai edits - Oct. 20, 2020
(Oct. 20, 2020 12:16 AM)SunBlader98 Wrote:Shun died in the latest chapter of beyblade burst apocalypse.(Oct. 20, 2020 12:04 AM)kai edits Wrote: Can we get a moment of silence for shun kurenai.
Okay but wait Shun Shun Shun or Pun!
RE: Beyblade Fanfics Club/Discussions/Random Thoughts - GreenK9148 - Oct. 20, 2020
(Oct. 20, 2020 12:47 AM)kai edits Wrote:Soooooooooooo, does that mean your WBO account died?(Oct. 20, 2020 12:16 AM)SunBlader98 Wrote: Okay but wait Shun Shun Shun or Pun!Shun died in the latest chapter of beyblade burst apocalypse.
RE: Beyblade Fanfics Club/Discussions/Random Thoughts - kai edits - Oct. 20, 2020
(Oct. 20, 2020 12:52 AM)GreenK9148 Wrote:Nah she is the main character it's just temporarily. She will always come back.(Oct. 20, 2020 12:47 AM)kai edits Wrote: Shun died in the latest chapter of beyblade burst apocalypse.Soooooooooooo, does that mean your WBO account died?