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RE: Beyblade Fanfics Club/Discussions/Random Thoughts - GreenK9148 - Oct. 14, 2020

I hate when people leave good reviews on "BruhBlade Burst"

RE: Beyblade Fanfics Club/Discussions/Random Thoughts - 6Jupiter5 - Oct. 14, 2020

(Oct. 14, 2020  6:38 PM)GreenK9148 Wrote: I hate when people leave good reviews on "BruhBlade Burst"

That’s what you have me for, to give you bad ratings

RE: Beyblade Fanfics Club/Discussions/Random Thoughts - GreenK9148 - Oct. 14, 2020

(Oct. 14, 2020  6:38 PM)6Jupiter5 Wrote:
(Oct. 14, 2020  6:38 PM)GreenK9148 Wrote: I hate when people leave good reviews on "BruhBlade Burst"

That’s what you have me for, to give you bad ratings

GIVE ME MOREE

RE: Beyblade Fanfics Club/Discussions/Random Thoughts - SacredXcalibur - Oct. 14, 2020

can I post my episode link here?

RE: Beyblade Fanfics Club/Discussions/Random Thoughts - 6Jupiter5 - Oct. 14, 2020

(Oct. 14, 2020  6:46 PM)SacredXcalibur Wrote: can I post my episode link here?

I believe so as there is nothing saying you can’t

RE: Beyblade Fanfics Club/Discussions/Random Thoughts - SacredXcalibur - Oct. 14, 2020

ok so here's the link to the first episode of my fanfic
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1l7ijVFGd3oNmKJwqMpLZ7RI0wURHAePNM99bDh-Oxvo/edit?usp=sharing

if any of you decides to read it please rate it on a scale of 1-25 i'll accept all criticism as long as it's constructive criticism.

RE: Beyblade Fanfics Club/Discussions/Random Thoughts - 6Jupiter5 - Oct. 14, 2020

(Oct. 14, 2020  6:50 PM)SacredXcalibur Wrote: ok so here's the link to the first episode of my fanfic
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1l7ijVFGd3oNmKJwqMpLZ7RI0wURHAePNM99bDh-Oxvo/edit?usp=sharing

if any of you decides to read it please rate it on a scale of 1-25 i'll accept all criticism as long as it's constructive criticism.

Grammar: 5/5 as far as a screenplay is concerned

Dialogue: 2/5 seems kind of unnatural

Length: 5/5 good length

Plot: NC

Characters: NC

12/15

RE: Beyblade Fanfics Club/Discussions/Random Thoughts - SacredXcalibur - Oct. 14, 2020

(Oct. 14, 2020  7:17 PM)6Jupiter5 Wrote:
(Oct. 14, 2020  6:50 PM)SacredXcalibur Wrote: ok so here's the link to the first episode of my fanfic
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1l7ijVFGd3oNmKJwqMpLZ7RI0wURHAePNM99bDh-Oxvo/edit?usp=sharing

if any of you decides to read it please rate it on a scale of 1-25 i'll accept all criticism as long as it's constructive criticism.

Grammar: 5/5 as far as a screenplay is concerned

Dialogue: 2/5 seems kind of unnatural

Length: 5/5 good length

Plot: NC

Characters: NC

12/15

Thanks for the feedback
Beyblade Burst Legends episode 1b: Unrivaled, Warrior Ares! is coming later today and its almost done.

RE: Beyblade Fanfics Club/Discussions/Random Thoughts - The Blacknight - Oct. 15, 2020

hey, can yall rate mah fanfiction?
https://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-Fan-Fiction-Beyblade-Burst-Zenith-of-the-Gods-A-PG-13-Fanfic

RE: Beyblade Fanfics Club/Discussions/Random Thoughts - SacredXcalibur - Oct. 15, 2020

(Oct. 15, 2020  4:18 PM)The Blacknight Wrote: hey, can yall rate mah fanfiction?
https://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-Fan-Fiction-Beyblade-Burst-Zenith-of-the-Gods-A-PG-13-Fanfic

grammar: 5/5 no noticeable errors
plot: 2/5: not that interesting
characters:3/5 not easy to get invested
Length:5/5
Dialogue: 2/5 seems kind of unnatural
Total: 17/25

RE: Beyblade Fanfics Club/Discussions/Random Thoughts - The Blacknight - Oct. 15, 2020

(Oct. 15, 2020  4:30 PM)SacredXcalibur Wrote:
(Oct. 15, 2020  4:18 PM)The Blacknight Wrote: hey, can yall rate mah fanfiction?
https://worldbeyblade.org/Thread-Fan-Fiction-Beyblade-Burst-Zenith-of-the-Gods-A-PG-13-Fanfic

grammar: 5/5 no noticeable errors
plot: 2/5: not that interesting
characters:3/5 not easy to get invested
Length:5/5
Dialogue: 2/5 seems kind of unnatural
Total: 17/25

okay, thanks. I'll try to work on it!

RE: Beyblade Fanfics Club/Discussions/Random Thoughts - kai edits - Oct. 15, 2020

Can someone rate chapter 10 of beyblade burst apocalypse?

RE: Beyblade Fanfics Club/Discussions/Random Thoughts - SacredXcalibur - Oct. 15, 2020

(Oct. 15, 2020  6:14 PM)kai edits Wrote: Can someone rate chapter 10 of beyblade burst apocalypse?

rating time


Plot:4/5 it's actually a pretty good plot
Dialogue: 2/5 kinda bland and cringe
Characters: 2/5 they're all one sided
Length: 5/5 good length
Grammar: 2/5: still understandable but very noticeable errors.

Total: 15/25
overall it could use a ton of improvement but it's not bad.

RE: Beyblade Fanfics Club/Discussions/Random Thoughts - kai edits - Oct. 15, 2020

(Oct. 15, 2020  6:24 PM)SacredXcalibur Wrote:
(Oct. 15, 2020  6:14 PM)kai edits Wrote: Can someone rate chapter 10 of beyblade burst apocalypse?

rating time


Plot:4/5 it's actually a pretty good plot
Dialogue: 2/5 kinda bland and cringe
Characters: 2/5 they're all one sided
Length: 5/5 good length
Grammar: 2/5: still understandable but very noticeable errors.

Total: 15/25
overall it could use a ton of improvement but it's not bad.
Aye but I put in some JoJo memes tho. Shun got a huge buff tho

RE: Beyblade Fanfics Club/Discussions/Random Thoughts - SacredXcalibur - Oct. 15, 2020

(Oct. 15, 2020  6:25 PM)kai edits Wrote:
(Oct. 15, 2020  6:24 PM)SacredXcalibur Wrote: rating time


Plot:4/5 it's actually a pretty good plot
Dialogue: 2/5 kinda bland and cringe
Characters: 2/5 they're all one sided
Length: 5/5 good length
Grammar: 2/5: still understandable but very noticeable errors.

Total: 15/25
overall it could use a ton of improvement but it's not bad.
Aye but I put in some JoJo memes tho. Shun got a huge buff tho

Honestly Nerfing Shun would probably get you a higher rating but it's your fanfic .

RE: Beyblade Fanfics Club/Discussions/Random Thoughts - kai edits - Oct. 15, 2020

(Oct. 15, 2020  6:26 PM)SacredXcalibur Wrote:
(Oct. 15, 2020  6:25 PM)kai edits Wrote: Aye but I put in some JoJo memes tho. Shun got a huge buff tho

Honestly Nerfing Shun would probably get you a higher rating but it's your fanfic .
Shun only won really only once that was again drum since now she has to face valt and aiga again. The others were flashbacks

RE: Beyblade Fanfics Club/Discussions/Random Thoughts - SacredXcalibur - Oct. 15, 2020

(Oct. 15, 2020  6:28 PM)kai edits Wrote:
(Oct. 15, 2020  6:26 PM)SacredXcalibur Wrote: Honestly Nerfing Shun would probably get you a higher rating but it's your fanfic .
Shun only won really only once that was again drum since now she has to face valt and aiga again. The others were flashbacks
ok that's better

RE: Beyblade Fanfics Club/Discussions/Random Thoughts - CheetoBlader - Oct. 15, 2020

Oooo, Sacred, could you rate my story? The first chapter is in one of the two newest pages of it :3

RE: Beyblade Fanfics Club/Discussions/Random Thoughts - kai edits - Oct. 15, 2020

(Oct. 15, 2020  6:38 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote: Oooo, Sacred, could you rate my story? The first chapter is in one of the two newest pages of it :3
19/20

RE: Beyblade Fanfics Club/Discussions/Random Thoughts - CheetoBlader - Oct. 15, 2020

(Oct. 15, 2020  6:43 PM)kai edits Wrote:
(Oct. 15, 2020  6:38 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote: Oooo, Sacred, could you rate my story? The first chapter is in one of the two newest pages of it :3
19/20

Please add context or content to your post. You just wrote a 19/20, and nothing else. That’s considered spam.

RE: Beyblade Fanfics Club/Discussions/Random Thoughts - kai edits - Oct. 15, 2020

(Oct. 15, 2020  6:44 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote:
(Oct. 15, 2020  6:43 PM)kai edits Wrote: 19/20

Please add context or content to your post. You just wrote a 19/20, and nothing else. That’s considered spam.
Went into the point I was being nice

RE: Beyblade Fanfics Club/Discussions/Random Thoughts - CheetoBlader - Oct. 15, 2020

(Oct. 15, 2020  6:50 PM)kai edits Wrote:
(Oct. 15, 2020  6:44 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote: Please add context or content to your post. You just wrote a 19/20, and nothing else. That’s considered spam.
Went into the point I was being nice
??? Please speak clearly. I have no idea what you just said.

RE: Beyblade Fanfics Club/Discussions/Random Thoughts - AlexTheBlader - Oct. 15, 2020

(Oct. 15, 2020  6:51 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote:
(Oct. 15, 2020  6:50 PM)kai edits Wrote: Went into the point I was being nice
??? Please speak clearly. I have no idea what you just said.
He’s claiming he was being nice and giving you a good rating I think?

RE: Beyblade Fanfics Club/Discussions/Random Thoughts - The Blacknight - Oct. 15, 2020

(Oct. 15, 2020  6:53 PM)AlexTheBlader Wrote:
(Oct. 15, 2020  6:51 PM)CheetoBlader Wrote: ??? Please speak clearly. I have no idea what you just said.
He’s claiming he was being nice and giving you a good rating I think?

yah, but the point is to constructively criticize, not give him what he wants. If that's what he meant.

RE: Beyblade Fanfics Club/Discussions/Random Thoughts - AlexTheBlader - Oct. 15, 2020

(Oct. 15, 2020  7:01 PM)The Blacknight Wrote:
(Oct. 15, 2020  6:53 PM)AlexTheBlader Wrote: He’s claiming he was being nice and giving you a good rating I think?

yah, but the point is to constructively criticize, not give him what he wants. If that's what he meant.
That is true. Shouldnt lie on a rating