RE: Beyblade Burst Yin Yang/Mystic Clash (Character Contest) - Hollowmind13 - Nov. 12, 2021
(Nov. 12, 2021 12:26 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Shu Kurenai's Blazing Spirt fights on in Chapter 34!! Yin Yang!!
Beyblade Burst Yin Yang
Chapter 34
The God of Flames Vs. The Blaze Prince!
(Adrian sits in the Workroom in the Raging Bulls as he holds Asriel in his hand)
Adrian: The Upgrade I’m creating is going to have to counter Spriggan’s Versability and Ultimate Balance.
Austin: What’re you working on?
(Austin suddenly appears next to Adrian much to his surprise)
Adrian: An Upgrade so I can beat Shu Kurenai.
Austin: Well I battled Shu so I can give you advice!!
(Booming laughter would burst through the workroom scaring the living daylights out of Austin and Adrian)
Bell: *Laughs* If you want to Upgrade Asriel you’ll need my help to do it! There’s no way you’ll be able to create the Perfect Upgrade without the help of I, The Demon King!
Adrian: What do you guys recommend?
Austin: You should probably make something kinda like the Ring around the Justice disk. It enables you to have a Powerful Defense and a Powerful Offense. So maybe you should make a Ring that’ll be able to attach to your Disk that can Free Spin and be Locked for Powerful Strikes.
Bell: It should also have Metal surrounding it in the Middle so it’ll be balanced.
Adrian: So it’ll be a Balance Gear that’ll have Offense and Defense?
Austin: Yeah! Shu will go bonkers trying to find a way around your Defenses and Offenses!!
(Adrian puts on his Safety Goggles and a Safety Mask as he opens a Suitcase with Mechanical Tools)
Bell: Is that–
Adrian: It’s a Portable Bey Printer. It’s for making Beys and making Upgrades. I got it a while back and I’m using it now to create my Upgrade.
Austin: Let’s get started already then!
(Me, Bell and Austin work hard for 1 Hour to create Asriel’s Upgrade, After some time Adrian finally finished The Upgrade)
Adrian: *Grins* It’s finished, I call it J Gear!
Austin: It’s perfect! You’ll totally defeat Shu with that Amazing Upgrade!!
Bell: Asriel is One Gear away from reaching its Perfect Gear!
Austin/Adrian: Perfect Gear?
Bell: Of course. It’s when all of the Gears are attached to a certain Bey. When Belial got its Perfect Gear it was Super Powerful and reached a Level of Power unimaginable!!
Adrian: Perfect Gear Asriel. We’ll definitely get there and become the Strongest!!
Bell: Good. Because your battle with Shu is starting pretty soon. Show the Demon King an Amazing Battle!!
Austin: I’m sure Adrian will pull off an Amazing Win!!
~In America’s Home Stadium~
Hanami: What is up all you Amazing Beyblade Heroes?! Today we have an Amazing Battle for you! It’s Our Rising Blaze Prince, Adrian Saito! Challenging the Crimson Super Star, Shu Kurenai!!
(Both Bladers walk out to the stage as Adrian would Grin Evilly)
Shu: Well you look excited. Do you honestly think you stand a chance?
Adrian: I don’t think so. I know so with my New Upgrade!
(I show off my J Gear to Shu as he stares at it)
Shu: So you decided to Upgrade Asriel again.
Referee: First Battle!!
Adrian (Thoughts): I’ll start off in J Gear in Attack Mode!
(Adrian puts J Gear in Attack Mode as Shu stares at me as his Eyes Glow)
Shu (Thoughts): I’ll show you a truly Fun Battle. With my new Regal Spriggan!!
Adrian: Shu, don’t be too afraid after I blow you out of the Water!
Shu: *Smiles* I’d like to see you try.
(Shu puts Spriggan in Right Spin Stamina Mode with the Justice Disk Locked)
Referee: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Shu/Adrian: Go, Shoot!!
(Both Shu and Adrian pull off Extremely Powerful Eclipse Shoots)
Shu: Go for the center, Spriggan!!
Adrian: Twilight Shoot!!
(Asriel leans on its Metal Driver Attachment as it picks up Major Speed, Asriel slams into Spriggan with a Powerful Barrage of attacks)
Hanami: Asriel’s Attacking and Spriggan’s just sitting there tanking all of the Powerful Attacks!!
Shu: Keep the attacks coming, we’ll use ‘em! Regal Spin!!
(Spriggan absorbs all of Asriel’s Attacks as its Spin Speed increases rapidly)
Adrian: *Gasps* Seriously?!
Hanami: Spriggan’s using Asriel to gain more and more Speed!!
Possessed Adrian: I’ll crush you! Nobody ever uses me!!
Shu: This isn’t what Blading’s about! You’ve gotta have fun!!
(Asriel turns Purple and Black as it slams into Spriggan sending it flying into the air)
Hanami: Spriggan’s been sent flying!!
Hikaru: Yeah! He nailed it, he’ll totally beat Shu!!
Hyuga: Vroom Vroom!!
(Spriggan lands on the Stadium Floor and starts picking up speed as its driver starts Sparking)
Shu: Counter Break!!
Adrian: Counter, Twilight Slash!!
(Spriggan and Asriel start clashing wildly causing a Huge Explosion of Power, Spriggan gets shot out of the stadium at Full Speed, Shu catches Spriggan right before it hits his face)
Referee: It’s Twilight Asriel with an Over Finish! Adrian Saito claims 1 Point!!
Hanami: Spriggan’s been sent flying out of the Stadium as Shu Kurenai catches it right before its Eyes!!
Hyuga: Kablamo!! It was sent flying like Boom!!
Hikaru: Yeah! If Adrian keeps things up he’ll totally defeat Shu.
Valt (Thoughts): Adrian, you’ve gotta calm down. I know you can control your Flare, you've just gotta stay calm.
Referee: Second Battle!!
Shu (Thoughts): His Flare is going wild. I’ve got to combat his Flare with my own. I can’t let him go down the same path that Lean did.
(Shu’s Fiery Flare surrounds him as he puts Spriggan in Balance Mode as he stares me down, My Dark Flare surrounds me as my eyes glow Purple)
Possessed Adrian: Shu… I’ll crush Spriggan once again and prove to you I’m the Strongest in the World!!
Shu: You won’t ever truly beat Me! With your Flare you’ll be lucky to even stand a chance against Spriggan!!
Referee: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Adrian/Shu: Go, Shoot!!
(Me and Shu pull off Extremely Powerful Eclipse Shoots)
Hanami: We get a handful of Powerful Eclipse Shoots!!
Shu: Take ‘em down, Counter Break!!
Adrian: Twilight Shoot!!
(Asriel speeds up as Spriggan does the same, Both Beys slam into each other as a thunderous boom sends both Beys flying into the air)
Hanami: Both Beys have been sent flying into the air! Which will recover?!
Shu: Show them your Justice Spin!!
Adrian: Counter with J Gear!!
(Asriel’s J Gear and Spriggan’s Justice Disk starts clashing, Spriggan Repels Asriel’s Strike as it sends Asriel flying back, Asriel ricochets off the wall and catches onto the rim)
Hanami: Asriel’s been pushed back!!
Shu: How’s that?!
Possessed Adrian: True Twilight Flight!!
(Asriel picks up Major Speed as it slams into Spriggan sending it flying back in the air)
Hanami: Spriggan’s been sent flying!!
Shu: *Roars* Regal Slash!!
(Spriggan slams down on Asriel on its Side as Asriel gets sent flying out of the stadium)
Adrian: *Gasps*
Referee: It’s Regal Spriggan with an Over Finish! Shu Kurenai claims 1 Point!!
Hanami: Spriggan sends things with a Powerful Strike! Asriel has been sent flying out of the Ring after an Amazing Display of Power!!
Shu (Thoughts): Asriel was supposed to Burst after that Attack. Amazing he may have a Dark Bond with his Bey there might be some light Deep Inside his bond too.
Referee: Third Battle!!
(Adrian puts J Gear in Defense Mode as his Dark Flare Glimmers Gold and surrounds him as his eyes glow Purple)
Possessed Adrian: Me and Asriel will Burst Spriggan! It’ll be Broken into Bits and there’s nothing you can do about it!!
Shu: I won’t let you win this! This belongs to Spriggan!!
(Shu’s Lava Flare surrounds him as his Scar and Eyes glow Red, Shu puts Spriggan in Left Spin Attack Mode)
Austin: End this, Adrian!!
Hikaru: I wanna see Asriel’s True Power!!
Bell: *Laughs* Show us what J Gear can really do!
Referee: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Shu: Go, Shoot!!
(Both Me and Shu pull off Extremely Powerful Eclipse Shoots, Spriggan and Asriel both Speed Around the Stadium)
Hanami: Both Beys are Racing Across the Stadium!
Adrian: Go, Twilight Shoot!!
Shu: *Roars* Regal Upper Shoot!!
(Spriggan and Asriel launch a Powerful Barrage of blows as they both start clashing and pushing each other back)
Hanami: They’re pushing each other for the Victory!!
Shu: Strike it down, Spriggan!!
(Spriggan slashes at Asriel with its Metal Blade sending Asriel flying back)
Hanami: Spriggan’s on the Attack as Asriel barely defends itself!!
Possessed Adrian: Keep going, Asriel!!
(Spriggan tries hitting Asriel with Rapid Blows but J Gear Free Spins and starts blocking Spriggan’s Attacks)
Hanami: Asriel’s barely defending itself!!
Shu: C’mon, Spriggan!!
(Shu’s Resonance Aura flares up as Spriggan erupts from the Bey, Spriggan’s Driver starts Sparking as it aims for Asriel)
Hanami: Spriggan’s getting ready for the Finisher!!
Possessed Adrian: Destroy, Asriel!!
(My Flare flickers Around Asriel as Asriel’s Avatar erupts from the Bey)
Shu: Regal Slash!!
Me: Blow ‘em to bits! Twilight Blight!!
(Both Beys start clashing wildly as a Huge Eruption of Power bursts out of the Stadium, Asriel explodes as it Bursts instantly, Spriggan gets shot out of the Explosion and bursts right before Shu’s Eyes)
Me/Shu: *Gasps*
Referee: It’s Regal Spriggan with a Burst Finish! Shu Kurenai is the Winner with a score of 3-1!!
Hanami: Amazing, Shu Kurenai asserts his dominance by crushing Adrian Saito! Shu is certainly a Prodigy!!
Adrian: *Grins* Shu Kurenai. You’re a Powerful Opponent but the Next Time we battle Regal Spriggan’s Days are Over!!
Shu: *Smiles* We’ll see about that. You’ll be able to battle Me any day because I’m going on the Battle Airship with you all.
All: What?!
~The Next Morning In the Meeting Room as we fly High in the Air~
Wakiya: Alright everyone! This’ll be the Final Round before the Finals!! So these matches might decide if you make the Finals or not. In the First Round, it’s Adrian Saito and Illius Mao Vs. Thalia Amana and Po Taint!
(Illius and Adrian fist bump as Thalia and Po stare each other down)
Thalia: You’d better give it your all so we don’t lose!!
Po: *Grins* I’m counting on you doing your best.
Wakiya: The 2nd Round will be! Acheros Izumi and Austin Saito Vs. Hikaru and Hyuga Asahi!!
Hyuga/Hikaru: We’ll break our Limits!!
Acheros: You’re a Powerful Blader, Austin Saito. But can you keep up with Me?
Austin: I totally can!!
Wakiya: The Final Match will be Ren Kiyama and Jennifer Pratton Vs. Ethan Gilten and Bell Daikokuten!!
Bell: The Demon King will crush the Both of you!!
Ethan: Jennifer, I’ll break your Beyblade and teach you a lesson!!
(Ethan’s Blaze Swallows him whole as Blood Red Eyes pop out of the Humongous Flame)
Jennifer/Shu: *Gasps*
Wakiya: The Matches will be held in an Hour so prepare!
(Wakiya walks away as everyone leaves the room except for Shu and Valt)
Valt: What’s the matter, Shu?
Shu: His Blaze. It’s like Flare except for being way hotter and Powerful. I… I don’t think I can stop it.
Valt: You can two others I know definitely can stop him.
Shu: *Sighs* Adrian and Austin Saito. .
It's safe to say that Jennifer will lose her Joker (just like I predicted lol). Early R.I.P.
RE: Beyblade Burst Yin Yang/Mystic Clash (Character Contest) - UnseenBurst - Nov. 13, 2021
Y'know I don't have a good cover line so just read Chapter 35 of Yin Yang.
Beyblade Burst Yin Yang
Chapter 35
The Ultimate Clash of the Juinor Legends!
(Ifrit and Asriel speed around Trident and Pirate at Full Speeds)
Hanami: Ifrit and Asriel are in Perfect Synchronization as they both dodge Pirate and Trident!!
Thalia: Atlantic Strike!!
Po: Typhoon Storm!!
(Both Trident and Pirate slam into Asriel in Perfect Synch sending Asriel flying into the air)
Hanami: Asriel’s been sent flying!!
Adrian: End this thing, Twilight Blight!!
(Asriel slams down onto the stadium causing a Humongous Explosion, Both Pirate and Trident Explode and Burst instantly)
Po/Thalia: *Gasps*
Drone: Twilight Asriel and Combust Ifrit are the Winners!!
Hanami: Incredible! With that display of Power Adrian Saito guarantees his Place in the Finals!!
Illius (Thoughts): Nice job, Adrian.
Adrian: *Grins* I’ll crush everyone in the Finals and prove that I’m the Strongest Blader in the World!!
Ethan: Grr!! His cockiness is angering.
Shu: He’s not the only one.
(Ethan would look behind him and see Shu hovering over him)
Ethan: Shu Kurenai. My Father told me how much he hated you.
Shu: The feeling is mutual. But I’ve got a few questions for you.
Ethan: Hmp. Like I’d actually answer them.
Shu: Is it true? Is the Snake Pit really back?
Ethan: *Grins Deviously* The Snake Pit is going to swallow the Blading World whole with its Powerful Blaze. The Blading Legends will crumble as the Snake Pit takes over the Blading World!!
Shu: They already tried that. And they failed.
Ethan: They tried it with you. You were the Failed Project and Ashtem never wants to see your face again.
Shu: Too bad. He’ll have to whether he likes it or not. But who’s to say you won’t become a Failed Project?
Ethan: Grr!! With The Experimental Blaze Project, I’ll never lose!! *Gasps*
Shu: Blaze Project?
Ethan: Blaze elevates your Power in battle. It’s like Flare except Burning Brighter and Hotter than any Fire!!
Shu: Then why can Austin enter it?
Ethan: When Ashtem first discovered Blaze it was in Yin Yang Beys for some reason. A Blader with Exceedingly High Resonance Power and a Yin or Yang Bey will be able to unlock it.
Shu: Why are you answering my questions?
Ethan: The Thing is, Blaze is unstoppable. It’ll burn down the current Blading World and rebuild it in a Darker and more Devious Way!!
(Ethan’s Blaze surrounds him as his eyes turn Blood Red, a Mysterious Person in a Punk Outfit walks up to both Ethan and Shu)
???: That’s right. Except I’m Father’s Top Agent!!
Shu: *Gasps* Who are you?
Poltergeist: I’m Poltergeist Gilten! The Older Brother of that ungrateful Power Hungry Brat!!
Ethan: Poltergeist, why are you here?
Poltergeist: Father knew you were going to screw something up so he sent his Top Agent to go check up on you!
Ethan: Grr!!
Shu: So you’re Ethan Gilten’s Older Brother. Are you planning on Destroying the Blading World too?
Poltergeist: You read my mind! Me and Phonix are going to crush the Blading World with our Mighty Power!!
Ethan: I’m taking out the Blading Legends so Father can use the Snake Pit to Take Over!!
Poltergeist: Sure. If you need me I’ll be hiding in the Basement so the pesky Commissioner won’t catch me.
(Poltergeist jumps in the air and breaks through the vent as Shu walks away)
Ethan: *Laughs Demonicly* Shu Kurenai, I know you’re afraid! I’ll burn you away and do the same to your Best Friend, Valt Aoi right before your eyes!!
(Shu balls up his fists as his Red-Eyes shimmer in the Light)
Shu (Thoughts): I can’t let the Blading World fall under my eyes once again. Not ever again!!
~A Couple Minutes Later before the 2nd Round Begins~
Hanami: Welcome back Boys and Girls! We’re about to start the Second Round of our Amazing 4th Round!! It’s Acheros Izumi and Austin Saito Vs. Hyuga Asahi and Bell Daikiokuten! These Tag Teams are no Push Overs so why don’t we see an ending to this rivalry?!
Referee: First Battle!!
Bell: Belial, let’s crush them and show them the Power of the Demon Ruler!!
Hyuga: We’ll slam into them kablowy style!!
Austin: Acheros, I’ll attack while you defend so we have a Back-Up plan if Anpao fails.
Acheros: Got it. It’s been great working with you.
(Acheros puts Aeneas in Defense Mode as Austin attaches the Singe Layer to Anpao)
Referee: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Austin/Bell/Acheros/Hyuga: Go, Shoot!!
(All of us Pull off Extremely Powerful Eclipse Shoots, Aeneas takes the center as the rest of the Beys speed around the stadium)
Hanami: Both Beys are Zooming around the Stadium at Full Speed!!
Bell: Attack, Belial!!
Hyuga: Split ‘em up, Hyperion!!
Austin: C’mon, face me you two!!
(Both Belial and Hyperion aim for Aeneas but Anpao blocks them both with a Powerful Strike, Anpao gets sent flying back)
Hanami: Anpao makes a Brave Strike as it sends Belial and Hyperion back!!
Bell: Hyuga, attack!
Hyuga: Vroom! Hyperion!!
(Hyperion picks up speed as it slams into Anpao, Anpao and Hyperion start clashing as Belial aims in between us)
Me/Hyuga: *Roars* Strike ‘em down!!
Hanami: Anpao and Hyperion are lashing out at each other with Full Power! Both Beys are aiming for a Win!!
Bell: Flare-up! Torpedo Bomber!!
(Belial picks up Major Speed and slams into both Hyperion and Anpao, Hyperion’s Kindling Limit Destroyer activates sending all the Beys in different directions, Anpao gets shot into the air)
Hanami: Anpao’s been sent flying!
Austin: *Roars* Blaze past your limits! Anpao!!
(Austin’s Blaze Burns Brightly around him and Anpao as Anpao’s Avatar blazes out of the Bey)
Bell/Hyuga: It survived?!
Austin/Anpao: Singeing Slash!!
(Anpao slams down on Hyperion and Belial causing a Massive Explosion, Hyperion, Anpao, and Belial Burst instantly as there parts rain around Aeneas)
All: *Gasps*
Referee: Singe Anpao and Dire Aenas are the Winners!!
Hanami: Aeneas stands supreme over its fallen enemy and Partner! Anpao risked itself for the Amazing Win!
Acheros: You were right. If you were attacking them they’d get flustered and start attacking you. But I don’t get it, how did you have enough Power to burst two Beys at once?
Austin: *Smiles* I just believe in Anpao and used all of my Power for an Incredible Win!!
Hanami: With that win, Austin has given himself a chance to enter the Finals! But if Jennifer wins her next battle then he has to battle her and Po for his spot in the Finals!!
Austin: You’d guys better win! I wanna battle you so bad!!
Jennifer (Thoughts): So I’ll have to crush then if I wanna go to the finals *Chuckles* Not a problem.
Adrian: Austin’s getting stronger.
Hikaru: Yeah. He’s gotten way stronger! He’ll definitely make it into the Finals!!
Wally: You can bet on that!
Hanami: Alright, our Final Match is Ethan Gilten and Jennifer Pratton Vs. Hikaru Asahi and Ren Kiyama! Let the battle begin!!
(Ethan, Hikaru, Jennifer, and Ren would walk down to the Stadium and Prepare to battle)
Referee: First Battle!!
Ethan: Remember my prediction. Joker will break and will never be seen again.
Jennifer: I’ll beat you and prove to you my dominance!
Hikaru: Ren! We get to face off. Isn’t this gonna be Amazing?!
Ren: Stay out of my way.
Hikaru: *Gasps*
Ethan: Ren, remember the plan.
Ren: *Nods*
Referee: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Ethan/Jennifer/Hikaru/Ren: Go, Shoot!!
(Everyone pulls off Extremely Powerful Eclipse Shoots, Erebus and Helios immediately start clashing)
Hanami: And the Fight is on! Erebus and Helios are going for the attack!!
Jennifer: Rip ‘em into threads!
Ren: Demon’s Dust!!
(Ragnaruk creates a Black and Red Tornado as it starts clashing wildly with Joker, Joker gets caught in the tornado and gets sent flying into the wall creating a Tiny Fracture)
Hanami: Ragnaruk’s attacked and has weakened Joker!!
Hikaru: Pheobus Limit Destroyer!!
Ethan: Requiem Bound Slash!!
(Erebus counters Helios’ Limit Destroyer with its Huge Blade, Helios gets sent flying out of the Stadium and lands on the Ground with a Thud)
Hikaru: *Gasps*
Hanami: Helios has been sent out of the Stadium!!
Ethan: Destroy them, Erebus!!
(Ethan’s Blaze corrupts him as his Eyes turn Blood Red, Erebus Blaze out of the Bey)
Ren: Help ‘em destroy him. Demon’s Dust Storm Press!!
Ethan: Requiem Press!!
(Both Ragnaruk and Erebus start crushing Joker into the wall, Cracks start covering Joker from all over)
Jennifer: No!!
Hanami: Joker’s being crushed by its own teammate! Erebus is going for the kill!!
All: No!!
(Ethan would close his hands into a fist right as Joker would Burst into fragments with a Huge Explosion following, Ragnaruk would be sent flying out of the stadium by the Explosion)
Jennifer: *Gasps*
Referee: Rogue Joker and Reqiuem Erebus are the Winners!!
Hanami: I don’t believe it… Erebus and Ragnaruk broke Joker.
(Jennifer falls to her knees as tears well up in Austin’s Eyes)
Austin: Ren... Why?
Jennifer: Joker…
(Ethan’s eyes Blood Red as his Blaze surrounds him, Poltergeist watches his from the corner)
Possessed Ethan: You're a waste of my time. Get out… Now.
Poltergeist: Looks like you’ve broken another Bey, Brother.
Shu (Thoughts): Looks like Ren is gone down to Dark Path.
(Jennifer picks up her Bey’s fragments as she runs off)
Hanami: After that said resolution we’ve finally come up with the 4 Blader who’ll be going to the Finals! First, Ethan Gilten.
Ethan: Expected.
Hanami: Then we’ve got Adrian Saito!!
Adrian: Already knew it.
Hanami: Third is Po Taint!!
Po: Grr!! I’ll crush all of you!!
Hanami: And fourth is Austin Saito!!
Austin: Yes! I made it!!
Hanami: It’ll be a Tag Battle and it’ll be First Team to 2 Points!! The teams are Austin Saito and Adrian Saito Vs. Po Taint and Ethan Gilten! This match will happen in 3 Days so get ready for an Amazing Battle!!
Adrian/Austin: We’re totally going to win this!
Ethan: Po, you’d better stay out of the way so I can win this!!
Po: Grr!!
Wakiya: I’m looking forward to an Amazing Finale! So you’d better live up to the hype!!
Adrian: We’ll win this thing, Austin.
Austin: Yeah! We’ll go burst ‘em in One Hit!!
Adrian/Austin: We’ll show them the Ultimate Eclipse!!
I'd really like a Rating Please!
RE: Beyblade Burst Yin Yang/Mystic Clash (Character Contest) - UnseenBurst - Nov. 13, 2021
Chapter 11 of Mystical Boldness, Arc 1's Finale: https://www.wattpad.com/1153899428-beyblade-burst-db-mystical-boldness-episode-11
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I'd like your opinion on this Chapter and or the whole Arc!
RE: Beyblade Burst Yin Yang/Mystic Clash (Character Contest) - Hollowmind13 - Nov. 14, 2021
(Nov. 13, 2021 2:19 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Y'know I don't have a good cover line so just read Chapter 35 of Yin Yang.
Beyblade Burst Yin Yang
Chapter 35
The Ultimate Clash of the Juinor Legends!
(Ifrit and Asriel speed around Trident and Pirate at Full Speeds)
Hanami: Ifrit and Asriel are in Perfect Synchronization as they both dodge Pirate and Trident!!
Thalia: Atlantic Strike!!
Po: Typhoon Storm!!
(Both Trident and Pirate slam into Asriel in Perfect Synch sending Asriel flying into the air)
Hanami: Asriel’s been sent flying!!
Adrian: End this thing, Twilight Blight!!
(Asriel slams down onto the stadium causing a Humongous Explosion, Both Pirate and Trident Explode and Burst instantly)
Po/Thalia: *Gasps*
Drone: Twilight Asriel and Combust Ifrit are the Winners!!
Hanami: Incredible! With that display of Power Adrian Saito guarantees his Place in the Finals!!
Illius (Thoughts): Nice job, Adrian.
Adrian: *Grins* I’ll crush everyone in the Finals and prove that I’m the Strongest Blader in the World!!
Ethan: Grr!! His cockiness is angering.
Shu: He’s not the only one.
(Ethan would look behind him and see Shu hovering over him)
Ethan: Shu Kurenai. My Father told me how much he hated you.
Shu: The feeling is mutual. But I’ve got a few questions for you.
Ethan: Hmp. Like I’d actually answer them.
Shu: Is it true? Is the Snake Pit really back?
Ethan: *Grins Deviously* The Snake Pit is going to swallow the Blading World whole with its Powerful Blaze. The Blading Legends will crumble as the Snake Pit takes over the Blading World!!
Shu: They already tried that. And they failed.
Ethan: They tried it with you. You were the Failed Project and Ashtem never wants to see your face again.
Shu: Too bad. He’ll have to whether he likes it or not. But who’s to say you won’t become a Failed Project?
Ethan: Grr!! With The Experimental Blaze Project, I’ll never lose!! *Gasps*
Shu: Blaze Project?
Ethan: Blaze elevates your Power in battle. It’s like Flare except Burning Brighter and Hotter than any Fire!!
Shu: Then why can Austin enter it?
Ethan: When Ashtem first discovered Blaze it was in Yin Yang Beys for some reason. A Blader with Exceedingly High Resonance Power and a Yin or Yang Bey will be able to unlock it.
Shu: Why are you answering my questions?
Ethan: The Thing is, Blaze is unstoppable. It’ll burn down the current Blading World and rebuild it in a Darker and more Devious Way!!
(Ethan’s Blaze surrounds him as his eyes turn Blood Red, a Mysterious Person in a Punk Outfit walks up to both Ethan and Shu)
???: That’s right. Except I’m Father’s Top Agent!!
Shu: *Gasps* Who are you?
Poltergeist: I’m Poltergeist Gilten! The Older Brother of that ungrateful Power Hungry Brat!!
Ethan: Poltergeist, why are you here?
Poltergeist: Father knew you were going to screw something up so he sent his Top Agent to go check up on you!
Ethan: Grr!!
Shu: So you’re Ethan Gilten’s Older Brother. Are you planning on Destroying the Blading World too?
Poltergeist: You read my mind! Me and Phonix are going to crush the Blading World with our Mighty Power!!
Ethan: I’m taking out the Blading Legends so Father can use the Snake Pit to Take Over!!
Poltergeist: Sure. If you need me I’ll be hiding in the Basement so the pesky Commissioner won’t catch me.
(Poltergeist jumps in the air and breaks through the vent as Shu walks away)
Ethan: *Laughs Demonicly* Shu Kurenai, I know you’re afraid! I’ll burn you away and do the same to your Best Friend, Valt Aoi right before your eyes!!
(Shu balls up his fists as his Red-Eyes shimmer in the Light)
Shu (Thoughts): I can’t let the Blading World fall under my eyes once again. Not ever again!!
~A Couple Minutes Later before the 2nd Round Begins~
Hanami: Welcome back Boys and Girls! We’re about to start the Second Round of our Amazing 4th Round!! It’s Acheros Izumi and Austin Saito Vs. Hyuga Asahi and Bell Daikiokuten! These Tag Teams are no Push Overs so why don’t we see an ending to this rivalry?!
Referee: First Battle!!
Bell: Belial, let’s crush them and show them the Power of the Demon Ruler!!
Hyuga: We’ll slam into them kablowy style!!
Austin: Acheros, I’ll attack while you defend so we have a Back-Up plan if Anpao fails.
Acheros: Got it. It’s been great working with you.
(Acheros puts Aeneas in Defense Mode as Austin attaches the Singe Layer to Anpao)
Referee: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Austin/Bell/Acheros/Hyuga: Go, Shoot!!
(All of us Pull off Extremely Powerful Eclipse Shoots, Aeneas takes the center as the rest of the Beys speed around the stadium)
Hanami: Both Beys are Zooming around the Stadium at Full Speed!!
Bell: Attack, Belial!!
Hyuga: Split ‘em up, Hyperion!!
Austin: C’mon, face me you two!!
(Both Belial and Hyperion aim for Aeneas but Anpao blocks them both with a Powerful Strike, Anpao gets sent flying back)
Hanami: Anpao makes a Brave Strike as it sends Belial and Hyperion back!!
Bell: Hyuga, attack!
Hyuga: Vroom! Hyperion!!
(Hyperion picks up speed as it slams into Anpao, Anpao and Hyperion start clashing as Belial aims in between us)
Me/Hyuga: *Roars* Strike ‘em down!!
Hanami: Anpao and Hyperion are lashing out at each other with Full Power! Both Beys are aiming for a Win!!
Bell: Flare-up! Torpedo Bomber!!
(Belial picks up Major Speed and slams into both Hyperion and Anpao, Hyperion’s Kindling Limit Destroyer activates sending all the Beys in different directions, Anpao gets shot into the air)
Hanami: Anpao’s been sent flying!
Austin: *Roars* Blaze past your limits! Anpao!!
(Austin’s Blaze Burns Brightly around him and Anpao as Anpao’s Avatar blazes out of the Bey)
Bell/Hyuga: It survived?!
Austin/Anpao: Singeing Slash!!
(Anpao slams down on Hyperion and Belial causing a Massive Explosion, Hyperion, Anpao, and Belial Burst instantly as there parts rain around Aeneas)
All: *Gasps*
Referee: Singe Anpao and Dire Aenas are the Winners!!
Hanami: Aeneas stands supreme over its fallen enemy and Partner! Anpao risked itself for the Amazing Win!
Acheros: You were right. If you were attacking them they’d get flustered and start attacking you. But I don’t get it, how did you have enough Power to burst two Beys at once?
Austin: *Smiles* I just believe in Anpao and used all of my Power for an Incredible Win!!
Hanami: With that win, Austin has given himself a chance to enter the Finals! But if Jennifer wins her next battle then he has to battle her and Po for his spot in the Finals!!
Austin: You’d guys better win! I wanna battle you so bad!!
Jennifer (Thoughts): So I’ll have to crush then if I wanna go to the finals *Chuckles* Not a problem.
Adrian: Austin’s getting stronger.
Hikaru: Yeah. He’s gotten way stronger! He’ll definitely make it into the Finals!!
Wally: You can bet on that!
Hanami: Alright, our Final Match is Ethan Gilten and Jennifer Pratton Vs. Hikaru Asahi and Ren Kiyama! Let the battle begin!!
(Ethan, Hikaru, Jennifer, and Ren would walk down to the Stadium and Prepare to battle)
Referee: First Battle!!
Ethan: Remember my prediction. Joker will break and will never be seen again.
Jennifer: I’ll beat you and prove to you my dominance!
Hikaru: Ren! We get to face off. Isn’t this gonna be Amazing?!
Ren: Stay out of my way.
Hikaru: *Gasps*
Ethan: Ren, remember the plan.
Ren: *Nods*
Referee: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Ethan/Jennifer/Hikaru/Ren: Go, Shoot!!
(Everyone pulls off Extremely Powerful Eclipse Shoots, Erebus and Helios immediately start clashing)
Hanami: And the Fight is on! Erebus and Helios are going for the attack!!
Jennifer: Rip ‘em into threads!
Ren: Demon’s Dust!!
(Ragnaruk creates a Black and Red Tornado as it starts clashing wildly with Joker, Joker gets caught in the tornado and gets sent flying into the wall creating a Tiny Fracture)
Hanami: Ragnaruk’s attacked and has weakened Joker!!
Hikaru: Pheobus Limit Destroyer!!
Ethan: Requiem Bound Slash!!
(Erebus counters Helios’ Limit Destroyer with its Huge Blade, Helios gets sent flying out of the Stadium and lands on the Ground with a Thud)
Hikaru: *Gasps*
Hanami: Helios has been sent out of the Stadium!!
Ethan: Destroy them, Erebus!!
(Ethan’s Blaze corrupts him as his Eyes turn Blood Red, Erebus Blaze out of the Bey)
Ren: Help ‘em destroy him. Demon’s Dust Storm Press!!
Ethan: Requiem Press!!
(Both Ragnaruk and Erebus start crushing Joker into the wall, Cracks start covering Joker from all over)
Jennifer: No!!
Hanami: Joker’s being crushed by its own teammate! Erebus is going for the kill!!
All: No!!
(Ethan would close his hands into a fist right as Joker would Burst into fragments with a Huge Explosion following, Ragnaruk would be sent flying out of the stadium by the Explosion)
Jennifer: *Gasps*
Referee: Rogue Joker and Reqiuem Erebus are the Winners!!
Hanami: I don’t believe it… Erebus and Ragnaruk broke Joker.
(Jennifer falls to her knees as tears well up in Austin’s Eyes)
Austin: Ren... Why?
Jennifer: Joker…
(Ethan’s eyes Blood Red as his Blaze surrounds him, Poltergeist watches his from the corner)
Possessed Ethan: You're a waste of my time. Get out… Now.
Poltergeist: Looks like you’ve broken another Bey, Brother.
Shu (Thoughts): Looks like Ren is gone down to Dark Path.
(Jennifer picks up her Bey’s fragments as she runs off)
Hanami: After that said resolution we’ve finally come up with the 4 Blader who’ll be going to the Finals! First, Ethan Gilten.
Ethan: Expected.
Hanami: Then we’ve got Adrian Saito!!
Adrian: Already knew it.
Hanami: Third is Po Taint!!
Po: Grr!! I’ll crush all of you!!
Hanami: And fourth is Austin Saito!!
Austin: Yes! I made it!!
Hanami: It’ll be a Tag Battle and it’ll be First Team to 2 Points!! The teams are Austin Saito and Adrian Saito Vs. Po Taint and Ethan Gilten! This match will happen in 3 Days so get ready for an Amazing Battle!!
Adrian/Austin: We’re totally going to win this!
Ethan: Po, you’d better stay out of the way so I can win this!!
Po: Grr!!
Wakiya: I’m looking forward to an Amazing Finale! So you’d better live up to the hype!!
Adrian: We’ll win this thing, Austin.
Austin: Yeah! We’ll go burst ‘em in One Hit!!
Adrian/Austin: We’ll show them the Ultimate Eclipse!!
"The name changing is baaaaaack!" - Hollow
I'd really like a Rating Please!
I see foreshadowing
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Poor Thalia lol. Adrian will probably lose his evil resonance, but it would be cool if he had it under control (like, he would still be corrupted but he would control it to not keep breaking beys or smth) and use it instead of just going pure. Jennifer got destroyed (not like I didn't helped you with that pointing out that Joker was the easiest to break)! Hopefully she doesn't just disappears and never appear again, right?
I'm hyped for the final 3v1 2v2. Btw Ren, I'm not mad, I'm just disappointed... Deeply.
RE: Beyblade Burst Yin Yang/Mystic Clash (Character Contest) - UnseenBurst - Nov. 14, 2021
36) Crash Landing on the Oni's Island! While trying to go back to Japan for the Finals The Airship crashes into a Mysterious Island the Hikaru, Hyuga, Bell, and Valt are familiar of. A Powerful Raging Dragons lays there in slumber but its Awakening it soon to come. It's Master is the Raging Dragon Master himself Lui awakes the Raging Dragon and tests it out in battle as a Powerful Ally challenges it. Austin gets ready to battle the Raging Dragon but holds off because the Darkness within the Island finally erupts
38) Perfect Gear Asriel, Adrian's Revolution! Adrian Upgrades Asriel and finally helps it reach its Perfected Form. He challenges Lui to a battle and learns the Truth about Blaze and what it truly means to have fun. Poltergeist finally gets a chance to show off his new Phonix in battle. It's a heated battle between him and the Raging Dragon. Will Phonix be able to slay the Raging Dragon for good? The Airship finally arrives in Japan as Adrian, Austin, Po, and Ethan prepare for the Final Battle ahead. Adrian and Austin train with Valt Aoi and Shu Kurenai in preparation for their Final Battle. As Ethan his a quarrel with his brother.
41) The Blazing Eruption, Roar of our Blazes! [Spoiler] Adrian and Austin finally go up against Ethan and Po in a heated never-ending battle of wills. Ethan shows everyone Erebus' True Power and Austin and Adrian show how strong they are together as they face the Dark Abyss. A Familiar Face comes to watch the match.
RE: Beyblade Burst Yin Yang/Mystic Clash (Character Contest) - Hollowmind13 - Nov. 14, 2021
My entry is here, if you can't choose between mine and CelBeyBlade's entry (a very good entry btw). I'd recommend giving him the priority. It is a giant entry, prob the biggest I've ever done, so if it crashes your device's chrome, try clicking to reply to it and read it there, that way it doesn't crash for some reason.
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Name: Helen Bunker
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Age: 14
Gender: Female
Height: 1,74m
Birthday: 15th May
Occupation: Blader (and student ig)
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Physical appearance: Red wavy hair; brown eyes; glasses (when not using contact lenses); Sleeve-less white shirt under a shoulder-less multicolored (red to yellow) sweater; brown “bush pants” (type of pants); faded golden sneakers; A yellow rubber wristband with “Oikos” written on it in Crayola font.
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Personality – Psychology: Constantly fantasizes and dislikes abstraction.
Self-discipline: Can’t say no and keeps personal opinions secret.
Lifestyle: Bound by the book, optimistic and non-rebellious
Social attitude: Dislikes being alone, Bring out the best in others and Cooperative
Honesty and Honor: Reliable and Faithful
Emotional Capacity: Caring and Sensitive
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Character trivia/facts (do whatever you want with them):
* Helen is the modern version of Helene, which means “torch. As for Bunker, it means “Good heart”.
* She puts the others over herself, that’s because she fears being a bad friend or letting them down.
* She has a pretty big family: father, mother, 2 brothers (one is 17 y/o and the other 9 y/o), 1 sister (very young, 5 years or so) and mother-side cousins (2 cousins, one 12 and the other 8) with their parents (on the “same house”, it is more like 2 houses in one). Her older cousin and younger brother are also bladers.
* Call her Ginger without her consent and your dynasty is over (half joking, she is pacifist after all, but don’t call her ginger)
* She is a pacifist, very weird for a blader right? Her battle strategies normally involve surviving or the opponent screwing up.
* She values her family a lot.
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Beyblade(s): Scorch Hestia Heart Campfire -4
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Parts – Scorch: A Left spin, stamina type DB Blade. The contact point segment is a perfectly, smooth circular shape that is sloped downwards. It was made to not be affected by any attack, but also not attack. It also has 4 metal segments above the blade that align with the armor.
Design: The smooth blade is translucent and has mixed colors from red to yellow, like marbles, to simulate the different colors of normal fire. On the inside part of the blade, it is an opaque faded gold color, to symbolize ichor, the ancient gods blood.
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Hestia: A left spin DB Core, it is opaque faded gold color. It features a woman face (Golden eyes and pomegranate-color (the mini fruits at the inside) lines to make the outline of head and the body) in one corner with a white head veil looking to her hand, which has the same colors as the blade (vertical avatar format). Its motif is the Greek goddess of hearth and family, Hestia.
Teeth position: 3 medium teeth (Trivia: They represent the family, the family's property, and the house (Oikos). Which the motif is strongly connected to)
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Heart: A DB Disc. It features 4 main weight points evenly distributed that, when clicked once, align perfectly with the armor weight and the blade’s metal. Its weight is centered outward. This disc has Giga-like LAD.
Design: The 4 points have a square shape and are connected by a metal ring. Its color is faded gold.
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Campfire: A Stamina type driver. It features a rounded low-angled cone tip with a plate, similar to Rise, that free spins and is located a little bit higher in comparison to Rise. It has great same spin and opposite spin stamina but can be knocked off balance quite easily with its conical tip. It is a very stationary tip.
Colors: Brown with the plate opaque white.
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4: A DB Armor. It features 4 main weight points evenly distributed.
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Beyblade trivia/facts (again, do whatever you like):
* Scorch, as aforementioned, is completely smooth. This is because of Helen’s pacifist nature (this also makes spin stealing not work, even rubber has a hard time spin stealing or slow-mo bursting it). It is called Scorch because when a bey attacks it, Hestia deflects the hit and can potentially destabilize the opponent. This also makes the bey unlikeable to burst.
* The Campfire driver is called campfire because of its stationary nature.
* Hestia’s only weakness is destabilization and to do so you need to smash your bey against it, not slap it on the side. If you manage it, you can hit it from above while it doesn’t stabilize back, this is when you can potentially burst it. It will also lose more stamina while destabilized. (Also maybe a stamina battle, but only if you have top tier LAD)
* It is (from my knowledge) the first Hestia bey ever made.
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Launching Style(s): The initial launching position is your standard position. Right hand on the string.
3, 2, 1 – It stays the same as a normal launch, but a little closer to the body
Go shoot – The blader quickly thrusts her left arm forward while pulling the string. This makes the bey land further ahead on the arena and take the center quicker.
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Special moves:
Scorching fire – when used, the blade glows slightly and deflect hits, destabilizing the opponents while not suffering any recoil. (Active ability, do not think this special move is deflecting the hits, actually it only makes the destabilizing part. Deflecting is on the bey's nature)
Weakness: Smashing your bey directly into it, this may be risky but it’s the way. Otherwise the attack has no effect (you can also hit it on the disc, not recommended since it can hurt you more than Hestia)
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Burning drift – to be used, the bey has to get pushed by the opponent. When used, the bey leans on its driver and changes the movement route, dodging an upcoming attack or a KO.
Weakness: It isn’t fully controllable, since it depends on how the bey destabilizes to lean on the driver and do the desirable action. To put it simple, it is not totally reliable because of medium inconsistency, although that inconsistency might help evade attacks. (Active/Passive ability, doesn't need to yell the name but you can to activate it)
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Heart aura (lame name, Helen thinks so too but she couldn’t come up with a better name): To be used, the bey has to click once. When used, all the 4 points of weight align, giving it master balance and better stabilizing abilities. (Passive ability, you don’t need to yell its name to activate)
Weakness: It only works when Hestia clicks once, so only for the period that it has -1 click is when it is active, neither before nor after that point. So it can either last for the whole round or never activate, pure inconsistency
RE: Beyblade Burst Yin Yang/Mystic Clash (Character Contest) - UnseenBurst - Nov. 15, 2021
Chapter 36 of Beyblade Burst Yin Yang has risen from the Island of Demons!
Beyblade Burst Yin Yang
Chapter 36
Crash Landing on the Island of Demons!
(Austin, Adrian, Valt, and Shu walk into Wakiya’s Office as he looks at us concerningly)
Adrian: What’s up, Wakiya? You called us here.
Austin: *Gasps* You called Valt and Shu too?
Wakiya: I heard the Rumors about the Snake Pit rising again. And Shu came to me earlier telling me that Ren might be a part of it.
Valt: Yeah. But we don’t know for sure yet.
Austin: He would never be a part of the Snake Pit. I know that for a fact.
Wakiya: *Sighs* Sadly you’re wrong.
All: What?
Wakiya: After Shu told me about this, I’ve been keeping a close eye on the Zeppelin. And I found this happening Last Night.
(Wakiya turns his Computer on as we all see Ren and Alexander Gilten on the Zeppelin Port)
~Through the Security Cameras~
Alexander: Looks like you were Elimanted. But you destroyed a Bey. I am extremely proud of you.
Ren: You’ve got to do what you’ve got to do to win.
Alexander: Yes. But you can become stronger. We’ll put you through Training in the Snake Pit and you’ll become the Strongest. Now it’s time to go.
(Ren and Alexander grab Gliders and jump off the Zeppelin’s Port as they glide off, The Security Footage ends as Austin stands in his spot trembling)
~The Security Footage Ends~
Austin: He… He abandoned us. He left us for the Snake Pit.
Shu: I’m sorry. The Snake Pit turns friends against friends and tricks you into believing Destroying Beyblades and Beyblade is all about despair.
Adrian: It’s not your fault. When I see Ren again I’m gonna clobber him.
Wakiya: If the Snake Pit is rising again we need a Counterattack.
Valt: I’ve got an idea!
Shu: What is it?
Valt: Adrian and Austin are going up against Po Taint and Ethan Gilten in the Finals right?
Shu: Yeah.
Wakiya: That is true. We’ll be stopping at The GT Arena and it’ll be held there.
Valt: If Adrian and Austin defeat Ethan and Po that might be able to put a dent in the Snake Pit’s Plans.
Shu: Exactly! It’ll take longer to pull off their plan since Ethan will become a Failed Project.
Adrian: So it’s up to–
(The Zeppelin starts shaking wildly as we hear a Ferocious Storm outside, We all run outside and see everyone outside looking at the Super Thick Fog and the Thunder and Rain)
Wakiya: *Gasps* It’s a storm!
Thalia: Someone’s angry.
(Thunder crashes loudly next to the Zeppelin)
Acheros: I think he heard you.
Shu: We can’t fly through this type of storm. We’ve got to get lower!
Po: Is there even anything under us?
Austin: I don’t see anything!
(Austin tries looking over to the balcony but Anpao falls out of his hand)
All: *Gasps*
Austin: Anpao!!
(A silhouette of a Person jumps forwards towards the ship and catches Anpao, Someone with Blue Fire for Hair and Sharp Teeth stands on the Zeppelin)
???: Lose something?
All: *Gasps*
Austin/Adrian: Lui Shirasagijo?!
Lui: *Laughs* So you recognize me! I remember battling you two. You got lucky and won but we’ll have a Rematch and I’ll crush you!!
Shu: Lui? Why are you all the way out in the middle of nowhere?
Lui: You’re over The Island of Demons. I heard your Zeppelin from a mile away.
Wakiya: Of course! The Island of Demons is in between America and Japan. And it’s always so depressing here.
Adrian: Lui! I challenge you to a–
(Ethan’s Blaze surrounds him as his Eyes glow Blood Red)
Ethan: Lui Shirasagijo, I challenge you to a battle! And I’ll break your Longinus!!
Lui: *Laughs* You actually think you can break Longinus?! Kid, I’d like to see you try to even Burst Longinus!!
Aiga: This doesn’t look good.
Ethan: I’ll crush all you supposed Blading Legends. You don’t stand a chance against me!!
Lui: You don’t know what you’re getting yourself into. I’ll crush your Bey to a pulp.
Wakiya: Alright! We’ll be having a battle between Lui and Ethan! I’ll be a Ranked Match!!
(We land the Zeppelin as Ethan and Lui get ready to battle at the Top of the Mountian)
Lui: Guilty Longinus will tear you apart!
Ethan: Requiem Erebus will break Longinus.
Lui: “Requiem?”
Drone: First Battle!!
Austin: Lui is a Powerful Blader! I wonder how Ethan will beat him.
Ethan (Thoughts): I’ll burst Longinus and it’ll set me on my path to defeat all the Top Blading Legends!
Lui (Thoughts): This is the Snake Pit Blader I’ve heard about. If he can beat Free he must be Powerful.
Drone: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Lui/Ethan: Go, Shoot!!
(Lui pulls off an Extremely Powerful Shoot as Ethan pulls off a Powerful Eclipse Shoot)
Lui: Rip it into shreds, Longinus!!
Ethan: Requiem Impulse!!
(Longinus continuously rams into Erebus as Erebus blocks all of Longinus’ attacks)
Adrian: Erebus has a Powerful Defense. It can even stand up to Longinus’ Crazy Attack Power.
Austin: How are we supposed to break through a defense that Powerful?
Lui: Show them a Nightmare!!
(Longinus speeds up and goes up the Humongous Ramp, Longinus crashes down and aims straight for Erebus)
Ethan: *Gasps*
Lui: Guilty Upper!!
(Longinus slams into Erebus as it slashes it upwards, Erebus gets sent flying out of the stadium)
Drone: It’s Guilty Longinus with an Over Finish! Lui Shirasagijo claims 1 Point!!
Austin: That Upper Attack was Amazing!
Lui: *Laughs* You didn’t Burst. You’re hanging in there! Now give me a good match and keep me amused!!
Drone: Second Battle!!
Ethan: Erebus will crush Longinus. You’re going to be taken down!
Lui: Guilty Longinus is unbeatable!
Bell: *Laughs* Are you sure, Lui?
Lui: Grr!!
Hyuga: Lui’s really strong. Especially with his Guilty Upper move.
Hikaru: Yeah. It swept up from below and sent Erebus flying out of the stadium.
Drone: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Lui/Ethan: Go, Shoot!!
(Ethan pulls off a Powerful Eclipse Shoot as Lui pulls off an Extremely Powerful Shoot)
Ethan: Requiem Guard!!
Lui: Blast ‘em into bits! Longinus!!
(Longinus rams into Erebus with a Powerful Barrage of strikes, Erebus blocks the attacks as Longinus continues to attack)
Aiga: Longinus has Explosive Attack Power but Erebus has Explosive Attack Power and amazing defenses. Erebus has the Upper Hand.
Lui: Guilty Smash!!
(Longinus slams Erebus down into the ground sending Erebus flying into the air)
Austin: It attacked!
Ethan: *Roars* Erebus!!
(Ethan’s Blaze surrounds him and Erebus as Erebus’ Avatar blazes out of the Bey)
Ethan: True Requiem Slash!!
(Erebus crashes down on Longinus sending it flying into the air, Longinus gets sent flying out of the stadium)
Lui: *Gasps*
Drone: It’s Requiem Erebus with an Over Finish! Ethan Gilten claims 1 Point!!
Lui: *Laughs* You actually managed to get a Point off me! Like it’ll happen again!!
Hikaru: So he’s actually serious about winning this.
Hyuga: Is he actually going to break Longinus?
Aiga: I’m afraid so.
Bell: So he’s planning on breaking Longinus.
Drone: Third Battle!!
Lui: I’ll crush Erebus and blast it into bits. Just watch!
(Lui puts Longinus in High Mode as Ethan’s Blaze surrounds him Brightly as his Eyes Glow)
Possessed Ethan: *Roars* Longinus will die!!
Austin (Thoughts): He reminds me of Adrian.
Drone: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Lui/Ethan: Go, Shoot!!
(Lui pulls off an Extremely Powerful Shoot as Ethan pulls off a Powerful Eclipse Shoot)
Lui: Bust ‘em up! Guilty Upper!!
Ethan: Fend them off, Requiem Guard!!
(Longinus rams into Erebus sending it flying high into the air, Erebus lands on the Humongous Slope and starts crashing down)
Hikaru: Longinus attacked!!
Ethan: Burst them, Requiem Bound Slash!!
(Erebus slashes at Longinus with its Bound Blade causing Longinus to slam into the wall and lose spin, Longinus leans on the Destroy Driver and picks up speed as it aims for Erebus)
Bell: Burst it, Longinus!
Lui: End this, Guilty Smash!!
(Longinus and Erebus start clashing wildly causing a huge eruption of Power, Erebus pushes Longinus into the wall and starts crushing it)
All: *Gasps*
Shu: He’s trying to destroy Longinus!
Ethan: Requiem Press!!!
(Longinus gets crushed into the as Erebus glows brightly, Longinus starts cracking as it bursts instantly)
Lui: No– No way!!
All: Seriously?!
(Longinus continues to crack as it shatters into fragments right in front of Lui as he falls to his knees)
Shu: So he actually broke Longinus.
Ethan: *Roars* I defeated you!!
Bell: Longinus has fallen.
Lui: Longinus…
(Ethan’s Blaze surrounds him brightly as Shu’s Scar starts glowing purple)
Shu: *Gasps*
Valt: So this is what he thinks about Blading.
Ethan: Ha! Lui Shirasagijo has been overthrown!
Adrian (Thoughts): So this is the True Power of the Snake Pit. I don’t like it one bit.
Find the Percy Jackson Reference for a Prize (The Prize is a Good Job from UnseenBurst)
RE: Beyblade Burst Yin Yang/Mystic Clash (Character Contest) - LJ-Blader - Nov. 15, 2021
Thalia: Someone’s angry.
It is beautiful!
RE: Beyblade Burst Yin Yang/Mystic Clash (Character Contest) - UnseenBurst - Nov. 15, 2021
(Nov. 15, 2021 12:56 AM)LJ-Blader Wrote: Thalia: Someone’s angry.
It is beautiful!
You win your award! Good Job, LJ-Blader. It was a reference to Thalia being Zeus' daughter in the Percy Jackson Series
RE: Beyblade Burst Yin Yang/Mystic Clash (Character Contest) - GenesisBlader - Nov. 15, 2021
(Nov. 15, 2021 12:58 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: (Nov. 15, 2021 12:56 AM)LJ-Blader Wrote: Thalia: Someone’s angry.
It is beautiful!
You win your award! Good Job, LJ-Blader. It was a reference to Thalia being Zeus' daughter in the Percy Jackson Series oh yeah the one that was a tree in the first book on camp half-blood
RE: Beyblade Burst Yin Yang/Mystic Clash (Character Contest) - CelBeyBlade - Nov. 17, 2021
(Nov. 14, 2021 10:02 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: My entry is here, if you can't choose between mine and CelBeyBlade's entry (a very good entry btw). I'd recommend giving him the priority. It is a giant entry, prob the biggest I've ever done, so if it crashes your device's chrome, try clicking to reply to it and read it there, that way it doesn't crash for some reason.
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Name: Helen Bunker
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Age: 14
Gender: Female
Height: 1,74m
Birthday: 15th May
Occupation: Blader (and student ig)
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Physical appearance: Red wavy hair; brown eyes; glasses (when not using contact lenses); Sleeve-less white shirt under a shoulder-less multicolored (red to yellow) sweater; brown “bush pants” (type of pants); faded golden sneakers; A yellow rubber wristband with “Oikos” written on it in Crayola font.
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Personality – Psychology: Constantly fantasizes and dislikes abstraction.
Self-discipline: Can’t say no and keeps personal opinions secret.
Lifestyle: Bound by the book, optimistic and non-rebellious
Social attitude: Dislikes being alone, Bring out the best in others and Cooperative
Honesty and Honor: Reliable and Faithful
Emotional Capacity: Caring and Sensitive
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Character trivia/facts (do whatever you want with them):
* Helen is the modern version of Helene, which means “torch. As for Bunker, it means “Good heart”.
* She puts the others over herself, that’s because she fears being a bad friend or letting them down.
* She has a pretty big family: father, mother, 2 brothers (one is 17 y/o and the other 9 y/o), 1 sister (very young, 5 years or so) and mother-side cousins (2 cousins, one 12 and the other 8) with their parents (on the “same house”, it is more like 2 houses in one). Her older cousin and younger brother are also bladers.
* Call her Ginger without her consent and your dynasty is over (half joking, she is pacifist after all, but don’t call her ginger)
* She is a pacifist, very weird for a blader right? Her battle strategies normally involve surviving or the opponent screwing up.
* She values her family a lot.
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Beyblade(s): Scorch Hestia Heart Campfire -4
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Parts – Scorch: A Left spin, stamina type DB Blade. The contact point segment is a perfectly, smooth circular shape that is sloped downwards. It was made to not be affected by any attack, but also not attack. It also has 4 metal segments above the blade that align with the armor.
Design: The smooth blade is translucent and has mixed colors from red to yellow, like marbles, to simulate the different colors of normal fire. On the inside part of the blade, it is an opaque faded gold color, to symbolize ichor, the ancient gods blood.
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Hestia: A left spin DB Core, it is opaque faded gold color. It features a woman face (Golden eyes and pomegranate-color (the mini fruits at the inside) lines to make the outline of head and the body) in one corner with a white head veil looking to her hand, which has the same colors as the blade (vertical avatar format). Its motif is the Greek goddess of hearth and family, Hestia.
Teeth position: 3 medium teeth (Trivia: They represent the family, the family's property, and the house (Oikos). Which the motif is strongly connected to)
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Heart: A DB Disc. It features 4 main weight points evenly distributed that, when clicked once, align perfectly with the armor weight and the blade’s metal. Its weight is centered outward. This disc has Giga-like LAD.
Design: The 4 points have a square shape and are connected by a metal ring. Its color is faded gold.
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Campfire: A Stamina type driver. It features a rounded low-angled cone tip with a plate, similar to Rise, that free spins and is located a little bit higher in comparison to Rise. It has great same spin and opposite spin stamina but can be knocked off balance quite easily with its conical tip. It is a very stationary tip.
Colors: Brown with the plate opaque white.
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4: A DB Armor. It features 4 main weight points evenly distributed.
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Beyblade trivia/facts (again, do whatever you like):
* Scorch, as aforementioned, is completely smooth. This is because of Helen’s pacifist nature (this also makes spin stealing not work, even rubber has a hard time spin stealing or slow-mo bursting it). It is called Scorch because when a bey attacks it, Hestia deflects the hit and can potentially destabilize the opponent. This also makes the bey unlikeable to burst.
* The Campfire driver is called campfire because of its stationary nature.
* Hestia’s only weakness is destabilization and to do so you need to smash your bey against it, not slap it on the side. If you manage it, you can hit it from above while it doesn’t stabilize back, this is when you can potentially burst it. It will also lose more stamina while destabilized. (Also maybe a stamina battle, but only if you have top tier LAD)
* It is (from my knowledge) the first Hestia bey ever made.
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Launching Style(s): The initial launching position is your standard position. Right hand on the string.
3, 2, 1 – It stays the same as a normal launch, but a little closer to the body
Go shoot – The blader quickly thrusts her left arm forward while pulling the string. This makes the bey land further ahead on the arena and take the center quicker.
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Special moves:
Scorching fire – when used, the blade glows slightly and deflect hits, destabilizing the opponents while not suffering any recoil. (Active ability, do not think this special move is deflecting the hits, actually it only makes the destabilizing part. Deflecting is on the bey's nature)
Weakness: Smashing your bey directly into it, this may be risky but it’s the way. Otherwise the attack has no effect (you can also hit it on the disc, not recommended since it can hurt you more than Hestia)
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Burning drift – to be used, the bey has to get pushed by the opponent. When used, the bey leans on its driver and changes the movement route, dodging an upcoming attack or a KO.
Weakness: It isn’t fully controllable, since it depends on how the bey destabilizes to lean on the driver and do the desirable action. To put it simple, it is not totally reliable because of medium inconsistency, although that inconsistency might help evade attacks. (Active/Passive ability, doesn't need to yell the name but you can to activate it)
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Heart aura (lame name, Helen thinks so too but she couldn’t come up with a better name): To be used, the bey has to click once. When used, all the 4 points of weight align, giving it master balance and better stabilizing abilities. (Passive ability, you don’t need to yell its name to activate)
Weakness: It only works when Hestia clicks once, so only for the period that it has -1 click is when it is active, neither before nor after that point. So it can either last for the whole round or never activate, pure inconsistency
Thanks
RE: Beyblade Burst Yin Yang/Mystic Clash (Character Contest) - UnseenBurst - Nov. 17, 2021
Sorry Guys I'm just really busy and I need to announce the Winners now. I apologize.
1st Place SpeedySuomi
2nd @"Hollowmind8"
3rd: LJ-Blader
Thank you all for participating I'll have the next Arc's Chapters up soon.
Mystical Boldness Arc 2 Episodes
11) The Flying Dynamite Battle Tour
12) Tremor at Beigoma Academy, Pierce Vs. Valt!
13) The Flaming Salsa, Magma Ifrit
14) The Unseen Shogun, Vagabond Yamato!
15) Crimson Clash, Pierce Vs. Rashad!
16) The Final Stretch, Team Relay!
17) The Hyper Crimson God, Astral Spriggan!
18) The Greek Olympian's Quest Against the Dragon!
19) Battle of the Crimson Beys, Spriggan Vs. Valkyrie!
20) The Ultra Double Tag Battles!
21) The Volcanic Eruption, Magma Smash!
22) The 8 Headed Dragon, Guilty Longinus!
23) The Flamming Hot Salsa Vs. The Raging Dragon's Strike!
24) The Perfect Hero, Perfect Gear Perseus!
25) The Jumping Valkyrie Vs. The Metal Longinus!
26) Basara's Challenge, Facing Longinus!
27) Saving The Demon King!
28) The Strategic Sky Battle, The Supreme King Vs. The Olympian Hero
RE: Beyblade Burst Yin Yang/Mystic Clash (Character Contest) - SpeedySuomi - Nov. 18, 2021
(Nov. 17, 2021 4:12 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Sorry Guys I'm just really busy and I need to announce the Winners now. I apologize.
1st Place SpeedySuomi
2nd @"Hollowmind8"
3rd: LJ-Blader
Thank you all for participating I'll have the next Arc's Chapters up soon.
Mystical Boldness Arc 2 Episodes
11) The Flying Dynamite Battle Tour
12) Tremor at Beigoma Academy, Pierce Vs. Valt!
13) The Flaming Salsa, Magma Ifrit
14) The Unseen Shogun, Vagabond Yamato!
15) Crimson Clash, Pierce Vs. Rashad!
16) The Final Stretch, Team Relay!
17) The Hyper Crimson God, Astral Spriggan!
18) The Greek Olympian's Quest Against the Dragon!
19) Battle of the Crimson Beys, Spriggan Vs. Valkyrie!
20) The Ultra Double Tag Battles!
21) The Volcanic Eruption, Magma Smash!
22) The 8 Headed Dragon, Guilty Longinus!
23) The Flamming Hot Salsa Vs. The Raging Dragon's Strike!
24) The Perfect Hero, Perfect Gear Perseus!
25) The Jumping Valkyrie Vs. The Metal Longinus!
26) Basara's Challenge, Facing Longinus!
27) Saving The Demon King!
28) The Strategic Sky Battle, The Supreme King Vs. The Olympian Hero
Alright, P1! Looking forward to this!
RE: Beyblade Burst Yin Yang/Mystic Clash (Character Contest) - UnseenBurst - Nov. 19, 2021
Next Series (After Yin Yang) Preview!
Me: Listen Bladers of the World! I Dax Akagami will destroy all your Sparking Beys!
(My Bey would speed up and slam into First Solomon as First Solomon starts wobbling)
???: *Gasps*
Me: Me and my Bey, Barberic Deimos will Destroy The Blading Legends!!
(First Uranus would get pummeled with Attacks as it barely stands, Deimos starts clashing with it wildly)
Me: Get ready to be crushed because I don't hold back!!
(First Solomon busts instantly as Deimos speeds around the stadium and carves a Cursive D on the stadium)
Me: You're shatter next time on Beyblade Burst Twilight Spark
3! 2! 1! Go, Shoot!!
Deimos: *Roars*
this doesn't relate to Yin Yang in any way. It's a Sparking OC
RE: Beyblade Burst Yin Yang/Mystic Clash (Character Contest) - SpeedySuomi - Nov. 19, 2021
A cursive letter D? Damn, this should be interesting.
RE: Beyblade Burst Yin Yang/Mystic Clash (Character Contest) - UnseenBurst - Nov. 19, 2021
I just came up with the Ultimate name for the series! (I know that was quick but I did some thinking) Twilight Spark! what do you think?
RE: Beyblade Burst Yin Yang/Mystic Clash (Character Contest) - GenesisBlader - Nov. 19, 2021
(Nov. 19, 2021 1:10 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: I just came up with the Ultimate name for the series! (I know that was quick but I did some thinking) Twilight Spark! what do you think?
sounds good to me lol 😞👌
RE: Beyblade Burst Yin Yang/Mystic Clash - UnseenBurst - Nov. 19, 2021
Mystical Boldness Episode 12: The Flying Dynamite Battle Tour: https://www.wattpad.com/1154469632-beyblade-burst-db-mystical-boldness-episode-12-the
SpeedySuomi LegendJustice GenesisBlader LJ-Blader GhostFox Kiryu Kazuma
I'd like your thoughts on The Dynamite Battle Tour so far. Sorry this took so long. Also this weekend will purely be Mystic Clash, I might multitask and be able to drop in some Episodes of Mystical Boldness.
RE: Beyblade Burst Yin Yang/Mystic Clash - SpeedySuomi - Nov. 19, 2021
(Nov. 19, 2021 3:39 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Mystical Boldness Episode 12: The Flying Dynamite Battle Tour: https://www.wattpad.com/1154469632-beyblade-burst-db-mystical-boldness-episode-12-the
SpeedySuomi LegendJustice GenesisBlader LJ-Blader GhostFox Kiryu Kazuma
I'd like your thoughts on The Dynamite Battle Tour so far. Sorry this took so long. Also this weekend will purely be Mystic Clash, I might multitask and be able to drop in some Episodes of Mystical Boldness.
Huh, this is pretty nice. I'm digging the interactions with the characters, especially with Rashad and Ilya, it gives them a good amount of character which I like. As for the battles, they're surprisingly short, to say the least, and Valt just pulled up with TSS all of a sudden, shouldn't he be at least using Savior Slash first? The battles feel sorta rushed, but other than that, I'll give it a good 7.8/10. Not too bad, not too great either.
RE: Beyblade Burst Yin Yang/Mystic Clash - UnseenBurst - Nov. 19, 2021
(Nov. 19, 2021 4:12 AM)SpeedySuomi Wrote: (Nov. 19, 2021 3:39 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Mystical Boldness Episode 12: The Flying Dynamite Battle Tour: https://www.wattpad.com/1154469632-beyblade-burst-db-mystical-boldness-episode-12-the
SpeedySuomi LegendJustice GenesisBlader LJ-Blader GhostFox Kiryu Kazuma
I'd like your thoughts on The Dynamite Battle Tour so far. Sorry this took so long. Also this weekend will purely be Mystic Clash, I might multitask and be able to drop in some Episodes of Mystical Boldness.
Huh, this is pretty nice. I'm digging the interactions with the characters, especially with Rashad and Ilya, it gives them a good amount of character which I like. As for the battles, they're surprisingly short, to say the least, and Valt just pulled up with TSS all of a sudden, shouldn't he be at least using Savior Slash first? The battles feel sorta rushed, but other than that, I'll give it a good 7.8/10. Not too bad, not too great either.
Thanks for the Honest Review Watch out Hollowmind this guy's taking your job (I'm kidding) would you like to be notified when I post a Chapter or would you only like to be notified when a Mystical Boldness Episode comes out. Or none is fine with me your choice
RE: Beyblade Burst Yin Yang/Mystic Clash - CelBeyBlade - Nov. 19, 2021
I lost
Sad
Y i lost
im sad please symphatize
RE: Beyblade Burst Yin Yang/Mystic Clash - SpeedySuomi - Nov. 19, 2021
(Nov. 19, 2021 5:36 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: (Nov. 19, 2021 4:12 AM)SpeedySuomi Wrote: Huh, this is pretty nice. I'm digging the interactions with the characters, especially with Rashad and Ilya, it gives them a good amount of character which I like. As for the battles, they're surprisingly short, to say the least, and Valt just pulled up with TSS all of a sudden, shouldn't he be at least using Savior Slash first? The battles feel sorta rushed, but other than that, I'll give it a good 7.8/10. Not too bad, not too great either.
Thanks for the Honest Review Watch out Hollowmind this guy's taking your job (I'm kidding) would you like to be notified when I post a Chapter or would you only like to be notified when a Mystical Boldness Episode comes out. Or none is fine with me your choice
You can notify me if you like, I guess.
RE: Beyblade Burst Yin Yang/Mystic Clash - CelBeyBlade - Nov. 20, 2021
(Nov. 19, 2021 8:55 AM)CelBeyBlade Wrote: I lost
Sad
Y i lost
im sad please symphatize
Why man im sad
RE: Beyblade Burst Yin Yang/Mystic Clash - UnseenBurst - Nov. 20, 2021
Episode 13: Tremor at Beigoma Academy, Valkyrie Vs. Perseus!: https://www.wattpad.com/1156221635-beyblade-burst-db-mystical-boldness-episode-13
SpeedySuomi LJ-Blader GenesisBlader Kiryu Kazuma Lucha Burst GhostFox LegendJustice
Now I need to know. Was this chapter better than the last one? Please give me your thoughts and I promise on Saturday, Sunday, and Wenseday I'll only work on Mystic Clash and I should get at least 2 or 3 Chapters done.
RE: Beyblade Burst Yin Yang/Mystic Clash - SpeedySuomi - Nov. 20, 2021
(Nov. 20, 2021 3:55 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Episode 13: Tremor at Beigoma Academy, Valkyrie Vs. Perseus!: https://www.wattpad.com/1156221635-beyblade-burst-db-mystical-boldness-episode-13
SpeedySuomi LJ-Blader GenesisBlader Kiryu Kazuma Lucha Burst GhostFox LegendJustice
Now I need to know. Was this chapter better than the last one? Please give me your thoughts and I promise on Saturday, Sunday, and Wenseday I'll only work on Mystic Clash and I should get at least 2 or 3 Chapters done.
Same rating as last time, 7.8/10. But I must admit, I like the battles here too, Pierce didn't just show off his power right off the bat with the upgrade. However, the battles had a big problem too... Valt got curbstomped immediately on the next round, you should've at least given them a good, long battle. It's as if the battles are constrained by the 10-minute runtime of the real anime. You're writing a fanfic, so try and maximize the battles' runtime to give them great intensity even if they have two rounds. Other than that, the chapter was still good and Yuuki's intro was spot-on, he just gets straight to the point which I like.
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