RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - Staron - Jul. 10, 2021
I wonder if it's allowed, but will it be similar formula to a specific series of Beyblade or a new idea?
For example, in Beyblade Burst, main character faces antagonist, main character loses.
Evolution/God, beats main rival who is also the villain.
Turbo/ChoZ, character is cocky but overcomes that cockiness to become king of Beyblade and so on and so forth.
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - Kiryu Kazuma - Jul. 10, 2021
(Jul. 10, 2021 5:14 PM)Staron Wrote: I wonder if it's allowed, but will it be similar formula to a specific series of Beyblade or a new idea?
For example, in Beyblade Burst, main character faces antagonist, main character loses.
Evolution/God, beats main rival who is also the villain.
Turbo/ChoZ, character is cocky but overcomes that cockiness to become king of Beyblade and so on and so forth. For now the plot looks like Evolution.
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - UnseenBurst - Jul. 10, 2021
Chapter 31 is out @"Valt Aoi01" your character is in here LJ is not going to be happy
Beyblade Burst Dynachi
Chapter 30
Run From The Shadows!! Sythe Doomsizer!!
Colton: Hit it Cognite!!
Adam: Take the center!!
(Ashindra takes the center, Cognite hits Ashindra with a barrage of attacks)
Hanami: Looks like Colton decided to go with Mega Attack Mode!!
Adam: Samurai Guard!!
Hanami: Ashindra blocks all of Cognite’s attacks!!
Colton: Don’t let up!! Keep attacking!!
(Cognite starts hitting Ashindra harder, Ashindra gets sent flying up the stadium slope)
Adam: Atomic Counter!!
(Ashindra comes crashing down, Cognite gets sent flying out of the stadium)
Referee: It’s Samurai Ashindra with a ring-out finish!! Adam Kusaba claims 1 point!!
Hanami: And Ashindra crashes down with a strong counterattack!!
Adam: My defense is second to none!!
Colton: All I’ve gotta do is attack more!!
(Colton gets ready to jump)
Adam: Do all the fancy tricks you want! I’ll send you flying!!
Referee: Second battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
(Colton jumps high up in the sky)
Adam: *Gasps*
Adam/Colton: Let it rip!!
(Colton does dives down forward and launches his bey, Cognite jumps high in the air)
Hanami: Colton just pulled off an amazing launch!!
(Cognite jumps on Ashindra, Ashindra starts wobbling)
Colton: Attack!!
(Cognite starts hitting Ashindra with a strong barrage of attacks)
Hanami: Cognite’s amped its attack power!!
Adam: Ashindra!!
(Adam’s Resonance Aura flares up Ashindra blazes out of the bey)
Adam: Samurai Guard!!
(Ashindra blocks all of Congite’s attacks, Ashindra redirects Cognite into the wall, Cognite gets sent flying high in the air)
Hanami: Ashindra blocks Congite’s attacks and sends it flying in the air!!
Colton: Cognite!!
(Colton’s Resonance Aura flares up Cognite blazes out of the bey)
Colton: Hyper Spinning Moon Dive!!
(Cognite crashes down on Ashindra, Ashindra bursts)
Adam: *Gasps*
Referee: It’s Converse Cognite with a burst finish!! The winner is Colton Ackerman!
Hanami: Cognite counterstrikes!! It flies in the air and dive bombs on Ashindra!!
Colton: Awesome!!
(Adam picks up his bey’s parts and leaves)
Colton: Huh?
~In Adam’s Locker Room~
Adam: I lost.
(A tear drips down on Ashindra, Colton walks in, Adam quickly wipes his face)
Adam: So, nice battle!
Colton: I know you're upset.
Adam: Looks like you caught me.
Colton: I know how you feel, my dad told me how he felt when he failed to become a world-ranked blader. But he didn’t mind.
Adam: Why?
Colton: Because he knew Valt was going to win it for him like we’re going to win it for you!
Adam: Thanks, you better win it for me!
Colton: Don’t worry, I will!
(Me and Brooke run in)
Me: Guys, Ryuji’s match is starting!!
Adam: Don’t worry, we’re coming!!
~In The Main Arena~
Hanami: This is our last match of this tournament!! It’s Drake Kurogami Vs Ryuji Kiyama!! This match should be interesting!!
Ryuji: Are you ready to lose?
(Drake stays quiet)
Ryuji: Oh? Someone’s scared they're going to lose!?
Drake: You’re going to eat those words!! Scythe Doomsizer will end you!!!
Ryuji: *Gasps*
Hanami: Wow, sparks are flying and we haven’t even launched the beys yet!!
Referee: Inspect your opponents’ bey!!
Ryuji (Thoughts): Sythe Doomsizer, a Clockwise spinning attack type! It has a sharp shape for an attack-type bey, and it has a huge metal scythe that can deal loads of damage, but it’s not the most balanced bey either, its setup is so off-balanced, it kills stamina but makes great use of attack!! I can beat this thing!!
(Drake puts Doomsizer’s weight from the bottom to the top)
Referee: First battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Ryuji/Drake: Let it rip!!
(Doomsizer starts picking up speed and sends Roktavor flying)
Ryuji: *Gasps* Hang in there!!
Hanami: Doomsizer starts with a vicious attack from the start!!
Drake: Hunt Launch!!
Ryuji: Get outta there, Roktavor!!
(Roktavor speeds around the stadium but Doomsizer stays close behind it)
Drake: Hunt Launch won’t let go until it takes a blow!
Ryuji: *Gasps*
Hanami: Unbelievable!! Drake’s Hunt Launch is chasing Roktavor down!!
(Doomsizer sends Roktavor flying up in the air)
Ryuji: *Gasps*
Hanami: Doomsizer caught up to its foe and sends it flying!!
(Roktavor lands back in the center)
Ryuji: Berserker Wing Tornado!!
(Roktavor starts wobbling)
Ryuji: *Gasps*
Drake: So you finally caught on.
Ryuji: What did you do?!
Drake: This whole time I was draining your stamina by attacking!
Ryuji: Are you kidding?!
Drake: Sythe Strike!!
(Doomsizer speeds into Roktavor, Roktavor gets sent flying out of the stadium)
Ryuji: *Gasps*
Referee: It’s Scythe Doomsizer with a ring-out finish!! Drake Kurogami claims 1 point!!
(Drake flips his hair)
Hanami: Wow, Drake put Roktavor at a disadvantage by draining its stamina!!
Ryuji: How did you do that?!
Drake: Relax, I wasn’t cheating, I was just proving you’re a bad blader!
Ryuji: *Gasps* Take that back!!
Drake: Why should I take the truth back?
Ryuji: You’re so going down!!
Referee: Second battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Ryuji/Drake: Let it rip!!
(Roktavor aims for the center, Doomsizer comes in fast and sends it flying)
Hanami: Roktavor already sent flying up in the air!!
Ryuji: Roktavor!!
(Ryuji’s Resonance Aura flares up Roktavor blazes out of the bey)
Ryuji: Ultra Berserker Zone!!
(Doomsizer tries attacking but Roktavor deflects the attack)
Hanami: Now it’s Ryuji who’s dominating!!
Drake: Doomsizer!!
(Drake’s Resonance Aura flares up Doomsizer blazes out of the bey)
Drake: Scythe Disaster!!
(Doomsizer slams into Roktavor with Force, Roktavor bursts)
Ryuji: No!!
Referee: It’s Scythe Doomsizer with a burst finish!! Drake Kurogami wins!!
Hanami: Unfortunately, Ryuji Kiyama is not going to the world stage, but Drake Kurogami is!!
Drake: Looks like I won’t be seeing you for a while.
(Drake walks away)
Me: Poor Ryuji.
Colton: He really tried his best.
~In The Hallway~
Ryuji: Grr!!
(Ryuji starts punching and kicking the wall)
Ryuji: I was supposed to become a famous blader!!
Me: Are you ok?
Ryuji: No, Rantaro and Ranjiro became famous bladers, but I didn’t.
Me: You’re still a world-ranked blader!
Ryuji: *Gasps*
Me: You’re strong and that’s all you need to know! Who cares if the world doesn't know it! You’ll prove it!!
(Ryuji smiles)
Ryuji: Do you have to always end things sappy!
Me: I’ve been with Valt way too long!!
(My and Ryuji start laughing together)
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - GenesisBlader - Jul. 10, 2021
(Jul. 10, 2021 6:25 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 31 is out @"Valt Aoi01" your character is in here LJ is not going to be happy
Beyblade Burst Dynachi
Chapter 30
Run From The Shadows!! Sythe Doomsizer!!
Colton: Hit it Cognite!!
Adam: Take the center!!
(Ashindra takes the center, Cognite hits Ashindra with a barrage of attacks)
Hanami: Looks like Colton decided to go with Mega Attack Mode!!
Adam: Samurai Guard!!
Hanami: Ashindra blocks all of Cognite’s attacks!!
Colton: Don’t let up!! Keep attacking!!
(Cognite starts hitting Ashindra harder, Ashindra gets sent flying up the stadium slope)
Adam: Atomic Counter!!
(Ashindra comes crashing down, Cognite gets sent flying out of the stadium)
Referee: It’s Samurai Ashindra with a ring-out finish!! Adam Kusaba claims 1 point!!
Hanami: And Ashindra crashes down with a strong counterattack!!
Adam: My defense is second to none!!
Colton: All I’ve gotta do is attack more!!
(Colton gets ready to jump)
Adam: Do all the fancy tricks you want! I’ll send you flying!!
Referee: Second battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
(Colton jumps high up in the sky)
Adam: *Gasps*
Adam/Colton: Let it rip!!
(Colton does dives down forward and launches his bey, Cognite jumps high in the air)
Hanami: Colton just pulled off an amazing launch!!
(Cognite jumps on Ashindra, Ashindra starts wobbling)
Colton: Attack!!
(Cognite starts hitting Ashindra with a strong barrage of attacks)
Hanami: Cognite’s amped its attack power!!
Adam: Ashindra!!
(Adam’s Resonance Aura flares up Ashindra blazes out of the bey)
Adam: Samurai Guard!!
(Ashindra blocks all of Congite’s attacks, Ashindra redirects Cognite into the wall, Cognite gets sent flying high in the air)
Hanami: Ashindra blocks Congite’s attacks and sends it flying in the air!!
Colton: Cognite!!
(Colton’s Resonance Aura flares up Cognite blazes out of the bey)
Colton: Hyper Spinning Moon Dive!!
(Cognite crashes down on Ashindra, Ashindra bursts)
Adam: *Gasps*
Referee: It’s Converse Cognite with a burst finish!! The winner is Colton Ackerman!
Hanami: Cognite counterstrikes!! It flies in the air and dive bombs on Ashindra!!
Colton: Awesome!!
(Adam picks up his bey’s parts and leaves)
Colton: Huh?
~In Adam’s Locker Room~
Adam: I lost.
(A tear drips down on Ashindra, Colton walks in, Adam quickly wipes his face)
Adam: So, nice battle!
Colton: I know you're upset.
Adam: Looks like you caught me.
Colton: I know how you feel, my dad told me how he felt when he failed to become a world-ranked blader. But he didn’t mind.
Adam: Why?
Colton: Because he knew Valt was going to win it for him like we’re going to win it for you!
Adam: Thanks, you better win it for me!
Colton: Don’t worry, I will!
(Me and Brooke run in)
Me: Guys, Ryuji’s match is starting!!
Adam: Don’t worry, we’re coming!!
~In The Main Arena~
Hanami: This is our last match of this tournament!! It’s Drake Kurogami Vs Ryuji Kiyama!! This match should be interesting!!
Ryuji: Are you ready to lose?
(Drake stays quiet)
Ryuji: Oh? Someone’s scared they're going to lose!?
Drake: You’re going to eat those words!! Scythe Doomsizer will end you!!!
Ryuji: *Gasps*
Hanami: Wow, sparks are flying and we haven’t even launched the beys yet!!
Referee: Inspect your opponents’ bey!!
Ryuji (Thoughts): Sythe Doomsizer, a Clockwise spinning attack type! It has a sharp shape for an attack-type bey, and it has a huge metal scythe that can deal loads of damage, but it’s not the most balanced bey either, its setup is so off-balanced, it kills stamina but makes great use of attack!! I can beat this thing!!
(Drake puts Doomsizer’s weight from the bottom to the top)
Referee: First battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Ryuji/Drake: Let it rip!!
(Doomsizer starts picking up speed and sends Roktavor flying)
Ryuji: *Gasps* Hang in there!!
Hanami: Doomsizer starts with a vicious attack from the start!!
Drake: Hunt Launch!!
Ryuji: Get outta there, Roktavor!!
(Roktavor speeds around the stadium but Doomsizer stays close behind it)
Drake: Hunt Launch won’t let go until it takes a blow!
Ryuji: *Gasps*
Hanami: Unbelievable!! Drake’s Hunt Launch is chasing Roktavor down!!
(Doomsizer sends Roktavor flying up in the air)
Ryuji: *Gasps*
Hanami: Doomsizer caught up to its foe and sends it flying!!
(Roktavor lands back in the center)
Ryuji: Berserker Wing Tornado!!
(Roktavor starts wobbling)
Ryuji: *Gasps*
Drake: So you finally caught on.
Ryuji: What did you do?!
Drake: This whole time I was draining your stamina by attacking!
Ryuji: Are you kidding?!
Drake: Sythe Strike!!
(Doomsizer speeds into Roktavor, Roktavor gets sent flying out of the stadium)
Ryuji: *Gasps*
Referee: It’s Scythe Doomsizer with a ring-out finish!! Drake Kurogami claims 1 point!!
(Drake flips his hair)
Hanami: Wow, Drake put Roktavor at a disadvantage by draining its stamina!!
Ryuji: How did you do that?!
Drake: Relax, I wasn’t cheating, I was just proving you’re a bad blader!
Ryuji: *Gasps* Take that back!!
Drake: Why should I take the truth back?
Ryuji: You’re so going down!!
Referee: Second battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Ryuji/Drake: Let it rip!!
(Roktavor aims for the center, Doomsizer comes in fast and sends it flying)
Hanami: Roktavor already sent flying up in the air!!
Ryuji: Roktavor!!
(Ryuji’s Resonance Aura flares up Roktavor blazes out of the bey)
Ryuji: Ultra Berserker Zone!!
(Doomsizer tries attacking but Roktavor deflects the attack)
Hanami: Now it’s Ryuji who’s dominating!!
Drake: Doomsizer!!
(Drake’s Resonance Aura flares up Doomsizer blazes out of the bey)
Drake: Scythe Disaster!!
(Doomsizer slams into Roktavor with Force, Roktavor bursts)
Ryuji: No!!
Referee: It’s Scythe Doomsizer with a burst finish!! Drake Kurogami wins!!
Hanami: Unfortunately, Ryuji Kiyama is not going to the world stage, but Drake Kurogami is!!
Drake: Looks like I won’t be seeing you for a while.
(Drake walks away)
Me: Poor Ryuji.
Colton: He really tried his best.
~In The Hallway~
Ryuji: Grr!!
(Ryuji starts punching and kicking the wall)
Ryuji: I was supposed to become a famous blader!!
Me: Are you ok?
Ryuji: No, Rantaro and Ranjiro became famous bladers, but I didn’t.
Me: You’re still a world-ranked blader!
Ryuji: *Gasps*
Me: You’re strong and that’s all you need to know! Who cares if the world doesn't know it! You’ll prove it!!
(Ryuji smiles)
Ryuji: Do you have to always end things sappy!
Me: I’ve been with Valt way too long!!
(My and Ryuji start laughing together)
uh huh yep my boi colton got the win in the bag uh huh
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - Staron - Jul. 10, 2021
There is one thing I wanna mention about Bushi, he takes pride in wins and losses because he doesn't wanna disappoint his dad.
So he would feel really bad when he loses.
And he has as much of a bond as most of the main characters of the metal saga of beys.
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - LegendJustice - Jul. 10, 2021
Nice chapter! But Colton won?!
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - UnseenBurst - Jul. 10, 2021
(Jul. 10, 2021 6:41 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Nice chapter! But Colton won?!
*Runs Away*
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - GenesisBlader - Jul. 10, 2021
(Jul. 10, 2021 6:48 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: (Jul. 10, 2021 6:41 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Nice chapter! But Colton won?!
*Runs Away*
lol
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - Kiryu Kazuma - Jul. 10, 2021
(Jul. 10, 2021 6:25 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 31 is out @"Valt Aoi01" your character is in here LJ is not going to be happy
Beyblade Burst Dynachi
Chapter 30
Run From The Shadows!! Sythe Doomsizer!!
Colton: Hit it Cognite!!
Adam: Take the center!!
(Ashindra takes the center, Cognite hits Ashindra with a barrage of attacks)
Hanami: Looks like Colton decided to go with Mega Attack Mode!!
Adam: Samurai Guard!!
Hanami: Ashindra blocks all of Cognite’s attacks!!
Colton: Don’t let up!! Keep attacking!!
(Cognite starts hitting Ashindra harder, Ashindra gets sent flying up the stadium slope)
Adam: Atomic Counter!!
(Ashindra comes crashing down, Cognite gets sent flying out of the stadium)
Referee: It’s Samurai Ashindra with a ring-out finish!! Adam Kusaba claims 1 point!!
Hanami: And Ashindra crashes down with a strong counterattack!!
Adam: My defense is second to none!!
Colton: All I’ve gotta do is attack more!!
(Colton gets ready to jump)
Adam: Do all the fancy tricks you want! I’ll send you flying!!
Referee: Second battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
(Colton jumps high up in the sky)
Adam: *Gasps*
Adam/Colton: Let it rip!!
(Colton does dives down forward and launches his bey, Cognite jumps high in the air)
Hanami: Colton just pulled off an amazing launch!!
(Cognite jumps on Ashindra, Ashindra starts wobbling)
Colton: Attack!!
(Cognite starts hitting Ashindra with a strong barrage of attacks)
Hanami: Cognite’s amped its attack power!!
Adam: Ashindra!!
(Adam’s Resonance Aura flares up Ashindra blazes out of the bey)
Adam: Samurai Guard!!
(Ashindra blocks all of Congite’s attacks, Ashindra redirects Cognite into the wall, Cognite gets sent flying high in the air)
Hanami: Ashindra blocks Congite’s attacks and sends it flying in the air!!
Colton: Cognite!!
(Colton’s Resonance Aura flares up Cognite blazes out of the bey)
Colton: Hyper Spinning Moon Dive!!
(Cognite crashes down on Ashindra, Ashindra bursts)
Adam: *Gasps*
Referee: It’s Converse Cognite with a burst finish!! The winner is Colton Ackerman!
Hanami: Cognite counterstrikes!! It flies in the air and dive bombs on Ashindra!!
Colton: Awesome!!
(Adam picks up his bey’s parts and leaves)
Colton: Huh?
~In Adam’s Locker Room~
Adam: I lost.
(A tear drips down on Ashindra, Colton walks in, Adam quickly wipes his face)
Adam: So, nice battle!
Colton: I know you're upset.
Adam: Looks like you caught me.
Colton: I know how you feel, my dad told me how he felt when he failed to become a world-ranked blader. But he didn’t mind.
Adam: Why?
Colton: Because he knew Valt was going to win it for him like we’re going to win it for you!
Adam: Thanks, you better win it for me!
Colton: Don’t worry, I will!
(Me and Brooke run in)
Me: Guys, Ryuji’s match is starting!!
Adam: Don’t worry, we’re coming!!
~In The Main Arena~
Hanami: This is our last match of this tournament!! It’s Drake Kurogami Vs Ryuji Kiyama!! This match should be interesting!!
Ryuji: Are you ready to lose?
(Drake stays quiet)
Ryuji: Oh? Someone’s scared they're going to lose!?
Drake: You’re going to eat those words!! Scythe Doomsizer will end you!!!
Ryuji: *Gasps*
Hanami: Wow, sparks are flying and we haven’t even launched the beys yet!!
Referee: Inspect your opponents’ bey!!
Ryuji (Thoughts): Sythe Doomsizer, a Clockwise spinning attack type! It has a sharp shape for an attack-type bey, and it has a huge metal scythe that can deal loads of damage, but it’s not the most balanced bey either, its setup is so off-balanced, it kills stamina but makes great use of attack!! I can beat this thing!!
(Drake puts Doomsizer’s weight from the bottom to the top)
Referee: First battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Ryuji/Drake: Let it rip!!
(Doomsizer starts picking up speed and sends Roktavor flying)
Ryuji: *Gasps* Hang in there!!
Hanami: Doomsizer starts with a vicious attack from the start!!
Drake: Hunt Launch!!
Ryuji: Get outta there, Roktavor!!
(Roktavor speeds around the stadium but Doomsizer stays close behind it)
Drake: Hunt Launch won’t let go until it takes a blow!
Ryuji: *Gasps*
Hanami: Unbelievable!! Drake’s Hunt Launch is chasing Roktavor down!!
(Doomsizer sends Roktavor flying up in the air)
Ryuji: *Gasps*
Hanami: Doomsizer caught up to its foe and sends it flying!!
(Roktavor lands back in the center)
Ryuji: Berserker Wing Tornado!!
(Roktavor starts wobbling)
Ryuji: *Gasps*
Drake: So you finally caught on.
Ryuji: What did you do?!
Drake: This whole time I was draining your stamina by attacking!
Ryuji: Are you kidding?!
Drake: Sythe Strike!!
(Doomsizer speeds into Roktavor, Roktavor gets sent flying out of the stadium)
Ryuji: *Gasps*
Referee: It’s Scythe Doomsizer with a ring-out finish!! Drake Kurogami claims 1 point!!
(Drake flips his hair)
Hanami: Wow, Drake put Roktavor at a disadvantage by draining its stamina!!
Ryuji: How did you do that?!
Drake: Relax, I wasn’t cheating, I was just proving you’re a bad blader!
Ryuji: *Gasps* Take that back!!
Drake: Why should I take the truth back?
Ryuji: You’re so going down!!
Referee: Second battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Ryuji/Drake: Let it rip!!
(Roktavor aims for the center, Doomsizer comes in fast and sends it flying)
Hanami: Roktavor already sent flying up in the air!!
Ryuji: Roktavor!!
(Ryuji’s Resonance Aura flares up Roktavor blazes out of the bey)
Ryuji: Ultra Berserker Zone!!
(Doomsizer tries attacking but Roktavor deflects the attack)
Hanami: Now it’s Ryuji who’s dominating!!
Drake: Doomsizer!!
(Drake’s Resonance Aura flares up Doomsizer blazes out of the bey)
Drake: Scythe Disaster!!
(Doomsizer slams into Roktavor with Force, Roktavor bursts)
Ryuji: No!!
Referee: It’s Scythe Doomsizer with a burst finish!! Drake Kurogami wins!!
Hanami: Unfortunately, Ryuji Kiyama is not going to the world stage, but Drake Kurogami is!!
Drake: Looks like I won’t be seeing you for a while.
(Drake walks away)
Me: Poor Ryuji.
Colton: He really tried his best.
~In The Hallway~
Ryuji: Grr!!
(Ryuji starts punching and kicking the wall)
Ryuji: I was supposed to become a famous blader!!
Me: Are you ok?
Ryuji: No, Rantaro and Ranjiro became famous bladers, but I didn’t.
Me: You’re still a world-ranked blader!
Ryuji: *Gasps*
Me: You’re strong and that’s all you need to know! Who cares if the world doesn't know it! You’ll prove it!!
(Ryuji smiles)
Ryuji: Do you have to always end things sappy!
Me: I’ve been with Valt way too long!!
(My and Ryuji start laughing together) Nice really liked this chapter!
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - LegendJustice - Jul. 10, 2021
(Jul. 10, 2021 6:48 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: (Jul. 10, 2021 6:41 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Nice chapter! But Colton won?!
*Runs Away*
Lol
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - Kiryu Kazuma - Jul. 10, 2021
(Jul. 10, 2021 6:48 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: (Jul. 10, 2021 6:41 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Nice chapter! But Colton won?!
*Runs Away*
How many bladers will there be in IWC?
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - UnseenBurst - Jul. 10, 2021
(Jul. 10, 2021 9:13 PM)Valt Aoi01 Wrote: (Jul. 10, 2021 6:48 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: *Runs Away*
How many bladers will there be in IWC?
12
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - Staron - Jul. 10, 2021
(Jul. 10, 2021 9:20 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: (Jul. 10, 2021 9:13 PM)Valt Aoi01 Wrote: How many bladers will there be in IWC?
12 Hope one of them is Bushi.
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - Kiryu Kazuma - Jul. 11, 2021
(Jul. 10, 2021 9:35 PM)Staron Wrote: (Jul. 10, 2021 9:20 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: 12 Hope one of them is Bushi.
8 bladers have been confimed.
Vladt
Colton
Brooke
Drake
Sebestian
Faza
Llyod
And that aiger's son(forgot his name)
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - Demon Belial - Jul. 11, 2021
(May. 21, 2021 4:17 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Hey Guys!!! I'm making this fanfic called Beyblade Burst Dynachi!!! Which will feature all of you!!! These are the rules to be in it!!! 1. You must fill out the registration it is short. 2. You cannot make a bey you need to use a Beyblade from S1-S7 3. You cannot have an antagonist Bey 4. Your character has to be related to the original owner of the bey. 5. You can only make new drivers and disks. 6. Have fun and tell me if you want any changes!!! These are the things you need for your registration. @Jjustice was the first register.
Name:
Bey Name:
Age:
Personality:
What you look like (Optional):
Bey Moves:
If you wanna be in say me and fill this out
@Jjustice can you please move your registration here thanks 
Name: Scar Karlisle
Beyblade: Vicious Satomb. The layer is free spinning with rubber to avoid damage and spin steal. Disc- Kinetic. This disc is just like the layer of kinetic satomb it has rollers. The driver: Loop metal. And the gear is R gear(Roller)
Age: 16
Personality: Same like Silas but he hates Silas for being so weak.(Silas is his father) His goal is same as his father to best Fafnir.
Bey moves: Vicious Wall. The rollers helps the bey for defence.
Whirl loop: same like cyclone loop. But loop is metal So it will make sparks in the stadium.
Kinetic Counter: The bey counters the attack and has a huge burst rate.
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - Hollowmind13 - Jul. 11, 2021
(Jul. 11, 2021 7:16 AM)Valt Aoi01 Wrote: (Jul. 10, 2021 9:35 PM)Staron Wrote: Hope one of them is Bushi.
8 bladers have been confimed.
Vlad- Valtryek
Colton- Cognite
Brooke- Belial (Belarix i think)
Drake- Doomscissor
Sebastian- Sprizen
Faza- Fafnir
Llyod- Luinor
Agnus - Achilles His name is Agnus.
It will end with Vlad vs Sebastian am I right?
(I edited the quoting, hope you don't mind)
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - Demon Belial - Jul. 11, 2021
(Jul. 11, 2021 10:18 AM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: (Jul. 11, 2021 7:16 AM)Valt Aoi01 Wrote: 8 bladers have been confimed.
Vlad- Valkyrie
Colton- Chronos
Brooke- Belial (Belarix i think)
Drake- Deathscyther
Sebastian- Spriggan
Faza- Fafnir
Llyod- Longinus
Agnus - Achilles His name is Agnus.
It will end with Vlad vs Sebastian am I right?
(I edited the quoting, hope you don't mind)
I guess Daniel and Xerneus will be there too. And if bushin and Scar(My character) compete in World Championships then it's perfectly 12
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - Kiryu Kazuma - Jul. 11, 2021
(Jul. 11, 2021 10:18 AM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: (Jul. 11, 2021 7:16 AM)Valt Aoi01 Wrote: 8 bladers have been confimed.
Vlad- Valtryek
Colton- Cognite
Brooke- Belial (Belarix i think)
Drake- Doomscissor
Sebastian- Sprizen
Faza- Fafnir
Llyod- Luinor
Agnus - Achilles His name is Agnus.
It will end with Vlad vs Sebastian am I right?
(I edited the quoting, hope you don't mind) I guess the top 4 will be Vlad,Sebastian,Faza and Agnus.
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - UnseenBurst - Jul. 11, 2021
1. Faza De La Hoya
2. Lloyd Shirosagi
3. Crimson Eye (Aka Sebastian Kurenai)
4. Jay Burns
5. Agnus Akabane
6. Daniel Koryu
7. Drake Kurogami
8. Bushi Kurogane
9. Vlad Aoi
10. Colton Ackerman
11. Brooke Dakokutien
12. Scar Karlisle
These are the rankings and participating bladers in the tourney
First Round Brooke and Vlad Vs Lloyd and Faza 2nd Match Jay and Colton Vs Bushi and Agnus 3rd Match Drake and Daniel Vs Scar and Crimson Eye
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - GenesisBlader - Jul. 11, 2021
(Jul. 11, 2021 4:53 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: 1. Faza De La Hoya
2. Lloyd Shirosagi
3. Crimson Eye (Aka Sebastian Kurenai)
4. Jay Burns
5. Agnus Akabane
6. Daniel Koryu
7. Drake Kurogami
8. Bushi Kurogane
9. Vlad Aoi
10. Colton Ackerman
11. Brooke Dakokutien
12. Scar Karlisle
These are the rankings and participating bladers in the tourney
First Round Brooke and Vlad Vs Lloyd and Faza 2nd Match Jay and Colton Vs Bushi and Agnus 3rd Match Drake and Daniel Vs Scar and Crimson Eye uh happened to xerxes shakadera
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - UnseenBurst - Jul. 11, 2021
(Jul. 11, 2021 5:19 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: (Jul. 11, 2021 4:53 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: 1. Faza De La Hoya
2. Lloyd Shirosagi
3. Crimson Eye (Aka Sebastian Kurenai)
4. Jay Burns
5. Agnus Akabane
6. Daniel Koryu
7. Drake Kurogami
8. Bushi Kurogane
9. Vlad Aoi
10. Colton Ackerman
11. Brooke Dakokutien
12. Scar Karlisle
These are the rankings and participating bladers in the tourney
First Round Brooke and Vlad Vs Lloyd and Faza 2nd Match Jay and Colton Vs Bushi and Agnus 3rd Match Drake and Daniel Vs Scar and Crimson Eye uh happened to xerxes shakadera
I didn't have space for him so I only included him in the Battleship arc same with Zafary
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - LegendJustice - Jul. 11, 2021
Yes Jay is back!,
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - Demon Belial - Jul. 12, 2021
(Jul. 11, 2021 5:25 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: (Jul. 11, 2021 5:19 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: uh happened to xerxes shakadera
I didn't have space for him so I only included him in the Battleship arc same with Zafary
Cool. Did not expected to team up with Crimson eye
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - UnseenBurst - Jul. 12, 2021
Chapter 31 is here!! The IWC's have officially started!!
Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu
Chapter 31
International World Championships!!!
Receptionist: Vlad Aoi, this will be your dorm!
(The Receptionist opens the door to my room)
Me: Awesome!
Receptionist: You have a stadium you can practice in and I TV where you can watch the matches from here!
Ryuji: So lucky!
Adam: We’ll get here one day buddy!
Receptionist: Brooke, let me show you to your room!
Brooke: I’ll catch you guys later!
(My TV flickers on)
Hanami (On TV): Hello all you world bladers!! Today we’ll kick off the beginning of the IWC’s!! The first 3 Rounds will be Tag Battles!
Adam: So, looks like you’ll have to battle with a partner!
Ryuji: But who?
Hanami: Our first tag team will be!! Brooke Dakukotein and Vlad Aoi!!
Me: I’m with Brooke?!
Adam: What luck?
Colton: Wonder who I’m going to be paired with!
Hanami: Our second tag team will be! Colton Ackerman and Jay Burns!!
Colton: Aw yeah! I’m with the star!!
Adam: Congrats bud!
Hanami: The rest will be! Scar Karslile and Crimson Eye! Bushi Kurogane and Agnus Akabane! Drake Kurogami and Daniel Koryu! Finally Lloyd Shirosgai and Faza De La Hoya!!
Ryuji: Lloyd and Faza have got to be the strongest tag team.
Me: We battled them in a simulator but still.
Hanami: The first battles will be! Brooke and Vlad Vs Faza and Lloyd!!
Me: Are you kidding?!
Colton: That’s bad.
Adam: You’ve got this bud!
Hanami: After that battle, it’ll be Jay and Colton Vs Bushi and Agnus!! And our final match will be Scar Karlisle and Crimson Eye Vs Drake Kurogami and Daniel Koryu!! I’ll see you there!
~In Brooke’s Dorm~
Brooke: So, I’m teamed up with Vlad.
Belarix: Is there a problem with that?
(Belarix pulls Brooke in a white void)
Brooke: This has been my goal for a long time, I’ve got to win, no matter what!
Belarix: I can still evolve, you can upgrade me, would that increase your chances?
Brooke: Probably.
(Brooke gets pulled out of the white void)
Brooke: Let’s do this, Belarix!
(Brooke runs over to my dorm)
Brooke: Vlad!
Me: Yeah, what is it?
Brooke: I wanna evolve Belarix even further! It has so many capabilities and I want to reach that!
Me: Then what are we waiting for?!
(Me and Brooke run over to the 3D Printing room and start working)
Me: Belarix, looks like it’s capable of an upgrade!
Brooke: Belarix needs more weight and needs to balance out that weight, that’ll make it way stronger!
(I start typing up a design fast, I pull up the image on the screen)
Brooke: That’ll work, now let’s get started!
(We start working on the Evolution Parts)
~In Jay’s Dorm~
(Someone knocks on the door)
Jay: I’m coming!
(Jay opens the door)
Colton: Howdy Partner!!
Jay: *Sighs* Do you wanna practice?
Colton: Yup, maybe you should be a mind reader instead of an actor!
Jay: Grr!
~In Lloyd’s Dorm~
(Faza walks in)
Lloyd: Let it rip!!
(Lloyd pulls off a strong launch)
Faza: Nice launch.
Lloyd: What do you want?
Faza: Last I checked I was your Tag Team Partner.
Lloyd: I work alone!
Faza: Alright then, I guess you could lose and disappoint your dad.
(Lloyd looks reluctantly at Faza)
Lloyd: You’d better not lose!
Faza: I’m thinking the same thing.
~In Drake’s Dorm~
Daniel: Drake!!
Drake: What do you want?
Daniel: I wanna practice!
Drake: *Sighs* Why would I want to practice with a weak blader?
(Daniel’s face starts turning red)
Daniel: I’m the strongest blader you’ve ever met!!
Drake: Sure, and I’m a unicorn!
Daniel: You’re not a unicorn! Now battle me!!
Drake: Ugh, fine.
~In The Workroom~
Brooke: It’s finished! The S+ Gear and the L+Gear!!
Me: You did an awesome job!!
Brooke: I even upgraded Belarix!
Me: Lemme see!!
(Brooke holds up Belarix)
Me: Awesome!! You added rubber to the three main blades!
Brooke: Yup, I changed its name to Grenade Belarix!!
Me: Faza and Lloyd don’t stand a chance against us!
Brooke: You’ve got that right!
~In America’s Main Arena~
(Valt sits down)
???: Valt, long time no see!
Valt: Silas?
Silas: Hey.
Valt: It’s been a while!
Silas: I know!
Valt: Don’t take this the wrong way but what are you doing here?
Silas: My son Scar is battling here!
Valt: Same!
???: Yo Silas! How’s it going?
Valt/Silas: Honcho?
Rantaro: That’s my name and don’t wear it out!
Ryuji: *Sighs* Hi Rantaro.
(Rantaro ruffles Ryuji’s hair)
Rantaro: Hey buddy, long time no see!
(Ryuji pulls out a comb and starts fixing his hair)
Ryuji: Are you here to watch?
Rantaro: Yup, It’ll be cool seeing the new generation battling each other! Ryuji, you need to visit more!!
Ryuji: *Sighs* Fine.
(All the lights turn off)
Valt: Looks like it’s starting!
(Hanami walks up onto the stage)
Hanami: Hello everyone, Today we start a tournament that will change the blading world forever. The International World Championships!!
(The crowd goes wild)
Hanami: Our first match is going to be Brooke Dakokutien and Vlad Aoi Vs Faza De La Hoya and Lloyd Shirosagi!!
(We take the elevator up to the Arena, The elevator arrives)
Me: We’re gonna win this thing!!
(I hold Valtryek up in the air)
Faza: Don’t get your hopes up.
Lloyd: I’m gonna crush both of you into smithereens!
Hanami: Both Tag Teams are ready to start! So let’s start!!
Referee: First battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Brooke/Faza/Lloyd: Let it rip!!
(Faza launches hard, Fafnir goes straight in the middle)
Hanami: Fafnir’s locked down the center and looks like it’s not letting go!
Brooke: Venture Launch!!
(Belarix hits Fafnir with a barrage of strikes, Fafnir doesn't move at all)
Hanami: Belarix is hitting Fafnir with a barrage of awesome blows but Fafnir’s defense is harder than a rock!!
Lloyd: I’ll end this for you!
(Luinor tries going to the center but Valtryek hits it away)
Lloyd: *Gasps*
Me: Don’t forget about me! Rush Launch!!
(Valtryek chases Luinor and hits it with a barrage of strikes)
Hanami: Valtryek hits Luinor with an assault of attacks!!
Me: Thundering Recoil!!
(Valtryek hits Luinor with its bound blade, Luinor gets sent flying in the air)
Hanami: Luinor is sent flying!
(Luinor catches onto the mid-air rails and speeds up, Luinor crashes down on Fafnir)
Lloyd: Now!
(The absorb driver sinks in, Fafnir speeds out of the center and slams Belarix out of the stadium)
Brooke: *Gasps*
(Luinor heads straight for Valtryek)
Lloyd: Destructing Upper!!
(Luinor slams into Valtryek, Valtryek gets sent flying in the air)
Me: *Gasps*
Lloyd: Now, Faza!
Faza: With pleasure! Void Claw!!
(Fafnir slams into Valtryek, Valtryek bursts)
Me: No way!
Referee: Void Fafnir and Destruct Luinor win!!
Hanami: Wow! Fafnir and Luinor just burst Valtryek with a crazy combo!!
Faza: What should we call that?
Lloyd: Destructing Void.
Faza: I don’t have a problem with that.
(Faza and Lloyd walk away)
Brooke: Don’t worry, it’s just the beginning, we can make a comeback!!
~In The Middle Of The 2nd Match~
Scar: Roller Defense!!
Daniel: Dragon Launch!!
(Dragon hits Satomb with a barrage of attacks but Satomb blocks all of the attacks with its free-spinning layer)
Hanami: Satomb blocks all of Dragon’s attacks!
Drake: Scythe Strike!!
(Doomsizer speeds into Satomb, Satomb gets sent flying)
Scar: Nice try!! Whirl Drift!!
(Satomb leans on the rollers on its driver and speeds into Dragon, Dragon gets sent flying)
Daniel: *Gasps*
Crimson Eye: End this already! Storming Ax!!
(Spryzen speeds into Doomsizer, Doomsizer bursts)
Hanami: Spryzen makes quick work of Doomsizer!!
Scar/Drake: *Gasps*
Drake: You’ve gotta be kidding!
(Dragon lands back in the stadium and speeds up)
Daniel: Royal Recoil!!
(Dragon speeds into Spryzen)
Crimson Eye: Storming Dynachi Breaker!!
(2 Blades pop out of Spryzen, Dragon gets sent flying out of the stadium)
Daniel: *Gasps*
Referee: Spryzen Stormbringer and Vicious Satomb win!!
Hanami: Amazing! Spryzen comes in clutch and beats Dragon and Doomsizer!!
Scar: You stole my thunder!!
Crimson Eye: You're weak.
(Crimson Eye walks away)
Scar: Come back here you!!
Me/Brooke (Thoughts): If we don’t get stronger there is no way we can win this!
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - Hollowmind13 - Jul. 12, 2021
(Jul. 12, 2021 10:59 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 31 is here!! The IWC's have officially started!!
Beyblade Burst Beyjitzu
Chapter 31
International World Championships!!!
Receptionist: Vlad Aoi, this will be your dorm!
(The Receptionist opens the door to my room)
Me: Awesome!
Receptionist: You have a stadium you can practice in and I TV where you can watch the matches from here!
Ryuji: So lucky!
Adam: We’ll get here one day buddy!
Receptionist: Brooke, let me show you to your room!
Brooke: I’ll catch you guys later!
(My TV flickers on)
Hanami (On TV): Hello all you world bladers!! Today we’ll kick off the beginning of the IWC’s!! The first 3 Rounds will be Tag Battles!
Adam: So, looks like you’ll have to battle with a partner!
Ryuji: But who?
Hanami: Our first tag team will be!! Brooke Dakukotein and Vlad Aoi!!
Me: I’m with Brooke?!
Adam: What luck?
Colton: Wonder who I’m going to be paired with!
Hanami: Our second tag team will be! Colton Ackerman and Jay Burns!!
Colton: Aw yeah! I’m with the star!!
Adam: Congrats bud!
Hanami: The rest will be! Scar Karslile and Crimson Eye! Bushi Kurogane and Agnus Akabane! Drake Kurogami and Daniel Koryu! Finally Lloyd Shirosgai and Faza De La Hoya!!
Ryuji: Lloyd and Faza have got to be the strongest tag team.
Me: We battled them in a simulator but still.
Hanami: The first battles will be! Brooke and Vlad Vs Faza and Lloyd!!
Me: Are you kidding?!
Colton: That’s bad.
Adam: You’ve got this bud!
Hanami: After that battle, it’ll be Jay and Colton Vs Bushi and Agnus!! And our final match will be Scar Karlisle and Crimson Eye Vs Drake Kurogami and Daniel Koryu!! I’ll see you there!
~In Brooke’s Dorm~
Brooke: So, I’m teamed up with Vlad.
Belarix: Is there a problem with that?
(Belarix pulls Brooke in a white void)
Brooke: This has been my goal for a long time, I’ve got to win, no matter what!
Belarix: I can still evolve, you can upgrade me, would that increase your chances?
Brooke: Probably.
(Brooke gets pulled out of the white void)
Brooke: Let’s do this, Belarix!
(Brooke runs over to my dorm)
Brooke: Vlad!
Me: Yeah, what is it?
Brooke: I wanna evolve Belarix even further! It has so many capabilities and I want to reach that!
Me: Then what are we waiting for?!
(Me and Brooke run over to the 3D Printing room and start working)
Me: Belarix, looks like it’s capable of an upgrade!
Brooke: Belarix needs more weight and needs to balance out that weight, that’ll make it way stronger!
(I start typing up a design fast, I pull up the image on the screen)
Brooke: That’ll work, now let’s get started!
(We start working on the Evolution Parts)
~In Jay’s Dorm~
(Someone knocks on the door)
Jay: I’m coming!
(Jay opens the door)
Colton: Howdy Partner!!
Jay: *Sighs* Do you wanna practice?
Colton: Yup, maybe you should be a mind reader instead of an actor!
Jay: Grr!
~In Lloyd’s Dorm~
(Faza walks in)
Lloyd: Let it rip!!
(Lloyd pulls off a strong launch)
Faza: Nice launch.
Lloyd: What do you want?
Faza: Last I checked I was your Tag Team Partner.
Lloyd: I work alone!
Faza: Alright then, I guess you could lose and disappoint your dad.
(Lloyd looks reluctantly at Faza)
Lloyd: You’d better not lose!
Faza: I’m thinking the same thing.
~In Drake’s Dorm~
Daniel: Drake!!
Drake: What do you want?
Daniel: I wanna practice!
Drake: *Sighs* Why would I want to practice with a weak blader?
(Daniel’s face starts turning red)
Daniel: I’m the strongest blader you’ve ever met!!
Drake: Sure, and I’m a unicorn!
Daniel: You’re not a unicorn! Now battle me!!
Drake: Ugh, fine.
~In The Workroom~
Brooke: It’s finished! The S+ Gear and the L+Gear!!
Me: You did an awesome job!!
Brooke: I even upgraded Belarix!
Me: Lemme see!!
(Brooke holds up Belarix)
Me: Awesome!! You added rubber to the three main blades!
Brooke: Yup, I changed its name to Grenade Belarix!!
Me: Faza and Lloyd don’t stand a chance against us!
Brooke: You’ve got that right!
~In America’s Main Arena~
(Valt sits down)
???: Valt, long time no see!
Valt: Silas?
Silas: Hey.
Valt: It’s been a while!
Silas: I know!
Valt: Don’t take this the wrong way but what are you doing here?
Silas: My son Scar is battling here!
Valt: Same!
???: Yo Silas! How’s it going?
Valt/Silas: Honcho?
Rantaro: That’s my name and don’t wear it out!
Ryuji: *Sighs* Hi Rantaro.
(Rantaro ruffles Ryuji’s hair)
Rantaro: Hey buddy, long time no see!
(Ryuji pulls out a comb and starts fixing his hair)
Ryuji: Are you here to watch?
Rantaro: Yup, It’ll be cool seeing the new generation battling each other! Ryuji, you need to visit more!!
Ryuji: *Sighs* Fine.
(All the lights turn off)
Valt: Looks like it’s starting!
(Hanami walks up onto the stage)
Hanami: Hello everyone, Today we start a tournament that will change the blading world forever. The International World Championships!!
(The crowd goes wild)
Hanami: Our first match is going to be Brooke Dakokutien and Vlad Aoi Vs Faza De La Hoya and Lloyd Shirosagi!!
(We take the elevator up to the Arena, The elevator arrives)
Me: We’re gonna win this thing!!
(I hold Valtryek up in the air)
Faza: Don’t get your hopes up.
Lloyd: I’m gonna crush both of you into smithereens!
Hanami: Both Tag Teams are ready to start! So let’s start!!
Referee: First battle!! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Brooke/Faza/Lloyd: Let it rip!!
(Faza launches hard, Fafnir goes straight in the middle)
Hanami: Fafnir’s locked down the center and looks like it’s not letting go!
Brooke: Venture Launch!!
(Belarix hits Fafnir with a barrage of strikes, Fafnir doesn't move at all)
Hanami: Belarix is hitting Fafnir with a barrage of awesome blows but Fafnir’s defense is harder than a rock!!
Lloyd: I’ll end this for you!
(Luinor tries going to the center but Valtryek hits it away)
Lloyd: *Gasps*
Me: Don’t forget about me! Rush Launch!!
(Valtryek chases Luinor and hits it with a barrage of strikes)
Hanami: Valtryek hits Luinor with an assault of attacks!!
Me: Thundering Recoil!!
(Valtryek hits Luinor with its bound blade, Luinor gets sent flying in the air)
Hanami: Luinor is sent flying!
(Luinor catches onto the mid-air rails and speeds up, Luinor crashes down on Fafnir)
Lloyd: Now!
(The absorb driver sinks in, Fafnir speeds out of the center and slams Belarix out of the stadium)
Brooke: *Gasps*
(Luinor heads straight for Valtryek)
Lloyd: Destructing Upper!!
(Luinor slams into Valtryek, Valtryek gets sent flying in the air)
Me: *Gasps*
Lloyd: Now, Faza!
Faza: With pleasure! Void Claw!!
(Fafnir slams into Valtryek, Valtryek bursts)
Me: No way!
Referee: Void Fafnir and Destruct Luinor win!!
Hanami: Wow! Fafnir and Luinor just burst Valtryek with a crazy combo!!
Faza: What should we call that?
Lloyd: Destructing Void.
Faza: I don’t have a problem with that.
(Faza and Lloyd walk away)
Brooke: Don’t worry, it’s just the beginning, we can make a comeback!!
~In The Middle Of The 2nd Match~
Scar: Roller Defense!!
Daniel: Dragon Launch!!
(Dragon hits Satomb with a barrage of attacks but Satomb blocks all of the attacks with its free-spinning layer)
Hanami: Satomb blocks all of Dragon’s attacks!
Drake: Scythe Strike!!
(Doomsizer speeds into Satomb, Satomb gets sent flying)
Scar: Nice try!! Whirl Drift!!
(Satomb leans on the rollers on its driver and speeds into Dragon, Dragon gets sent flying)
Daniel: *Gasps*
Crimson Eye: End this already! Storming Ax!!
(Spryzen speeds into Doomsizer, Doomsizer bursts)
Hanami: Spryzen makes quick work of Doomsizer!!
Scar/Drake: *Gasps*
Drake: You’ve gotta be kidding!
(Dragon lands back in the stadium and speeds up)
Daniel: Royal Recoil!!
(Dragon speeds into Spryzen)
Crimson Eye: Storming Dynachi Breaker!!
(2 Blades pop out of Spryzen, Dragon gets sent flying out of the stadium)
Daniel: *Gasps*
Referee: Spryzen Stormbringer and Vicious Satomb win!!
Hanami: Amazing! Spryzen comes in clutch and beats Dragon and Doomsizer!!
Scar: You stole my thunder!!
Crimson Eye: You're weak.
(Crimson Eye walks away)
Scar: Come back here you!!
Me/Brooke (Thoughts): If we don’t get stronger there is no way we can win this! Nice chapter, I can't spot any grammar mistake
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