(Nov. 26, 2020  3:38 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote:

(Nov. 26, 2020  3:36 AM)beykid44 Wrote: I'm sad this will be the last chapter i read of this :c

What? Why is that?

(Nov. 26, 2020  3:36 AM)beykid44 Wrote:

(Nov. 21, 2020  11:07 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Might as well do it... Heres Chapter 7 (warning: Some slight language)

Athena: I'll go with Angelic Adeona!!

Lane: Very well... I will make sure Adeona is destroyed!!!

Athena: Yeeaah, that isn't happening...

*they get in Launch positions
*
Athena: *in her mind* i love you Lane! I can't stand by and watch your power destroy you! I cannot allow that happen!

Lane: *in his mind* Athena... Once I destroy Adeona, i never want to see your face in my sight again... My goal will not be blocked by the likes of you!

Athena: Lets do this already!

Lane: Yeah.

3 2 1 GO SHOOT!!!

*Lucifer had took the center, Adeona was showing some extreme speed*

Lane: Come At Me! I Pulverize You!!

*Adeona was nailing Lucifer with a barrage of fierce attacks*

Lane: Oh....

*the barrier was slowly going down*

Ranjiro: SHE'S DESTROYING THE BARRIER?!?

Athena: FINISH IT WITH ANGELIC BURST!!!

*Adeona slashes across Lucifer, knocking it out of the stadium*

Lane: W-what...?

*Athena picks up her bey and stares at Lane who was getting extremely frustrated!*

Lane: *rages and screams* I'LL DESTROY YOU NEXT TIME!!!!!

*Athena frowns and stares at Lane with a hurt expression*

Athena: Lane....

*the two get in their launch positions*

3 2 1 GO SHOOT!!!

*Lucifer had taken the center as Adeona charges towards it*

Lane: Bring It!

Athena: GO!!!!

*Adeona knocks Lucifer high into the air, destroying its barrier*

*Lanes flare rises and it flows toward Athena, Athenas flare rises and it flows toward Lane*

Athena: Lane.. I may not be the best sister in the world but please, come back to me! I miss you!!!!

*Adeona and Lucifer were clashing head to head*

Athena: Please! Step out of the darkness and come home with me!

~Lane was in absolute shock from what he was hearing, in utter rage he rejects Athena and refuses to listen~

Athena: IM BRINGING YOU BACK ONE WAY OR THE OTHER!!!! ANGELIC CRASH!!!

Lane: I NEVER WANT TO SEE YOU AGAIN!!!!! VARIANT ARMAGEDDON!!!!!

*both beys collide as a massive burst of energy erupts from the stadium, Athena and Lane shield their face from the massive explosion, Harry squeaks as he scurries into a crate for cover*

*The smoke cleared and Lucifer was still spinning and Adeona had burst*

Athena: No... It can't be...

Lane: Do you understand now? You will never ever be on my level!!

*Athena falls to her knees almost in tears, she shook in terror as Lanes flare grows even more*

Lane: I don't wanna see your face in my sights again!!

*Lane leaves the factory*

Ranjiro: That spiky haired jacka**!!!! Next time I see him, ima blow his a** out of the stadium!!!

Hikaru: We should check on her, see if she is alright?

Rantaro: I'll talk to her, you guys go back.

Hikaru: Are you sure?

Rantaro: Yeah.

*everyone left and Rantaro walks over to Athena but before he could say anything....*

Athena: I don't wanna talk about it....

*Rantaro sighs and walks away*

~Athenas tears start streaming as she sits in the cold, dark and quiet factory, she reaches forward to grab her bey but her exhaustion causes her to fall over, she hadnt slept in days.~

Did i fail? Is the brother i looked up to all my life gone?

~that thought rushed through her head and it made her cry even harder. The abandoned factory echoed with Athenas sobbing....~


Next Chapter: The Great Warrior Of Legends! Brave Valkyrie!

I'm sad this will be the last chapter i read of this :c

(Nov. 26, 2020  3:39 AM)beykid44 Wrote:

(Nov. 26, 2020  3:38 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: What? Why is that?

I already sent you a pm check it

(Nov. 26, 2020  3:40 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote:

(Nov. 26, 2020  3:39 AM)beykid44 Wrote: I already sent you a pm check it

Nani?! I didn't get a PM?

(Nov. 26, 2020  3:40 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote:

(Nov. 26, 2020  3:39 AM)beykid44 Wrote: I already sent you a pm check it

Nani?! I didn't get a PM?

(Nov. 27, 2020  12:45 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Working on a preview for the next chapter. Will have that out soon.

(Nov. 27, 2020  12:45 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Working on a preview for the next chapter. Will have that out soon.

(Nov. 27, 2020  12:46 AM)kai edits Wrote:

(Nov. 27, 2020  12:45 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Working on a preview for the next chapter. Will have that out soon.

I hope lane dies lol.

(Nov. 27, 2020  2:17 AM)beyblader 2.0 Wrote: Wonder when the next chapter comes out

(Nov. 18, 2020  8:12 PM)DeltaZakuro Wrote:

(Nov. 18, 2020  8:06 PM)EarthHelios Wrote: Athena truly cares for Lane while Lane acts like a jerk.

when the Legend League comes, there might be a Tag Team battle where Lane is forced to team up with Athena. but that is a maybe.

(if i go through with this idea, it will definitely be interesting to see)

(Nov. 27, 2020  2:20 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote:

(Nov. 27, 2020  2:17 AM)beyblader 2.0 Wrote: Wonder when the next chapter comes out

Working on it right now. Should have it soon hopefully.

(Nov. 29, 2020  2:48 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: Eh... Its not the best preview but it'll hold you until the chapter comes out

~she looks down at Adeona who was glowing a white aura and looks back up at Valt with a smile~

Athena: You are right! I'll strengthen my flare so I can take on his!

~Valt was surprised by Athenas sudden burst of confidence but shrugs it off and smiles~

(Nov. 30, 2020  2:18 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: i start school back tomorrow so unfortunately chapters will likely come out at a less consistent pace. i apologize in advance.

(Nov. 30, 2020  3:53 AM)Darkus/Flasher Wrote:

(Nov. 30, 2020  2:18 AM)DeltaZakuro Wrote: i start school back tomorrow so unfortunately chapters will likely come out at a less consistent pace. i apologize in advance.

Noooooooooo! Now I hate your story. Just kidding Lol. Have a nice first day.

(Nov. 30, 2020  4:01 AM)kai edits Wrote: Schools ruin everything lol

(Nov. 30, 2020  4:13 AM)BeybladeManiac0 Wrote:

(Nov. 30, 2020  4:01 AM)kai edits Wrote: Schools ruin everything lol

The truest statement of the century.

(Nov. 30, 2020  4:15 AM)kai edits Wrote:

(Nov. 30, 2020  4:13 AM)BeybladeManiac0 Wrote: The truest statement of the century.

I can't do nothing(I can't produce/write music and play guitar)

(Nov. 30, 2020  4:01 AM)kai edits Wrote: Schools ruin everything lol