(Oct. 02, 2021  10:06 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Dang, I'm on a roll this weekend! I finished Chapter 5 of Mystic Clash!

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Beyblade Burst Mystic Clash
                        Chapter 5
      Valkyrie’s Return, Gallant Valkyrie!

(I show Tristen around our Basement)

Tristen: Looks like you’ve been blading for a while.

Me: Not really, I only started 2 months ago.

Tristen: Seriously?!

Me: Yeah, me and my Dad worked on all this equipment so I can become the Strongest in The World!

Tristen: *Grins* Keep dreaming buddy. I’ll become the Mystic Champion and show my club I’m the strongest!!

Me: Oh yeah?! I’ll completely crush you in our next match!!

Tristen: I already told you that I’m going to become the strongest and Defeat Valt Aoi!!

Me: I’ll battle you right now and beat you!!

(Tristen and I would continue to nonstop bicker)

Emma: *Sighs* This is boring. Yo, Victor! I’m going on a walk!!

(Me and Tristen continue arguing absolutely ignoring Emma, Emma gets up out of the basement and leaves the house walking around the sidewalk)

Emma: They’re both obsessed with Beyblade.

???: Obsessed with Beyblade? Who?!

(A random Tall Kid would run up to Emma with bright eyes)

Emma: Aah!

???: Did I scare you?! Sorry, I have a habit of doing that!

Emma: Um, who are you?

Harry: I’m Harry Zen, nice to meet you!!

Emma: Nice to meet you-

Harry: *Gasps* I’m late for my training with Valt, I’ll catch you later!!

(Harry tries running off but Emma grabs him)

Emma: Wait a minute! Valt Aoi?! Where is he?!

Harry: He’s at The Legend’s Training Arena doing a Seminar for all the Bladers in the Mystic Coronation Series!

(Me and Tristen would run up behind Emma)

Me: *Pants* Emma! You can’t just run off like that, we were worried sick!!

Emma: No time to talk, just follow me!!

(Emma and Harry run off towards The Legend’s Training Arena)

Tristen: More running? Seriously?!

Me: Emma you seriously need to explain.

Emma: I’ll explain on the way!

(Emma explains everything as we run over to The Legend’s Training Arena)

~At The Legend’s Training Arena~

Me: So, Valt’s doing a Seminar for the Mystic Bladers?

Harry: That’s right, this is going to be awesome!! I also heard he’s going to choose one Special Blader to battle his new Valkyrie!!

Tristen: “New Valkyrie?”

Me: Heh. So he’s finally finished it!

Tristen/Harry: You’ve met Valt Aoi before?!

Me: Yeah, we battled.

Harry: Who won?! Did you?! I need answers!!

Me: First off. Who are you again?

Harry: I’m Harry Zen! Nice to meet you!!

Me: Well, I’m Victor and this here is Tristen.

Tristen: Nice to meet you!

Harry: Nice to meet you too. Are both of you in the Mystic Coronation Series?!

Tristen: Yeah we are. Did you miss the amazing battle we had the other day?

Harry: What amazing battle--

(Harry gets a notification on his phone)

Emma: What’s that?

Harry: Says “The Best Battle of the Mystic Coronation Series so far”

(Harry watches the battle)

Harry: *Gasps* That was you guys?! You’re completely awesome!!

Me: Heh. I guess.

Tristen: I know. Wasn’t I amazing?

Harry: Not really. Your Bey just ran away like a scaredy-cat.

Tristen: EXCUSE ME?!?!

Emma: Shh!! Valt’s about to Begin Talking!!

(Valt would do his speech as everyone listens attentively)

Valt: Now, who wants to try beating my Gallant Valkyrie?!

(Valt would hold up his Gallant Valkyrie as everyone raises their hands)

Me: I want to! You promised to battle me when your Valkyrie was finished!!!

Valt: *Gasps* Well, if it isn’t Victor!

Me: Yeah! Can we battle now?!

Valt: Sure, I did promise to battle you with my new Gallant Valkyrie when it was finished!!

Tristen: No fair. Victor always gets the Big Wins.

Harry: Ironic!

Tristen: WOULD YOU BE QUIET?!?!

Valt: Heh! I’ll be going all out in our battle!!

(Valt holds Gallant Valkyrie up)

Me: I’ll beat you and become the Mystic Champion!!

Me/Valt: *Grins*

Harry: This battle is going to be amazing!!

Referee: Alright! Inspect your opponent’s Bey!

Me (Thoughts): Gallant Valkyrie, a Clockwise Spinning Attack Type. It has 3 Sharp Blades that can dish out a world of damage. On the tip of its Blade, it has Metal and Rubber making its attacks way stronger!! Its disk is super heavy and has 3 Main Rubber Contact Points lining up with the Blades making its Attacks even stronger! Its driver Power’ has a spring in it so it can take attacks like a champ and counter strike with even more powerful counterattacks!! Man, this Bey is perfect for Valt! But Vulcan’s even more perfect for me!!

Referee: First Battle!!

Valt: I’ll show you the True Power of Valkyrie!!

Me: Vulcan’s gonna send you flying!

Harry: I’m so excited I feel like I’m going to explode!!!

Emma/Tristen: He might actually explode.

Referee: Ready? Set!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Me/Valt: Go, Shoot!!

(Me and Valt pull off powerful Mystic Shoots)

Valt: C’mon, Valkyrie!!

Me: Go, Vulcan!!

(Vulcan and Valkyrie speed around each other and slam into each other, both beys send each other flying)

Valt: We’re not holding back, Rush Shoot!!

(Valkyrie speeds up and hits Vulcan with a powerful barrage of attacks, Vulcan barely hangs in)

Me: You’ve got this, Vulcan!!

Valt: Show ‘em your True Power!!

(Valkyrie and Vulcan speed up and barely dodge each other, they speed up and go in for another attack)

Valt: One more time, Rush Shoot!

Me: Upper Strike!!

(Both Beys slam into each other and get sent flying out of the stadium, Vulcan lands a second before Valkyrie)

Me/Valt: *Gasps*

Referee: It’s Gallant Valkyrie with an Over Finish! Valt Aoi claims 1 Point!!

Valt: Alright!

Me: Grr!!

Emma: That was really close…

Harry: Grr!! C’mon Victor! You’ve got this, just focus!!!

Tristen: If you beat me you better beat Valt Aoi!!

Me: Thanks… Guys.

Referee: Second Battle!!

Valt: I won’t be holding back, I’ll be going all out!!

Me: I won’t be holding back either, I’m in it to win it!!

Referee: Ready? Set!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Me/Valt: Go, Shoot!!

(Valt and I pull off extremely powerful Mystic Shoots)

Valt: Show ‘em what’s up! Rush Shoot!!

(Valkyrie unleashes a powerful barrage of strikes, Vulcan gets sent flying in the air)

Me: We’re not giving up, Vulcan!!

(My Resonance Aura flares up as Vulcan blazes out of the Bey)

Vulcan: Let’s do this!!

Valt: Aah! Valkyrie!!

(Valt’s Resonance Aura flares up as Valkyrie blazes out of the Bey)

Me: Full power, Mystic Flare!!

(Vulcan starts clashing wildly with Valkyrie)

Tristen: End it, Victor!!

Harry: C’mon! C’mon! C’mon!! Finish it!!!

(Valkyrie’s driver sinks in, Valkyrie speeds off and gains more and more speed)

All: *Gasps*

(Valkyrie starts Shining Blue as Valkyrie’s eyes glow green)

Me: No- No way.

Valt: Gallant Scimitar!!!

(Valkyrie’s blades glow as it slashes at Vulcan with full power, Vulcan Bursts)

Me: Seriously?!

Referee: It’s Gallant Valkyrie with a Burst Finish! Valt Aoi wins with a score of 3-0!!

(Victor falls to the ground in complete shock)

Tristen: Grr! He was so close!!

Harry: Valt’s so powerful…

(I grab Vulcan’s parts in distress as I look at them sadly)

Valt: *Smiles* That was a fun battle! I’m looking forward to our next match!!

Me: Yeah… Fun. [/I] [/B]

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Me: I’m totally going to win our next battle!!

(I look at Vulcan in my Bed)

Me: You want to battle, Harry?!

(Vulcan and Harry’s Bey would start clashing wildly as they hit each other with a barrage of extremely powerful blows)

Me: I’ll totally be the winner!!

(Both Beys start clashing causing a huge explosion)

Me: Next time on Beyblade Burst Mystic Clash!

The Ultimate Defense, Galactic Horogium!

3! 2! 1! Go, Shoot!!

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(Oct. 03, 2021  9:29 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: I have a Wattpad now! Currently am doing a Beyjitzu Re-Run https://www.wattpad.com/user/1UnseenBurstWBO

(Oct. 03, 2021  10:23 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote:

(Oct. 03, 2021  9:29 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: I have a Wattpad now! Currently am doing a Beyjitzu Re-Run https://www.wattpad.com/user/1UnseenBurstWBO

By re-run you mean copy pasting the chapters there?

(Oct. 08, 2021  8:00 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 29 of Yin Yang has been brought back from a Time Machine

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           Beyblade Burst Yin Yang
                      Chapter 29
      The Super Z King, Siege Achilles!

(We all gather in the Meeting Room)

Wakiya: We’ve finally figured out what the Second Round Battles will look like!

Hyuga: I’m totally going to win this time around!

Hikaru: Me too!

Wakiya: The First Match will be! Adrian and Jennifer Vs Illius and Acheros!

Adrian: You're joking… Right?

Jennifer: Not a funny one.

Wakiya: Nope, that’s what it says!

Adrian: There’s no way I’m teaming up with her!!

Wakiya: That’s what it says here!

Adrian: Not happening.

Wakiya: She’s your teammate whether you like it or not!!!

Austin: Objection your honor!

Adrian/Wakiya: This is not Court!!!

Jennifer: *Giggles Evilly*

(After a Long Decisive Argument)

Wakiya: She’s your partner, end of discussion!

Adrian: Fine.

Jennifer: We’re totally going to-

(Adrian walks away with disgust)

Jennifer: Well, how rude!

Wakiya: Anyways, the next match will be! Thalia and Bell Vs. Po and Austin!!

Po: *Gasps* I’m with him?!

Austin: We’re going to have so much fun! This battle’s going to really push our limits!!

Po: Heh. And I’ll have to clean up the mess you leave behind.

Austin: Excuse me?!

Po: Judging from your recent matches you’re pretty weak.

Austin: Oh no you didn’t!!

(Austin and Po start bickering)

Thalia: I’m battling with The Demon King, I can’t wait!!

Bell: *Laughs* I, Bell Daikokuten will push your limits and turn you into The Ultimate Blading Partner!!

Thalia: I can’t wait!!

Ren: Both of you need to chill.

(Ren picks Austin up by the back of his shirt)

Austin: I’ll show you who’s weak!!

Wakiya: The Final Match will be! Hyuga and Hikaru Vs. Ethan and Ren!

All: *Gasps*

Hikaru: So, we’re going up against Ethan.

Ren (Thoughts): He’s the guy that broke Wyvern.

(Ren and Ethan would stare at each other with anger)

Ethan: What’re you looking at?

Ren: You.

Ethan: You better watch your attitude.

(Ethan, Hyuga, and Hikaru would stare at each other, Hyuga and Hikaru’s Flares ignite surrounding them with powerful Flames)

Hyuga: We’re going to send your Bey flying!

Hikaru: Yeah, we started a Blading Revolution! We’re not going to let you ruin it!!

(Ethan’s Blaze surrounds him as it glows Purple and corrupts him)

Ethan: *Grins* I’ll swallow your Flames whole!!

Hyuga/Hikaru: Not if we’ve got anything to say about it!!

(Ethan walks away grinning evilly)

Ethan: Erebus, I have a Burning Passion to swallow their Flares and ignite my Blaze to the max!!

(Purple flames swirl around Erebus as its eyes glow, Aiga watches Ethan in the corner)

Aiga (Thoughts): The Blading World is making a turn for the Worst.

Wakiya: That’s all the news for now. There won’t be any more matches today, they’ll be postponed for tomorrow so you have some time to rest and practice.

(Wakiya walks out of the room as everyone starts pouring out)

~In The Workroom~

Aiga: It’s time to get back to fixing Achilles.

(Aiga would continue to work as Achilles Avatar stands behind him)

Achilles: We cannot let The Blading World succumb to this darkness. We’ve got to do something!

Aiga: That’s why I’m turning you into a Yang Bey, so we can continue to protect The Blading World!

Achilles: Good, we need versatility so we can take our opponents by surprise! This way we’ll be able to become-

Aiga: Super Z Invincible!

~In The Training Room~

(The gang would walk by the Training Room and hear someone training)

Austin: I wonder who’s practicing.

Adrian: Figure it out. We’ve got matches tomorrow so it could be anyone.

Ren: Let’s go check it out!

Adrian: Fine.

(We go inside the Training Room and see Wally training in a Weight Suit)

Wally: Go, Shoot!!

(Wally pulls off a powerful Eclipse Shoot, Wyvern takes the center immediately)

Wally: Nice job, Wyvern!

Ren: My Ultimate Mate, Wally! I haven’t seen you around in a while. How’s it going?!

(Ren slaps Wally on the back)

Wally: It’s been going well. I fixed Wyvern and now I’m training to become Stronger and Stronger!!

Ren: That’s amazing!

Wally: Illius, I want to battle you!

Illius: *Grins* Bring it.

Ren: First Battle! Ready? Set!!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Illius/Wally: Go, Shoot!!

(Illius and Wally pull off powerful Eclipse Shoots)

Illius: C’mon, Ifrit!!

(Wyvern takes the center as Ifrit hits Wyvern with a powerful barrage of attacks, Wyvern blocks all Ifrit’s attacks)

Wally: Hyper Savage Shield!!

(Ifrit attacks get blocked because of Wyvern’s Free Spinning Shield)

Illius: Beast Barrage!!

(Ifrit continues to go on the attack, Wyvern blocks all of the attacks)

Wally: You’re not going to make a proper attack anytime soon!

Illius: Grr!! Ifrit!!!

(Illius’ Resonance Aura ignites as Ifrit blazes out of the Bey)

Illius: Send them flying, Combust Smash!!

(Ifrit slams Wyvern into the ground, Wyvern gets sent flying in the air)

Wally: Stick the landing, Wyvern!!

(Wyvern lands on top of the Stadium wall with a thud)

Illius: Seriously?!

Wally: Show them a Wild Tempest, Wyvern!!

(Wally’s Resonance Aura flares up as Wyvern blazes out of the Bey with a Roar, Wyvern falls off the Stadium Wall and starts crashing back down)

Wally: Super Tempest Crash!!

Illius: What?!

(Wyvern slams down on Ifrit, Ifrit gets sent flying out of the center)

Ren: It’s Savage Wyvern with an Over Finish! Wally’s the Winner!!

Wally: I won!

Illius: Nice, you’ve gotten way stronger!!

Wally: Thanks, and I’m going to get even stronger!!

Austin: I wanna battle next!

Wally: *Grins* Wyvern’s gonna send Anpao flying with its Violent Tempest!!

(Adrian walks away)

Austin: Adrian, where are you going?

Adrian: I’ll be back.

(Adrian walks out the door)

~In The Workroom~

Aiga: It’s finished! Say Hello to the Ultimate Super Bey! Siege Achilles!!

(Aiga holds up Siege Achilles high in the air, Siege Achilles glimmers Red)

Valt: So, you finally finished it!

(Valt walks in the Workroom)

Aiga: Sure did, Me and Achilles are truly Super Z Invincible now!

Valt: Let me guess, you’re going to battle Adrian?

Aiga: *Smiles* Since when did you become a Mind Reader?

Valt: Just a hunch, he’s outside!

(Aiga runs off at full speed)

Aiga: Thanks, I’ll catch you later, Valt!

Valt (Thoughts): Aiga, he never changes, doesn’t he?

(Valkyrie starts glowing in Valt’s Pocket)

Valkyrie: Aiga, Austin, and Adrian. They don’t seem so different from you when you started Blading.

Valt: Heh. You’ve got a point!

~On the Airship’s Port~

(Adrian sits down on the ground looking at Asriel)

Adrian (Thoughts): Everyone’s becoming stronger and increasing their bond with their Bey’s. But what about me? Why doesn't Asriel talk to me anymore?!

???: Yo, Adrian!!

Adrian: *Gasps*

(Aiga would frontflip and land right in front of Adrian as he’s sitting down staring at him from above)

Aiga: What’s up?

Adrian: What do you want?

Aiga: A battle with My New Siege Achilles!!

(Aiga holds up Siege Achilles with a Grin)

Adrian: One battle.

(Aiga runs over to the stadium and gets ready, Adrian follows after him)

Drone: Inspect your opponent’s Bey!

Adrian (Thoughts): Siege Achilles, a Clockwise Spinning Balance Type. Achilles has 2 Modes on its Layer. The Siege Sword, and The Siege Shield. Looks like their Evolutions of the Infinite Sword and Infinite Shield. Without both of the Siege Armors Achilles has Four Blades. Two for Attacking and Two for Defending. It has Huge Metal Blades for Attacking and Stronger Defense Blades to parry attacks with. The Siege Sword has a Sharp Shape increasing its attack power. The Siege Shield has a Rounder Shape and focuses More on Defense! Its ‘Chassis is 1B’ it has 5 Contact Points balancing out the Bey. It's Driver High Extend+’ has 3 Modes, Attack, Defense, and Stamina. It’s taller making it have stronger Attack and Defense! Aiga, I’ll defeat you in this battle and prove who’s superior!!

Drone: First Battle!

Aiga (Thoughts): I’ll go on the Defense in this battle!

(Aiga puts the Siege Shield on Achilles)

Adrian (Thoughts): If he’s going in Defense Mode I’ll have to unleash powerful Attacks to break that Defense!!

(Adrian puts Asriel in Heavy Mode)

Drone: Ready? Set!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Adrian/Aiga: Go, Shoot!!

(Adrian and Aiga pull off extremely powerful Eclipse Shoots)

Adrian: Go for a Twilight Shoot!!

Aiga: I won’t let you!

(Achilles dodges Asriel’s attacks and takes the center)

Adrian: C’mon, hit it already!!

Aiga: Sieging Guard!!

(Achilles uses the Siege Shield to block Asriel’s attacks, Asriel goes on the Acceleration Ramp and speeds up)

Adrian: Twilight Slash!!

Aiga: Don’t give up, Achilles!!

(Achilles get sent flying into the air, Achilles hits the Stadium Wall and barely hangs in, Achilles starts wobbling as Asriel aims right for it)

Adrian: *Grins* Twilight Blight!!!

Aiga: Siege Shield!!

(Achilles blocks Asriel’s attack, Both Beys get sent flying out of the stadium, Achilles lands first)

Aiga: *Gasps*

Adrian: Grr!

Drone: It’s Twilight Asriel with an Over Finish! Adrian Saito claims 1 Point!!

Aiga: Grr!! We almost won!!

(Achilles starts glowing in Aiga’s hands, Achilles eyes glow brightly)

Achilles: We’ve got to attack, if we don’t we’ll never be able to win!

Aiga: Hm. On it!

Drone: Second Battle!

(Aiga puts the Siege Sword on Achilles)

Aiga: The Super Z Offense is going to hit you head on!

Adrian: Asriel will crush your Bey again!!

(Adrian’s Dark Flare surrounds him as it Sparkles Golden)

Aiga (Thoughts): Adrian, I’ll bring out all of your Light!!

Drone: Ready? Set!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Adrian/Aiga: Go, Shoot!!

(Aiga and Adrian pull off extremely powerful Eclipse Shoots)

Aiga: Attack, Achilles!!

Possessed Adrian: *Roars* Unleash Twilight Shoot!!!

(Both Beys hit each other with Extremely Powerful Blows, Both Beys speed off in different directions)

Possessed Adrian: Break them, Asriel!!!

(Adrian’s Dark Resonance Aura flares up as Asriel blazes out of the Bey, Asriel enters Dark Flare and Sparkles Golden)

Aiga: Fight, Achilles!!

(Aiga’s Resonance Aura flares up as Achilles blazes out of the Bey)

Possessed Adrian: Twilight Slash!!
Aiga: Siege Sword!!

(Asriel and Achilles start clashing wildly causing a humongous explosion, Power bursts out of the stadium)

Possessed Adrian/Aiga: *Roars*

(Both Beys speed off in different directions, Asriel and Achilles speed around the stadium with a Blazing Trail following them)

Possessed Adrian: Twilight Blight!!!

Aiga: Sieging Buster!!

(Both Beys slam into each other causing another explosion, Achilles slams Asriel into the ground, Asriel Bursts immediately)

Adrian: *Gasps*

(A purple light slashes at Adrian at full power sending him flying to the ground in pain)

Drone: It’s Siege Achilles with a Burst Finish! Aiga Akaba is the winner!!

Adrian: Grr!!

Aiga: Adrian… This is Me and Achilles’ Bond. My question for you is do you have a Powerful Bond with Asriel?

(Aiga walks away)

Adrian: Grr! Of course, I do!!!

~In The Workroom~

(Austin walks in as Adrian’s Working)

Austin: So, I heard you lost to Aiga.

Adrian: You heard right then.

Austin: What’re you doing?

Adrian: Making something.

Austin: What’re you making?

Adrian: *Sighs* If you must know, I’m upgrading my Launcher.

Austin: You’re Launcher?

Adrian: Yeah, so it can be more powerful so I can get more power out of Asriel.

Austin: I wanna do that too!

Adrian: Be my guest.

(We both start working on our Launchers as Aiga and Valt watch from the corner)

Aiga: They’re going to become Crazy Strong. And I’m pretty sure Adrian’s starting to learn what Beyblade’s really all about.

Valt: Yeah, they’re going to beat you one day!

Aiga: What do you mean me?! They’re going to beat you first!!

Valt: No way!

(Aiga and Valt start bickering in the corner)

Adrian: Would you mind keeping it down?

Aiga/Valt: *Gasps* Um. Sure!

(Aiga and Valt leave)

~The Next Morning~

Adrian: Finally, it’s finished!

(Austin wakes up groggy)

Austin: I finished mine hours ago.

Adrian: Get ready Legends, I’m going to crush all of you!

Austin: The Solar Eclipse Launcher! That’s what I’m naming mine!

Adrian: Names, huh? I guess I’ll call mine The Blackout Eclipse Launcher!

Austin: *Smiles* We’re going to become the Strongest Bladers in the World!

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(Oct. 08, 2021  8:00 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 29 of Yin Yang has been brought back from a Time Machine

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           Beyblade Burst Yin Yang
                      Chapter 29
      The Super Z King, Siege Achilles!

(We all gather in the Meeting Room)

Wakiya: We’ve finally figured out what the Second Round Battles will look like!

Hyuga: I’m totally going to win this time around!

Hikaru: Me too!

Wakiya: The First Match will be! Adrian and Jennifer Vs Illius and Acheros!

Adrian: You're joking… Right?

Jennifer: Not a funny one.

Wakiya: Nope, that’s what it says!

Adrian: There’s no way I’m teaming up with her!!

Wakiya: That’s what it says here!

Adrian: Not happening.

Wakiya: She’s your teammate whether you like it or not!!!

Austin: Objection your honor!

Adrian/Wakiya: This is not Court!!!

Jennifer: *Giggles Evilly*

(After a Long Decisive Argument)

Wakiya: She’s your partner, end of discussion!

Adrian: Fine.

Jennifer: We’re totally going to-

(Adrian walks away with disgust)

Jennifer: Well, how rude!

Wakiya: Anyways, the next match will be! Thalia and Bell Vs. Po and Austin!!

Po: *Gasps* I’m with him?!

Austin: We’re going to have so much fun! This battle’s going to really push our limits!!

Po: Heh. And I’ll have to clean up the mess you leave behind.

Austin: Excuse me?!

Po: Judging from your recent matches you’re pretty weak.

Austin: Oh no you didn’t!!

(Austin and Po start bickering)

Thalia: I’m battling with The Demon King, I can’t wait!!

Bell: *Laughs* I, Bell Daikokuten will push your limits and turn you into The Ultimate Blading Partner!!

Thalia: I can’t wait!!

Ren: Both of you need to chill.

(Ren picks Austin up by the back of his shirt)

Austin: I’ll show you who’s weak!!

Wakiya: The Final Match will be! Hyuga and Hikaru Vs. Ethan and Ren!

All: *Gasps*

Hikaru: So, we’re going up against Ethan.

Ren (Thoughts): He’s the guy that broke Wyvern.

(Ren and Ethan would stare at each other with anger)

Ethan: What’re you looking at?

Ren: You.

Ethan: You better watch your attitude.

(Ethan, Hyuga, and Hikaru would stare at each other, Hyuga and Hikaru’s Flares ignite surrounding them with powerful Flames)

Hyuga: We’re going to send your Bey flying!

Hikaru: Yeah, we started a Blading Revolution! We’re not going to let you ruin it!!

(Ethan’s Blaze surrounds him as it glows Purple and corrupts him)

Ethan: *Grins* I’ll swallow your Flames whole!!

Hyuga/Hikaru: Not if we’ve got anything to say about it!!

(Ethan walks away grinning evilly)

Ethan: Erebus, I have a Burning Passion to swallow their Flares and ignite my Blaze to the max!!

(Purple flames swirl around Erebus as its eyes glow, Aiga watches Ethan in the corner)

Aiga (Thoughts): The Blading World is making a turn for the Worst.

Wakiya: That’s all the news for now. There won’t be any more matches today, they’ll be postponed for tomorrow so you have some time to rest and practice.

(Wakiya walks out of the room as everyone starts pouring out)

~In The Workroom~

Aiga: It’s time to get back to fixing Achilles.

(Aiga would continue to work as Achilles Avatar stands behind him)

Achilles: We cannot let The Blading World succumb to this darkness. We’ve got to do something!

Aiga: That’s why I’m turning you into a Yang Bey, so we can continue to protect The Blading World!

Achilles: Good, we need versatility so we can take our opponents by surprise! This way we’ll be able to become-

Aiga: Super Z Invincible!

~In The Training Room~

(The gang would walk by the Training Room and hear someone training)

Austin: I wonder who’s practicing.

Adrian: Figure it out. We’ve got matches tomorrow so it could be anyone.

Ren: Let’s go check it out!

Adrian: Fine.

(We go inside the Training Room and see Wally training in a Weight Suit)

Wally: Go, Shoot!!

(Wally pulls off a powerful Eclipse Shoot, Wyvern takes the center immediately)

Wally: Nice job, Wyvern!

Ren: My Ultimate Mate, Wally! I haven’t seen you around in a while. How’s it going?!

(Ren slaps Wally on the back)

Wally: It’s been going well. I fixed Wyvern and now I’m training to become Stronger and Stronger!!

Ren: That’s amazing!

Wally: Illius, I want to battle you!

Illius: *Grins* Bring it.

Ren: First Battle! Ready? Set!!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Illius/Wally: Go, Shoot!!

(Illius and Wally pull off powerful Eclipse Shoots)

Illius: C’mon, Ifrit!!

(Wyvern takes the center as Ifrit hits Wyvern with a powerful barrage of attacks, Wyvern blocks all Ifrit’s attacks)

Wally: Hyper Savage Shield!!

(Ifrit attacks get blocked because of Wyvern’s Free Spinning Shield)

Illius: Beast Barrage!!

(Ifrit continues to go on the attack, Wyvern blocks all of the attacks)

Wally: You’re not going to make a proper attack anytime soon!

Illius: Grr!! Ifrit!!!

(Illius’ Resonance Aura ignites as Ifrit blazes out of the Bey)

Illius: Send them flying, Combust Smash!!

(Ifrit slams Wyvern into the ground, Wyvern gets sent flying in the air)

Wally: Stick the landing, Wyvern!!

(Wyvern lands on top of the Stadium wall with a thud)

Illius: Seriously?!

Wally: Show them a Wild Tempest, Wyvern!!

(Wally’s Resonance Aura flares up as Wyvern blazes out of the Bey with a Roar, Wyvern falls off the Stadium Wall and starts crashing back down)

Wally: Super Tempest Crash!!

Illius: What?!

(Wyvern slams down on Ifrit, Ifrit gets sent flying out of the center)

Ren: It’s Savage Wyvern with an Over Finish! Wally’s the Winner!!

Wally: I won!

Illius: Nice, you’ve gotten way stronger!!

Wally: Thanks, and I’m going to get even stronger!!

Austin: I wanna battle next!

Wally: *Grins* Wyvern’s gonna send Anpao flying with its Violent Tempest!!

(Adrian walks away)

Austin: Adrian, where are you going?

Adrian: I’ll be back.

(Adrian walks out the door)

~In The Workroom~

Aiga: It’s finished! Say Hello to the Ultimate Super Bey! Siege Achilles!!

(Aiga holds up Siege Achilles high in the air, Siege Achilles glimmers Red)

Valt: So, you finally finished it!

(Valt walks in the Workroom)

Aiga: Sure did, Me and Achilles are truly Super Z Invincible now!

Valt: Let me guess, you’re going to battle Adrian?

Aiga: *Smiles* Since when did you become a Mind Reader?

Valt: Just a hunch, he’s outside!

(Aiga runs off at full speed)

Aiga: Thanks, I’ll catch you later, Valt!

Valt (Thoughts): Aiga, he never changes, doesn’t he?

(Valkyrie starts glowing in Valt’s Pocket)

Valkyrie: Aiga, Austin, and Adrian. They don’t seem so different from you when you started Blading.

Valt: Heh. You’ve got a point!

~On the Airship’s Port~

(Adrian sits down on the ground looking at Asriel)

Adrian (Thoughts): Everyone’s becoming stronger and increasing their bond with their Bey’s. But what about me? Why doesn't Asriel talk to me anymore?!

???: Yo, Adrian!!

Adrian: *Gasps*

(Aiga would frontflip and land right in front of Adrian as he’s sitting down staring at him from above)

Aiga: What’s up?

Adrian: What do you want?

Aiga: A battle with My New Siege Achilles!!

(Aiga holds up Siege Achilles with a Grin)

Adrian: One battle.

(Aiga runs over to the stadium and gets ready, Adrian follows after him)

Drone: Inspect your opponent’s Bey!

Adrian (Thoughts): Siege Achilles, a Clockwise Spinning Balance Type. Achilles has 2 Modes on its Layer. The Siege Sword, and The Siege Shield. Looks like their Evolutions of the Infinite Sword and Infinite Shield. Without both of the Siege Armors Achilles has Four Blades. Two for Attacking and Two for Defending. It has Huge Metal Blades for Attacking and Stronger Defense Blades to parry attacks with. The Siege Sword has a Sharp Shape increasing its attack power. The Siege Shield has a Rounder Shape and focuses More on Defense! Its ‘Chassis is 1B’ it has 5 Contact Points balancing out the Bey. It's Driver High Extend+’ has 3 Modes, Attack, Defense, and Stamina. It’s taller making it have stronger Attack and Defense! Aiga, I’ll defeat you in this battle and prove who’s superior!!

Drone: First Battle!

Aiga (Thoughts): I’ll go on the Defense in this battle!

(Aiga puts the Siege Shield on Achilles)

Adrian (Thoughts): If he’s going in Defense Mode I’ll have to unleash powerful Attacks to break that Defense!!

(Adrian puts Asriel in Heavy Mode)

Drone: Ready? Set!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Adrian/Aiga: Go, Shoot!!

(Adrian and Aiga pull off extremely powerful Eclipse Shoots)

Adrian: Go for a Twilight Shoot!!

Aiga: I won’t let you!

(Achilles dodges Asriel’s attacks and takes the center)

Adrian: C’mon, hit it already!!

Aiga: Sieging Guard!!

(Achilles uses the Siege Shield to block Asriel’s attacks, Asriel goes on the Acceleration Ramp and speeds up)

Adrian: Twilight Slash!!

Aiga: Don’t give up, Achilles!!

(Achilles get sent flying into the air, Achilles hits the Stadium Wall and barely hangs in, Achilles starts wobbling as Asriel aims right for it)

Adrian: *Grins* Twilight Blight!!!

Aiga: Siege Shield!!

(Achilles blocks Asriel’s attack, Both Beys get sent flying out of the stadium, Achilles lands first)

Aiga: *Gasps*

Adrian: Grr!

Drone: It’s Twilight Asriel with an Over Finish! Adrian Saito claims 1 Point!!

Aiga: Grr!! We almost won!!

(Achilles starts glowing in Aiga’s hands, Achilles eyes glow brightly)

Achilles: We’ve got to attack, if we don’t we’ll never be able to win!

Aiga: Hm. On it!

Drone: Second Battle!

(Aiga puts the Siege Sword on Achilles)

Aiga: The Super Z Offense is going to hit you head on!

Adrian: Asriel will crush your Bey again!!

(Adrian’s Dark Flare surrounds him as it Sparkles Golden)

Aiga (Thoughts): Adrian, I’ll bring out all of your Light!!

Drone: Ready? Set!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Adrian/Aiga: Go, Shoot!!

(Aiga and Adrian pull off extremely powerful Eclipse Shoots)

Aiga: Attack, Achilles!!

Possessed Adrian: *Roars* Unleash Twilight Shoot!!!

(Both Beys hit each other with Extremely Powerful Blows, Both Beys speed off in different directions)

Possessed Adrian: Break them, Asriel!!!

(Adrian’s Dark Resonance Aura flares up as Asriel blazes out of the Bey, Asriel enters Dark Flare and Sparkles Golden)

Aiga: Fight, Achilles!!

(Aiga’s Resonance Aura flares up as Achilles blazes out of the Bey)

Possessed Adrian: Twilight Slash!!
Aiga: Siege Sword!!

(Asriel and Achilles start clashing wildly causing a humongous explosion, Power bursts out of the stadium)

Possessed Adrian/Aiga: *Roars*

(Both Beys speed off in different directions, Asriel and Achilles speed around the stadium with a Blazing Trail following them)

Possessed Adrian: Twilight Blight!!!

Aiga: Sieging Buster!!

(Both Beys slam into each other causing another explosion, Achilles slams Asriel into the ground, Asriel Bursts immediately)

Adrian: *Gasps*

(A purple light slashes at Adrian at full power sending him flying to the ground in pain)

Drone: It’s Siege Achilles with a Burst Finish! Aiga Akaba is the winner!!

Adrian: Grr!!

Aiga: Adrian… This is Me and Achilles’ Bond. My question for you is do you have a Powerful Bond with Asriel?

(Aiga walks away)

Adrian: Grr! Of course, I do!!!

~In The Workroom~

(Austin walks in as Adrian’s Working)

Austin: So, I heard you lost to Aiga.

Adrian: You heard right then.

Austin: What’re you doing?

Adrian: Making something.

Austin: What’re you making?

Adrian: *Sighs* If you must know, I’m upgrading my Launcher.

Austin: You’re Launcher?

Adrian: Yeah, so it can be more powerful so I can get more power out of Asriel.

Austin: I wanna do that too!

Adrian: Be my guest.

(We both start working on our Launchers as Aiga and Valt watch from the corner)

Aiga: They’re going to become Crazy Strong. And I’m pretty sure Adrian’s starting to learn what Beyblade’s really all about.

Valt: Yeah, they’re going to beat you one day!

Aiga: What do you mean me?! They’re going to beat you first!!

Valt: No way!

(Aiga and Valt start bickering in the corner)

Adrian: Would you mind keeping it down?

Aiga/Valt: *Gasps* Um. Sure!

(Aiga and Valt leave)

~The Next Morning~

Adrian: Finally, it’s finished!

(Austin wakes up groggy)

Austin: I finished mine hours ago.

Adrian: Get ready Legends, I’m going to crush all of you!

Austin: The Solar Eclipse Launcher! That’s what I’m naming mine!

Adrian: Names, huh? I guess I’ll call mine The Blackout Eclipse Launcher!

Austin: *Smiles* We’re going to become the Strongest Bladers in the World!

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(Oct. 08, 2021  9:08 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote:

(Oct. 08, 2021  8:00 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 29 of Yin Yang has been brought back from a Time Machine

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           Beyblade Burst Yin Yang
                      Chapter 29
      The Super Z King, Siege Achilles!

(We all gather in the Meeting Room)

Wakiya: We’ve finally figured out what the Second Round Battles will look like!

Hyuga: I’m totally going to win this time around!

Hikaru: Me too!

Wakiya: The First Match will be! Adrian and Jennifer Vs Illius and Acheros!

Adrian: You're joking… Right?

Jennifer: Not a funny one.

Wakiya: Nope, that’s what it says!

Adrian: There’s no way I’m teaming up with her!!

Wakiya: That’s what it says here!

Adrian: Not happening.

Wakiya: She’s your teammate whether you like it or not!!!

Austin: Objection your honor!

Adrian/Wakiya: This is not Court!!!

Jennifer: *Giggles Evilly*

(After a Long Decisive Argument)

Wakiya: She’s your partner, end of discussion!

Adrian: Fine.

Jennifer: We’re totally going to-

(Adrian walks away with disgust)

Jennifer: Well, how rude!

Wakiya: Anyways, the next match will be! Thalia and Bell Vs. Po and Austin!!

Po: *Gasps* I’m with him?!

Austin: We’re going to have so much fun! This battle’s going to really push our limits!!

Po: Heh. And I’ll have to clean up the mess you leave behind.

Austin: Excuse me?!

Po: Judging from your recent matches you’re pretty weak.

Austin: Oh no you didn’t!!

(Austin and Po start bickering)

Thalia: I’m battling with The Demon King, I can’t wait!!

Bell: *Laughs* I, Bell Daikokuten will push your limits and turn you into The Ultimate Blading Partner!!

Thalia: I can’t wait!!

Ren: Both of you need to chill.

(Ren picks Austin up by the back of his shirt)

Austin: I’ll show you who’s weak!!

Wakiya: The Final Match will be! Hyuga and Hikaru Vs. Ethan and Ren!

All: *Gasps*

Hikaru: So, we’re going up against Ethan.

Ren (Thoughts): He’s the guy that broke Wyvern.

(Ren and Ethan would stare at each other with anger)

Ethan: What’re you looking at?

Ren: You.

Ethan: You better watch your attitude.

(Ethan, Hyuga, and Hikaru would stare at each other, Hyuga and Hikaru’s Flares ignite surrounding them with powerful Flames)

Hyuga: We’re going to send your Bey flying!

Hikaru: Yeah, we started a Blading Revolution! We’re not going to let you ruin it!!

(Ethan’s Blaze surrounds him as it glows Purple and corrupts him)

Ethan: *Grins* I’ll swallow your Flames whole!!

Hyuga/Hikaru: Not if we’ve got anything to say about it!!

(Ethan walks away grinning evilly)

Ethan: Erebus, I have a Burning Passion to swallow their Flares and ignite my Blaze to the max!!

(Purple flames swirl around Erebus as its eyes glow, Aiga watches Ethan in the corner)

Aiga (Thoughts): The Blading World is making a turn for the Worst.

Wakiya: That’s all the news for now. There won’t be any more matches today, they’ll be postponed for tomorrow so you have some time to rest and practice.

(Wakiya walks out of the room as everyone starts pouring out)

~In The Workroom~

Aiga: It’s time to get back to fixing Achilles.

(Aiga would continue to work as Achilles Avatar stands behind him)

Achilles: We cannot let The Blading World succumb to this darkness. We’ve got to do something!

Aiga: That’s why I’m turning you into a Yang Bey, so we can continue to protect The Blading World!

Achilles: Good, we need versatility so we can take our opponents by surprise! This way we’ll be able to become-

Aiga: Super Z Invincible!

~In The Training Room~

(The gang would walk by the Training Room and hear someone training)

Austin: I wonder who’s practicing.

Adrian: Figure it out. We’ve got matches tomorrow so it could be anyone.

Ren: Let’s go check it out!

Adrian: Fine.

(We go inside the Training Room and see Wally training in a Weight Suit)

Wally: Go, Shoot!!

(Wally pulls off a powerful Eclipse Shoot, Wyvern takes the center immediately)

Wally: Nice job, Wyvern!

Ren: My Ultimate Mate, Wally! I haven’t seen you around in a while. How’s it going?!

(Ren slaps Wally on the back)

Wally: It’s been going well. I fixed Wyvern and now I’m training to become Stronger and Stronger!!

Ren: That’s amazing!

Wally: Illius, I want to battle you!

Illius: *Grins* Bring it.

Ren: First Battle! Ready? Set!!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Illius/Wally: Go, Shoot!!

(Illius and Wally pull off powerful Eclipse Shoots)

Illius: C’mon, Ifrit!!

(Wyvern takes the center as Ifrit hits Wyvern with a powerful barrage of attacks, Wyvern blocks all Ifrit’s attacks)

Wally: Hyper Savage Shield!!

(Ifrit attacks get blocked because of Wyvern’s Free Spinning Shield)

Illius: Beast Barrage!!

(Ifrit continues to go on the attack, Wyvern blocks all of the attacks)

Wally: You’re not going to make a proper attack anytime soon!

Illius: Grr!! Ifrit!!!

(Illius’ Resonance Aura ignites as Ifrit blazes out of the Bey)

Illius: Send them flying, Combust Smash!!

(Ifrit slams Wyvern into the ground, Wyvern gets sent flying in the air)

Wally: Stick the landing, Wyvern!!

(Wyvern lands on top of the Stadium wall with a thud)

Illius: Seriously?!

Wally: Show them a Wild Tempest, Wyvern!!

(Wally’s Resonance Aura flares up as Wyvern blazes out of the Bey with a Roar, Wyvern falls off the Stadium Wall and starts crashing back down)

Wally: Super Tempest Crash!!

Illius: What?!

(Wyvern slams down on Ifrit, Ifrit gets sent flying out of the center)

Ren: It’s Savage Wyvern with an Over Finish! Wally’s the Winner!!

Wally: I won!

Illius: Nice, you’ve gotten way stronger!!

Wally: Thanks, and I’m going to get even stronger!!

Austin: I wanna battle next!

Wally: *Grins* Wyvern’s gonna send Anpao flying with its Violent Tempest!!

(Adrian walks away)

Austin: Adrian, where are you going?

Adrian: I’ll be back.

(Adrian walks out the door)

~In The Workroom~

Aiga: It’s finished! Say Hello to the Ultimate Super Bey! Siege Achilles!!

(Aiga holds up Siege Achilles high in the air, Siege Achilles glimmers Red)

Valt: So, you finally finished it!

(Valt walks in the Workroom)

Aiga: Sure did, Me and Achilles are truly Super Z Invincible now!

Valt: Let me guess, you’re going to battle Adrian?

Aiga: *Smiles* Since when did you become a Mind Reader?

Valt: Just a hunch, he’s outside!

(Aiga runs off at full speed)

Aiga: Thanks, I’ll catch you later, Valt!

Valt (Thoughts): Aiga, he never changes, doesn’t he?

(Valkyrie starts glowing in Valt’s Pocket)

Valkyrie: Aiga, Austin, and Adrian. They don’t seem so different from you when you started Blading.

Valt: Heh. You’ve got a point!

~On the Airship’s Port~

(Adrian sits down on the ground looking at Asriel)

Adrian (Thoughts): Everyone’s becoming stronger and increasing their bond with their Bey’s. But what about me? Why doesn't Asriel talk to me anymore?!

???: Yo, Adrian!!

Adrian: *Gasps*

(Aiga would frontflip and land right in front of Adrian as he’s sitting down staring at him from above)

Aiga: What’s up?

Adrian: What do you want?

Aiga: A battle with My New Siege Achilles!!

(Aiga holds up Siege Achilles with a Grin)

Adrian: One battle.

(Aiga runs over to the stadium and gets ready, Adrian follows after him)

Drone: Inspect your opponent’s Bey!

Adrian (Thoughts): Siege Achilles, a Clockwise Spinning Balance Type. Achilles has 2 Modes on its Layer. The Siege Sword, and The Siege Shield. Looks like their Evolutions of the Infinite Sword and Infinite Shield. Without both of the Siege Armors Achilles has Four Blades. Two for Attacking and Two for Defending. It has Huge Metal Blades for Attacking and Stronger Defense Blades to parry attacks with. The Siege Sword has a Sharp Shape increasing its attack power. The Siege Shield has a Rounder Shape and focuses More on Defense! Its ‘Chassis is 1B’ it has 5 Contact Points balancing out the Bey. It's Driver High Extend+’ has 3 Modes, Attack, Defense, and Stamina. It’s taller making it have stronger Attack and Defense! Aiga, I’ll defeat you in this battle and prove who’s superior!!

Drone: First Battle!

Aiga (Thoughts): I’ll go on the Defense in this battle!

(Aiga puts the Siege Shield on Achilles)

Adrian (Thoughts): If he’s going in Defense Mode I’ll have to unleash powerful Attacks to break that Defense!!

(Adrian puts Asriel in Heavy Mode)

Drone: Ready? Set!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Adrian/Aiga: Go, Shoot!!

(Adrian and Aiga pull off extremely powerful Eclipse Shoots)

Adrian: Go for a Twilight Shoot!!

Aiga: I won’t let you!

(Achilles dodges Asriel’s attacks and takes the center)

Adrian: C’mon, hit it already!!

Aiga: Sieging Guard!!

(Achilles uses the Siege Shield to block Asriel’s attacks, Asriel goes on the Acceleration Ramp and speeds up)

Adrian: Twilight Slash!!

Aiga: Don’t give up, Achilles!!

(Achilles get sent flying into the air, Achilles hits the Stadium Wall and barely hangs in, Achilles starts wobbling as Asriel aims right for it)

Adrian: *Grins* Twilight Blight!!!

Aiga: Siege Shield!!

(Achilles blocks Asriel’s attack, Both Beys get sent flying out of the stadium, Achilles lands first)

Aiga: *Gasps*

Adrian: Grr!

Drone: It’s Twilight Asriel with an Over Finish! Adrian Saito claims 1 Point!!

Aiga: Grr!! We almost won!!

(Achilles starts glowing in Aiga’s hands, Achilles eyes glow brightly)

Achilles: We’ve got to attack, if we don’t we’ll never be able to win!

Aiga: Hm. On it!

Drone: Second Battle!

(Aiga puts the Siege Sword on Achilles)

Aiga: The Super Z Offense is going to hit you head on!

Adrian: Asriel will crush your Bey again!!

(Adrian’s Dark Flare surrounds him as it Sparkles Golden)

Aiga (Thoughts): Adrian, I’ll bring out all of your Light!!

Drone: Ready? Set!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Adrian/Aiga: Go, Shoot!!

(Aiga and Adrian pull off extremely powerful Eclipse Shoots)

Aiga: Attack, Achilles!!

Possessed Adrian: *Roars* Unleash Twilight Shoot!!!

(Both Beys hit each other with Extremely Powerful Blows, Both Beys speed off in different directions)

Possessed Adrian: Break them, Asriel!!!

(Adrian’s Dark Resonance Aura flares up as Asriel blazes out of the Bey, Asriel enters Dark Flare and Sparkles Golden)

Aiga: Fight, Achilles!!

(Aiga’s Resonance Aura flares up as Achilles blazes out of the Bey)

Possessed Adrian: Twilight Slash!!
Aiga: Siege Sword!!

(Asriel and Achilles start clashing wildly causing a humongous explosion, Power bursts out of the stadium)

Possessed Adrian/Aiga: *Roars*

(Both Beys speed off in different directions, Asriel and Achilles speed around the stadium with a Blazing Trail following them)

Possessed Adrian: Twilight Blight!!!

Aiga: Sieging Buster!!

(Both Beys slam into each other causing another explosion, Achilles slams Asriel into the ground, Asriel Bursts immediately)

Adrian: *Gasps*

(A purple light slashes at Adrian at full power sending him flying to the ground in pain)

Drone: It’s Siege Achilles with a Burst Finish! Aiga Akaba is the winner!!

Adrian: Grr!!

Aiga: Adrian… This is Me and Achilles’ Bond. My question for you is do you have a Powerful Bond with Asriel?

(Aiga walks away)

Adrian: Grr! Of course, I do!!!

~In The Workroom~

(Austin walks in as Adrian’s Working)

Austin: So, I heard you lost to Aiga.

Adrian: You heard right then.

Austin: What’re you doing?

Adrian: Making something.

Austin: What’re you making?

Adrian: *Sighs* If you must know, I’m upgrading my Launcher.

Austin: You’re Launcher?

Adrian: Yeah, so it can be more powerful so I can get more power out of Asriel.

Austin: I wanna do that too!

Adrian: Be my guest.

(We both start working on our Launchers as Aiga and Valt watch from the corner)

Aiga: They’re going to become Crazy Strong. And I’m pretty sure Adrian’s starting to learn what Beyblade’s really all about.

Valt: Yeah, they’re going to beat you one day!

Aiga: What do you mean me?! They’re going to beat you first!!

Valt: No way!

(Aiga and Valt start bickering in the corner)

Adrian: Would you mind keeping it down?

Aiga/Valt: *Gasps* Um. Sure!

(Aiga and Valt leave)

~The Next Morning~

Adrian: Finally, it’s finished!

(Austin wakes up groggy)

Austin: I finished mine hours ago.

Adrian: Get ready Legends, I’m going to crush all of you!

Austin: The Solar Eclipse Launcher! That’s what I’m naming mine!

Adrian: Names, huh? I guess I’ll call mine The Blackout Eclipse Launcher!

Austin: *Smiles* We’re going to become the Strongest Bladers in the World!

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So, you did pretty well for a "non-plot focused chapter"
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I guess this chapter is less plot and more "getting stronger", which makes sense. This chapter is also setting up a handful of very promising battles with interesting match-ups. Ethan is still only focused on destruction, which is kinda lame for a villain but I guess people possessed by beyspirits are like that. Adrian with Jennifer will surely be a funny battle. Towards the end of the chapter (after Aiga battles Adrian), Adrian seems more friendly which could be explained by him not being entirely possessed yet and being more humble from his loss, but maybe it's just because Austin is there. Overall, good job.

(Oct. 10, 2021  6:51 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 30, The Devious Tag Partner. We all know what's going to happen.

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The Chapter we've all been waiting for, Chapter 30. You guys will love this.

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           Beyblade Burst Yin Yang
                      Chapter 30
           The Devious Tag Partner!

Austin/Adrian: Go, Shoot!!

(Adrian and Austin pull off an Extremely Powerful Eclipse Shoots)

Adrian: Attack, Asriel!

Austin: Hit ‘em hard, Singeing Blast!!

(Both Beys start wobbling and tap each other lightly, Asriel and Anpao stop spinning)

Adrian: Grr! Not enough control.

Austin: Aw man! I’m never going to get the hang of this!!

Wakiya (On Speaker): Attention all Bladers! Our matches are starting soon, so get to The Main Arena and get ready for some heated battles!!

Austin: That’s our cue, hopefully, we can Master the Shoots before our matches.

Adrian: Don’t worry about it, I’ll pull it off when it counts.

Austin: *Smiles* Why don’t we do a Bey Bump?!

Adrian: “A Bey Bump?”

Austin: Yeah, Valt told me about it. We bump our Beys together wishing each other good luck!

(Austin picks Anpao up and holds it up)

Austin: C’mon, what do you say?

Adrian: Luck isn’t real.

Austin: Please!!

Adrian: No.

Austin: I SAID PLEASE!!!!

Adrian: Ah! Fine.

(Adrian taps Asriel into Anpao as Both Beys glimmer, Adrian walks away)

Austin: You’ll totally win your match now!

~In The Main Arena~

(Austin runs up to the Bleachers)

Hikaru: You made it, you almost missed it!

Austin: Yeah, I got caught up in Practice!

Ren: I’m shocked you almost missed Adrian’s battle.

Austin: He said I needed to practice more so that’s what I did!

Hyuga: It’s starting!!

Hanami: Good Morning all you wonderful Blading Champions! Today, we’ll be diving into the First Match of the Second Round!! In the Red Corner, we’ve got Two Bladers that have Bad Blood together but are utter powerhouses! It’s Adrian Saito and Jennifer Pratton!!

(Adrian and Jennifer walk out to the Stage)

Jennifer: Golly, this battle will be so fun! Especially with the Powerful and Mighty, Adrian Saito!

Adrian: Whatever games you're trying to play on me aren’t gonna work.

Jennifer: Me? Tricking you? No way, why would I do that to my Best Friend?!

Adrian: I don’t do “Friends.”

Hanami: Our Second Tag Team is a Calm and Cool duo! It’s Illius and Acheros coming in hot!!

(Illius and Acheros walks up to the stadium)

Acheros: I’m going to utterly crush you in this match.

Illius: *Grins*

Jennifer: Me and my buddy, Adrian will totally be the winners!

Adrian: Not buddies.

Jennifer (Thoughts): *Grins* I’ll play along for a while then take Asriel out and win this battle for myself! I’ll admit, Adrian isn’t the easiest to trick!

Hanami: Our Bladers are raring to go so why don’t we start this thing already!!

Drone: First Battle!

(Adrian looks over at Jennifer as she grins evilly)

Adrian (Thoughts): She’s trying to take Asriel out. Well, she’s going to be taken out by her own plan!

Acheros (Thoughts): I’ll be going on the Defensive while Illius takes them out with Ifrit’s unbelievable Attack Power!!

(Acheros puts Aeneas in Attack Mode)

Illius (Thoughts): Ifrit will crush them with its fangs!!

(Jennifer puts Joker in Attack Mode)

Drone: Ready? Set!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Adrian/Jennifer/Acheros/Illius: Go, Shoot!!

(Adrian pulls off an Incredibly Powerful Eclipse Shoots while everyone else pulls off extremely powerful Eclipse Shoots)

Adrian: Go, Asriel!!

(Asriel leans on its driver and kicks off the stadium with amazing speed)

Hanami: Asriel starts off with a powerful dash for the center!!

Austin: He nailed the Shoot!!

Illius: *Roars* Go, Ifrit!!

Jennifer: *Grins” Lil’ Jenny won’t let you pass!

(Ifrit tries going after Asriel but gets stopped by Joker’s powerful strike getting sent flying in the air)

Hanami: Ifrit’s been sent flying!

Acheros: Go for the center, Aeneas!!

Adrian: Twilight Shoot!!

(Aeneas takes the center as Asriel launches an extremely powerful barrage of attacks)

Hanami: It’s Aeneas Powerful Defense Vs. Asriel’s Powerful Strikes! Who will win this incredible battle of wills?!

(Ifrit starts crashing back down to the stadium with incredible power)

Illius: Beast Pounce!!

(Ifrit slams into Joker from above, Joker uses its Blade to slash back at Ifrit)

Hanami: Ifrit, The Mighty Jungle Beast pounces on Joker and chews it up!!

Jennifer: Counter, Rogue Judgement!!

(Joker uses its Rubber Blade to send Ifrit flying into the wall, Ifrit starts wobbling)

Hanami: Joker has landed a Powerful Blow!!

(Aeneas continues to get pummeled by Asriel’s powerful attacks)

Acheros: Hang in there, Dire Guard!!

(Aeneas’ Blades Glow as it blocks Asriel’s Attacks)

Adrian: *Gasps*

Hanami: Aeneas is now unaffected By Asriel’s powerful attacks! While Ifrit’s barely hanging in there as Joker makes its pursuit to finish it off!!

Jennifer: Joker, hit Ifrit into Asriel!!

All: *Gasps*

Adrian: Grr! I knew it!!

(Joker slams into Ifrit sending it flying into Asriel, Asriel gets sent flying high into the air as Ifrit Bursts)

Hanami: Joker has burst Ifrit but turned on its Teammate!!

Bell: Grr! The Demon King doesn’t approve of this!!

Hikaru: You traitor!!

Hyuga: Not cool!!

Jennifer: I’ll finish this myself, Rogue Gamble!!

(Joker speeds up and starts clashing wildly with Aeneas, Aeneas defense starts failing)

Acheros: *Gasps* No!!

Hanami: Joker’s going for the finishing blow!!

(Asriel starts glowing Purple and Golden as Adrian’s Resonance Aura consumes him)

Possessed Adrian: Nobody turns on me like that!!!

(Asriel starts crashing back down to the stadium at high speeds)

Hanami: Asriel’s coming back down to earth!!

Jennifer: *Gasps* I thought I finished you!

Possessed Adrian: Twilight Blight!!!

(Asriel crashes back down to the stadium and causes an Extreme Explosion causing Power to erupt from the stadium)

All: Aah!!

Hanami: Power is bursting at the seams from the stadium!!

(The Smoke clears as Asriel spins in the center around Aeneas and Joker in their Bursted State, the stadium gets covered with cracks and gets smudged with Black Dust)

Jennifer/Acheros: Seriously?!

Possessed Adrian: *Roars* I’m The Winner!!!

Drone: Twilight Asriel and Rogue Joker are the winners!!

Hanami: Amazing, Asriel has just Burst both Aeneas and Joker with a powerful Attack!!

Jennifer: You little-

Adrian: Oh I’m sorry. Is it my fault that you tried tricking me into losing and I picked up the slack?!

Jennifer: Grr!!

Adrian: That’s what I thought.

(Adrian walks right past Jennifer as she screams in Rage)

Austin: Adrian…

~Right Before Austin’s Battle~

Hanami: Alright folks, this battle is going to be an interesting one! It’s Our Raging Sun and The Pirate Scavenger Vs. The Aqua Queen and The Demon King!!

Drone: First Battle!

Bell: *Laughs* The Demon King will single-handedly defeat you!

Thalia: Hey! Don’t forget about me!!

Bell: Sorry, that’s usually my Battle Catchphrase.

Po: Grr!! I’m the one who’s going to Single-Handedly blow you guys away!!!

Austin (Thoughts): I can’t pull off a Successful Shoot with my new Solar Launcher Upgrade. It’s too powerful to control.

Anpao: Is that so?

(Anpao starts glowing brightly as Austin gets pulled into a White Void)

Austin: I’ve been practicing so hard but I can’t control The Solar Launcher.

Anpao: That’s because your Shoot is too precise.

Austin: Um. Isn’t it supposed to be Precise?

Anpao: When you’re using a Powerful Launcher you’ve got to Shoot with all your strength and more! You should only be using Precise Shoots once you’ve gotten used to Pulling with all your strength!!

Austin: Anpao…

Anpao: Shoot with all your strength and more! So we can surpass Adrian and Asriel!!

Austin: You’ve got it, I’ll Shoot with all the strength I’ve got!

(Anpao Smiles as Austin gets pulled out of the White Void)

Austin (Thoughts): Let’s go with the Sol Layer in Attack Mode!

(Austin attaches the Sol Layer and puts Anpao in Attack Mode)

Po: Don’t lose too fast, you hear?

Austin: *Grins* Of course, I’m planning on winning this thing!

(Austin’s Resonance Aura surrounds him as it glows brightly)

Po: Heh. Looks like your someone I can work with!

Bell: Belial will crush you!

Drone: Ready? Set!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Bell/Thalia/Austin/Po: Go, Shoot!!

(Austin pulls off an Incredibly Powerful Eclipse Shoots while everyone else pulls off Powerful Eclipse Shoots)

Austin: Show them what we’ve got, Anpao!!

(Anpao enters a Golden Flare and kicks off the stadium at full speed)

Hanami: Am I seeing things right or is this exactly how the First Match started!

Thalia: Hold your ground, Trident!!

Po: Pirate Shoot!!

(Pirate hits Trident with a Powerful Barrage of attacks, Trident struggles to hold itself in the center)

Thalia: No way!

Hanami: Pirate goes in for the attacks and Trident’s barely hanging in there! Just keep swimming, Trident!

Anpao: Sol Strike!

(Anpao slams into Belial at full power sending it flying in the air)

Bell: *Gasps*

Hanami: Belial’s been sent flying!

Bell: Aah! Belial!!

(Bell’s Resonance Aura flares up as Belial blazes out of the Bey)

Bell: Torpedo Counter!

(Belial rebounds off the wall using its Rubber)

Hanami: And Belial stays in the game!

Austin: *Roars* Anpao!!!

(Austin’s Resonance Aura flares up as Anpao blazes out of the Bey)

Austin: Show them our True Power, Sol Beam!!

(Anpao picks up speed and starts flickering with Blazing Flames as it slams into Trident and Belial)

Ethan (Thoughts): *Gasps* It’s not very strong but is that… Blaze?!

Anpao: *Roars*

Po: Help it, Typhoon Cannon!!

(Pirate Slams into Trident and Belial with Anpao, a huge explosion ouccers)

Po/Austin: Take ‘em down!!

Hanami: The power is through the roof!!

(Trident and Belial gets sent flying and both Burst)

Bell/Thalia: *Gasps*

Drone: Sol Anpao and Typhoon Pirate are the Winners!!

(Austin falls down to the floor)

Austin: *Heavily Pants* We won.

Hanami: Incredible! Anpao and Pirate pull out all the stops and Burst Belial and Trident!!

Bell: *Laughs* You defeated The Demon King, you should be proud!

Thalia: Grr! We’ll win next time!!

(Bell and Thalia walk away)

Po: I was wrong about you, you’re a strong Blader with amazing power! I respect that!! *Laughs*

Austin: Thanks, I feel so drained though.

Po: Good luck with that!

(Po walks away)

Austin: Po…

Adrian (Thoughts): Nice job, Austin.

Ethan (Thoughts): I swore I saw Anpao enter Blaze for a Split-Second. Austin Saito, you’d better make your Blaze stronger so I can swallow it whole!

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(Oct. 10, 2021  6:51 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 30, The Devious Tag Partner. We all know what's going to happen.

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The Chapter we've all been waiting for, Chapter 30. You guys will love this.

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           Beyblade Burst Yin Yang
                      Chapter 30
           The Devious Tag Partner!

Austin/Adrian: Go, Shoot!!

(Adrian and Austin pull off an Extremely Powerful Eclipse Shoots)

Adrian: Attack, Asriel!

Austin: Hit ‘em hard, Singeing Blast!!

(Both Beys start wobbling and tap each other lightly, Asriel and Anpao stop spinning)

Adrian: Grr! Not enough control.

Austin: Aw man! I’m never going to get the hang of this!!

Wakiya (On Speaker): Attention all Bladers! Our matches are starting soon, so get to The Main Arena and get ready for some heated battles!!

Austin: That’s our cue, hopefully, we can Master the Shoots before our matches.

Adrian: Don’t worry about it, I’ll pull it off when it counts.

Austin: *Smiles* Why don’t we do a Bey Bump?!

Adrian: “A Bey Bump?”

Austin: Yeah, Valt told me about it. We bump our Beys together wishing each other good luck!

(Austin picks Anpao up and holds it up)

Austin: C’mon, what do you say?

Adrian: Luck isn’t real.

Austin: Please!!

Adrian: No.

Austin: I SAID PLEASE!!!!

Adrian: Ah! Fine.

(Adrian taps Asriel into Anpao as Both Beys glimmer, Adrian walks away)

Austin: You’ll totally win your match now!

~In The Main Arena~

(Austin runs up to the Bleachers)

Hikaru: You made it, you almost missed it!

Austin: Yeah, I got caught up in Practice!

Ren: I’m shocked you almost missed Adrian’s battle.

Austin: He said I needed to practice more so that’s what I did!

Hyuga: It’s starting!!

Hanami: Good Morning all you wonderful Blading Champions! Today, we’ll be diving into the First Match of the Second Round!! In the Red Corner, we’ve got Two Bladers that have Bad Blood together but are utter powerhouses! It’s Adrian Saito and Jennifer Pratton!!

(Adrian and Jennifer walk out to the Stage)

Jennifer: Golly, this battle will be so fun! Especially with the Powerful and Mighty, Adrian Saito!

Adrian: Whatever games you're trying to play on me aren’t gonna work.

Jennifer: Me? Tricking you? No way, why would I do that to my Best Friend?!

Adrian: I don’t do “Friends.”

Hanami: Our Second Tag Team is a Calm and Cool duo! It’s Illius and Acheros coming in hot!!

(Illius and Acheros walks up to the stadium)

Acheros: I’m going to utterly crush you in this match.

Illius: *Grins*

Jennifer: Me and my buddy, Adrian will totally be the winners!

Adrian: Not buddies.

Jennifer (Thoughts): *Grins* I’ll play along for a while then take Asriel out and win this battle for myself! I’ll admit, Adrian isn’t the easiest to trick!

Hanami: Our Bladers are raring to go so why don’t we start this thing already!!

Drone: First Battle!

(Adrian looks over at Jennifer as she grins evilly)

Adrian (Thoughts): She’s trying to take Asriel out. Well, she’s going to be taken out by her own plan!

Acheros (Thoughts): I’ll be going on the Defensive while Illius takes them out with Ifrit’s unbelievable Attack Power!!

(Acheros puts Aeneas in Attack Mode)

Illius (Thoughts): Ifrit will crush them with its fangs!!

(Jennifer puts Joker in Attack Mode)

Drone: Ready? Set!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Adrian/Jennifer/Acheros/Illius: Go, Shoot!!

(Adrian pulls off an Incredibly Powerful Eclipse Shoots while everyone else pulls off extremely powerful Eclipse Shoots)

Adrian: Go, Asriel!!

(Asriel leans on its driver and kicks off the stadium with amazing speed)

Hanami: Asriel starts off with a powerful dash for the center!!

Austin: He nailed the Shoot!!

Illius: *Roars* Go, Ifrit!!

Jennifer: *Grins” Lil’ Jenny won’t let you pass!

(Ifrit tries going after Asriel but gets stopped by Joker’s powerful strike getting sent flying in the air)

Hanami: Ifrit’s been sent flying!

Acheros: Go for the center, Aeneas!!

Adrian: Twilight Shoot!!

(Aeneas takes the center as Asriel launches an extremely powerful barrage of attacks)

Hanami: It’s Aeneas Powerful Defense Vs. Asriel’s Powerful Strikes! Who will win this incredible battle of wills?!

(Ifrit starts crashing back down to the stadium with incredible power)

Illius: Beast Pounce!!

(Ifrit slams into Joker from above, Joker uses its Blade to slash back at Ifrit)

Hanami: Ifrit, The Mighty Jungle Beast pounces on Joker and chews it up!!

Jennifer: Counter, Rogue Judgement!!

(Joker uses its Rubber Blade to send Ifrit flying into the wall, Ifrit starts wobbling)

Hanami: Joker has landed a Powerful Blow!!

(Aeneas continues to get pummeled by Asriel’s powerful attacks)

Acheros: Hang in there, Dire Guard!!

(Aeneas’ Blades Glow as it blocks Asriel’s Attacks)

Adrian: *Gasps*

Hanami: Aeneas is now unaffected By Asriel’s powerful attacks! While Ifrit’s barely hanging in there as Joker makes its pursuit to finish it off!!

Jennifer: Joker, hit Ifrit into Asriel!!

All: *Gasps*

Adrian: Grr! I knew it!!

(Joker slams into Ifrit sending it flying into Asriel, Asriel gets sent flying high into the air as Ifrit Bursts)

Hanami: Joker has burst Ifrit but turned on its Teammate!!

Bell: Grr! The Demon King doesn’t approve of this!!

Hikaru: You traitor!!

Hyuga: Not cool!!

Jennifer: I’ll finish this myself, Rogue Gamble!!

(Joker speeds up and starts clashing wildly with Aeneas, Aeneas defense starts failing)

Acheros: *Gasps* No!!

Hanami: Joker’s going for the finishing blow!!

(Asriel starts glowing Purple and Golden as Adrian’s Resonance Aura consumes him)

Possessed Adrian: Nobody turns on me like that!!!

(Asriel starts crashing back down to the stadium at high speeds)

Hanami: Asriel’s coming back down to earth!!

Jennifer: *Gasps* I thought I finished you!

Possessed Adrian: Twilight Blight!!!

(Asriel crashes back down to the stadium and causes an Extreme Explosion causing Power to erupt from the stadium)

All: Aah!!

Hanami: Power is bursting at the seams from the stadium!!

(The Smoke clears as Asriel spins in the center around Aeneas and Joker in their Bursted State, the stadium gets covered with cracks and gets smudged with Black Dust)

Jennifer/Acheros: Seriously?!

Possessed Adrian: *Roars* I’m The Winner!!!

Drone: Twilight Asriel and Rogue Joker are the winners!!

Hanami: Amazing, Asriel has just Burst both Aeneas and Joker with a powerful Attack!!

Jennifer: You little-

Adrian: Oh I’m sorry. Is it my fault that you tried tricking me into losing and I picked up the slack?!

Jennifer: Grr!!

Adrian: That’s what I thought.

(Adrian walks right past Jennifer as she screams in Rage)

Austin: Adrian…

~Right Before Austin’s Battle~

Hanami: Alright folks, this battle is going to be an interesting one! It’s Our Raging Sun and The Pirate Scavenger Vs. The Aqua Queen and The Demon King!!

Drone: First Battle!

Bell: *Laughs* The Demon King will single-handedly defeat you!

Thalia: Hey! Don’t forget about me!!

Bell: Sorry, that’s usually my Battle Catchphrase.

Po: Grr!! I’m the one who’s going to Single-Handedly blow you guys away!!!

Austin (Thoughts): I can’t pull off a Successful Shoot with my new Solar Launcher Upgrade. It’s too powerful to control.

Anpao: Is that so?

(Anpao starts glowing brightly as Austin gets pulled into a White Void)

Austin: I’ve been practicing so hard but I can’t control The Solar Launcher.

Anpao: That’s because your Shoot is too precise.

Austin: Um. Isn’t it supposed to be Precise?

Anpao: When you’re using a Powerful Launcher you’ve got to Shoot with all your strength and more! You should only be using Precise Shoots once you’ve gotten used to Pulling with all your strength!!

Austin: Anpao…

Anpao: Shoot with all your strength and more! So we can surpass Adrian and Asriel!!

Austin: You’ve got it, I’ll Shoot with all the strength I’ve got!

(Anpao Smiles as Austin gets pulled out of the White Void)

Austin (Thoughts): Let’s go with the Sol Layer in Attack Mode!

(Austin attaches the Sol Layer and puts Anpao in Attack Mode)

Po: Don’t lose too fast, you hear?

Austin: *Grins* Of course, I’m planning on winning this thing!

(Austin’s Resonance Aura surrounds him as it glows brightly)

Po: Heh. Looks like your someone I can work with!

Bell: Belial will crush you!

Drone: Ready? Set!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Bell/Thalia/Austin/Po: Go, Shoot!!

(Austin pulls off an Incredibly Powerful Eclipse Shoots while everyone else pulls off Powerful Eclipse Shoots)

Austin: Show them what we’ve got, Anpao!!

(Anpao enters a Golden Flare and kicks off the stadium at full speed)

Hanami: Am I seeing things right or is this exactly how the First Match started!

Thalia: Hold your ground, Trident!!

Po: Pirate Shoot!!

(Pirate hits Trident with a Powerful Barrage of attacks, Trident struggles to hold itself in the center)

Thalia: No way!

Hanami: Pirate goes in for the attacks and Trident’s barely hanging in there! Just keep swimming, Trident!

Anpao: Sol Strike!

(Anpao slams into Belial at full power sending it flying in the air)

Bell: *Gasps*

Hanami: Belial’s been sent flying!

Bell: Aah! Belial!!

(Bell’s Resonance Aura flares up as Belial blazes out of the Bey)

Bell: Torpedo Counter!

(Belial rebounds off the wall using its Rubber)

Hanami: And Belial stays in the game!

Austin: *Roars* Anpao!!!

(Austin’s Resonance Aura flares up as Anpao blazes out of the Bey)

Austin: Show them our True Power, Sol Beam!!

(Anpao picks up speed and starts flickering with Blazing Flames as it slams into Trident and Belial)

Ethan (Thoughts): *Gasps* It’s not very strong but is that… Blaze?!

Anpao: *Roars*

Po: Help it, Typhoon Cannon!!

(Pirate Slams into Trident and Belial with Anpao, a huge explosion ouccers)

Po/Austin: Take ‘em down!!

Hanami: The power is through the roof!!

(Trident and Belial gets sent flying and both Burst)

Bell/Thalia: *Gasps*

Drone: Sol Anpao and Typhoon Pirate are the Winners!!

(Austin falls down to the floor)

Austin: *Heavily Pants* We won.

Hanami: Incredible! Anpao and Pirate pull out all the stops and Burst Belial and Trident!!

Bell: *Laughs* You defeated The Demon King, you should be proud!

Thalia: Grr! We’ll win next time!!

(Bell and Thalia walk away)

Po: I was wrong about you, you’re a strong Blader with amazing power! I respect that!! *Laughs*

Austin: Thanks, I feel so drained though.

Po: Good luck with that!

(Po walks away)

Austin: Po…

Adrian (Thoughts): Nice job, Austin.

Ethan (Thoughts): I swore I saw Anpao enter Blaze for a Split-Second. Austin Saito, you’d better make your Blaze stronger so I can swallow it whole!

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(Oct. 15, 2021  11:32 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 31 has been released and Ethan has pushed his Limits!

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         Beyblade Burst Yin Yang
                       Chapter 31
The Burning Flares Vs. The Scorching Blaze!

(Everybody waits in the Cafeteria for Breakfast)

Austin/Hyuga: What’s taking so long, I’m starving!

Bell: The Demon King demands to know what’s taking so long!!

(Everybody starts complaining as Wakiya gets on a box with a Microphone)
Adrian: Wonder what he’s blabbing about today.

Wakiya: Attention everyone! Unfortunately, Ange slipped and hurt her Ankle so she won’t be able to make Breakfast today. But she’ll be out of the infirmary by Lunch with a Wheelchair so you’ll be skipping Breakfast today. Sorry!

All: Boo!!!

Wakiya: Hey!! It’s not my fault that we couldn’t have breakfast today. I’m as displeased as you are!!

Po: Sure, you’re giving us that sorry excuse again!!

Wakiya: Grr!!

(Wakiya walks out of the cafeteria as everyone starts complaining even more)

Ren: I need to eat, you can’t expect me to battle like this!

Hikaru: C’mon, I can’t go any longer!!

Hyuga: I want food!

Adrian: Guys-

Bell: The Demon King demands he gets his food or he’ll be mad!!

Thalia: I was looking forward to bacon today!!

Adrian: Grr!! Stop it!!!

(Adrian’s voice booms in the cafeteria)

Adrian: You’re all so annoying!!

(Adrian storms off into the Kitchen)

Austin: Did… We make him mad?

Po: Like he’s the only one!

Thalia: Yeah, I still want my food!!

(Everyone starts complaining louder than ever)

Hikaru: This is not good.

Bell: We’ve got to-

(A delicious smell fills the room)

Austin: *Sniffs* That smells like…

Hyuga: Breakfast!!

(The Kitchen Serving Window opens with Adrian inside)

All: *Gasps*

Adrian: Come get breakfast! Form a line!!

(Everyone rushes to get in line as Adrian serves Eggs, Bacon, and Pancakes)

Hikaru: Since when can Adrian cook?

Austin: Don’t look at me, this is a new one for me too!

(Austin, Hikaru, Bell, Hyuga, and Ren get to the front of the line after everyone)

Austin: Adrian, since when do you know how to cook?

Adrian: You don’t know everything about me.

Hyuga: Yum! This is seriously good!!

Hikaru: Seriously, when did you learn how to cook?

Adrian: I took a Cooking Class in School plus mom thought I should learn how to cook early.

Hyuga: You’re a really good cook. I want to have this every day!!

Hikaru: Hyuga’s right, this is seriously good.

Austin: Why didn't you ever tell me?

Adrian: You never asked me and it was unnecessary.

Austin: You could’ve just said “BTW Austin, I know how to cook!”

Hikaru: *Laughs* At least everyone’s happy!

Hyuga: Yeah, this food’s amazing!

~In The Airship’s Hallways 10 Minutes After Breakfast~

(Adrian passes Valt in the Hallways, Adrian starts staring him down)

Valt: Need something?

Adrian: I do need something, a battle!

(Adrian’s Dark Flare Surrounds him Sparkling Gold as his eyes glow purple)

Valt (Thoughts): Even though he’s getting closer to Light he’s still consumed by Darkness.

Adrian: What do you say, Valt?!

Valt: I accept your challenge!

(Everyone gets out of their Dorms and starts surrounding us)

Austin: Adrian’s battling Valt?!

Bell: Apparently, personally I could see this going in any way.

Hikaru: Yeah, this battle will be one for the records!

(Everyone follows me and Valt outside to Port of the Ship, Me and Valt get ready for our battle)

Adrian: Valt, I lost to you last time but I won’t be losing again!

Valt: I’ll still be beating you in this match, no matter what!

(The Drone turns on and starts recording)

Drone: First Battle!

Valt (Thoughts): His Resonance is still corrupting him but not as fast as it was before. He wants to get stronger but this just isn’t the way!

Adrian (Thoughts): I’ll prove to you and the world I’m the strongest Blader!

(Ethan would watch the match from the corner)

Ethan: Adrian… Let’s see how powerful your Darkness truly is!

Drone: Ready? Set!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Me/Valt: Go, Shoot!!

(Me and Valt both pull off Incredibly Powerful Eclipse Shoots)

Valt: Get it there, Rush Shoot!!

(Valkyrie speeds up thanks to the ramp and slams into Asriel at full power sending it flying high in the air)

Adrian: We’re not done yet!!

(Asriel hits the wall and hangs in there as Valkyrie speeds around the stadium at full speed)

Possessed Adrian: *Roars* Blast them into dust!!

(Asriel and Valkyrie start clashing wildly holding nothing back)

Valt: Strike, Holy Bound!!

(Valkyrie hits Asriel with its Bound Blade sending it flying up the huge ramp)

Austin (Thoughts): Please don’t push it, Adrian.

Possessed Adrian: Counter now!!

(Asriel lands in the Speed Crater and starts picking up extreme speed, Asriel shoots out of the Crater and slams into Valkyrie sending it flying)

Valt: Super Holy Jet Shoot!!

(Valkyrie rebounds off the wall at full speed and slams into Asriel, Valkyrie hits Asriel with an extremely powerful barrage of attacks, Purple Lights slash at Adrian)

Possessed Adrian: *Roars in Pain*

Ethan (Thoughts): His Dark Resonance seems to whip back at him hard.

Possessed Adrian: I won’t give up, no matter what!!

(Asriel leans on its driver and speeds off)

Valt: *Gasps*

Possessed Adrian: Counter with Twilight Shoot!!

(Asriel hits Valkyrie with powerful strikes, Valkyrie takes many huge attacks)

Valt: Tch… We can’t keep going like this!!

Possessed Adrian: *Grins Evilly* Say Goodbye to Valkyrie!!

Valt: Never… Valkyrie!!!

(Valt’s Resonance Aura flares up as Valkyrie blazes out of the Bey)

Valt: Strike it down, Holy Scimitar!!

(Valkyrie speeds up and slashes at Asriel, Asriel gets sent flying high in the air)

Bell: Valt countered!

Hikaru: It’s the end of the line for Adrian…

Possessed Adrian: *Roars* Asriel!!!

(Adrian’s Dark Resonance Aura flares up as Asriel blazes out of the Bey, Asriel enters Dark Flare glowing Purple but Sparkling Gold)

Possessed Adrian: Blow them into bits, Twilight Blight!!!

(Asriel slams down on Valkyrie super hard as the stadium blows up from the intensity sending a huge Purple Beam into the air)

All: Aah!!

(Valkyrie gets sent flying up in the air and bursts)

Valt: *Gasps*

Drone: It’s Twilight Asriel with a Burst Finish! Adrian Saito is the winner!!

Adrian: *Grins* What happened to the Legend Of Legends?!

Valt: Tch…

(Valt picks up Valkyrie’s parts as Adrian stares him down with an evil grin)

Valt (Thoughts): He was so close.

Aiga: Valt…

(Ethan walks away)

Ethan (Thoughts): Adrian Saito’s Flames are strong. Just like his Brother’s. They work together like Yin Yang. I’ll swallow their Blazes when they're good and ready!!

~In The Main Arena~

Hanami: What is up with all you Awesome Bladers?! Today, we’ll be diving Head First into the Last Match of the 2nd Round! I’m sure our Bladers are both bursting with excitement and joy as we wrap up the 2nd Round! So, let’s dive right in with our introductions!! In the Red Corner, we’ve got a Flaring Hot Duo, The Tag Team League’s World Champions! It’s Hikaru and Hyuga Asahi!!

(Hikaru and Hyuga walk out to the stage with determination)

Hyuga: We’re going to send your Beys flying!!

Hikaru: The Hero’s always gotta win in the end!

Hanami: And in the Blue Corner, we’ve got The Darkest King with the Ragnaruk Master himself! It’s Ethan Gilten and Rentaro Kiyama!!

(Ren and Ethan walk out to the stage)

Ren: *Grins* Ragnaruk will slash through the winds and blow you away!!

Hyuga: We’ll send Ragnaruk flying out of the center!!

Hikaru: Yeah!

Drone: First Battle!!

(Everyone takes their stance)

Hikaru: Hyuga, let’s end this fast with a Twin Strike.

Hyuga: Yeah, we’ll hit ‘em super hard!!

Ren: Let’s win this together, okay?

Ethan: I have no interest in working with you.

Ren: Grr!! You’ve got no choice!!

Ethan: That’s where you're wrong.

Drone: Ready? Set!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Ethan/Ren/Hikaru/Hyuga: Go, Shoot!!

(Everyone pulls off extremely powerful Eclipse Shoots)

Hanami: Eclipse Shoots surround the stadium!!

(Ragnaruk goes for the center as all the Beys circle around the Stadium)

Ren: True Surging Tempest!!

Ethan: *Roars* Get out of my way!!

(As Ragnaruk tries creating a tornado Erebus speeds up and slams into Ragnaruk, Ragnaruk Bursts)

Ren: What?!?

Hanami: Seriously?! Erebus has turned on its Partner and is going on solo!!

Ethan: You were getting in the way.

Ren: Tch…

(Erebus takes the center as Helios and Hyperion start clashing fiercely creating sparks)

Hikaru/Hyuga: Twin Strike!!

(Helios and Hyperion create huge sparks and head towards Erebus)

Ethan: Is that all?!?

Hanami: Helios and Hyperion are going for their Ultimate Twin Strike!!

(Helios and Hyperion slam into Erebus sending it flying in the air, Ethan’s Blaze surrounds him as he grins evilly)

Ethan: Give me more!!!

(Erebus hits the wall and speeds around the center)

Hanami: Erebus hangs in!

Hyuga: Vroom, Vroom! Hyperion!!

Hikaru: Fight with all you’ve got, Helios!!

(Helios and Hyperion both hit Erebus with a powerful barrage of attacks, Erebus barely stays in as it leans on its driver’s plate)

Hanami: Hyperion and Helios are going at full speed!

Ethan: Requiem Bound!!

(Erebus speeds off and slams into Hyperion with its Bound Blade, Hyperion gets sent flying in the air)

Hanami: *Gasps* Hyperion’s flying!!

Hikaru: Keep it going… Hyuga!

(Hyuga Roars loudly as his Hair flares up with Fire and his Flare surrounds him like a Wild Tornado)

Hyuga: Hyperion!!!

(Hyperion enters a Burning Hot Flare as Hyperion blazes out of the Bey, Hyperion starts crashing back down to the stadium as a Raging Fireball)

Hyuga: Kindling Limit Destroyer!!!

Ethan: *Gasps*

(Hyperion slams down on Erebus at full power as Four Blades expand from Hyperion causing a massive explosion, Erebus gets sent flying into the air)

Hanami: Hyperion has countered and Erebus has been sent flying in the air!!

Hikaru: *Grins* My turn!

(Helios slams into the wall as its Limit Destroyer Gimmick activates sending it flying into the air closing in on Erebus)

Hanami: Helios goes in for the attack!!

Ethan: Keep going, Requiem Impulse!!

(Erebus creates a Purple Barrier causing Helios to slam into it and get sent flying back)

Hikaru: *Gasps*

Hanami: Helios has been blasted back!!

Hyuga: I’ve got you, Hikaru!!!

(Hyperion slams into the wall and slams into Helios causing Helios to go back in the stadium as Hyperion rams into the wall again picking up more speed)

Ethan: Tch…

Hanami: Helios has been saved by Hyperion at the last minute!!

(Erebus lands back in the stadium but gets hit by an extremely powerful barrage of attacks from Helios and Hyperion as Hyuga and Hikaru’s Flares burn hotter than ever)

Hikaru/Hyuga: This is the Flare of Heroes!!

Ethan: *Smiles Evilly* Pitiful. Erebus!!!

(Ethan’s Blaze burns as a Burning WIld Tornado surrounding him as Erebus blazes out of the Bey, Erebus absorbs Spin from Helios and speeds up, Erebus creates a Huge Tornado)

All: *Gasps*

Hanami: Erebus uses its Powerful Spin to make a Powerful Counter Attack!!

Ethan: Goodbye… True Requiem Slash!!!

(Erebus slams into Helios and Hyperion with its Humongous Tornado, Helios and Hyperion get hit with a Powerful Slash attack, and both Burst instantly)

Hikaru/Hyuga: *Gasps* No!!

Drone: Requiem Erebus and Squall Ragnaruk are the Winners!!

(Hikaru falls on his knees in Utter Shock, Hyuga picks up his Bey’s Parts and looks at them sadly)

Hanami: Incredible! Erebus clutches another Victor as he has just crushed Two Champions!

Valt: Ethan…

~At The Airship’s Port~

Bell: Wakiya has another announcement?

Austin: Yeah, he said it’d be a Quick One though.

(Wakiya walks up to the stage as we closely arrive to land)

Wakiya: Attention everyone! Right now you may not know it but we’re in Spain!

All: Spain?!

Wakiya: That’s right. After the ending of Every Round, we'll be coming to a Country to fuel up on Gas. But since I’m the Best Host ever and I don’t want you to be bored. We’ll be battling a Legend from that specific area!

All: *Gasps*

Wakiya: Yup, this is also a part of the Tournament. You will be randomly chosen to battle a Legendary Blader from a Specific Region while we fuel up on Gas. Your First Opponent will be Free De La Hoya.

All: Free?!

Wakiya: That’s right! The Lucky Blader will be battling Free! Don’t worry, I’ve already Randomly selected the Blader who will be battling Free!

Po: Spill it then, who is it?!

Wakiya: The Lucky Blader is… Austin Saito!!

All: Seriously?!?

Hikaru: Looks like you’re battling Free, buddy!

(Hikaru puts his hand on Austin’s Shoulder)

Austin: *Smiles* I’m battling Free De La Hoya?! This is going to be awesome!!

Bell: I, The Ultimate Demon King has already beaten Free. So, you’d better carry on my legacy and beat Free!

Austin: Thanks, I totally will win!

Wakiya: The battle will be tomorrow Afternoon. Get yourselves ready for tomorrow if you’re going to go sightseeing or something! Wakiya Out!!

(Wakiya walks away, Adrian and Ethan would watch as Austin goofed off with the others celebrating him battling Free)

Adrian/Ethan (Thoughts): Austin, you currently don’t stand a chance against Free De La Hoya due to your current state.

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The Ultimate Battle has Risen in Chapter 6 of Mystic Clash!

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       Beyblade Burst Mystic Clash
                        Chapter 6
 Mysterious Defense, Galactic Horogium!

(I lie in my Bed looking at Vulcan remembering back on my battle with Valt)

Me (Thoughts): Valt Aoi, The current Mystic Champion. He’s a Powerful Blader, there’s no way I can beat him at my current level. I’ve just got to get stronger!!

(Vulcan starts glowing brightly as I get pulled into a White Void)

Me: I gave it my all and more! I tried my very hardest to win, but I couldn’t.

Vulcan: Every Blader starts off at One Step. With every battle whether you win or lose you choose if you take One Step Forward or One Step Back. That’s how you get stronger. Now, my question for you is… Are you going to take a Step Forward from this loss or a Step Back?

Me: I’ll always be giving it my all, no matter how many times Iose!

Vulcan: Good, keep getting stronger! Then nobody will be able to defeat you.

(I get pulled out of the White Void and return on my Bed looking at Vulcan)

Me: *Grins* I’ll keep getting stronger till I’m the Strongest in the World!

~At Harry’s House~

Harry: Victor, When I first started creating my Bey, Galactic Horogium… I just wanted to have my own Bey to battle with and have crazy awesome battles with! But, after I met you and Tristen and saw the way you battled with Valt Aoi was amazing! But I won’t let you surpass me, I’ll become Ten Times more powerful than you ever will!!

(A Shadow Figure stands behind Harry as he works)

Horogium: Keep going, we’ll beat Victor together!

Harry: *Smiles* We sure will!

~The Next Morning~

Me: Go, Shoot!!

(Victor pulls off a Powerful Mystic Shoot, Vulcan goes straight for Infinite Bahamut)

Me: Mystic Sonic Flare!!

(Vulcan slams into Infinite Bahamut and sends it flying out of the center)

Emma: You’ve leveled up since you’ve battled Valt! To think you just battled him yesterday!!

Me: *Pants* If I want to defeat Valt in a Mystic Coronation battle I have to get even stronger!

???: You’re Shoot could use some work.

Me/Emma: *Gasps*

(Me and Emma look to the corner of the room to see Tristen leaning on the wall)

Me: Tristen? When’d you get here?

Tristen: Let’s cut to the chase. When you shoot you need to have a proper form. Your form is all kinds of sloppy.

Me: Excuse me?!

Tristen: I’m just saying. You need to pull the String with more power and precision, if you do that you’ll become way stronger!

Emma: He’s kinda right.

Me: Fine, let’s try your theory out!

(I hold up Vulcan as I grin)

Tristen: I’ll take you on any day!

Emma: First Battle!

Me (Thoughts): If I nail this Shoot I’ll blow Triton out of the water, just gotta make my Shoot more powerful!

(I enter a Powerful Stance as everyone stares at me)

Tristen: *Grins* Whatever tips I gave you won’t help you in this battle!

Me: We’ll see about that!

Emma: Ready? Set!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Me/Tristen: Go, Shoot!!

(Me and Tristen pull off powerful Mystic Shoots)

Tristen: Go for the center, Triton!

Me: Attack!!

(Vulcan picks up a huge amount of speed and slams into Triton with its powerful Blade, Triton gets sent flying high in the air)

All: *Gasps*

Emma: Vulcan’s attack power has gone to its Limit, I’ve never seen it attack like this!

Tristen: Hang in there, Triton!!

(Triton slams into the wall with its rubber and rebounds off)

Tristen: Aqua Counter!!

Me: Send it flying, Upper Strike!!

(Triton and Vulcan start clashing crazily, Vulcan unleashes a Powerful Slash Attack on Triton, Triton takes the center but starts wobbling)

Tristen: Seriously?!

Emma: Vulcan decreased Triton’s Stamina!

Me: Give it your all, Vulcan!!

(My Resonance Aura flares up as Vulcan blazes out of the Bey, Vulcan starts Sparkling Gold and Flickers with Flames)

Tristen: He’s gone to the extreme!

Me: Mystic Sonic Flare!!

(Vulcan slams into Triton at full power causing a huge outburst of Golden Flames, Triton gets sent flying and bursts)

Tristen: Tch…

Emma: It’s Mystic Vulcan with a Burst Finish! Victor Homura is the winner!!

Me: *Grins Happily* Don’t ever underestimate us!

Tristen: You got lucky once, I bet you--

(Emma’s Tablet starts beeping)

All: *Gasps*

Emma: Hmm…

Me: What’s going on?

Emma: It says you’ve got a Mystic Coronation battle with… Harry Zen?!?

Tristen: Harry?! Isn’t that the guy we hung out with yesterday?

Me: Yeah… I’ll gladly take him on!

Emma: Then I guess you’re accepting. The match is down in the park!

(I run off at full speed)

Tristen: Wait for us!

~At The Park~

(I run over to the stadium at the Park where Harry is waiting)

Harry: I’ve been waiting for you for 6 Minutes!! Do you know how late you are?!

Me: But the match officially starts now.

Harry: So?!? I wanted to have a Practice Match before we had our official Match! Grr!!!

Me: Um… Sorry I guess.

(Tristen and Emma catch up to us as the Drone flies down from the sky)

Drone: This Mystic Coronation battle will be First to 3 Points. Time Outs will only be eligible for up to 5 Minutes. First Battle!

Harry: Meet my new Bey. Galactic Horogium!!

(Harry holds up Galactic Horogium)

Me: Woah! You got a New Bey?!

Harry: Yup, Inspect it all you want!

Me (Thoughts): Galactic Horogium, a Clockwise Spinning Defense Type. It has 6 Big Blades and 6 Little Blades on it. The 6 Big Blades can disperse damage while the littler ones hold the Bey steady. Once it takes enough damage its Blades sink in a Connect with the Other Blades turning it into a Perfect Circle making it almost impossible to attack! Its Driver, Dazzle is like the Moment Driver except it’s taller, has Free Spinning Rubber in the middle and the base is wider. This Bey looks like the Ultimate Defense Type, but I’ll burst it before it has a chance to use its Defense!

Harry: I’m so excited to crush you!

Tristen: This kid is something else.

Drone: Ready? Set!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Me/Harry: Go, Shoot!!

(Me and Harry pull off powerful Mystic Shoots)

Harry: Go for it, Horogium!

Me: Attack, Vulcan!

(Vulcan swings in for an Attack but barely misses Horogium)

All: No way!

Harry: *Grins* I knew you’d start off with an Attack!

Me: We’re just getting started, Mystic Shoot!!

(Vulcan leans on its driver and picks up speed, Vulcan hits Horogium with a barrage of powerful hits, Horogium doesn’t move an inch)

Tristen: How can a Bey be this stable?!

Emma: I honestly don't know. Its Powerful Defense combined with its unbeatable Stability is going to be a challenge for Vulcan!

Me: Show them your Upper Strike!

(Vulcan leans on its driver and speeds up, Vulcan slams into Horogium and sends it flying away from the center)

Tristen: It didn’t get sent flying in the air?!

Harry: That’s because of the rubber on the Dazzle Driver. It grips onto the stadium floor and never let's go!

Me (Thoughts): Tch… I’m backed in a serious corner.

(Vulcan starts glowing brightly)

Vulcan: Don’t give up, keep going!

Me: You’re right, strike it down!

(Vulcan continuously leans on its driver and gains more and more speed)

Emma: I don’t get it, why is he so focused on gaining more speed?

Tristen: Because the faster it is the more of a punch it packs! Victor’s trying to whittle down its Stamina then Burst it!

Emma: Seriously?! Keep going, Vulcan!

Harry: You’ll never beat us, Galactic Guard!!

(Horogium’s Twelve Blades start glowing as it blocks all Vulcan’s attacks)

Tristen: Tch… Keep going, Vulcan!!

Me: You won’t defeat us, not anytime soon! Vulcan!!!

(My Resonance Aura flares up as Vulcan blazes out of the Bey, Vulcan starts Sparkling Gold and Red)

Me: End this with a Bang! Mystic Sonic Flare!!

(Vulcan slams into Horogium sending it flying up the stadium slope)

Harry: Aah! Horogium!!

(Harry’s Resonance Aura flares up as Horogium blazes out of the Bey with a roaring battle cry)

Harry: Coming in hot, Galactic Counter Crash!!

Me: What?!

Emma/Tristen: What?!

(Horogium grins on its driver and picks up massive speed, Horogium slams into Vulcan as it bursts right before my eyes)

Me: No--No Way!!

Drone: Galactic Horogium with a Burst Finish, Harry Zen claims 2 Points!!

Harry: Aw yeah! I’m racking up the points!!

(I pick up Vulcan’s parts and put it back together)

Me (Thoughts): He only got One Point, we can still turn this around!

Tristen: C’mon, Victor! If you lost to me you can’t lose to him!!

Harry: I’m so going to win this battle!

(Me and Harry’s Resonance Aura flares up as we stare each other down and our Beys Avatars stand behind us)

Me/Harry: I’ll be the one winning this battle!!

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[Preview]

Me: *Grins* Harry, You’re a strong opponent! But I’m so much stronger!!

(Horogium and Vulcan speed around the stadium hitting each other with powerful blows as I roar out to Vulcan)

Me: This is a battle you won’t soon forget!

(Vulcan leans on its driver and slams into Horogium causing it to wobble)

Me: I’ve even got a New Move!

(Vulcan and Horogium speed up and get ready to slam into each other)

Me: You want to know what it is?! Like I’d spoil the surprise!!

(Vulcan and Horogium start clashing as they glow brightly)

Me: Next time on Beyblade Burst Mystic Clash! The Clash of Blading Titans!

3! 2! 1! Go, Shoot!!

I'd like your thoughts on the Chapters. You can choose one or both of them!

"Fellow Internecion Cube enjoyer" "LJ-B" "CelBeyBlade" "LJ" "Lucha Burst" "Deadfox (kinda true)" "KK"

(Oct. 18, 2021  1:44 AM)CelBeyBlade Wrote:

(Oct. 17, 2021  4:58 AM)Lucha Burst Wrote: You could always find some other fanfics to read, Such as UnseenBurst's, DeltaZakuro's, Mine, and I think Hollowmind8 has some to

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I think i've seen you read some of those ones lol

Delta is great but his only fanfics that he will update is always Athena Valhalla
Unseen Burst is now not so active
I read yours dont worry just got bored
I never read hollowmind (plz dont kill me Hollow)

(Oct. 24, 2021  5:27 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 7 is out yall, hope you enjoy (Mystic Clash) I'd like some Solid Honest feedback please, don't be afraid to hurt my feelings.

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          Beyblade Burst Mystic Clash
                           Chapter 7
  The Resonating Titans, Battle of Bonds!

Tristen: He actually Burst Vulcan!

Me: Grr!! You got lucky, I’ll burst Horogium in the next battle!

Harry: Never ever ever! I’ll be the victor!!

Emma: *Chuckles* He said I’ll be the Victor!

(Emma and Tristen start laughing wildly)

Me: Shut it!!

Drone: Second Battle!

(Vulcan starts glowing as I get pulled into a White Void and sit on Vulcan’s Shoulder)

Me: None of my attacks are powerful enough to break through Horogium’s Defenses!

Vulcan: Then why not create a More Powerful Attack?

Me: *Gasps*

Vulcan: A technique that Blows through the roof like a Volcano Explosion!

Me: *Grins* I’ll come up with something!

(I get pulled out of the White Void)

Me: Harry, give me your Best Shot!

Harry: *Grins* Will do!

Drone: Ready? Set!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Me/Harry: Go, Shoot!!

(Me and Harry pull off Powerful Mystic Shoots as Vulcan starts off with leaning on its driver and picks up a Major Speed Boost)

Me: *Roars* Vulcan!!!

All: *Gasps*

(My Resonance Aura Flares up as Vulcan blazes out of the Bey, Vulcan starts glimmering Gold)

Harry: Seriously?!

Me: Mystic Geyser!!

(Vulcan slams into Horogium with its Powerful Blades, Power Erupts from the stadium as Horogium bursts in the air)

Harry: *Gasps*

Drone: It’s Mystic Vulcan with a Burst Finish! Victor Homura claims 2 Points!!

Me: *Grins* Say hello to the new Mystic Champ!

Harry: Don’t get too cocky, we’re tied.

Tristen: He’s right, keep going on the attack and go for another Burst!!

Drone: Third Battle!

(Me and Harry’s Resonance Aura’s Flare up as we start each other down)

Emma: So intense…

Tristen: Don’t worry, Victor’s going to put an end to this and win!

(A Red Haired tall teenager watches the battle from the corner)

???: Both of them are Powerful Bladers, but they can be more if someone pushes them hard enough.

Me: Let’s do this, I’m giving this everything I’ve got!

Drone: Ready? Set!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Me/Harry: Go, Shoot!!

(Me and Harry pull off Powerful Mystic Shoots)

Me: Go, Mystic Shoot!!

Harry: Galactic Guard!!

(Vulcan hits Horogium with a Powerful Barrage of attacks as Horogium barely holds its Ground)

Me: *Grins* Burst, Mystic Geyser!!

(Vulcan slams into Horogium sending it flying into the air, Horogium’s Blades comes in as Horogium lands in the center)

Harry: Keep going, Horogium!!

(Harry’s Resonance Aura flares up as Horogium blazes out of the Bey)

Me: Don’t give up, Vulcan!!

(My Resonance Aura burns brightly as Vulcan blazes out of the Bey, Vulcan starts Glimmering Gold)

Harry: Galactic Shelter!!

Me: Strike it harder, Mystic Shoot!!

(Both Beys speed around the stadium as the glow brightly, Vulcan and Horogium hit each other around the stadium at Lightning Speeds)

Me/Harry: Go!!

(Both Beys slam into each other in the center causing an eruption of Crazy Power, Both Beys survive but starts wobbling frantically)

All: Seriously?!

Emma: Keep Spinning, Vulcan!

Harry: Keep going, Horogium!!

(Vulcan stops spinning as Horogium spins One Second Longer)

All: *Gasps*

Drone: It’s Galactic Horogium with a Spin Finish! Harry Zen is the winner with a score of 3-2!!

Me: Grr!!

Harry: Yes, I won!

Drone: Harry’s Ranking will Increase as Victor’s will decrease!

(The Drone flies off as Emma walks up to me with a Sad Expression)

Emma: You’re Ranking dropped, I’m sorry.

Me: Tch…

(I run off in embarrassment towards the forest)

Tristen/Harry: Victor!!

~Inside The Forest~

Me: I thought I really had this battle! But I still couldn't win!!

???: That’s because you need to get stronger. Train harder.

Me: *Gasps*

(I look behind me to see a Tall Teenager with a White Outfit)

???: You’ve got potential to become even stronger, so train harder!!

Me: I’m trying! Who even are you?

Rashad: I’m Rashad Goodman, a Blader who wants to see all of your Light.

Me: All of my light? Are you saying you want to battle?!

Rashad: I suppose so, Greatest Raphael will be your Opponent!

Me: Mystic Vulcan will burst it!

(Me and Rashad go into a Stadium inside the forest)

Rashad: First Battle!

Me: Are you ready to lose?

Rashad: I saw your battle, it looks like you’re out of practice.

Me: Tch… You don’t know that!

Rashad: Greatest Raphael will be the winner!

Me: Grr!! Ready? Set!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Me/Rashad: Go, Shoot!!

(Rashad pulls off a Powerful Shoot as I pull off a Powerful Mystic Shoot)

Rashad: Go for the attack, Raphael!!

(Raphael starts hammering at Vulcan at full power, Vulcan barely stands its guard)

Me: Keep fighting, Mystic Shoot!!

Rashad: *Gasps* You’re countering?!

(Vulcan leans on its driver and starts countering each one of Raphael’s Powerful Attacks)

Me: What do you think about that?

Rashad: Your Attacks are Powerful I’ll give you that, but they’re lackluster!!

(Raphael speeds off and comes in with a Powerful Attack hitting Vulcan into the air)

Me: *Roars* Keep giving it your all, Vulcan!!

Rashad (Thoughts): He can Resonate?!

(My Resonance Aura flares up as Vulcan blazes out of the Bey, Vulcan starts Glimmering Gold as it hits the wall and stays in)

Me: End this, Mystic Geyser!!

Rashad: You’re not going to win! Raphael!!

(Rashad’s Resonance Aura flares up as Raphael blazes out of the Bey, Both Raphael and Vulcan speed around the stadium getting ready to attack)

Me: End this!!

Rashad: Greatest Breaker!!

(Both Beys slam into each other causing an eruption of Power, Vulcan bursts instantly, Vulcan’s Parts land back on the ground with sudden clangs)

Me: *Gasps*

Rashad: Greatest Raphael wins with a Burst Finish. Is that really all you’ve got?

Me: Grr!! You’re a Powerful Blader, I’ll give you that.

Rashad: You said yourself you’re going to be the Mystic Champion. Champions don’t give up after they’ve fallen down. They dust themselves off and come back stronger than before! So… After all of this are you going to give up or dust yourself off?

(Rashad glares at me for a moment then walks away)

Me: Rashad!!

Rashad: What?

Me: *Smiles Cheerfully* I want one more battle!

Rashad: *Grins* One more battle? I’ll defeat you like I did someone else back in my days!!

Me: Vulcan, we’ll destroy our limits and Burst Raphael!

(Me and Rashad’s Resonance Aura’s Flare up as our eyes glow as we stare each other down)

Me/Vulcan: We’ll be the winners!!

"Holloweenmind8" "LegendJustice-B" "CelBeyBlade" "Lucha Burst" "LJ" "RegaliaGenesis" "GhostFundy" Thoughts Please!

(Oct. 30, 2021  4:12 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Yall have to read Chapter 32! I pulled off the Most Epic Scene ever. I need your thoughts on it!! (Yin Yang)

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             Beyblade Burst Yin Yang
                         Chapter 33
                  The Yin Yang Unite!

Wakiya: The Matches for today will consist of! Adrian Saito and Austin Saito Vs. Illius Mao and Hyuga Asahi!

Austin: We’re going to be Teammates, this is so cool!

Adrian: *Grins* You’d better not lose right away!

Hyuga: This is going to be fun, Illius! We’ll go zoom in and burst them!

Illius: *Grins*

Wakiya: Our Second Battle will be Ren Kiyama and Thalia Amana Vs. Po Taint and Bell Daikokuten!!

Bell: *Laughs* The Demon King will win this battle with a Burst Finish! So get ready to lose!!

Po: Bell Daikokuten, A Powerful Blader. I respect you so don’t disappoint me!

Ren: We’re going to be the winners, Mate! I’ll be going all out and I’ll kindly win this battle with a Burst Finish!

Thalia: I’ll totally give it my all! get ready to lose, Bell!!

Wakiya: And the Final Battle will be Hikaru Asahi and Acheros Izumi Vs. Ethan Gilten and Jennifer Pratton!!

Jennier: *Grins Evilly* I’m paired with The Powerful Rogue Blader. This will be an interesting battle!

Ethan: Try any tricks and I’ll destroy that Bey of yours!

(Ethan’s Eyes Flicker Purple Flames as he stares Jennifer down)

Hikaru: Acheros, we’ll totally be able to win this battle!

Acheros: Yeah… I’m counting on it.

Wakiya: The Matches are starting now so get to the Big Arena!

Thalia: You expect us to go into this Round without any Practice?

Wakiya: Well, we’re behind schedule because someone left without permission.

(Wakiya stares Ethan down)

Ethan: I wanted to battle Free and you couldn’t stop me from doing what I liked.

Wakiya: Grr!!

~In The Big Arena Right Before The Match Started~

Drone: First Battle!

Austin: Anpao, we’ll be going on the Attack in this battle!

(Austin puts the Attack Ring on Anpao and sets the Driver to Attack Mode)

Adrian: Follow my lead. Alright?

Austin: You’ve got it!

Illius: Adrian! I’ll crush you in this battle. Ifrit’s going to crush you with its Bare Fangs!!

(Adrian Grins Evilly as his Dark Flare surrounds him Sparkling Gold)

Possessed Adrian: I’m looking forward to you trying. Asriel will swallow Ifrit whole and leave nothing behind!!

Hyuga: Austin! Show me that Burning Hot Blaze again!!

Austin: One Serving of Burning Hot Blaze coming up! Would you like a Coffee with that?

Hanami: The Smack Talk is through the roof, but do they have the bark to back it up? Let’s get started!!

Drone: Ready? Set!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Adrian/Austin/Hyuga/Illius: Go, Shoot!!

(Everyone pulls off Extremely Powerful Eclipse Shoots)

Hanami: The Eclipse Shoots are through the roof!

Illius: *Roars* Beast Barrage!!

(Ifrit slams into Asriel with a barrage of Powerful Blows, Asriel brushes them off using the Rubber on the R Gear)

Illius: What?!

Adrian: *Grins* Twilight Rebound!!

(Asriel slams into the wall using its Rubber and ricochets off at full speed, Asriel slams into Ifrit causing it to start wobbling)

Illius: Grr!!

Hanami: And Asriel starts off with a Powerful Strike!

Austin: Strike, Singeing Blaze!!

(Singe Anpao slashes at Hyperion at full power dealing tons of damage, Hyperion gets flung in the air)

Hanami: Hyperion’s been sent flying!

Hyuga: Vroom!!

(Hyperion slams into the wall and aims right back at Anpao, Austin’s Blaze Surrounds him brightly as he grins)

Austin: Anpao!!!

(Austin’s Blaze Burns Hot as Anpao blazes out of the Bey and enters Blaze)

All: *Gasps*

Austin: Singeing Beam!!

(Anpao slams into Hyperion at full power, Hyperion’s Limit Destroyer slowly starts activating)

Hyuga: Kindling Limit: Destroyer!!

(Hyperion’s Blades extend out sending Anpao flying, Asriel and Ifrit start clashing as Anpao slams into Asriel and sends both of them up the slope)

Adrian/Austin: *Gasps*

Hanami: Both Beys have been sent flying from that Powerful Attack from Hyperion!!

Adrian: Austin, it’s time!

Austin: *Grins* Slam into ‘em, Anpao!!

All: *Gasps*

(Anpao slams into Asriel sending it flying at full speed towards Hyperion and Ifrit)

Hyuga/Illius: What?!

Adrian/Austin: Twin Motar!!

(Asriel slams down at Ifrit and Hyperion at full power causing a humongous explosion, Both Hyperion and Ifrit burst)

Illius: Grr!!

Hyuga: Seriously?! I lost!!

Drone: Singe Anpao and Twilight Asriel are the Winners!!

Adrian: *Grins* Wasn’t expecting any less.

Austin: What do you think, Adrian! Did I do well?

Adrian: You did… Decent. That is expected since you’re my Younger Brother.

(Adrian walks away as Austin stares at him)

Austin: *Smiles* You’re only 3 Minutes Older than me.

Ren: Is it just me or did Adrian just get a whole lot nicer?

Hikaru: Yeah, it’s kinda weird.

Bell: He’s not being nicer.

Hikaru/Ren: *Gasps*

Bell: He’s found respect for Austin ever since he was able to take on Free, and because of his recent accomplishments. Austin’s proven himself to Adrian as a Blader that needs to be taken seriously.

Wally: Well what do you know, they’ve finally gotten used to each other!

Valt (Thoughts): He’s still suffering from a Never-Ending Quest for Destruction, when will it all end?

~In The Middle of Bell and Po Vs. Thalia and Ren~

Bell: *Roars* Belial!!

(Bell’s Resonance Aura flares up as Belial blazes out of the Bey, Belial glows brightly)

Belial: Crush them, Bell!

Bell: Will do!

(Trident and Ragnaruk circle around the center in Perfect Synchronization as Pirate launches a barrage of strikes wearing down their Stamina)

Po: Keep going, Pirate!!

Bell: Ignite and Explode! Torpedo Bomber!!

(Belial speeds up and slams into Trident at full power, Trident bursts on the spot leaving Thalia in shock)

Thalia: *Gasps* Seriously?

Po: Bolt Crash!!

(Pirate slams into Ragnaruk at Full Speed, Pirate bursts right through Ragnaruk as Ren gasps in shock, Ren falls to his knees)

Drone: Torpedo Belial and Typhoon Pirate are the winners!!

Hanami: Incredible! The Amazing team of Bell Daikokuten and Po Taint proves to be unstoppable while Ren Kiyama and Thalia Amana have a ways to go!

Ren: I lost…

~In The Hallways~

Austin: Don’t beat yourself up, you did amazing in that battle! Screw what Hanami said. He’s getting paid to say this stuff, don’t let it get into your head.

Ren: But he’s right. I’m… I’m not a Ragnaruk Master. I won’t be making it to the Finals.

Hikaru: Don’t you dare say that you’ve still got a chance!

Ren: If I lose the next battle then I don’t have a chance.

Hyuga: Don’t go thinking about losing! You’ve got to go out there and give it your all No Matter what!

Ren: I’m a weak Blader. Weak Bladers don’t make it to the Finals. They get forgotten and lose all the time.

(Tears start welling up in Ren’s Eyes as he looks at Ragnaruk sadly)

Bell: If you lose a battle you’re preparing yourself for an even bigger victory! You’ve got to keep going with all your strength and become The Ultimate Ragnaruk King!!

Ren: Just leave me, alone guys.

Austin: But Ren–

Ren: I said leave me alone!!!

(Ren runs off in Anger as we watch him sadly)

Austin: Ren…

~Out On The Airship’s Port~

(Ren looks at Ragnaruk on the balcony of the ship)

Ren: I’m sorry, Ragnaruk. I’m just not good enough.

???: You’re not good enough… Now.

(A successful-looking man in a Business Suit comes up to Ren)

Ren: Alexander Gilten.

Alexander: It seems that you remember me, what a lovely surprise.

Ren: Rantaro told me what you tried doing, stealing the Ragnaruk’s just so you could get more data on them!

Alexander: Yes… But that was in the Past now was it? I’m a better-changed man helping Bladers achieve their Ultimate Goal. You know Ethan? The Powerful Blader in the tournament?

Ren: I could say I do. What about him?

Alexander: He’s my son. I trained him and pushed him to his limits. Now he’s the Ultimate Blader, he can destroy anyone who gets in his way.

(Ren balls up his fists in anger but Alexander responds with a Calm and Cool look)

Alexander: There was this one Blader 5 Years Ago who stood up to BC Sol in the Team World Championships. He lost so naturally I kicked him out but he was a Skilled Ragnaruk Blader, he could teach you how to become More Powerful and so much more. So, what do you say?

Ren: Grr!! No!

Alexander: Your Mouth is saying No but Deep Inside I know you want this more than you know. So let me sweeten the deal, if you refuse to join my club, I’ll instruct Ethan to Destroy Anpao and Asriel and make sure it's so painful for the both of them that they’ll be living the rest of their days in depression.

Ren: You monster! You wouldn’t!!

Alexander: *Grins Evilly* I can and will.

(Ren looks at Ragnaruk for a moment and thinks for a bit)

Ren: *Sighs* I’m in. But just to be clear, I’m only doing this for me and me alone! I could care less about what happens to Austin and Adrian.

Alexander: *Smiles* Great… After you're done with the tournament and you’re ready just come over to Mexico and go to the Jungle’s Opening. From there, someone will escort you to The Snake Pit where you’ll Train Hard and become The Third Member of the Snake Pit’s Top 3!

Ren: Top 3? Who else is there?

Alexander: There’s Poltergeist Gilten, Ethan Gilten and You.

Ren: I’m ready, I won’t let you down.

Alexander: Great, now act like everything is normal between you and your Friends then once the 4th Round ends come meet me in the Snake Pit. You’ll be known as… Squall Eye.

(Alexander attaches a Parachute onto his back and jumps off the Airship and activates it as he waves Goodbye to Ren, The Other run-up to Ren)

Austin: Ren… Are you okay? I know this is hard on you but–

Ren: *Grins*, Of course, I’m okay. I just needed some time to myself.

(Ren walks away as he Grins Evilly, Austin looks over at Ren in confusion)

Adrian: Something wrong?

Austin: Usually Ren ends his conversations with Mate at the end. But he didn’t this time, he’s probably still bummed out and trying to hide it from us.

Bell: The Demon King will make it his personal job to Prank the Living Bats in him!

Hikaru: Now’s probably not the best time. Maybe tomorrow or something, Bell.

Bell: Hmph!

Austin (Thoughts): I’ve got this feeling that Ren’s trying to hide something from us. Suspicious…

~In The Main Arena~

Hanami: Okay, Boys and Girls! This match will be wrapping up the 3rd Round! So, let’s get right into this and see how it goes! It’s Hikaru Asahi and Acheros Izumi Vs. Ethan Gilten and Jennifer Pratton!

(Everyone would step out to the Stadium as Ethan stares Jennifer down)

Drone: First Battle!

Jennifer: No tricks, I promise!

Ethan: We’ll see about that.

Hikaru: *Grins* Me and Acheros make The Ultimate Team, we’ll blow you away!

Acheros: We’ll defeat you and show you what Blading’s Truly about!

Ethan: I’ll crush you both. I’m the most powerful Blader in the Snake Pit and I’ll prove it!

Jennifer: Yeah, we’ll crush you!

Hanami: Our Bladers are ready and willing to dive into the Battle! So, why don’t we get right into this?!

Drone: Ready? Set!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Hikaru/Acheros/Jennifer/Ethan: Go, Shoot!!!

(Everyone pulls off Powerful Eclipse Shoots)

Ethan: Crush them, Erebus!

(Erebus slams into Aeneas and Helios sending them both flying)

Hanami: Erebus starts off with a Powerful Strike!

Jennifer: Knock ‘em out, Joker!!

(Joker speeds up and starts hitting Aeneas with a Powerful Barrage of attacks as Aeneas just sits in the center)

Hanami: Aeneas is surviving Joker’s Powerful Barrage of attacks, this is the True Definition of Defense Mode!

Acheros: Dire Guard!!

(Aeneas’ Defense Blades start glowing as it starts blocking all Joker’s attacks)

Jennifer: Tch… Now!

All: What?!

(Joker hits Erebus into Aeneas and traps both Aeneas and Erebus in a Vortex causing Erebus to hit Aeneas with an Extremely Powerful Barrage of attacks)

Ethan: *Roars* You’ve crossed the Snake Pit Champion’s Line!!!

Jennifer: *Giggles* You can’t do anything!

Hikaru: Go, Helios!!

(Helios speeds up and slams into Joker sending it flying across the stadium)

Jennifer: Uh Oh…

Hanami: Helios has attacked!

Ethan: Erebus!!

(Ethan’s Dark Blazes corrupts him as Erebus blazes out of the Bey)

Acheros: *Gasps* What’s going on?!

Hikaru: Stop it, Ethan!!

Jennifer: I’ll win this battle myself!!

(Erebus, Helios, and Joker all charge towards the center)

Ethan: True Requiem Slash!!

(Erebus creates a Powerful Dark Twister as it slashes through Aeneas, Helios, and Joker, All of the Beys would burst instantly leaving black dust on the stadium)

Hikaru/Jennifer/Acheros: *Gasps* Seriously?!

Drone: Requiem Erebus and Rogue Joker are the Winners!!

Hanami: What?! Erebus has just burst everything in sight with one fatal move! How strong can a Bey get?!

Ethan: You turned on me, Jennifer Pratton. And I’m going to break Joker so you’ll never Blade again!!

(Ethan’s Dark Flare surrounds him as his eyes glow evilly, Jennifer stands there shaking in her place)

Jennifer: You… You weren’t supposed to survive that attack.

Hikaru: He’s seriously on the Wrong Path.

Acheros: I know, someone will have to stop him eventually.

Adrian (Thoughts): If I battle someone as strong as Ethan I’ll definitely become stronger. I’ve just got to keep evolving my Flare so I can burn his Blaze away!

Austin: He’s so scary.

(Ren starts walking away with an evil smug face)

Ren: Ethan… You’d better win this tournament so I can crush you once we battle in the Snake Pit.

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(Oct. 30, 2021  4:37 AM)GenesisBlader Wrote:

(Oct. 30, 2021  4:12 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Yall have to read Chapter 32! I pulled off the Most Epic Scene ever. I need your thoughts on it!! (Yin Yang)

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             Beyblade Burst Yin Yang
                         Chapter 33
                  The Yin Yang Unite!

Wakiya: The Matches for today will consist of! Adrian Saito and Austin Saito Vs. Illius Mao and Hyuga Asahi!

Austin: We’re going to be Teammates, this is so cool!

Adrian: *Grins* You’d better not lose right away!

Hyuga: This is going to be fun, Illius! We’ll go zoom in and burst them!

Illius: *Grins*

Wakiya: Our Second Battle will be Ren Kiyama and Thalia Amana Vs. Po Taint and Bell Daikokuten!!

Bell: *Laughs* The Demon King will win this battle with a Burst Finish! So get ready to lose!!

Po: Bell Daikokuten, A Powerful Blader. I respect you so don’t disappoint me!

Ren: We’re going to be the winners, Mate! I’ll be going all out and I’ll kindly win this battle with a Burst Finish!

Thalia: I’ll totally give it my all! get ready to lose, Bell!!

Wakiya: And the Final Battle will be Hikaru Asahi and Acheros Izumi Vs. Ethan Gilten and Jennifer Pratton!!

Jennier: *Grins Evilly* I’m paired with The Powerful Rogue Blader. This will be an interesting battle!

Ethan: Try any tricks and I’ll destroy that Bey of yours!

(Ethan’s Eyes Flicker Purple Flames as he stares Jennifer down)

Hikaru: Acheros, we’ll totally be able to win this battle!

Acheros: Yeah… I’m counting on it.

Wakiya: The Matches are starting now so get to the Big Arena!

Thalia: You expect us to go into this Round without any Practice?

Wakiya: Well, we’re behind schedule because someone left without permission.

(Wakiya stares Ethan down)

Ethan: I wanted to battle Free and you couldn’t stop me from doing what I liked.

Wakiya: Grr!!

~In The Big Arena Right Before The Match Started~

Drone: First Battle!

Austin: Anpao, we’ll be going on the Attack in this battle!

(Austin puts the Attack Ring on Anpao and sets the Driver to Attack Mode)

Adrian: Follow my lead. Alright?

Austin: You’ve got it!

Illius: Adrian! I’ll crush you in this battle. Ifrit’s going to crush you with its Bare Fangs!!

(Adrian Grins Evilly as his Dark Flare surrounds him Sparkling Gold)

Possessed Adrian: I’m looking forward to you trying. Asriel will swallow Ifrit whole and leave nothing behind!!

Hyuga: Austin! Show me that Burning Hot Blaze again!!

Austin: One Serving of Burning Hot Blaze coming up! Would you like a Coffee with that?

Hanami: The Smack Talk is through the roof, but do they have the bark to back it up? Let’s get started!!

Drone: Ready? Set!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Adrian/Austin/Hyuga/Illius: Go, Shoot!!

(Everyone pulls off Extremely Powerful Eclipse Shoots)

Hanami: The Eclipse Shoots are through the roof!

Illius: *Roars* Beast Barrage!!

(Ifrit slams into Asriel with a barrage of Powerful Blows, Asriel brushes them off using the Rubber on the R Gear)

Illius: What?!

Adrian: *Grins* Twilight Rebound!!

(Asriel slams into the wall using its Rubber and ricochets off at full speed, Asriel slams into Ifrit causing it to start wobbling)

Illius: Grr!!

Hanami: And Asriel starts off with a Powerful Strike!

Austin: Strike, Singeing Blaze!!

(Singe Anpao slashes at Hyperion at full power dealing tons of damage, Hyperion gets flung in the air)

Hanami: Hyperion’s been sent flying!

Hyuga: Vroom!!

(Hyperion slams into the wall and aims right back at Anpao, Austin’s Blaze Surrounds him brightly as he grins)

Austin: Anpao!!!

(Austin’s Blaze Burns Hot as Anpao blazes out of the Bey and enters Blaze)

All: *Gasps*

Austin: Singeing Beam!!

(Anpao slams into Hyperion at full power, Hyperion’s Limit Destroyer slowly starts activating)

Hyuga: Kindling Limit: Destroyer!!

(Hyperion’s Blades extend out sending Anpao flying, Asriel and Ifrit start clashing as Anpao slams into Asriel and sends both of them up the slope)

Adrian/Austin: *Gasps*

Hanami: Both Beys have been sent flying from that Powerful Attack from Hyperion!!

Adrian: Austin, it’s time!

Austin: *Grins* Slam into ‘em, Anpao!!

All: *Gasps*

(Anpao slams into Asriel sending it flying at full speed towards Hyperion and Ifrit)

Hyuga/Illius: What?!

Adrian/Austin: Twin Motar!!

(Asriel slams down at Ifrit and Hyperion at full power causing a humongous explosion, Both Hyperion and Ifrit burst)

Illius: Grr!!

Hyuga: Seriously?! I lost!!

Drone: Singe Anpao and Twilight Asriel are the Winners!!

Adrian: *Grins* Wasn’t expecting any less.

Austin: What do you think, Adrian! Did I do well?

Adrian: You did… Decent. That is expected since you’re my Younger Brother.

(Adrian walks away as Austin stares at him)

Austin: *Smiles* You’re only 3 Minutes Older than me.

Ren: Is it just me or did Adrian just get a whole lot nicer?

Hikaru: Yeah, it’s kinda weird.

Bell: He’s not being nicer.

Hikaru/Ren: *Gasps*

Bell: He’s found respect for Austin ever since he was able to take on Free, and because of his recent accomplishments. Austin’s proven himself to Adrian as a Blader that needs to be taken seriously.

Wally: Well what do you know, they’ve finally gotten used to each other!

Valt (Thoughts): He’s still suffering from a Never-Ending Quest for Destruction, when will it all end?

~In The Middle of Bell and Po Vs. Thalia and Ren~

Bell: *Roars* Belial!!

(Bell’s Resonance Aura flares up as Belial blazes out of the Bey, Belial glows brightly)

Belial: Crush them, Bell!

Bell: Will do!

(Trident and Ragnaruk circle around the center in Perfect Synchronization as Pirate launches a barrage of strikes wearing down their Stamina)

Po: Keep going, Pirate!!

Bell: Ignite and Explode! Torpedo Bomber!!

(Belial speeds up and slams into Trident at full power, Trident bursts on the spot leaving Thalia in shock)

Thalia: *Gasps* Seriously?

Po: Bolt Crash!!

(Pirate slams into Ragnaruk at Full Speed, Pirate bursts right through Ragnaruk as Ren gasps in shock, Ren falls to his knees)

Drone: Torpedo Belial and Typhoon Pirate are the winners!!

Hanami: Incredible! The Amazing team of Bell Daikokuten and Po Taint proves to be unstoppable while Ren Kiyama and Thalia Amana have a ways to go!

Ren: I lost…

~In The Hallways~

Austin: Don’t beat yourself up, you did amazing in that battle! Screw what Hanami said. He’s getting paid to say this stuff, don’t let it get into your head.

Ren: But he’s right. I’m… I’m not a Ragnaruk Master. I won’t be making it to the Finals.

Hikaru: Don’t you dare say that you’ve still got a chance!

Ren: If I lose the next battle then I don’t have a chance.

Hyuga: Don’t go thinking about losing! You’ve got to go out there and give it your all No Matter what!

Ren: I’m a weak Blader. Weak Bladers don’t make it to the Finals. They get forgotten and lose all the time.

(Tears start welling up in Ren’s Eyes as he looks at Ragnaruk sadly)

Bell: If you lose a battle you’re preparing yourself for an even bigger victory! You’ve got to keep going with all your strength and become The Ultimate Ragnaruk King!!

Ren: Just leave me, alone guys.

Austin: But Ren–

Ren: I said leave me alone!!!

(Ren runs off in Anger as we watch him sadly)

Austin: Ren…

~Out On The Airship’s Port~

(Ren looks at Ragnaruk on the balcony of the ship)

Ren: I’m sorry, Ragnaruk. I’m just not good enough.

???: You’re not good enough… Now.

(A successful-looking man in a Business Suit comes up to Ren)

Ren: Alexander Gilten.

Alexander: It seems that you remember me, what a lovely surprise.

Ren: Rantaro told me what you tried doing, stealing the Ragnaruk’s just so you could get more data on them!

Alexander: Yes… But that was in the Past now was it? I’m a better-changed man helping Bladers achieve their Ultimate Goal. You know Ethan? The Powerful Blader in the tournament?

Ren: I could say I do. What about him?

Alexander: He’s my son. I trained him and pushed him to his limits. Now he’s the Ultimate Blader, he can destroy anyone who gets in his way.

(Ren balls up his fists in anger but Alexander responds with a Calm and Cool look)

Alexander: There was this one Blader 5 Years Ago who stood up to BC Sol in the Team World Championships. He lost so naturally I kicked him out but he was a Skilled Ragnaruk Blader, he could teach you how to become More Powerful and so much more. So, what do you say?

Ren: Grr!! No!

Alexander: Your Mouth is saying No but Deep Inside I know you want this more than you know. So let me sweeten the deal, if you refuse to join my club, I’ll instruct Ethan to Destroy Anpao and Asriel and make sure it's so painful for the both of them that they’ll be living the rest of their days in depression.

Ren: You monster! You wouldn’t!!

Alexander: *Grins Evilly* I can and will.

(Ren looks at Ragnaruk for a moment and thinks for a bit)

Ren: *Sighs* I’m in. But just to be clear, I’m only doing this for me and me alone! I could care less about what happens to Austin and Adrian.

Alexander: *Smiles* Great… After you're done with the tournament and you’re ready just come over to Mexico and go to the Jungle’s Opening. From there, someone will escort you to The Snake Pit where you’ll Train Hard and become The Third Member of the Snake Pit’s Top 3!

Ren: Top 3? Who else is there?

Alexander: There’s Poltergeist Gilten, Ethan Gilten and You.

Ren: I’m ready, I won’t let you down.

Alexander: Great, now act like everything is normal between you and your Friends then once the 4th Round ends come meet me in the Snake Pit. You’ll be known as… Squall Eye.

(Alexander attaches a Parachute onto his back and jumps off the Airship and activates it as he waves Goodbye to Ren, The Other run-up to Ren)

Austin: Ren… Are you okay? I know this is hard on you but–

Ren: *Grins*, Of course, I’m okay. I just needed some time to myself.

(Ren walks away as he Grins Evilly, Austin looks over at Ren in confusion)

Adrian: Something wrong?

Austin: Usually Ren ends his conversations with Mate at the end. But he didn’t this time, he’s probably still bummed out and trying to hide it from us.

Bell: The Demon King will make it his personal job to Prank the Living Bats in him!

Hikaru: Now’s probably not the best time. Maybe tomorrow or something, Bell.

Bell: Hmph!

Austin (Thoughts): I’ve got this feeling that Ren’s trying to hide something from us. Suspicious…

~In The Main Arena~

Hanami: Okay, Boys and Girls! This match will be wrapping up the 3rd Round! So, let’s get right into this and see how it goes! It’s Hikaru Asahi and Acheros Izumi Vs. Ethan Gilten and Jennifer Pratton!

(Everyone would step out to the Stadium as Ethan stares Jennifer down)

Drone: First Battle!

Jennifer: No tricks, I promise!

Ethan: We’ll see about that.

Hikaru: *Grins* Me and Acheros make The Ultimate Team, we’ll blow you away!

Acheros: We’ll defeat you and show you what Blading’s Truly about!

Ethan: I’ll crush you both. I’m the most powerful Blader in the Snake Pit and I’ll prove it!

Jennifer: Yeah, we’ll crush you!

Hanami: Our Bladers are ready and willing to dive into the Battle! So, why don’t we get right into this?!

Drone: Ready? Set!

All: 3! 2! 1!

Hikaru/Acheros/Jennifer/Ethan: Go, Shoot!!!

(Everyone pulls off Powerful Eclipse Shoots)

Ethan: Crush them, Erebus!

(Erebus slams into Aeneas and Helios sending them both flying)

Hanami: Erebus starts off with a Powerful Strike!

Jennifer: Knock ‘em out, Joker!!

(Joker speeds up and starts hitting Aeneas with a Powerful Barrage of attacks as Aeneas just sits in the center)

Hanami: Aeneas is surviving Joker’s Powerful Barrage of attacks, this is the True Definition of Defense Mode!

Acheros: Dire Guard!!

(Aeneas’ Defense Blades start glowing as it starts blocking all Joker’s attacks)

Jennifer: Tch… Now!

All: What?!

(Joker hits Erebus into Aeneas and traps both Aeneas and Erebus in a Vortex causing Erebus to hit Aeneas with an Extremely Powerful Barrage of attacks)

Ethan: *Roars* You’ve crossed the Snake Pit Champion’s Line!!!

Jennifer: *Giggles* You can’t do anything!

Hikaru: Go, Helios!!

(Helios speeds up and slams into Joker sending it flying across the stadium)

Jennifer: Uh Oh…

Hanami: Helios has attacked!

Ethan: Erebus!!

(Ethan’s Dark Blazes corrupts him as Erebus blazes out of the Bey)

Acheros: *Gasps* What’s going on?!

Hikaru: Stop it, Ethan!!

Jennifer: I’ll win this battle myself!!

(Erebus, Helios, and Joker all charge towards the center)

Ethan: True Requiem Slash!!

(Erebus creates a Powerful Dark Twister as it slashes through Aeneas, Helios, and Joker, All of the Beys would burst instantly leaving black dust on the stadium)

Hikaru/Jennifer/Acheros: *Gasps* Seriously?!

Drone: Requiem Erebus and Rogue Joker are the Winners!!

Hanami: What?! Erebus has just burst everything in sight with one fatal move! How strong can a Bey get?!

Ethan: You turned on me, Jennifer Pratton. And I’m going to break Joker so you’ll never Blade again!!

(Ethan’s Dark Flare surrounds him as his eyes glow evilly, Jennifer stands there shaking in her place)

Jennifer: You… You weren’t supposed to survive that attack.

Hikaru: He’s seriously on the Wrong Path.

Acheros: I know, someone will have to stop him eventually.

Adrian (Thoughts): If I battle someone as strong as Ethan I’ll definitely become stronger. I’ve just got to keep evolving my Flare so I can burn his Blaze away!

Austin: He’s so scary.

(Ren starts walking away with an evil smug face)

Ren: Ethan… You’d better win this tournament so I can crush you once we battle in the Snake Pit.

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loved the episode! it showed us the value of friendship and determination through bladers thoughts and minds! honestly adrian and austin are a pretty good team, they  combined strategies and won the battle! now with bell i can understand that so much because he's, well, he's the Demon King! with jennifer though, jennifer's just being a jennifer on this specific day to be a jennifer where jennifers and jennifers and other jennifer's jennifer jennifers. lol anyway ethan just pulls out the mighty uno reverse card on Jennifer and then joker, helios, and aenas go bye bye! but with the end my boy Ren pulls an Anakin Skywalker on the bois and thats not really so poggers to be honest because i thought he was a true irish amigo, but when i heard him say "I could care less for what happens to Adrian and Austin", my mind went (ok, he is NOT a pogchamp anymore)  bc it was just so heartbreaking...

anyway for this story since im pretty tired i'll add it up in my head
now that i've added it up i shall give you a P for Please let Ren become a pogchamp once again and for a rating i shall give it a 24.5/25. the battles were intimidatingly epic (perhaps too epic...) and the dialouge between each character was interesting! nice work and i shall give you a pogchamp sticker (definitely not an emoji)   🧐👌


also just for you to be sure, here are the people apart of the pogchamp squad:

Pogchamp Squad:
Austin
Adrian (new member)
Illius
Wally(kazam)
Thalia (because, well... *rubs hands together evilly*)
Po (just because his name is also the name of a panda who is also the main character of a movie/show called Kung Fu Panda)
Ethan (because right now, he isnt dong much besides intimidating characters like me when i went through my emo phase [jk, it was a joke, and he probably does much more than that] but he's still a pogchamp because lol)
Hikaru (the chad)
Hyuga
Valt
Shu
Free (though rn his winning streak isn't looking too good)
Lui (the chad Longinus)

(Oct. 30, 2021  5:47 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Beyblade Burst DB: Mystical Boldness

Arc 1.

Episode 2: Death Solomon Strikes Back!

Episode 3: Stormy Winds and Raging Gales, Cyclone Ragnaruk!

Episode 4: The WBBA Champion's Debut!

Episode 5: Fighting with Boldness, Bold Riptide!

Episode 6: Taking the World By Storm!

Episode 7: The Ultimate Dragon, Vanish Fafnir!

Episode 8: The Tale of Two Valkyries!

Episode 9: Copying Greatness, R Gear!

Episode 10: Fafnir Vs. Perseus!

Episode 11: The Bold Rematch, The Demon King Vs. The Ultimate Hero!

Episode 12: The Ultimate Saber, Savior Valkyrie!

Episode 13: Roar of the Mighty Dragon, Roar Bahamut!

(More Might be added more might be taken away but this is what I've got so far)

Give me your thoughts! Does this arc seem interesting to you? Also, The 1st Arc is going to take care of important Anime Events but the Second Arc will be creative and doesn't apply much to the Anime.