RE: Beyblade Burst Yin Yang/Mystic Clash Character Contest - GenesisBlader - Sep. 19, 2021
(Sep. 19, 2021 8:44 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Next episode of Mystic Clash will come out Next Sunday, I'm having my first tournament on Saturday so I don't think I'll be able to make a chapter. I'll try working on it today but there's a very low chance I'll be able to make another chapter today.
*sniff sniff* my great amigo, going to his first tournament!! 😭😭 *sniff* do your best on saturday and don't worry take as much time as you need amigo! 😎👌
RE: Beyblade Burst Yin Yang/Mystic Clash Character Contest - UnseenBurst - Sep. 25, 2021
Every Chapter in Arc 2, I'd like to see all your speculations on what the episodes are about and how they will play out!
26) The Sea Scavenger, Typhoon Pirate!
27) The Deep Sea, Atlantis Trident!
28) The Shinning Spin King, Siege Achilles!
29) Giving it our all, Yin Yang Style!
30) Hikaru and Hyuga Vs. Bell and Ethan!
31) Austin's Revolution, Free Vs. Austin!
32) The Yin Yang Vs. The Crippiling Darkness!
33) The Natural Born Trickster, Rogue Joker!
34) The God of Crimson Flames, Regal Spriggan!
35) God Of Flames Vs. The Blaze Prince!
36) Torpedo Bomber Vs. Twilight Blight!
37) The Ultimate Clash of the Juinor Legends!
38) Crash Landing on the Oni's Island!
39) Smashing Crash Attack, Fatal Longinus!
40) Adrian's Revolutionary Blaze Of Light!
41) The Roaring Blazes of the Finale!!
42) Vengeance and Bitterness!
43) Roaring Flames, Shu Vs. Ethan!
44) The Ultimate Reunion, Starlight Asriel, and Celestial Anpao!
Tell me what chapter you're excited about, I'm excited to start writing this, Also, which chapter do you think Asriel and Anpao are going to break in? Put your guesses in!
RE: Beyblade Burst Yin Yang/Mystic Clash Character Contest - GenesisBlader - Sep. 25, 2021
(Sep. 25, 2021 12:49 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Every Chapter in Arc 2, I'd like to see all your speculations on what the episodes are about and how they will play out!
26) The Sea Scavenger, Typhoon Pirate!
27) The Deep Sea, Atlantis Trident!
28) The Shinning Spin King, Siege Achilles!
29) Giving it our all, Yin Yang Style!
30) Hikaru and Hyuga Vs. Bell and Ethan!
31) Austin's Revolution, Free Vs. Austin!
32) The Yin Yang Vs. The Crippiling Darkness!
33) The Natural Born Trickster, Rogue Joker!
34) The God of Crimson Flames, Regal Spriggan!
35) God Of Flames Vs. The Blaze Prince!
36) Torpedo Bomber Vs. Twilight Blight!
37) The Ultimate Clash of the Juinor Legends!
38) Crash Landing on the Oni's Island!
39) Smashing Crash Attack, Fatal Longinus!
40) Adrian's Revolutionary Blaze Of Light!
41) The Roaring Blazes of the Finale!!
42) Vengeance and Bitterness!
43) Roaring Flames, Shu Vs. Ethan!
44) The Ultimate Reunion, Starlight Asriel, and Celestial Anpao!
Tell me what chapter you're excited about, I'm excited to start writing this, Also, which chapter do you think Asriel and Anpao are going to break in? Put your guesses in!
oh sus i think they might break in vengeance and bitterness
also these new chapter names sound SICK! im really looking forwards to The Roaring Blazes of the Finale
RE: Beyblade Burst Yin Yang/Mystic Clash Character Contest - UnseenBurst - Sep. 25, 2021
Surprisingly since the tournament hasn't started I was able to complete Mystic Clash Episode 4!
Beyblade Burst Mystic Clash
Chapter 4
The Ultimate Attack, Upper Strike!
Me: Go, Shoot!!
(I pull off a Powerful Shoot, Vulcan speeds up, I start sweating like crazy)
Emma: Woah, you’re training like crazy!
Me: Yeah, Tristen beat me yesterday so I’ve got to win our battle today!!
Emma: I’m sure you’ll be able to win!
???: Yeah, of course, he’ll win!!
Me/Emma: *Gasps*
(Dad comes into the basement rolling a huge stadium down)
Me: Dad, what’s that?
Dad: A new stadium I picked up for you to practice in!
Emma: Doesn’t he need another Blader to practice with?
Dad: Nope, because of this stadium I created he can battle whenever he wants!!
(Dad shows us this a new stadium)
Dad: It’s the Hyper Infinity Mugen Stadium!!
Me/Emma: *Gasps* That’s so cool!
Dad: Yeah, you can practice in this stadium whenever you want!!
Me: Woah, what’s the Bey in the middle?!
Dad: That’s Infinite Bahamut, the Infinite Bey you’ll be able to practice against!
Me: Alright, hit me with it at full power!!
(Dad presses a button on the remote in his hand, Infinite Bahamut starts spinning super fast)
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me: Go, Shoot!!
(I pull off a powerful shoot, Vulcan speeds around the stadium but wobbles)
Emma: You can do, Vulcan!!
(Vulcan speeds up and hits Infinite Bahamut with a powerful barrage of strikes, Bahamut doesn’t move an inch)
Me: Grr!!
Dad: What’s wrong, can’t knock it out?
Me: Of course I can C’mon Vulcan!!
(Vulcan speeds up and aims for Infinite Bahamut)
Me: Mystic Shoot!!
(Vulcan slams into Infinite Bahamut at full speed, Vulcan gets sent flying out of the stadium and bursts right before it hits the ground)
All: *Gasps*
Dad: *Chuckles* Looks like you’ve still got a ways to go!
Emma: Victor…
Me: Vulcan…
(I try several times to beat the Infinite Bahamut but it continuously ends in Burst Finishes, Vulcan’s bursted parts land next to my foot)
Emma: That’s the 12th Burst Finish…
Me: I can’t beat Tristen like this.
Vulcan: Is that so?
(I get pulled into a white void sitting on Vulcan’s Shoulder)
Me: I’ve tried so hard but I can’t beat the Infinite Bey. Maybe I’m not cut out to be the Mystic Champion.
Vulcan: So, you’re giving up on your dream?
Me: I guess.
Vulcan: When you can’t beat someone you keep giving up it you’re all in till you can! That’s how Valt Aoi became #1 in the world, don’t you want to get on his level?
Me: Of course! I never said I didn’t!!
Vulcan: Then give it your all and never give up!!!
Me: I’ll become the Mystic Champion, and defeat Valt Aoi!!
Vulcan: I’ll be right there when you do.
(I get pulled out of the white void, My Resonance Aura flares up)
Emma: Victor… Are you ok?
Me: Crank it up to full power.
Dad: Are you sure?
Me: Yeah.
(Dad presses the button on the remote, Infinite Bahamut starts spinning super fast)
Emma: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me: Go, Shoot!!
(I pull off an extremely powerful Mystic Shoot)
Emma: *Gasps* A Mystic Shoot?!
Me: Knock them out of the park!
(Vulcan slams into Infinite Bahamut at full speed, Infinite Bahamut starts wobbling but quickly stabilizes)
Me: Mystic Shoot!!
(Vulcan speeds up and hits Infinite Bahamut with a powerful barrage of attacks, Infinite Bahamut starts wobbling like crazy)
Emma: *Gasps* Such a powerful attack!
Me: *Roars* Vulcan!!
(My Resonance Aura flares up Vulcan blazes out of the Bey)
Vulcan: We’re going to win!!
Me: Send it flying, Upper Strike!!
(Vulcan speeds up and starts clashing wildly with Infinite Bahamut, Infinite Bahamut gets sent flying into the air and bursts)
Dad: No-- No way!!
Me: I did it, alright!
Emma: Awesome, Victor!
Dad: Yeah, that was some pretty awesome battling!
Me: Thanks, I’m totally going to win against Tristen!
(My Resonance Aura flares up as Vulcan stands behind me)
~In The Sparking Bey Arena~
Hanami: Hello all you amazing Bladers! Today, we’ve got a Ranked Match between two powerhouses!!
(I get my Launcher and Bey and run out into the Arena)
Hanami: First, we’ve got our Rising Newcomer! Vulcan Homura!!
(I run-up to the stage)
Me: Hey everyone--
(I trip over and land flat on my face, Emma facepalms her face)
Random: Yo, that dude is so going to lose!
Emma: *Chuckles* Yeah…
Me: Emma, I’m so going to win this!
(I start waving wildly towards Emma, the Random Person walks away)
Emma: *Sighs* Hi, Victor.
Hanami: And we’ve got our Second Powerful Blader, Tristen Chiaki!!
(Tristen walks out to the stage with determination filling his eyes)
Tristen: Victor Homura! I’ll crush you again in this battle!!
Me: *Chuckles* I’d like to see you try, I’ve done some Ultimate Training!!
Referee: First Battle!!
Hanami: This battle of Fighting Flames will be held in the Dynamite Stadium!!
(The Dynamite Ramp Stadium comes out of the ground)
Hanami: Let’s get into the Crazy Match Of Spirits!!
Tristen: Show me your true strength, I wanna crush you at full power!!
(Tristen’s Resonance Aura flares up as he holds Triton with determination)
Me: *Gasps* Grr!!
(My Resonance Aura flares up)
Referee: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Tristen: Go, Shoot!!
(Me and Tristen pull off powerful Mystic Shoots)
Hanami: And we start off with crazy powerful Mystic Shoots!!
Me: Go, Mystic Shoot!!
(Vulcan speeds up and launches a barrage of attacks in the center, Triton speeds around Vulcan dodging all of its attacks)
Tristen: *Grins*
Me: Grr! Go for it!!
Hanami: Vulcan tries making valiant strikes but Triton dodges them all!
(Vulcan speeds up and speeds up even more thanks to the Diverter)
Me: Send it flying, Upper Strike!!
(Vulcan speeds up and aims for Triton closing in on it)
Hanami: Vulcan’s coming in with a powerful attack!!
Tristen: *Roars* Triton!!
(Tristen’s Resonance Aura flares up Triton blazes out of the Bey)
Tristen: Dodge it, Aqua Swift Swim!!
(Triton leans on the POM on its driver, Triton speeds up and dodges Vulcan’s attack)
Me: No way!!
Hanami: Vulcan’s attack has been dodged!
(Vulcan starts wobbling)
Tristen: End this, Aqua Counter!!
(Triton speeds up and slams into Vulcan, Vulcan gets sent flying out of the stadium)
Me: Wha-- What?!
Referee: Aqua Triton with an Over Finish! Tristen Chiaki claims 1 point!!
Hanami: Incredible! Triton tired Vulcan out so it could finish it off with a powerful strike!!
Tristen: *Grins* It didn’t burst, lucky you.
Me: Grr!! Be quiet!!!
Emma: He’s completely losing it.
???: If this goes on he won’t be able to win.
Emma: *Gasps* Valt Aoi?! Why are you here?!
Valt: I wanted to see how Victor’s doing, but this isn’t looking good for him.
Emma: Yeah, he’s getting played big time.
Tristen: Looks like this match will be a waste of my time. At least my Ranking will go up.
Me: Grr!! Why don’t I--
Vulcan: Victor, calm down!!
Me: *Gasps*
(Vulcan starts glowing)
Vulcan: He’s making you mad so you’ll make a mistake. Don’t listen to him, he’s just getting on your nerves. Trust me and me alone and we’ll win this battle!
Me: Got it, calm, cool and collected!
Referee: Second Battle!
Tristen: Don’t worry, nobody wanted or expected you to win this battle.
(My Resonance Aura flares up as I stare Tristen down with determination)
Me: My Upper Strike will burst your Bey!!
Tristen: *Gasps*
Referee: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
(I lift my launcher up a couple of inches)
Tristen: *Gasps*
Me/Tristen: Go, Shoot!!
(Me and Tristen pull off extremely powerful Mystic Shoots)
Hanami: Am I seeing things?! I’ve never seen Shoots this powerful!
Me: Pound them to dust, Mystic Shoot!!
(Vulcan speeds up at incredible speeds, Vulcan slams into Triton with an extremely powerful barrage of attacks)
Tristen: No-- No way!
Hanami: Vulcan’s on the attack, he’s pulling out all the stops!!
Tristen: Aqua Waterspout!!
(Triton creates a huge blue tornado, Vulcan gets sucked into the Vulcan and sent flying)
Hanami: Vulcan’s been sent flying, will it survive?!
Me: Keep fighting!!!
(My Resonance Aura flickers up as Vulcan glows and hits the wall)
Hanami: Vulcan survives!!
Tristen: What?!
(Vulcan speeds up and slams into the Diverter, Vulcan picks up serious speed and aims for Tristen)
Me: This is what me and Vulcan have worked for! Upper Strike!!!
(Vulcan slams into Triton hitting it with a devastating uppercut, Triton gets sent flying out of the stadium)
Tristen: Wha-- What?!
Referee: Mystic Vulcan with an Over Finish! Victor Homura claims 1 point!!
Me: *Grins*
Hanami: Victor Homura makes a strong comeback with the ultimate attack! Upper Strike!!
Tristen (Thoughts): Triton, let’s not hold anything back in the next battle!
Me: Me and Vulcan are winning, no matter what.
Referee: Third Battle!
Tristen: Victor!! Come at me with full force, I’ll counter everything with Triton’s Ultimate Stamina!!
Me: You bet, one scoop of everything coming up!!
Valt: This battle’s getting interesting!!
Emma: You’ve got this, Victor!
Referee: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Tristen: Go, Shoot!!
(Me and Tristen pull off extremely powerful Mystic Shoots)
Tristen: Go for the center, Triton!!
Me: Attack, Vulcan!!
(Vulcan dishes out a powerful barrage of attacks, Triton absorbs every hit spinning faster and faster)
Hanami: Triton’s completely nullifying Vulcan’s attacks!
Me: *Grins* Mystic Flare Boom!!
(Vulcan speeds up and slams into Triton sending it flying in the air)
Tristen: We’re not done, Triton!!
(Tristen’s Resonance Aura bursts up as Triton glows and hits the wall)
Hanami: Triton’s still in the game!
Me: *Grins* We’re coming for you!!
Tristen: *Grins* We’ll easily counter that!
(Vulcan and Triton speed up and aim for each other)
Hanami: Both Beys are going for it!
Me: Now!!
(Vulcan leans on its driver and barely dodges Triton)
Tristen: *Gasps*
Hanami: What?! Vulcan decides to bail at the last minute!!
Me: Vulcan!!
(My Resonance Aura flares up Vulcan blazes out of the Bey, Vulcan slams into the diverter and picks up even more speed)
Me: Upper Strike!!
(Vulcan slashes at Triton at full power causing a huge power eruption, Triton gets sent flying right in front of Tristen’s face and bursts)
Tristen: What?!
Referee: It’s Mystic Vulcan with a Burst Finish! With a score of 3-1, Victor Homura is the winner!!!
Me: Yes!!
Hanami: Our Blaze King comes out on top and demolishes the sea emperor, and with that battle, Victor’s been moved up to Basic Class!!
(Tristen walks up to me)
Me: Yo.
Tristen: That was an amazing battle, you’re a powerful Blader, I respect that. I hope we can battle again in the future!
Me: Thanks, but I’ll be the winner every time we battle!
Tristen: You can dream!
Me/Tristen: Grr!!
Valt: That battle was amazing. Now I can’t contain myself! Isn’t that right? Gallant Valkyrie?
(Gallant Valkyrie glows brightly)
Valt: *Grins* I knew you’d agree!
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RE: Beyblade Burst Yin Yang/Mystic Clash Character Contest - GenesisBlader - Sep. 25, 2021
(Sep. 25, 2021 6:38 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Surprisingly since the tournament hasn't started I was able to complete Mystic Clash Episode 4!
Beyblade Burst Mystic Clash
Chapter 4
The Ultimate Attack, Upper Strike!
Me: Go, Shoot!!
(I pull off a Powerful Shoot, Vulcan speeds up, I start sweating like crazy)
Emma: Woah, you’re training like crazy!
Me: Yeah, Tristen beat me yesterday so I’ve got to win our battle today!!
Emma: I’m sure you’ll be able to win!
???: Yeah, of course, he’ll win!!
Me/Emma: *Gasps*
(Dad comes into the basement rolling a huge stadium down)
Me: Dad, what’s that?
Dad: A new stadium I picked up for you to practice in!
Emma: Doesn’t he need another Blader to practice with?
Dad: Nope, because of this stadium I created he can battle whenever he wants!!
(Dad shows us this a new stadium)
Dad: It’s the Hyper Infinity Mugen Stadium!!
Me/Emma: *Gasps* That’s so cool!
Dad: Yeah, you can practice in this stadium whenever you want!!
Me: Woah, what’s the Bey in the middle?!
Dad: That’s Infinite Bahamut, the Infinite Bey you’ll be able to practice against!
Me: Alright, hit me with it at full power!!
(Dad presses a button on the remote in his hand, Infinite Bahamut starts spinning super fast)
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me: Go, Shoot!!
(I pull off a powerful shoot, Vulcan speeds around the stadium but wobbles)
Emma: You can do, Vulcan!!
(Vulcan speeds up and hits Infinite Bahamut with a powerful barrage of strikes, Bahamut doesn’t move an inch)
Me: Grr!!
Dad: What’s wrong, can’t knock it out?
Me: Of course I can C’mon Vulcan!!
(Vulcan speeds up and aims for Infinite Bahamut)
Me: Mystic Shoot!!
(Vulcan slams into Infinite Bahamut at full speed, Vulcan gets sent flying out of the stadium and bursts right before it hits the ground)
All: *Gasps*
Dad: *Chuckles* Looks like you’ve still got a ways to go!
Emma: Victor…
Me: Vulcan…
(I try several times to beat the Infinite Bahamut but it continuously ends in Burst Finishes, Vulcan’s bursted parts land next to my foot)
Emma: That’s the 12th Burst Finish…
Me: I can’t beat Tristen like this.
Vulcan: Is that so?
(I get pulled into a white void sitting on Vulcan’s Shoulder)
Me: I’ve tried so hard but I can’t beat the Infinite Bey. Maybe I’m not cut out to be the Mystic Champion.
Vulcan: So, you’re giving up on your dream?
Me: I guess.
Vulcan: When you can’t beat someone you keep giving up it you’re all in till you can! That’s how Valt Aoi became #1 in the world, don’t you want to get on his level?
Me: Of course! I never said I didn’t!!
Vulcan: Then give it your all and never give up!!!
Me: I’ll become the Mystic Champion, and defeat Valt Aoi!!
Vulcan: I’ll be right there when you do.
(I get pulled out of the white void, My Resonance Aura flares up)
Emma: Victor… Are you ok?
Me: Crank it up to full power.
Dad: Are you sure?
Me: Yeah.
(Dad presses the button on the remote, Infinite Bahamut starts spinning super fast)
Emma: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me: Go, Shoot!!
(I pull off an extremely powerful Mystic Shoot)
Emma: *Gasps* A Mystic Shoot?!
Me: Knock them out of the park!
(Vulcan slams into Infinite Bahamut at full speed, Infinite Bahamut starts wobbling but quickly stabilizes)
Me: Mystic Shoot!!
(Vulcan speeds up and hits Infinite Bahamut with a powerful barrage of attacks, Infinite Bahamut starts wobbling like crazy)
Emma: *Gasps* Such a powerful attack!
Me: *Roars* Vulcan!!
(My Resonance Aura flares up Vulcan blazes out of the Bey)
Vulcan: We’re going to win!!
Me: Send it flying, Upper Strike!!
(Vulcan speeds up and starts clashing wildly with Infinite Bahamut, Infinite Bahamut gets sent flying into the air and bursts)
Dad: No-- No way!!
Me: I did it, alright!
Emma: Awesome, Victor!
Dad: Yeah, that was some pretty awesome battling!
Me: Thanks, I’m totally going to win against Tristen!
(My Resonance Aura flares up as Vulcan stands behind me)
~In The Sparking Bey Arena~
Hanami: Hello all you amazing Bladers! Today, we’ve got a Ranked Match between two powerhouses!!
(I get my Launcher and Bey and run out into the Arena)
Hanami: First, we’ve got our Rising Newcomer! Vulcan Homura!!
(I run-up to the stage)
Me: Hey everyone--
(I trip over and land flat on my face, Emma facepalms her face)
Random: Yo, that dude is so going to lose!
Emma: *Chuckles* Yeah…
Me: Emma, I’m so going to win this!
(I start waving wildly towards Emma, the Random Person walks away)
Emma: *Sighs* Hi, Victor.
Hanami: And we’ve got our Second Powerful Blader, Tristen Chiaki!!
(Tristen walks out to the stage with determination filling his eyes)
Tristen: Victor Homura! I’ll crush you again in this battle!!
Me: *Chuckles* I’d like to see you try, I’ve done some Ultimate Training!!
Referee: First Battle!!
Hanami: This battle of Fighting Flames will be held in the Dynamite Stadium!!
(The Dynamite Ramp Stadium comes out of the ground)
Hanami: Let’s get into the Crazy Match Of Spirits!!
Tristen: Show me your true strength, I wanna crush you at full power!!
(Tristen’s Resonance Aura flares up as he holds Triton with determination)
Me: *Gasps* Grr!!
(My Resonance Aura flares up)
Referee: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Tristen: Go, Shoot!!
(Me and Tristen pull off powerful Mystic Shoots)
Hanami: And we start off with crazy powerful Mystic Shoots!!
Me: Go, Mystic Shoot!!
(Vulcan speeds up and launches a barrage of attacks in the center, Triton speeds around Vulcan dodging all of its attacks)
Tristen: *Grins*
Me: Grr! Go for it!!
Hanami: Vulcan tries making valiant strikes but Triton dodges them all!
(Vulcan speeds up and speeds up even more thanks to the Diverter)
Me: Send it flying, Upper Strike!!
(Vulcan speeds up and aims for Triton closing in on it)
Hanami: Vulcan’s coming in with a powerful attack!!
Tristen: *Roars* Triton!!
(Tristen’s Resonance Aura flares up Triton blazes out of the Bey)
Tristen: Dodge it, Aqua Swift Swim!!
(Triton leans on the POM on its driver, Triton speeds up and dodges Vulcan’s attack)
Me: No way!!
Hanami: Vulcan’s attack has been dodged!
(Vulcan starts wobbling)
Tristen: End this, Aqua Counter!!
(Triton speeds up and slams into Vulcan, Vulcan gets sent flying out of the stadium)
Me: Wha-- What?!
Referee: Aqua Triton with an Over Finish! Tristen Chiaki claims 1 point!!
Hanami: Incredible! Triton tired Vulcan out so it could finish it off with a powerful strike!!
Tristen: *Grins* It didn’t burst, lucky you.
Me: Grr!! Be quiet!!!
Emma: He’s completely losing it.
???: If this goes on he won’t be able to win.
Emma: *Gasps* Valt Aoi?! Why are you here?!
Valt: I wanted to see how Victor’s doing, but this isn’t looking good for him.
Emma: Yeah, he’s getting played big time.
Tristen: Looks like this match will be a waste of my time. At least my Ranking will go up.
Me: Grr!! Why don’t I--
Vulcan: Victor, calm down!!
Me: *Gasps*
(Vulcan starts glowing)
Vulcan: He’s making you mad so you’ll make a mistake. Don’t listen to him, he’s just getting on your nerves. Trust me and me alone and we’ll win this battle!
Me: Got it, calm, cool and collected!
Referee: Second Battle!
Tristen: Don’t worry, nobody wanted or expected you to win this battle.
(My Resonance Aura flares up as I stare Tristen down with determination)
Me: My Upper Strike will burst your Bey!!
Tristen: *Gasps*
Referee: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
(I lift my launcher up a couple of inches)
Tristen: *Gasps*
Me/Tristen: Go, Shoot!!
(Me and Tristen pull off extremely powerful Mystic Shoots)
Hanami: Am I seeing things?! I’ve never seen Shoots this powerful!
Me: Pound them to dust, Mystic Shoot!!
(Vulcan speeds up at incredible speeds, Vulcan slams into Triton with an extremely powerful barrage of attacks)
Tristen: No-- No way!
Hanami: Vulcan’s on the attack, he’s pulling out all the stops!!
Tristen: Aqua Waterspout!!
(Triton creates a huge blue tornado, Vulcan gets sucked into the Vulcan and sent flying)
Hanami: Vulcan’s been sent flying, will it survive?!
Me: Keep fighting!!!
(My Resonance Aura flickers up as Vulcan glows and hits the wall)
Hanami: Vulcan survives!!
Tristen: What?!
(Vulcan speeds up and slams into the Diverter, Vulcan picks up serious speed and aims for Tristen)
Me: This is what me and Vulcan have worked for! Upper Strike!!!
(Vulcan slams into Triton hitting it with a devastating uppercut, Triton gets sent flying out of the stadium)
Tristen: Wha-- What?!
Referee: Mystic Vulcan with an Over Finish! Victor Homura claims 1 point!!
Me: *Grins*
Hanami: Victor Homura makes a strong comeback with the ultimate attack! Upper Strike!!
Tristen (Thoughts): Triton, let’s not hold anything back in the next battle!
Me: Me and Vulcan are winning, no matter what.
Referee: Third Battle!
Tristen: Victor!! Come at me with full force, I’ll counter everything with Triton’s Ultimate Stamina!!
Me: You bet, one scoop of everything coming up!!
Valt: This battle’s getting interesting!!
Emma: You’ve got this, Victor!
Referee: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Tristen: Go, Shoot!!
(Me and Tristen pull off extremely powerful Mystic Shoots)
Tristen: Go for the center, Triton!!
Me: Attack, Vulcan!!
(Vulcan dishes out a powerful barrage of attacks, Triton absorbs every hit spinning faster and faster)
Hanami: Triton’s completely nullifying Vulcan’s attacks!
Me: *Grins* Mystic Flare Boom!!
(Vulcan speeds up and slams into Triton sending it flying in the air)
Tristen: We’re not done, Triton!!
(Tristen’s Resonance Aura bursts up as Triton glows and hits the wall)
Hanami: Triton’s still in the game!
Me: *Grins* We’re coming for you!!
Tristen: *Grins* We’ll easily counter that!
(Vulcan and Triton speed up and aim for each other)
Hanami: Both Beys are going for it!
Me: Now!!
(Vulcan leans on its driver and barely dodges Triton)
Tristen: *Gasps*
Hanami: What?! Vulcan decides to bail at the last minute!!
Me: Vulcan!!
(My Resonance Aura flares up Vulcan blazes out of the Bey, Vulcan slams into the diverter and picks up even more speed)
Me: Upper Strike!!
(Vulcan slashes at Triton at full power causing a huge power eruption, Triton gets sent flying right in front of Tristen’s face and bursts)
Tristen: What?!
Referee: It’s Mystic Vulcan with a Burst Finish! With a score of 3-1, Victor Homura is the winner!!!
Me: Yes!!
Hanami: Our Blaze King comes out on top and demolishes the sea emperor, and with that battle, Victor’s been moved up to Basic Class!!
(Tristen walks up to me)
Me: Yo.
Tristen: That was an amazing battle, you’re a powerful Blader, I respect that. I hope we can battle again in the future!
Me: Thanks, but I’ll be the winner every time we battle!
Tristen: You can dream!
Me/Tristen: Grr!!
Valt: That battle was amazing. Now I can’t contain myself! Isn’t that right? Gallant Valkyrie?
(Gallant Valkyrie glows brightly)
Valt: *Grins* I knew you’d agree! this episode was super long and cool! i hought it was cool because it builds victor's character and motive!
RE: Beyblade Burst Yin Yang/Mystic Clash Character Contest - UnseenBurst - Sep. 25, 2021
Finale Product List for Yin Yang (I think)
September 25th
Customization Set (Comes with Atlantic Trident, Typhoon Pirate, Dire Aeneas, and Malicious Loki) 60$
October 16th
Booster Regal Spriggan (Comes with an evolution gear and an evolution Layer for Asriel and Anpao) 20$
October 23rd
Triple Set Siege Achilles
November 15th
Booster Fatal Longinus (Final Evolution Gear) 20$
November 20th
The Engulfing Eclipse Special Starter Set (Comes with Starlight Asriel and Celestial Anpao and two power launchers) 69$
December 25th
New Erebus Evolution Starter 35$
January 26th
Starter Zen Dragon (Comes with special Dragon Eclipse Launcher Winder) 36$
RE: Beyblade Burst Yin Yang/Mystic Clash Character Contest - CelBeyBlade - Sep. 26, 2021
i know this is a little of topic but can i be your friends
RE: Beyblade Burst Yin Yang/Mystic Clash Character Contest - UnseenBurst - Sep. 26, 2021
(Sep. 26, 2021 2:58 AM)CelBeyBlade Wrote: i know this is a little of topic but can i be your friends
Of course
RE: Beyblade Burst Yin Yang/Mystic Clash Character Contest - UnseenBurst - Sep. 26, 2021
I want to know what's your favorite one of my fanfictions and why you liked it, please go into detail about why you liked the specific season so I can improve and make my current seasons better (I know Hollow's favorite is Beyjitzu)
RE: Beyblade Burst Yin Yang/Mystic Clash Character Contest - LegendJustice - Sep. 26, 2021
Dynachi. 39 years into the future, Best.
RE: Beyblade Burst Yin Yang/Mystic Clash Character Contest - GenesisBlader - Sep. 26, 2021
(Sep. 26, 2021 5:54 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: I want to know what's your favorite one of my fanfictions and why you liked it, please go into detail about why you liked the specific season so I can improve and make my current seasons better (I know Hollow's favorite is Beyjitzu)
my favorite fanfic is bionic battle, it was one that really inspired me! tho it's a bit based off of sparking, i liked the final battles (Valt vs Asher, Shu vs. Harry) and it really shwon how much asher has grown not only as a blader, but as an overall person!! justin was a pretty awesome rival that goes a long way with asher, and it's good to see that their relationship only get's better!
RE: Beyblade Burst Yin Yang/Mystic Clash Character Contest - UnseenBurst - Sep. 26, 2021
(Sep. 26, 2021 6:02 PM)GenesisBlader Wrote: (Sep. 26, 2021 5:54 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: I want to know what's your favorite one of my fanfictions and why you liked it, please go into detail about why you liked the specific season so I can improve and make my current seasons better (I know Hollow's favorite is Beyjitzu)
my favorite fanfic is bionic battle, it was one that really inspired me! tho it's a bit based off of sparking, i liked the final battles (Valt vs Asher, Shu vs. Harry) and it really shwon how much asher has grown not only as a blader, but as an overall person!! justin was a pretty awesome rival that goes a long way with asher, and it's good to see that their relationship only get's better!
I'm not even gonna lie that season is super cringe in my eyes, it was my first fanfiction so I didn't really know what I was doing but I read through my old chapters and realized I've grown a lot. Maybe when I have time I'll make a Season 2 that's a DB OC. But maybe when around when DB ends. But I'm glad you liked it!
(Sep. 26, 2021 5:55 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Dynachi. 39 years into the future, Best.
it was actually 30 Years into the future to make it easier for me to count up the character's age. Shu and Valt are in their 40s and Lui's around that age. But overall I admit that season was pretty interesting. I might do a season like that again except with a new system and tons of new Beys!
RE: Beyblade Burst Yin Yang/Mystic Clash Character Contest - LegendJustice - Sep. 26, 2021
(Sep. 26, 2021 6:27 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: (Sep. 26, 2021 6:02 PM)GenesisBlader Wrote: my favorite fanfic is bionic battle, it was one that really inspired me! tho it's a bit based off of sparking, i liked the final battles (Valt vs Asher, Shu vs. Harry) and it really shwon how much asher has grown not only as a blader, but as an overall person!! justin was a pretty awesome rival that goes a long way with asher, and it's good to see that their relationship only get's better!
I'm not even gonna lie that season is super cringe in my eyes, it was my first fanfiction so I didn't really know what I was doing but I read through my old chapters and realized I've grown a lot. Maybe when I have time I'll make a Season 2 that's a DB OC. But maybe when around when DB ends. But I'm glad you liked it!
(Sep. 26, 2021 5:55 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: Dynachi. 39 years into the future, Best.
it was actually 30 Years into the future to make it easier for me to count up the character's age. Shu and Valt are in their 40s and Lui's around that age. But overall I admit that season was pretty interesting. I might do a season like that again except with a new system and tons of new Beys!
Yeah I know it was a typo
RE: Beyblade Burst Yin Yang/Mystic Clash Character Contest - Hollowmind13 - Sep. 26, 2021
(Sep. 26, 2021 5:54 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: I want to know what's your favorite one of my fanfictions and why you liked it, please go into detail about why you liked the specific season so I can improve and make my current seasons better (I know Hollow's favorite is Beyjitzu)
It's very easy to like a fic that you follow since the start, that's why I don't read DeltaZakuro's Athena fic, it's too far ahead and I don't want to read everything just to understand what's happening. Other than beyjitzu, I'd say Yin Yang because, well, it's one that I'm following since the start and there's enough chapters to make an opinion, unlike Mystic that is on the beginning.
RE: Beyblade Burst Yin Yang/Mystic Clash Character Contest - Lucha Burst - Sep. 26, 2021
(Sep. 26, 2021 5:54 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: I want to know what's your favorite one of my fanfictions and why you liked it, please go into detail about why you liked the specific season so I can improve and make my current seasons better (I know Hollow's favorite is Beyjitzu)
Dynachi, Well first off it was one of the first thing I was a part of when i Joined the WBO as well as the [/size]inspiration[size=medium] to start doing fanfictions(as cringe as those first 2 were) but I really enjoyed the system and the whole "next generation" set up of it with all the next gen stuff but overall I dont think theres anything i can say that willl help you improve your fanfics ecspecially because My fanfics are worse then yours but yeah, dynachi
RE: Beyblade Burst Yin Yang/Mystic Clash Character Contest - UnseenBurst - Sep. 27, 2021
Chapter 27 has been released!! I'm shocked I finished it in one day.
Beyblade Burst Yin Yang
Chapter 27
The Sea Scavenger, Typhoon Pirate!
Austin: I’m super excited, we’re going to have some mega awesome battles!!
Hyuga: Yeah, we’re going to go zoom zoom bang! And burst Erebus!!
(Austin and Hyuga’s faces turn bright red)
Hyuga/Austin: We’ll break our limits going zoom boom bang!!!
Hikaru: *Chuckles* They sure are something, aren’t they?
Adrian: More like dimwits.
Hikaru: So, they’re having fun while battling! That’s what keeps them going and makes them powerful!!
(Adrian’s Dark Flare surrounds him as his eyes turn purple and his Bey glows ominously)
Possessed Adrian: If you really think that then I’ll crush you in this tournament!!
Hikaru: You can’t keep going like this, it’s an unhealthy Resonance with your Bey!
Possessed Adrian: If you really think that then let’s battle!
Hikaru: I’ll take you on, and show you what True Resonance is!
(Me and Hikaru walk out on the dock of the ship with rain pounding down on the ground, A Purple Shadow of Asriel stands behind Adrian as he grins with evil)
Hikaru (Thoughts): His Flare, it’s just like what Lean’s flare used to be like. I have to win this battle!
Possessed Adrian: Get your Bey ready, I’ll crush you at full power!! *Roars*
Hikaru: I’m ready, I’ll be taking you down!
Adrian/Hikaru: 3! 2! 1! Go, Shoot!!
(Adrian and Hikaru pull off extremely powerful Eclipse Shoots)
Possessed Adrian: Pound them down, Twilight Shoot!!
(Asriel speeds up and launches a powerful barrage of attacks on Helios, Helios leans on the metal on its driver and speeds up)
Hikaru: Super Zone Counter!!
(Helios counters all Asriel’s powerful blows)
Hikaru: *Grins*
Possessed Adrian: Twilight Strike!!
(Asriel leans on the rubber and metal attached to its driver picking up amazing amounts of speed, Asriel slams into Helios sending it flying high in the air)
Hikaru: I’m not giving up, Helios!!!
(Hikaru’s Bright Blue Flare surrounds him as Helios blazes out of the Bey)
Possessed Adrian: *Gasps*
Hikaru: Phoebus Strike!!
(Helios speeds up behind Asriel slamming into it causing it to start wobbling)
Possessed Adrian: What?!
Hikaru: End this, full power!!
(Helios starts clashing wildly with Asriel, Asriel absorbs Helios’ spin causing it to start wobbling)
Possessed Adrian: *Grins*
Hikaru: No way!!
(Asriel speeds up around the stadium while Helios rests in the center wobbling)
Possessed Adrian: Rip ‘em apart, Twilight Blight!!!
(Asriel slams into Helios sending it flying into the sky, Helios bursts)
Hikaru: Wha--What?!
(A purple thunderbolt appears behind Helios as Helios’ parts fall back to the ground, Hikaru falls to the ground in humiliation)
Adrian: Yes, I’m the winner!!
Hikaru: I can’t believe I lost to someone… Like him.
(Adrian walks away leaving Hikaru on the floor humiliated)
Adrian: I need stronger opponents.
(Bell looks at Adrian from the corner)
~In The Main Arena~
Hanami: Hello all you wonderful Bladers! Today, we’ll be kicking off the Junior Ultra Tag League! This tournament is going to be a test of wills, guts ,and Pure Blading Skills! Let’s introduce our First Match Bladers already!!
(Bell runs through the door at full speed)
Bell: Hikaru!!
Hyuga: He already went up for his battle, what’s up?
Bell: Adrian battled Hikaru!
All: *Gasps* Seriously?!
Bell: Yeah, Hikaru lost. The Ultimate Demon King saw it for himself!!
Hyuga: No wonder he seemed different when he was getting ready for his match.
(Bell sits down next to Hyuga)
Bell: Hikaru, I wonder how you’ll do in this battle.
Hanami: This ultimate clash will be, Illius and Po Vs Hikaru and Ren! I’m extremely excited for this battle so why don’t we dive right in?!
(Ren, Hikaru, Po, and Illius walk out to the stage)
Ren: I’ll send you flying with the greatest mate ever, Hikaru!
Illius: *Grins*
(Illius puts Ifrit in Balance Mode)
Hikaru: Yeah, heroes always advance and win the battle!
Po: This isn’t a Movie Mr. Hikaru! Now get ready so I can crush you!!
Drone: Inspect your opponent’s Bey!
Hikaru (Thoughts): Typhoon Pirate, a Clockwise Spinning Attack Type. It has Four Powerful Blades with metal so it can deal devastating damage! Its driver is made out of rubber so it can speed around the stadium at high speeds. He seems strong but I know I can beat him!!
(Ren puts Ragnaruk in Heavy Mode)
Drone: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Hikaru/Ren/Illius/Po: Go, Shoot!!
(Everyone pulls off powerful Eclipse Shoots)
Hanami: We’ve got powerful Eclipse Shoots from all sides!!
(Ragnaruk tries going for the center but Ifrit starts hitting it with powerful blows)
Hanami: Ifrit’s going all out with a powerful barrage of strikes, amazing!!
Illius: *Roars* Beast Barrage!!
Ren: Counter, Super Surging Storm!!
(Ragnaruk takes the center and creates a powerful tornado while Ifrit hits it with extremely powerful blows, Ragnaruk starts wobbling)
Hanami: Ragnaruk’s running out of steam!!
Ren: What?!
Illius: *Roars Loudly* Ifrit!!
(Illius’ Resonance Aura flares up Ifrit blazes out of the Bey)
Po: Heh. I guess I’ll finish this for you!!
Hikaru: Not on my watch!!
(Pirate and Helios both slam into each other sending each other flying)
Illius: Burst them into flames! Combust Smash!!
(Ifrit slams Ragnaruk into the ground, Ragnaruk bursts)
Ren: You’ve gotta be kidding me!!
Hikaru: No!!
Hanami: Ragnaruk’s run out of Stamina! It’s a 2 Vs 1 Battle!!
Hikaru: Go, Helios!!
(Helios speeds up and slams into Pirate and Ifrit, Both Beys get sent flying in different directions, Ifrit gets sent out too far and lands out of the stadium)
Illius: *Gasps*
Hanami: Man, Illius is speechless after that powerful strike Helios just made!!
Po: Drown them in the sea, Typhoon Shoot!!
(Pirate hits Helios with a devastating barrage of attacks, Helios gets trapped in the center getting hit with powerful blows)
Hanami: Helios is trapped in the center and getting hit with powerful blows!!
Hikaru: Grr! I can’t do anything!!!
Po: Now, Pirate!!
(Po’s Resonance Aura flares up Pirate blazes out of the Bey)
Po: Hit them with a Tidal Wave, Typhoon Upper!!
(Pirate slams into Helios and sends it flying in the air, Helios hits the stadium wall and bursts)
Hikaru: *Gasps* No!!
Drone: Typhoon Pirate and Combust Ifrit are the winners!!
Hanami: Amazing, Helios has just been defeated by the ultimate tag duo!! What an amazing feat!!
Po: *Grins* You’re not a bad Blader, I wouldn't mind battling you again!!
(Po slams his hand on Illius, Illius grins quietly, Hikaru picks up his Bey and leaves with utter disappointment)
Hyuga: Hikaru…
Austin: He’ll be fine, we’ve got to prepare for our battle!!
Hyuga: Yeah… (I hope he’ll be fine)
~In Hikaru’s Locker Room~
(Hikaru starts tearing up)
Hikaru: I couldn’t defeat Adrian… Or win in the Tag Battle. Can I really call myself a Champion? Let alone a Legend?
???: Of course, you can, you’ve just gotta get way stronger!!
Hikaru: *Gasps* Aiga…
Aiga: It took me a long time to master Achilles and bring out its full potential. Even doing that I sometimes lost. But when you lose you can use that loss to reflect on what you did wrong and become Super Z Strong!!
Hikaru: Thanks… Aiga. I’ll become the strongest and defeat everyone I battle from now on with Helios!!
(Helios glows as Aiga smiles)
~In The Main Arena~
Hanami: Welcome back everyone! Today, we’ll be continuing the First Round with a banger!! It’s Hyuga Ashi and Austin Saito Vs Acheros Izumi and Ethan Gilten!! This battle will be an all-out clash between will so let’s dive in!!
Ethan: Stay out of my way, got it?
Acheros: I hear you loud and clear.
Hyuga: Vroom zoom bang! We’re going to win this thing!!
Drone: Inspect your opponent's Bey!
Austin (Thoughts): Dire Aeneas, a Counterclockwise Spinning Balance Type. On the Blade it has sharp metal blades on a rounded ring made out of offensive rubber. It’s ‘Chassis can change modes from attack to defense. Attack: when hit hard enough 4hard plastic blades will poke out from the disc. Defense: When being attacked, 6 rounded blades made out of rubber will pop out to prevent attacks. I’ve got to prove my worth… So I can bring Adrian back!!
Acheros: At least try putting up a challenge.
(Acheros puts Aeneas in Attack Mode)
Ethan (Thoughts): Austin Saito, today you will say goodbye to your Anpao!!
Austin/Hyuga: We’ll win this thing with our Broken Limits!!
(Austin puts the Singe Layer on Anpao and sets it to Attack Mode)
Drone: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Austin/Hyuga/Ethan/Acheros: Go, Shoot!!
(Everyone pulls off powerful Eclipse Shoots)
Hanami: Another round of powerful shoots!!
Austin: Singeing Shoot!!
Hyuga: Zoom in with Kindle Strike!!
(Hyperion and Anpao hit Erebus with a powerful barrage of attacks, Erebus stands in the center taking all of the hits)
Hanami: Erebus is taking hit after hit without even flinching one bit!!
(Erebus and Ethan’s eyes glow purple as there Blaze surrounds the both of them)
Ethan: Blow them both away, Requiem Bound!!
(Hyperion and Anpao slam into Erebus’ bound blades, Hyperion and Anpao get sent flying)
Hanami: They’ve both been sent flying!!
Hyuga: Hyperion!!
Austin: Go all out, Anpao!!
(Both Hyuga and Austin’s Resonance Auras flares up as Anpao and Hyperion blaze out of the Bey)
Hyuga: Kindling Limit Destroyer!!
(Hyperion slams into Erebus as its Limit Destroyer activates, Erebus gets flying in the air and goes above Anpao)
Hanami: Erebus is about to counter!!
Ethan: I’m going to break you, Requiem Sword!!
(Erebus crashes down on Anpao causing it to wobble, Erebus starts pushing it towards the wall)
Hanami: *Gasps* Erebus is going for the finisher, will he break Anpao!?!
Austin: Anpao, no!!
Acheros: I’m not ever going to accept this!!
(Aeneas slams into Erebus sending it flying, Anpao continues to wobble)
Hanami: *Gasps* Did Aeneas just turn on Erebus?!
Ethan: What’re you doing?!
Acheros: Breaking a Bey is unforgivable, I’ll never let it happen!!
Ethan: Grr!! *Roars* Erebus!!
(Ethan’s Flare surrounds him almost swallowing him whole as Erebus blazes out of the Bey)
Acheros: Aah! Aeneas!!
(Acheros’ Resonance Aura flares up as Aeneas blazes out of the Bey, Aeneas, and Erebus both head straight for Hyperion and Anpao)
Hanami: Erebus and Aeneas are now teaming up for a double attack?!
Acheros: Plague Scythe!!
Ethan: Requiem Harbinger!!
(Aeneas and Erebus both slam into Hyperion and Anpao, both Beys get sent flying in the air and bursts)
Austin/Hyuga: *Gasps*
Drone: Requiem Erebus and Dire Aeneas are the winners!!
Hanami: Acheros and Ethan both battle like champions and completely demolish Austin and Hyuga!!
Hyuga: We couldn’t break our limits…
(Austin walks up to Acheros with sadness)
Austin: Thanks for saving Anpao.
Acheros: It’s what anyone would’ve done.
(Austin runs away with tears streaming down his face as Adrian watches him from the crowd)
~In Austin’s Locker Room~
(Austin starts punching his pillow in rage as tears continue to run down his face)
Austin: I had to win for Wally’s sake, but I lost!!
(Adrian walks into Austin’s dorm)
Austin: What do you want?!
Adrian: Wipe up your face and get up!
Austin: I’m asking what do you want?!
Adrian: So you lost one battle, you’ve got tons more coming up so get up!!
(Austin’s gets up and sits on his bed)
Adrian: When you lose you get up, train, and get stronger, understand?! You can’t throw in the towel and give up!! I’m going to battle you eventually and need you at full strength! So, get up and start training!!!
Austin: You want to battle me... On the Big Stage?
Adrian: Of course, you're now a Blader I have to beat. You’re climbing up the Rankings and I can’t let you pass me!!
Austin: Adrian…
Adrian: Fix yourself up soon so I can crush you in this tournament!!
Austin: Of course I’ll battle you in the tournament, just wait and see I’ll burst Asriel!!
(Adrian grins as he walks out the door as Valt watches them in the corner)
Valt: Adrian may act tough, but deep down, he really cares about Austin. LJ-Blader GenesisBlader LegendJustice GhostFox CelBeyBlade @"Hollowmind8"
What did you think of the first official rounds of the tournament? Please give me meaningful feedback so I can improve and make your characters better. Yall have an awesome night and I hoped you enjoyed this chapter! Also, I felt like this chapter was a bit short, do you think so too? Tell me, please!!
RE: Beyblade Burst Yin Yang/Mystic Clash Character Contest - Hollowmind13 - Sep. 27, 2021
(Sep. 27, 2021 3:33 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 27 has been released!! I'm shocked I finished it in one day.
Beyblade Burst Yin Yang
Chapter 27
The Sea Scavenger, Typhoon Pirate!
Austin: I’m super excited, we’re going to have some mega awesome battles!!
Hyuga: Yeah, we’re going to go zoom zoom bang! And burst Erebus!!
(Austin and Hyuga’s faces turn bright red)
Hyuga/Austin: We’ll break our limits going zoom boom bang!!!
Hikaru: *Chuckles* They sure are something, aren’t they?
Adrian: More like dimwits.
Hikaru: So, they’re having fun while battling! That’s what keeps them going and makes them powerful!!
(Adrian’s Dark Flare surrounds him as his eyes turn purple and his Bey glows ominously)
Possessed Adrian: If you really think that then I’ll crush you in this tournament!!
Hikaru: You can’t keep going like this, it’s an unhealthy Resonance with your Bey!
Possessed Adrian: If you really think that then let’s battle!
Hikaru: I’ll take you on, and show you what True Resonance is!
(Me and Hikaru walk out on the dock of the ship with rain pounding down on the ground, A Purple Shadow of Asriel stands behind Adrian as he grins with evil)
Hikaru (Thoughts): His Flare, it’s just like what Lean’s flare used to be like. I have to win this battle!
Possessed Adrian: Get your Bey ready, I’ll crush you at full power!! *Roars*
Hikaru: I’m ready, I’ll be taking you down!
Adrian/Hikaru: 3! 2! 1! Go, Shoot!!
(Adrian and Hikaru pull off extremely powerful Eclipse Shoots)
Possessed Adrian: Pound them down, Twilight Shoot!!
(Asriel speeds up and launches a powerful barrage of attacks on Helios, Helios leans on the metal on its driver and speeds up)
Hikaru: Super Zone Counter!!
(Helios counters all Asriel’s powerful blows)
Hikaru: *Grins*
Possessed Adrian: Twilight Strike!!
(Asriel leans on the rubber and metal attached to its driver picking up amazing amounts of speed, Asriel slams into Helios sending it flying high in the air)
Hikaru: I’m not giving up, Helios!!!
(Hikaru’s Bright Blue Flare surrounds him as Helios blazes out of the Bey)
Possessed Adrian: *Gasps*
Hikaru: Phoebus Strike!!
(Helios speeds up behind Asriel slamming into it causing it to start wobbling)
Possessed Adrian: What?!
Hikaru: End this, full power!!
(Helios starts clashing wildly with Asriel, Asriel absorbs Helios’ spin causing it to start wobbling)
Possessed Adrian: *Grins*
Hikaru: No way!!
(Asriel speeds up around the stadium while Helios rests in the center wobbling)
Possessed Adrian: Rip ‘em apart, Twilight Blight!!!
(Asriel slams into Helios sending it flying into the sky, Helios bursts)
Hikaru: Wha--What?!
(A purple thunderbolt appears behind Helios as Helios’ parts fall back to the ground, Hikaru falls to the ground in humiliation)
Adrian: Yes, I’m the winner!!
Hikaru: I can’t believe I lost to someone… Like him.
(Adrian walks away leaving Hikaru on the floor humiliated)
Adrian: I need stronger opponents.
(Bell looks at Adrian from the corner)
~In The Main Arena~
Hanami: Hello all you wonderful Bladers! Today, we’ll be kicking off the Junior Ultra Tag League! This tournament is going to be a test of wills, guts ,and Pure Blading Skills! Let’s introduce our First Match Bladers already!!
(Bell runs through the door at full speed)
Bell: Hikaru!!
Hyuga: He already went up for his battle, what’s up?
Bell: Adrian battled Hikaru!
All: *Gasps* Seriously?!
Bell: Yeah, Hikaru lost. The Ultimate Demon King saw it for himself!!
Hyuga: No wonder he seemed different when he was getting ready for his match.
(Bell sits down next to Hyuga)
Bell: Hikaru, I wonder how you’ll do in this battle.
Hanami: This ultimate clash will be, Illius and Po Vs Hikaru and Ren! I’m extremely excited for this battle so why don’t we dive right in?!
(Ren, Hikaru, Po, and Illius walk out to the stage)
Ren: I’ll send you flying with the greatest mate ever, Hikaru!
Illius: *Grins*
(Illius puts Ifrit in Balance Mode)
Hikaru: Yeah, heroes always advance and win the battle!
Po: This isn’t a Movie Mr. Hikaru! Now get ready so I can crush you!!
Drone: Inspect your opponent’s Bey!
Hikaru (Thoughts): Typhoon Pirate, a Clockwise Spinning Attack Type. It has Four Powerful Blades with metal so it can deal devastating damage! Its driver is made out of rubber so it can speed around the stadium at high speeds. He seems strong but I know I can beat him!!
(Ren puts Ragnaruk in Heavy Mode)
Drone: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Hikaru/Ren/Illius/Po: Go, Shoot!!
(Everyone pulls off powerful Eclipse Shoots)
Hanami: We’ve got powerful Eclipse Shoots from all sides!!
(Ragnaruk tries going for the center but Ifrit starts hitting it with powerful blows)
Hanami: Ifrit’s going all out with a powerful barrage of strikes, amazing!!
Illius: *Roars* Beast Barrage!!
Ren: Counter, Super Surging Storm!!
(Ragnaruk takes the center and creates a powerful tornado while Ifrit hits it with extremely powerful blows, Ragnaruk starts wobbling)
Hanami: Ragnaruk’s running out of steam!!
Ren: What?!
Illius: *Roars Loudly* Ifrit!!
(Illius’ Resonance Aura flares up Ifrit blazes out of the Bey)
Po: Heh. I guess I’ll finish this for you!!
Hikaru: Not on my watch!!
(Pirate and Helios both slam into each other sending each other flying)
Illius: Burst them into flames! Combust Smash!!
(Ifrit slams Ragnaruk into the ground, Ragnaruk bursts)
Ren: You’ve gotta be kidding me!!
Hikaru: No!!
Hanami: Ragnaruk’s run out of Stamina! It’s a 2 Vs 1 Battle!!
Hikaru: Go, Helios!!
(Helios speeds up and slams into Pirate and Ifrit, Both Beys get sent flying in different directions, Ifrit gets sent out too far and lands out of the stadium)
Illius: *Gasps*
Hanami: Man, Illius is speechless after that powerful strike Helios just made!!
Po: Drown them in the sea, Typhoon Shoot!!
(Pirate hits Helios with a devastating barrage of attacks, Helios gets trapped in the center getting hit with powerful blows)
Hanami: Helios is trapped in the center and getting hit with powerful blows!!
Hikaru: Grr! I can’t do anything!!!
Po: Now, Pirate!!
(Po’s Resonance Aura flares up Pirate blazes out of the Bey)
Po: Hit them with a Tidal Wave, Typhoon Upper!!
(Pirate slams into Helios and sends it flying in the air, Helios hits the stadium wall and bursts)
Hikaru: *Gasps* No!!
Drone: Typhoon Pirate and Combust Ifrit are the winners!!
Hanami: Amazing, Helios has just been defeated by the ultimate tag duo!! What an amazing feat!!
Po: *Grins* You’re not a bad Blader, I wouldn't mind battling you again!!
(Po slams his hand on Illius, Illius grins quietly, Hikaru picks up his Bey and leaves with utter disappointment)
Hyuga: Hikaru…
Austin: He’ll be fine, we’ve got to prepare for our battle!!
Hyuga: Yeah… (I hope he’ll be fine)
~In Hikaru’s Locker Room~
(Hikaru starts tearing up)
Hikaru: I couldn’t defeat Adrian… Or win in the Tag Battle. Can I really call myself a Champion? Let alone a Legend?
???: Of course, you can, you’ve just gotta get way stronger!!
Hikaru: *Gasps* Aiga…
Aiga: It took me a long time to master Achilles and bring out its full potential. Even doing that I sometimes lost. But when you lose you can use that loss to reflect on what you did wrong and become Super Z Strong!!
Hikaru: Thanks… Aiga. I’ll become the strongest and defeat everyone I battle from now on with Helios!!
(Helios glows as Aiga smiles)
~In The Main Arena~
Hanami: Welcome back everyone! Today, we’ll be continuing the First Round with a banger!! It’s Hyuga Ashi and Austin Saito Vs Acheros Izumi and Ethan Gilten!! This battle will be an all-out clash between will so let’s dive in!!
Ethan: Stay out of my way, got it?
Acheros: I hear you loud and clear.
Hyuga: Vroom zoom bang! We’re going to win this thing!!
Drone: Inspect your opponent's Bey!
Austin (Thoughts): Dire Aeneas, a Counterclockwise Spinning Balance Type. On the Blade it has sharp metal blades on a rounded ring made out of offensive rubber. It’s ‘Chassis can change modes from attack to defense. Attack: when hit hard enough 4hard plastic blades will poke out from the disc. Defense: When being attacked, 6 rounded blades made out of rubber will pop out to prevent attacks. I’ve got to prove my worth… So I can bring Adrian back!!
Acheros: At least try putting up a challenge.
(Acheros puts Aeneas in Attack Mode)
Ethan (Thoughts): Austin Saito, today you will say goodbye to your Anpao!!
Austin/Hyuga: We’ll win this thing with our Broken Limits!!
(Austin puts the Singe Layer on Anpao and sets it to Attack Mode)
Drone: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Austin/Hyuga/Ethan/Acheros: Go, Shoot!!
(Everyone pulls off powerful Eclipse Shoots)
Hanami: Another round of powerful shoots!!
Austin: Singeing Shoot!!
Hyuga: Zoom in with Kindle Strike!!
(Hyperion and Anpao hit Erebus with a powerful barrage of attacks, Erebus stands in the center taking all of the hits)
Hanami: Erebus is taking hit after hit without even flinching one bit!!
(Erebus and Ethan’s eyes glow purple as there Blaze surrounds the both of them)
Ethan: Blow them both away, Requiem Bound!!
(Hyperion and Anpao slam into Erebus’ bound blades, Hyperion and Anpao get sent flying)
Hanami: They’ve both been sent flying!!
Hyuga: Hyperion!!
Austin: Go all out, Anpao!!
(Both Hyuga and Austin’s Resonance Auras flares up as Anpao and Hyperion blaze out of the Bey)
Hyuga: Kindling Limit Destroyer!!
(Hyperion slams into Erebus as its Limit Destroyer activates, Erebus gets flying in the air and goes above Anpao)
Hanami: Erebus is about to counter!!
Ethan: I’m going to break you, Requiem Sword!!
(Erebus crashes down on Anpao causing it to wobble, Erebus starts pushing it towards the wall)
Hanami: *Gasps* Erebus is going for the finisher, will he break Anpao!?!
Austin: Anpao, no!!
Acheros: I’m not ever going to accept this!!
(Aeneas slams into Erebus sending it flying, Anpao continues to wobble)
Hanami: *Gasps* Did Aeneas just turn on Erebus?!
Ethan: What’re you doing?!
Acheros: Breaking a Bey is unforgivable, I’ll never let it happen!!
Ethan: Grr!! *Roars* Erebus!!
(Ethan’s Flare surrounds him almost swallowing him whole as Erebus blazes out of the Bey)
Acheros: Aah! Aeneas!!
(Acheros’ Resonance Aura flares up as Aeneas blazes out of the Bey, Aeneas, and Erebus both head straight for Hyperion and Anpao)
Hanami: Erebus and Aeneas are now teaming up for a double attack?!
Acheros: Plague Scythe!!
Ethan: Requiem Harbinger!!
(Aeneas and Erebus both slam into Hyperion and Anpao, both Beys get sent flying in the air and bursts)
Austin/Hyuga: *Gasps*
Drone: Requiem Erebus and Dire Aeneas are the winners!!
Hanami: Acheros and Ethan both battle like champions and completely demolish Austin and Hyuga!!
Hyuga: We couldn’t break our limits…
(Austin walks up to Acheros with sadness)
Austin: Thanks for saving Anpao.
Acheros: It’s what anyone would’ve done.
(Austin runs away with tears streaming down his face as Adrian watches him from the crowd)
~In Austin’s Locker Room~
(Austin starts punching his pillow in rage as tears continue to run down his face)
Austin: I had to win for Wally’s sake, but I lost!!
(Adrian walks into Austin’s dorm)
Austin: What do you want?!
Adrian: Wipe up your face and get up!
Austin: I’m asking what do you want?!
Adrian: So you lost one battle, you’ve got tons more coming up so get up!!
(Austin’s gets up and sits on his bed)
Adrian: When you lose you get up, train, and get stronger, understand?! You can’t throw in the towel and give up!! I’m going to battle you eventually and need you at full strength! So, get up and start training!!!
Austin: You want to battle me... On the Big Stage?
Adrian: Of course, you're now a Blader I have to beat. You’re climbing up the Rankings and I can’t let you pass me!!
Austin: Adrian…
Adrian: Fix yourself up soon so I can crush you in this tournament!!
Austin: Of course I’ll battle you in the tournament, just wait and see I’ll burst Asriel!!
(Adrian grins as he walks out the door as Valt watches them in the corner)
Valt: Adrian may act tough, but deep down, he really cares about Austin. "LJ-Blader" "GenesisBlader" "LegendJustice" "GhostFox" "CelBeyBlade" "Hollowmind8"
What did you think of the first official rounds of the tournament? Please give me meaningful feedback so I can improve and make your characters better. Yall have an awesome night and I hoped you enjoyed this chapter! Also, I felt like this chapter was a bit short, do you think so too? Tell me, please!!
I normally say things out of order.
Acheros being not okay with breaking beys is nice, like, they could have lost if Hyuga/Hyperion were in an good position. ("Illius is speechless" part got me) First tag battle was also great, Illius/Ifrit got terminated as soon as he demolished Ren/Ragnaruk. The part where "Adrian shows his feeling without showing them" is nice ig. This chapter is surely bigger than most Beyjitzu chapters, your chapters now crash my chrome when I open them lol. Also, I think Pirate driver is Spiral (plastic) with a Jolt tip (shape). I'd say you go far with script writing format. .
A bonus thing that I made (I'm doing MatPat job) :
We have 2 bey breakers here: Ethan(active) and Adrian(inactive for now).
So, how much beys they can break? I mean, what are their options? Ofc they can break most of the beys, but can they break the newly introduced bladers beys?
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Let's start with the easiest:
Trident is almost all rubber, and that's a lot of rubber. It absorbs impact like crazy, as you can see on its first battle on this fic, Ifrit slams into Trident full power but instead of bursting, it killed the spin on 1 hit (which wouldn't normally happen, but I'll let it pass and say that Illius knows how to attack). So theorically, it's unbreakable in arena.
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Aeneas, the Anpao saver, have both metal and rubber, but it's rubber is attack oriented, but it can spin steal so idk. It's Chassis on defense also has rubber, but this one seems to be softer since it's used on defense. So my theory is that Aeneas can skip "death" by having the "final hit" go directly into the rubber. It's metal blades could also help since they're smooth. (It can also just get out of there using the rubber on the wall)
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Up next is Pirate. It doesn't feature anything that can stop it from break other than metal, which, as seen on Nightmare Longinus getting split in half, is not enough. It doesn't even have a defensive shape. It's description is kinda small ngl. It's your average hard-hitting attack type.
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We also have Joker which, unfortunately, is the easiest to break. Don't believe me? Lemme explain: Joker has an elliptical shape with ruber on each side, rubber burst stoppers and a High driver. Due to the high Trick, it can be destabilized easier, which could mean more attack power but, in a endurance test, doesn't help (easier to hit on the chip/core). The rubber burst stoppers make the bey harder to burst, but that means Ethan/Adrian can just hit harder without it bursting, thus giving them more time to destroy it. The elliptical shape makes a good attack, but that also means it's easier to trap it on the wall. For example, if Aeneas gets between the wall and a bey, its rubber makes it zoom out of there as soon as it touches the wall, but Joker would get stuck because it's an oval and not a circle.
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I guess that's it for the new bladers, ofc all the other beys (except Fafnir, rubber) can be destroyed with relatively ease (compared to Trident and Aeneas). And now that UnseenBurst knows that Joker can be destroyed with ease, I wonder if they will use that knowledge on Adrian's favor
RE: Beyblade Burst Yin Yang/Mystic Clash Character Contest - GhostFox - Sep. 27, 2021
(Sep. 25, 2021 12:49 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Every Chapter in Arc 2, I'd like to see all your speculations on what the episodes are about and how they will play out!
26) The Sea Scavenger, Typhoon Pirate!
27) The Deep Sea, Atlantis Trident!
28) The Shinning Spin King, Siege Achilles!
29) Giving it our all, Yin Yang Style!
30) Hikaru and Hyuga Vs. Bell and Ethan!
31) Austin's Revolution, Free Vs. Austin!
32) The Yin Yang Vs. The Crippiling Darkness!
33) The Natural Born Trickster, Rogue Joker!
34) The God of Crimson Flames, Regal Spriggan!
35) God Of Flames Vs. The Blaze Prince!
36) Torpedo Bomber Vs. Twilight Blight!
37) The Ultimate Clash of the Juinor Legends!
38) Crash Landing on the Oni's Island!
39) Smashing Crash Attack, Fatal Longinus!
40) Adrian's Revolutionary Blaze Of Light!
41) The Roaring Blazes of the Finale!!
42) Vengeance and Bitterness!
43) Roaring Flames, Shu Vs. Ethan!
44) The Ultimate Reunion, Starlight Asriel, and Celestial Anpao!
Tell me what chapter you're excited about, I'm excited to start writing this, Also, which chapter do you think Asriel and Anpao are going to break in? Put your guesses in!
Wait, what happened to the aeneas chapter?
RE: Beyblade Burst Yin Yang/Mystic Clash Character Contest - UnseenBurst - Oct. 02, 2021
27) The Sea Protector, Atlantis Trident!
28) The Super Z King, Siege Achilles!
29) Teamwork?! Not Gonna Happen!
30) The Bright Flares Vs. The Crippling Blaze!
31) Austin's Revolutionary Blaze!
32) The Yin Yang Duo's Showdown!
33) Crucial Showdown in the Skies!
34) The Crimson God's Return, Regal Spriggan!
35) Champions of Flare, Shu Vs. Adrian!
36) The Final Round, Going All Out!
37) Crash Landing on The Island of Demons!
38) The Dragon of Rage, Fatal Longinus
39) The Growing Wildfire!
40) Adrian's Revolutionary Blaze!
41) The Roaring Blazes of The Finale!
42) Vengeance?! Bitterness?!
43) The Eclipse System, Starlight Asriel, and Celestial Anpao!
RE: Beyblade Burst Yin Yang/Mystic Clash Character Contest - GenesisBlader - Oct. 02, 2021
(Oct. 02, 2021 12:56 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: 27) The Sea Protector, Atlantis Trident!
28) The Super Z King, Siege Achilles!
29) Teamwork?! Not Gonna Happen!
30) The Bright Flares Vs. The Crippling Blaze!
31) Austin's Revolutionary Blaze!
32) The Yin Yang Duo's Showdown!
33) Crucial Showdown in the Skies!
34) The Crimson God's Return, Regal Spriggan!
35) Champions of Flare, Shu Vs. Adrian!
36) The Final Round, Going All Out!
37) Crash Landing on The Island of Demons!
38) The Dragon of Rage, Fatal Longinus
39) The Growing Wildfire!
40) Adrian's Revolutionary Blaze!
41) The Roaring Blazes of The Finale!
42) Vengeance?! Bitterness?!
43) The Eclipse System, Starlight Asriel, and Celestial Anpao!
what's funny is that i was gonna name longinus fatality longinus lol
tbf you did get to it before me, and the names are pretty dope tho i cant lie lol 👌
RE: Beyblade Burst Yin Yang/Mystic Clash Character Contest - UnseenBurst - Oct. 02, 2021
I finally finished Chapter 28 I hope yall enjoy it.
Beyblade Burst Yin Yang
Chapter 28
The Deep Sea Protector, Atlantis Trident!
(Adrian bursts through Ethan’s dorm room door with a ticked off face)
Ethan: What do you want?
Adrian: I saw you trying to break Anpao, what was that all about?! We had a deal!!
Ethan: I technically never agreed nor denied your offer.
Possessed Adrian: Give me one good reason I shouldn’t crush your Bey into dust right now!!
(Adrian’s Dark Flare surrounds him and sparkles golden)
Ethan: You don’t have the strength to beat me and you know it. I also know you’re trying to act tough but deep down you're scared I’ll break your precious Bey. Aren’t you?
Possessed Adrian: Grr! Take that back!!
Ethan: I won’t because it’s true. Now get out.
(Ethan pushes Adrian out of his dorm and locks the door on him)
Adrian (Thoughts): As much as I hate to admit it, he’s right. Isn’t he? Asriel.
(Adrian holds out Asriel waiting for a response, Asriel doesn’t respond)
Adrian: Asriel, why won’t you say anything?
Aiga: It’s because it sees the light in you on the inside but not on the outside.
(Aiga walks up to Adrian)
Adrian: What do you mean by that?
Aiga: Your Resonance is becoming more calm and tame. But your dark side is still taking you over. Whether good or bad there’s light in everyone but it’s hidden deep inside. But you’re Light is becoming more exposed and open. Asriel needs to see your True Resonance if you want it to talk to you.
Adrian: I don’t need that phony baloney! My Resonance with Asriel is perfect even if we have to go to the depths of the Darkness as long as I am getting stronger it doesn’t matter to me!
Aiga: You’re hurting your Resonance with Asriel and destroying the bond with your own brother. Is this really what you want? Are you really going to sacrifice everything for your own Selfish Concerns?
(Adrian’s heart beats loudly as Adrian’s Dark Flare corrupts him)
Possessed Adrian: You’ve got no clue, do you?!
Aiga: *Gasps* Adrian--
(Adrian runs off at full speed)
Aiga (Thoughts): What does he mean “I don’t have a clue?”
~In Bell’s Locker Room~
Bell: Torpedo Bomber!!
(Belial slams into Ragnaruk at full power, a huge explosion of power bursts out of the stadium sending Ragnaruk high in the air bursting it)
Ren: Not again mate!!
Bell: One more battle!
Ren: I don’t think I can keep going, Bell. I’ve reached my limits and can’t battle anymore!
Bell: If Me and Adrian want to win the next battle, we’ve got to be in perfect synchronization, Belial’s Attack Power has to go all the way up!!
Ren: *Sighs* Why me though?
Bell: Austin told me you’ve been trying to beat Adrian for a long time, you must be able to train me for my battle!!
Ren: *Yawns* But mate--
Bell: The Demon King commands you to battle him!!!!
Ren: *Squeals* Fine, but this is the last battle.
(Ren puts Ragnaruk in Heavy Mode)
Bell/Ren: 3! 2! 1! Go, Shoot!!
(Bell and Ren pull off extremely powerful Eclipse Shoots)
Ren: It’s go time, Super Surging Storm!!
(Ragnaruk takes the center and creates a huge Tornado in the middle)
Bell: Venture Shoot!!
(Belial hits Ragnaruk with a powerful barrage of attacks, Ragnaruk barely flinches)
Ren: I’m going all out here so you’d better give me a killer of a match!!
Bell: Belial, show them why The Demon King is the strongest!!
(Belial leans on its driver and picks up massive speed, Belial slams into Ragnaruk, Ragnaruk gets sent flying out of the center)
Ren: Ragnaruk!!
(Ren’s Resonance Aura flares up Ragnaruk blazes out of the Bey)
Bell: Aah! Belial!!
(Bell’s Resonance Aura flares up as Belial blazes out of the Bey)
Ren: True Blazing Mach Tornado!!
(A humongous Tornado follows Ragnaruk as it speeds up and aims for Belial, Belial leans on its driver and aims for Ragnaruk)
Bell: Torpedo Bomber!!
(Belial slams into Ragnaruk and bursts it as Bell flicks his cape in the air)
Bell: *Grins* The Demon King is the winner!!
Ren: Grr! One more time!
Bell: Don’t worry, I’ve gotten all the practice I need!
(Bell runs away)
Ren: Come back here, you’ve got to battle me one more time!!
(Ren would start chasing after Bell)
~In The Airship’s Hallway~
Aiga: Yo, Adrian! Where’d you-
(Aiga slams into Austin sending both of them in the opposite direction)
Austin: Ouch!
Aiga: Sorry about that, I was looking for Adrian.
Austin: Adrian? I don’t know where he is, probably training if I know him.
Aiga: You know Adrian?
Austin: Yeah, he’s my Twin Brother.
Aiga: “Twin?!”
Austin: Yeah, he’s older than me by 2 Minutes.
Aiga: But… Both of you seem super different.
Austin: Yeah… People tell me that a lot.
Aiga: Do you mind telling me why Adrian takes Beyblade so seriously?
Austin: Sure. Me and Adrian did a lot of sports together when we were younger but weren't really good at any of them. But we were having fun, that’s all that mattered to us. But, Adrian was being made fun of because he didn’t take any sports seriously and was bad at all of them. Then a huge fight broke out between Adrian and the bullies-
Aiga: Spare the details, please.
Austin: I was planning on it. Anyways, Adrian lost… Bad. After he got better he changed big time and tried pushing everyone out of his life. And started taking Beyblade way more seriously. And when he got his own Bey, that’s when he started changing more and more. With every battle, he gets weirder and weirder. But for now, it looks like it's dialing down.
Aiga: Woah. So, Adrian used to have fun Blading but now he’s gone off the deep end?
Austin: No!! There’s still a chance to save him, I can guarantee it!!!
Aiga: Austin, I promise I’ll do everything in my power to bring him back. Super Z Style!!
Austin: Thanks, I’m going to get ready to watch Adrian’s match! I’ll see you there!!
(Austin runs off with enthusiasm, Aiga takes Achilles fragments out of his pocket and looks at them as they glow)
Aiga: Achilles, we’re going to bring Adrian Saito out of the darkness and show him what True Blading’s all about!!
(Achilles glimmers brightly)
~In Adrian’s Locker Room~
Adrian: Go, Shoot!!
(Adrian pulls off an extremely powerful Eclipse Shoot)
Adrian: Asriel, I promise you’ll become the strongest… No matter what!!
(Asriel enters Dark Flare and glimmers Gold)
Possessed Adrian: *Grins* I’ll burn away everything that gets in my way!!
(Asriel slams into the stadium wall at full power causing it to send itself flying out of the stadium)
Adrian: *Gasps*
(Jennifer catches Asriel as she grins evilly)
Adrian: Go away.
Jennifer: *Frowns* Is that how you treat a friend?
Adrian: If you think you’re my friend you’re wrong.
Jennifer: How rude. And here I thought you had some class.
Adrian: Get to the point.
Jennifer: I want to battle you!
Adrian: You want to learn my moves so you can beat me… Don’t you?
Jennifer: I want a battle! Unless you’re scared?
Adrian: *Sighs* One battle, that’s it.
Jennifer: With pleasure. I’ll crush you with style! *Smirks*
Adrian: First battle!
Jennifer (Thoughts): He’s such a dimwit. I’ll take you down and learn all your moves!
Adrian (Thoughts): I’ll take her down and show her she can’t trick me.
Jennifer: Ready? Set!
Adrian/Jennifer: 3! 2! 1! Go, Shoot!!
(Jennifer and Adrian pull off extremely powerful Eclipse Shoots)
Jennifer: *Grins* Take ‘em out, Joker!!
(Joker takes the center waiting for Asriel to strike)
Adrian: Burn them away, Twilight Shoot!!
(Asriel speeds up and slams into Joker with a barrage of powerful strikes, Joker holds itself down)
Jennifer: Gambling Fate!!
(Joker blocks Asriel’s attack with its rubber and blows it back)
Jennifer: Looks like Asriel’s weak!
Possessed Adrian: Grr! True Twilight Flight!!
(Asriel catches onto the stadium rim and picks up speed, Asriel slams into Joker and sends it flying, Joker leans on its driver and changes to Attack Mode)
Jennifer: Rogue Judgement!!
(Joker’s blades glow as it speeds up and aims for Asriel)
Possessed Adrian: Counter, Twilight Blight!!
(Asriel leans on its driver and speeds up, Asriel and Joker start clashing wildly, Both Beys burst, Adrian picks up his Bey’s parts and leaves)
Jennifer (Thoughts): Dang, he’s strong. I’m going to have to step it up if I want to beat him in our match!!
~In The Main Arena~
Hanami: Hello all you Blading Champions and all you Beyfans watching from home! Today, we’ll be diving into the final match of The First Round! Bell and Adrian Vs. Jennifer and Thalia!!
Austin: C’mon Adrian, you’ve got this!!
Hikaru: Win this, for us!!
Hyuga: Yeah, for us!
(Bell and Adrian walk out to the stage along with Jennifer and Thalia)
Thalia: I’m excited to have an awesome battle with my Atlantis Trident!!
(Thalia holds up Atlantis Trident)
Bell: *Grins* We’ll be the winners, no matter what!
(Adrian puts Asriel in Heavy Mode)
Jennifer (Thoughts): Trying to switch it up eh? Too late, I already know everything about you!!
Drone: Inspect your opponent’s Bey!
Bell (Thoughts): Atlantis Trident, a Clockwise Spinning Stamina Type. Atlantis features three large blades to create an overall triangular shape, it is all made out of soft rubber, the whole ring, except the three blades, absorbs impact. Its ‘Chassis features a long, circular POM perimeter (akin to the frame Expand). In theory, it would have contact with the stadium floor, increasing LAD. The tip is made out of metal and the plate around it free spins and is ⅚ the size. Its perimeter has rubber, it was meant to stop the bey from getting pushed making contact with the stadium floor, it also has a spring, but a looser, made for absorbing the force from the pushing. This Bey is powerful but me and Adrian will be able to beat it!!
Drone: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Bell/Adrian/Jennifer/Thalia: Go, Shoot!!
(Everyone pulls off extremely powerful Eclipse Shoots)
Hanami: We’ve got Powerful Shoots from all corners!!
Adrian: Crush them, now!!
Jennifer: Full power!!
(Asriel and Joker go up the stadium slope and start clashing in the pit)
Hanami: Asriel and Joker are going for it, they’re not holding anything back!!
Bell: I’ve got your back!
Thalia: I’m your opponent, don't forget!!
(Trident slams into Belial with a powerful upper attack sending it flying in the air)
Hanami: Belial’s been sent flying in the air!!
Bell: Hang in there, Belial!!
Hikaru: C’mon Belial!! You’ve got this!!!
Hyuga: Vroom!!
(Belial barely hits the stadium wall and lands back into the stadium)
Hyuga/Hikaru: *Sighs Deeply*
Hanami: Amazing, Belial stays in at the last second and spices things up!
Bell: True Venture Shoot!!
(Belial dishes out a powerful barrage of extremely powerful blows, Trident barely withstands them all)
Thalia: Grr! C’mon, you’ve gotta keep going!!
(Asriel and Joker speed up in the pit and hit each other with a powerful barrage of attacks)
Adrian: End this thing with Twilight Slash!!
Jennifer: Rogue Judgement!!
(Asriel and Joker slam into each other at full power sending each other flying in the air, Asriel lands out of the stadium as Joker bursts in mid-air)
Adrian/Jennifer: *Gasps*
Hanami: Incredible! Both Asriel and Joker are out of the running! It’s Trident Vs. Belial!!
(Belial and Trident hit each other with powerful blows, Trident takes the center and starts absorbing Belial’s attacks)
Thalia: Atlantic Whirlpool!!
Hanami: No way! Trident switches gears and starts absorbing Belial’s attacks!!
Bell: *Roars* Belial!!
(Bell’s Resonance Aura flares up Belial blazes out of the Bey)
Thalia: Hold your guard down, Trident!!
(Thalia’s Resonance Aura flares up Trident blazes out of the Bey)
Bell: Burst ‘em, Torpedo Wing!!
(Belial speeds up and slams into Trident, Trident gets sent flying into the wall, Trident starts wobbling but still speeds around the stadium)
Hanami: Belial has weakened Trident and goes in for the kill!!
Bell: One more time, Torpedo Wing!!
Thalia: Coastal Counter!!
(Trident and Belial speed around each other and start clashing causing a huge explosion)
Hanami: Both Beys are going for it!!
(Belial starts wobbling as Trident holds down the center fiercely)
All: *Gasps*
Hikaru: Hang in there, Belial!!
Hyuga: C’mon you’ve got this!
Hanami: Belial’s out of juice while Trident holds the center down like a boss!!
Bell: Keep going, Belial!!
(Belial leans on its driver and gains massive speed, Belial aims for Trident)
Thalia: *Gasps*
Bell: Burst! Torpedo Bomber!!
(Belial slams into Trident sending it flying, Belial stops spinning seconds before Trident hits the wall and bursts)
Thalia/Bell: *Gasps*
Drone: Atlantis Trident and Rogue Joker are the winners!!
Hanami: Amazing! Belial tried recovering but just didn’t have enough time and stamina to hang in there!!
Jennifer: Thanks for the point, I guess.
(Jennifer walks away as Thalia walks up to Bell)
Thalia: That battle made me go all out, it was super fun!!
Bell: *Laughs*, Of course, you had fun! You were battling The Ultimate Demon King! But be warned… This loss is just preparation for a big win!!
Thalia: I’d like to see you try! Bye!!
(Thalia runs off, Adrian and Bell stare each other down)
Bell: She won by pure luck. It’s not my fault I couldn’t win.
Adrian: Listen up. I’ll let you off the hook this time but next time I expect a picture-perfect win.
(Adrian walks away)
Bell: Uh? Okay.
Austin (Thoughts): That’s not like the Adrian I know.
(Valt watches from the top of the Arena)
Valt (Thoughts): Looked like Adrian enjoyed that battle. He’s starting to understand what Blading’s Truly About!!
~In The Workroom~
Aiga: Achilles, I’ll evolve you into a Super Z Powerful Bey! You’ll be invincible!!
(Achilles glimmers in the light)
Aiga: I knew you’d like the idea!!
~At The Raging Bulls~
(Shu watches the match from the Big Screen)
Shu (Thoughts): He’s starting to understand the True Meaning of Blading… Nice work. Valt and Aiga! LegendJustice @"Hollowmind8" LJ-Blader CelBeyBlade GhostFox Lucha Burst Kiryu Kazuma
I'd love some Ratings and Reviews! Personal Thoughts are fine too!
RE: Beyblade Burst Yin Yang/Mystic Clash Character Contest - GenesisBlader - Oct. 02, 2021
(Oct. 02, 2021 3:03 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: I finally finished Chapter 28 I hope yall enjoy it.
Beyblade Burst Yin Yang
Chapter 28
The Deep Sea Protector, Atlantis Trident!
(Adrian bursts through Ethan’s dorm room door with a ticked off face)
Ethan: What do you want?
Adrian: I saw you trying to break Anpao, what was that all about?! We had a deal!!
Ethan: I technically never agreed nor denied your offer.
Possessed Adrian: Give me one good reason I shouldn’t crush your Bey into dust right now!!
(Adrian’s Dark Flare surrounds him and sparkles golden)
Ethan: You don’t have the strength to beat me and you know it. I also know you’re trying to act tough but deep down you're scared I’ll break your precious Bey. Aren’t you?
Possessed Adrian: Grr! Take that back!!
Ethan: I won’t because it’s true. Now get out.
(Ethan pushes Adrian out of his dorm and locks the door on him)
Adrian (Thoughts): As much as I hate to admit it, he’s right. Isn’t he? Asriel.
(Adrian holds out Asriel waiting for a response, Asriel doesn’t respond)
Adrian: Asriel, why won’t you say anything?
Aiga: It’s because it sees the light in you on the inside but not on the outside.
(Aiga walks up to Adrian)
Adrian: What do you mean by that?
Aiga: Your Resonance is becoming more calm and tame. But your dark side is still taking you over. Whether good or bad there’s light in everyone but it’s hidden deep inside. But you’re Light is becoming more exposed and open. Asriel needs to see your True Resonance if you want it to talk to you.
Adrian: I don’t need that phony baloney! My Resonance with Asriel is perfect even if we have to go to the depths of the Darkness as long as I am getting stronger it doesn’t matter to me!
Aiga: You’re hurting your Resonance with Asriel and destroying the bond with your own brother. Is this really what you want? Are you really going to sacrifice everything for your own Selfish Concerns?
(Adrian’s heart beats loudly as Adrian’s Dark Flare corrupts him)
Possessed Adrian: You’ve got no clue, do you?!
Aiga: *Gasps* Adrian--
(Adrian runs off at full speed)
Aiga (Thoughts): What does he mean “I don’t have a clue?”
~In Bell’s Locker Room~
Bell: Torpedo Bomber!!
(Belial slams into Ragnaruk at full power, a huge explosion of power bursts out of the stadium sending Ragnaruk high in the air bursting it)
Ren: Not again mate!!
Bell: One more battle!
Ren: I don’t think I can keep going, Bell. I’ve reached my limits and can’t battle anymore!
Bell: If Me and Adrian want to win the next battle, we’ve got to be in perfect synchronization, Belial’s Attack Power has to go all the way up!!
Ren: *Sighs* Why me though?
Bell: Austin told me you’ve been trying to beat Adrian for a long time, you must be able to train me for my battle!!
Ren: *Yawns* But mate--
Bell: The Demon King commands you to battle him!!!!
Ren: *Squeals* Fine, but this is the last battle.
(Ren puts Ragnaruk in Heavy Mode)
Bell/Ren: 3! 2! 1! Go, Shoot!!
(Bell and Ren pull off extremely powerful Eclipse Shoots)
Ren: It’s go time, Super Surging Storm!!
(Ragnaruk takes the center and creates a huge Tornado in the middle)
Bell: Venture Shoot!!
(Belial hits Ragnaruk with a powerful barrage of attacks, Ragnaruk barely flinches)
Ren: I’m going all out here so you’d better give me a killer of a match!!
Bell: Belial, show them why The Demon King is the strongest!!
(Belial leans on its driver and picks up massive speed, Belial slams into Ragnaruk, Ragnaruk gets sent flying out of the center)
Ren: Ragnaruk!!
(Ren’s Resonance Aura flares up Ragnaruk blazes out of the Bey)
Bell: Aah! Belial!!
(Bell’s Resonance Aura flares up as Belial blazes out of the Bey)
Ren: True Blazing Mach Tornado!!
(A humongous Tornado follows Ragnaruk as it speeds up and aims for Belial, Belial leans on its driver and aims for Ragnaruk)
Bell: Torpedo Bomber!!
(Belial slams into Ragnaruk and bursts it as Bell flicks his cape in the air)
Bell: *Grins* The Demon King is the winner!!
Ren: Grr! One more time!
Bell: Don’t worry, I’ve gotten all the practice I need!
(Bell runs away)
Ren: Come back here, you’ve got to battle me one more time!!
(Ren would start chasing after Bell)
~In The Airship’s Hallway~
Aiga: Yo, Adrian! Where’d you-
(Aiga slams into Austin sending both of them in the opposite direction)
Austin: Ouch!
Aiga: Sorry about that, I was looking for Adrian.
Austin: Adrian? I don’t know where he is, probably training if I know him.
Aiga: You know Adrian?
Austin: Yeah, he’s my Twin Brother.
Aiga: “Twin?!”
Austin: Yeah, he’s older than me by 2 Minutes.
Aiga: But… Both of you seem super different.
Austin: Yeah… People tell me that a lot.
Aiga: Do you mind telling me why Adrian takes Beyblade so seriously?
Austin: Sure. Me and Adrian did a lot of sports together when we were younger but weren't really good at any of them. But we were having fun, that’s all that mattered to us. But, Adrian was being made fun of because he didn’t take any sports seriously and was bad at all of them. Then a huge fight broke out between Adrian and the bullies-
Aiga: Spare the details, please.
Austin: I was planning on it. Anyways, Adrian lost… Bad. After he got better he changed big time and tried pushing everyone out of his life. And started taking Beyblade way more seriously. And when he got his own Bey, that’s when he started changing more and more. With every battle, he gets weirder and weirder. But for now, it looks like it's dialing down.
Aiga: Woah. So, Adrian used to have fun Blading but now he’s gone off the deep end?
Austin: No!! There’s still a chance to save him, I can guarantee it!!!
Aiga: Austin, I promise I’ll do everything in my power to bring him back. Super Z Style!!
Austin: Thanks, I’m going to get ready to watch Adrian’s match! I’ll see you there!!
(Austin runs off with enthusiasm, Aiga takes Achilles fragments out of his pocket and looks at them as they glow)
Aiga: Achilles, we’re going to bring Adrian Saito out of the darkness and show him what True Blading’s all about!!
(Achilles glimmers brightly)
~In Adrian’s Locker Room~
Adrian: Go, Shoot!!
(Adrian pulls off an extremely powerful Eclipse Shoot)
Adrian: Asriel, I promise you’ll become the strongest… No matter what!!
(Asriel enters Dark Flare and glimmers Gold)
Possessed Adrian: *Grins* I’ll burn away everything that gets in my way!!
(Asriel slams into the stadium wall at full power causing it to send itself flying out of the stadium)
Adrian: *Gasps*
(Jennifer catches Asriel as she grins evilly)
Adrian: Go away.
Jennifer: *Frowns* Is that how you treat a friend?
Adrian: If you think you’re my friend you’re wrong.
Jennifer: How rude. And here I thought you had some class.
Adrian: Get to the point.
Jennifer: I want to battle you!
Adrian: You want to learn my moves so you can beat me… Don’t you?
Jennifer: I want a battle! Unless you’re scared?
Adrian: *Sighs* One battle, that’s it.
Jennifer: With pleasure. I’ll crush you with style! *Smirks*
Adrian: First battle!
Jennifer (Thoughts): He’s such a dimwit. I’ll take you down and learn all your moves!
Adrian (Thoughts): I’ll take her down and show her she can’t trick me.
Jennifer: Ready? Set!
Adrian/Jennifer: 3! 2! 1! Go, Shoot!!
(Jennifer and Adrian pull off extremely powerful Eclipse Shoots)
Jennifer: *Grins* Take ‘em out, Joker!!
(Joker takes the center waiting for Asriel to strike)
Adrian: Burn them away, Twilight Shoot!!
(Asriel speeds up and slams into Joker with a barrage of powerful strikes, Joker holds itself down)
Jennifer: Gambling Fate!!
(Joker blocks Asriel’s attack with its rubber and blows it back)
Jennifer: Looks like Asriel’s weak!
Possessed Adrian: Grr! True Twilight Flight!!
(Asriel catches onto the stadium rim and picks up speed, Asriel slams into Joker and sends it flying, Joker leans on its driver and changes to Attack Mode)
Jennifer: Rogue Judgement!!
(Joker’s blades glow as it speeds up and aims for Asriel)
Possessed Adrian: Counter, Twilight Blight!!
(Asriel leans on its driver and speeds up, Asriel and Joker start clashing wildly, Both Beys burst, Adrian picks up his Bey’s parts and leaves)
Jennifer (Thoughts): Dang, he’s strong. I’m going to have to step it up if I want to beat him in our match!!
~In The Main Arena~
Hanami: Hello all you Blading Champions and all you Beyfans watching from home! Today, we’ll be diving into the final match of The First Round! Bell and Adrian Vs. Jennifer and Thalia!!
Austin: C’mon Adrian, you’ve got this!!
Hikaru: Win this, for us!!
Hyuga: Yeah, for us!
(Bell and Adrian walk out to the stage along with Jennifer and Thalia)
Thalia: I’m excited to have an awesome battle with my Atlantis Trident!!
(Thalia holds up Atlantis Trident)
Bell: *Grins* We’ll be the winners, no matter what!
(Adrian puts Asriel in Heavy Mode)
Jennifer (Thoughts): Trying to switch it up eh? Too late, I already know everything about you!!
Drone: Inspect your opponent’s Bey!
Bell (Thoughts): Atlantis Trident, a Clockwise Spinning Stamina Type. Atlantis features three large blades to create an overall triangular shape, it is all made out of soft rubber, the whole ring, except the three blades, absorbs impact. Its ‘Chassis features a long, circular POM perimeter (akin to the frame Expand). In theory, it would have contact with the stadium floor, increasing LAD. The tip is made out of metal and the plate around it free spins and is ⅚ the size. Its perimeter has rubber, it was meant to stop the bey from getting pushed making contact with the stadium floor, it also has a spring, but a looser, made for absorbing the force from the pushing. This Bey is powerful but me and Adrian will be able to beat it!!
Drone: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Bell/Adrian/Jennifer/Thalia: Go, Shoot!!
(Everyone pulls off extremely powerful Eclipse Shoots)
Hanami: We’ve got Powerful Shoots from all corners!!
Adrian: Crush them, now!!
Jennifer: Full power!!
(Asriel and Joker go up the stadium slope and start clashing in the pit)
Hanami: Asriel and Joker are going for it, they’re not holding anything back!!
Bell: I’ve got your back!
Thalia: I’m your opponent, don't forget!!
(Trident slams into Belial with a powerful upper attack sending it flying in the air)
Hanami: Belial’s been sent flying in the air!!
Bell: Hang in there, Belial!!
Hikaru: C’mon Belial!! You’ve got this!!!
Hyuga: Vroom!!
(Belial barely hits the stadium wall and lands back into the stadium)
Hyuga/Hikaru: *Sighs Deeply*
Hanami: Amazing, Belial stays in at the last second and spices things up!
Bell: True Venture Shoot!!
(Belial dishes out a powerful barrage of extremely powerful blows, Trident barely withstands them all)
Thalia: Grr! C’mon, you’ve gotta keep going!!
(Asriel and Joker speed up in the pit and hit each other with a powerful barrage of attacks)
Adrian: End this thing with Twilight Slash!!
Jennifer: Rogue Judgement!!
(Asriel and Joker slam into each other at full power sending each other flying in the air, Asriel lands out of the stadium as Joker bursts in mid-air)
Adrian/Jennifer: *Gasps*
Hanami: Incredible! Both Asriel and Joker are out of the running! It’s Trident Vs. Belial!!
(Belial and Trident hit each other with powerful blows, Trident takes the center and starts absorbing Belial’s attacks)
Thalia: Atlantic Whirlpool!!
Hanami: No way! Trident switches gears and starts absorbing Belial’s attacks!!
Bell: *Roars* Belial!!
(Bell’s Resonance Aura flares up Belial blazes out of the Bey)
Thalia: Hold your guard down, Trident!!
(Thalia’s Resonance Aura flares up Trident blazes out of the Bey)
Bell: Burst ‘em, Torpedo Wing!!
(Belial speeds up and slams into Trident, Trident gets sent flying into the wall, Trident starts wobbling but still speeds around the stadium)
Hanami: Belial has weakened Trident and goes in for the kill!!
Bell: One more time, Torpedo Wing!!
Thalia: Coastal Counter!!
(Trident and Belial speed around each other and start clashing causing a huge explosion)
Hanami: Both Beys are going for it!!
(Belial starts wobbling as Trident holds down the center fiercely)
All: *Gasps*
Hikaru: Hang in there, Belial!!
Hyuga: C’mon you’ve got this!
Hanami: Belial’s out of juice while Trident holds the center down like a boss!!
Bell: Keep going, Belial!!
(Belial leans on its driver and gains massive speed, Belial aims for Trident)
Thalia: *Gasps*
Bell: Burst! Torpedo Bomber!!
(Belial slams into Trident sending it flying, Belial stops spinning seconds before Trident hits the wall and bursts)
Thalia/Bell: *Gasps*
Drone: Atlantis Trident and Rogue Joker are the winners!!
Hanami: Amazing! Belial tried recovering but just didn’t have enough time and stamina to hang in there!!
Jennifer: Thanks for the point, I guess.
(Jennifer walks away as Thalia walks up to Bell)
Thalia: That battle made me go all out, it was super fun!!
Bell: *Laughs*, Of course, you had fun! You were battling The Ultimate Demon King! But be warned… This loss is just preparation for a big win!!
Thalia: I’d like to see you try! Bye!!
(Thalia runs off, Adrian and Bell stare each other down)
Bell: She won by pure luck. It’s not my fault I couldn’t win.
Adrian: Listen up. I’ll let you off the hook this time but next time I expect a picture-perfect win.
(Adrian walks away)
Bell: Uh? Okay.
Austin (Thoughts): That’s not like the Adrian I know.
(Valt watches from the top of the Arena)
Valt (Thoughts): Looked like Adrian enjoyed that battle. He’s starting to understand what Blading’s Truly About!!
~In The Workroom~
Aiga: Achilles, I’ll evolve you into a Super Z Powerful Bey! You’ll be invincible!!
(Achilles glimmers in the light)
Aiga: I knew you’d like the idea!!
~At The Raging Bulls~
(Shu watches the match from the Big Screen)
Shu (Thoughts): He’s starting to understand the True Meaning of Blading… Nice work. Valt and Aiga! LegendJustice @"Hollowmind8" LJ-Blader CelBeyBlade GhostFox Lucha Burst Kiryu Kazuma
I'd love some Ratings and Reviews! Personal Thoughts are fine too!
this episode was pretty poggers! but i am all out of review juice for today...
RE: Beyblade Burst Yin Yang/Mystic Clash - CelBeyBlade - Oct. 02, 2021
I like the part where we see Adrians Backstory
RE: Beyblade Burst Yin Yang/Mystic Clash Character Contest - Hollowmind13 - Oct. 02, 2021
(Oct. 02, 2021 3:03 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: I finally finished Chapter 28 I hope yall enjoy it.
Beyblade Burst Yin Yang
Chapter 28
The Deep Sea Protector, Atlantis Trident!
(Adrian bursts through Ethan’s dorm room door with a ticked off face)
Ethan: What do you want?
Adrian: I saw you trying to break Anpao, what was that all about?! We had a deal!!
Ethan: I technically never agreed nor denied your offer.
Possessed Adrian: Give me one good reason I shouldn’t crush your Bey into dust right now!!
(Adrian’s Dark Flare surrounds him and sparkles golden)
Ethan: You don’t have the strength to beat me and you know it. I also know you’re trying to act tough but deep down you're scared I’ll break your precious Bey. Aren’t you?
Possessed Adrian: Grr! Take that back!!
Ethan: I won’t because it’s true. Now get out.
(Ethan pushes Adrian out of his dorm and locks the door on him)
Adrian (Thoughts): As much as I hate to admit it, he’s right. Isn’t he? Asriel.
(Adrian holds out Asriel waiting for a response, Asriel doesn’t respond)
Adrian: Asriel, why won’t you say anything?
Aiga: It’s because it sees the light in you on the inside but not on the outside.
(Aiga walks up to Adrian)
Adrian: What do you mean by that?
Aiga: Your Resonance is becoming more calm and tame. But your dark side is still taking you over. Whether good or bad there’s light in everyone but it’s hidden deep inside. But you’re Light is becoming more exposed and open. Asriel needs to see your True Resonance if you want it to talk to you.
Adrian: I don’t need that phony baloney! My Resonance with Asriel is perfect even if we have to go to the depths of the Darkness as long as I am getting stronger it doesn’t matter to me!
Aiga: You’re hurting your Resonance with Asriel and destroying the bond with your own brother. Is this really what you want? Are you really going to sacrifice everything for your own Selfish Concerns?
(Adrian’s heart beats loudly as Adrian’s Dark Flare corrupts him)
Possessed Adrian: You’ve got no clue, do you?!
Aiga: *Gasps* Adrian--
(Adrian runs off at full speed)
Aiga (Thoughts): What does he mean “I don’t have a clue?”
~In Bell’s Locker Room~
Bell: Torpedo Bomber!!
(Belial slams into Ragnaruk at full power, a huge explosion of power bursts out of the stadium sending Ragnaruk high in the air bursting it)
Ren: Not again mate!!
Bell: One more battle!
Ren: I don’t think I can keep going, Bell. I’ve reached my limits and can’t battle anymore!
Bell: If Me and Adrian want to win the next battle, we’ve got to be in perfect synchronization, Belial’s Attack Power has to go all the way up!!
Ren: *Sighs* Why me though?
Bell: Austin told me you’ve been trying to beat Adrian for a long time, you must be able to train me for my battle!!
Ren: *Yawns* But mate--
Bell: The Demon King commands you to battle him!!!!
Ren: *Squeals* Fine, but this is the last battle.
(Ren puts Ragnaruk in Heavy Mode)
Bell/Ren: 3! 2! 1! Go, Shoot!!
(Bell and Ren pull off extremely powerful Eclipse Shoots)
Ren: It’s go time, Super Surging Storm!!
(Ragnaruk takes the center and creates a huge Tornado in the middle)
Bell: Venture Shoot!!
(Belial hits Ragnaruk with a powerful barrage of attacks, Ragnaruk barely flinches)
Ren: I’m going all out here so you’d better give me a killer of a match!!
Bell: Belial, show them why The Demon King is the strongest!!
(Belial leans on its driver and picks up massive speed, Belial slams into Ragnaruk, Ragnaruk gets sent flying out of the center)
Ren: Ragnaruk!!
(Ren’s Resonance Aura flares up Ragnaruk blazes out of the Bey)
Bell: Aah! Belial!!
(Bell’s Resonance Aura flares up as Belial blazes out of the Bey)
Ren: True Blazing Mach Tornado!!
(A humongous Tornado follows Ragnaruk as it speeds up and aims for Belial, Belial leans on its driver and aims for Ragnaruk)
Bell: Torpedo Bomber!!
(Belial slams into Ragnaruk and bursts it as Bell flicks his cape in the air)
Bell: *Grins* The Demon King is the winner!!
Ren: Grr! One more time!
Bell: Don’t worry, I’ve gotten all the practice I need!
(Bell runs away)
Ren: Come back here, you’ve got to battle me one more time!!
(Ren would start chasing after Bell)
~In The Airship’s Hallway~
Aiga: Yo, Adrian! Where’d you-
(Aiga slams into Austin sending both of them in the opposite direction)
Austin: Ouch!
Aiga: Sorry about that, I was looking for Adrian.
Austin: Adrian? I don’t know where he is, probably training if I know him.
Aiga: You know Adrian?
Austin: Yeah, he’s my Twin Brother.
Aiga: “Twin?!”
Austin: Yeah, he’s older than me by 2 Minutes.
Aiga: But… Both of you seem super different.
Austin: Yeah… People tell me that a lot.
Aiga: Do you mind telling me why Adrian takes Beyblade so seriously?
Austin: Sure. Me and Adrian did a lot of sports together when we were younger but weren't really good at any of them. But we were having fun, that’s all that mattered to us. But, Adrian was being made fun of because he didn’t take any sports seriously and was bad at all of them. Then a huge fight broke out between Adrian and the bullies-
Aiga: Spare the details, please.
Austin: I was planning on it. Anyways, Adrian lost… Bad. After he got better he changed big time and tried pushing everyone out of his life. And started taking Beyblade way more seriously. And when he got his own Bey, that’s when he started changing more and more. With every battle, he gets weirder and weirder. But for now, it looks like it's dialing down.
Aiga: Woah. So, Adrian used to have fun Blading but now he’s gone off the deep end?
Austin: No!! There’s still a chance to save him, I can guarantee it!!!
Aiga: Austin, I promise I’ll do everything in my power to bring him back. Super Z Style!!
Austin: Thanks, I’m going to get ready to watch Adrian’s match! I’ll see you there!!
(Austin runs off with enthusiasm, Aiga takes Achilles fragments out of his pocket and looks at them as they glow)
Aiga: Achilles, we’re going to bring Adrian Saito out of the darkness and show him what True Blading’s all about!!
(Achilles glimmers brightly)
~In Adrian’s Locker Room~
Adrian: Go, Shoot!!
(Adrian pulls off an extremely powerful Eclipse Shoot)
Adrian: Asriel, I promise you’ll become the strongest… No matter what!!
(Asriel enters Dark Flare and glimmers Gold)
Possessed Adrian: *Grins* I’ll burn away everything that gets in my way!!
(Asriel slams into the stadium wall at full power causing it to send itself flying out of the stadium)
Adrian: *Gasps*
(Jennifer catches Asriel as she grins evilly)
Adrian: Go away.
Jennifer: *Frowns* Is that how you treat a friend?
Adrian: If you think you’re my friend you’re wrong.
Jennifer: How rude. And here I thought you had some class.
Adrian: Get to the point.
Jennifer: I want to battle you!
Adrian: You want to learn my moves so you can beat me… Don’t you?
Jennifer: I want a battle! Unless you’re scared?
Adrian: *Sighs* One battle, that’s it.
Jennifer: With pleasure. I’ll crush you with style! *Smirks*
Adrian: First battle!
Jennifer (Thoughts): He’s such a dimwit. I’ll take you down and learn all your moves!
Adrian (Thoughts): I’ll take her down and show her she can’t trick me.
Jennifer: Ready? Set!
Adrian/Jennifer: 3! 2! 1! Go, Shoot!!
(Jennifer and Adrian pull off extremely powerful Eclipse Shoots)
Jennifer: *Grins* Take ‘em out, Joker!!
(Joker takes the center waiting for Asriel to strike)
Adrian: Burn them away, Twilight Shoot!!
(Asriel speeds up and slams into Joker with a barrage of powerful strikes, Joker holds itself down)
Jennifer: Gambling Fate!!
(Joker blocks Asriel’s attack with its rubber and blows it back)
Jennifer: Looks like Asriel’s weak!
Possessed Adrian: Grr! True Twilight Flight!!
(Asriel catches onto the stadium rim and picks up speed, Asriel slams into Joker and sends it flying, Joker leans on its driver and changes to Attack Mode)
Jennifer: Rogue Judgement!!
(Joker’s blades glow as it speeds up and aims for Asriel)
Possessed Adrian: Counter, Twilight Blight!!
(Asriel leans on its driver and speeds up, Asriel and Joker start clashing wildly, Both Beys burst, Adrian picks up his Bey’s parts and leaves)
Jennifer (Thoughts): Dang, he’s strong. I’m going to have to step it up if I want to beat him in our match!!
~In The Main Arena~
Hanami: Hello all you Blading Champions and all you Beyfans watching from home! Today, we’ll be diving into the final match of The First Round! Bell and Adrian Vs. Jennifer and Thalia!!
Austin: C’mon Adrian, you’ve got this!!
Hikaru: Win this, for us!!
Hyuga: Yeah, for us!
(Bell and Adrian walk out to the stage along with Jennifer and Thalia)
Thalia: I’m excited to have an awesome battle with my Atlantis Trident!!
(Thalia holds up Atlantis Trident)
Bell: *Grins* We’ll be the winners, no matter what!
(Adrian puts Asriel in Heavy Mode)
Jennifer (Thoughts): Trying to switch it up eh? Too late, I already know everything about you!!
Drone: Inspect your opponent’s Bey!
Bell (Thoughts): Atlantis Trident, a Clockwise Spinning Stamina Type. Atlantis features three large blades to create an overall triangular shape, it is all made out of soft rubber, the whole ring, except the three blades, absorbs impact. Its ‘Chassis features a long, circular POM perimeter (akin to the frame Expand). In theory, it would have contact with the stadium floor, increasing LAD. The tip is made out of metal and the plate around it free spins and is ⅚ the size. Its perimeter has rubber, it was meant to stop the bey from getting pushed making contact with the stadium floor, it also has a spring, but a looser, made for absorbing the force from the pushing. This Bey is powerful but me and Adrian will be able to beat it!!
Drone: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Bell/Adrian/Jennifer/Thalia: Go, Shoot!!
(Everyone pulls off extremely powerful Eclipse Shoots)
Hanami: We’ve got Powerful Shoots from all corners!!
Adrian: Crush them, now!!
Jennifer: Full power!!
(Asriel and Joker go up the stadium slope and start clashing in the pit)
Hanami: Asriel and Joker are going for it, they’re not holding anything back!!
Bell: I’ve got your back!
Thalia: I’m your opponent, don't forget!!
(Trident slams into Belial with a powerful upper attack sending it flying in the air)
Hanami: Belial’s been sent flying in the air!!
Bell: Hang in there, Belial!!
Hikaru: C’mon Belial!! You’ve got this!!!
Hyuga: Vroom!!
(Belial barely hits the stadium wall and lands back into the stadium)
Hyuga/Hikaru: *Sighs Deeply*
Hanami: Amazing, Belial stays in at the last second and spices things up!
Bell: True Venture Shoot!!
(Belial dishes out a powerful barrage of extremely powerful blows, Trident barely withstands them all)
Thalia: Grr! C’mon, you’ve gotta keep going!!
(Asriel and Joker speed up in the pit and hit each other with a powerful barrage of attacks)
Adrian: End this thing with Twilight Slash!!
Jennifer: Rogue Judgement!!
(Asriel and Joker slam into each other at full power sending each other flying in the air, Asriel lands out of the stadium as Joker bursts in mid-air)
Adrian/Jennifer: *Gasps*
Hanami: Incredible! Both Asriel and Joker are out of the running! It’s Trident Vs. Belial!!
(Belial and Trident hit each other with powerful blows, Trident takes the center and starts absorbing Belial’s attacks)
Thalia: Atlantic Whirlpool!!
Hanami: No way! Trident switches gears and starts absorbing Belial’s attacks!!
Bell: *Roars* Belial!!
(Bell’s Resonance Aura flares up Belial blazes out of the Bey)
Thalia: Hold your guard down, Trident!!
(Thalia’s Resonance Aura flares up Trident blazes out of the Bey)
Bell: Burst ‘em, Torpedo Wing!!
(Belial speeds up and slams into Trident, Trident gets sent flying into the wall, Trident starts wobbling but still speeds around the stadium)
Hanami: Belial has weakened Trident and goes in for the kill!!
Bell: One more time, Torpedo Wing!!
Thalia: Coastal Counter!!
(Trident and Belial speed around each other and start clashing causing a huge explosion)
Hanami: Both Beys are going for it!!
(Belial starts wobbling as Trident holds down the center fiercely)
All: *Gasps*
Hikaru: Hang in there, Belial!!
Hyuga: C’mon you’ve got this!
Hanami: Belial’s out of juice while Trident holds the center down like a boss!!
Bell: Keep going, Belial!!
(Belial leans on its driver and gains massive speed, Belial aims for Trident)
Thalia: *Gasps*
Bell: Burst! Torpedo Bomber!!
(Belial slams into Trident sending it flying, Belial stops spinning seconds before Trident hits the wall and bursts)
Thalia/Bell: *Gasps*
Drone: Atlantis Trident and Rogue Joker are the winners!!
Hanami: Amazing! Belial tried recovering but just didn’t have enough time and stamina to hang in there!!
Jennifer: Thanks for the point, I guess.
(Jennifer walks away as Thalia walks up to Bell)
Thalia: That battle made me go all out, it was super fun!!
Bell: *Laughs*, Of course, you had fun! You were battling The Ultimate Demon King! But be warned… This loss is just preparation for a big win!!
Thalia: I’d like to see you try! Bye!!
(Thalia runs off, Adrian and Bell stare each other down)
Bell: She won by pure luck. It’s not my fault I couldn’t win.
Adrian: Listen up. I’ll let you off the hook this time but next time I expect a picture-perfect win.
(Adrian walks away)
Bell: Uh? Okay.
Austin (Thoughts): That’s not like the Adrian I know.
(Valt watches from the top of the Arena)
Valt (Thoughts): Looked like Adrian enjoyed that battle. He’s starting to understand what Blading’s Truly About!!
~In The Workroom~
Aiga: Achilles, I’ll evolve you into a Super Z Powerful Bey! You’ll be invincible!!
(Achilles glimmers in the light)
Aiga: I knew you’d like the idea!!
~At The Raging Bulls~
(Shu watches the match from the Big Screen)
Shu (Thoughts): He’s starting to understand the True Meaning of Blading… Nice work. Valt and Aiga! "LegendJustice" "Hollowmind8" "LJ-Blader" "CelBeyBlade" "GhostFox" "Lucha Burst" "Kiryu Kazuma"
I'd love some Ratings and Reviews! Personal Thoughts are fine too!
Looking back, I should have gave Trident Kick metal, since it would be very similar to this driver. You can make it Kick metal (The tip is metal, not the cap) if you want to (there would be virtually no difference).
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This chapter was a deep dive into Adrian's resonance, and I liked that. The "Jennifer vs. Adrian" before the team match ended kinda fast, I mean, both beys burst but you move on to the stadium on a not-so-smooth way.
Aiga wanting to make everything he can to help Adrian is a nice touch.
Idk if you noticed it, but Trident going on offensive was a genius play: It couldn't hit Belial normally, because Trident would absorb the impact and Belial wouldn't go that far, so it had to be an upper attack (which it was).
Bell training with Ren is a nice way to see that Bell wants to win.
Ethan and Adrian discussion is nice too.
RE: Beyblade Burst Yin Yang/Mystic Clash - UnseenBurst - Oct. 02, 2021
Dang, I'm on a roll this weekend! I finished Chapter 5 of Mystic Clash!
Beyblade Burst Mystic Clash
Chapter 5
Valkyrie’s Return, Gallant Valkyrie!
(I show Tristen around our Basement)
Tristen: Looks like you’ve been blading for a while.
Me: Not really, I only started 2 months ago.
Tristen: Seriously?!
Me: Yeah, me and my Dad worked on all this equipment so I can become the Strongest in The World!
Tristen: *Grins* Keep dreaming buddy. I’ll become the Mystic Champion and show my club I’m the strongest!!
Me: Oh yeah?! I’ll completely crush you in our next match!!
Tristen: I already told you that I’m going to become the strongest and Defeat Valt Aoi!!
Me: I’ll battle you right now and beat you!!
(Tristen and I would continue to nonstop bicker)
Emma: *Sighs* This is boring. Yo, Victor! I’m going on a walk!!
(Me and Tristen continue arguing absolutely ignoring Emma, Emma gets up out of the basement and leaves the house walking around the sidewalk)
Emma: They’re both obsessed with Beyblade.
???: Obsessed with Beyblade? Who?!
(A random Tall Kid would run up to Emma with bright eyes)
Emma: Aah!
???: Did I scare you?! Sorry, I have a habit of doing that!
Emma: Um, who are you?
Harry: I’m Harry Zen, nice to meet you!!
Emma: Nice to meet you-
Harry: *Gasps* I’m late for my training with Valt, I’ll catch you later!!
(Harry tries running off but Emma grabs him)
Emma: Wait a minute! Valt Aoi?! Where is he?!
Harry: He’s at The Legend’s Training Arena doing a Seminar for all the Bladers in the Mystic Coronation Series!
(Me and Tristen would run up behind Emma)
Me: *Pants* Emma! You can’t just run off like that, we were worried sick!!
Emma: No time to talk, just follow me!!
(Emma and Harry run off towards The Legend’s Training Arena)
Tristen: More running? Seriously?!
Me: Emma you seriously need to explain.
Emma: I’ll explain on the way!
(Emma explains everything as we run over to The Legend’s Training Arena)
~At The Legend’s Training Arena~
Me: So, Valt’s doing a Seminar for the Mystic Bladers?
Harry: That’s right, this is going to be awesome!! I also heard he’s going to choose one Special Blader to battle his new Valkyrie!!
Tristen: “New Valkyrie?”
Me: Heh. So he’s finally finished it!
Tristen/Harry: You’ve met Valt Aoi before?!
Me: Yeah, we battled.
Harry: Who won?! Did you?! I need answers!!
Me: First off. Who are you again?
Harry: I’m Harry Zen! Nice to meet you!!
Me: Well, I’m Victor and this here is Tristen.
Tristen: Nice to meet you!
Harry: Nice to meet you too. Are both of you in the Mystic Coronation Series?!
Tristen: Yeah we are. Did you miss the amazing battle we had the other day?
Harry: What amazing battle--
(Harry gets a notification on his phone)
Emma: What’s that?
Harry: Says “The Best Battle of the Mystic Coronation Series so far”
(Harry watches the battle)
Harry: *Gasps* That was you guys?! You’re completely awesome!!
Me: Heh. I guess.
Tristen: I know. Wasn’t I amazing?
Harry: Not really. Your Bey just ran away like a scaredy-cat.
Tristen: EXCUSE ME?!?!
Emma: Shh!! Valt’s about to Begin Talking!!
(Valt would do his speech as everyone listens attentively)
Valt: Now, who wants to try beating my Gallant Valkyrie?!
(Valt would hold up his Gallant Valkyrie as everyone raises their hands)
Me: I want to! You promised to battle me when your Valkyrie was finished!!!
Valt: *Gasps* Well, if it isn’t Victor!
Me: Yeah! Can we battle now?!
Valt: Sure, I did promise to battle you with my new Gallant Valkyrie when it was finished!!
Tristen: No fair. Victor always gets the Big Wins.
Harry: Ironic!
Tristen: WOULD YOU BE QUIET?!?!
Valt: Heh! I’ll be going all out in our battle!!
(Valt holds Gallant Valkyrie up)
Me: I’ll beat you and become the Mystic Champion!!
Me/Valt: *Grins*
Harry: This battle is going to be amazing!!
Referee: Alright! Inspect your opponent’s Bey!
Me (Thoughts): Gallant Valkyrie, a Clockwise Spinning Attack Type. It has 3 Sharp Blades that can dish out a world of damage. On the tip of its Blade, it has Metal and Rubber making its attacks way stronger!! Its disk is super heavy and has 3 Main Rubber Contact Points lining up with the Blades making its Attacks even stronger! Its driver Power’ has a spring in it so it can take attacks like a champ and counter strike with even more powerful counterattacks!! Man, this Bey is perfect for Valt! But Vulcan’s even more perfect for me!!
Referee: First Battle!!
Valt: I’ll show you the True Power of Valkyrie!!
Me: Vulcan’s gonna send you flying!
Harry: I’m so excited I feel like I’m going to explode!!!
Emma/Tristen: He might actually explode.
Referee: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Valt: Go, Shoot!!
(Me and Valt pull off powerful Mystic Shoots)
Valt: C’mon, Valkyrie!!
Me: Go, Vulcan!!
(Vulcan and Valkyrie speed around each other and slam into each other, both beys send each other flying)
Valt: We’re not holding back, Rush Shoot!!
(Valkyrie speeds up and hits Vulcan with a powerful barrage of attacks, Vulcan barely hangs in)
Me: You’ve got this, Vulcan!!
Valt: Show ‘em your True Power!!
(Valkyrie and Vulcan speed up and barely dodge each other, they speed up and go in for another attack)
Valt: One more time, Rush Shoot!
Me: Upper Strike!!
(Both Beys slam into each other and get sent flying out of the stadium, Vulcan lands a second before Valkyrie)
Me/Valt: *Gasps*
Referee: It’s Gallant Valkyrie with an Over Finish! Valt Aoi claims 1 Point!!
Valt: Alright!
Me: Grr!!
Emma: That was really close…
Harry: Grr!! C’mon Victor! You’ve got this, just focus!!!
Tristen: If you beat me you better beat Valt Aoi!!
Me: Thanks… Guys.
Referee: Second Battle!!
Valt: I won’t be holding back, I’ll be going all out!!
Me: I won’t be holding back either, I’m in it to win it!!
Referee: Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Valt: Go, Shoot!!
(Valt and I pull off extremely powerful Mystic Shoots)
Valt: Show ‘em what’s up! Rush Shoot!!
(Valkyrie unleashes a powerful barrage of strikes, Vulcan gets sent flying in the air)
Me: We’re not giving up, Vulcan!!
(My Resonance Aura flares up as Vulcan blazes out of the Bey)
Vulcan: Let’s do this!!
Valt: Aah! Valkyrie!!
(Valt’s Resonance Aura flares up as Valkyrie blazes out of the Bey)
Me: Full power, Mystic Flare!!
(Vulcan starts clashing wildly with Valkyrie)
Tristen: End it, Victor!!
Harry: C’mon! C’mon! C’mon!! Finish it!!!
(Valkyrie’s driver sinks in, Valkyrie speeds off and gains more and more speed)
All: *Gasps*
(Valkyrie starts Shining Blue as Valkyrie’s eyes glow green)
Me: No- No way.
Valt: Gallant Scimitar!!!
(Valkyrie’s blades glow as it slashes at Vulcan with full power, Vulcan Bursts)
Me: Seriously?!
Referee: It’s Gallant Valkyrie with a Burst Finish! Valt Aoi wins with a score of 3-0!!
(Victor falls to the ground in complete shock)
Tristen: Grr! He was so close!!
Harry: Valt’s so powerful…
(I grab Vulcan’s parts in distress as I look at them sadly)
Valt: *Smiles* That was a fun battle! I’m looking forward to our next match!!
Me: Yeah… Fun. [/I] [/B]
Preview
Me: I’m totally going to win our next battle!!
(I look at Vulcan in my Bed)
Me: You want to battle, Harry?!
(Vulcan and Harry’s Bey would start clashing wildly as they hit each other with a barrage of extremely powerful blows)
Me: I’ll totally be the winner!!
(Both Beys start clashing causing a huge explosion)
Me: Next time on Beyblade Burst Mystic Clash!
The Ultimate Defense, Galactic Horogium!
3! 2! 1! Go, Shoot!!
@"Hollowmind8" LJ-Blader LegendJustice GenesisBlader CelBeyBlade GhostFox Lucha Burst
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