RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - GenesisBlader - Jul. 07, 2021
(Jul. 07, 2021 8:25 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: (Jul. 07, 2021 8:23 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: this chapter sucks lol
its so bad
Thank you for you're mean constructive criticism > (I'm kidding if you don't like it then I'm ok with that)
jk this chapter pretty good
better than my previous chapter
bruh im gonna freak out if i mention that chapter again
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - UnseenBurst - Jul. 07, 2021
(Jul. 07, 2021 8:31 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: (Jul. 07, 2021 8:25 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Thank you for you're mean constructive criticism > (I'm kidding if you don't like it then I'm ok with that)
jk this chapter pretty good
better than my previous chapter
bruh im gonna freak out if i mention that chapter again
I know u were kidding
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - GenesisBlader - Jul. 07, 2021
(Jul. 07, 2021 8:34 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: (Jul. 07, 2021 8:31 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: jk this chapter pretty good
better than my previous chapter
bruh im gonna freak out if i mention that chapter again
I know u were kidding 
also can you rate my (updated) chapter 15 or at least read it
(Jul. 07, 2021 9:09 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: (Jul. 07, 2021 8:34 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: I know u were kidding 
also can you rate my (updated) chapter 15 or at least read it
please
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - UnseenBurst - Jul. 07, 2021
(Jul. 07, 2021 9:09 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: (Jul. 07, 2021 8:34 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: I know u were kidding 
also can you rate my (updated) chapter 15 or at least read it
(Jul. 07, 2021 9:09 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: also can you rate my (updated) chapter 15 or at least read it
please
I already rated it
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - GenesisBlader - Jul. 07, 2021
im sorry ok
(Jul. 07, 2021 9:13 PM)UnseenBurst Wrote: (Jul. 07, 2021 9:09 PM)BladeKingX Wrote: lol
I cat
I rat I bat
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - UnseenBurst - Jul. 08, 2021
Chapter 27 The Best Battle Ever (I spent all day on this)
Beyblade Burst Dynachi
Chapter 27
Valtryek Vs Apocalypse!!!
Brooke: Detonate Bomb!!
(A huge explosion ouccers, the door bursts wide open)
Aiden: Oh?
Me: I’m back!!
Aiden: (I seriously need better security), You dare challenge me again! After the last time!!
(I hold up Thunder Valtryek)
Aiden: You’ve evolved it from last time huh?
Adam: Vlad’s gonna teach you a lesson!!
Ryuji: You’ll never mess with blading again!
Aiden: Quiet peasants!
Adam/Ryuji: Peasants? Oh, now you’re in for it!!!
(Shu puts his hand in front of them)
Shu: This is Vlad’s battle, let him deal with it.
Me: I’m gonna show this “King” what blading means to me!
(My Resonance Aura flares up)
Aiden: This peasant thinks he can overthrow the king!
(Aiden’s Resonance Aura flares up)
My Phone: Aiden Peregrin sent you a battle challenge do you--
(I press accept, A drone comes down for the sky)
Hanami: Hello--
Aiden: Hanami, you're fired.
Hanmi: You can’t do that!!
Aiden: I just did, now shoo.
(Hanmi logs off the drone)
Aiden: Another, you are the new official announcer!
Another: Ok my king! Hello Bladers!! Today Vlad Aoi challenges our king after his humiliating defeat to our king! Will he lose again or is he stacking up on four-leaf clovers!! Also, this match is broadcasted all around the world so losing twice would be embarrassing!
Adam: He’s trying to distract Vlad!
Ryuji: Mind your own business!!
Me: I’m going to win against you! No matter what!!
(I get ready to launch my bey)
Drone: First battle. Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Aiden: Let it rip!!
Me: Rush Launch!!
(Valtryek hits Apocalypse with a barrage of attacks, Valtryek sends Apocalypse in the air, Apocalypse catches onto the rails in the air, it speeds up and crashes down on Valtryek)
Another: My oh my!! Apocalypse used Valtryek’s attack to launch a counterattack!!
Aiden: Omega Blast!!
Me: Heroic Recoil!!
(Both beys get shot out of the stadium)
Me/Aiden: *Gasps*
Drone: Simultaneous ring-out finish! No points!
Me: Dang it!
Another: Looks like Vlad Aoi is still too weak to land a good hit on our Supreme King!!
(Ryuji throws an empty bottle of water at Another)
Another: Hey!!
Adam: Stop trash-talking our friend!!
(Brooke throws the water bottle at him)
Me (Thoughts): Thanks, guys.
Aiden: Well, looks like your friends don’t like Another very much.
Me: You told him to say stuff like that didn’t you?!
Aiden: It’s technically not against the rules.
Me: Ok, that’s it. I’m done with you hurting my friends!! I’m done with your reign of terror!!
(My Resonance Aura starts blazing up wildly)
Aiden: My reign shall never end!!
Drone: Second battle! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Aiden: Let it rip!!
Me: Rush Launch!!
(Valtryek hits Apocalypse with a barrage of attacks)
Another: Valtryek is actually getting some solid hits against our king!!
(Apocalypse starts picking up speed and heads straight for Valtryek like a lightning bolt)
Aiden: Omega Blast!!
(Apocalypse sends Valtryek flying in the air)
Me: Stick the landing!!
(Valtryek lands on the rails in mid-air and crashes down on Apocalypse)
Me: Thundering Recoil!!
(Valtryek’s bound blades force Apocalypse down to the ground)
Aiden: Warped Whip!!
(Apocalypse shoots back up and slashes at Valtryek, Valtryek gets sent flying out of the stadium)
Me: *Gasps*
Drone: It’s Warped Apocalypse with a ring-out finish! Aiden Peregrin claims 1 point!
Another: Honestly for a second I thought Valtryek had it but looks like Vlad Aoi crumbles to our ruler once again!!
(Brooke throws a bottle of water at Another)
Brooke/Ryuji/Colton/Adam: Put a sock in it!!
Aiden: Too bad, so sad.
Me: Grr!!
Me (Thoughts): I could’ve won if I had a way stronger launch! Time to step it up!
(I start backing away from the stadium)
Aiden: It’s too late to run away!!
Me: I’m never running away!!
Colton: You tell him!!
Drone: Third battle! Ready? Set!
(I jump)
All: 3!
(I jump again)
All: 2!
(I jump again)
All: 1! (I jump high)
Me/Aiden: Let it--
(I land on the ground)
Me/Aiden: Rip!!
Valt (Thoughts): That’s Sprint Boost!!
(Valtryek bounces up in the air)
Me: Take to the skies!
Another: Vlad nails the launch and Valtryek flies up in the air
(Valtryek catches onto the sky rails, Valtryek crashes down on Apocalypse)
Me: Thundering Recoil!!
(Apocalypse gets sent flying in the air)
Aiden: *Gasps*
Me: Attack ‘em in the air!! Thundering Winged Launch!!
(Valtryek bounces off the wall and attacks Apocalypse in the air, Apocalypse falls back to the stadium floor)
Another: Valtryek continues the onslaught and doesn't let up on
Aiden: Warped Whip!!
(Valtryek and Apocalypse start clashing hard)
Me: Thundering Dynachi Breaker!!
(The whole stadium blows up, Apocalypse gets sent flying out of the stadium)
Aiden: *Gasps*
Drone: It’s Thunder Valtryek with a ring-out finish!! Vlad Aoi claims 1 point!!
Me: Sweet!!
Another: I can’t believe it, Valtryek just sent Apocalypse flying.
Aiden: How did I lose a point to someone like you!
Colton: Vlad totally deserved that win!!
Adam: He totally did!
(Aiden’s Resonance Aura flares up, My Resonance Aura flares up)
Drone: Fourth battle! Ready? Set!
(I start doing the Sprint Boost)
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Aiden: Let it rip!!
Me/Aiden: Go!!
(Valtryek and Apocalypse hit each other with a powerful rush of attacks)
Another: They’re going in for it!!
Me: Rush Launch!!
(Valtryek sends Apocalypse flying in the air)
Aiden: Apocalypse!!!
(Aiden’s Resonance Aura flares up Apocalypse blazes out of the bey)
Aiden: Warped Blast!!
(Apocalypse slams down on Valtryek, Apocalypse sends Valtryek flying)
Another: Valtryek is sent flying in the air!!
Aiden: It’s over.
Me: It’s not over until I say it’s over!!!
(Valtryek starts glowing brightly)
Me: Valtryek!!!
(My Resonance Aura flares up Valtryek blazes out of the bey)
Aiden: There’s no way you can survive it.
Colton: If Valtryek falls on the stadium floor it will burst!!
Brooke: Come on!
Adam/Ryuji: We’ve got you, bro!!
Me: Thundering Recoil!!
(Valtryek lands on its bound blades and shoots itself into the wall, Valtryek start wobbling)
Another: Valtryek survives!
Aiden: Warped Reboot!!
Me: Heroic Reboot!!
(Valtryek and Apocalypse speed up, Valtryek and Apocalypse start clashing hard)
Me/Aiden: *Roars*
(An enormous explosion occurs)
Another: They’re clashing with everything they’ve got!!
(Apocalypse starts glowing red)
Me: Thundering Dynachi Breaker!!
(3 Additional blades pop out of Valtryek, The whole stadium blows up)
Aiden: *Gasps*
Another: Valtryek uses its trump card!!
(Apocalypse hits the wall, Apocalypse’s blade shifts backward, A swirling purple blaze surrounds Aiden)
Aiden: End this with Warped Whip!!
Me: My pure Resonance will slash you into two!! Thundering Saber!!!
(Valtryek and Apocalypse start clashing, a gigantic explosion occurs)
Drone: Oh no!!
(The drone gets blown away)
Me: Burst!!
(Valtryek presses Apocalypse’s button, Apocalypse bursts)
Aiden: *Gasps* What the!!
(The drone comes back)
Drone: It’s Thunder Valtryek with a burst finish! The winner is Vlad Aoi!
Me: Yes!!
Another: I can’t believe it, Vlad Aoi defeated our king.
(Aiden storms out of the room)
Colton/Adam/Ryuji: You did it!!
(Colton and Adam jump on me)
Me: Wow, you guys are heavy!!
Brooke/Vira: Nice going Vlad.
Ryuji: I’ve got to admit: You did awesome!!
My Phone: Your current rank is #9
Me: Seriously?!
Colton: That’s a huge improvement!
Valt: Beybread on the house!!
Shu (Thoughts): Valt and Vlad are the exact same!
(Shu laughs) Really hope you enjoyed this, I put a lot of effort and time into this chapter
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - GenesisBlader - Jul. 08, 2021
(Jul. 08, 2021 1:16 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 27 The Best Battle Ever (I spent all day on this)
Beyblade Burst Dynachi
Chapter 27
Valtryek Vs Apocalypse!!!
Brooke: Detonate Bomb!!
(A huge explosion ouccers, the door bursts wide open)
Aiden: Oh?
Me: I’m back!!
Aiden: (I seriously need better security), You dare challenge me again! After the last time!!
(I hold up Thunder Valtryek)
Aiden: You’ve evolved it from last time huh?
Adam: Vlad’s gonna teach you a lesson!!
Ryuji: You’ll never mess with blading again!
Aiden: Quiet peasants!
Adam/Ryuji: Peasants? Oh, now you’re in for it!!!
(Shu puts his hand in front of them)
Shu: This is Vlad’s battle, let him deal with it.
Me: I’m gonna show this “King” what blading means to me!
(My Resonance Aura flares up)
Aiden: This peasant thinks he can overthrow the king!
(Aiden’s Resonance Aura flares up)
My Phone: Aiden Peregrin sent you a battle challenge do you--
(I press accept, A drone comes down for the sky)
Hanami: Hello--
Aiden: Hanami, you're fired.
Hanmi: You can’t do that!!
Aiden: I just did, now shoo.
(Hanmi logs off the drone)
Aiden: Another, you are the new official announcer!
Another: Ok my king! Hello Bladers!! Today Vlad Aoi challenges our king after his humiliating defeat to our king! Will he lose again or is he stacking up on four-leaf clovers!! Also, this match is broadcasted all around the world so losing twice would be embarrassing!
Adam: He’s trying to distract Vlad!
Ryuji: Mind your own business!!
Me: I’m going to win against you! No matter what!!
(I get ready to launch my bey)
Drone: First battle. Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Aiden: Let it rip!!
Me: Rush Launch!!
(Valtryek hits Apocalypse with a barrage of attacks, Valtryek sends Apocalypse in the air, Apocalypse catches onto the rails in the air, it speeds up and crashes down on Valtryek)
Another: My oh my!! Apocalypse used Valtryek’s attack to launch a counterattack!!
Aiden: Omega Blast!!
Me: Heroic Recoil!!
(Both beys get shot out of the stadium)
Me/Aiden: *Gasps*
Drone: Simultaneous ring-out finish! No points!
Me: Dang it!
Another: Looks like Vlad Aoi is still too weak to land a good hit on our Supreme King!!
(Ryuji throws an empty bottle of water at Another)
Another: Hey!!
Adam: Stop trash-talking our friend!!
(Brooke throws the water bottle at him)
Me (Thoughts): Thanks, guys.
Aiden: Well, looks like your friends don’t like Another very much.
Me: You told him to say stuff like that didn’t you?!
Aiden: It’s technically not against the rules.
Me: Ok, that’s it. I’m done with you hurting my friends!! I’m done with your reign of terror!!
(My Resonance Aura starts blazing up wildly)
Aiden: My reign shall never end!!
Drone: Second battle! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Aiden: Let it rip!!
Me: Rush Launch!!
(Valtryek hits Apocalypse with a barrage of attacks)
Another: Valtryek is actually getting some solid hits against our king!!
(Apocalypse starts picking up speed and heads straight for Valtryek like a lightning bolt)
Aiden: Omega Blast!!
(Apocalypse sends Valtryek flying in the air)
Me: Stick the landing!!
(Valtryek lands on the rails in mid-air and crashes down on Apocalypse)
Me: Thundering Recoil!!
(Valtryek’s bound blades force Apocalypse down to the ground)
Aiden: Warped Whip!!
(Apocalypse shoots back up and slashes at Valtryek, Valtryek gets sent flying out of the stadium)
Me: *Gasps*
Drone: It’s Warped Apocalypse with a ring-out finish! Aiden Peregrin claims 1 point!
Another: Honestly for a second I thought Valtryek had it but looks like Vlad Aoi crumbles to our ruler once again!!
(Brooke throws a bottle of water at Another)
Brooke/Ryuji/Colton/Adam: Put a sock in it!!
Aiden: Too bad, so sad.
Me: Grr!!
Me (Thoughts): I could’ve won if I had a way stronger launch! Time to step it up!
(I start backing away from the stadium)
Aiden: It’s too late to run away!!
Me: I’m never running away!!
Colton: You tell him!!
Drone: Third battle! Ready? Set!
(I jump)
All: 3!
(I jump again)
All: 2!
(I jump again)
All: 1! (I jump high)
Me/Aiden: Let it--
(I land on the ground)
Me/Aiden: Rip!!
Valt (Thoughts): That’s Sprint Boost!!
(Valtryek bounces up in the air)
Me: Take to the skies!
Another: Vlad nails the launch and Valtryek flies up in the air
(Valtryek catches onto the sky rails, Valtryek crashes down on Apocalypse)
Me: Thundering Recoil!!
(Apocalypse gets sent flying in the air)
Aiden: *Gasps*
Me: Attack ‘em in the air!! Thundering Winged Launch!!
(Valtryek bounces off the wall and attacks Apocalypse in the air, Apocalypse falls back to the stadium floor)
Another: Valtryek continues the onslaught and doesn't let up on
Aiden: Warped Whip!!
(Valtryek and Apocalypse start clashing hard)
Me: Thundering Dynachi Breaker!!
(The whole stadium blows up, Apocalypse gets sent flying out of the stadium)
Aiden: *Gasps*
Drone: It’s Thunder Valtryek with a ring-out finish!! Vlad Aoi claims 1 point!!
Me: Sweet!!
Another: I can’t believe it, Valtryek just sent Apocalypse flying.
Aiden: How did I lose a point to someone like you!
Colton: Vlad totally deserved that win!!
Adam: He totally did!
(Aiden’s Resonance Aura flares up, My Resonance Aura flares up)
Drone: Fourth battle! Ready? Set!
(I start doing the Sprint Boost)
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Aiden: Let it rip!!
Me/Aiden: Go!!
(Valtryek and Apocalypse hit each other with a powerful rush of attacks)
Another: They’re going in for it!!
Me: Rush Launch!!
(Valtryek sends Apocalypse flying in the air)
Aiden: Apocalypse!!!
(Aiden’s Resonance Aura flares up Apocalypse blazes out of the bey)
Aiden: Warped Blast!!
(Apocalypse slams down on Valtryek, Apocalypse sends Valtryek flying)
Another: Valtryek is sent flying in the air!!
Aiden: It’s over.
Me: It’s not over until I say it’s over!!!
(Valtryek starts glowing brightly)
Me: Valtryek!!!
(My Resonance Aura flares up Valtryek blazes out of the bey)
Aiden: There’s no way you can survive it.
Colton: If Valtryek falls on the stadium floor it will burst!!
Brooke: Come on!
Adam/Ryuji: We’ve got you, bro!!
Me: Thundering Recoil!!
(Valtryek lands on its bound blades and shoots itself into the wall, Valtryek start wobbling)
Another: Valtryek survives!
Aiden: Warped Reboot!!
Me: Heroic Reboot!!
(Valtryek and Apocalypse speed up, Valtryek and Apocalypse start clashing hard)
Me/Aiden: *Roars*
(An enormous explosion occurs)
Another: They’re clashing with everything they’ve got!!
(Apocalypse starts glowing red)
Me: Thundering Dynachi Breaker!!
(3 Additional blades pop out of Valtryek, The whole stadium blows up)
Aiden: *Gasps*
Another: Valtryek uses its trump card!!
(Apocalypse hits the wall, Apocalypse’s blade shifts backward, A swirling purple blaze surrounds Aiden)
Aiden: End this with Warped Whip!!
Me: My pure Resonance will slash you into two!! Thundering Saber!!!
(Valtryek and Apocalypse start clashing, a gigantic explosion occurs)
Drone: Oh no!!
(The drone gets blown away)
Me: Burst!!
(Valtryek presses Apocalypse’s button, Apocalypse bursts)
Aiden: *Gasps* What the!!
(The drone comes back)
Drone: It’s Thunder Valtryek with a burst finish! The winner is Vlad Aoi!
Me: Yes!!
Another: I can’t believe it, Vlad Aoi defeated our king.
(Aiden storms out of the room)
Colton/Adam/Ryuji: You did it!!
(Colton and Adam jump on me)
Me: Wow, you guys are heavy!!
Brooke/Vira: Nice going Vlad.
Ryuji: I’ve got to admit: You did awesome!!
My Phone: Your current rank is #9
Me: Seriously?!
Colton: That’s a huge improvement!
Valt: Beybread on the house!!
Shu (Thoughts): Valt and Vlad are the exact same!
(Shu laughs) Really hope you enjoyed this, I put a lot of effort and time into this chapter absolutely great job on this chapter!
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - LegendJustice - Jul. 08, 2021
(Jul. 08, 2021 1:16 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 27 The Best Battle Ever (I spent all day on this)
Beyblade Burst Dynachi
Chapter 27
Valtryek Vs Apocalypse!!!
Brooke: Detonate Bomb!!
(A huge explosion ouccers, the door bursts wide open)
Aiden: Oh?
Me: I’m back!!
Aiden: (I seriously need better security), You dare challenge me again! After the last time!!
(I hold up Thunder Valtryek)
Aiden: You’ve evolved it from last time huh?
Adam: Vlad’s gonna teach you a lesson!!
Ryuji: You’ll never mess with blading again!
Aiden: Quiet peasants!
Adam/Ryuji: Peasants? Oh, now you’re in for it!!!
(Shu puts his hand in front of them)
Shu: This is Vlad’s battle, let him deal with it.
Me: I’m gonna show this “King” what blading means to me!
(My Resonance Aura flares up)
Aiden: This peasant thinks he can overthrow the king!
(Aiden’s Resonance Aura flares up)
My Phone: Aiden Peregrin sent you a battle challenge do you--
(I press accept, A drone comes down for the sky)
Hanami: Hello--
Aiden: Hanami, you're fired.
Hanmi: You can’t do that!!
Aiden: I just did, now shoo.
(Hanmi logs off the drone)
Aiden: Another, you are the new official announcer!
Another: Ok my king! Hello Bladers!! Today Vlad Aoi challenges our king after his humiliating defeat to our king! Will he lose again or is he stacking up on four-leaf clovers!! Also, this match is broadcasted all around the world so losing twice would be embarrassing!
Adam: He’s trying to distract Vlad!
Ryuji: Mind your own business!!
Me: I’m going to win against you! No matter what!!
(I get ready to launch my bey)
Drone: First battle. Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Aiden: Let it rip!!
Me: Rush Launch!!
(Valtryek hits Apocalypse with a barrage of attacks, Valtryek sends Apocalypse in the air, Apocalypse catches onto the rails in the air, it speeds up and crashes down on Valtryek)
Another: My oh my!! Apocalypse used Valtryek’s attack to launch a counterattack!!
Aiden: Omega Blast!!
Me: Heroic Recoil!!
(Both beys get shot out of the stadium)
Me/Aiden: *Gasps*
Drone: Simultaneous ring-out finish! No points!
Me: Dang it!
Another: Looks like Vlad Aoi is still too weak to land a good hit on our Supreme King!!
(Ryuji throws an empty bottle of water at Another)
Another: Hey!!
Adam: Stop trash-talking our friend!!
(Brooke throws the water bottle at him)
Me (Thoughts): Thanks, guys.
Aiden: Well, looks like your friends don’t like Another very much.
Me: You told him to say stuff like that didn’t you?!
Aiden: It’s technically not against the rules.
Me: Ok, that’s it. I’m done with you hurting my friends!! I’m done with your reign of terror!!
(My Resonance Aura starts blazing up wildly)
Aiden: My reign shall never end!!
Drone: Second battle! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Aiden: Let it rip!!
Me: Rush Launch!!
(Valtryek hits Apocalypse with a barrage of attacks)
Another: Valtryek is actually getting some solid hits against our king!!
(Apocalypse starts picking up speed and heads straight for Valtryek like a lightning bolt)
Aiden: Omega Blast!!
(Apocalypse sends Valtryek flying in the air)
Me: Stick the landing!!
(Valtryek lands on the rails in mid-air and crashes down on Apocalypse)
Me: Thundering Recoil!!
(Valtryek’s bound blades force Apocalypse down to the ground)
Aiden: Warped Whip!!
(Apocalypse shoots back up and slashes at Valtryek, Valtryek gets sent flying out of the stadium)
Me: *Gasps*
Drone: It’s Warped Apocalypse with a ring-out finish! Aiden Peregrin claims 1 point!
Another: Honestly for a second I thought Valtryek had it but looks like Vlad Aoi crumbles to our ruler once again!!
(Brooke throws a bottle of water at Another)
Brooke/Ryuji/Colton/Adam: Put a sock in it!!
Aiden: Too bad, so sad.
Me: Grr!!
Me (Thoughts): I could’ve won if I had a way stronger launch! Time to step it up!
(I start backing away from the stadium)
Aiden: It’s too late to run away!!
Me: I’m never running away!!
Colton: You tell him!!
Drone: Third battle! Ready? Set!
(I jump)
All: 3!
(I jump again)
All: 2!
(I jump again)
All: 1! (I jump high)
Me/Aiden: Let it--
(I land on the ground)
Me/Aiden: Rip!!
Valt (Thoughts): That’s Sprint Boost!!
(Valtryek bounces up in the air)
Me: Take to the skies!
Another: Vlad nails the launch and Valtryek flies up in the air
(Valtryek catches onto the sky rails, Valtryek crashes down on Apocalypse)
Me: Thundering Recoil!!
(Apocalypse gets sent flying in the air)
Aiden: *Gasps*
Me: Attack ‘em in the air!! Thundering Winged Launch!!
(Valtryek bounces off the wall and attacks Apocalypse in the air, Apocalypse falls back to the stadium floor)
Another: Valtryek continues the onslaught and doesn't let up on
Aiden: Warped Whip!!
(Valtryek and Apocalypse start clashing hard)
Me: Thundering Dynachi Breaker!!
(The whole stadium blows up, Apocalypse gets sent flying out of the stadium)
Aiden: *Gasps*
Drone: It’s Thunder Valtryek with a ring-out finish!! Vlad Aoi claims 1 point!!
Me: Sweet!!
Another: I can’t believe it, Valtryek just sent Apocalypse flying.
Aiden: How did I lose a point to someone like you!
Colton: Vlad totally deserved that win!!
Adam: He totally did!
(Aiden’s Resonance Aura flares up, My Resonance Aura flares up)
Drone: Fourth battle! Ready? Set!
(I start doing the Sprint Boost)
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Aiden: Let it rip!!
Me/Aiden: Go!!
(Valtryek and Apocalypse hit each other with a powerful rush of attacks)
Another: They’re going in for it!!
Me: Rush Launch!!
(Valtryek sends Apocalypse flying in the air)
Aiden: Apocalypse!!!
(Aiden’s Resonance Aura flares up Apocalypse blazes out of the bey)
Aiden: Warped Blast!!
(Apocalypse slams down on Valtryek, Apocalypse sends Valtryek flying)
Another: Valtryek is sent flying in the air!!
Aiden: It’s over.
Me: It’s not over until I say it’s over!!!
(Valtryek starts glowing brightly)
Me: Valtryek!!!
(My Resonance Aura flares up Valtryek blazes out of the bey)
Aiden: There’s no way you can survive it.
Colton: If Valtryek falls on the stadium floor it will burst!!
Brooke: Come on!
Adam/Ryuji: We’ve got you, bro!!
Me: Thundering Recoil!!
(Valtryek lands on its bound blades and shoots itself into the wall, Valtryek start wobbling)
Another: Valtryek survives!
Aiden: Warped Reboot!!
Me: Heroic Reboot!!
(Valtryek and Apocalypse speed up, Valtryek and Apocalypse start clashing hard)
Me/Aiden: *Roars*
(An enormous explosion occurs)
Another: They’re clashing with everything they’ve got!!
(Apocalypse starts glowing red)
Me: Thundering Dynachi Breaker!!
(3 Additional blades pop out of Valtryek, The whole stadium blows up)
Aiden: *Gasps*
Another: Valtryek uses its trump card!!
(Apocalypse hits the wall, Apocalypse’s blade shifts backward, A swirling purple blaze surrounds Aiden)
Aiden: End this with Warped Whip!!
Me: My pure Resonance will slash you into two!! Thundering Saber!!!
(Valtryek and Apocalypse start clashing, a gigantic explosion occurs)
Drone: Oh no!!
(The drone gets blown away)
Me: Burst!!
(Valtryek presses Apocalypse’s button, Apocalypse bursts)
Aiden: *Gasps* What the!!
(The drone comes back)
Drone: It’s Thunder Valtryek with a burst finish! The winner is Vlad Aoi!
Me: Yes!!
Another: I can’t believe it, Vlad Aoi defeated our king.
(Aiden storms out of the room)
Colton/Adam/Ryuji: You did it!!
(Colton and Adam jump on me)
Me: Wow, you guys are heavy!!
Brooke/Vira: Nice going Vlad.
Ryuji: I’ve got to admit: You did awesome!!
My Phone: Your current rank is #9
Me: Seriously?!
Colton: That’s a huge improvement!
Valt: Beybread on the house!!
Shu (Thoughts): Valt and Vlad are the exact same!
(Shu laughs) Really hope you enjoyed this, I put a lot of effort and time into this chapter
Great!!!! this is your best chapter yet!
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - GenesisBlader - Jul. 08, 2021
(Jul. 08, 2021 3:20 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: (Jul. 08, 2021 1:16 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 27 The Best Battle Ever (I spent all day on this)
Beyblade Burst Dynachi
Chapter 27
Valtryek Vs Apocalypse!!!
Brooke: Detonate Bomb!!
(A huge explosion ouccers, the door bursts wide open)
Aiden: Oh?
Me: I’m back!!
Aiden: (I seriously need better security), You dare challenge me again! After the last time!!
(I hold up Thunder Valtryek)
Aiden: You’ve evolved it from last time huh?
Adam: Vlad’s gonna teach you a lesson!!
Ryuji: You’ll never mess with blading again!
Aiden: Quiet peasants!
Adam/Ryuji: Peasants? Oh, now you’re in for it!!!
(Shu puts his hand in front of them)
Shu: This is Vlad’s battle, let him deal with it.
Me: I’m gonna show this “King” what blading means to me!
(My Resonance Aura flares up)
Aiden: This peasant thinks he can overthrow the king!
(Aiden’s Resonance Aura flares up)
My Phone: Aiden Peregrin sent you a battle challenge do you--
(I press accept, A drone comes down for the sky)
Hanami: Hello--
Aiden: Hanami, you're fired.
Hanmi: You can’t do that!!
Aiden: I just did, now shoo.
(Hanmi logs off the drone)
Aiden: Another, you are the new official announcer!
Another: Ok my king! Hello Bladers!! Today Vlad Aoi challenges our king after his humiliating defeat to our king! Will he lose again or is he stacking up on four-leaf clovers!! Also, this match is broadcasted all around the world so losing twice would be embarrassing!
Adam: He’s trying to distract Vlad!
Ryuji: Mind your own business!!
Me: I’m going to win against you! No matter what!!
(I get ready to launch my bey)
Drone: First battle. Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Aiden: Let it rip!!
Me: Rush Launch!!
(Valtryek hits Apocalypse with a barrage of attacks, Valtryek sends Apocalypse in the air, Apocalypse catches onto the rails in the air, it speeds up and crashes down on Valtryek)
Another: My oh my!! Apocalypse used Valtryek’s attack to launch a counterattack!!
Aiden: Omega Blast!!
Me: Heroic Recoil!!
(Both beys get shot out of the stadium)
Me/Aiden: *Gasps*
Drone: Simultaneous ring-out finish! No points!
Me: Dang it!
Another: Looks like Vlad Aoi is still too weak to land a good hit on our Supreme King!!
(Ryuji throws an empty bottle of water at Another)
Another: Hey!!
Adam: Stop trash-talking our friend!!
(Brooke throws the water bottle at him)
Me (Thoughts): Thanks, guys.
Aiden: Well, looks like your friends don’t like Another very much.
Me: You told him to say stuff like that didn’t you?!
Aiden: It’s technically not against the rules.
Me: Ok, that’s it. I’m done with you hurting my friends!! I’m done with your reign of terror!!
(My Resonance Aura starts blazing up wildly)
Aiden: My reign shall never end!!
Drone: Second battle! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Aiden: Let it rip!!
Me: Rush Launch!!
(Valtryek hits Apocalypse with a barrage of attacks)
Another: Valtryek is actually getting some solid hits against our king!!
(Apocalypse starts picking up speed and heads straight for Valtryek like a lightning bolt)
Aiden: Omega Blast!!
(Apocalypse sends Valtryek flying in the air)
Me: Stick the landing!!
(Valtryek lands on the rails in mid-air and crashes down on Apocalypse)
Me: Thundering Recoil!!
(Valtryek’s bound blades force Apocalypse down to the ground)
Aiden: Warped Whip!!
(Apocalypse shoots back up and slashes at Valtryek, Valtryek gets sent flying out of the stadium)
Me: *Gasps*
Drone: It’s Warped Apocalypse with a ring-out finish! Aiden Peregrin claims 1 point!
Another: Honestly for a second I thought Valtryek had it but looks like Vlad Aoi crumbles to our ruler once again!!
(Brooke throws a bottle of water at Another)
Brooke/Ryuji/Colton/Adam: Put a sock in it!!
Aiden: Too bad, so sad.
Me: Grr!!
Me (Thoughts): I could’ve won if I had a way stronger launch! Time to step it up!
(I start backing away from the stadium)
Aiden: It’s too late to run away!!
Me: I’m never running away!!
Colton: You tell him!!
Drone: Third battle! Ready? Set!
(I jump)
All: 3!
(I jump again)
All: 2!
(I jump again)
All: 1! (I jump high)
Me/Aiden: Let it--
(I land on the ground)
Me/Aiden: Rip!!
Valt (Thoughts): That’s Sprint Boost!!
(Valtryek bounces up in the air)
Me: Take to the skies!
Another: Vlad nails the launch and Valtryek flies up in the air
(Valtryek catches onto the sky rails, Valtryek crashes down on Apocalypse)
Me: Thundering Recoil!!
(Apocalypse gets sent flying in the air)
Aiden: *Gasps*
Me: Attack ‘em in the air!! Thundering Winged Launch!!
(Valtryek bounces off the wall and attacks Apocalypse in the air, Apocalypse falls back to the stadium floor)
Another: Valtryek continues the onslaught and doesn't let up on
Aiden: Warped Whip!!
(Valtryek and Apocalypse start clashing hard)
Me: Thundering Dynachi Breaker!!
(The whole stadium blows up, Apocalypse gets sent flying out of the stadium)
Aiden: *Gasps*
Drone: It’s Thunder Valtryek with a ring-out finish!! Vlad Aoi claims 1 point!!
Me: Sweet!!
Another: I can’t believe it, Valtryek just sent Apocalypse flying.
Aiden: How did I lose a point to someone like you!
Colton: Vlad totally deserved that win!!
Adam: He totally did!
(Aiden’s Resonance Aura flares up, My Resonance Aura flares up)
Drone: Fourth battle! Ready? Set!
(I start doing the Sprint Boost)
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Aiden: Let it rip!!
Me/Aiden: Go!!
(Valtryek and Apocalypse hit each other with a powerful rush of attacks)
Another: They’re going in for it!!
Me: Rush Launch!!
(Valtryek sends Apocalypse flying in the air)
Aiden: Apocalypse!!!
(Aiden’s Resonance Aura flares up Apocalypse blazes out of the bey)
Aiden: Warped Blast!!
(Apocalypse slams down on Valtryek, Apocalypse sends Valtryek flying)
Another: Valtryek is sent flying in the air!!
Aiden: It’s over.
Me: It’s not over until I say it’s over!!!
(Valtryek starts glowing brightly)
Me: Valtryek!!!
(My Resonance Aura flares up Valtryek blazes out of the bey)
Aiden: There’s no way you can survive it.
Colton: If Valtryek falls on the stadium floor it will burst!!
Brooke: Come on!
Adam/Ryuji: We’ve got you, bro!!
Me: Thundering Recoil!!
(Valtryek lands on its bound blades and shoots itself into the wall, Valtryek start wobbling)
Another: Valtryek survives!
Aiden: Warped Reboot!!
Me: Heroic Reboot!!
(Valtryek and Apocalypse speed up, Valtryek and Apocalypse start clashing hard)
Me/Aiden: *Roars*
(An enormous explosion occurs)
Another: They’re clashing with everything they’ve got!!
(Apocalypse starts glowing red)
Me: Thundering Dynachi Breaker!!
(3 Additional blades pop out of Valtryek, The whole stadium blows up)
Aiden: *Gasps*
Another: Valtryek uses its trump card!!
(Apocalypse hits the wall, Apocalypse’s blade shifts backward, A swirling purple blaze surrounds Aiden)
Aiden: End this with Warped Whip!!
Me: My pure Resonance will slash you into two!! Thundering Saber!!!
(Valtryek and Apocalypse start clashing, a gigantic explosion occurs)
Drone: Oh no!!
(The drone gets blown away)
Me: Burst!!
(Valtryek presses Apocalypse’s button, Apocalypse bursts)
Aiden: *Gasps* What the!!
(The drone comes back)
Drone: It’s Thunder Valtryek with a burst finish! The winner is Vlad Aoi!
Me: Yes!!
Another: I can’t believe it, Vlad Aoi defeated our king.
(Aiden storms out of the room)
Colton/Adam/Ryuji: You did it!!
(Colton and Adam jump on me)
Me: Wow, you guys are heavy!!
Brooke/Vira: Nice going Vlad.
Ryuji: I’ve got to admit: You did awesome!!
My Phone: Your current rank is #9
Me: Seriously?!
Colton: That’s a huge improvement!
Valt: Beybread on the house!!
Shu (Thoughts): Valt and Vlad are the exact same!
(Shu laughs) Really hope you enjoyed this, I put a lot of effort and time into this chapter
Great!!!! this is your best chapter yet! ikr this episode is so interesting and awesome!
i can't wait to see sebastians new beyblade!
jk he prob not gonna get a new bey and pull a red eye but we'll just have to see.
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - UnseenBurst - Jul. 08, 2021
(Jul. 08, 2021 3:26 AM)BladeKingX Wrote: (Jul. 08, 2021 3:20 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: Great!!!! this is your best chapter yet! ikr this episode is so interesting and awesome!
i can't wait to see sebastians new beyblade!
jk he prob not gonna get a new bey and pull a red eye but we'll just have to see.
You're right actually
28) Curroption Chaos! Stormbringer Spryzen!!
29) Darkness. Scythe Doomsizer!!
30) Ranking Up!!
31) International World Championships!!!
32) Heated battles, fight to survive!!
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - LegendJustice - Jul. 08, 2021
I’m pumped!!
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - UnseenBurst - Jul. 08, 2021
(Jul. 08, 2021 3:39 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: (Jul. 08, 2021 3:26 AM)BladeKingX Wrote: ikr this episode is so interesting and awesome!
i can't wait to see sebastians new beyblade!
jk he prob not gonna get a new bey and pull a red eye but we'll just have to see.
You're right actually
28) Curroption Chaos! Stormbringer Spryzen!!
29) Darkness. Scythe Doomsizer!!
30) Ranking Up!!
31) International World Championships!!!
32) Heated battles, fight to survive!!
Summaries
28) Crimson Eye watches the battle between Vlad and Aiden and witnesses how strong The Dynachi Breaker system really is, so he creates Stormbringer Spryzen
29) Someone comes hears how strong Ryuji is so they come to challenge him
30) Vlad is officially eligible to enter the IWC'S (International World Championships) but the rest of the gang still need to prove their worth
31) The IWC'S have officially started
32) The IWC's are starting to get serious
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - LegendJustice - Jul. 08, 2021
This is great!
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - UnseenBurst - Jul. 08, 2021
(Jul. 08, 2021 3:57 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: This is great!
*Looks at LJ suspiciously* ok....
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - LegendJustice - Jul. 08, 2021
(Jul. 08, 2021 3:58 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: (Jul. 08, 2021 3:57 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: This is great!
*Looks at LJ suspiciously* ok....
What...
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - UnseenBurst - Jul. 08, 2021
(Jul. 08, 2021 4:00 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: (Jul. 08, 2021 3:58 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: *Looks at LJ suspiciously* ok....
What...
Nothin'
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - LegendJustice - Jul. 08, 2021
Oh okay *sighs* I thought you found out
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - UnseenBurst - Jul. 08, 2021
(Jul. 08, 2021 4:02 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: Oh okay *sighs* I thought you found out
What you keeping from me
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - LegendJustice - Jul. 08, 2021
(Jul. 08, 2021 4:03 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: (Jul. 08, 2021 4:02 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: Oh okay *sighs* I thought you found out
What you keeping from me
Nothing just the truth...
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - UnseenBurst - Jul. 08, 2021
(Jul. 08, 2021 4:04 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: (Jul. 08, 2021 4:03 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: What you keeping from me
Nothing just the truth...
We shall continue this in PM's
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - LegendJustice - Jul. 08, 2021
(Jul. 08, 2021 4:05 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: (Jul. 08, 2021 4:04 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: Nothing just the truth...
We shall continue this in PM's Agreed
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - Kiryu Kazuma - Jul. 08, 2021
(Jul. 08, 2021 1:16 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: Chapter 27 The Best Battle Ever (I spent all day on this)
Beyblade Burst Dynachi
Chapter 27
Valtryek Vs Apocalypse!!!
Brooke: Detonate Bomb!!
(A huge explosion ouccers, the door bursts wide open)
Aiden: Oh?
Me: I’m back!!
Aiden: (I seriously need better security), You dare challenge me again! After the last time!!
(I hold up Thunder Valtryek)
Aiden: You’ve evolved it from last time huh?
Adam: Vlad’s gonna teach you a lesson!!
Ryuji: You’ll never mess with blading again!
Aiden: Quiet peasants!
Adam/Ryuji: Peasants? Oh, now you’re in for it!!!
(Shu puts his hand in front of them)
Shu: This is Vlad’s battle, let him deal with it.
Me: I’m gonna show this “King” what blading means to me!
(My Resonance Aura flares up)
Aiden: This peasant thinks he can overthrow the king!
(Aiden’s Resonance Aura flares up)
My Phone: Aiden Peregrin sent you a battle challenge do you--
(I press accept, A drone comes down for the sky)
Hanami: Hello--
Aiden: Hanami, you're fired.
Hanmi: You can’t do that!!
Aiden: I just did, now shoo.
(Hanmi logs off the drone)
Aiden: Another, you are the new official announcer!
Another: Ok my king! Hello Bladers!! Today Vlad Aoi challenges our king after his humiliating defeat to our king! Will he lose again or is he stacking up on four-leaf clovers!! Also, this match is broadcasted all around the world so losing twice would be embarrassing!
Adam: He’s trying to distract Vlad!
Ryuji: Mind your own business!!
Me: I’m going to win against you! No matter what!!
(I get ready to launch my bey)
Drone: First battle. Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Aiden: Let it rip!!
Me: Rush Launch!!
(Valtryek hits Apocalypse with a barrage of attacks, Valtryek sends Apocalypse in the air, Apocalypse catches onto the rails in the air, it speeds up and crashes down on Valtryek)
Another: My oh my!! Apocalypse used Valtryek’s attack to launch a counterattack!!
Aiden: Omega Blast!!
Me: Heroic Recoil!!
(Both beys get shot out of the stadium)
Me/Aiden: *Gasps*
Drone: Simultaneous ring-out finish! No points!
Me: Dang it!
Another: Looks like Vlad Aoi is still too weak to land a good hit on our Supreme King!!
(Ryuji throws an empty bottle of water at Another)
Another: Hey!!
Adam: Stop trash-talking our friend!!
(Brooke throws the water bottle at him)
Me (Thoughts): Thanks, guys.
Aiden: Well, looks like your friends don’t like Another very much.
Me: You told him to say stuff like that didn’t you?!
Aiden: It’s technically not against the rules.
Me: Ok, that’s it. I’m done with you hurting my friends!! I’m done with your reign of terror!!
(My Resonance Aura starts blazing up wildly)
Aiden: My reign shall never end!!
Drone: Second battle! Ready? Set!
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Aiden: Let it rip!!
Me: Rush Launch!!
(Valtryek hits Apocalypse with a barrage of attacks)
Another: Valtryek is actually getting some solid hits against our king!!
(Apocalypse starts picking up speed and heads straight for Valtryek like a lightning bolt)
Aiden: Omega Blast!!
(Apocalypse sends Valtryek flying in the air)
Me: Stick the landing!!
(Valtryek lands on the rails in mid-air and crashes down on Apocalypse)
Me: Thundering Recoil!!
(Valtryek’s bound blades force Apocalypse down to the ground)
Aiden: Warped Whip!!
(Apocalypse shoots back up and slashes at Valtryek, Valtryek gets sent flying out of the stadium)
Me: *Gasps*
Drone: It’s Warped Apocalypse with a ring-out finish! Aiden Peregrin claims 1 point!
Another: Honestly for a second I thought Valtryek had it but looks like Vlad Aoi crumbles to our ruler once again!!
(Brooke throws a bottle of water at Another)
Brooke/Ryuji/Colton/Adam: Put a sock in it!!
Aiden: Too bad, so sad.
Me: Grr!!
Me (Thoughts): I could’ve won if I had a way stronger launch! Time to step it up!
(I start backing away from the stadium)
Aiden: It’s too late to run away!!
Me: I’m never running away!!
Colton: You tell him!!
Drone: Third battle! Ready? Set!
(I jump)
All: 3!
(I jump again)
All: 2!
(I jump again)
All: 1! (I jump high)
Me/Aiden: Let it--
(I land on the ground)
Me/Aiden: Rip!!
Valt (Thoughts): That’s Sprint Boost!!
(Valtryek bounces up in the air)
Me: Take to the skies!
Another: Vlad nails the launch and Valtryek flies up in the air
(Valtryek catches onto the sky rails, Valtryek crashes down on Apocalypse)
Me: Thundering Recoil!!
(Apocalypse gets sent flying in the air)
Aiden: *Gasps*
Me: Attack ‘em in the air!! Thundering Winged Launch!!
(Valtryek bounces off the wall and attacks Apocalypse in the air, Apocalypse falls back to the stadium floor)
Another: Valtryek continues the onslaught and doesn't let up on
Aiden: Warped Whip!!
(Valtryek and Apocalypse start clashing hard)
Me: Thundering Dynachi Breaker!!
(The whole stadium blows up, Apocalypse gets sent flying out of the stadium)
Aiden: *Gasps*
Drone: It’s Thunder Valtryek with a ring-out finish!! Vlad Aoi claims 1 point!!
Me: Sweet!!
Another: I can’t believe it, Valtryek just sent Apocalypse flying.
Aiden: How did I lose a point to someone like you!
Colton: Vlad totally deserved that win!!
Adam: He totally did!
(Aiden’s Resonance Aura flares up, My Resonance Aura flares up)
Drone: Fourth battle! Ready? Set!
(I start doing the Sprint Boost)
All: 3! 2! 1!
Me/Aiden: Let it rip!!
Me/Aiden: Go!!
(Valtryek and Apocalypse hit each other with a powerful rush of attacks)
Another: They’re going in for it!!
Me: Rush Launch!!
(Valtryek sends Apocalypse flying in the air)
Aiden: Apocalypse!!!
(Aiden’s Resonance Aura flares up Apocalypse blazes out of the bey)
Aiden: Warped Blast!!
(Apocalypse slams down on Valtryek, Apocalypse sends Valtryek flying)
Another: Valtryek is sent flying in the air!!
Aiden: It’s over.
Me: It’s not over until I say it’s over!!!
(Valtryek starts glowing brightly)
Me: Valtryek!!!
(My Resonance Aura flares up Valtryek blazes out of the bey)
Aiden: There’s no way you can survive it.
Colton: If Valtryek falls on the stadium floor it will burst!!
Brooke: Come on!
Adam/Ryuji: We’ve got you, bro!!
Me: Thundering Recoil!!
(Valtryek lands on its bound blades and shoots itself into the wall, Valtryek start wobbling)
Another: Valtryek survives!
Aiden: Warped Reboot!!
Me: Heroic Reboot!!
(Valtryek and Apocalypse speed up, Valtryek and Apocalypse start clashing hard)
Me/Aiden: *Roars*
(An enormous explosion occurs)
Another: They’re clashing with everything they’ve got!!
(Apocalypse starts glowing red)
Me: Thundering Dynachi Breaker!!
(3 Additional blades pop out of Valtryek, The whole stadium blows up)
Aiden: *Gasps*
Another: Valtryek uses its trump card!!
(Apocalypse hits the wall, Apocalypse’s blade shifts backward, A swirling purple blaze surrounds Aiden)
Aiden: End this with Warped Whip!!
Me: My pure Resonance will slash you into two!! Thundering Saber!!!
(Valtryek and Apocalypse start clashing, a gigantic explosion occurs)
Drone: Oh no!!
(The drone gets blown away)
Me: Burst!!
(Valtryek presses Apocalypse’s button, Apocalypse bursts)
Aiden: *Gasps* What the!!
(The drone comes back)
Drone: It’s Thunder Valtryek with a burst finish! The winner is Vlad Aoi!
Me: Yes!!
Another: I can’t believe it, Vlad Aoi defeated our king.
(Aiden storms out of the room)
Colton/Adam/Ryuji: You did it!!
(Colton and Adam jump on me)
Me: Wow, you guys are heavy!!
Brooke/Vira: Nice going Vlad.
Ryuji: I’ve got to admit: You did awesome!!
My Phone: Your current rank is #9
Me: Seriously?!
Colton: That’s a huge improvement!
Valt: Beybread on the house!!
Shu (Thoughts): Valt and Vlad are the exact same!
(Shu laughs) Really hope you enjoyed this, I put a lot of effort and time into this chapter Nice Chapter!
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - Demon Belial - Jul. 09, 2021
Can I join in this too?
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - UnseenBurst - Jul. 09, 2021
(Jul. 09, 2021 12:37 PM)Demon Belial Wrote: Can I join in this too?
Sure
RE: Beyblade Burst Dynachi - Hollowmind13 - Jul. 09, 2021
(Jul. 08, 2021 3:55 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: (Jul. 08, 2021 3:39 AM)UnseenBurst Wrote: You're right actually
28) Curroption Chaos! Stormbringer Spryzen!!
29) Darkness. Scythe Doomsizer!!
30) Ranking Up!!
31) International World Championships!!!
32) Heated battles, fight to survive!!
Summaries
28) Crimson Eye watches the battle between Vlad and Aiden and witnesses how strong The Dynachi Breaker system really is, so he creates Stormbringer Spryzen
29) Someone comes hears how strong Ryuji is so they come to challenge him
30) Vlad is officially eligible to enter the IWC'S (International World Championships) but the rest of the gang still need to prove their worth
31) The IWC'S have officially started
32) The IWC's are starting to get serious Stormbringer? Is it because of Storm Sprizen?
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