(Jul. 12, 2021  8:32 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: First Chapter!

Spoiler (Click to View)

 King Of The Sky’s! Storm Remix!

Mom: Ryu! Wake up I got Bacon!

Ryu: zzz.

(Mom leaves)

Mom: That kid! ~Gets 2 frying pans~.

(Mom comes back to Ryu’s room)

Mom: You asked for it…

(Mom starts banging the to frying pans)

Ryu: AH! I’m up.

Mom: Finally, now get up you where suppose to meet with Haru!

Ryu: Okay let me change.

~10 Minutes later~

Ryu: Done!

Mom: Here you go!

(Mom gives Ryu his breakfast)

Ryu (Muffled): Thanks Mom! I gotta get going!

Mom: Bye! Have a great day son!

(At Central Park)

Haru: There you are, come on where gonna be late for school!

Ryu: Sorry let’s go!

~At School~

Random Kid: Hey, Stop it you have already beat everyone here!

Bully 1: No! Batik wants more pray!

Ryu: Stop bullying these kids!

Bully 1: What are you gonna do about it? You don’t even have a beyblade!

(Everyone starts whispering)

Ryu: U-um.

(Haru grabs Ryu and they start running)

Haru: What where you thinking?!!

Ryu: Those kids needed my help!

Haru: You can’t! You don’t even have a beyblade!

Ryu: Then I’ll build one!

Haru: What?!!

~After School~

Haru: So how are you gonna build a bey?

Ryu; I’m gonna make an SS Beyblade!

Haru: A STORM SEVEN BEYBLADE!! Those are extremely hard to make! Let alone get! And you don’t have a 3D printer.

Ryu: 1. Yes I’m building an SS beyblade 2. I can take it 3. I’ll use the Schools 3D printer. Now I’m heading to the printing room!

Haru: Wait I’m building a SS bey too!

~At the schools 3D printing room~

Ryu: So let’s look at the system!

Haru: So many parts! So we have sword mode for attack types, guardian mode for defense types, still mode for stamina types, and switch mode for balance types,  And then we have click. It says that click allows you to open a secret part about the modes and then we have barrier which you attach to your beyblade and then it has more of what ever mode you picked.

Ryu: Hmm I want an attack type!

Haru: defense seems cool for me!

Ryu:  Let’s get building!

~1 Hour later~

Ryu & Haru: It’s done!

Ryu: Storm Remix!

Haru: Reverse Hydra!

Ryu: Let’s show those bully’s what we’re made of!

Haru: Hold your horses! We still need launchers and have to test them!

Ryu: Oh right, we need launchers!

(Ryu sees a dragon launcher)

~Picks up~

Haru: Hey, You don’t know who that is!

Ryu: Well they left it!

Haru: Whatever.

~Haru gets a launcher~

Ryu: Let’s battle!

Haru: We don’t have a stadium!

Ryu: Oh, Let’s head to Central Park they always have stadiums!

Haru: Okay!

~At Central Park~

Ryu: NOW, we battle!

Ryu & Haru: 3! 2! 1! Let it Rip!

Ryu: Aw man we didn’t pull of Storm Launches!

Haru: Whatever! Now Hydra!

(Hydra takes the center)

Ryu: Remix!

(Remix starts circling around Hydra)

Ryu: Storm Crash!

Haru: Reverse Guard!

(Both beys burst)

Ryu & Haru: *Gasp*

Ryu: Great battle!

Haru: Same!

Bully 1: So you guys made beys….

Sorry if this is short.

(Sep. 01, 2021  3:22 AM)Delta4976 Wrote:

(Jul. 12, 2021  8:32 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: First Chapter!

Spoiler (Click to View)

 King Of The Sky’s! Storm Remix!

Mom: Ryu! Wake up I got Bacon!

Ryu: zzz.

(Mom leaves)

Mom: That kid! ~Gets 2 frying pans~.

(Mom comes back to Ryu’s room)

Mom: You asked for it…

(Mom starts banging the to frying pans)

Ryu: AH! I’m up.

Mom: Finally, now get up you where suppose to meet with Haru!

Ryu: Okay let me change.

~10 Minutes later~

Ryu: Done!

Mom: Here you go!

(Mom gives Ryu his breakfast)

Ryu (Muffled): Thanks Mom! I gotta get going!

Mom: Bye! Have a great day son!

(At Central Park)

Haru: There you are, come on where gonna be late for school!

Ryu: Sorry let’s go!

~At School~

Random Kid: Hey, Stop it you have already beat everyone here!

Bully 1: No! Batik wants more pray!

Ryu: Stop bullying these kids!

Bully 1: What are you gonna do about it? You don’t even have a beyblade!

(Everyone starts whispering)

Ryu: U-um.

(Haru grabs Ryu and they start running)

Haru: What where you thinking?!!

Ryu: Those kids needed my help!

Haru: You can’t! You don’t even have a beyblade!

Ryu: Then I’ll build one!

Haru: What?!!

~After School~

Haru: So how are you gonna build a bey?

Ryu; I’m gonna make an SS Beyblade!

Haru: A STORM SEVEN BEYBLADE!! Those are extremely hard to make! Let alone get! And you don’t have a 3D printer.

Ryu: 1. Yes I’m building an SS beyblade 2. I can take it 3. I’ll use the Schools 3D printer. Now I’m heading to the printing room!

Haru: Wait I’m building a SS bey too!

~At the schools 3D printing room~

Ryu: So let’s look at the system!

Haru: So many parts! So we have sword mode for attack types, guardian mode for defense types, still mode for stamina types, and switch mode for balance types,  And then we have click. It says that click allows you to open a secret part about the modes and then we have barrier which you attach to your beyblade and then it has more of what ever mode you picked.

Ryu: Hmm I want an attack type!

Haru: defense seems cool for me!

Ryu:  Let’s get building!

~1 Hour later~

Ryu & Haru: It’s done!

Ryu: Storm Remix!

Haru: Reverse Hydra!

Ryu: Let’s show those bully’s what we’re made of!

Haru: Hold your horses! We still need launchers and have to test them!

Ryu: Oh right, we need launchers!

(Ryu sees a dragon launcher)

~Picks up~

Haru: Hey, You don’t know who that is!

Ryu: Well they left it!

Haru: Whatever.

~Haru gets a launcher~

Ryu: Let’s battle!

Haru: We don’t have a stadium!

Ryu: Oh, Let’s head to Central Park they always have stadiums!

Haru: Okay!

~At Central Park~

Ryu: NOW, we battle!

Ryu & Haru: 3! 2! 1! Let it Rip!

Ryu: Aw man we didn’t pull of Storm Launches!

Haru: Whatever! Now Hydra!

(Hydra takes the center)

Ryu: Remix!

(Remix starts circling around Hydra)

Ryu: Storm Crash!

Haru: Reverse Guard!

(Both beys burst)

Ryu & Haru: *Gasp*

Ryu: Great battle!

Haru: Same!

Bully 1: So you guys made beys….

Sorry if this is short.

Good job on the story. Keep doing great fan fictions please!

(Sep. 01, 2021  3:28 AM)LegendJustice Wrote:

(Sep. 01, 2021  3:22 AM)Delta4976 Wrote: Good job on the story. Keep doing great fan fictions please!

Thanks! But it you want GOOD to check out UnseenBurst's Fanfics

(Sep. 01, 2021  3:28 AM)LegendJustice Wrote:

(Sep. 01, 2021  3:22 AM)Delta4976 Wrote: Good job on the story. Keep doing great fan fictions please!

Thanks! But it you want GOOD go check out UnseenBurst's Fanfics

(Sep. 03, 2021  1:30 AM)CelBeyBlade Wrote: If You dont Mind

Lucius: Hatred, Curse, Shadow, Jet Black, and Unseen
Forneus: Genesis (lol), Whirlpool, Swim, Swift, Torent
Jinius: Justice, Legend, make me win, and Tornado

(Sep. 03, 2021  2:18 AM)CelBeyBlade Wrote: More Delta Forneus, Hollow Lucius, Im dum Jinius (lol)

I named these after Delta, Hollowmind, LJ, UB, Genesis Blader there my Favorite fanfic writers

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Now making my own fanfic's see ya in a year

(Sep. 04, 2021  2:56 PM)GenesisBlader Wrote: you know what i feel bad for hollow
all the effort he put into that... you know what LJ take me out of the competition and let hollow in, he deserves it

(Sep. 04, 2021  7:09 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote:

(Sep. 04, 2021  2:56 PM)GenesisBlader Wrote: you know what i feel bad for hollow
all the effort he put into that... you know what LJ take me out of the competition and let hollow in, he deserves it

I've spent 10 minutes on Google searching synonyms to words that have somekind of connection with the beys.

(Sep. 04, 2021  7:09 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote:

(Sep. 04, 2021  2:56 PM)GenesisBlader Wrote: you know what i feel bad for hollow
all the effort he put into that... you know what LJ take me out of the competition and let hollow in, he deserves it

I've spent 10 minutes on Google searching synonyms to words that have somekind of connection with the beys.

(Sep. 05, 2021  12:40 AM)CelBeyBlade Wrote: LOL i feel bad i was just doing this one for fun

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This is the first time someone mentioned my name here

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My lucius was hollow until i realized about doomcyzer

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(Sep. 04, 2021  7:09 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: I've spent 10 minutes on Google searching synonyms to words that have somekind of connection with the beys.

Are you mad

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(Sep. 04, 2021  7:09 PM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: I've spent 10 minutes on Google searching synonyms to words that have somekind of connection with the beys.

Can i call you Mr. Hollow

(Sep. 04, 2021  2:54 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: For Forneus I chose Tidal Forneus By GenesusBlader

For Lucifer I Chose Luficer SoulStealer By UnseenBurst

And for Jinnius I Chose Tornado Jinnius By CelBeyBlade

(Sorry Hollow, it was a Tough Discussion)

(Sep. 05, 2021  8:54 AM)Hollowmind8 Wrote:

(Sep. 04, 2021  2:54 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: For Forneus I chose Tidal Forneus By GenesusBlader

For Lucifer I Chose Luficer SoulStealer By UnseenBurst

And for Jinnius I Chose Tornado Jinnius By CelBeyBlade

(Sorry Hollow, it was a Tough Discussion)

I think all those names are great. Tornado was picked before (Wyvern), but idc that much about names, since it's your fic and, IMO, people would start repeating some names from at least dual layers.

(Also, Was that intentional? "Gene'sus'Blader".)

(Sep. 05, 2021  8:54 AM)Hollowmind8 Wrote:

(Sep. 04, 2021  2:54 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: For Forneus I chose Tidal Forneus By GenesusBlader

For Lucifer I Chose Luficer SoulStealer By UnseenBurst

And for Jinnius I Chose Tornado Jinnius By CelBeyBlade

(Sorry Hollow, it was a Tough Discussion)

I think all those names are great. Tornado was picked before (Wyvern), but idc that much about names, since it's your fic and, IMO, people would start repeating some names from at least dual layers.

(Also, Was that intentional? "Gene'sus'Blader".)

(Sep. 05, 2021  1:20 PM)GenesisBlader Wrote:

(Sep. 05, 2021  8:54 AM)Hollowmind8 Wrote: I think all those names are great. Tornado was picked before (Wyvern), but idc that much about names, since it's your fic and, IMO, people would start repeating some names from at least dual layers.

(Also, Was that intentional? "Gene'sus'Blader".)

ah yes, LJ, you know me so well...

(Sep. 07, 2021  12:28 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: Since No one Guessed the protag Here is his bey

Vile Raziel Traitor Energy + Forgotten

(Sep. 07, 2021  12:36 AM)GenesisBlader Wrote:

(Sep. 07, 2021  12:28 AM)LegendJustice Wrote: Since No one Guessed the protag Here is his bey

Vile Raziel Traitor Energy + Forgotten

wait you mean antagonist like the bad guy? also raziel is a sick name!

(Sep. 11, 2021  1:36 PM)LegendJustice Wrote: ALRIGHT! IM FINALLY BRINGING IN EVERYONES CHARACTERS! (From the contest) Anyways

SpeedySuomi Your character is coming in chapter 16! And will have a big part!